Lets Get To It! Rwby Ideas/discussion Thread

Not sure if anyone is interested, but I am considered more crossoes like the last one's and thought I'd throw down a few I am considering if anyone wanted to weigh in.

Weiss centric (New World continuation) More of a slight flash forward, may have some references/flashbacks to her initial introduction but mostly current, as she is working in Everlook in the Winterspring mountains to try and collect enough resources to travel while searching for her team.

Partner New Worlds: Kind of the same basic starting principle, RWBY is sucked up by an experimental portal of Merlots and dumped haphazardly on Azeroth but this time the partners stayed together.
Not one hundred percent on what Ruby and Weiss would be doing, though I could work in the above idea into this one or have them throw down with some Worgen for fun.
Thinking about pitting Yang and Blake against some ogres (Ogre Queen Yang anyone?) either in Alterac or Dire Maul which could be entertaining.

Thoughts, preferences, suggestions?
 
Fur and Fire Chapter 2.

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Blake sat down in the plush chair, practically feeling herself sink into it. The twenty three year old Faunus watched Ruby leave the room, before coming back with another chair.


They sat there for a few minutes, before Blake couldn't take it anymore and blurted the first thing that came to mind.


"I'm sorry."


'For what?" Ruby asked, her voice low.


"I- I thought you were dead," Blake said, "and I didn't try to find the orcs who did it. I didn't look for you. I should have done something."


"Anything else?"


"I know you're probably angry at me," Blake continued, "and you have every right to be. I really should have looked for you," the small part of Blake's mind that remained rational realized that she was repeating herself, "it must have been hell to find me, and I should have at least tried to look for you."


"Anything else?" Ruby repeated.


"What do you want me to say?" Blake hissed, anger starting to bubble up, "I'm sorry, I didn't know you were alive, or where the orcs were camped, and even if I did, attacking them would have just gotten me killed. Is that what you wanted?"


"No," Ruby shook her head, "I just wanted to make sure you got everything off your chest. You're bad enough when you've had a couple of days to let things build up in your head, I can't imagine how bad it would be after six years."


"...What?"


"I'm not angry at you Blake, I never was. We both knew that distracting the orcs without a weapon should have been a suicide mission, and I would have been angry to find out you had gotten yourself killed attacking them."


"Oh…" Blake sat there, feeling lost, "then… How did you survive? And where have you been the last six years? I waited for you for a month, before the last of the money from the bounty on that satyr ran out and I had to go looking for a new mark."


Bounty hunting had been the easy answer to their money problems, it didn't take much to transfer the skills they had gained through their one semester at Beacon (and Ruby's two years at Signal) from hunting Grimm to hunting various criminals. Orcs, trolls, humans, dwarves. From what Blake had gathered, Kalimdor was even less populated that the Eastern Kingdoms, and that meant every criminal with a bounty, a bit of money to spare, or the skill to sneak aboard a ship and stay hidden until the end of the voyage, was rushing away from the Eastern Kingdoms and to the new frontier. Then you had the people coming to Kalimdor to make an honest living, and needed things like satyrs, centaurs, murlocs, and quilboar eliminated.


"I spent the the last three years in Orgrimmar or trying to find you, and I spent the three years before that a slave to those orcs."


Blake felt her stomach plunge, staring at Ruby. A slave? Ruby had spent three years a slave because of her?


"Y-you what?" Blake asked, silently hoping she had heard wrong, or that Ruby was telling a bad joke.


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"Blake-"


"A slave?!"


"Blake-"


"You were a slave!?"


"Blake, calm down-"


Blake leapt from her seat, starting to pace in complete defiance of the concept known as 'calming down'.


"I should have gone looking for you," Blake repeated for the fourth time in ten minutes, pacing back and forth with increasing speed, "I should have spent that money on mercenaries and hunted them down, I shou-"


"The Warsongs."


"What?" Blake asked, stopping her pacing to look at Ruby.


"The orcs," Ruby supplied helpfully, "they were an offshoot of the Warsong clan. Not part of the Horde, they broke off because Warchief choose to settle in Durotar."


"How do you-?" Blake suddenly cut herself off, looking around the room like she was checking for something, before leaning in, "Ruby, you said you had been living in Orgrimmar, right?" the cat faunus' ears were moving so much that it was causing her bow to move.


"Yeah," Ruby said, looking around to try and figure out what had Blake spooked.


Reaching out, Ruby asked the elements if they saw anything she was missing. An amused thrum that seared the mind from Fire, but little more, an unyielding certainty that there wasn't from Earth, Air stretched her senses, allowing her to hear a mouse hidden in the walls, to smell the mead and meats at the common room at the end of the hall, and Water sent a calm apology that it couldn't help more.


Ruby closed her eyes, thanking the spirits with a slightly bowed head, before opening her eyes to look at Blake. The faunus hadn't moved much, Ruby's communion having happened in seconds.


"You," Blake looked around again before dropping her voice lower, "you didn't join the Horde, did you?'


Oh, right, Alliance city.


Another rush of burning amusement from Fire. Ruby dutifully ignored it.


"No," Ruby said, "I didn't know where you were, or if you had joined the Alliance, so I wanted to be able to make a clean split if I needed to."


Blake looked shocked, "You didn't join the Horde… because of me?" a dusting of red appeared across her cheeks, "but, you have to have made some friends in Orgrimmar, right?"


"Not many," Ruby responded, "most orcs don't like humans," which reminded her… "by the way, when we make it home, I'm gonna help you with any Faunus rights projects you want to do, I've spent the last three years being treated as a second class citizen. It sucks, it really, really sucks."


"You're staying?" Blake asked, looking thunderstruck.


"Of course I am," Ruby said, "why wouldn't I? I didn't spend years looking for you so we could talk for a hour and split back up. Why?" apprehension filled the shamaness, "do you want me to-"


"No!" Blake said, "I just- you're really not angry with me?"


"Why would I be angry with you?" Ruby asked again, she really didn't get it, "we promised to stay together. I'm not breaking that promise. Come on, we should get some sleep, we've got a lot of catching up to do in the morning. You can use the spare bed," Ruby pointed to the bed that had both sets of linen sheets across it, "I paid for this room for a month, I didn't expect to find you this quick, so we have time to plan things ou-" Ruby's eyes landed on the red box next to Blake's chair, mind finally registering it's existence, "Crescent!"


Surprisingly, there wasn't the impulse from Fire that normally accompanied Ruby taking a while to notice something.


"Oh," Blake grabbed it, handing it over, "Yeah. I've been taking care of her, just in case, you know, or if a bounty required a bigger round than what Gambol Shroud can use. It's not easily getting bullets from her, but it shouldn't be-"


Ruby threw her arms around Blake, squeezing tight.


"Ahk!" Blake struggled, "how are you so strong?"


"Learned hand to hand, and restarted the routine I did to get enough strength to pick up Cress in the first place. She's not light."


---


Valeera groaned at the line for food, wrapping an arm around to bruises forming on her upper abdomen. The arena's cafeteria was first come, first serve, and it wasn't looking like Team V (if nobody was giving them a name, she was doing it herself!) was going to be eating today. Except Crocbait. Since he wasn't a slave, he could just leave and go get food somewhere else. Lucky bastard.


How the hell was this 'keeping them well fed'? They weren't-


"Girl," at that, Valeera looked over to where her owner was gesturing for her to come over, "Come on. Now."


Valeera did, following him out of the room with a baleful look backwards. Looks like there was no chance of them eating today.


As the trio of gladiator trainees followed Rehgar through the halls, Valeera finally voiced a question that had bugged her over the past couple of days.


"Where's Ruby?" Valeera hadn't seen the human since their first day in Orgrimmar, though Valeera thought that might be because she didn't have much stomach for slavery.


"On a trip," Rehgar grunted in Common. After his sales pitch to Crocbait, the orc had swiftly tapered off the amount of Common he used, using a translator when possible, and as few words as needed when it wasn't. Valeera wasn't sure if he used more when Crocbait and him left, and didn't really care, "She'll be back before Dire Maul. Come on, I want to eat."


Oh, now he was just rubbing it in! Valeera stewed in quiet rage as they walked towards a door guarded by two ogres and a goblin sitting at a desk.


A quick discussion in Orcish (she guessed) and the goblin stood up, grabbing three metal rings from the desk, before another barked order from Rehgar had him put one back.


The goblin walked over to Broll, pulling the ring apart and clamping it onto his leg, before doing the same to Valeera.


"Right," the goblin said, "these are simple. You try to leave Orgrimmar, they shock you, if you aren't back by nine, they shock you. If you try to make a run for it, you'll run into one of those two and they'll shock you. Capiche?"


"Uh," Valeera said, "what?"


"Understand?"


"Yeah?" Valeera said.


"Alright," he turned to Rehgar, saying something in Orcish, before opening the door.


Valeera blinked as they stepped out into Orgrimmar, the setting sun casting long shadows through the valley.


"What are we doing?" Valeera asked, following Rehgar.


"Eating," he said, "you need food. I need you in top condition for Dire Maul, and that means keeping you fed."


"Thanks?" Valeera said, feeling confused. He was giving them food?


"I don't want your thanks. I'm only doing this because if you don't win, I don't get paid, and then I'll be the one not eating. Come on, let's get that food."


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Blake's eyes flickered open, and she jerked up, grabbing Gambol Shroud from where it leaned next to her bed.


Where was she? What was- Ruby! Blake looked around scanning the room. Where was she? Had she left? Maybe she actually had-


Blake's eyes aligned on Crescent Rose and a red fur trimmed cloak.


Except for their first day as a team at Beacon, Blake couldn't remember a day where Ruby hadn't worn her cloak. Even if she was willing to abandon Crescent Rose for some reason, she wouldn't leave without her cloak.


Blake poked her head out the room, looking down the hall. Still nothing. Blake doubled back, grabbing Ruby's cloak as she looked at the clock in the corner. Seven in the morning. A bit earlier than she would normally wake up, but they could get some food.


Walking down the hall and into the common area, Blake made a beeline for the woman currently manning the desk.


Azeroth's relationship with technology confused Blake at times. You had people using old-fashioned ships, messaging birds, and equally old fashioned book binding methods, then you had mass produced weapons, robots, a tram in the Eastern Kingdoms, and nearly modern inns.


"Hello," the night elf smiled nervously, eyes flickering up at Blake's bow, "have we met? I don't remember meeting, but I'm not the best with faces, and I normally run the midnight shift anyways. Sorry, I'm rambling. Can I help you?"


"I'm looking for my friend," Blake said without missing a beat, "Ruby Rose."


"Can you give me a description? I don't get people's names very often."


What was with this girl?


"Short brown hair? Silver eyes?"


"Oh!" she looked relieved, "Yes. She's out back, by the pond. She's been there for the past couple of hours. Meditating, I think."


Meditating? Since when did Ruby meditate? Ren had tried to teach them at one point, and only Blake and Pyrrha had shown any interest. Ruby had left early on.


"I'll go find her," Blake turned, heading through the back exit.


A beautiful garden dominated the back of the inn. Heavy trees stretched above Blake's head, somehow growing strong despite Teldrassil nearly blotting out the sun above them. Shrubs lined the walkway from the door to the garden proper, before splitting off and forming a perimeter around it.


Blake walked further through the garden, stopping to examine some of the flowers. Her mother would have loved these.


That was Blake's single greatest regret now that she was stuck on another world, that she had never met with her parents after she broke away from the White Fang. That she might never get the chance to say she was sorry. Were they angry at her? Did they think she hated them?


Blake sighed, standing back up and heading towards the pond, at the same time other questions of Remnant bounded around her head.


Had Nora and Ren ever gotten together? What about Jaune and Pyrrha? How were Adam and Ilia? And what about Weiss and Yang? Had Ozpin allowed them to stay at Beacon, despite half the team going missing? And more importantly, if they did manage to get home, how would Blake be able to look Yang in the eye and say that Ruby had been a slave because of her?


Shaking her head, Blake focused on where Ruby was sitting in front of the pond. The younger girl, woman, Blake corrected herself, Ruby was a full grown woman now, had her legs folded under her, her head bowed as slow, rhythmic breaths came. In through the nose, out through the mouth. Beside her sat a pair of boots, like she had come out wearing them.


"Ruby?"


Nothing. Ruby didn't make any gesture to show that she had heard Blake.


Blake sighed, walking over to one of the chairs and sitting down. She should have brought a book.


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Ruby's eyes snapped open at the shuffling noise, and she threw aside the furs she had been sleeping under, eyes locking onto the ghostly wolf at the foot of her bed.


"Really?" Ruby asked, "It's," she checked the clock, "five in the morning. This can't wait?"


The wolf turned, walking past the bed where a halo of black hair and a pair of furry ears were visible, before walking straight through the wall.


"Looks like we're doing this now," Ruby sighed, casting a longing look at her bed before she grabbed her combat boots and pulling them on. She also grabbed the necklace she kept her various totems on, putting it on as she went.


She exited the room, making sure that she wasn't too loud as she pulled the door shut, before turning to the wolf, which was impatiently pacing. As she turned to it, it promptly turned and continued to walk.


"You could at least tell me what's so important," Ruby grumbled as she followed it to the foyer.


The wolf went straight for a door in the back, passing right through the night elf currently carrying dishes. Ruby dodged around her, giving a polite smile as she followed the spirit animal out of the inn.


Eventually, the wolf walked over the pond, before turning and resting on its haunches.


"Alright," Ruby said, "you got me out here. What is it?"


The wolf pointed its paw at the shore of the pond. Ruby looked over to it, confusion mounting. Why did the Spirits have to be so confusing?


"You want me to stand there?"


The wolf shook its head, pointing again.


"You want me to meditate?" Ruby asked. There was only so many shaman-y things the wolf could want.


Sure enough, the wolf nodded.


"I don't have any incense," Ruby protested weakly, even as she took off her boots and folded her legs beneath her. While she didn't absolutely need some, it helped her get into the mindset needed to enter a trance.


The wolf merely cocked its head, and Ruby sighed, closing her eyes and settled her breath into a stable rhythm. She pictured a candle flame in front of her, like she was back with Drek'thar in the Valley of Wisdom.


It would help if she knew what she was supposed to be doing. Farseeing? Calling a soul from the Shadowlands? Conversing with the spirits?


Ruby continued breathing, shutting out everything around her. The animals rushing through the trees, the wolf prowling around her, the wind blowing through the garden. Focusing on the flame. Opening herself up, allowing herself to be carried far away.


Suddenly, Ruby was standing on a rocky outcrop. Looking out, Ruby saw two massive armies of elementals marching on each other. Flames blazed from one end of the battlefield, turning the night to day. A giant twisting vortex of fire towered over the lesser elementals, turning to a humanoid upper torso at the top, which held a massive cudgel in one hand.


Marching towards them as a tide of stone, from creatures as small as pebbles to one that were the size of mountains. Larger than even them was a rotund woman made of stone. She flicked her hand and the earth reshaped itself to divert a storm of fire.


This, a voice came from the Earth, is what it was like at the dawn of this world. The four Elemental Lords and their lessers waged endless wars, scouring all life from Azeroth while we focused on… larger matters, hidden deep within my womb. But then They came.


As if on cue, four stars blazed forth, falling in four corners.


On that day, everything changed.


Ruby staggered as she was suddenly displaced, before catching herself and focusing on the new area.


They were surrounded by ice and water for as far as the eye could see, leaving Ruby a perfect view of the massive water elemental struggling with equally massive tentacles covered in grinning maws as an army of bugs ran below them.


Their threat was so great, the waves carried the message, that the four Elemental Lords decided to forge a truce, least they be swallowed whole. However…


The elemental's trident made a massive sweeping gesture, crashing the tentacles through the ice and dragging the bugs to sea.


It was for not. Therazane was the first to fall, for They had rooted Themselves deeply within the earth that she controlled. Al'Akir was next, offering himself willingly, and with him, Ragnaros the Firelord. Neptulon fought valiantly, but in the end, even the Tidehunter was incapable of fighting forever.


More tentacles burst from the earth, knocked the trident from the elemental, before grabbing him tight and smashing him against the ice as more wrapped around him.


...but then another group came.


Ruby was displaced again, watching an army of metal and stone march on a massive city built around a mountain. Standing between them and the city was another elemental, wind this time. It and one of the stone men were throwing bolt after bolt of lightning at each other while mantis-like creatures fought with men with lion heads.


The Titans, they called themselves, Wind carried into her ear, and they had come to order our world, to force it to follow their patterns. Al'Akir stood between their creations and the strongest of the Old Ones. The battle they fought lasted for years that took minutes, and minutes that took millennia, for the Titan's Highfather, Aman'Thul, was a master of temporal magic. But it didn't matter, for all Al'Akir needed to do was hold them off. Or, that's what he had thought, the wind died suddenly.


A hand reached from the sky, easily grabbing the mountain at the heart of the city, and tearing it out of the earth.


Long, fleshy tendrils were slowly ripped out with it and Ruby realized that the mountain was a living creature. A shimmering purple liquid rushed to fill the hole in the earth. Al'Akir looked up in bewilderment, before taking off and flying away as quickly as possible, followed by the man he had been fighting.


Several of the stone giants rushed around the crater, yelling in another language as a second hand came down, gripping the still thrashing creature, yanked it the rest of the way out, and tore it to pieces. Pitch black ichor splattered onto the ground, and where each drop touched earth, black and white creatures grew to fight the remaining giant.


The Titans were afraid to harm Azeroth like that again, Wind picked back up to her, drawing her eyes to where a giant woman was pointing, giving orders to the smaller, lion headed ones, so they did not kill the other three intruders, instead dragging them close enough to death to shackle the creatures while they sealed the Elemental Lords away.


Ruby's feet sunk into sand suddenly. Before her stretched a great wall, disappearing beyond the horizon on either side.


What you would consider long ago, Fire scorched her mind, not taking any of the care the others had, when this whole world was Kalimdor, the Old Ones' servants took this prison, waiting for it to awaken. When it did, due to the meddling of the creatures that created the place where your physical form sits, the dragons were only capable of sealing it, for the guardians that should have come to help did not.


"But," Ruby broke her silence for the first time, "I don't get it? Why tell me this?"


The creature will break free soon, if something is not done. The 'Alliance' and 'Horde' are gathering supplies to launch an assault on it first. Champions from every nation on Azeroth will be there. Including you.


"But, if the Titans couldn't kill-"


Do not mistake 'would not' for 'could not', Fire cut her off, the corruption is weak, so we will burn it away now.


"What about Blake?" Ruby asked, "I- I just got her back. I don't want to leave her this quickly."


It took a moment for Fire to respond, and it came softer than normal, like a warm day, instead of a raging inferno, I did not say you had to leave her behind, young pup. Ask her to come with you. This need to be done, if it isn't, in front of her appeared five people, Jaina, Warchief, Crocbait, a blond haired boy that Ruby didn't recognize, and Blake, Your friends, flames consumed Jaina and Warchief, your family, the boy and Crocbait were eaten too, and everyone you love with be consumed or enslaved, Blake's expression slid off her face, her eyes becoming downcast as some sort of black and red flesh coiled around her.


Go, fight this war, and know the elements of Azeroth march with you.


"But, what if I'm not re-" before Ruby could finish the sentence, she was staring at the pitch blackness of her own eyes. Well, that was a way to make it clear this wasn't a negotiable part of their pact if Ruby had ever seen one.


Ruby stood up, ignoring the pins and needles in her legs, and turned around.


Blake was dozing in a chair… a bowless Blake was dozing in a chair.


"Oh boy," Ruby said tiredly under her breath, wondering if she could get a few more hours of sleep in, or if the Elemental Spirits (Fire, really) would complain next time they actually spoke.


An impulse that Ruby was too tired to interpret came from one of the Spirits.


Ruby bundled up Blake, deciding that if she was gonna get dragged into a war for them, the least they could do was allow her a few hours of extra sleep.


Another impulse, one that Ruby was going to interpret as agreement.


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Crocbait walked into the valley, looking around at the many holy men gathered.


An orc and troll in furs pushed passed him, their head practically touching as they had a quiet, hurried argument under their breath as they rushed towards a colossal tent built on a island in a huge pond at the end of the valley. On either side of the valley were artificial streams carrying water from the lake and into Orgrimmar proper.


"I guess this meeting is really important?" he asked Rehgar. The orc merely grunted in response.


Rehgar looked exhausted, his face drawn. Whatever this was about had caused him to cancel training for the day.


"Rehgar!" the call was followed by a couple of Orcish words, and Rehgar stopped to allow a female tauren to catch up. Rehgar, if anything, looked more irritated at having to talk to her.


They stopped at a natural intersection, at which point Rehgar spoke in Common, "Druids are that way," he pointed to another collection of tents, "Light is that way," he pointed at a modest, half complete chapel, "good luck."


Crocbait was left standing alone as the other two continued toward the giant tent. After a moment to think, he went towards the chapel.


As he looked around, he couldn't notice how different it was from the few fragments of memory he had. Of a woman with flowing blond hair in a breathtaking dress holding a baby swaddled in blue as they walked up the steps to a cathedral. Who were they? His mother and brother? His wife and son?


There were a few orcs, goblins, and trolls standing around, but the majority of people were undead, heads bowed in quiet reverence.


One of them spotted Crocbait, making his way over. He was swathed in the white of the clergy, a rosary wrapped tight around his charred left hand, A line with two fragmented half circles dangling from it.


"Hello," the undead said softly, "I am Gallus Brightgrave, can I help you, my child?"


"Hello… Father?"


"That was the title I held in life, yes. Do you need assistance? We don't see many humans here, but the Church does not, should not, be blinded by such differences. Unfortunately, I cannot give too much, lest I be declared a traitor, but if you need an ear, or a place to stay, or even some food, I can supply that."


"I was hoping to speak to someone. I have amnesia, Father Brightgrave. I woke up on Kalimdor without any memories a week and a half ago."


"Truly?" Brightgrave stopped, "I apologize, that made it sound like I don't believe you. What is it you need from me? Spiritual guidance? Healing, perhaps? I'm far from adept at healing scars of the mind, but I have several colleagues here that are extremely skilled in it."


"Just to talk at the moment, I have fragments of memory, and I was hoping... I was hoping-"


"That I could help you put them together?"


"Yes."


"I can try. Come, talk with me while we walk. What would you say the oldest memory is, if you had to guess?"


"A city on fire, I was running through it with a woman and a man named Anduin, while the orcs sacked it-"


---


Shargresh walked into tent where the shaman of the Horde were congregating. Everyone had been plagued with nightmares of an unblinking eye and a burning need to go south.


Seated inside a ring of stones were several of the most powerful shaman of the Horde, and Shargresh quietly ran through them in his head as he took a seat near the back, where new shaman were being crowded.


Drek'thar, farseer of the Frostwolf clan, Rehgar Earthfury, gladiator master, Zur'ak Firefist of the Darkspears, Muln Earthfury, High Shaman of the Tauren, and Magatha Grimtotem, elder crone of her tribe.


"Rehgar," Magatha called lightly, "I've been meaning to ask, where's your apprentice?"


The silence that fell seemed unnaturally thick, and Shargresh's eyes scanned the next circle of shaman. There was one for each of the shaman in the circle except Rehgar.


"She isn't near Orgrimmar at the moment," Rehgar said, "but I will inform her of the decision we come to at the earliest possible time. Now, I take it you've all been having the dreams too?"


Everyone in the circle nodded grimly, as did Shargresh and a spattering of different shaman around the room. Then a long silence fell, the five merely staring into the fire in the center of the tent. It felt like everyone else was almost… out of place.


"Hamuul was advocating sending troops the same way," Muln said, "whatever this is, the Cenarion Circle is also worried about it."


"The Warchief is weighing his options too," Drek'thar added, "we should send some people, even if he doesn't formally decide to. It's what the elements want."


"And what of the ancestors?" a voice called out.


"They don't have anything to say," Rehgar grunted, "and why would they? If this is an Azerothian problem, what would spirits from Draenor know? What about you, Huln, Magatha, Zur'ak? Have your ancestors said anything?"


"No," Muln said.


"I haven't heard anything from them," Magatha seemed to shift uncomfortably.


"Da Loa have spoke ta me," Zur'ak said, "quiet whispers, gentle urges. Dat'll have ta do."


"And what do they say?" Drek'thar asked.


"I'll give ya a guess, like those humans are so fond o' doing."


"They want us south."


"Dey be scared, have ta be, if they're talking to me again," the witch doctor said, "Bwonsamdi hasn't spoken to any o' us since Zalazane took our home from us, angry dat da drums no longer play for him, dat da offerings don't come in when a Darkspear dies," the flames snapped and hissed, throwing the troll's face into shadows and for a moment, his voice seemed to drop several octaves, "it takes a lot to scare da god o' death, if he's willing ta break his silence, we should deal with it."


"Then let's vote," Muln said, "We should go."


"I agree," Drek'thar immediately added, "I might not be able to go myself, but we should send someone."


"I'll go," Zur'ak said, "along with any shaman here who wants ta come."


"Rehgar? Magatha?"


"I'll send Ruby," Rehgar grunted.


"And I'll send Jeven. When do you plan to leave?"


"As soon as possible, so anyone who plans to go should get any supplies and allies dey want now."


Shargresh slipped out, heading to find Duraro and Crom.
 
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How did they keep ruby as a slave?
Kept her starved. It's hard to run from a pack of wolves when you're hungry. Unlike Valeera and Broll, keeping a slave that isn't meant for gladiatorial combat well fed isn't a priority, and Ruby has always been shit at fighting without Crescent Rose, so its not like she was in a good position to try and fight the seven foot tall walls of muscle.
 
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Kept her starved. It's hard to run from a pack of wolves when you're hungry. Unlike Valeera and Broll, keeping a slave that isn't meant for gladiatorial combat well fed isn't a priority, and Ruby has always been shit at fighting without Crescent Rose, so its not like she was in a good position to try and fight the seven foot tall walls of muscle.
I'm sorry if I missed something, but what was she used for? And why couldn't she steal food?
 
Yeah. What could she possibly be useful for without enough food to function?

Also, why three years? Why not just one, or even only a week?
Also, starved slaves are useless. Pragmatically, she should be fed just enough to work. But what work can she actually do? Washing? Delicate work? Ok, fine. But you need food for those.

And so what if she didn't have a weapon?

She could simply grab a stick, and it would easily be as useful as a steel sword. They can use leeks and breadsticks as weapons. Ruby alone can create a blastwave from pure movement. The blastwave cracked concrete. I don't see how she could have been captured.
 
Also, starved slaves are useless. Pragmatically, she should be fed just enough to work. But what work can she actually do? Washing? Delicate work? Ok, fine. But you need food for those.

And so what if she didn't have a weapon?

She could simply grab a stick, and it would easily be as useful as a steel sword. They can use leeks and breadsticks as weapons. Ruby alone can create a blastwave from pure movement. The blastwave cracked concrete. I don't see how she could have been captured.
From my understanding ThatOnePsycho lowered RWBY powers a bit to avoid them being OP, we had a discussion onit a page or so back, not the path I take, but that's the general explanation. Fair points on the slaves, I honestly also found that collectively a little off.

The twenty three year old Faunus watched Ruby leave the room, before coming back with another chair.
Orcs, trolls, humans, dwarves. From what Blake had gathered, Kalimdor was even less populated that the Eastern Kingdoms, and that meant every criminal with a bounty, a bit of money to spare, or the skill to sneak aboard a ship and stay hidden until the end of the voyage, was rushing away from the Eastern Kingdoms and to the new frontier. Then you had the people coming to Kalimdor to make an honest living, and needed things like satyrs, centaurs, murlocs, and quilboar eliminated.
Wait, how long have they been there?! Wow, that is a... substantial amount of time.

I really liked the world building aspect of this secondary statement it makes a ton of sense and also explains a lot about how they were able to get by. Though I'm not sure Blake would consider displacing the native populace to steal their land is particularly honest XD

"The orcs," Ruby supplied helpfully, "they were an offshoot of the Warsong clan. Not part of the Horde, they broke off because Warchief choose to settle in Durotar."
Is this group from canon or were they created for the story?

Also Blake's anger and guilt make perfect sense, good work transcribing the conversation and tension.

Seems like a bit of a minor thing to ask the elements to help with, though I loved the descriptions and given her sometimes lack of social experience I could see Ruby wanting to double check with whatever is around if she is doing it right.

Little confused why Ruby doesn't just call it Crescent Rose and wouldn't Blake have a place they could stay? also loved the callback to wanting to help Blake with stuff, Blake's lack of certainty works well and hey it seems like they do still plan to get home some way!

I'm confused by Ruby's strength though, especially in comparison to Blake, Aura and in general.

Kind of surprised Valeera doesn't hate her slave master and situation more, then again you know my views on that comic/sub plot, sorry. Interesting language details though about what gets used more around who.

Nice segment with Blake waking up, her take on tech and the night elf receptionist had a lot of personality for a brief scene. I wonder if she noticed something under Blake's bow.
What was with this girl?
She's probably 300 years old XD

"Oh!" she looked relieved, "Yes. She's out back, by the pond. She's been there for the past couple of hours. Meditating, I think."
The use of contractions feels a little odd for Azeroth/night elves, but that may just be me.

Had Nora and Ren ever gotten together? What about Jaune and Pyrrha? How were Adam and Ilia? And what about Weiss and Yang? Had Ozpin allowed them to stay at Beacon, despite half the team going missing? And more importantly, if they did manage to get home, how would Blake be able to look Yang in the eye and say that Ruby had been a slave because of her?
This was a really solid scene and the lead in with the flowers makes sense, though I feel like Blake owuld have focused on their team first after her parents and given how she parted with Adam... Yeah not sure that's the kind of phrasing she'd use for him.

Nice lead out with the book line.

There was only so many shaman-y things the wolf could want.
That was an amazing description, very Ruby XD

Excellent descriptions of the war between old gods and titans, though I will say it feels odd for the spirits to be so organised, if they could do this why wasn't every shamans, druid and everything similar on Azeroth informed of the threat and pummeled with visions until they went to kill the old gods and or why didn't more people know about the titans?

I did not the meeting at the end of the chapter which was well done but the amount of info given still felt odd. Nice stuff with the Loa though I am shocked the Tauren ancestors didn't weigh in.
"A city on fire, I was running through it with a woman and a man named Anduin, while the orcs sacked it-"
Him remembering that much gives the impression piecing together his identity would be very easy, otherwise interesting stuff, nice to see a friendly Forsaken.
 
I'm sorry if I missed something, but what was she used for? And why couldn't she steal food?
Smithing. Food was brought to her while she was stuck in the forge.
Yeah. What could she possibly be useful for without enough food to function?

Also, why three years? Why not just one, or even only a week?
There's a distinct difference between 'enough food to function' and 'enough food to escape from the camp and get far enough away fast enough that the huge wolves Warsong orcs ride can't just run her down once they find that she's made a break for it'

Three years with the Warsongs and three years with Rehgar melds with the WoW timeline well (Anduin was born a bit before Arthas went nuts, and he's a kid by Vanilla, so there's a fair few years) and a week eliminates the entirety of the plot point of her trying to find Blake. It also gives her time to learn something that will be very important way down the line (I'm talking Legion), and gives Blake, who doesn't have enough money to afford fancy travel methods, time to have been up and down Kalimdor a several for jobs. Continents aren't small, so getting anywhere takes a while.

Nice stuff with the Loa though I am shocked the Tauren ancestors didn't weigh in.
Loa are technically Wild Gods, so they know the Titans. The Tauren Ancestors didn't have any connection to the Titans (beyond being created by a Wild God) so they don't know what's going on enough to advise on C'thun. If this was Yogg or N'zoth, they'd be flipping their shit, because they're messing with the Shadowlands and Emerald Dream respectively (Bwonsamdi would be on an absolute "if you don't get your asses up there, you'll never see your ancestors again" grade warpath if it was Yogg, since they both hold a grip on the title 'god of death')
 
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I think if you want to offer critique or ask questions you might have better luck using the quote function.

Loa are technically Wild Gods, so they know the Titans. The Tauren Ancestors didn't have any connection to the Titans (beyond being created by a Wild God) so they don't know what's going on enough to advise on C'thun. If this was Yogg or N'zoth, they'd be flipping their shit, because they're messing with the Shadowlands and Emerald Dream respectively (Bwonsamdi would be on an absolute "if you don't get your asses up there, you'll never see your ancestors again" grade warpath if it was Yogg, since they both hold a grip on the title 'god of death')
Isn't that just some wild gods, not all? Plus if they do know why aren't they trying to cajole every troll group on Azeroth to attack? I figured they'd at least know about one of the previous wars with Cthun, or sense the growing evil.
 
.... you do know smithing is hard work, right?
Not hard enough that they need to feed her enough to be able to outrun a pack of huge wolves that are fast and strong enough to be used as substitutes for horses, or fight off a tribe of warriors.
I think if you want to offer critique or ask questions you might have better luck using the quote function.


Isn't that just some wild gods, not all? Plus if they do know why aren't they trying to cajole every troll group on Azeroth to attack? I figured they'd at least know about one of the previous wars with Cthun, or sense the growing evil.
All Wild Gods are aware of the Titans, since they were empowered by a Titan Forged, though not all if them are aware of the Old Gods.

Different Troll tribes worship different Loa. Bwonsamdi plays a major role in the Darkspear worship, but not so much in other tribes (most of whom are either too far from Ahn'qiraj to help, or getting screamed at by their Loa to go deal with it)

Certain Tauren ancestors are aware, but they aren't necessarily ones who would talk to Muln ot Magatha.

And why would they let a little girl near the forge? Doing stuff like hammering together swords is grown man work.
That's not how Orcs think. They're heavy on honor, so having someone else (who, mind you, this tribe has already decided is dishonorable) do the work for them lets them focus on it.
 
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All Wild Gods are aware of the Titans, since they were empowered by a Titan Forged, though not all if them are aware of the Old Gods.

Different Troll tribes worship different Loa. Bwonsamdi plays a major role in the Darkspear worship, but not so much in other tribes (most of whom are either too far from Ahn'qiraj to help, or getting screamed at by their Loa to go deal with it)

Certain Tauren ancestors are aware, but they aren't necessarily ones who would talk to Muln ot Magatha.
I think I may be using different sources to you, or possibly older now out of dates ones.

Most of them have or could gain access to boats so I'm not sure distance is a huge issue, but I am willing to drop this matter if you like.

I see.
 
I think I may be using different sources to you, or possibly older now out of dates ones.

Most of them have or could gain access to boats so I'm not sure distance is a huge issue, but I am willing to drop this matter if you like.

I see.
Chronicles and Legion say that they were empowered by Freya after the creation of the Emerald Dream, since there was no life on Azeroth that wasn't Old God created (I actually like this, because it explains how there are certain animals on both Azeroth and Draenor that neither side had any incentive to bring through the Dark Portal)

Oh, some of them are coming from across the sea (some Zandalari, Revantusk and Frostmane are heading there, the Farraki are already near by.) It's just the ones who are really far off (Drakkari) gearing up for something (Amani) or have an implied connection to the Old Gods (Gurubashi) that aren't going.

Also, this group of Warsongs were made for the story (though considering it's implied that a large portion of the Kor'korn during Siege of Orgrimmar were Warsongs, it isn't much of a stretch)
 
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OK, I have written the final two segments for the 'New World', covering Ruby and Weiss respectively. These should be a bit more fun and exciting than the last two and one of which will actually be a flash forward to a month after their arrival so there will be something new to read. As always any feedback, questions or critique are super welcome.

New World

Little Red Riding Hood
&
Heiress for Hire

Raene Wolfrunner glanced around the lilac hazed city of Astranaar. Her beloved cities well shaped tree homes and elegantly curved homes blended in with the more natural growing trees seamlessly as ever and the loosely defined paths were walked by Kaeldorie, young and old, the cities easy pace not wavering. Raene grimaced at the approach of Synna, a stout little druid woman in elegant green and purple robes.

'One of Staghelm's louts, I thought that mission to investigate the worgen would keep her occupied for months.'

Idly Raene noted there was an absolutely diminutive figure trailing behind the pale haired druid, human by the looks of her, in strange heavy boots, a positively bewildering dress and a red cloak. Wide silver eyes flashed from side to side as she craned her neck to take in Astranaar.

'Well, that explains why she came back so soon," Raene thought, only half returning her gaze to Synna, something about the human girls gate and the heavy looking instrument hanging from her back put the night elf ill at ease.

"You have returned to us quite quickly, Druid," Raene said simply.

Bowing, Syanna said, "Apologies commander, however my mission to investigate the Worgen menace that has so troubled your Sentinals is at an end."

Arching a long eyebrow at the Druid, Raene said, "I confess I find that difficult to believe, druid."

"Never the less is it the truth, it was not solely by my hand though," The druid gestured behind her and the girl stepped forward. "This is Ruby Rose, I found her engaged in combat with the Worgen and aided her."

The girl chimed in, her accent strange and her words a blur, "I thought they were some kind of Beowolf, but then they bled and definitely weren't," she looked uncomfortable for an instant before frowning, "They came at me first though so they were asking for it! Anyway have you seen my team? My sister is tall, and kinda muscly like you, though not as tall, she has lots of blonde hair and shotgun gauntlets. My partner, she's Weiss, she wears lots of blue and carries a revolving saber, she has white hair and a combat skirt! Oh and Yang's partner, Blake, she has black hair a bow, and wears a lot of black and uses a ballistic chain scythe!"

Raene blinked.

"She blew up a boulder with her gun while we were fighting," Synna supplied, quite unhelpfully.

"Her gun?" Raene said.

There was a wild clinking of metal and gears that reminded the Night elf of her time spent with the dwarves during the war and she watched as the red and black slab of metal on 'Ruby's' back unfurled into a scythe that she proudly slammed into the ground. "Crescent Rose, a customizable, high impact sniper rifle!"

"She's from another world," Synna supplied, clearly enjoying her superiors flabbergasted expression.

"Yeah we fell through a portal when we were fighting some evil scientist and I found myself here!"

Raene held up her hand and squinted as she felt a migraine coming on, finally she said, "Start from the beginning."
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Thunderous footsteps echoed against the icy walls of the deep cavern, cut into the earth like a wound. Seemingly never ending snowfall sprinkled down across the battlefield as Weiss spun out of reach of a gargantuan hand made of ice and rock, blade striking against the giants hand as it passed her by.

'I have bested larger monsters than you,' Weiss thought as she tared at the white eyed giant of stone and ice, its vague outline of a face cracking as it grunted and took a thudding step towards her, clenched fist flying towards her.

Weiss summoned a Glyph and launched herself into the air, watching as the giants attack kicked up debris and snow while its gaze trailed after her.

Heels clicking on the ruins of a stone temple embedded in the wall, Weiss fell into a striking stance as she eyed up her foe on something close to eye level.

The giant's arm swung out and it grasped a boulder the size of its fist, which was easily as big as Weiss's torso, and it flung the stone at her as it began to charge.

'Resilient, but not unbreakable, no pain, unstable footing,' Weiss thought.

Sidestepping the boulder Weiss kicked into the air and a stream of Glyphs sprung up on the icy cavern walls. She skated across them as the giant tried to follow her path, but she was too fast for the creature to keep up with. She shot passed it, launched herself off the wall and slammed against the giants head, the swish of steel filled the air as she slashed and jabbed at the icy monsters skull chipping away at its armor with each strike and causing it to let out pained groans as it stumbled forward, arms reaching for her.

'Too late,' Weiss grinned, two Glyphs sprung up under the moving giants feet one pulsing its leg forward, the other backwards.

Weiss kicked off the monsters head and flipped just out of reach, a pulse of Aura flew through her blade as it whirred and she smirked as a gout of flames exploded from the tip and blared across the giants stunned face, the combined force and pain sending the monster toppling to the ground with an earthshaking thud as Weiss landed elegantly in the snow.

Slowly, the monster staggered to its feet, steam wafting off its chipped and scratched face, the ice giant looked at her for a moment, before letting out a guttural moan and striding away, each step shaking snow from the icy cavern walls.

Spinning around, Weiss looked for any reinforcements or attackers that may have been called by the skirmish and sighed in relief she she saw none.

It was then that a deep voice called out to her, "Are you done young huntress? Our party is ready to depart?"

Sighing, Weiss took one last glance at the frozen ruins and lowered her head, "No sign of them here either."

She then summoned a glyph, one after the other and began bouncing her way up the ice wall and towards the slim bridge where a towering man in thick white fur with black stripes stood, a band of similar fur dressed creatures, goblins Weiss reminded herself, stood a little ways away from him, surrounding a dying dire while others finished loading up sleds and their rams.

She nodded to the man and said, "Yes Oso, I'm ready to go."

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"Well, well, the prodigal huntress returns!" Weiss heard Fizzle cry from the neatly packed ice brick walls of Everlook. The lightly green tinted goblin woman's red hair was visible only by a small number of strands hanging out from her blue hood in a style that reminded Weiss of her sister.

"Hello, manager Fizzle," Weiss answered politely.

The diminutive goblin glanced at the band of treasure hunters, miners and hunters she'd been accompanying as they filed in and asked, "Good haul?"

There was a smattering of affirmatives and one goblin in particular cheered, "I found me a shiny new relic!"

Nodding Fizzle, said, "Good work, take a load off a the inn," she then turned her attention to Oso as he, Weiss and the Night Elve's saber approached her from the back of the convoy. "How about you inspector, my crew didn't cause you any grief did they?"

The night elf shook his head and spoke, in words slow, measured and melodic, a contrast to the sharp, high pitched goblins.

"They acquitted themselves well, with Weiss's protection and my instructions they did not take too much and so have maintained the balance, though with the cold season coming in, there will need to be a reduction in hunting."

"That's fine, "Fizzle nodded, "This was the last batch of hunters for the season anyway. Thank for your hard work kid," she said, tossing Weiss a small bag clinking with gold coins.

For a moment Weiss glowed at the praise, and the shine of her most recent payment, it was good money if everything she'd learnt of this strange new worlds economy was anything to go by.

"Guessing there was no joy in your search?" Fizzle asked, her tone losing some of its harsh speed as she relaxed her manager air.

Weiss's shoulders dropped and she shook her head, "There was no sign of them, and Ruby or Yang would have left an impression at least."

"She handled herself well against a giant, the poor creature had long since lost its mind but was driven away well enough, the same was true for the yetis that raided our camp, saving many of your employees lives," Oso added.

"Well that's good right?" Fizzle continued, drawing Weiss from her reverie,"No news is good news or so some say. Better than bad at least and if a giant couldn't do you in chances are it couldn't to your friends either and I already saw how casually you handled those damned yetis when we met, so chances are if your friends landed here they just wandered off in the wrong direction."

Nodding, Weiss recalled Oso and Fizzle having found her standing over the caved in chest of a Yeti that had accosted her as she'd wondered the blinding white plains of Winterspring nearly a month ago while they were surveying the area. She'd been lucky they found her, even if Fizzle had wanted a cut of her first pay for it, better than falling victim to slow blindness and wandering to her cold death.

"You're right, but if they aren't here, I don't have much to go on in regards to where they might be, even less on a way home."

"Sadly, not many experts on the magics that may have brought you here travel to this part of the world, it may be best to expand your search," Oso suggested.

"I still say that portal sounded like an engineers work, but Oso has a point kid, the only spot left in WInterspring is that demon infested hole down south…" Fizzle trailed off as Weiss's stare intensified and Oso groaned.

"What do you mean, there's an area here I haven't visited yet?" Weiss half snapped.

"It is living wounds from the Legions invasion," Oso muttered, "A scar on the land, fire and ash fill the air and the demons roam freely but know better than to try and expand."

Fizzle rubbed her hands then blew onto them, mist escaping her chapped lips, "I wasn't gonna mention it, but… Well like I said, it the last place left and demons are the toughest thing around these parts, so if your friends did end up there…" she shrugged, "they might have had to run?" she added lamely.

"I need to investigate," Eeiss said firmly.

"Weiss, be reasonable, you may have faced some of the Legions dregs in your world, but raiding such a location is no business for any lone soul!" Os chided.

Fizzle seemed less reticent, rubbing her chin she said, "I do have some relic hunters who want to investigate that spot-"

Oso cut in, "You cannot be serious!"

"I'm just making suggestions!"

"I'm going," Weiss said, cutting Oso off with a slash of her hand, "I appreciate the concern, but where I am form, I am a Huntress, old enough and skilled enough to risk my life against the creatures of Grimm and thus, I am more than prepared to face off against these demons if it bares even the slightest chance of giving me a clue as t my teams whereabouts." she had sworn she'd be the best teammate ever and she intended to live up to that promise.

Oso grimaced unhappily, his nightsaber rubbed up against her palm and Weiss smiled a little at the friendly east as she scratched it behind the ears. 'I hope someone has been feeding Zwei,' she thought idly.

"Look, worst case scenario, you find nothing and have to run back, you've fast enough for that and if nothing is there… Well you might need to take Oso's advice and head down to Ratchet, its a neutral city, a lot busier than Everlook. A little of something and everyone passes through there and it'd be a lot safer than going through battle zones."

"Thank you for the advice, both of you, though if we are to continue this," Weiss bristled, "Maybe we can go inside and have a drink?" she'd grown quite fond of the goblins coffee since arriving, a reminder of home.

"A grand idea, we can go over the contract details and maps at my place!" Fizzle cheered, turning and leading them towards her office where Weiss had been staying for ten copper pieces a night.

Oso shook his head and said, "Very well, allow me at least tell you of the foes you will be facing, warrior."

"Thank you," Weiss said with a little curtsy, as she followed Fizzle into the tiny 'igloo' she called home.

'If this doesn't work…' she thought, reflecting on the map of Azeroth she'd been studying since arriving, 'There's still lots of place to search… but I'll find them, I will.'
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If I do more on this I may be doing partner or a team transport instead, though this has been fun!




Chronicles and Legion say that they were empowered by Freya after the creation of the Emerald Dream, since there was no life on Azeroth that wasn't Old God created (I actually like this, because it explains how there are certain animals on both Azeroth and Draenor that neither side had any incentive to bring through the Dark Portal)

Oh, some of them are coming from across the sea (some Zandalari, Revantusk and Frostmane are heading there, the Farraki are already near by.) It's just the ones who are really far off (Drakkari) gearing up for something (Amani) or have an implied connection to the Old Gods (Gurubashi) that aren't going.

Also, this group of Warsongs were made for the story (though considering it's implied that a large portion of the Kor'korn during Siege of Orgrimmar were Warsongs, it isn't much of a stretch)
I was referring to the Loa all being Wild gods and titan creations, I read that was not the case.

I have y own take on this, though that does help, but ill leave the matter as I think we're veering off topic for the thread.

Fair enough.
 
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Not hard enough that they need to feed her enough to be able to outrun a pack of huge wolves that are fast and strong enough to be used as substitutes for horses, or fight off a tribe of warriors.
Beowolves are faster than horses, given that horses cannot jump 20 feet into the air.

I don't know why you bothered to use Ruby instead of making a new character. What was wrong with using any human girl from Azeroth?
 
Beowolves are faster than horses, given that horses cannot jump 20 feet into the air.

I don't know why you bothered to use Ruby instead of making a new character. What was wrong with using any human girl from Azeroth?
Because this is a RWBY crossover, and I do intend to have them get back to Remnant eventually? And I don't feel like writing a story where Ruby facerolls her way through the entirety of Azeroth's mortal level Rogues Gallary, and that means not taking what happens in RWBY at face value, especially because certain things sway massively from one side to another (remember the time Blake got stabbed by Adam, then used her Semblance, meaning her Aura was up, but then she had bandages around her stomach like she was injured next episode? I do.) Ruby was also, as I've reiterated several times, far from top condition at any point, since the entire reason she had to go distract the orcs was because her and Blake had just got done another fight that wore down their Aura.
As someone not famikiar with warcraft, what do the horde do?
They're made up of the more 'monstrous' races of Azeroth. Orcs, ogres, Forsaken, trolls, tauren, blood elves (who are mana/fel addicts), goblins, and the more Hot Blooded pandarens. They're not evil, despite them looking so at first glance (except 90% of the Forsaken NPCs, and most Orcs when Garrosh Hellscream is in charge) the big difference between them and the Alliance is that they're all (on paper) one nation under the Warchief (The Forsaken are fair weather friends at the best of times, and only stay with the Horde because if they didn't the Alliance would happily march in and kill every undead in Lordaeron) while the Alliance is a collection of nations that can make their own choices that follow the 'High King' in combat situations.
 
Because this is a RWBY crossover, and I do intend to have them get back to Remnant eventually? And I don't feel like writing a story where Ruby facerolls her way through the entirety of Azeroth's mortal level Rogues Gallary, and that means not taking what happens in RWBY at face value, especially because certain things sway massively from one side to another (remember the time Blake got stabbed by Adam, then used her Semblance, meaning her Aura was up, but then she had bandages around her stomach like she was injured next episode? I do.) Ruby was also, as I've reiterated several times, far from top condition at any point, since the entire reason she had to go distract the orcs was because her and Blake had just got done another fight that wore down their Aura.

They're made up of the more 'monstrous' races of Azeroth. Orcs, ogres, Forsaken, trolls, tauren, blood elves (who are mana/fel addicts), goblins, and the more Hot Blooded pandarens. They're not evil, despite them looking so at first glance (except 90% of the Forsaken NPCs, and most Orcs when Garrosh Hellscream is in charge) the big difference between them and the Alliance is that they're all (on paper) one nation under the Warchief (The Forsaken are fair weather friends at the best of times, and only stay with the Horde because if they didn't the Alliance would happily march in and kill every undead in Lordaeron) while the Alliance is a collection of nations that can make their own choices that follow the 'High King' in combat situations.
....to be blunt, you can make a crack-ey story, where a troop of cute teenage girls take over the world of azeroth.
 
....to be blunt, you can make a crack-ey story, where a troop of cute teenage girls take over the world of azeroth.
Yep... up until they touch any of the higher ups on Azeroth. Warxraft is a setting where, if enough people can gather, you can punch cthulhu hard enough he dies. All but two classes have some sort arcane empowerment.

But I also don't want to write a crack fic. I enjoy the types of fics I write, ones where characters get knocked down, and get back up stronger for it.
Why?

You didn't want to tell a RWBY story before, or you wouldn't have removed so much of Ruby.

I'd suggest putting an original Shaman into Remnant instead, but again, you don't seem to care for Remnant, with its Aura, Semblances, and crazy weapons.
Where did I say any of that? I'm fine with all those things, but unless I was writing a fic where the characters of RWBY conquer all of Azeroth, then die when Arthas attacks, or the Old Gods break free, or the Burning Legion drowns them in tides of never-ending demons.

I didn't know you knew exactly what I thinking, that you knew my plans for my fic better than I do since I plan for them to go back to Remnant. With all with heavy weapon goodness that inplies. Would Ruby have won against the orcs if she had her Aura up and Crescent Rose? Yeah. But I don't want to write a shitty fic where Ruby is unstoppable and juggernauts through Warcraft. That isn't my idea of a story I want to write, I enjoy writing Fur, if you don't like it, fine, good for you, but don't take my enjoyment from it. I'm open to constructive criticism, but that's not what you're giving. You're telling me that became I'm not writing an OP Ruby who slaughtered her way through a tribe of Orcs that have been fighting through the years in between the second and third wars, and their Worgs, with a fucking stick, while hungry, everything I write in this story is crap.

I hate invoking Tropes like this, but Power Creep, Power Seep is a thing that exists for a reason. It'd get boring very quickly if I just had the Warcraft characters so weak that the question on why they even existed when Ruby and Blake deals with everything on their own, so I find various ways to tweak the power. Aura soaks up most of the damage, but some leaks through and it doesn't do much on fel based attacks, ammo for CR is expensive at the moment, but will be less so as time goes on, and they make more allies, Ruby's semblance still works perfectly, but it eats up energy quickly, so what's enough for her to survive as a slave isn't what she needs to make an Aura fueled escape.
 
But I don't want to write a shitty fic where Ruby is unstoppable and juggernauts through Warcraft.
But you want to write a fic where the World of Warcraft shits on her for three years until she gets herself a proper World of Warcraft class instead of using those huntress powers and skills and weapons you took away from her.

Except you didn't want to write that either, because you keep skipping over large chunks of time.
 
But you want to write a fic where the World of Warcraft shits on her for three years until she gets herself a proper World of Warcraft class instead of using those huntress powers and skills and weapons you took away from her.

Except you didn't want to write that either, because you keep skipping over large chunks of time.
We've seen her fight once since the fic started, in a spar where she was holding back (even then, I implied she did use her Semblance to clear the space in between her and Crocbait). She hasn't gotten a chance to use her Huntress powers on screen, she hasn't needed to. Next chapter sees her and Blake start traveling down south, at which point I do plan for her to use her Huntsmen training. Why wouldn't she? She has Crescent Rose back, she has a partner, she's going to be fighting Grimm-esque creatures. She has everything she needs to be a huntress again, as opposed to before, where she was using a farming scythe. Despite what you're convinced, I know what I'm doing. There's a reason we haven't seen Ruby really fight up to this point. You don't know what I'm writing yet, you've read two chapters (one of which was solely talking) and then decided that I'm shiting on Ruby, and that I hate Aura, Semblance, Remnant, and the weapons from it. This is despite the fact that I've repeatedly hinted and said that Ruby and Blake's Auras were down, that we haven't had a on screen fight where either of them need their Semblance, that I've said that I have plans for them to get back to Remnant, and that I made sure Ruby had Crescent Rose back before the start of the first real arc.
 
Why is Ruby best friends with all the most powerful people of the Horde and Alliance?

(But not such good friends that guards don't recognize or fear her?)

Are those your favorite characters in the World of Warcraft?

Why did you have her meet Crocbait at all? Why didn't she leave before he was found?

How much will those characters matter to your story?
 
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