In The Name Of The Moon: Sailor Moon Ideas, Recs and Fic Discussion thread

More in point, he is named in the Black tradition of using star names, but the Malfoy were too good for that, so they used a constellation instead. Which also would justify named a daughter after Mare Serenitatis, the Sea of Serenity, one of the most eye-catching features on our moon due to its size and darkness.



This creates mixed feelings. On one hand, I agree in general, on the other hand, at the end of the saga, the Malfoys did a pretty hard turn on their views motivated solely on their filial love, and I'm talking about the nuclear family here, father, mother, son, not the extended one. So, this "hypocrisy" in their treatment of little bunny might have been justified by canon, I think?

I was speaking to the overall pureblood tradition of Greco-Roman nomenclature, actually. I'd have just played it straight and named her Selene.

I want to circle back to the second statement because my previous post was half done when I accidentally posted it, but now I'm late for work.
 
… They named their child Draco. Now, you may argue that it's in honor of Δράκων [Drakōn], A 7 century BCE Athenian lawgiver so hardcore that he that gave us the word 'Draconian', in which case, congratulations, you just set a precedent for the Malfoys butchering traditional Greek names.

More in point, he is named in the Black tradition of using star names, but the Malfoy were too good for that, so they used a constellation instead. Which also would justify named a daughter after Mare Serenitatis, the Sea of Serenity, one of the most eye-catching features on our moon due to its size and darkness.



This creates mixed feelings. On one hand, I agree in general, on the other hand, at the end of the saga, the Malfoys did a pretty hard turn on their views motivated solely on their filial love, and I'm talking about the nuclear family here, father, mother, son, not the extended one. So, this "hypocrisy" in their treatment of little bunny might have been justified by canon, I think?
Yeah, I've seen it said elsewhere "the Malfoys are for the Malfoys". If they think your ideology is good for the family's future prospects, they'll follow it. If it hurts the family, they won't.
 
Okay, so I know this is already pretty far in, and I don't expect you to change anything based on my perspective, but maybe other SM/HP fiction writers will find it useful.
1. In terms of the timeline, you can do what you like, but if you want things to line up, Serenity should be two years older than Draco.
2. I don't think that the pureblood Malfoys would name their child something as non-traditional as Serenity. I'd just play it completely straight and name her Selene.
3. I thought the Hogwarts letter mechanism was triggered by the same underage magic detection system that gets Harry in trouble later in the books. I think there's a book and quill somewhere that just sits around all day writing the names and locations of under-11s when they have their first wild magic incident to generate the Hogwarts mailing list later.
3a. Which is to say that going the Neville route with Serenity doesn't really mesh with what we know about the Malfoys. If they thought she was a squib, Lucius would have discreetly sent her off to some relative they didn't associate with.
Ooh, nice to have someone comment on the story over here, you've made my day, thank you!

1. In the story, Serenity Malfoy is born on 30 June 1979 and then Draco is born on 5 June 1980, so she's a year older than him. and in the year above him in Hogwarts, as are the other Inner Senshi.

I considered the 1978 option but I wasn't sure I could make two interesting year-long plot lines before Harry and Draco showed up when the Inner Senshi would also be too young to believably pull off most of the complex and interesting magic that people would want to see. I'm changing all sorts of things anyway so fudging a year is no big deal.


2. I sort of wish I'd thought of this, but fans have existing associations with the Serenity name and it's not like you could shorten Selene to Serenity, so I probably wouldn't have done it either way. Thanks for tossing the idea out there, though!


3. I don't think so, since the Hogwarts Book & Quill would've been made back in Rowena's lifetime 1,000 years ago and is located at Hogwarts while the Ministry's detection method is presumably at the Ministry and was only created when the Statute of Secrecy meant they needed to keep a watch for kids doing underage magic.

Also, kids don't appear to set off the detectors or get legal warnings until after they've gone to Hogwarts -- Harry didn't get anything for the Vanishing Glass incident or turning a teacher's wig blue -- and given that she's living in a magical home, there wasn't really a reasonable way for the Ministry to differentiate Serenity's young magic from Draco's or from her parents' magic use.


3a. The one good thing about the Malfoy family is that they do genuinely love each other. Moreover, because the adults noted "accidental magic" but didn't pay attention to whether it was Serenity or Draco until later, they weren't certain about the squib thing, and they only even started to suspect it when Serenity was old enough that the rest of their social circle knew that she existed.

Sending Serenity away to a distant relative would've been an admission to all their peers that they'd produced a squib, whereas sending her away to a muggle boarding school and pretending they were sending her to Castlebruxo or somewhere else would let them pretend to the rest of their social circle that she was a witch who (as she got older) was a bit forgetful about carrying her wand, was opting to be a spinster instead of marry, and took up a hobby of traveling so she didn't attend many social festivities.

This creates mixed feelings. On one hand, I agree in general, on the other hand, at the end of the saga, the Malfoys did a pretty hard turn on their views motivated solely on their filial love, and I'm talking about the nuclear family here, father, mother, son, not the extended one. So, this "hypocrisy" in their treatment of little bunny might have been justified by canon, I think?
My basic idea was:

1) The Malfoy family all genuinely love each other, so the parents wouldn't quietly assassinate Serenity in a "tragic accident" for if they suspect that she is a squib.

2) If the Malfoy family suspect that she is a squib, they would absolutely not want any of their social circle (the fellow Death Eaters and supporters,) to find out something so embarrassing.

3) The D.E. affiliates know all the tells that families who produce squibs use to hide it -- it's the stuff used by 'blood traitor' families who won't arrange accidents but are still embarrassed -- like sending someone away to stay with relatives. So doing that would be a tacit admission by the Malfoy parents that Serenity was a squib.

4) Conversely, the Malfoy family is rich enough that Serenity won't ever need a job, so there's no need for her to tell anyone what she got in OWLs or NEWTs (which, as a squib, would be that she couldn't take them,) as part of a job application. Similarly, there's no need for her to get married when the family can easily give her a stipend to travel the world or stay under a pseudonym at some gorgeous tropical villa for the rest of her life.

Yeah, I've seen it said elsewhere "the Malfoys are for the Malfoys". If they think your ideology is good for the family's future prospects, they'll follow it. If it hurts the family, they won't.
Thanks! It's a bit more complicated than that in the story, but ultimately the main thrust is that Lucius will espouse whatever lets him assert his own superiority over as many people as possible, etc.

For all their willingness to care for Serenity even before she gets her Hogwarts letter they don't actually do anything to promote squib rights in general since it would undercut the Malfoy family's political stance and alienate them from their allies, so I figure it fit them.
 
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1. In the story, Serenity Malfoy is born on 30 June 1979 and then Draco is born on 5 June 1980, so she's a year older than him. and in the year above him in Hogwarts, as are the other Inner Senshi.

I considered the 1978 option but I wasn't sure I could make two interesting year-long plot lines before Harry and Draco showed up when the Inner Senshi would also be too young to believably pull off most of the complex and interesting magic that people would want to see. I'm changing all sorts of things anyway so fudging a year is no big deal.

This actually works, because putting Serenity and Rei in 1979 leaves the other Inners in 1978, because their birthdays are so late in the year.

But I do understand that this is an AU, so there's no obligation to follow any sort of canon.
 
This actually works, because putting Serenity and Rei in 1979 leaves the other Inners in 1978, because their birthdays are so late in the year.

But I do understand that this is an AU, so there's no obligation to follow any sort of canon.
It works for the birth dates, it doesn't work so well for me creating plots to cover two entire school years where Harry and Draco won't be around yet for us to interact with.

That said if you wanted to take a swing at writing some snippets I would love to read them. I basically got inspired when I found the story Butterfly Effect with the Sailor Senshi at Hogwarts idea and decided "I want more", so I wrote it myself.

Would you sort them all the same way I did, or would you place them differently if you wrote this idea out?
 
It works for the birth dates, it doesn't work so well for me creating plots to cover two entire school years where Harry and Draco won't be around yet for us to interact with.

That said if you wanted to take a swing at writing some snippets I would love to read them. I basically got inspired when I found the story Butterfly Effect with the Sailor Senshi at Hogwarts idea and decided "I want more", so I wrote it myself.

Would you sort them all the same way I did, or would you place them differently if you wrote this idea out?

I meant putting Serenity in 1979 works.

I know it may not seem like it, but I actually like your story so far. I couldn't possibly take on writing another fanfic, considering I have about 16 sitting around unfinished at this point. Number 17, though, might be SM/Percy Jackson if I ever finish the books.
 
So, how about a crossover with The Backrooms? If you're not careful, you could no-clip out of reality, and wind up in The Backrooms.

9.223 quintillion Levels, as the different dimensions are called. Level 0 is an endless backroom of an office space(hence the name) a second-order infinity. That is, it has infinite floors, and each floor is an infinite plane. If you don't use the specific mechanism (a series of 'service shafts' accessed through metal doors) you can't move between floors no matter how far down you dig or if you try and knock out some celling tiles.

The idea is that after Serenity killed herself, her status as the incarnated soul of the universe led to some serious issues. Either that or the splintering of the Silver Crystal into the Rainbow Crystal caused some problems with reality for obvious reasons. Though I suppose that's still technically her death causing problems.

My thought is that, since it's disjointed from normal reality, it's also disjointed from time, so time runs about 90 times faster in The Backrooms than normal reality in terms of 'doing things' but stuff like food, sleep, and aging all run according to normal reality, so 3 months in The Backrooms would be a day on Earth. This would allow for a lot of study and training time to be freed up later on, but I actually want Usagi to encounter the thing early on, and, due to what she is and her role in their creation, be able to jump back and forth between them and reality as we know it at will. Her parents brush it off as a weird imaginary friend, and Usagi eventually stops mentioning it, since she's worried she won't be able to bring them back out if she tries showing them, as she hasn't managed to get any of the people she's met inside out. I expect the hazards and injuries encountered by people lead her to awaken her magic early, perhaps to save someone who's dying.

It has a side benefit in that Usagi's presence helps stabilize The Backrooms, restoring a number of decaying/destroyed Levels and Sub-Levels(a variant of a normal Level, a fusion of two different Levels, etc. intrinsically tied to the main one), and she herself gets a huge amount of time to sleep, study, play videogames on her... Atari 2600, according to wikipedia's article of console history saying that's the sort of thing that would be out in 1992, and the like. She also sometimes goes on snack runs and the like, since she can pop out of the place and back in at will, to the point she's regarded by most of the people inside as a friendly Entity(one of the bizarre native inhabitants) and considering she's sort of Azathoth under the impression of being a normal human, that's not exactly wrong.

Anyway, this causes a few changes at first, such as Usagi being even more desperate to help people than in canon, and with her 'I can't possibly be good enough' aspect a little more obvious, since she's failed to help with this whole Backrooms thing for literally her entire life. The fact that it's a problem more than a million times higher than a human could count to in their lifetime(a little over ten billion, if you were wondering) and she has a Tobi-esque 'just hide in another dimension you can't reach' dodge trick she can use almost as casually, though she doesn't remain visible in the normal world. I imagine that reveal's going to garner some very different reactions in this timeline.

Anyway, things proceed mostly as canon, though Usagi's grades are somewhat better(well, sometimes she forgets a bunch of stuff since from her perspective she studied it over a month longer ago than they'd expect at minimum, so the incident with her mother kicking her out in Episode 1 could still happen) she tends to say she's using a weird trick(which is not incorrect) to study when asked about it. Canon goes wildly off the rails as of the Rainbow Crystal arc, as gaining access to the Silver Crystal makes her advance from 'copying Tobi's trick' to 'can extrude places from The Backrooms and vice versa' to 'can open permanent gates' setting off a new Age of Exploration, among other things. The permanent part comes into play when Chibiusa takes the crystal because her mother is acting like an irresponsible teenager.

Another cross idea I had. Ever heard of Gloomverse? Well, I'm not surprised if you haven't. It's a project of loverofpiggies, better known as CrayonQueen, creator of Error!Sans. It's a world where(with the exception of the Mancers, more on them later) one's magic is tied to a hat and a wand, with a more general rule that it's tied to the soul. Basically, a kid picks out a hat that they feel a connection with(it actually works very similarly to Epithets), and they'll reach inside and find a wand. These are powerful focuses, but since the soul is tied to the magic(so magic tends to be personality-based, such as Seaweed, who has water magic due to her affinity for it) damaging the wand can damage the soul. Overexerting yourself can crack the wand as well.

This is a world where the vast majority of the population has magic to at least some degree, though there seems to be some kind of Warhammer Fantasy polar gates thing going on, as magical power seems to be at least partially a product of geographical location with Stratoverse(where the culture is deliberately engineered to favor development of weather magic) is known to have the strongest magi, with a general downward trend as you get further away.

Inversians have no magic, which is explicitly noted as being weird to everyone else, kind of like Blanks in 40K. They also can't see in color for some reason without eye transplants, to the point an Inversian parent passes down some pretty sensitive eyes to at least the next generation. It should also be noted that while you can mess around with the big three rules(you have to have a hat and wand to use magic, and the latter can only be obtained through your hat. You cannot directly use your magic on someone, not even yourself. You can't go past a set potential, otherwise you'll be Severed, which leaves you little more than a soulless husk. You also can't create sentient beings with magic) you can't actually cheat them. You could set someone on fire by throwing a fireball at them, but you can't set them on fire directly. You can disguise your hat and wand, or have the latter surgically implanted/taped to your arm, but you can't do without. You can overexert yourself, but that will at best make you collapse and temporarily short out your powers by cracking your wand/damaging your hat. The Mancers were a set of 5 exceptions from a thousand years beforehand. All indications point to them being able to ignore these rules, as well as having been killed by one of their own. They seem to be connected to a set of 'Colors' people who turn a color when they get their magic, to the point even their clothes shift after a few seconds, regardless of what color it was before.

Anyway, the main character is a girl without any magic. As she is seventeen(not unheard of, but exceedingly rare past 15 or so) people often give her crap over it. Her parents are especially bad about it, to the point of regularly calling her lazy for failing magic classes despite the obvious issue of sending someone without magic to take magic classes. The story starts by having her get fed up and run off with nothing but the clothes on her back and a cellular(the old antenna type that evolved into the cell phones we're familiar with) before managing to become the assistant to Wallis Gloom, the most famous, popular magician in the entire nation.

Wallis is significantly jerkier than his image/stage performance would suggest, and he pressured her to sign a contract with him before revealing his true colors, so she's kind of stuck. That being said, he's not all that bad a guy, having felt sorry for her since his brother Harold was in a similar 'no magic at 17' situation and was also homeless at story start, hence making her his assistant. He has a thing for helping downtrodden people.

Anyway, Assistant, AKA, Rylie, AKA Royletta Greenwitch Biv(Roy G. Biv, she hates Royletta, hence Rylie) has a terrible home life. Seriously, she fell into a coma for two weeks, and her parents didn't visit her once, just using it to rile up the crowd against the Gloomverse president literally right outside the hospital in question, to the point she could hear them through the closed window.

Society is very, very heavily stratified against people without magic. The vast, vast majority of them are homeless people literally referred to as defective in Gloomverse, and there is a very strong prejudice against Inverse, partially because they haven't contacted anyone in 50 years, but mostly because they don't have magic, which is mutual on Inverse's part regarding mages. I imagine they have some strong support in the Steamverse territories, who have focused on technology over magic, and frankly aren't big fans of magic. Stratoverse, meanwhile, has it so that being without magic, or even magic that isn't strong enough, means that you basically aren't human, as it's considered a sign of the disfavor of their goddess.

My idea is to have the three laws of Magic be a result of Serenity attempting to screw over Beryl and her minions before they died, or perhaps Selene, since she figured she was dying anyway. The first Law is about screwing up the magic of the generals and Beryl herself, since they'd have a problem similar to new She-Ra after she lost her sword and kept trying to become She-Ra on reflex. Basically, they'd suffer from the 'trained wrong, have to fight your muscle memory' issue. The second Law keeps them from just ripping Life Energy out of people directly, forcing them to do it second-hand via various schemes. The third Law is meant to keep them from juicing themselves up with Metallia's power or Life Energy, and possibly to cripple Youma.

Now maybe we modify canon to have all three Laws come into effect, and part of the reason it took so long for Beryl to start Dark Kingdom-ing was because she had to figure out at least partial solutions to each of these problems(and/or just train herself back up), or maybe we have them apply only in part(ie, second works fine because it's applied to other people, not the Dark Kingdom directly) or not at all because of Chaos' juice in Metallia and/or Selene working off the absolute last dregs of her power, which would also explain the Mancers being able to ignore the Laws, which is suggested to be a result of raw power.

Either way, I imagine the girls would have their Gloomverse magics work with their Senshi powers because of Selene, possibly fusing their wands directly with their transformation devices and their hats with all the ribbon(it's implied the cloud hair of the Stratoversians is a modification of their hats, like how their wands are explicitly surgically implanted in their arm) they wear, or maybe Usagi's tiara. Someone using their wand as a weapon would be quite a shock in that universe.

See, since magic is heavily tied to one's interests, I expect something like this: Usagi becomes the Video Game Wizard, Ami becomes the Book Wizard(or possibly the Doctor Wizard to give the team another healer pre-Chibiusa), Rei becomes... hm, Priestess would be sort of redundant, as would fire, maybe Cleric, leaning into the follower of a god angle, with it being Usagi, who basically gives her diet versions of the other Senshi's powers, allowing Rei to be a good Jack of All Trades. Jupiter gets Cooking Magic similar to Charmy from Black Clover, which allows her to make more magic than she puts into it, granting her the ability to serve as a perpetual motion machine for the team, and turn them into such machines themselves. Venus would probably get some kind of Detective magic, both as a riff on the Love Detective from Love is War, and as a general 'finds DK hideouts really fast' sort of deal. Saturn might get some kind of Freedom Magic to counter Mistress 9's control. Uranus and Neptune would probably gain racing and violin magics, respectively. Pluto... probably Time Magic so she can do stuff like Kingdom Hearts Haste, Slow, and Stop spells without killing herself, though something more death oriented isn't out of the question. Using Necromancy for good isn't something we see often in fiction. Naru would probably get a Gem Magic similar to Rin Tohsaka's. Magical batteries would probably sell like crack in this setting.
 
I like the Backrooms idea a lot, though it would heavily depend on how Usagi uses her ability to get back there -- can she go from home to the Backrooms to school if she's late for class? Maybe even taking a friend like Naru if they're both late? -- and who she meets while she's there.

Also, would the other Senshi have access to the Backrooms, who else would Usagi meet back there, and would the Dark Kingdom potentially get access? Because meeting a youma back there could be bad.

EDIT: Also, Berry the cat who gives visions of reality could be a Mau?
 
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I like the Backrooms idea a lot, though it would heavily depend on how Usagi uses her ability to get back there -- can she go from home to the Backrooms to school if she's late for class? Maybe even taking a friend like Naru if they're both late? -- and who she meets while she's there.

Also, would the other Senshi have access to the Backrooms, who else would Usagi meet back there, and would the Dark Kingdom potentially get access? Because meeting a youma back there could be bad.

EDIT: Also, Berry the cat who gives visions of reality could be a Mau?

She learns to take people to and from when she gets her Transformation artifact from Luna. She can use it as a Zoom spell the whole time though.

The hard part about getting access to The Backrooms is that Usagi is basically the only person who can jump in and out without a whole 'Seven Labors' style quest with no guarantees you'll make it, assuming your luck holds, which it probably won't. Once Usagi can jump at will, it's not a problem for a Senshi/Naru to get a chance to look(Ami would probably leap at the chance to look around the Infinite Library), but they'd be reliant on Usagi to leave in a timely manner. A Youma would probably starve to death, since it's not clear if Smilers are alive in any conventional sense, and Partygoers are technically zombies.

Potentially a Mau.
 
Thinking on it, something really crazy would be giving Usagi The Gamer and The Backrooms idea. Even a *10 on time dilation multiplied off The Backrooms would place her at a day outside being 2.46 years inside. Given the internet works in The Backrooms despite the time weirdness, a more modern take could probably watch entire seasons(as in, every anime dropped that season) without much trouble. Not to mention she'd probably work on getting Crafting so she could make Stat Up items when increasing them normally got tedious. Maybe limit the Party System to Senshi or similar, since it requires a certain level of, uh, refinement of the soul to support this latest bout of reality-warping?
 
Thinking on it, something really crazy would be giving Usagi The Gamer and The Backrooms idea. Even a *10 on time dilation multiplied off The Backrooms would place her at a day outside being 2.46 years inside. Given the internet works in The Backrooms despite the time weirdness, a more modern take could probably watch entire seasons(as in, every anime dropped that season) without much trouble. Not to mention she'd probably work on getting Crafting so she could make Stat Up items when increasing them normally got tedious. Maybe limit the Party System to Senshi or similar, since it requires a certain level of, uh, refinement of the soul to support this latest bout of reality-warping?
I've had some ideas for Sailor Moon and the other senshi having Gamer powers -- it would especially be useful as a tutorial mode to teach them how to fight -- but I couldn't find a good system that wouldn't also involve too much math to be fun.

None of the Senshi use many physical skills other than Makoto and maybe Minako, so that'd be half the grinding gone, and figuring out how their magical abilities stack with their personalities would be interesting, given that high-INT-low-CHA Ami has lower offensive magical combat power than low-INT-high-CHA Usagi while Rei has good INT and good CHA.

It would depend on the system you use, though.

I tried building them using the Dresden Files FATE RPG guidebook and that actually works out pretty well, even if we write out Episode 1 Usagi as being the lowest possible Refresh Level.

Usagi Tsukino ________________________ 6 Refresh, 20 Skill Points

High Concept: Sailor Moon, Soldier of Love and Justice!

Trouble: Clumsy Crybaby

Other Aspects:
Sweet & Friendly
Let's Do Something Fun!
Big Eater with a Sweet Tooth
Luna and the Brooch
My Friend Naru

Skill Points (20)
+3 ... Empathy - Rapport - Contacts​
+2 ... Resources - Presence - Conviction​
+1 ... Endurance - Athletics - Alertness - Stealth - Deceit​

Stunts & Powers (6 Refresh)
-1 Duck and Run (Athletics) -- Usagi isn't graceful, but she sprints to school and she's good at hitting the deck when trouble swipes at her head, so she gets +1 to dodge melee attacks (although she's encouraged to narrate it as screaming while she dives out of the way,) and a +1 to sprinting​
-1 Guide My Hand -- Usagi is often in the right place at the right time, so she doesn't need to spend a FP to 'show up' in the nick of time to foil a Dark Kingdom plot, and if she gets a chance to pray (as in "pleasepleasepleaseplease don't let me mess this up!") she can use Conviction instead of a different skill for one roll​
+2 Item of Power: Moon Brooch -- this counts as a +2 because it's supposed to be big or unwieldy or impossible to hide, and Usagi wears it in the open on her blouse all the time while the other Senshi keep their Transformation wands in their pockets or out of sight (not to mention once or twice someone stole or damaged her brooch in the anime IIRC)​
-4 Sponsored Magic: Sailor Moon -- this basically counts as [Channeling: Spirit] and could potentially give her Ritual to interact with spirits and to purify or heal people or places when her Lore is better... I decided to make it Sponsored Magic instead of Channeling despite the Refresh cost because the ability to get Sponsor Debt for non-magical stuff reflects Sailor Moon's other various abilities that don't quite involve casting a spell but are beyond normal human outcomes... 4 Focus Item slots​

6-6+2= Refresh rate 2

Stress:
Physical: OOO​
Mental: OOO​
Social: OOO​

I figure the 'Disguise Field' is just implied in transforming and the Tiara gives her +4 offensive magic control to make up for having no Discipline, so she can attack but doesn't have any good defensive magic to start.

It's an interesting thought exercise that I have fun digging up sometimes, since Sailor Moon is very much a "soft fantasy" series that we never find out many details about the mechanics.

I'd be interested in hearing you build up something with a Gamer Usagi of your own, though combining it with the Backrooms idea seems extraneous unless the Backrooms end up being the true form of the Imaginary Dungeons that Usagi creates with her gamer power, which could be very fun to play with too.
 
Uh, interesting, I had, perhaps, the opposite idea after stopping watching yet another Generic Overpowered Isekai ©™ with RPG-like big number mechanics.

The basic concept was to take an overpowered character from some biggaton franchise (I was thinking future Trunks or someone like that) and putting them in a generic gamer Isekai where they promptly ignore the obvious path to power and instead start insta-learning every little trivial skills, like underwater basket-weaving, melodramatic poetry declamation, or whatever they find funny. The reason? They are so obscenely powerful already that combat-related things are effective useless compared to what they already have.

Originally I haven't considered the Senshi for this, but now that I think about it, if we take them post-Galaxia arc, then they would be perfect for that purpose. From a Gamer perspective, it should give the opportunity to show the synergy of the game system with the mundane world, and also how the people there adapts to the very strange mechanics underlying their advancement. The Senshi could have the joy of learning new things at a Gamer pace, taking and discarding whatever they want, enjoying a "peaceful vacation".

Finally, of course, there should be a typical big bad conspiracy/corrupt oligarchy/evil overlord or overlady, sure, but in the end they would only provide an anticlimactic comedic effect when for example, Minako, decides to test how well that weird Ribbon Dance skill set she learned synergizes with her Venus Love Me Chain.

I tried building them using the Dresden Files FATE RPG guidebook and that actually works out pretty well, even if we write out Episode 1 Usagi as being the lowest possible Refresh Level.

While I agree that Fate is incredibly awesome with soft magic systems, how would you mesh that with big numbers, pseudo-MMORPG style of The Gamer or game-system fantasy worlds? Fate is designed to forget about the numbers, while things like The Gamer or Overlord take joy and pride in showing us how the protagonist numbers are bigger than the rest. Hell, Sword Art Online even has a scene where the protagonist literally goes and said that, if I remember correctly. I'm not sure that it will clash very well with classic tropes of the genre like grilling stats or illusionary dungeon diving...
 
I've also randomly now got a strong hankering for a story where Hotaru is the protagonist who has to get people together to fight the Dark Kingdom.

Like, her dad still does crazy science stuff and her mom is dead, but there's no big accident in the past and no Mistress Nine (yet).

One day Hotaru meets this cat, Artemis, who tells her that she is Sailor Saturn, the Guardian of Silence, with the power to pull out negative energy afflicting people and eradicate the youma that are preying on humanity.

Hotaru is basically a quiet loner who doesn't have a lot of friends, but I could buy that she'd totally try to be a super-spy secret agent even if her skills don't really work that way, sneaking into various buildings to check for Dark Kingdom plots before getting shabby with the Silence Glaive.

(There would also be a Sailor Moon running around with Luna, but Moon is really busy because she can teleport from anywhere that the moon is visible in the sky to anywhere that the moon is visible in the sky, so she's handling all the international DK plots and is run off her feet. I haven't decided what Tuxedo Kamen would do, but he and Sailor Moon might be a duo who play Big Sibling Mentor to Hotaru in their spare time.)

Hotaru slowing meeting people and making friends as she fights the youma just seems sort of adorable to me right now.

I can't decide whether I'd age her up to equal the other Inner Senshi or whether I'd keep her younger but make her competent and experienced enough that the others defer to her anyway, so there's a number of different places I could take the story.

I just love the idea of Sailor Saturn being a total Cold Ham who is secretly super-excited to get to play at being a stone cold secret agent going on missions to prevent monsters from preying on innocent people. So definitely leaning toward a comedy/action story despite moments of seriousness and drama.

While I agree that Fate is incredibly awesome with soft magic systems, how would you mesh that with big numbers, pseudo-MMORPG style of The Gamer or game-system fantasy worlds? Fate is designed to forget about the numbers, while things like The Gamer or Overlord take joy and pride in showing us how the protagonist numbers are bigger than the rest. Hell, Sword Art Online even has a scene where the protagonist literally goes and said that, if I remember correctly. I'm not sure that it will clash very well with classic tropes of the genre like grilling stats or illusionary dungeon diving...
I didn't really do the FATE character re-write with intent to write a Gamer-style story, I just did it because it was a fun little thought exercise that actually tracked pretty well; if you go by the 90s anime episodes, it's pretty easy to track Usagi going from 6|20 to 7|25 over the course of her fights with Jadieite, though after that things get messier.

It's more an exercise of "the Senshi are Magic Knights protecting humanity" as opposed to the more canon view of "the Senshi are benevolent eldritch abominations fueled by love & justice instead of terror & madness".
 
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I've had some ideas for Sailor Moon and the other senshi having Gamer powers -- it would especially be useful as a tutorial mode to teach them how to fight -- but I couldn't find a good system that wouldn't also involve too much math to be fun.

None of the Senshi use many physical skills other than Makoto and maybe Minako, so that'd be half the grinding gone, and figuring out how their magical abilities stack with their personalities would be interesting, given that high-INT-low-CHA Ami has lower offensive magical combat power than low-INT-high-CHA Usagi while Rei has good INT and good CHA.

It would depend on the system you use, though.

I tried building them using the Dresden Files FATE RPG guidebook and that actually works out pretty well, even if we write out Episode 1 Usagi as being the lowest possible Refresh Level.

Usagi Tsukino ________________________ 6 Refresh, 20 Skill Points

High Concept: Sailor Moon, Soldier of Love and Justice!

Trouble: Clumsy Crybaby

Other Aspects:
Sweet & Friendly
Let's Do Something Fun!
Big Eater with a Sweet Tooth
Luna and the Brooch
My Friend Naru

Skill Points (20)
+3 ... Empathy - Rapport - Contacts
+2 ... Resources - Presence - Conviction
+1 ... Endurance - Athletics - Alertness - Stealth - Deceit​

Stunts & Powers (6 Refresh)
-1 Duck and Run (Athletics) -- Usagi isn't graceful, but she sprints to school and she's good at hitting the deck when trouble swipes at her head, so she gets +1 to dodge melee attacks (although she's encouraged to narrate it as screaming while she dives out of the way,) and a +1 to sprinting

-1 Guide My Hand -- Usagi is often in the right place at the right time, so she doesn't need to spend a FP to 'show up' in the nick of time to foil a Dark Kingdom plot, and if she gets a chance to pray (as in "pleasepleasepleaseplease don't let me mess this up!") she can use Conviction instead of a different skill for one roll

+2 Item of Power: Moon Brooch -- this counts as a +2 because it's supposed to be big or unwieldy or impossible to hide, and Usagi wears it in the open on her blouse all the time while the other Senshi keep their Transformation wands in their pockets or out of sight (not to mention once or twice someone stole or damaged her brooch in the anime IIRC)

-4 Sponsored Magic: Sailor Moon -- this basically counts as [Channeling: Spirit] and could potentially give her Ritual to interact with spirits and to purify or heal people or places when her Lore is better... I decided to make it Sponsored Magic instead of Channeling despite the Refresh cost because the ability to get Sponsor Debt for non-magical stuff reflects Sailor Moon's other various abilities that don't quite involve casting a spell but are beyond normal human outcomes... 4 Focus Item slots​

6-6+2= Refresh rate 2

Stress:
Physical: OOO
Mental: OOO
Social: OOO​

I figure the 'Disguise Field' is just implied in transforming and the Tiara gives her +4 offensive magic control to make up for having no Discipline, so she can attack but doesn't have any good defensive magic to start.

It's an interesting thought exercise that I have fun digging up sometimes, since Sailor Moon is very much a "soft fantasy" series that we never find out many details about the mechanics.

I'd be interested in hearing you build up something with a Gamer Usagi of your own, though combining it with the Backrooms idea seems extraneous unless the Backrooms end up being the true form of the Imaginary Dungeons that Usagi creates with her gamer power, which could be very fun to play with too.

The Imaginary Dungeons being tied to The Backrooms, which are very technically Serenity's Dying Dream in this cross, makes sense. They're both leaning on Usagi being semi-Azathoth. The Backrooms are connected to her previous life, and Gamer is the lens through which her reality-warping works in this current one. Serenity had a pretty idyllic life right up until Beryl went full Yandere, by all indications, so it's possible that lingering influence from Serenity caused the change. I mean, it's not like Usagi pulled a Nanoha and punched a bully on like her first day of school, though I could see Makoto doing that.

It would be less that she had Gamer straight-up, and more leaning more into Usagi's eldritch nature as the soul of the universe.
 
So, I came across a Magic System in a CYOA (linked to provide context for the Basic Handouts and Magic Systems) that boils down to 'become a Dragonball-style genie' and given what the Silver Crystal can do, I was wondering if a fic about Usagi having it could work? Let me quote it.

"Wishcraft - The djinn's craft, making of wishes into reality; simple to learn, it requires only the comprehension of what you want, and the wisdom to wish for the right things. If reality defies your desires, then reach out and grasp them.

Once a month, you may cast a Minor Wish. Although such a Wish is highly limited in both scope and power, it's nonetheless capable of resolving issues of moderate relevance to a supernatural being: restoring a destroyed organ perfectly, creating or summoning a mundane humanoid servant, or slaying a human enemy in visual range. Alternatively, a Minor Wish can grant one of your Basic Handouts to any sapient being of your choice.

Once a year, you may cast a Least Wish. A Wish of this level is defined as anything you could accomplish given a year's worth of effort, knowing what you know now, and given your present capabilities. As an example, you could discredit or heavily damage a troublesome organization, slay a city's population, or make yourself popular.

Once, upon learning this Magic System, you may cast a Lesser Wish. A Wish of this level is defined as anything within reason, though it may not excessively surpass your current power level or that of the reality in which you currently reside. It may be used to gain an additional superpower, but nothing close to the Magic Systems below.

All Wishes can be accumulated and stockpiled as needed. Large masses of Wishing power can be utilized to realize effects beyond the scope of the expected level."

If we assume she got it at birth but didn't realize she could use it until her first outing as Sailor Moon, that's 14 Least Wishes, and 168 Minor Wishes. Based on the Least Wish, Minor Wishes seem to roughly correlate to what you could accomplish with a month's worth of effort(with some leeway gained or lost based on the specific action) though it seems to have an easier time creating or adding new things than replacing or destroying things, which seems thematically fitting for Usagi.

Here's a question, how far along in her story would Usagi have to be to, say, make the planet Vulcan real, and make Naru it's Senshi based on these qualifiers? It neatly resolves her tendency to get kidnapped and Usagi not being able to tell her closest friend about Sailor Moon. Before you ask, spending Wishes on research/training breakthroughs is viable. So in theory Usagi could, say, Minor Wish up extra Linker Cores like Fairy Tale's Second Origin powerup, given how those are basically magic-processing organs, or she could Lesser Wish up speedrunning Ami learning magical theory from the Mercury Computer.
 
Here's a question, how far along in her story would Usagi have to be to, say, make the planet Vulcan real, and make Naru it's Senshi based on these qualifiers? It neatly resolves her tendency to get kidnapped and Usagi not being able to tell her closest friend about Sailor Moon. Before you ask, spending Wishes on research/training breakthroughs is viable. So in theory Usagi could, say, Minor Wish up extra Linker Cores like Fairy Tale's Second Origin powerup, given how those are basically magic-processing organs, or she could Lesser Wish up speedrunning Ami learning magical theory from the Mercury Computer.
Making a new planet would plausibly take centuries of stored wishes.

Making a senshi for Ganymede, which is larger than Pluto or Mercury and thus would count as a planet if it had its own orbit, would probably be a lot simpler than working out the cost of trying to construct a planet and then link someone in.

The first wish or two would presumably involve information on whether it was possible, or helping Ami speed run what's necessary to figure it out.
 
Here's a question, how far along in her story would Usagi have to be to, say, make the planet Vulcan real, and make Naru it's Senshi based on these qualifiers? It neatly resolves her tendency to get kidnapped and Usagi not being able to tell her closest friend about Sailor Moon. Before you ask, spending Wishes on research/training breakthroughs is viable. So in theory Usagi could, say, Minor Wish up extra Linker Cores like Fairy Tale's Second Origin powerup, given how those are basically magic-processing organs, or she could Lesser Wish up speedrunning Ami learning magical theory from the Mercury Computer.

Usagi does not think on this level, especially Season 1 Usagi. She'd easily burn through a dozen Minor Wishes before Luna or Ami could rein her in, and probably another six after that because "they were important ".

And Ami wouldn't stand for anything that speeds up the learning process. She's one of those "nothing worth having is easy" types and is all about hard work and diligence. Usagi's role in Ami's life is to get her to relax and live a little, but it takes a while for that to sink in, so Season 1 Ami isn't having it.
 
Heard a cool idea from someone on Spacebattles, thought I'd share it here too.

Chojomeka said:
Instead of being reincarnated to regular Earth the Senshi/Endymion/Shintennou as well Beryl and her Youma are sent to Naruto's Earth. Usagi's gonna have to figure out how to deal with those Otsutsuki squatting on her old home. :p
Heck, Kaguya Otsutsuki could have originated as a cousin of the Moon Royal family who survived the dark Kingdom attack but ended up traumatized and a little crazy, or she could be the Nehelenia figure.

Reincarnation is even canon to Naruto in a sense, so that fits too.

Where do you think the senshi would end up reincarnating, and would it be Naruto-era Shinobi world, one of the earlier Great Ninja wars, Boruto-era, or what?

I'm currently leaning toward making Usagi a Shion-style figure so she can go around a few different nations and Hidden Villages and gather up the other Senshi, or maybe making her village get wiped out in a bunch of fighting, IDK.
 
Heck, Kaguya Otsutsuki could have originated as a cousin of the Moon Royal family who survived the dark Kingdom attack but ended up traumatized and a little crazy, or she could be the Nehelenia figure.

I'm not well verse in Naruto lore, and in the end you just can slap an AU tag and be done with it, it's not like is super important, but...

Isn't the moon some kind of construct created by a technique as a prison for Kaguya in Naruto? If so, that could imply that something happened to the Silver Millennium moon, right? Who knows, maybe it god hidden, or sealed with Metallia.
 
Has anyone actually done a 'Magical Girls' AVENGERS fusion?

(There is a Justice League one, amusingly.)
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As a general rule, there's better things to get for your birthday than a life of danger that seems like it should have arrived a lot later on. But when you live in the same dimension as roving kree warlords, omnicidal planet-brains, mad titans and whatever twisted abominations that humanity's...
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