In The Name Of The Moon: Sailor Moon Ideas, Recs and Fic Discussion thread

More Victoria as Sailor Mercury, but yeah.
Given that IIRC Victoria is canonically taking college-level classes in several subjects, it's legit. Granted, there's an argument that Lisa would better fit Mercury while Vicky would better fit Venus...

But if Venus comes with Artemis attached, then Tats is better off as Sailor Venus, and Vicky getting to be more analytical as Mercury is cool too.

Behind Sailor Luna, the clerk was scrambling out the back door, clutching his side. She didn't turn to watch him go, and stayed staring at me. Her lips had drawn back, showing that her entire mouth was full of sharp, animal-like fangs. How could she even talk? And her hair seemed to be growing, blonde strands appearing around her neck like a collar.
Though Rachel as Sailor Luna/Moon is interesting. Or is she Luna reincarnated as a senshi instead? (Also, does this put Vista as Mars? I'd say she fits the parent issues, but Taylor is the one with a dead mom and a dad she doesn't talk to.)

...Who would be the Endymion figure in this set anyway?
 
(Also, does this put Vista as Mars? I'd say she fits the parent issues, but Taylor is the one with a dead mom and a dad she doesn't talk to.)
Actually, I was going for Missy as Sailor Saturn, based off of the age thing. Never got around to figuring out Mars or any of the other Senshi. Including if Luna existed or if she was a dog to go with Rachel instead of a cat.
 
Never got around to figuring out Mars or any of the other Senshi. Including if Luna existed or if she was a dog to go with Rachel instead of a cat.
If you decide to make this a larger story, you could probably do something interesting with it, or even just a series of snippets.

I've got a Sailor Moon crossover with Harry Potter that works along slightly similar lines -- the senshi are reincarnated into Wizarding Britain, grow up and attend Hogwarts -- though yours jumps into the action faster than I did. Still, the mechanics of fitting the worlds together isn't that different.

Possibly Metallia was another Entity that visited Earth long ago but lost and/or got killed? Or something, there are a bunch of possibilities, but you'd have to rebuild the universe to fit both ideas together. It's definitely interesting so I'd love to bounce ideas around with you if you wanted to.

Main things to consider:

1) Power levels of the senshi compared to other parahumans

2) Are Metallia and the entities interrelated, and how?

3) How do each of the senshi wake up to their powers and get situated.


But you've got a very promising rough draft so I hope you decide to do more with this.
 
Actually, I was going for Missy as Sailor Saturn
Missy has got nothing in common with either Saturn or Hotaru, other than age. But Taylor actually fills those shoes quite nicely. She's got a dead mother, a distant father, bullied at school, been called 'freak', has low self-worth, and most importantly, is willing to sacrifice whatever it takes including but not limited to her life in order to kill whatever is threatening to kill everything.
Victoria could be Mercury, yes. But she could also be Mars.
However, if Vicky is a Senshi, will Amelia even Trigger and get stuck being a healer?
 
Given that IIRC Victoria is canonically taking college-level classes in several subjects, it's legit.
AIUI, she was taking AP classes, which are regular high school classes that can count as credits on your college transcript; any student with asperations towards post-secondary education is expected to try to take these courses if available, at least in the subjects relevant to their intended field. This indicates she's smart, yes, but it's not 'taking college classes before finishing high school' genius as is often implied.

(Note: AP classes are Not A Thing here in Ontario, so someone please correct me if my understanding of how they work is wrong.)
 
AIUI, she was taking AP classes, which are regular high school classes that can count as credits on your college transcript; any student with asperations towards post-secondary education is expected to try to take these courses if available, at least in the subjects relevant to their intended field. This indicates she's smart, yes, but it's not 'taking college classes before finishing high school' genius as is often implied.

(Note: AP classes are Not A Thing here in Ontario, so someone please correct me if my understanding of how they work is wrong.)
While APs are a thing, a fair amount of schools also partner with nearby community colleges to offer low level actual college courses to high school students.

Alas I do not recall hardly anything of canon.
 
Stolen from @TenMoreMiles recent post in the Screencaps from Last Night thread:

Now I have the image of a Marvel crossover where Japanese and American superheroes have a sports competition to celebrate the anniversary of the end of WWII.

Sailor Moon naturally faces off against Captain America for a frisbee game, and it gets intense.

You know how plenty of Isekai MCs and SI characters just have their memories of their first lives from a very young age (or until they hit their head on something)? I want that. For Usagi.

Like, Princess Serenity dies, but Queen Serenity sends everyone's souls on to be reborn, only because Princess Serenity isn't a Senshi prior to her death like the others (or for whatever reason) she gets a bunch of her memories back either from birth or from a young age.

And Usagi loves her new life. Like, totally adores it. She's got two parents who love her, when she's 3-4 she gets an adorable baby brother, her parents have time for her* now without politics messing things up, there's no need for royal decorum when they can snuggle on the couch with hot chocolate for a movie night, she doesn't get etiquette lessons in her spare hours so she can just play half the day, and since she's got her memories of her first childhood school is not too tough provided she remembers to write things in Japanese instead of Moon Language.

Giving tummy raspberries to Shingo, making friends with smol-Naru at school, poking her nose everywhere now that she doesn't have guards to escape...

There's plenty of room for drama if I want to have her stick her nose in somewhere dangerous now that she doesn't have guards or maybe she's sad at people sick and dying because medicine isn't as advanced as magical healing...

But I think I'd mostly keep it light and humorous, so maybe that's also an opportunity for Usagi to experiment with magic in her new life.

Then she turns 14, she meets Luna, and she immediately clams up hard about her memories and rolls with the "you must be Sailor Moon" thing because Usagi doesn't want people to "your majesty" her now that's she's a commoner and loving it.

Like, she'd probably fixate on Tuxedo Kamen because "What is Endymion wearing and why doesn't he recognize me?" and she'd totally poke at the reincarnated senshi's memories if they have them or try to fly under the radar...

And she'd fight the Dark Kingdom, of course. She won't let them take away her new life and family like they did the first time.

But Usagi being the reincarnated person she actually is sounds like it could be a riot, right?
If I do more with this idea, I think I'd have Usagi have to deal with Ali & En arriving before the Dark Kingdom gets active and Luna shows up to empower people. Usagi needing to befriend the poor lost & misinformed aliens who just want to save their planet tree (and will do anything to save it) has a good vibe with me.

...

Also, I think I haven't officially announced that I'm writing Serenity Malfoy and the Hogwarts Education over on Space Batlles (and on AO3 but I can't link there IIRC).

As the title implies, the Inner Senshi get reincarnated into Wizarding Britain and Serenity is Draco's older sister. Fortunately, Serenity Malfoy has almost no accidental magic as a kid, so her parents think she's a squib, meaning she doesn't get most of the blood supremacy lessons Draco got.

Then Serenity gets her Hogwarts Acceptance Letter anyway, so the Malfoy parents have to send her off and hope she doesn't embarrass them too badly.

It also features Rei Black, Mina Lovegood, and Lita Dursley in addition to muggleborn Amy Anderson and Darien Shields. Come take a look! (We're up to 22 chapters and 80k words so it'll be a pretty good read, I hope.)
 
Your favorite Ranma ½ idea or Sailor moon prompt


Under the Ice

I drew my parka closer to me and shivered as I climbed the stairs up to the surface. Almost nobody came up here these days, and the heating systems had been shut down and stripped for parts lower down in the bunker. And it was even colder for me, since I spent my time in the most heated portions of the bunker, in the rec rooms and common areas.

But if I was ever going to get a chance to talk, just one-on-one, I had to do it now, while she was by herself. And I could hear her, up a flight of stairs. I swallowed as I stared up the dark shaft. I didn't thin that I had ever gone this far up the top reaches of the bunker. Especially not by myself. Okay, I was a wimp, I was comfortable admitting that! But now there was something worth more than proving myself to a bunch of lunkheads.

"Hai. Hai," she said, in a very sweet voice that made me swallow and straighten my shoulders. Then some more words in another language that went by too quickly for me to tell apart from one another.

Then there was a long pause and I forced myself up the stairwell, the treads shaking underneath my feet as I climbed. I blinked as I emerged into a dark chamber. There was a lighted screen close by and in that light, I could see the blue hair and face of Sailor Mercury.

I had my hands in my parka pockets, with gloves on and my fingers were cold. She was wearing a skirt that stopped halfway down her thighs and her arms were bare and she seemed entirely comfortable, her bare skin pressed against the metal of the bench she was sitting on.

"Hello," she said, looking up at me and giving me a sweet smile. "It's… Esteban, isn't it? The dancer? What brings you here?"

"You, ma'am," I said, standing in front of her and feeling my hands nervously opening and closing. "I, um, I wanted to thank you for helping with the bunker's reactor. We're all really grateful for you giving us the parts we needed."

"Of course," she said, nodding, a sad smile crossing her face. "There's so few sparks of light and life left, my friends and I," she tapped the screen she was holding as she put it to the side, "would do everything and anything to help keep them burning."

"Thank you, again," I said, trying to think of a way to get at why I was really here. "And, um, I'm sorry if you're busy, but if you have the time," she nodded, "I was wondering…" I took a deep breath. I had ran the words through my head time after time, trying to think of the best way to put it and now that it was time, it was all coming out as a jumble. "My great-gran, she said that when she was my age, her great-grandmother told her stories about living," I waved a hand at the ceiling, taking in the meters of concrete, frozen earth and snow between us and the surface, "up there. Could you tell me about what it was like? You were there, right?"

"Yes, I was," Sailor Mercury said with a sigh, waving a hand at a spot next to her. I sat down on the bare metal bench and pulled out a pen and paper that I had spent a month's savings on. "Most of my life, actually. It was… very different. Far more people, far more warmth, far more space." She looked down at the staircase, that led to people and light and the entire world I had ever known. "One thing that I remember…"
 
Hello, i just joined the forums here in order to get some feedback on a kamen rider x Sailor moon story(probably more if i can find the time to rewatch things.) Idea i had over at spacebattles and was hoping for some advice on the sailor moon bits with what i have written out thus far.

Notably i tried copying it all over here but it was around...7k words of text. So im not exactly sure how i should put the info here in the first place in general so it isnt a cluttered mess(i still have no ideas on putting lines between paragraphs/QUOTEs on order to make it readable and not blow up your eyes just glancing at it). Could i get some help for this please and thank you?


As Always;

Sorry for the trouble.
 
Could i get some help for this please and thank you?
If it is a chapter you are writing, you should create a thread for it in Creative Writing. If it's drafts and/or ideas for a story that you aren't sure how to string together, here should be fine, I think. Also, the input box can handle 7k words quite easily, so you don't have to worry about it. Copy and paste should work just fine.
Edit: As for putting lines between paragraphs, you need to click on the 'Insert' button first that's above the input box.
 
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If it is a chapter you are writing, you should create a thread for it in Creative Writing. If it's drafts and/or ideas for a story that you aren't sure how to string together, here should be fine, I think. Also, the input box can handle 7k words quite easily, so you don't have to worry about it. Copy and paste should work just fine.
Edit: As for putting lines between paragraphs, you need to click on the 'Insert' button first that's above the input box.
Thank you for that.

Guess ill grab what i have and post it here.

So...hi, as my name is here i assume people can do a quick search and find several of my old stories of ff.net before some....incidents occured in Real life made me stop posting fanfics for a long time(7-8 years).



So as im trying to get back into the way of things for a big verse im roughing out the creation of(writing on notebooks for 10 years of fanfic details make it very hard to decipher when there was water damage to notes.); my "comeback" story im making to get me back into the swing of things has to be suitably basic for me to follow a path for (as i have the unfortunate habit of planning stories fully but have a real distracted by shiny syndrome). I have decided to fall back onto the oldest thing i can remember seeing as a young child with what remains of my courage/enthusiasm/optimism.



As such i am going to do a Sailor Moon crossover story. But as the previous posts i quoted here bring up some points i decided to incorporate the advice into what i usually do.



For starters. When i make an o.c. i try to keep them different from myself to a point; while also incorporating a single facet of myself into them so i can keep related to the character to a degree. In this o.c. im writing now, its my first go at using a negative facet of myself.



Now as i usually have been brainstorming fanfic ideas for stress relief and therapy alongside the usual (books, anime, and games). it should be an interesting ride as im hoping to "purge" this facet by the end of the story when its finished. ive got roughly 3 seasons thought of out of the 4-5 in total? Maybe more if including some other things. But all in all its going to take abit to clear.



Now by purge i mean give a nice conclusion to this facet of myself. As a result, this story will probably deviate from canon Sailor Moon as a result of shenanigans and such. Also my first attempt at not fully following a script i.e. the way the source matierial goes. So this should be an experience. Another thing to be known is that the rider series in question is Showa in nature, but still abit different as im a fan of Amazons.



Its Black Sun.



Albeit not the Black sun as shown recently. Im going into spoiler territory here for my rider and there background but here goes.



The rider, the eponymous Black sun is a Female by the alias of Nobuhiko Minami. In the world she came from, that being an A.R. world of Showa, She was grabbed by Gorgom long before present day to be used as an executor for their deeds. Due to her being born during an eclipse she is also a century king canidate as backup incase there werent enough, or any for the next battle. Plus being essentially mind controlled/programmed into subservience to the heads of the cult means that if she wins they have a god under their thumbs. So shes a weapon through and through.



By about...lets say 1960's things have changed in this A.R. world as Gorgom has essentially subsumed its version of Shocker and successors. Though their is alot of infighting, esentially things are happening just like Black sun. The difference here is that during the Century king procedure, the young 4 year old Kotaro Minami's siblings dies during the procedure(the Nobuhiko and his adopted sister), thus they use their backup for the battle. Somehow someway, something of humanity occured in Nobuhiko as she ends up breaking out herself and Kotaro who in his young age and traumatized ends up calling her his sister.



Her a biological weapon hundreds of times older than him, he a young boy put in an adult cyborg body(i.e. like a mix of ZX with his 99 percent cyborg body and shin with biomechanics). They both begin a long and ardous campaign fighting Golgam and Its subservients as its worlds first riders. Due to their conflict, they soon begin a resistance group with those they help along the way.



50 years of conflict later and the world hasnt changed one bit, infact it seems worse than before. As despite fighting to free themselves from control of Gorgom and Shocker. The humans began becoming afraid of kaijjns. The hate shown was managed under their fear of reprisal, but that all changed during the crisis empire and Fog incident of the 90's. The brawl between all of them and the riders made it so all of these organizations were totalled. But instead of gratefulness, "humankind" began their killing of Kaijin too weakened from the previous fights. A witch hunt of those they couldn't control.



It also didn't help with kamen Rider Shadow Moon's passing in this conflict. Him being the hope bringer of the unified Kaijin-human front. But it truly couldn't be blamed solely upon their death. As this worlds humans hated what they couldn't control. Soon enough by the turn of the new millenium, a bloody decade of fights between humanity and kaijin resulted in humanity's win. Now with them back in control, despair reigned upon the Kaijins.



By 2020, despite fleeting resistance by the Kaijins under Black sun. This world of failure seemed on its way to ruin. Its only by chance that Black sun had her way into another dimension hopefully free from the darkness clinging to there world. With dead eyes, they and the resistance began to take what they could in their escape from ruin.



Their luck seems to keep being down as they ended up in a world with female warriors in sailor Fuku's. Who really don't like Kaijin. Just another day.









So yeah. This is the background im using for the o.c. and her allies upon arriving in SM world. I'll post more later after i rest my head, im feeling woozy. If interested in more details i can probably scrounge out what ive got so far upon there encounter with the Sailor Senshi. Or on Black Sun as a whole as She doesn't really look like the one from the show, but is based on it.

Now as previously mentioned, i will explain abit more on the backstory. Specifically some details toward the end that may have confused anyone reading it. For starters, how did Kamen rider Shadow Moon/Kotaro Minami become the hopebringer? How did Shadow Moon die? Why is the crisis empire and the fog such a big deal? Why was the bloody decade so notable? And how did all of the organizations on earth fell to be replaced by the now free humanity?



Well we have to go a bit backward in time to really understand these points clearly. See, originally i was going to put the creation king as abit of more an neutral character, but seeing the adorable scene in Black Sun of the Creation King headpatting a young Kotaro and Nobuhiko made me change some things about. So now abit of an explanation. The creation king....is a good person.



Now thats an eye catcher. But notably the cult of Gorgom had changed during the time of the last Creation king chosing. Originally the creation Myth of the Religion was made to follow a sort of heigherarchy. As the century kings would be the second highest ranked figures in the mythos. With the creation king as the "god" of the religion, these Century kings would be considered demigods that rise from each eclipse to handle the religion. Black sun's purpose was to fight the enemies of the religion so they could go to sleep at night, while Shadow Moon's purpose was to be the invigorating person that the followers could rally from. The being that makes it so they could enjoy their life the next day.



With the high priests below them handling other matters, the religion as a whole seems relitively innocent. It was notable as up to this point, that the kaijin created/born from the cult didn't have heat heaven and thus lived around 1.5 times shorter than normal humans. The issue came 50,000 years ago; As the mother of Fog arrived upon earth. The catastrophic conflict between this destroyer and Gorgom basically annihalated the cult.



As their last measure, the Shadow Moon of that time scavenged their deceased Counterparts kingstone to become the new Century king, or simply their god. With their new power in a heavily damaged body they quickly defeated the fog mother, though they were too injured to end the threat they instead sealed the being away. Falling into a coma from their injuries, the new creation king had no idea how things would change of the former religion.



The surving member of the cult quickly radicalized from the conflict they were apart of. The reasons vary but for the most part the general consensus was that the surviving people were of the rather ambitious sort. They soon were designing more and more ferocious modifications to humans and begun the creation of Heat Heaven. The now condecending and supremicist cult viewed humans as just fodder to themselves. And Heaven was the physical representation of this belief.



As long as Heaven existed, humanity viewed kaijin as their predators and coexistence was impossible. The noted change to this paradigm occured during Nobuhiko and Kotaro's conflict with Golgom. As pure chance during the long battle, Shadow moon was a prodigy of various technologies/sciences/biochemistry managed to create the Drug called Eden. It's a revolutionary item that changed the setup altogether. By causing the Kaijins body into processing Creation king cells in its body with its own nutrients. It self regulates the process so they could live an average humans lifespan.



This catapulted the reputation of the resistance practically overnight in the humans eyes. Though many of gorgom were furious of the item of ruining their philosophy. Younger kaijin were glad for the item, as they could live their lives with the humans they befriended. Shodow moon became the hero that could rally the new alliance between man and kaijin.



This would end during crisis empires arrival. The crisis empire was formed of surviving species devastated by the fleet of fog. Upon learning of its location by the rapidly declining seal the creation king made alongsidd their own life, the crisis began their revenge upon it. If they destroyed the planet biology before the fog returned to power, it would starve and die, saving innumerable civilizations across the stars.



This naturally was a problem for the people of earth and especially gorgom. So now everyone was fighting for their own purposes in a free for all. Gorgom and its allies fighting to regain control of their world. Crisis in destroying the planet. The fog mother trying to recover to being her devouring of the cosmos. And finally the resistance with help from the creation king.



The conflict was bloody and merciless. People fell by the millions per hour of that terrible month. By the end of the month, over 1 billion people were dead and everyone was exhausted in resources. The final assault occured thenafter. With the power of the earth spirits, the creation king finished the fog mother in a mutual blow, subsequently dying from their wounds as the remains of crisis attacked the weary god. The broken remains of gorgom and crisis were attacked by the century kings. And with a final battle the war was nearly over.



Though thats when the leaders of gorgom attempted to replace the souls of the kings for their new godhood. By the time the unsuspecting Kotaro had arrived to join his sister, he was not prepared for her to end up fighting and ultimately killing him. It seemed that with the creation kings existance, they couldn't get full control of the new kings. But with his passing they now could.



It was rather unfortunate for them, as upon their newly contolled bodies acquisition of both kingstones that Nobuhiko regained her faculties......and subsequently butchered everyone alive in the building. Gorgom and Crisis. Man and Women. Child and elderly. Just a bloody moon and screams of an animal echoed thru that night. By the next day the war was officially over. Though the pain still remained.



Much like with gorgom of the past. The survivors of the humans were ambituous and quickly began a massive power struggle that resulted in the massive anti-kaijin forces. It could be said that as a result of the resisitances fights it ended up the way it did. A now broken Nobuhiko tried to be her brother and bring peace, but that was impossible for the jaded warrior. As an aside, since that day she only transforms into a kaijin mode.







Well. That was alot of info to unpack. If i can get some critism on my lore ive done so far, that would be wonderful. I've based this crappy world on the world of Shadow mirror from SRWOG to be honest. Just with kaijin instead of robots. Now if i could get some ideas on some subplots for the resistance to work on for their time in the world of Sailor Moon that would be grand. Ive got some things i thought of but they are just barely there in my head.



To note. At some point in the story there will be a return to this hellhole for some things that the resistance could use. I would like to bring soem of the senshi along so they could get an idea of what they have been dealing with but im still up in the air as to whom i should include.

Anywho, the rough draft of my story here on its starting point that i could use some advice on.



Its roughly like this.



Pre-season 1(i.e. sailor v) prequel involving venus and Shadow moon, who is revealed to have journeyed here during one of Gorgom/Shadows experimental dimension tech(ironically enough its very similar to the tech dai-shocker used to create and travel the A.R. worlds.). The meeting and adventure between the two would help Shadow moon eventually become the Hopebringer he was in his homeworld.



Season 1(i.e. the start of Sailor moon.): ends up mostly the same as canon. Only difference is if it's picked as the starting point that it would include a fight between Black sun in kaijin form against phantoms of her kills at the end of the crisis/fog incident. Also some friendly talking between Nobu and Venus about what Kotaro was up to with her as some things were rather suspicious when uncovered between the two.



Season 2A. So if included with season one of draft, it would have Nobuhiko becoming a vigilante as kaijin attacks and kidnappings are increasing. Eventually it would have the inner senshi return to duty and this would become one of the big branching points of the original canon. Due to an kidnapping incident, Usagi's family is captured and she ends up turning into a kaijin herself.



This affects things drastically as Chibi moon during her evil phase ends up turning into a hybrid Black rose-vorpal rabbit kaijin. The attacks end up causing conflict between Moon and Black sun over how to handle the situation(Moon wants her daughter back to normal while Nobu realizes that the longer she's around fighting, more people will be getting injured/killed.) It eventually culminates in a city fight as moon was saving civis while Nobu drew to a draw with chibi due to wounds. Nobu is later ambushed by citizens while weakened from the poison from chibi and brutally beaten up/nearly dead.



The result of this is Amy having to get her moms help to save Nobuhiko's life(as well as coming clean to her about her being mercury). The severe damage ends up putting Nobuhiko in a medical coma with declining vitals. Despite the best efforts of Amy's mom and the Kaijin that were with black sun(heat heaven is only reducing the declining vitals. And surgery is impossible with their skin.) Things look grim. Until Minako/Venus finally figures out the suspicious bit involving Kotaro in both their and his world. As he found his original twin siblings cyborg body and a super regenerator called hell he created away from gorgom for fear of increased violence between the two groups.



After splitting both items in two, the senshi-kaijin groups realize that they have to head to the world of Showa to get the remaining bits to save Nobuhiko. This causes the senshi to split up into two groups(Moon, Venus, and Amy for the Away team with Mask, Jupiter, and Mars staying behind to handle enemy kaijin attacks.), to handle the increasingly hazardous city. The away team get to see the horrible things occuring in the world of showa, and are eventually attacked by both humans and kaijins under the control of the world government.



At one point they were in trouble till a certain passing thru rider ends up helping them along the way. Upon the way to their destination, the senshi get an explanation about the current events, kaijin, a.r. worlds, and even riders. The shock of all of this is quickly eclipsed as Tsukasa tells them that he only helped the warriors due to him looking for the riders of this world. As without them, this world is rotting to the point it would have to be destroyed to save the other worlds It is effecting. This causes them to come to odds with their savior and after an interuption by enemies, allow them to flee the destroyer of worlds.



Meanwhile back in the senshi's world, nobuhiko had to be resuscitated due to her heart stopping several times. Aswell as another attack by the black Lady, the remaining guardians put up what fight they can before they get swarmed by other foes from the black moon circus. They soon receive backup from the kaijin resistance as they return to the fight with a vengeance. The fights furiousness only hightens as Mamoru/Tuxedo mask is captured by Black lady and taken back to the future.



Back in the world of Showa, the team arrives at the abandoned and dilapidated resistance main base. Sneaking in as its still watched by guards, the team finds the burial site of Kotaro and the Satan saber used as his gravestone. Venus takes her time to pay her respects as both Usagi and Amy find what they are looking for in the area. After some time both Moon and Mercury turn up emptyhanded to both of their irritation as Moon begins to break down from the stress at the situation they were in.



Venus however notices an false wall and enters, finding Kotaro's work area with the items they were looking for, as well as this worlds version of Rideron and Battle hopper. The groups relief at the stroke of good luck is quickly dashed as they are found by the guards and Decade. Thus they escape on said vehicles while chased by military forces. Before they can fully escape their hunters, they are stopped by kaijin crashing into them.



Soon enough the group is surrounded by both military and kaijin forces and soon a fight occurs again. During the fight Usagi's transformation item is damaged so she ends up having to fight in her near berserk kaijin form, disgusting the military about her forms and her position of defiance. To this Mercury starts to rant about their actions upon the people of this world as they kill their enslaved kaijins in their attacks against the group. Venus upon finally realizing how Kotaro thought then states that it doesn't matter that usagi is a kaijin as she and them are commrades thru and thru; Even if the world hates her for it, she'll defend both kaijin and human like Shadow Moon.



Usagi, crying tears of happiness quickly defends her group from several kaijin; This causes rage upon the group but Tsukasa can only begin clapping his hands at this. To which he agres with the group and states to their opponents that kaijin and humans aren't different in their humanity. Aslong as someone fights with the powers given to them by those who threaten those they care for, they will be Kamen riders for this and any other world they belong to.



Tsukasa then gives his catchphrase to his enemies as he transforms and tells the group to get going as its going to get messy. To which they begrudgingly do so as they escape back to their world while Decade destroys the world of Showa.















So...its alot of things, theres more to be planned but i havent got the details fully worked out yet. Season 2 isnt finished as i still have some more things to go thru but i havent got the whole thing thought out yet. But basically the remaining bits i have for season 2 and of season 3 are as follows.





Season 2b. Upon returning with their gains the senshi combine it with Nobuhiko's body, giving her the same bio-mechanical body as Kotaro and begun healing. A heart to heart with the senshi reveals that Nobuhiko is tired from all the fighting and events from her past, as such she wants someone else to take over for her after dying for good. This causes the group to mull over their decisions as they and Nobuhiko(begrudgingly after a pep talk)go to the future to chase after Mamoru. The changes to the timeline start to effect this as Crystal city begins showing the dark thoughts of how Chibi views the world she's from and the current disaster effecting it.



Upon being attacked by the negative feelings and memories given form from the future, the group begins to grow disgusted at this. As the journey to the world of Showa opened their eyes to kaijin suffering and how people can act to those different from themselves; the senshi decry this future and any that result from the suffering of others. As such the false future senshi begin to attack the group all the while the negative princess Neo-Serenity espouses her values to the group and most pointedly toward her past self.



Upon the future version beings expository that this peace can only happen when there are no more threats to trouble them, the severly damaged usagi cries out in frustration and defiance at this as she claims there is no difference between Kaijin and humans. This causes Nobu to remember the same words from Kotaro and finally start getting their motivation back. Looking up at the darkened and now eclipsed moon, Black sun the rider finally returns. Transforming into their rider form alongside Usagi, the double riders begin their fight to free Chibi from her darkness.





Season 3. After the freed chibi returned to the future things seemed to be looking up for the group as they now begin working together. That all changes when rider copies of chibi's kaijin form come to rampage. Despite fighting them off with help from chibi, the group becomes confused at this. Eventually Black sun comes up with a way to journey to the future to meet pluto and find out what is going on. Their findings end up disturbing the both as the crystal city has been taken over by an unknown person resembling the creation king. Taking control using the powers of the senshi but not having the kingstones, they soon begin to attack black sun and pluto who quickly escape as they are trying tk figure out what is going on. While In the past, the senshi are fighting copies of themselves called another Senshi(another rider based concept).



Well this is all i have so please comment on the concept for ideas and basically anything i can work on. As well as constructive criticism as a whole.



To be clear though, im trying to refresh my memory by basically reading the manga, watching the 90's/crystal anime, one of the games, and the live act to help with that regard as i can only vaguely remember up to 3rd season stuff, never saw 4 and 5 so this could take awhile to plan out.





Im especially troubled by the third season baddy for Black sun in the altered future doing their deeds. Their identity might cause a wee bit of trouble alongside Black sun's companion. Im also somewhat worried by it being essentially the same as season 2 in the beats. By tommorow i'll put up what else ive got for S3 before posting what ive got in the SM thread for feedback on that front. Hopefully the constructive criticism here and there would be greatly appreciated for making the story better as a whole.



As to my decision to hold off on the rider transformation for so long, well....To be honest i was going to start the story at season 2 of SM and the prequel wasnt really going to be a thing as it was now. Infact the whole thing with Venus and all i made up as a slight whim to show more char development on Kotaro. I kinda was making it so he was trying to live up to the ideals venus had before the end of Sailor V manga and try to realize them in his own world. In addition to explaining his rapid scientific expertise on the whole Hell drug.



Specifically in his research to make the heat Heaven not require humans as components he accidently made the wonderous fimbulwinter hell drug. It raises the kaijin who ingests it capabilities to skyrocket dramatically. Regen, strength, reflexes, the whole lot. It can even allow kaijin to regenerate lost limbs.



The problem however was this raised the users body temp to the point it would begin melting their surroundings. At the ends of the drugs use is the troublesome bit as the exhausted heat leaves the body basically dropping their body temp like a rock. This cold temperature would kill most kaijin and is an iffy on even king stone equiped ones. Kotaro split the matierials and notes on the item between the worlds for rightful worry of gorgom getting their hands on it and using it on disposable troops.



So as you can see, it was mostly spur of the moment that i included the v segment as a prologue. I also changed up the beats abit for season 2 as the events leading up to the arrival in the world of showa(Nobuhiko getting nearly killed by citizens) wouldve happened in S3 but was realizing that things were getting too cluttered there. So i made some more changes.



The Another senshi bit was a nice stroke of fleeting inspiration that hit me as i was writing the explanation above. Essentially the ruler(who is calling themselves Sol as in the sun and also the sole ruler of the future) of the changed future is basically pulling a lord Drakkon from boom comics power rangers and granting his troops the powers of the senshi he's beaten. Now they aren't nearly as powerful as the originals but there are hundreds of the guys. As you can imagine, getting hit by several dozen magical girl finisher's would wreck anyone's day.



He has everyone but 2 senshi specifically. Both of them are Saturn and this times Pluto, both of whom have dissapeared while the now powerless senshi fight against sol. During their(Black sun and pluto) escape, Sol manages to get some of Present day Pluto's power and creates the watches to send back to the past....as well as some other things. Essentially the transformed Another senshi can only be beaten by the person who's power they are based on.



The thing that causes the most issue is that besides the fact they get another form of power besides that of the senshi they are based on upon defeat. They also end up possessing someone who has a deep connection to said senshi they were basing off of. So in venus's case it would be Kotaro or that guy she liked in v. The second phase of the fight after beating them the first time causes the another watch to gain physical form and more power from what the roman-greek connection. For example, mercury managed to defeat another mercury but it comes back and has the powers of Hermes, thus exchanging its powers over ice for high speed combat.



Notably to show the reasons leading up to why Usagi got turned into a kaijin, as the resistance members brought to SM's world arent in the whole human experimentation shtick.



Well, not quite everybody of the Gor-shocker group got wiped out by Black sun during her rampage at the tailend of the fog-crisis war. Infact this ties into why Shadow moon even arrived into SM's world at the getgo. See, the groups subsumed by Gorgom(basically every other showa villain group besides crisis and fog) were not too happy with their servitude to a cult. So as always, plans to take power were made, discarded, and all around backstabbjng were done and dusted regularly. Most of it was barely a footnote to the gorgom priests so they really didn't care too much.



One thing they were working on was their attempt at the history modification machine from GP3 and yongou. They were hoping to use it to basically knock Gorgom down enough that they could do their own actions. At the time of its testing however, a raid by the resistance lead by Shadow Moon occured at the test site. The fight between the opposing groups caused the device to malfunction, sending the current living people through space-time into the SM world.



Seeing it as a fresh start, the nefarious survivors begun their attempt at controling the world. Meanwhile Shadow moon by their lonesome, begins a sort of Frenemy with Venus during her early time as Sailor V. This teamup roughly results in them both destroying the remnants as they attempt to flee with the history modification device. Seeing this as their chance to return home, Shadow moon leaves his ally behind to return to his world. Where he then puts his new experience to work and become the hopebringer he would be down the line.



Shadow moon did discover after the History modification machine's destruction that it ripped several holes in their world to other dimensions. Shadow moon basically did what he could to seal them up while the surviving designers were trying to steal resources from these locations, but didn't get to finish what with their untimely death. When the resistance led by Black sun goes through the portal they believe that it was sealed behind them....it wasnt fully.



Several kaijin begin following after them. From various bits of the showa riders ensemble it soon becomes a sort of four way conflict between the senshi(who are still in the midset of all kaijin are enemies), the senshi's enemies(who are focusing ontheir own shtick while occasionally involving those from the three other groups as parts of their plans), the organizations(who are trying to get control of the world in order to win their own back, and subsequent multiversal control), and finally the resistance(who don't trust anyone but are looking to this world as a fresh start away from the fighting).





But thats for background details. Now back to the kaijin. Im kinda just picking kaijin at random for filler bits and giving them a sort of remaking ala first/next/amazons/black sun. So far ive been working on our favorite starfish's rather unique ability. Currently, unless you destroy SH in their entirety, their leftovers will regenerate with whatever biological matierial nearby to become copies of the original. In one case a group of several dozen Civilians were exposed to SH's bits and turned into the fully abled form of their predecessor. Eventually even their personality/mind would be replaced with that of SH's.





Currently im checking Sailor moon lore to see if their stuff can even heal them as otherwise Black sun is going to have to be executioner when that occurs. But anywho thats what i have for now. Please give me some feedback on this post and maybe some interesting kaijins to use and update for the story



Edit: i just learned that decade died in rider time Zio vs. Decade and was in a bit of a pinch to figure out a decent substitute for our magnetta rider.



I could just do before his appearence before his time in zio but that kinda sounds boring to me. I figure that after he stopped being the destroyer of worlds, the rider-verse would pick someone else as their representative. Likewise i dont See Kaito taking up his role either(Speaking of such did Kaito, Natsumi, and AR world Yusuke survive their bit in rider time?). The same with Sougo as he jsn't in the mood to be destroying worlds like his future selves. So i was in a wee bit of a stump.



Then i thought back to an O.C. i made up back when Over Quartzer came out subbed. Originally the story would've included another time traveler looking to eliminate the zio timeline and everyone who's effecting the future. I figured it would've been interesting to make it so that the o.c. was an alternate/past version of SOUGO of Quartzer that was discarded in their decoy plans.



But i got to thinking of the similarities between Tsukasa and SOUGO and came to an realization. That maybe the whole "Destroyer of worlds" thing is sort of an punishment set up by the multiverse for beings that cause massive damage to itself. In Tsukasa's case he was apart of Daishocker and had a hand in the A.R. world creation, massively effecting the rider verse. In SOUGO's case he made Zio for a decoy, eventually one Zio became Oma-zio. Then as a result all the space time damage from the worlds colliding and history getting massively changed to the point it shatters the boundary between worlds.



So...maybe have an Version of SOUGO/Sougo(because both caused massive damage to multiverse) learn of all the crap that occurred and felt that they had to become the new Destroyer of worlds as penance for the actions of their other selves? Taking up Decade's mantle and name in the hopes of redeeming themselves from the actions of alternate/future selves?



Please leave a comment on such an idea as while it sounds nice in my head, but would like to get feedback on the whole concept.



Maybe the next big change is a whole story thing. See, I've rethought things abit and while i would just like to get the time travel stuff over with S2's end(so i can move on with other things in the story). I note that just combining what i have for the time travel stuff for S3 would make S2 more bloated as a whole(and leave me with nothing interesting for S3).



Maybe i should just spread out the another Senshi bit from S1's start(as it has the least effort put into it for changes) to S2's end? Im not fully sure that it's a good idea but you guys are the vets here and can give me advice on such a matter. But im digressing here.



Notably as a result of all this pondering I've taken to looking at both 1 and three to make for more original content. Resent reading of a certain Sailor Moon quest made me consider adding more into this continuity but am holding still on that until i can finish SM watching(so many episodes, so little time). But besides that, i have got somewhat of an idea for some things i do want to put in at some point of the story.



These are of the following. An malevolent spirit/or another Pluto using the powers they possess onto the dead and reviving all the kaijin that Black sun has killed. Thus leading an army of angry, constantly reviving hordes of enemies for Black sun to fight alone while the senshi are handling the being responsible for this incident. During said incident, the spirit of Shadow Moon comes back and the two riders begin their long awaited reunion/battle to settle the feelings of regret that Black sun has for their past.



In an incident upon fighting remnants of opposing kaijin, Black sun becomes alarmed at seeing parts of the Fog mother coming to life and as such leads a strike force with the senshi and allies in order to stop the rebirth of one of their most dangerous foes. As well as the alarming factor that Black sun learns she cant connect to the J power in the world of Sailor moon(because the j power only connects to beings who belong to said dimension. I.e. black sun can turn giant back in their world, but only the senshi can go big in their world). So if she is revived, they are essentially unable to fight on even footing.





But yeah, thats what i have so far that isnt too spoilerish. Maybe I'll reveal who i have planned for the Another Senshi bit tommorow. Or if someone posts something after me as i don't want to keep double posting. But whatever.



One thing im sure someone is trying to figure out is what the hell Usagi's kaijin from is. A vorpal rabbit is something that's probably confused someone who read it. Well....anyone who's seen mighty python or know Arthurian lore knows about the Six deadly threats to man. In the case of the rabbit, its one of them.



So essentially the forces of(ah shit i dont have a name for the enemy organization, think me think!!!) Dimense(kinda like saying Demons and is a pun on the word dimensions) got an ridiculously powerful kaijin with the metaphysical power to take out/kill black sun in Usagi. The problem comes from the fact her silver crystal is making a confusion in the kaijin mode Usagi as its trying to return her to normal, while the kaijin part of her thinks this is her normal and it esentially causes a rampage between the two's conflict. This renders usagi into a berserk state that attacks everything around her.



This threat of danger comes more from chibi in her evil mode/kaijin mode. She's a combination of this and of the rose. More specifically she's Black sun's version of Doctor Kate with her abilities due to the majic spell she's put under.

Essentially the rose bit of her body is rotted from it trying to expel the magic she's under considering it an infection, but its causing her to unleash a virulent poison from the effort. This is especially an issue as the scouts and black sun consider this deliberate when its an accidental side effect; and a contributing factor in the conflict between the two groups on how to handle Chibi's state.





But yeah this is what i have so far, maybe I'll just get to work on some other parts of the story so i have a somewhat definitive end. Then work my way through it to make the story beats and rough plot. And then refine it so its understandable. I still need data for s4 and s5. Im going to post my notes in the Sailor moon thread and see if i can get some feedback there to help this procrastination.



So i think i broke it up from posts i did on another site by using the spoiler bb code. But ill wait and see from the post in general.


Also thanks for the reply.
 
But ill wait and see from the post in general.
While I wish I could help in a more tangible way, I know next to nothing about Kamen Rider and haven't read Sailor Moon manga yet. Though, in my opinion, fusion universes are hard to pull off right without carefully considering all the different forces that govern the settings. There is a story named Petrichor that did this reasonably well if you are looking for inspiration in world building.
 
While I wish I could help in a more tangible way, I know next to nothing about Kamen Rider and haven't read Sailor Moon manga yet. Though, in my opinion, fusion universes are hard to pull off right without carefully considering all the different forces that govern the settings. There is a story named Petrichor that did this reasonably well if you are looking for inspiration in world building.
It technically isnt a fusion. More of an...kinda like someone popping up in another verse. Though in this case its groups of people and their effects on the world around them.

Notably though, my o.c. is(if i can compare it to such) at the end of their series but has taken enough damage(physical/mental/Emotional) that they are in their first season power set. But with the experience of all the fights they had in their series helping them compensate. Figure it would be an easy way to explain the power difference between senshi and rider.

That and i was troubled at a crossover with sailor moon as pluto has the whole guardian of time schtick so i was limited on series that can go into SM and not get ret goned by her powers. As a rough note of comparison. The Kingstones that my o.c. use are very similar in aspect to the silver crystal Usagi and chibiusa uses. The main differnce is their are two to their one, and that when time space shenanigans happen it can pull future and past users to the present threats location. Also immunity to time shenanigans.

Kinda was setting up a bit with Sailor moon(present), princess Serenity(past), and Neo serenity(future) doing a team up attack on a foe for the story. That and the opposito senshi would have an appearence. Probably even some extra members too.

Thanks for the help though, ill take a read through of the recommendation to understand some things better. Im hoping to allow more of the senshi to have equal appearences in the fic instead of focusing on some such group. That and was looking for advice on on my own time tidbit.


See, another senshi are based on something in the kamen rider fandom known as Another Riders. These are misshappen copies that takes the powers of those they are named after, altering history so that they are the person they are named after from the time of their creation. The big issue is that they can only be beaten by the powers of the one they stole, otherwise they ressurect from defeat. In this case the Another senshi powers were made in the bad future and sent back to possess those close to the senshi in some way. (For Mars its her mother, for pluto its Edymmion, for usagi its Chibi etc etc.) But their power sets are off somewhat.

Figured it would give the other senshi time to shine now that SM cant be the one to finish them off. Also to let the senshi its affecting resolve some of the demons they have had in the past or are currently still having.


Thoughts?
 
I'm not entirely certain how to adequately manage the time shenanigans, for crossovers I find it's better to cross characters from the more overpowered setting to the relatively reasonable setting. This will have the advantage of not invalidating the character(s) that are crossing over.
Also, you need to clean up your grammar just a bit. I recommend a spellchecker and a beta for another set of eyes.
 
I'm not entirely certain how to adequately manage the time shenanigans, for crossovers I find it's better to cross characters from the more overpowered setting to the relatively reasonable setting. This will have the advantage of not invalidating the character(s) that are crossing over.
Also, you need to clean up your grammar just a bit. I recommend a spellchecker and a beta for another set of eyes.
Fair enough. My keyboard is getting cleaned so im stuck with my phone and am very oblivious to some things. Not really good focusing on phone writing to be completely honest. But this is good feedback to be sure. Ill try to write a snippet to see how it goes and post it here....probably take me a day or so after i reread my notes.

See you later.
 
That and i was troubled at a crossover with sailor moon as pluto has the whole guardian of time schtick so i was limited on series that can go into SM and not get ret goned by her powers. As a rough note of comparison. The Kingstones that my o.c. use are very similar in aspect to the silver crystal Usagi and chibiusa uses. The main differnce is their are two to their one, and that when time space shenanigans happen it can pull future and past users to the present threats location. Also immunity to time shenanigans.
Sailor Pluto guards a door. She doesn't go back in time to undo the fall of the Silver Millennium. She doesn't go back in time or leave her post to fight literal time travelers trying to kill and destroy everything and everyone she loves in the 90s anime, while in the manga she only does so after one of the cats comes and offers to watch her door for her. Typically, the only thing that'll bring her out to play is the apocalypse happening and happening bad enough that the reset button for life in the solar system needing to be summoned to do her thing.

Of course, that's kind of a depressing existence, so there's another Sailor Pluto running about who got reincarnated back in time to finally have some vacation days. But unless she gets attacked or you're setting your fic during or after the third (Infinity) arc, she's just a college/grad student.

Now, there's nothing wrong with you engineering a situation where Pluto leaves her door early, but if you don't want her to do so because she'd retcon a crossover, then just don't have her do so. It's not like she retcons the evil time-travelers who cause her death and gaslight her best friend into turning evil.

Figured it would give the other senshi time to shine now that SM cant be the one to finish them off. Also to let the senshi its affecting resolve some of the demons they have had in the past or are currently still having.
You could also simply not abide by the anime formula of 'Now Sailor Moon!'. For example, in the manga the other senshi take out all the Dark Generals and Beryl. While doing it to help the senshi resolve some of their demons is a very Sailor Moon thing to do, that's because it happens with the Witches 5 so just know that happens.
 
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Inspired by Teenage Discomfort by littleares on AO3, I now have an idea for comedic little shorts where the modern senshi get 'haunted' by their past lives starting some after they gain their powers and/or regain their memories, with the past lives constantly snarking at the actual teenagers or making witty observations.

In Teenage Discomfort it was Mars telling Rei to act on her crush on Minako already why was she so depressed and repressed, but I imagine there's plenty of fun to be had with the other senshi exploring various cultural differences or expectations.

For instance, consider Minako vs Venus.

There's the option to have Venus be the duty-bound loyal warrior from the Silver Millennium who strongly disapproves of Minako's quest to find a date... but there's also the possibility to have Minako be resigned to the 'curse' of always choosing duty, and Venus going, "shut up, Danburite was totally full of shit, just ask that guy out for stars' sake, do it!"

Alternatively, Minako and Venus are both pro-dating, but they have totally conflicting tastes in men.

Minako: "Right, I'm going to go ask out that cutie in the stylish jacket!"


Venus: "Why are you wasting your time with that pretty boy wimp? You could break him over your knee! There's a hottie with muscles and a mustache right there! You cannot deny the manly facial hair, Minako!"


Minako: "Ew, can you imagine how scratchy that would be! Quit giving me advice, your tastes suck!"


Venus: "You take that back, ungrateful brat! The only men worth bothering with are one tough enough to lift you one-handed, if you want pretty then go flirt with Uranus or Mercury!"​


Then we got possibilities like Mercury trying to edit/correct Ami's physics assignment, only for Ami to get a crap grade because Mercury cited Silver Millennium physics that involved magical reaction, which modern Earth can't replicate or discover yet.

Alternatively, gets-hives-from-love-letters-Ami is utterly mortified that Mercury comes from a more free love culture and is unabashedly willing to share some of her exploits and try to press Ami to date around a bit.

Makoto has to remind Jupiter that she isn't a public law enforcement official now so she can't beat up every day crooks or yakuza or regular jerks the ways she wants to, and meanwhile Makoto is shocked by Jupiter's lack of cooking and domestic skills because Jupiter was a princess who had people to do that for her most of her life.

Any other fun ideas people can get from this?
 
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Usagi arguing with her Princess self about inane things in front of the others would be fun. Things like which era has the best finger food, which version of Mamoru is better, with both arguing for both sides (of course), the Princess telling Usagi embarrassing tales of kitten Luna as ammunition against the poor councilor, or perhaps why manga is better than any other form of art. There is no argument in the last one, just a list of reason and comparisons.
 
Sailor Moon/Miracleman


So taking inspiration from the comic Miracleman where found an alien spaceship with an alien body in it and the Japanese government decided to create supersoliders by kidnapping a brunch of orphan girls and subjecting them to experiments which turn them into Sailor Soldiers and placing them in an illusion based on the manga storyline.

However the US Government, who had found out what the Japanese Government was doing with Sailor Soldiers and made their own "Sailor Soldiers", so they ended up stealing much of the work of the project (the DNA, the Illusion program,) create a group of supersoliders they called the Sailor Scouts who are clones of the Sailor Soldiers and they are also place in a Illusion program similar based on the manga storyline but was makes this one different it's base on the 90's anime English dub and they are a lot less powerful then the Sailor Soldiers.

Unfortunately for the Japanese project the Sailor Soldiers got free from their containment and when they found out their entire lives were a lie they took it bad... REALLY BAD! And they basically decided to go with the Android 17 and 18 from the Future Trunks storyline KILL EVERYTHING.

And the world only hope is the American Sailor Scouts who aren't very happy their origins either but they don't to destroy the world.
 
Also, I think I haven't officially announced that I'm writing Serenity Malfoy and the Hogwarts Education over on Space Batlles (and on AO3 but I can't link there IIRC).

As the title implies, the Inner Senshi get reincarnated into Wizarding Britain and Serenity is Draco's older sister. Fortunately, Serenity Malfoy has almost no accidental magic as a kid, so her parents think she's a squib, meaning she doesn't get most of the blood supremacy lessons Draco got.

Then Serenity gets her Hogwarts Acceptance Letter anyway, so the Malfoy parents have to send her off and hope she doesn't embarrass them too badly.

It also features Rei Black, Mina Lovegood, and Lita Dursley in addition to muggleborn Amy Anderson and Darien Shields. Come take a look! (We're up to 22 chapters and 80k words so it'll be a pretty good read, I hope.)

Okay, so I know this is already pretty far in, and I don't expect you to change anything based on my perspective, but maybe other SM/HP fiction writers will find it useful.
1. In terms of the timeline, you can do what you like, but if you want things to line up, Serenity should be two years older than Draco.
2. I don't think that the pureblood Malfoys would name their child something as non-traditional as Serenity. I'd just play it completely straight and name her Selene.
3. I thought the Hogwarts letter mechanism was triggered by the same underage magic detection system that gets Harry in trouble later in the books. I think there's a book and quill somewhere that just sits around all day writing the names and locations of under-11s when they have their first wild magic incident to generate the Hogwarts mailing list later.
3a. Which is to say that going the Neville route with Serenity doesn't really mesh with what we know about the Malfoys. If they thought she was a squib, Lucius would have discreetly sent her off to some relative they didn't associate with.
 
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2. I don't think that the pureblood Malfoys would name their child something as non-traditional as Serenity. I'd just play it completely straight and name her Selene.
… They named their child Draco. Now, you may argue that it's in honor of Δράκων [Drakōn], A 7 century BCE Athenian lawgiver so hardcore that he that gave us the word 'Draconian', in which case, congratulations, you just set a precedent for the Malfoys butchering traditional Greek names.

More in point, he is named in the Black tradition of using star names, but the Malfoy were too good for that, so they used a constellation instead. Which also would justify named a daughter after Mare Serenitatis, the Sea of Serenity, one of the most eye-catching features on our moon due to its size and darkness.

3a. Which is to say that going the Neville route with Serenity doesn't really mesh with what we know about the Malfoys. If they thought she was a squib, Lucius would have discreetly sent her off to some relative they

This creates mixed feelings. On one hand, I agree in general, on the other hand, at the end of the saga, the Malfoys did a pretty hard turn on their views motivated solely on their filial love, and I'm talking about the nuclear family here, father, mother, son, not the extended one. So, this "hypocrisy" in their treatment of little bunny might have been justified by canon, I think?
 
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