Sadly I am already editing too much to be of any real use, though I'd be curious to hear more about these ideas @Galaxia-sama
I like this idea as it reminds me of this Sailor Moon fanartrewrite of Sailor V/the Dark Kingdomarc staring Makoto as the only Guardian
There's definitely some dramatic intensity potential there, though if Galaxia knows Usagi's identity wouldn't she just hit her at home while she sleeps?
Ooo that does sound interesting, I can definitely see the romance angle proving engaging though as a huge Sailor V fan I am confused about the timeline a bit, as if Makoto is in her role, she shouldn't be anywhere near Japan for much of the early arcs, though I may just be being a stickler.
This is great, do you have a source on the artist?
Belongs to Shadowjack.
I'd be interested, definitely. Thanks for pointing me at this @brer rabbitAny one interested in beta reading a fan fiction of mine?
I need to shake off some of the old writing rust, so I'm thinking of diving into the ole fanfic well. I haven't quite decided which to go with - I was thinking either a version of the Stars plotline where Naru joins Shadow Galactica, or a rewrite of Sailor V/the Dark Kingdomarc staring Makoto as the only Guardian - but... well, I haven't put pen to paper in literally years. So it will probably be terrible either way.
It's made very clear during the Nehelenia arc that Galaxia knows who Sailor Moon is but is just simply screwing around because it amuses her.though if Galaxia knows Usagi's identity wouldn't she just hit her at home while she sleeps?
Ah good point there... Yeesh that's grim.It's made very clear during the Nehelenia arc that Galaxia knows who Sailor Moon is but is just simply screwing around because it amuses her.
Do you have a draft or are you still plotting it out at the moment, @Galaxia-sama ?
Ooo that does sound interesting, I can definitely see the romance angle proving engaging though as a huge Sailor V fan I am confused about the timeline a bit, as if Makoto is in her role, she shouldn't be anywhere near Japan for much of the early arcs, though I may just be being a stickler.
She also went to China and starred in a movie shot there with Dark Ace while he mind screwed her, before she obliterated the entire locale and his creeper ass along with it. Plus if V was in Japan that whole time it makes her not helping the other Senshi rather confusing.This is actually part of what I am struggling with myself. To clarify, I am basing this off the manga (or mostly off the manga) since that's the more accessible version to me, and aside from a brief Hawai'i arc, I'm fairly confident that Sailor V remains in Japan for most of the story.
One of the problems I'm running into, though is... well, the meta issue of wondering "how much original content should I include", mainly where the villains are concerned. The Dark Agency is very much a Minako villain faction, in that they are related to her general life goal of 'become an idol'. I feel like if I'm including that group of villains, they would need to be adjusted to something more in line with Makoto... but that makes me worried about how much I'm bending canon to fit the concept.
I really dislike the idea of doing a story which plays out the exact same but slotting in 'Makoto' anywhere Usagi is... but I also have a bit of confidence issues when it comes to introducing new characters and concepts, in case that actually takes away from what makes Sailor Moon 'Sailor Moon'.
Of course, I saw that while also considering giving Makoto her own animal companion named Ganymede, or adjusting the canon so that Jupiter is the leader of the Guardians as a whole.
She also went to China and starred in a movie shot there with Dark Ace while he mind screwed her, before she obliterated the entire locale and his creeper ass along with it.
Plus if V was in Japan that whole time it makes her not helping the other Senshi rather confusing.
Wait, so Jupiter is activated instead of Usagi... Then I think Minako should still have been active? Sorry I find this a little confusing. As to a villain that contrasts Makoto, I think anime Nephrite fits that goal fairly well?
I really dislike the idea of doing a story which plays out the exact same but slotting in 'Makoto' anywhere Usagi is... but I also have a bit of confidence issues when it comes to introducing new characters and concepts, in case that actually takes away from what makes Sailor Moon 'Sailor Moon'.
Of course, I saw that while also considering giving Makoto her own animal companion named Ganymede, or adjusting the canon so that Jupiter is the leader of the Guardians as a whole.
Okay, this sounds very interesting.I think you are hitting all of the reasons why this is still in the plotting phase, and why I'm debating whether I should shuffle events of canon around to have Makoto activate first (followed by the others), or if I should use this as a starting point to basically spin out of own canon for it.
If you're going to be writing something Makoto-focused anyway, then you are going to have several important OCs out of necessity, simply because IIRC canonically her parents are dead and she's supported financially by relatives we never meet.One of the problems I'm running into, though is... well, the meta issue of wondering "how much original content should I include", mainly where the villains are concerned. The Dark Agency is very much a Minako villain faction, in that they are related to her general life goal of 'become an idol'. I feel like if I'm including that group of villains, they would need to be adjusted to something more in line with Makoto... but that makes me worried about how much I'm bending canon to fit the concept.
I personally believe that Makoto (in the 90's anime) is BI but I don't ship her and Ami together.Huh, neato. I need to get around to reading this... even if I disagree hard with Makoto/Ami as a ship
I thought your plan was that Makoto would be the only guardian in the story?and why I'm debating whether I should shuffle events of canon around to have Makoto activate first (followed by the others),
The latter idea works the best in my opinion. Also I recall a fic (can't remember the name) where Usagi grew up in Japanese Child Services... she became a VERY bitter person and that Ami was the first Scout Luna instead of her.Then if you want Makoto-centric villains you could relate them to Makoto being an orphan, with the Dark Kingdom agents either being potentially responsible for the plane crash that killed her family (so Makoto keeps seeking them out to gain vengeance) or being agents who infiltrated Japanese Child Services, where there's a lot of IRL problems and potential to shuffle kids around and make a few go missing to drain their energy.
You basically need to decide whether... well, first things first, is Makoto eventually going to be wielding the Ginzuisho to vanquish the Dark Kingdom or will that still be Usagi? Because that will greatly affect things.
I thought your plan was that Makoto would be the only guardian in the story?
Then there's the question of whether Makoto will start off on her own and quickly assemble a team like Moon did, or if she'll start off on her own as a big distraction while the other senshi assemble into a team, or something else.
Then if you want Makoto-centric villains you could relate them to Makoto being an orphan, with the Dark Kingdom agents either being potentially responsible for the plane crash that killed her family (so Makoto keeps seeking them out to gain vengeance) or being agents who infiltrated Japanese Child Services, where there's a lot of IRL problems and potential to shuffle kids around and make a few go missing to drain their energy.
I personally believe that Makoto (in the 90's anime) is BI but I don't ship her and Ami together.
I mean, Usagi is heavily implied to be bisexual and crushing on several fellow senshi at one time or another even canonically. She literally had hearts in her eyes and followed Rei off the bus because Rei was so pretty, IIRC.It means I still need to come up with a way to subvert that towards the end (most likely with Makoto/Mamoru as the final ship parents, as not being the Saviour of the Universe doesn't invalidate her own importance to the story and to him)...
Maybe instead of a Senshi Team, all the Senshi are spread around different cities with their own advisors to get a better spread on fighting Dark Kingdom activities?My plan was for Sailor Jupiter to be the only Guardian, though it's something I'm going back and forth on. She's definitely going to be the first one to Awaken (and probably have some kind of alt costume, because I have ideas for that which I think would look cool), so my only question then is whether I should have the other guardians come into the story.
Go ahead!
She is attracted to men. (go read Casablanca Memories for more info)Which, by the by, means that Rei? I headcanon her as gay. There's no Mamoru-attracting in my headcanon. The closest she ever get's to entertaining the idea of a husband is when Makoto suggests she think of it as having a lackey ("Ooh, a lackey!" is still the funniest line in the entire franchise to me).
That being said she isn't going to making out with Minako any time soon, because a flashback during one of her chapters heavily implies she took a vow of celibacy as part of her dedication to the princess. And while I'm sure Usagi wouldn't hold her to that, I feel like Rei's own sense of honor and pride would.
So much happens in Sailor V, its wild XDI definitely need to re-read Sailor V, because it just occurs to me that I do not remember the entire second half of that manga.
I thought that was more an anime thing?I need to check the timeline, buuuut my general impression was that she was there, but not doing stuff with them, as part of a 'they need to solve it themselves to awaken/train/whatever'? I'm basing that off the fact that Artemis was clearly around and giving Luna orders through the arcade machine, though that whole plot point is rather, uh, confusing, so...
I think you are hitting all of the reasons why this is still in the plotting phase, and why I'm debating whether I should shuffle events of canon around to have Makoto activate first (followed by the others), or if I should use this as a starting point to basically spin out of own canon for it.
Right now, I've mostly been approaching this project from the tragangst writing possibilites of the Makoto/Mamoru ship, and from the awesomeness having Sailor Jupiter do wresting moves
Worm/Sailor Moon Prompt! Instead of being reborn as Japanese schoolgirls the Sailor Senshi reincarnate as the various heroes and villains of Brockton Bay, can the team stick together long enough to defeat the Dark Kingdom?
... Ami as Glory Girl?Flying was great. No joke, it was the single best thing about my powers. Nothing else came close to matching it. Not the strength, not the forcefield, not the mist, nothing.
More Victoria as Sailor Mercury, but yeah.