[x] Kiss her you fool!
-[x] "Hey... I'm yours remember? A retainer will always be by her Queen's side."


I didn't get a chance to mention this before, but I think I got a suitably evil write-in for that revenge-happy edgelord Ferdiad. So fuck'em. In the ass. With no lube.
 
Well...honestly I think the problem here is more that she's feeling helpless. She doesn't if she'll be able to keep us alive, and now Lancer has declared that he will break us before her eyes as his revenge.

Reminding her that she claimed us may actually make this worse
 
[X] "Those Heroes? Aren't you one too? At least you saved me enough times to be my Hero. At least that's what I think."
 
[X] "Those Heroes? Aren't you one too? At least you saved me enough times to be my Hero. At least that's what I think."

I think we may want to save the line about being by her side until she no longer has Lancer (who stood by her side) trying to break her.

Don't get me wrong, I can totally see the appeal of the "Well I'll never leave you" thing on the heels of the thing with Lancer, but at the moment those are mostly just words and we can't really prove it on the spot to pull her out of her funk. It'd probably be better to save it for a more dramatic moment or, failing that, at least a moment where she doesn't actively need affirmation that she's a real hero and she can protect us.

This one reminds her that she's a hero too, that she can protect us, and that we've got a strong bond all in one. It's just what she seems to need right now because it addresses all of her concerns and doesn't draw any parallels between us and Lancer.
 
[x] "Those Heroes? Aren't you one too? At least you saved me enough times to be my Hero. At least that's what I think."

Our sins and deeds may mark our past, but it is our actions, our penance and atonement, that defines who we are, as much as thunder follows lightning.

I can't promise that it'll be nothing but sunshine and roses for us, and I'm not the one you should go to for absolution, but it gets a little bit easier, day by day. A Hero doesn't start out saving everyone, right?

And you did save me. Your first rescuee. And I'm going nowhere.
 
[X] "Those Heroes? Aren't you one too? At least you saved me enough times to be my Hero. At least that's what I think."
 
[X] "Those Heroes? Aren't you one too? At least you saved me enough times to be my Hero. At least that's what I think."

the "SAVE ME RIDER" we screamed comes to mind. not just because it's one of my favorite lines xP
 
[X] "Those Heroes? Aren't you one too? At least you saved me enough times to be my Hero. At least that's what I think."
 
[X] "Those Heroes? Aren't you one too? At least you saved me enough times to be my Hero. At least that's what I think."
 
[X] "Those Heroes? Aren't you one too? At least you saved me enough times to be my Hero. At least that's what I think."
 
[X] "Those Heroes? Aren't you one too? At least you saved me enough times to be my Hero. At least that's what I think."

I want to punch Ferdiad repeatedly in the face. Possibly with Scathach's help.
 
Boy have we come far from getting stuck in a death loop.
This is just the cycle of Fate protagonists. We start the game weak as shit, but we're secretly The Specialy-est of a bunch of Specials who all get together to fight for the Grail, we make allies with similar motives, beat enemies by the skin of our teeth, learn more about Our Specialness, and by the end of the game look like we're losing yet triumph over something that has every right to be beating us through some technique or spell that every established rule in the story so far would consider utter bullshit.
I want to punch Ferdiad repeatedly in the face. Possibly with Scathach's help.
Better yet: Borrow Scathach's spear, and yet Gae Bulg Proto do its work.
 
This is just the cycle of Fate protagonists. We start the game weak as shit, but we're secretly The Specialy-est of a bunch of Specials who all get together to fight for the Grail, we make allies with similar motives, beat enemies by the skin of our teeth, learn more about Our Specialness, and by the end of the game look like we're losing yet triumph over something that has every right to be beating us through some technique or spell that every established rule in the story so far would consider utter bullshit
Emiya: Achoo!

Saber: Please do not get sick. It will go on the report.

Emiya: Please don't tell those two. I'm taking care of myself.
 
Emiya: Achoo!

Saber: Please do not get sick. It will go on the report.

Emiya: Please don't tell those two. I'm taking care of myself.
Hehehehehehe. Emiya's gotta start having Fish Stories to tell the harem after each Grail War: "How X person's secret ability was more bullshit than Unlimited Blade Works." But of course, they don't believe him.

"Artoria, I am telling you, it's the truth! You remember Lord El-Melloi II as Waver from the last war, so how impossible is it he's found another Noble Phantasm? It's even a part of your legend. You are, lest we forget, the Once and Future King of all Britain?"
"Emiya, don't be ridiculous. The finding of Avalon is one thing, but as Rhongomyniad is the pillar transcending this and the Reverse Side of the world, it cannot be removed. The copy I wielded would have returned to the original upon my death. And the idea that some hidden descendants of Camelot's servants would create a homunculus body for me to live in for our Grail War?"
"Saber's right Emiya. Even if that all did work, getting Rhongomyniad to accept the copy would basically be impossible. The soul would have to have been Artoria's. Just because you got Archer's arm doesn't mean something vaguely similar can be done again."
"But Rin, she did use it!"
"Emiya..."
"Artoria, please, is this really the ti-"
"I see you are ready for additional training. EN GARDE!"
 

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Saint at Risk
[] "Those Heroes? Aren't you one too? At least you saved me enough times to be my Hero. At least that's what I think."

You listened to her words as she wore the same tearful look on her face. She was looking for an answer, hoping you'd be able to give it to her. It was funny how she was looking at a Doll like you, not even human, probably not even a few months old for answers. You're not sure if there were any right and wrong answers but what you did know was what you'll tell her.

She just seemed so vulnerable, so defenseless now and not even in a way you were happy to poke fun at with. She was actually lost, faced with someone she wronged and fearful that they would come to retaliate and hurt you. She had already tasted losing you when Caster took you away and it was a miracle that you even lived.

For the first time, she was afraid of losing someone. Even if that person was you, she was afraid of losing you.

You could feel her tears fall on your cheeks but you didn't move away as you held her face. She was beautiful... Crying didn't suit her at all but you couldn't blame her. She was totally different from the Legend you knew, from the Dreams you've seen, from the facade she tried to show you. She was just a girl...

"Those Heroes?" You murmured with a small smile, "Aren't you one too?"

"I did so many wrongs. Broke so many. I don't regret any of them but you can't call someone like that a Hero, Brie," Rider replied as she tried to compose herself as her tears fell.

"Well... At least you saved me enough times to be my Hero. At least that's what I think," you said as you brought her close to you and let her forehead rest against yours, "I think that's all that matters. Whether you're good or evil, a Saint or a Harlot, a Goddess or a Demoness, I know for sure that you're Rider, my Servant... My Queen."

Your faces were inches from one another as you lovingly brought her down and hugged her. Rider blinked at your words before holding on to you tightly. She was starting to shake again. She was a foolish girl, she made her mistakes, she killed many in the past for her own selfishness... But what mattered to you was the here and now.

You lived in the present and looked to the future. Rider clutched on to you tight as her entire body shook. You accepted her because she's all you had. You're just a Doll after all, not even human... And if it's for her you'll grab that Grail and grant her wish.

"You're a fool to accept me. Knowing who I am..." Rider said as she got up and looked down at you.

"Well I'm probably the best one considering I have nothing to lose... Except maybe I'll probably sob and weep while you drag me around," you chuckled as you scratched your cheek.

"You're a coward through and through but I don't hate that. You're not one to bow too easily to my will and I don't hate that either," Rider said as she pulled you up by your collar, "I guess this is all right."

Rider wrapped her arms around you before leaning down to press her lips against yours. It was a quick one but it was intense enough to make your head swim before she pulled away with a giggle. She had this goofy smile on her face as she looked down on you.

You could taste her on your lips had an embarassed look. Cherries... She tasted like cherries, "I won't ever get used to that. And don't make it a habit."

Rider simply smiled at you as she slowly returned to her normal cheery self. She then leaned down against you and sighed in satisfaction. You can't breathe... She was lying on top of you in full now.

The couch wasn't made for two people it felt cramped. But you simply suffered in silence as you leaned back. Ugh... She's so heavy, you can't breathe. If you died somehow, you knew who to blame.

.....
....
...

"So you two are an item now?" Kotomine asked as he adjusted his glasses while giving you a strange look.

"I don't know... Maybe?" You shrugged as you sat within the confession booth while you looked at Rider harassing Ruler in the distance, "It's sort of this weird thing."

"She's a Ghost, Brie. No matter how pretty she is, she'll go poof at the end of the War," Kotomine replied as he rubbed his forehead.

"I'm a sculpture given life by the memories of a dead girl's personality. What's your excuse?" You hissed as you glanced through the holes to where the Priest was.

"Okay, okay. I'm sorry and I've listened to weirder confessions. Just try not to bring it up around Ruler, you know how she is," Kotomine sighed as he shook his head.

"WHAT?! BUT... THAT'S..!"

"Oh joy," Kotomine Kinzo, representative of the Catholic Church within New Rimeland City groaned as La Pucelle herself grew redder than an apple.

You and Kotomine watched as Medb whispered some more into Ruler's ear before the Saint went limp. She slumped in one of the pews while steam rose up her head.

"Congratulations. Your Girlfriend just made Jeanne D'arc pass out from embarassment," Kotomine said in dry, soulless tone, "I hope you're happy."

"This wouldn't be a problem if Jeanne was summoned as a Saber. She was in an army of guys, no way she wouldn't pick up a thing or too," You hissed right back at the Priest.

"Yes but this form is more of her Saint side rather than that fierce military commander that nearly led her country through battles," Kotomine said as he crossed his arms, "Trust me, I wish she was Saber but she would just be a normal servant then!"

You looked out see Rider giggling darkly while Ruler tried to recover.

Saint at Risk
[] Rider's having too much fun bullying Ruler. You should go and stop her.
[] Ruler will snap and when she does Rider's going to regret it. You should see how that goes.
[] Cut straight to the point and ignore shenanigans. Report what you know about Archer's faction and how it could affect the war.
[] Write in...
 
[X] Rider's having too much fun bullying Ruler. You should go and stop her.

I like this. It was cute.
 
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