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[X] Manipulate events so that Shirou meets the two sisters (50% chance of triggering event in Keep up appearances)
[X] manipulate events to find those bound to the moon (long time project)
 
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Canon Omake Magnus and Kiritsugu 01
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    • Well since no one asked I guess Will do it
    "And then at the honeyed words of the warmaster Horus Lupercal and the sinister urging of Constantin Valdor, my brother began the burning of the world Prospero." Magnus finished his little dialogue leaving Kiritsugu shocked and musing at what had just been revealed to him, though none of it showed on the Magus Killer's face or even in his blank eyes. "This was all made possible to to the desires and machinations of thirsting gods" the Crimson King added. "That is why when you and other magi speak that your age of gods is over, that I envy you. All due to desire of being that believed itself a higher power"
    Kiritsugu could sympathise his own condition with what had occurred during the Grail War being the Result of a being that professed itself to be Angra Mainyu "That is indeed unfortunate" Kiritsugu agreed "after that did you come here?" he asked.
    Magnus using Shirou's body gave a sad smile, one that the boy would have been able to imitate but not express, due to his unique condition. "If that were the end off my sufferings I would have welcomed it, but my pain had only just begun as with that of my sons it had yet to truly begin, Prospero was merely the prologue."
    Kiritsugu stared at the stars "To think there would be such dangers beyond the stars" he muttered "it seemed that even if I had accepted that offer humanity would have never been at peace."
    "It takes a great man to admit his failings" Magnus informed Kiritsugu "it takes an even greater man to choose a world of strangers who hate and fear him over his wife and daughter" the Crimson King stated "Know that while the rest of the world may forget you I who is cursed to exist for all eternity will not."
    Kiritsugu let out a tired sigh "I'm not sure how I feel about that" he admitted.
    After that Magnus using Shirou body walked away so that the boy's body could rest
     
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    • Damn it, I wanted to do the Kiritsugu part. Well, there is a whole month for them to talk, I can make my section canon compliant.
     
    Allright the vote is being called
    [] Manipulate events so that Shirou meets the two sisters (50% chance of triggering event in Keep up appearances) 1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1=15
    [] Manipulate events so that Shirou encounters the man made up of worms (10% chance of triggering event in Magi)
    [] Manipulate events so that Shirou encounters the man with a heart of curses (70% chance of triggering event in Magi) 1+1+1+1=4
    [] manipulate events to find those bound to the moon (long time project) 1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1=10
    [] Do nothing and let it run it's course without your intervention 1
    [] Manipulate events so that Shirou meets the two sisters (50% chance of triggering event in Keep up appearances)
    [] manipulate events to find those bound to the moon (long time project)
    win
     
    Canon Omake: Gaze into the Future Magnus 01
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    • Thanks our Gm for correct my grammar.:)

    Omake : Path of future.
    The future is not set in stone that is Lord of XV legion knows to be true,He can say without a shred of arrogance that he is one of the few that understand this in galaxy .The chance of a person just hesitating for a moment too long can prevent the greatest accomplishment of their life occurring,just a few millisecond faster and they could have survived their tragic end.

    The chance of encounter also can have potential to shape a life forever, akin to how he met his father, like he met his, it does not matter, Shirou, the boy deserves the same chance, he will follow the thread of fate no matter how small of that chance and make it a reality ,some situations are easier than other to make come to fruition.

    But The Lord of XV legion knew at heart that he can only open the path but how the path was chosen that depends on the personal choice, Gods don't just roll dice, they weight the dice in their favor.
     
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    Month 01 Results (Shirou)
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    • Shirou
    Martial
    Practice Archery
    Roll(1d10)+10(Magnus the Red):10+10+Roll(2d20)+10(Magnus the Red): 20,16+10 Total:66 artificial resounding success

    Your training moves through swimmingly, with your skill in the physical being on par with how you performed in your mindscape, though you notcied that you tire out more easily, but according to Kiritsugu you only notice this when your body is almost unable to move, still you hit the target every time even if it was standing still moving or spinning. Magnus himself is rather impressed with your aptitude. +2 to Martial

    Learn From Kiritsugu (Assassin)
    Diplomacy Roll: needed:30 rolled:Roll(1d6)+10(Magnus the Red):4,+10+Roll(1d20)+10 (Magnus the Red):9,+10 Total:34 artificial success.
    Martial Roll: needed: 45 rolled:Roll(1d10)+10(Magnus the Red):5,+10+Roll(2d20)+10(Magnus the Red):13,10,+10 Total:48 bare Artificial success

    (Anyone up for an Omake where Magnus helps Shirou get Kiritsugu to help train him)

    You manged to convince Kiritsugu to teach you the ticks of his craft, so far he has started on the basics and the mentality of it, something you have no problem with as being blank you have little to no regard for human life, this does disturb him, when as a passing comment you say that it is all just meat. Nevertheless he agrees to teach you and you take to it better than he expected. Though that is not saying much. +1 to Martial +2 to Intrigue
    Diplomacy
    Talk to Kiritsugu
    needed: 45 rolled:Roll(1d6)+10(Magnus the Red):5,+10+Roll(1d20)+10(Magnus the Red):20,+10 Total:45 bare artificial success

    (Again Omake anyone?)

    You talk with Kiritsugu and it goes well, the man is hesitant to open up to you though this is understandable, with Magnus whispering in your ear about him it is easy to understand. You talk though he mainly just stares up and looks at the stars every once and again mentioning some words of advice. But mostly he just sits outside on the balcony with your, still silence says more the words on some occasions.+15 opinion with Kiritsugu

    Keep up appearances:
    needed:20 rolled: Roll(1d6)+10(Magnus the Red):1,+10+Roll(1d20)+10(Magnus the Red):11,+10 Total:32 good artificial success
    Event Trigger needed: 50 rolled:Roll(1d100)+10(Magnus the Red): 66,+10 Total:76 resounding artificial success

    (Again Omake anyone? Anyone?) message me if you have an idea

    Your hard work bears fruit you have met a few children who are happy to call you friend though they find your hollowness a bit strange. You met them all individually, among those you met two girls stand out, one was a girl with purple hair accompanied by a boy with blue, Magnus says that you should not associate with the blue haired boy, Shinji as he seems too be called seems to agree stating something about your hair color and how it clashes with his, how does one without any base have that much arrogance? His Sister Sakura as she calls herself or as Shinji calls her is much better company and you take what could be called a liking to the quiet girl, though this is mainly because here eyes are almost as empty as yours and because she has also taken a liking to you, though you do not know why. Lastly there is a girl who seems to be on the same level in arrogance as Shinji, her name is Rin Tohsaka and you find that though she is rather vexing for some people at times she can be quite likable, when her fake persona is down, you like real things better than fake ones. Though she seems to get along with you better as it seems that she too lost someone close to her, her father around the time of the fire and it seems that her mother is suffering some sort of mental breakdown because of it. You tell her that you are somewhat envious of her remembering those she lost, as you cannot even remember your parents faces or names. For his Part Magnus just gives you subtle hints on how you should interact with them all. On a side note you have also met Tiger, or was it Taiga the difference seems a little too small. Sakura Matou, Rin Tohsaka Issei Rudou befreinded +25 to their opinion
    Stewardship
    Make a Workshop
    needed: 35 rolled:Roll(2d20)+10(Magnus the Red):20,17,+10 Total:47 Critical success
    You had learnt from Kiritsugu that most Magi need a Workshop to experiment in and that the house was not good for that due to it's open nature. The garage however was much better and you discovered a magic circle already drawn in it. with your limited knowledge (and Magnus's guidance) you manage to set up a Workshop here, though you will also be performing your warpcraft as well as thaumaturgy in here. Shirou Gains Workshop (+2 Leaning +1 Intrigue)

    Organise the house
    needed:15 Roll(2d20)+10(Magnus the Red): 19,11,+10 Total:40 Critical success
    Amazing it is noq completely ordered you admit the Taiga was a useful distraction and a good example of how not to do something. But at the end of the day the house is neat and tidy no longer a mess. +1 Stewardship Shirou gains the trait Conscientious
    Intrigue
    The remains of the Fire
    needed: 55 rolled: Roll(1d10)+10(Magnus the Red):4,+10+Roll(2d20)+10(Magnus the Red):16,16,+10Total:56 bare artificial success
    Thanks only to the efforts and advice of Magnus you were able to find were source was, whatever was here has gone some time ago but you(Magnus) see the slight traces of the presence of the one you came by here being lightl on the boy Shinji as well as heavily on the his sister Sakura.

    (Magnus) Needed: 100 rolled:Roll(12d20)+0: 7,12,18,20,14,8,3,16,16,17,2,14+0 Total:147 critical success

    Though Magnus confirms that neither are responsible he reveals something else to you find rather intriguing as well as slightly disturbing. It appears that Sakura is infested with some for of creatures, several of them seems to be tainted by the source of that fire, this cannon be good news advanced Biomancy Research available once advance Biomancy options have been unlocked

    Magi
    needed 25
    Roll(1d10)+10(Magnus the Red):5,+10+Roll(2d20)+10(Magnus the Red):9,7,+10 Total:41 artificial success
    You discover that besides Rin and possibly Sakura there are two other Magi in residence at Fuyuki once seems to be in residence at the local Church though Magnus warns you to be weary of him. The other seems to be the one who took the source of the fire and integrated it into Sakura. This one seems dangerous as it seems that he has spread himself into these familiars as you discover they are called throughout the city, though what are they doing in Sakura and why, you do not know Magus may be able to find out but not right now. Kirei Kotomine discovered, Zouken Matou Discovered, Magnus options unlocked Investigate Sakura Matou
    Learning
    Divination
    needed 20: rolled: Roll(1d10)+10(Magnus the Red):8,+10+Roll(3d20)+10(Magnus the Red):17,7,16,+10 Total:68 Resounding success
    It seems that you are progressing rather well in this so well in fact that Magnus believes that your are ready to move one from just willing the future of the moment and willing it to occur and believes that you should move onto predicting more than just you immdiate Shirou gains Primaris Power Prescience Rank 03, Foreboding Rank 02 and Perfect Timing Rank 02

    Biomancy:
    needed: 20 rolled: Roll(1d10)+10(Magnus the Red):4,+10+Roll(3d20)+10(Magnus the Red):11,1,12,+10 Total:48 resounding critical success
    Your Biomancy is good, you are not only able to mend your wounds now you are able to strengthen your body making it ore durable than most others. Still Magnus says that you should focus on making it harder than metal, still Magnus is telling you that now you should focus outward as well effecting things that is not your own body but first perhaps projecting your energy outward, can't hurt to try, can it?. Shirou gains Primaris Power Iron Arm Rank 02, Endurance Rank 02, Warp Speed Rank 01

    Library Binge
    needed: 10 rolled: Roll(1d10)+10(Magnus the Red):4,+10+Roll(3d20)+10(Magnus the Red)4,20,16,+10 Total:64 astounding success
    You have almost read everything worth reading about history and the world in general in this month, while some of the staff are quite pleased that a child is rather interested in this, they also note how fast you read, perhaps you and Magnus should tone it down a bit.

    Learn Thaumaturgy from Kiritsugu
    needed: 55 rolled: Roll(1d10)+10(Magnus the Red):3,+10+Roll(3d20)+10(Magnus the Red)6,16,19,+10 Total:64 artificial critical success
    It is mainly thanks to Magnus that you are able to start learning from Kiritsugu, though this is also due to the Magus Killer himself not being a good teacher, though he does admit you are quite talented once you get going. Thaumaturgy options unlocked.
    Finally took me the better half of two hours to get this done, anyways on the Omakes if they are reasonable or if they are what I'm looking for I will make them canon like above.
     
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    Shirou Char sheet (Updated)
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    First Name: Shirou
    Last name: Emiya (Adopted)

    Traits
    Attractive: While if you were allowed to mature naturally without the changes worught you would have still been a handsom young man. Thanks to Magnus your features are now one of a kind and give off an exotic feel +1 Diplomacy + 30 opposite gender opinion
    Curious: You have no memories of who you were before the fire as such all is new to you and must be discovered + 1 to Stewardship
    Diligent: though you are not sure why, you cannot leave your work half done or do a poor job of it. +1 Diplomacy, Martial, Stewardship, Intrigue, Learning +10 Vassal Opinion.
    Conscientious: You wish to see the things your start finished +1 to Stewardship
    Aspiring Sorcerer: +2 Learning, Martial +1 Intrigue, Stewardship (unlocks options Psyker Powers, Arena Tome, Forbidden Lore, The Book of Magnus, Warpcraft, Sorceror Options)

    Mindscape (Reality Marble)
    -Spires of Prospero +2 learning, +1 Stewardship (other features locked until trait Scholar is gained)
    -Arena of Perturabo +3 to martial (Other features locked until trait Duelist is gained)
    -Magnus the Red, the Crison King +10 to all rolls taken if he is interested in them, can reroll failed rolls up to three times (ulocks the chance for Shirou to gian the Trait Psyker, Sorceror)


    Diplomacy: 11+1+1=13 You are fairly talented for a child at diffusing situations, just a little above the average adult
    Martial: 23+1+3+2=29 There is something special or wrong about you no child should be this skilled in combat. Your Talents in the art of war and death will attract the attention of others, human and otherwise
    Stewardship:18+1+1+1+1+1=25 You are almost impossibly talented at keeping things in order and taking care of the, reaching the level of a specialised adult
    Intrigue: 25+1+2=28 You are better than most professionals if not all, something which they do not expect, the fact that you are not even a decade old catches them off guard even further
    Learning: 33+1+2+2=37 Your learning capacity is to be put bluntly unnatural if not inhuman, Adults can no longer justify this as the fact that you have amnesia and must learn quicker . They are right
     
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    • @M3lk0r looking at the last update Shirou's intrigue should be at 28 and learning at 37. Also we didn't get anything for library Binge Reading?
     
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    Red Bovine said:
    @M3lk0r looking at the last update Shirou's intrigue should be at 28 and learning at 37. Also we didn't get anything for Binge Reading?
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    in my defence I was going to bed.
    Also you did unfortunately though it is more of pertaining to the history of Mankind, Since Magnus was helping you skim read it while reading it in whole. Still if this gets to the grail war you will be able to identify some Servants
     
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    Canon Omake: Magnus and Kiritsugu 02
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    • Omake: The better way
    Magnus felt amused as he looked at the Magus Killer's expression. "So you don't desire to teach the boy then?" he asked.

    Kiritsugu stared at Shirou's body which Magnus was currently using "There must be another way, Shirou deserves a better life than the one I lived" he states grimacing at certain memories of his work.

    "But still it is necessary, you and I are different. But you are aware of how terrible Magi are and what some of them could do if there was no one to stop them."

    Reluctantly Kiritsugu nodded but Magnus was not yet done "this may sound strange when coming from one such a I but whenever some of my sons have have tried to use, how shall we say this elaborate methods and intricate schemes, all of those plans unravel as they perish slain by the Officio Assassinorum. In some ways the Assassin is the one who saves worlds preventing them from being consumed by death misery and mutation."

    The Magus Killer thought back to the day he killed his father, the day he was forced to kill his friend Shirley and then Natalia the women who was the closest thing he had to a mother, slamming his hand against the wall he said "He shouldn't walk down that path, I know better than most that it will only lead to suffering."

    Magnus patiently waited for Kiiitsugu to finish before he spoke again "Yes" he agreed" the world will suffer, but it can only suffer because it still exists. Neither of us may be able to, even Shirou may not but perhaps there will be others who will find a better way, until then this must continue, hope can betray you, but then again to give up without even attempting is not the way of a Hero, eh?"

    Kiritsugu sighed "I still don't like the idea of this" he stated.
    To the Magus Killer's surprise Magnus let out a chuckle "neither do I" the Crimso King admittered "did you know that when I was less than five years old my dream was to become a scholar?"
     
  • Sidestory
    • Canon Omake Red vs Blue 01
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    • Diplomacy Keeping up appearances (Sakura and Shinji, Red vs Blue)
    Shirou was not really sure how he entered into a conversation with this boy, apparently this child thought of his sister as his personal property Shirou had been inclined to argue against it. Still Shinji as he had called himself rebuked and insulted him for this though his grounds on doing so were nonexistent.
    "Anyway I don't want to see you talking to Sakura again, got it?" he ordered.

    Shirou looked at him raising an eyebrow at how arrogant the boy could be and shook his head "I don't see how you can propose to give me instructions" the red haired boy told the blue haired one. "You do not possess any form of authority over me and if I find that your sister is pleasant company and wish to talk to her I shall do as I see fit?" though the way you said this was with a complete lack of emotion somewhat caused Shinji to shiver at the monotone used.

    The blue haired boy's face twisted into a snarl "talking that way to your betters red head?" he asked though it was clear that he was definitely better than no one. "Perhaps I should teach you a lesson"" he suggested before taking swipe at Shirou with his arm.
    To Shirou the blow was poor and needed (a lot) more work. Casually steeping to the side he Shirou avoided the blue haired boy's blow and delivered a kick to Shinji's knee causing the other boy to collapse onto the dirt.

    "Why you, red haired frea-" Whatever else Shinji may have been attempting to say was cut off as Shirou a good pupil had taken Kiritsugu's lessons in combat to heart and followed up with another kick, this time to Shinji's head. This caused the boy to collapse onto the ground while moaning and crying in pain, while the blow he had been given was by no means pulled Shirou had still held back enough not to cause serious damage, though this was done at Magnus's instruction rather than his volition.
    <Having unnatural Blue hair and calling you a freak for you unnatural Red hair> Magnus noted before he makes a noise akin to sniffing <Is that hypocrisy I smell around him?> the Crimson King asked not that ShIrou was going to answer him given that he was currently in a fight (beatdown) Not giving Shinji any more time to breathe Shirou kicked him in the stomach before delivering another kick to his face, this time there was an audible crack as the force he used may have been a tad too much causing Shinji's nose to fracture.

    This would have continued further but Shirou felt a cold hand on his shoulder as a meek and soft voice spoke "please don't hurt niisan anymore" Sakura asked "Ojiisan will be upset if he is too hurt" she explained. Shinji on his part lay on the a crying pathetic wreck, not that he was worth sympathy.

    <She is not asking out of compassion it seems> Magnus who had taken an interest in this mused <the girl is merely stating facts> he explained. <I would do as she requests> the Crimson King advised before adding <for now, this will not be the first nor will it be the last time you will be confronted by him, though perhaps next time neither of us might be in a merciful mood> he informed Shirou before chuckling <I would rather like to see how well he implode when he is shot with lightning> the suggestion wasn't subtle but then again it wasn't meant to be.

    Shirou looked at Sakrura and then back to Shinji then like he had been instructed he mimicked a kind smile "If that is the case then Sakura I will stop." the Red haired Boy stated.

    <He will attempt to take this out on her> Magnus informed Shirou.

    Turning back to look at Shinji, Shirou walked up to the boy and knelt down to his ear "If you think about taking any of this out on here I will make the pain that I will inflicted legendary and beyond anything this world has ever seen" he whispered into Shinji's ear his voice containing traces of the Crimson King's as well, with his words holding power causing his blue haired counterpart to shiver in fear. Was it Magnus of Shirou who spoke just then perhaps it was boy, it did not matter as when he got up and turned to Sakura he once again mimicked a smile "alright Sakura, now that, that is settled is there anything you would like to do for fun?" he asked

    If Sakura were a normal child she would have been shocked at this and how Shirou just casually went from beating another boy to asking her on what to do for fun, but as Fate would have it she was not a normal child.

    <I will have to check up on her later> Magnus noted <whatever those things are doing in here I doubt that they are there for benign purposes.>
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    • Aburg7 said:
    No he just broke his nose unfortunately, though I do hope Shinji will be on the receiving end of these beatdowns frequently
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    nee-san -> truncated form of Onee-san -> Term for elder sister
    nii-san -> truncated form of Onii-san -> Term for elder brother

    Though IIRC Sakura uses nii-sama, as a more formal way to put it.
     
    You know, I'm fairly sure that Shinji wasn't nearly as bad as this when he was a kid. Maybe a bit of an ass, but he certainly had the charm at this point. It was at about middle school when his assholishness started to peak, before it rose to professional scumbag levels when he learned he wasn't the Matou heir.
     
    ryuan said:
    You know, I'm fairly sure that Shinji wasn't nearly as bad as this when he was a kid. Maybe a bit of an ass, but he certainly had the charm at this point. It was at about middle school when his assholishness started to peak, before it rose to professional scumbag levels when he learned he wasn't the Matou heir.
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    Yeah, right about this time Shinji doesn't like Sakura after finding out she is to be the family heir and not him but it's years yet before he becomes a scumbag. Heck, he was the perfect older brother when Sakura was first adopted .
     
    I think he finds out that he's not the heir much later, not when he was still a kid. I mean, I might be wrong but at this time they simply keep him away from any magus business, and later he finds out those things on his own.

    At least that's what the manga said last time I read it.
     
    ryuan said:
    I think he finds out that he's not the heir much later, not when he was still a kid. I mean, I might be wrong but at this time they simply keep him away from any magus business, and later he finds out those things on his own.

    At least that's what the manga said last time I read it.
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    In the Manga SHinji has more redeemable qualities, in the Visual Novel and Anime he was the victim of his father's and Zouken's abuse, he was bit of an ass back then. Most likely he was originally an ass under Zouken's instruction, the Worm wanted to keep Sakura meek, after all look at Heaven's Feel for what happens when she gets a backbone
     
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