[Exalted, ?] Most High

Hm, I don't know if they would come up with Churchill's exact words, but there might be a DB that's good at social among 'em. You guys lost the Strategic Maneuver roll, though, so the army is not going to be as useful as you'd like. Are you guys still sure about attacking the Duke first?
 
Hm, I don't know if they would come up with Churchill's exact words, but there might be a DB that's good at social among 'em. You guys lost the Strategic Maneuver roll, though, so the army is not going to be as useful as you'd like. Are you guys still sure about attacking the Duke first?
Maybe killing Behemoth?,This feel like more thematic that way,

while both army kill eac other enough,then the leader on both side duel each other.
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Oh, I could have been writing an omake for Contemplation… but instead, I wrote missing scenes from the script for The Odyssey: greatest soap opera of our time.

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Days of Our Exalted Lives
Rihakuquest omake


Uly, walking in from off-stage: Among the rank and file students, it seems to be an open secret that I am the son of Lung Feng Zao.
Moon: Well, you do have a certain grumpiness in common.
Uly: I'm not, though. … Probably. 90% sure, at least.
Nilul: Anyway, isn't Moon Zao's daughter?
Moon: Nilul, really, you should stop making these wild accusations. I'm Zao's daughter, you're the daughter of the absent Scarlet Empress, Uly is an Anathema…
Nilul: Uly is an Anathema.
Moon: … Oh yeah. That one's right, anyway.
Uly: Must you persist in calling me Uly?
Moon: Quiet, Uly! This is important! I mean, if I was Admiral Zao's daughter, wouldn't that make Uly my brother?
Uly: No, I'm a Sesus. Though it turns out Zao is actually my child, born of the Fairest among the Sidereal Anathema.
Moon: That bitch!
Nilul: And you know this because…?
Uly: I have very good memory of my past life. I'm not actually certain who the Fairest is, but -
Ivory, suddenly: Chejop Kejak.
Moon: Gesundheit.
Ivory: No no, the Fairest Sidereal's name was Chejop Kejak. You won't know him, since we - I mean they, they - like to hide amongst the dragonblooded and work their schemes as the viziers and shepards of fate. But he basically looked just like Zao. Beards were in style at the time, you see, Odyssial himself had a very nice goatee -
Moon: 'Him?' That bitch!
Uly, in the manner of a revelation: … Hmm. She seems to be right. The relevant memory was just unlocked. I think I'm going to need to look into some technique for locking memories again.
Nilul: How exactly did he…? And you…?
Uly: First Age technology, apparently.

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Moon: But you remember your reincarnations? That's amazing!
Uly: Ivory does too, although she's still convinced we were evil.
Ivory: Well, you did try to remake the world in your own image.
Uly: You helped!
Ivory: And I feel really bad about that!
Moon, loyally: I'm sure it would have been a better world.
Uly: I like to think so.
Nilul: Can you imagine the constant training, though?
Uly: I'd probably have remade people into their optimal forms without need for training. Though I'd hate to obviate the need for training entirely, since I'm not sure what I'd do without it-
Nilul: Moon, hopefully.
Moon, looking thoughtful.

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Uly: I wonder how the Empress got the codes to the Sword of Creation. It should only work for very specific people… such as myself.
Zao, descending as the thunderbolt: Ulyssian, if you could control the Realm defense grid and never bothered to mention it -
Uly: I haven't remembered yet.
Zao, exit stage right: Ah. Carry on, then.
Uly, thoughtfully: Maybe we should stop holding our meetings on the Academy grounds.
Nilul: Only if you want to host a dramatic and revelatory reunion between myself and one of several demons.
Moon: Demons?
Nilul, firm nod: From Hell.
Uly: In any case, I suppose it's possible she's of the line of one of the six or so First Age solars that could control it…
Nilul: Like yourself.
Uly: Possibly.
Nilul: That might make my plan to claim direct descent from her and install myself as Empress awkward.
Uly: What would be awkward about that?
Nilul: Well, I was going to claim we were sleeping together, for the extra security. I don't know if I want to now though, since you might be my great-to-the-nth-degree grandfather.
Moon: It's not like nobody in the Great Houses has never-
Nilul: Let's just cut you off there, I think. When in Creation did little Moon learn that tidbit of Realm culture?
Moon: … I like romance novels.

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Uly: Nilul, why am I out here when I could be enacting prophecies that will steer the navy into a better course?
Mountain Hero: Well I don't know about all that, but Nilul said she'd take me out for tacos. And this guy is totally the best, I eat here all the time!
Uly: … Well now I just look like a dick. Wait, if Nilul said she'd get you tacos, why -
Nilul: Uly, you know how much Mountain Hero likes tacos.
Uly: But why am I -
Nilul: Well, you know how dangerous it is for me to leave the Academy, you wouldn't want me to get into trouble, would you? I could have a dramatic meeting on the street like that -
Nilul, snaps fingers.
Taco vender turns around: No, don't worry girl, I'm not one of yours.
Uly: Polemgaos! I knew you were immortal after all! So all along, you faked your death, and… made… tacos. What, why would you fake your death just to make tacos?
Mountain Hero: Well, he was a hero and luminary and all that, right? Maybe what he really wanted to be, more than any of that, was a food stall vendor!
Polemgaos: Actually, after the fight I had developed short-term amnesia. Wandering aimlessly, I crossed the sea and set up this taco stand. It felt like the right thing to do. Gradually, my lost memories returned, culminating in this moment!
Uly: So, you didn't come back from the grave to seek revenge?
Polemgaos: I guess I could, if you wanted me to? You impudent brat.
Uly, pondering...
Nilul: Oh come on, Uly, you can't really intend to -
Mountain Hero, serious: Nilul, let the man decide.
Nilul: But Hero, there's no point -
Mountain Hero: Well, we haven't spent the special effects budget for this episode, a climactic fight scene could really bring in the viewers we lost after that arc with the Cygnus casino.
Nilul: Hey, that casino scene was awesome! Plenty of cheesecake with us in our dresses, cunning cheats, that moment when security came down on us and Uly came up with that idea to hide the jade inside a hollow Goremaul... James Bond couldn't have done a better casino scene!

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Saery: I'm so glad you could visit my home, Uly. House Nellens may be humble compared to Sesus, but I like to think it's nice. I'll give you the grand tour - the dojo, the bailey, my bedchambers -
Uly: What was that last one?
Saery: The bailey. It's very nice, we have a red and black jade mural of Nellens and the Empress.
Uly: … Okay. Let's go see that bailey.

Uly, looking at a serious, vaguely hawkish man in a red robe: Quite a sober fellow, isn't he?
Saery, looking back and forth: Dragons, it's like looking into a mirror. Though he is a snappier dresser than you, Uly. Also, like Nilul was here. I wonder why no one seems to notice she looks just like -
Uly: I'm sure I don't have any idea.
Saery: It's only, I've got this theory about evil twins, you see.
Uly, taking note of the face on the wall: … Reincarnation, do you think? I did wonder what my soul was doing, the last few thousand years.
Saery: Wow! That's neat. I'm a reincarnation too, we should form a club.
Uly: Who of?
Saery: Also Nellens.
Uly: How could we both be…?
Saery: … Twins separated at birth?
 
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I regret I have but one like to give to this. It had me chortling all the way through.

In thread related news, I'm somewhat apprehensive that something horrible will happen, to a degree that I haven't since... I think this quest started? Might just be the whole 'you're not rolling too well' thing. I do hope that the battle hasn't spread out into the city, that would just suck.
 
Second pass on the map with everything in about its proper place with the Fae coming in from the northwest from their stronghold rather than the northeast and Emerald Mountain to the east now in between the abyssals and the lunar horde. Plus Luseng itself and the refugee camps all around the walls along with the various resources. Next pass will be to add roads and such along with needed changes.

Fanwork index updated to Guile's last work.

 
Shattering Point
Shattering Point

Luseng sprawled out before him, the jewel of the North-West, a satrapy of such incredible wealth that even now, while times were unquestionably dire, their coffers still held barrels upon barrels of jade obels, stacked-high columns of silver coin, and neatly arrayed strongboxes of Realm scrip. He had toured the city's environs, its Royal Palace (now Satrap's Palace) and rosewood outer walls, its towering market and temple districts that were now over-full slums. From his vantage point on the gate-tower he could see the city entire, out to the Glittering Ford, and to his eyes it seemed a vast and delicate constellation of miniatures, painstakingly crafted, exquisitely formed, mired in dirt and shit.

The mood in the city was grave, and his arrival - the arrival of seven Terrestrial Exalts, five of them Immaculate shikari - had done little to raise hopes. His demeanor was uninspiring, he knew that, so he had mostly kept his mouth shut as they briefed him, the viziers and the dragonlords. The Fae would arrive soon, and it was his duty to learn all he could about this city that thought itself doomed.

Two days ago, Zao had told him that he'd honestly expected it to be worse. Anys Syn's interference was crippling, but Ulyssian had had four full months to prepare, to train in relative peace before being released to confront the world. They'd had a plan, and they'd executed it, and Zao's Solar protege had grown strong. It was more than he'd expected, though not more than he'd hoped for.

He had passed the Naval Exam, but this was his first real test, true responsibility at the highest ranks of power. Millions depended on his blade now. It would have been everything he'd dreamed of as a mortal, if he hadn't been sent to fail.

The Legion auxiliaries, at least, had competent reconnaissance officers, and so they knew the form of the doom that was to fall upon them.

Ten thousand Wyld horrors, hobgoblins and stranger things, and at their head three hundred full Cataphracts, the hunt-masters and celebrated knights of the Fair Folk. Their siege engines were Behemoths, ragged cast-offs of dismantled worlds: one a titan of mottled flesh, faceless, with raw bludgeons for fists, seventy meters high, that exhaled fire and forge-light; and the other a great spider of sharpened glass, pale green and violet, whose limbs hummed and shrieked as they cut the air. Upon that spider rode Duke Iron Sislay, who had in his time cut down fourteen of the Exalted and two Anathema besides, a great conquerer among the Fair Folk whose sword of false steel reflected lurid blue in the daylight.

Sislay Chorus was a freehold, but it was no shallow province. Empress Slay commanded a dominion that harvested millions of mortal lives, hundreds of leagues in radius. It was the equal of the greatest Lunar domains, and that was how it had survived for six centuries in a Creation that feared and despised it.

He could hear the rumbling of that army as it rolled towards them. The troops marched in uncanny lockstep, hobgoblins and horrors broken to the will of their Cataphract minders. They were coming, faster than he'd predicted, and moving with a coordination that eclipsed even the dedicated drill of the Ghost-Water Legion. He turned to watch as the army spilled across the horizon, a seething tide, pennants flapping and curling in the air, pikes upraised with mortal skulls impaled upon them. They blanketed the countryside in apparent moments, drowning out the greenery: a titanic and outstretched hand come to crush Luseng within its grip. At the front strode the behemoths, whose steps boomed like thunder, and Ulyssian heard from the city the cold, desperate clarion of the trumpets, as they called its defenders to action.

His eyes, keener than any mortal's, picked out the Duke atop his spider mount, and the Duke looked back with eyes of sapphire blue, saluting jauntily with his scimitar flange. A mocking smile adorned the great noble's feature, a preening certainty in his victory. Ulyssian found himself unusually irritated. Was this what passed for 'Iron,' among the Fair Folk? Or was his name merely an 'ironic' misnomer?

Below, the Dragonlords called their troops to order, a small tide of men pouring out of the barracks in Nellens blue and grey, manning the walls of Luseng with crossbow and spear. Ulyssian stepped down from the Gate Tower and met Dragonlord Talomar on the walls. The Dragonlord was grim, now, his dark blue hair soaked through with sweat; not at all like the haphazard, vaguely innocent man Ulyssian had encountered on the harbor docks. He'd been chewing a bun between breaths then, apologizing for his rudeness while maintaining that a soldier needed to eat to optimize performance. Ulyssian was all about forgoing social niceties to optimize performance, so it was hardly a black mark in his eyes.

"They've got us outnumbered," Talomar shook his head, tugging his beard worriedly. "And outmaneuvered, too. Your orders were clear, and the soldiers seemed to take to them well, but... this Iron Sislay, he's fought Exalted generals before. Tangled with our commander quite a few times, in skirmishes, and came out on top more often than not. His positioning counters our walls too well."

"I will take the field," Ulyssian cut in, "tell the soldiers that they are to fire on me with no concern, so long as they strike the enemy as well."

"...What?" Talomar asked, shaking his head as if in disbelief. "Sir, we've got-"

A few soldiers turned to look at them, drawn by Talomar's outburst.

Ulyssian held up a hand. "Dragonlord, they're moving quickly. We don't have time, so let me finish my instructions. Tell the other Dragonlords that they are not to rescue me under any circumstances, even if it looks like I will fall. The Exalted are to hold the wall at all costs. Accelerate the migration of the refugees into the city proper. Deploy a half-wing of Legionnaires and a dragon of militia into the Blue-Light District to facilitate refugee placement into those streets. Place the Shikari alongside the troops at the Central Gate. They are to intercept and delay the behemoths if any wander too close. Otherwise, I leave the tactical decision-making to the discretion of individual Dragonlords. Am I clear?"

"Yes, sir." Talomar said, crisply but not without hesitation.

Ulyssian gave him a nod. "Iron Sislay may have been the better general this day, but we will show him who the better warriors are. Dismissed."

Above, the sun beat down on the Satrapy of Luseng - its rustling verdure, its shimmering, white-capped peaks. The air was clean and chill, despite the filth of the once-beautiful city, and the festering swarm before it. Sesus Ulyssian climbed to the top of the Gate Tower, until he was nearly at-height with Duke Iron Sislay, and called forth his blade.

The booming of drums came from the Hobgoblin host, a tidal wave of sound that rushed over them, unsettled the stomach and rattled the bones. Ulyssian stood unblinking as the tension built, as the air grew thick with hate and murderous intent, and as the scarlet-clad Cataphracts raised their swords, as they opened their mouths to bellow the charge-

He struck.

In a single blinding arc he vaulted from the Gate-Tower, a sword plunging through heedless sky to land embedded in the spider-behemoth. It shuddered beneath him, cracks rippling through it like the webs of its lesser kin, and made to shriek, but its movements were too slow, and he was already moving, dashing forward, blade drawn to thrust and cut. The Raksha Duke met him on that battlefield, the behemoth's flesh like a lake frozen over, their reflections rippling across its surface, a hundred times in a ringing second.

That was the exchange, orichalcum against steel, and as it progressed it became overwhelmingly clear that mere generalship would not protect Iron Sislay from Odyssial's Ambition. The sword like a scythe fell, and the space in which Sislay could move became ever more constrained. He panted, arrogance leeching from his features, even as he grinned at Ulyssian. Between sword-strokes he spoke, and his voice was a mocking caricature of Ulyssian's own.

"Tell the soldiers that they are to fire upon me with no concern, so long as the enemy is struck! Hm... I like it." The grin turned savage as reality twisted, and then came the arrows.

The Cataphracts, milling about the legs of the spider-beast, their bows of lucite and golden wood launching curdled dreams. Arrows that passed like ghost-fire through the Duke of Sislay, even as they sought Ulyssian ferociously. But his blade was swift, and around him its blurring afterimages built a nimbus like a porcupine's hedge. He turned aside their countless arrows while maintaining his assault, and then the Duke began to despair.

The other behemoth struck next, its fists like falling hills, glowing dull-red like iron from the forge, but with a complexion somewhere between mottled flesh and mottled stone. Its blows were ponderous, though, and easily read; Odyssial stepped between them unconcerned. Splotches of blood began to mar the Duke as his defense was systematically dismantled. Before Ulyssian's onslaught, his limbs and blades were slowly pushed into a helpless configuration, like an unruly constellation facing the judgement of the Sun.

Then came the hobgoblins and their feral slings, a skyward avalanche that blotted out the sky, but Ulyssian moved like a dancer between raindrops, the incident arcs of his sword sufficient to ward off that assault. A few struck glancing blows, for there was simply no room to evade them all, but the Storm Armor rebuffed them with effortless contempt.

"This is what your army amounts to," said Odyssial. "Duke of Raksha, did you have enough men?"

Sislay said nothing, for a final time lashing out, his blade shooting forward with unnatural speed, pulled through reality as if by a vigorous current. Odyssial parried the blow, spinning with the force; the tremendous power behind it cratered the glass beneath him. Ambition glowed as if in response, shining bright and brighter, a light which eclipsed the sun but devoid of heat, of warmth. As he completed his rotation it seemed to grow heavier, shearing through the air like a blade-shaped meteor. As he struck, it fell like a world descending, the air cracking and splintering around it, as if reality had burst a seam. Straight through Sislay's armor it fell, that plate of oath-bound gossamer and solid nightmare; straight through his neck, and down, into the beast below him, the spider-behemoth larger than a city district.

The juddering, shivering force of that blow traveled in harmonic currents through the beast, in great shard-ripping waves, and it keened one final exhalation, which pierced the ear like a sudden knife, before shattering - not into fragments, but into blades.

No accidental explosion was this. It was killing power morphed into a pulsing wave, sent hurtling through a medium that could not contain it: that, indeed, shifted to transmit it.

Blades rained down upon the Cataphracts below, and the hobgoblins around them; blades of crystal that sang the hymn of morning, a hundred thousand fangs disgorged from the disintegrating corpse of the behemoth as it fell. Great sickles of glass scythed into the other behemoth, slicing its flesh like the layers of a cake, and from its interior, lava boiled out in hissing goops and streams. Ambition blazed like a bar of sunfire, emitting resonant waves, a light which seemed to cut through eyelid and skull to strike at the naked soul.

Duke Iron Sislay's head tumbled down, blackening to ash in the light of that blade, and the hobgoblins broke.

Samāpta, they whispered in terror, as they fled. Always the story ends. It had not always been so, but that was the law now, in Creation or out of it.

But Ulyssian was not looking at them. The lava behemoth, which trembled and staggered under the colossal weight of its wounds, now leaked unending gallons of boiling stone towards the city. Stumbling about, it emitted low groans of agony, and the disbelieving exultations of the Legion died in their throats, as a steadily rising tide of lava crept towards Luseng.

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You are not particularly suited to managing this type of incident. Unchecked, this behemoth will succeed where all its minders failed.

[ ] Organized Containment - It's too risky to kill the monster and let it potentially explode, so a Dragon-Blooded force will be sent to harry it, containing it within specified bounds as it continues to bleed out. Using Crowned by Metis, you will organize efficient evacuation and combat-engineering teams. Earth and Water aspects can build furrows to guide the lava flows across specific channels. Time is limited, so you'll have to sacrifice a fraction of the city to the burn, but if you do well, you can minimize lives lost. However, you will have to openly use Crowned by Metis, which could draw undue attention. Especially given your recent, distinctly un-DB-esque performance in battle.

[ ] Attempt to Master It - Though you have no instinct for controlling beasts, the thing seems to rightly fear Ambition's edge as one of the few weapons capable of devastating it. It's incredibly risky, but with Crowned by Metis, you can try to master the beast, as it was tamed by the Fae. Perhaps it can be somehow convinced to close up its wounds, or at least move away from Luseng. The Dragon-Blooded will have to deal with the tide of lava on their own, but the potential gains are, you feel, well worth it.

[ ] Drive it Away - Rather than risking open usage of the Metis, you could simply attack it more, hopefully forcing it to run away from Luseng. Though this will undoubtedly leave a trail of burning devastating in its wake, if you are swift about it, you could minimize damage (relatively), getting it to a safe distance before you put it down.

[ ] Write-in: A large effectiveness bonus for write-ins and stunts.
 
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So how much leeway would a Fire Caste DB have when dealing with lava? Because if we manage to divert it from destroying the city we are probably going to need a cover story in place as to how we managed to cut through a Fae army then bitchslap their Behemoth into irrelevance.
 
Ulyssian Kill Count

4 Shikari of the Immaculate Order
312 Cataphracts of the Sislay Chorus
6,977 Hobgoblins and War-horrors of the Sislay Chorus

The That Skitters, Behemoth, Last Remnant of Euclidea, Mourned by She Who Lives In Her Name
The Raksha Duke Iron of Sislay, The Raptor-Eyes, Bane of Steel and Sharpness, High General of the Sislay Chorus
Lord Cathak Polemgaos of the Scarlet Dynasty, Hero of the Realm, The Iron Serpent, Commander of the First Cathak Legion, the Ash-Dust.
 
So how much leeway would a Fire Caste DB have when dealing with lava? Because if we manage to divert it from destroying the city we are probably going to need a cover story in place as to how we managed to cut through a Fae army then bitchslap their Behemoth into irrelevance.

It is not particularly difficult for you, personally, to avoid the lava while attacking the beast. A DB could do that fairly easily as well. The main problem is the ecological-scale damage that its bleeding out inflicts.
 
Neat battle scene and scenic descriptions of Luseng.

I would like to do an organized driving away of it far enough from the city so that it can be killed with minimal collateral damage, but to do so without the aid of Metis? It would be hard, but Lore facts and war excellencies back by combat note regeneration makes it possible.

At least at this point, Phoenix Renewal Tactic isn't an absolute purchase needed. But we still need to go to the freehold to free our DBs there.

@Rihaku , any comments on stuff to fix for the map?
 
It is not particularly difficult for you, personally, to avoid the lava while attacking the beast. A DB could do that fairly easily as well. The main problem is the ecological-scale damage that its bleeding out inflicts.
Actually given that Prophet of the Seventeen Cycles can be cast instantly so long as you have spent time reviewing the material beforehand could we make a prediction along the lines of "The composition of the earthworks around Luseng and the essence flows which allow the natural refrigerated trout to be produced will prevent the Behemoth's death throes from damaging the city."
 
Well. That went better than I expected based on Rihaku's earlier comments. I'm starting to see a distinct pattern here, which is usually reserved only for the antagonists in Rihaku -quests:

"Don't underestimate Ulyssian/Odyssial."
 
Neat battle scene and scenic descriptions of Luseng.

I would like to do an organized driving away of it far enough from the city so that it can be killed with minimal collateral damage, but to do so without the aid of Metis? It would be hard, but Lore facts and war excellencies back by combat note regeneration makes it possible.

At least at this point, Phoenix Renewal Tactic isn't an absolute purchase needed. But we still need to go to the freehold to free our DBs there.

@Rihaku , any comments on stuff to fix for the map?

It will take a while for me to go into detail and plan out everything geographically speaking, so I will comment later. Remind me if I forget.

Organization isn't really necessary to drive it away, it's scared enough of you. But there's only one you, so you can either lead efforts to minimize the damage, or personally drive it away. The other DBs are much, much less powerful than you (because you are powerful, not because they are DBs), and cannot be relied upon to do more than contain it, prevent it from wandering around or going into a rampage.
 
Would crown of metis be visible for the second option?

To the sharp-eyed, yes.

Actually given that Prophet of the Seventeen Cycles can be cast instantly so long as you have spent time reviewing the material beforehand could we make a prediction along the lines of "The composition of the earthworks around Luseng and the essence flows which allow the natural refrigerated trout to be produced will prevent the Behemoth's death throes from damaging the city."

You didn't spend a full day studying such things, so it can't be cast yet. Also, the layout of Luseng makes that an impossible prediction to make - circumstantial bonuses aren't large enough to protect a city from Lava Hazard-level threats by themselves, and the city walls and trout aren't strong enough to remotely stop lava. Prophet doesn't let you actually alter reality, so it's not the solution here.

Well. That went better than I expected based on Rihaku's earlier comments. I'm starting to see a distinct pattern here, which is usually reserved only for the antagonists in Rihaku -quests:

"Don't underestimate Ulyssian/Odyssial."

Well, you did roll really badly for damage, it's just that the enemy armies ended up doing a total of 1 Initiative damage to you so it didn't matter.
 
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