To make people actually remember, here's it once for posterity: Minako is nonbinary and uses they/them. This message will be pinned so you people stop getting it wrong and pissing me off. If you get it wrong in the future I'm going to be much less nice, considering you have to scroll past it just to read the quest.
 
I was gonna say it looks like Chiaki!

Who, you know, did actually seperate from Madoka and end up a little healthier without the obsessive crush leading her life. So maybe that's an inspiration to follow, here.

Now where can we find a green haired magical girl to hang out with Homu? Who is the danger.
Nemo no. GREEN HAIR IS THE DANGER
 
HomuTomi is now canon Moiderah and there's nothing you can dooooooo~ :V

That is, if you want to do something about it :confused:

Moe!Homu and Swag!Hitomi OTP fite me

Yeah, that does sound about right.
 
CHAPTER 1 - FINALE - Cosmic Hero


[Cosmic Hero]


Their name is Minako, and they're running down the stairway as quickly as they can. Their phone was left in the room. They didn't want to be tracked. They think about that way too much as they run down the street in a terrible school skirt and a loose hoodie and a bad knee because holy shit they just realized how much it hurts to be in a shitty raft on a rocking magical sea.

They stumble over themselves. They look over their shoulder.

They'd seen too much. There's too much they want to do. Their mind goes back to Takane. To Takane lying on the ground. They think about how helpless they were.

They think about how their moms want to keep them safe. They think about how every single thing they'd done to keep them safe was pointless because they found out anyway. There was no way out. There was no way this could have held together.

There are very few ways for them to really deal with a world that they know is held together by toothpicks and duct tape and silly string.

They round a corner; they're definitely not far enough away from their moms. As soon as they know that they escaped, they're gonna look for them.

Mina really hopes their moms don't see this happening.

In the middle of an alleyway, they finally come to a stop. Their feet slide across the ground. It's back behind a failing food shop; nobody comes here because all the produce is rotten and all the food smells and all the meat is moldy and the manager is a prick.

Minako hates this place.

It's perfect.

They slide into place, take a deep breath. Finally, they turn.

And of course, they see it.

They see it staring at them in the dead of night, two beady red eyes cutting through the gloom.

'Have you come to a decision?'

It licks its paw and flicks at its left ear.

Minako stares at it. The question hangs like a weight in the air. They keep their eyes on Kyubey. The creature doesn't nod, doesn't do much else but paw and claw at itself like a cat, but the movements are too perfect. Too regular. It flicks its ears once every five seconds, licks its paw every seven, flicks its tail every four. Sometimes, the movements are staggered if they would otherwise overlap.

Minako takes a deep breath in.

'You get the power to protect the ones you love, but more importantly...' It finally lifts itself up on all four legs '...you get to understan-'

"Shut the fuck up." Minako raises their hands. "I'm not doing this for you."

'Of course not.' The creature flicks its tail. 'But I do know you're doing it to understand, even if just a little. Honestly, it is interesting. You really are your mothers' child.'

Minako clenches their fists. "Have there ever been-"

'Children of magi? Yes. But the last child of a magi was well over a hundred years ago. He contracted, only to die the next day.'

Minako's eyes flicker towards the concrete, downcast.

'I said that there were risks. There is always a risk. Being a magi is dangerous, lethal work. Everyone has said as much.'

"Do you really take their souls out of their bodies?"

'Of course. That's how being a magi works. The same vulnerabilities of the human body are what limit the strengths of the soul. The soul needs to be separated in order for its full power to be realized. And it needs to stay pure, or else the energy of the soul will become unstable. Your significant other was completely accurate.'

Minako keeps their eyes locked on the creature. They look up to the night sky, at the moon slowly drifting across. It's the Harvest Moon, massive and yellow in the night sky, hanging overhead in this filthy, grungy alleyway filled with decayed cardboard boxes and rotten fish and god it smells so bad.

But then they look down. "How strong would I be? I can't just sit back again. I don't want to do that again."

'You are the child of a magi. Rare and truly special, indeed. Two magi, two exceptionally powerful magi at that, and while only Kyouko carried you to term, soul inheritance is more than just genetics. You are a strong one, Minako Miki-Sakura.

'But strength alone doesn't save magi. Are you still willing? Are you still able? Are you ready to dedicate yourself? To make the wish that will make your soul shine?'


Minako clenches their fists. They stare at Kyubey, then they open their hands. They think about everything that has happened these past few days. They think about how everyone told them not to. Their mom said it was a bad idea. So did Takane.

They said Kyubey was a liar. And, well, it is. To some extent.

Contracting would be fucking stupid. It would be putting their own life at risk. No wish is worth it.

No wish except...












 
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CHAPTER 1 - AUTHOR'S NOTES


Sayakaquest 2 was always going subvert that happy ending. You kind of need to if you want to have real conflict, if you want to actually have a story that actually has an emotional core and real consequences for the characters involved.

It certainly doesn't help that SQ's happy ending is relative. It's happier for Sayaka and Kyouko, sure. They're not dead in this timeline. But witches still exist. The system remains unchanged. Kyubey didn't win, per se, but it definitely did not lose much.

I began plotting this story with the intention of revisiting characters I cared about, a setting I loved and themes I really enjoyed. I have always had an idea of where to take these characters, and, well, that idea has changed over time as my understanding of myself and the people around me have changed. It's been four years since Sayakaquest ended in real life. I am not the same person I was in 2015.

How the hell would you expect people to remain the same after twenty? An entire lifetime of change and growing, of moving forward to a terrifying, unknown future is going to change you.

Triumph isn't permanent. You cannot always hold onto your happy ending. The status quo is a transient state, a thing that shatters when pushed too far.

And, well, there's a point to be made about mental illness. How that which traumatized you as a child haunts you afterwards, how the things you've experienced stick to you, affect you to this day.

Mental illness does not define you but it is a part of you, no matter how much you try to ignore it. And I hope I nailed that theme in Chapter 1.

It's been a hell of a ride to the end of Chapter 1, thank you for keeping up with SQ2.

The next chapter will be in a couple of days.

Look forward to it!

In the meantime I'm going to work on the interlude, so expect that tomorrow.
 
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I've said it before, I'll say it again:

Teenagers are FUCKING DUMB HOLY SHIT YOU STUPID LITTLE SHIT.

That is all. Is gud quest even if I'm not participating much.
 
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I shouldn't have been surprised, but I am, a little. That's a good thing that I am!

But in hindsight, yeah. I totally understand Minako, too - they feel defenseless, they feel left out, they feel useless. They just nearly watched their girlfriend die and there was nothing they could do to stop it. They don't get their parents, they don't get their girlfriend... but there's a way for them to do that. And it comes with the perk of being a part of that world, too.

Blue screen quest.

I don't know how Sayaka and Kyouko can recover from this. I really don't.

Love for Minako. That's what'll do it.
 
I love how you write QB there, and I especially love how you put it into pure comics at the end. RSoF really has done wonders for your story economy. I think you really stuck the landing on this one fam.

Excited to see where it goes from here.
 
...considering everything, I only have one question. Is the outcome of Minako contracting always been set in stone for Chapter 1?

Aside from that, I am satisfied how everything went and will look forward to see how things go from here.
 
I love how you write QB there, and I especially love how you put it into pure comics at the end. RSoF really has done wonders for your story economy. I think you really stuck the landing on this one fam.

Excited to see where it goes from here.
Honestly I think doing RSoF as a webcomic was probably the best thing I could have done creatively. It's done wonders for my storytelling, my art, just how quickly I can produce work...

Still need to get posting the next pages of it though lol.
 
...considering everything, I only have one question. Is the outcome of Minako contracting always been set in stone for Chapter 1?

Aside from that, I am satisfied how everything went and will look forward to see how things go from here.
Given the tools we were given in the moments where it would've been important? I'm pretty sure this was a planned story-beat. All the characters involved are fucked up, and traumatized- I think the point was that as much as something could have technically been done, they couldn't prevent it, not as the people they were.
 
Goddammit Minako.

Well, at least that seems like a pretty good wish and I already have a pretty good idea in how Minako will be instrumental in taking down Rin and all her bullshit. 'Understanding' was what Team Miki-Sakura was missing.
 
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