Dark Prince of Camelot

I think the main reason I switched back to Genma is the amount of issues that calling the knights causes. I'm ultimately a supporter of we need to reveal ourselves to the Knights, or more specifically to Genma, but this is such a bad time to do so. We are only going to have so much time and then at best we're passing the phone off to Alexander. He doesn't know us and doesn't know the situation other then we're a friend of Genma. I doubt we're going to have time to come off the high and then explain ourselves and everything to the Knights before they run off and over react, which is understandable because of their lack of knowledge.
I just don't know if there's anything we can tell them that will actually help the situation. If Annabelle's heraldry has broken, there's not a lot anyone will be able to do. I'm not going to criticize those that think it's worth the risk, but I just don't see anything he'll be able to tell them that can't be told later. I don't think it's deadly, Mordred didn't die when his broke. Also if her heraldry is broken, then frankly I don't think the knights have the firepower to fight whatever is coming by themselves. This might mean Mordred is making a quick trip back to help. Tending to Genma lets him calm her down and then go from there, something he might not have time for after the fact if she runs off or has a bad reaction to the last rush. If he does have to go back, convincing Genma to support him could be just as useful, if not more, in bridging the gap between him and the others.
If there was more time I don't think there'd even be an argument, but sometimes in situations like this it's better to deal with what's in front of you then panicking and making rash decisions.
 
I think the main questions we need to ask ourselves are something like this:

1. Is Anabelle in a life threatening position, and does us calling let us convey critical information in ~3 minutes that they cannot determine on their own?

The question here is if they need to know if the soul bond is how it happened to save her. I personally don't believe they do, but that's because she's not actively being hurt through it. Some might argue that they need to know the avenue of attack was through the bond to treat her though. As far as I know we don't have enough information on the metaphysics of the soul here to know conclusively.

Assuming yes, we should call, otherwise we should go through the rest of the considerations.

2. If we don't answer yes to 1, but we call anyways, what does that accomplish and is it worth how people react to it?

Here the call is probably because we decide that we need to call to save the rapport we were building with the knights, or that while not required our information about the soul bond is still very helpful in treating her. Perfectly valid reasoning, but now we need to consider if that's worth worsening Gemma's already bad headspace while she's on magic drugs. Personally I don't think so, but some might argue that these magic drugs won't be able to give her a bad trip and she won't be able to do something stupid during the next trip. (And don't forget the risk of bringing the knights down on bone if we call them)

If we were still considering calling bone, I'd go on, but that's not really in the cards. There is the write-in sub vote of having Alexander call the breakfast club while we comfort Gemma, but that could either go really well, or really poorly. Plus it doesn't have much traction at this point so voting for it would cause vote splitting.
 
Note this is a non-canon Omake, originally I made it for an evil aligned Mordred (we went for a rogue aligment). Unless things go really bad with Annabelle or Gemma, I doubt we will be enemies of all the reincarnated knights so I don't see any reason to hold onto this.
Mordred laughed at the gathered knights.

I must say, I'm not sure if you actually believe you aren't reincarnations or you're deluding yourselves to indulge your vices without care. Like a drug addict, always coming up with more absurde reasons why they need to get their fix.

Annabelle, the tyrant warlord. No I'm through with your petulant denials. Arturia! Still the only person who matters in your mind? Well considering the power you can wield it's hardily surprising it keeps going to your head. Still it's a painful irony that you can't help but repeat your mistakes. Always the mistress to serve, never the example to emulate. In Camelot you were regal and commanding. Here you're a weepy domestic.

Gawain, the crusading knight. Ever eager to remove the stain upon your family. Never willing to look beyond the official histories. Always the mindless minion, following orders of your mistress and always blind to the cost. In Camelot you were so helpful, always encouraging others to learn and grow. Here you just want to dominate others, shove your superiority in their faces.

Percila, the harsh teacher. You taught many but it seems you've abandoned all authority in favor of being the forever helpful shoulder to cry on. Is it nice to listen to problems without actually having to fix them? In Camelot you were intrusted to teach the crown prince, aren't you proud of your work? Here you're a shameless gossip.

Berclia, the puritan inquisitor. So judgmental, so upright, so self righteous. Tell me, do you drink to forget your past or to forget the poor, lazy, drunk of a carpenter you've become? Did you perhaps finally turn your sight inwards, did what you see revolt you? Always telling others to do as you say, never as you do. In Camelot you were the great arbiter, here you aren't even a functional person without friend to lean on and drink to clear your mind.

Gala, the dutiful slave. Is it nice to finally slip from your self imposed shackles of duty? They always weighed heavy upon you during our time together at Camelot. Still I thought pretending to be another person to hide from your duty beneath your character, or have you found freedom to your liking and grown fearful of giving it up. Always the one to hide behind an excuse rather than face anything painful. In Camelot you were the shining hope for the future, sometimes I think you saw more clearly then I, a shame you could never take off those chain you placed on your own limbs. Here your a shrinking wallflower who can't even be honest with herself, much less those you call friends.

Gwynn, the politicking king, two of the most beautiful women in the kingdom pining over you and you can't be bothered to make a choice. You just had to have both, no matter the consequences to them or the kingdom. Always the arrogant prince who wants it all for free.

And last and least, Merlin, the mad mage. Still too afraid to talk to Arturia. Always the coward.

No matter the place or time you two are always the same.

I guess things never changed. Original people do not stand before me, only shadows just pretending to be different so they can hide from the revelations of what they were, what they still are!

Was going to add something about Lucy but there wasn't enough for me to go on. Also I'm working on a hero Mordred omake too.
 
Note this is a non-canon Omake, originally I made it for an evil aligned Mordred (we went for a rogue aligment). Unless things go really bad with Annabelle or Gemma, I doubt we will be enemies of all the reincarnated knights so I don't see any reason to hold onto this.
Mordred laughed at the gathered knights.

I must say, I'm not sure if you actually believe you aren't reincarnations or you're deluding yourselves to indulge your vices without care. Like a drug addict, always coming up with more absurde reasons why they need to get their fix.

Annabelle, the tyrant warlord. No I'm through with your petulant denials. Arturia! Still the only person who matters in your mind? Well considering the power you can wield it's hardily surprising it keeps going to your head. Still it's a painful irony that you can't help but repeat your mistakes. Always the mistress to serve, never the example to emulate. In Camelot you were regal and commanding. Here you're a weepy domestic.

Gawain, the crusading knight. Ever eager to remove the stain upon your family. Never willing to look beyond the official histories. Always the mindless minion, following orders of your mistress and always blind to the cost. In Camelot you were so helpful, always encouraging others to learn and grow. Here you just want to dominate others, shove your superiority in their faces.

Percila, the harsh teacher. You taught many but it seems you've abandoned all authority in favor of being the forever helpful shoulder to cry on. Is it nice to listen to problems without actually having to fix them? In Camelot you were intrusted to teach the crown prince, aren't you proud of your work? Here you're a shameless gossip.

Berclia, the puritan inquisitor. So judgmental, so upright, so self righteous. Tell me, do you drink to forget your past or to forget the poor, lazy, drunk of a carpenter you've become? Did you perhaps finally turn your sight inwards, did what you see revolt you? Always telling others to do as you say, never as you do. In Camelot you were the great arbiter, here you aren't even a functional person without friend to lean on and drink to clear your mind.

Gala, the dutiful slave. Is it nice to finally slip from your self imposed shackles of duty? They always weighed heavy upon you during our time together at Camelot. Still I thought pretending to be another person to hide from your duty beneath your character, or have you found freedom to your liking and grown fearful of giving it up. Always the one to hide behind an excuse rather than face anything painful. In Camelot you were the shining hope for the future, sometimes I think you saw more clearly then I, a shame you could never take off those chain you placed on your own limbs. Here your a shrinking wallflower who can't even be honest with herself, much less those you call friends.

Gwynn, the politicking king, two of the most beautiful women in the kingdom pining over you and you can't be bothered to make a choice. You just had to have both, no matter the consequences to them or the kingdom. Always the arrogant prince who wants it all for free.

And last and least, Merlin, the mad mage. Still too afraid to talk to Arturia. Always the coward.

No matter the place or time you two are always the same.

I guess things never changed. Original people do not stand before me, only shadows just pretending to be different so they can hide from the revelations of what they were, what they still are!

Was going to add something about Lucy but there wasn't enough for me to go on. Also I'm working on a hero Mordred omake too.
Certainly a nasty villain lecture worthy of an evil Mordred.
 
Very close vote, but I'm locking it now. Call the breakfast club wins in a tight race.

Also I saw Star Wars yesterday and
The female lead meeting/bonding with her male opposite in dream sequences? Where's my fucking royalty check Rian, you hack??????

Finally I'm aware that I missed the quest's anniversary during a period of inactivity, so I want to do something fun for Christmas. I've got some ideas for canon Christmas omakes so I'll let you guys vote on those soon.
 
Also I saw Star Wars yesterday and
The female lead meeting/bonding with her male opposite in dream sequences? Where's my fucking royalty check Rian, you hack??????
Funny story:
I was telling my spouse about the dream meetings in this quest last Thursday, and when we were watching The Last Jedi that night, I leaned over after the first vision sequence and said, "That's pretty much how things went the first time Annabelle and Mordred shared a dream, except with fewer broken noses."
 
From Embers To A Flicker

(A/N: First part here.)

For over a century, the Paladins of the Dawn began to flourish. They were not large, certainly not the equal of the Templars, Hospitallers, or Teutonics, but they had some measure of strength in numbers to themselves, and they had allies, some of their own, amidst the other orders.
Thanks to the small scraps of knowledge preserved from Camelot, they had armor and weaponry just a bit ahead of the curve.
They had a few handfuls of minor relics to make it easier against the dark, and they had three swords that bore greater power, reserved only for their most skilled and noble warriors.
They were not the Knights of the Table; their power and skill were the barest flickers of candles next to the shining stars of the Knights, or the blazing sun that was the Queen herself.
They were not even the Twelve Peers, those whose power was as unto the mountains they were fabled to split when in their way.
They were the lamp atop the hill; they were the smaller, rolling hills spread across the land.
Their power was less, but their numbers were a bit more, and their faith, bravery, and honor were just as bright as the mighty heroes across land and time.

They also tended to focus on the smaller threats that didn't make as many glorious tales. The Paladins fought not the shadow dragon that threatened to consume a city, but the shadowy things that came and stole children from cribs. They did not fight the royalty of the Fae, but they did drive back the insidious scouts of the fair-but-foul otherworldly beings. They did not throw down the Princes of the Fallen, but they drove back, with team efforts or the presence of one of the Three, the efforts of the minor demon Lords. They did not throw down the likes of the Old Ones, but they put down cults and the minor horrors they summoned. They won no prizes and few glories, but they served, they protected, and they endured. Those they saved thanked them, and they had faith, hope, and brotherhood. They were content.
But they were not perfect....

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Anno Domini 1300
Mountains of Romania

"Two more on the left flank!"
"I see them. No need to yell."
"Habit."

No more words were exchanged. Now was the time for steel and silent prayers. Two men, wearing plain-looking armor and bearing simple brown cloaks on their shoulders stood against a dozen toothed beasts that looked like a demented child's idea of a big, scary wolf. Hounds of Hell, it seemed. Or at least one breed of them. The man who had yelled was young, his eyes twinkling with determination and energy; the one who'd chastised him was a bit older, and seemed as steady as a rock. The young warrior bore a strong shield on his left arm, and a well-balanced sword in his right. The older warrior was tucking a bow away even as he drew a large, two-handed sword from his side.

For long moments, man and beast watched each other. Then, suddenly, the Hounds struck. Swords flashed. And beasts fell.

Within seconds, the Hounds were down by three, and two more received laming wounds that saw some of their fellows turn and tear their throats out. The knights focused on the immediate threats. The young one held a Hound off with his shield before tearing its belly open with his sword; instead of blood, ash and smoke poured out as the creature collapsed. The older knight just let one of the beasts impale itself on his large blade, freeing the sword by way of slicing out of the creature's body as if it was nothing but water.

By the time ten minutes had passed, none of the hounds so much as twiched, and the two men wiped ash from their blades, the younger one frowning at a couple of scratches on his shield before shrugging them off. He turned to the older knight and spoke up, curious.

"William..?"
"Yes, Hector?"
"Is that one of the Three?"
"No. Why do you ask?"
"The squires I trained with before we were apprenticed out to you and the others. They said they heard two of the trainers discussing it. Which I would have dismissed, except that just a month ago I overheard two of the newer Paladins talking about watching you wield it in battle against...against one of the Fallen."

The older Paladin is silent for long moments, cleaning his sturdy, simple blade before stowing it once more.

"And so instead of rumor-mongering, you came to me to ask, albeit after spending weeks working up the courage?"
"Uh...yes?"
"Hmph. Well. Better than some instincts, anyways."

The older Paladin begins walking back down the trail, the younger Paladin following behind.

"You didn't answer my question."
"Well, at least now you're stating. And no, I didn't."
"Will you?"
"Persistence. A virtue, even. One passed down-"
"From Camelot and beyond, yes."

The experienced warrior laughs softly.

"Fine. Yes, I have been designated as bearer of one of the Three. But it's not something I do every day; those Blades are meant for specific purposes. They allow a Paladin to be more than he was, but power tempts. After all, the-"
"The Devil was once an Angel, yes. That....hm."

The young man is thoughtful as the get to their horses and mount up, getting a steady pace going before they continue.

"What's it like?"
"Bearing one of the Three?"
"Hm. It is awesome: it fills you and others with awe. It is marvelous: you can work marvels. It is purifying."
"Purifying?"
"Like fire is to silver and gold."
"...That's not exactly pleasant."

A harsh bark of laughter.

"Bearing a weapon meant only to hurt and kill, bearing an artifact we believe to be deeply connected to an act of non-violent self-sacrifice to save others isn't pleasant? You're right, Hector. It isn't pleasant. It isn't safe. But...it is good. When you go in with the right heart and mind, you feel...certain. You feel...strengthened. And you feel driven. Protecting others is one of our codes, but with the Three, it becomes part of you like your lifesblood."
"Wow."
"Indeed. And don't mistake my words; there's no drain or addiction in using the Three. We just consider them to be terrible enough to use only in specific circumstances."

Suddenly, a voice cuts in from their right.

"Which just shows how weak you all are. Weak, short-sighted, and stuck in a dead end. You're not worthy of any of the Three."

William's face goes pale as he turns.

"Anthony? What are you saying, brother."

The man, in polished armor of blackened steel with gold highlights, his helmet's visor raised to show his sneering face framed by well-groomed hair, turns and spits on the ground.

"We are brothers no longer, William. I'm done listening to the old fools, or bowing to some arbitrary set of rules. If I didn't need you to get your Blade, I would not be bothering with this."
That was when William noticed the blade at Anthony's side. His face became as hard as stone.
"You would wield the blade of Faith and Trust against your sworn brothers? You would break faith with us, with your creed, and God? You would turn Tanglas against me?"

Anthony laughed, long and cruel, as he drew the sword, his hand wielding it expertly without even looking.

"Yes! I break 'faith' with all of you!' I don't need you or the others or this petty 'god', I just need my mind, and power!"

There was a sound like glass breaking. The broadsword he had drawn, one short enough to easily wield in one hand, went from a shining, polished steel with just a hint of blue, to a dull, pitted grey in the blink of an eye. Anthony stopped and stared, slack-jawed. He grit his teeth.

"No matter! This relic will still serve me well! It may not have been the equal of other artifacts but it holds no small signifi-AGH!"

Hector, despite wearing plate armor, had snuck around and struck Anthony unawares. The fallen Paladin lost his grip on Tanglas, the tarnished weapon beginning to fall from his fingers. His other hand reached and grabbed the point of the blad, his other grabbing near the hilt...

"No."

And then William's hand was on the hilt, and he simply twisted. The blade broke, though it was so weakened that Anthony was barely scratched.

"Damn you, William!"
"Be cautious your curse does not turn upon you, my friend."
"We are not friends! No more!"
"So mote it be."
William's own sword flashed, and Anthony's life was spared only by putting the hiltless blade in his hand between he and William. It was split in two, with a single shard flying back and striking Anthony's exposed cheek, drawing blood and sinking into his cheek. Anthony swiped the two blade fragments frantically as he backed up a few feet. He spat a phrase in some harsh tongue, and in a swirl of foul smoke he was gone.

William sighed, sheathed his blade, and took off his cloak to wrap the hilt of Tanglas up like a sculpture of glass. Hector, wide-eyed, came over.

"What happened? I thought the Three couldn't be broken?"
"Not by a foe. But if the wielder breaks the principle of the blade, it becomes worthless junk. Tanglas, the blue-fire-sword, is the Blade of Faith. Anthony abandoned the very concept, and the sword paid the price. I shudder to think what he could do with even that segment. But we have the hilt, which holds the Nail. The blade can be remade."
"Well. If it can be fixed, that's all that matters, right? Everything will be okay!"

William smiled as faint red light only he could see shone from Hector. It seemed Skoldbrann would soon have a new bearer. Then again, was not youth an eternal source of Hope?
His face fell as he thought of Peter, bearer of Tineorga. The leader of the Paladins, bearer of the shining sword of Love, would be heartbroken. Bad enough when a brother fell to the machinations of their enemies. To have a brother, a friend, and a fellow wielder of one of the Blades, turn so completely? It was tragedy of the worst sort.

"Come on, Hector. Let's go home."
"That...sounds like a good idea."
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The Blade might have been broken, but it was reforged.
In the same way, the Paladins of the Dawn were broken down and remade more than once. They were, several times, almost wiped out, but between their skills and abilities, the support of the non-"military" arm of the Dawn, and what some might call a bit of luck or Grace, they survived.
The Dark might try to consume the Light. But the Dawn always follows the Night.

Not 100% happy wit this. It got bigger than I thought it would, but once it started I couldn't stamp it out. I'll probably try a few more like this; history-type stuff, with a story-like bit in the middle. I'll try to tie it more into Gally's unique world next time; like I said this one got away from me.

Of course, now there's the potential for some twisted, fallen not!Paladins to be running around....I'm sure @Gally won't use that against us though.

P.S. The mention of the Twelve Peers is a nod to @SirLagginton 's own work.
 
So sorry it took so long to get to these, I promise I always try my best. As always they're all amazing, and I'll get rewards up as soon as I can, which probably won't be until after the holidays.

A Warrior's Remorse, a Princes Betrayal, a Bards Call

I really like the idea of using music to summon Fae, and might just make that canon even if the larger story doesn't fit with what I've planned/revealed of Mordred's flight.
A Villain, Blackhearted Omake
This is super cool, and reminds me of my earliest drafts of the story where Mordred was a straight up villain. I can't wait to see its twin.
From Embers To A Flicker
Always good to see more worldbuilding, and I like the references to the other omakes. I'll have to figure out how to work this into some of the plans I have for incorporating the canon omakes into the story.

But speaking of omakes, please vote for whichever potential story interests you the most! Voting lasts one day. I can't promise it will be very long, but it will be up on Christmas.

CHRISTMAS OMAKE VOTING
[] The Christmas War
(Or, Piper Parrish, Hero of the Lichtensteinian Empire)

[] Mistletoe
(Or, Crushing Rejection is Easier Managed with Company)

[] The Snowflake Ball
(Or, I Can't Believe You Have This Many Ex-Girlfriends)​
Adhoc vote count started by Gally on Dec 20, 2017 at 4:18 PM, finished with 23 posts and 21 votes.
 
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This is super cool, and reminds me of my earliest drafts of the story where Mordred was a straight up villain. I can't wait to see its twin.

(Or, Crushing Rejection is Easier Managed with Liquor and cCompany)
Perhaps I should send it to you in a PM because it looks like we're on the same page.

Anyway my vote.

[X] The Snowflake Ball
(Or, I Can't Believe You Have This Many Ex-Girlfriends)
 
[X] The Snowflake Ball
Clearly we are already a harem protagonist. We just need some omake to prove it.
 
[X] The Snowflake Ball
(Or, I Can't Believe You Have This Many Ex-Girlfriends)

Mordred/Morgan: "I don't have any ex-girlfriends actually, I've had a rather strict upbringing so I doubt I would have the opportunity to date anyway."

Matthew: "Bull-"

Gavin: "-shit. I can't believe you expect us to believe that. "

Matthew: "You could at least come up with something more believable if you're going to lie to us."
 
[X] The Snowflake Ball
(Or, I Can't Believe You Have This Many Ex-Girlfriends)
 
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