Built To Last

Taylor is alive, and therefore cannot have been murdered. This throws a wrench into proceedings that takes a good four days to sort out, with the only other legal precedents of similar situations not quite being applicable. Eventually it is ruled that as Taylor left a corpse behind she was murdered, but she isn't legally dead on account of, you know, not being dead. A bunch of extremely precise wording is used to avoid implicating Ruggedizer as a defendant, since everyone agrees that would be incredibly wrong morally, not to mention flatly incorrect.
It might have taken the presiding judge four days, but in practice this question would probably keep the case alive in appeals purgatory for years as it climbs up and down the court ladder, over whether Taylor should be considered "killed" if she ultimately survived it. I can see the prosecutors potentially backing down to "aggravated assault + attempted murder" for any defendant that they wanted to make sure got a guilty verdict on the top lineitem of the case.

That is, unless someone powerful thought it was important, for Some Reason, to get legal precedent started ASAP for what happens if someone unambiguously comes back from the dead.
 
Good job on the courtroom notes. It read like I was looking at the minutes of the trial without having to have multiple chapters to get through the whole thing.
 
A bunch of extremely precise wording is used to avoid implicating Ruggedizer as a defendant, since everyone agrees that would be incredibly wrong morally, not to mention flatly incorrect.
A court got everyone involved to agree on something? That right there is the most unrealistic part of this story, not the superpowers, not the coming back to life in a robot body, everyone in a courtroom agreeing on something.

Fantastic little court writeup, I greatly enjoyed reading that.
 
Frankly I'm surprised she managed to avoid being blown up in the crossfire because it's fucking nuclear. Good on her though.
Mrs. Knott was probably the one teacher that none of the students had any specific claims about, while also having possible students who stated that they considered her class to be a refuge from the bullying that they were experiencing.

Remember, Taylor was likely not the only student being bullied at Winslow, nor were the Terrible Trio likely to be the only bullies, so there's probably at least a few students besides Taylor who would note the Computer Studies class as being a refuge.

That said, Mrs. Knott is likely to be absorbed into the teaching staff of Immaculata, as they are now apparently short on staff...
 
A court got everyone involved to agree on something? That right there is the most unrealistic part of this story, not the superpowers, not the coming back to life in a robot body, everyone in a courtroom agreeing on something.

Fantastic little court writeup, I greatly enjoyed reading that.
'Morally Wrong' could easily be their cover-up for not wanting to have to call her in or blame her for effectively saving Taylor's life, plus it might have involved a certain fedora preventing anything legal about robots being applied since then Saint could reveal Dragon is an AI/robot and cause problems. Of course, the actual area the precedent would apply to depends on the court, but even having Dragon considered not a person in Brockton Bay could cause an incident if an Endbringer showed up there.

Edit: Not a lawyer or anyone who practices law
 
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'Morally Wrong' could easily be their cover-up for not wanting to have to call her in or blame her for effectively saving Taylor's life, plus it might have involved a certain fedora preventing anything legal about robots being applied since then Saint could reveal Dragon is an AI/robot and cause problems. Of course, the actual area the precedent would apply to depends on the court, but even having Dragon considered not a person in Brockton Bay could cause an incident if an Endbringer showed up there.

Edit: Not a lawyer or anyone who practices law
K: Going to note that Contessa didn't actually need to intervene here. The desire to keep the friendly robots cooperative and not get a lot of law enforcement personnel pointlessly reduced to a fine pink mist did the job just fine, in the current circumstances.
 
I'm fairly sure a good number of policemen are rethinking their life choices in general. I imagine there was fairly heavy E88 infiltration and suddenly a fair few people need to put all their time in making sure there are no paper trails whatsoever, everyone as squeaky clean as they day they were born, now that they have no patron. You will have never seen a more orderly and upstanding law enforcement force or prosecuting body.

Federal level is going to be weird for years though.
 
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The Defense Presents the Following Evidence:
  • Taylor is alive, and therefore cannot have been murdered. This throws a wrench into proceedings that takes a good four days to sort out, with the only other legal precedents of similar situations not quite being applicable. Eventually it is ruled that as Taylor left a corpse behind she was murdered, but she isn't legally dead on account of, you know, not being dead. A bunch of extremely precise wording is used to avoid implicating Ruggedizer as a defendant, since everyone agrees that would be incredibly wrong morally, not to mention flatly incorrect.
But Taylor is not alive. There may be a robot walking around that looks and acts like her, but no court would be willing to set legal precendent about life and death in this way. The legal implications are massively contentious. Likewise, this is not a defence that could be used, because it requires that this precedent already have been established. As is, this just proves that someone knows how to make realistic robot duplicates.

There is no way that everybody would agree on this. Instead, it's absolutely in the defence's interests to say that while the trio did injure Taylor severely, she was alive when she left the building, and that Ruggedizer verifiably killed her. Arguments over whether the death counts as part of the trio's crime anyway, whether it was a form of euthanasia, or something else, are going to tie things up in knots. Saying that since she was about to die it was okay to kill her early aren't going to be well-received. After all, there's "Was Ruggedizer a trained medical professional or a biotinker? No? Then if she'd kept Taylor at the scene, she might have been stabilised long enough for Panacea to get there and save her life. We don't know, and because Ruggedizer killed her, we will never know." That right there is a serious problem. If she'd tried to keep her alive and Taylor died anyway? Not an issue. But she deliberately performed an act that she knew would kill Taylor. Big problem. The defence would argue that Taylor was indeed murdered, but not by the trio.

There's plenty of people who would not consider NewTaylor to be the same person. They'd even have a point, since Worm doesn't do souls. They may not know that, but it does mean that mechanically, the only possible way this would have worked out would be as a duplicate, not a transfer. And since there's no reason that this couldn't be repeated, that means that in a couple of weeks, there could be dozens of her. Which is the original? The first off the assembly line? This is, at best, a clone. Earth Bet would have precendent for that due to tinkers, albeit she's mechanical, not organic, but they'd be considered separate (albeit very similar) individuals, and not the original.

Taylor couldn't even give evidence, as there is nothing to say that her uploaded mind wasn't altered in the process. After all, in principle, she could be reprogrammed or hacked. Who can prove that her mind and memories are purely Taylor's and untainted? The defence will love that.

This is why going into detail on a court case is something that a lot of people want to avoid in stories. It gets bogged down with details and legal interpretations. The law is extremely complex, and with the things involved here it would be a nightmare that took forever to get moving, and potentially even years to reach any kind of conclusion. A trial for a case with this many complications being set for less than a month after the incident? That's utterly inadequate to collect evidence, distribute it, analyse it, search for things to fill in the holes, etc. and build a good case. I'd expect the Defence to be the ones wanting as a trial asap, and the Prosecution to not want one. It being the other way around makes no sense,as the more rushed it is, the more the Defence benefits. There are a lot of defendents listed above. And they couldn't be packaged as a single case either, so it would take a long time to run through them all. That's not even taking appeals into account. I can see plenty of issues with the proceedings listed above.
 
L: @travellersside from a doylistic perspective, the way the trial played out in the notes lets us move on and get along with the plot without needing to bother with it much more. As for your argument about the upload process: no, that's not how it works. All the information that makes Taylor who she is was moved to her new body via quantum teleportation; this is NOT a copying process, being the most thorough example of consciousness actually being transferred that is permitted under physics.
 
There's plenty of people who would not consider NewTaylor to be the same person.

As I understand it the Judge can take a look at the Medical Evidence and issue a decision that What-ever Rugedizer did fell under Good Samaritan Laws as Attempted Life Saving Measures. Wether or not it worked is only loosely relevant to the case in question as any doctor or surgeon they can call as witness would testify that such injuries could only be survivable by supernatural, thus dead by all mundane resources. And if Law makes a Distinction between Human and Parahuman means, which we know it does, the yes legally, the locker was successful in murdering Taylor.

The Nature of Taylor's current existence and if she can even be called the same being is an entirely different question not relevant to this court.

This court has not been called to decide on the nature and existence of the Soul and the transference of personhood.

Also most likely outcome is that Taylor and all others undergoing this level of trans humanism are going to need to fill out a modified Death Certificate and a new certificate for the bringing of their Transhuman existence. After all Near-Immortals have different legal needs and for one thing may not need to retire, or be paid social security.

So much Fun with the US/Canada Government either having to actually address Transhumanism. Or brush it under a rug as something that is currently solely the field of the PRT as it can only occur by parahuman means.
 
@We Just Write I would note for the handler there are some more serious charges for things to do with covering up for sophia.
would need a lawyer to get them all but the low handing fruit of tampering with evidence,destruction of evidence, and the fact she was technically a form of parole officer has additional corruption charges to go with it too.

and for blackwall and the teachers theres a modifier/additional charges because the victims include underage individuals.

for emma not guaranteed but likely they would pick a high security mental institute by default due to the severity of the violence she was charged with.
 
Investigation 4-3
One of the nice things about getting moved over to a synthetic body was not needing to sleep. Which is why both myself and Melissa were awake at one in the morning, when Taylor showed up at our factory and rang the doorbell. We both came to the door and let the somewhat distressed teenager in.

Melissa asked first,

"Taylor, why are you here?"

As soon as the door closed, Taylor answered.

"I've got a power, and I want you to make it stop!"

I blinked.

"Please elaborate?"

Taylor sat down on one of the sofas in the factory lobby, then explained.

"It doesn't work on any of the stuff you've made for some reason, but it's like I've got computer telepathy. Doesn't matter if I've got a signal or not, I have total control and awareness of anything with integrated circuits in a three block radius."

Melissa tilted her head in confusion,

"That seems like a pretty usefu-"

Taylor interrupted her,

"Do you have any idea how many terabytes of porn are in my radius at any given moment!? Because I do, my power tells me every single detail about those files every millisecond they're in range, and I wish it didn't! Not to mention all the personal information I've accidentally stolen that I really want nothing to do with! MAKE IT STOP!"

What followed was a quick lesson on adjusting her partitions for Taylor, and she immediately slammed the door on that extremely intrusive technopathy ability. Sighing in relief, she flopped onto the floor of the lobby, all splayed out. Then she spoke,

"I'd thought I would keep it a secret and use it to be a hero, you know, airing the bad guys' dirty laundry, deleting their plans, and stuff. But there was just so much… After a couple days I just wanted to throw up. It took all my restraint not to start complaining about it during that meeting with Mrs. Cobbler yesterday."

I nodded as I sat down on the floor next to Taylor.

"Do you want a hug?"

"...yes. Can I stay here for the rest of the night?"

We thought for a moment, then Melissa answered.

"Only if you let us notify Danny where you are, so he doesn't get too worried about you."

"Okay. Please don't tell him about my power."

"We won't."

(Melissa)
On Friday, we finally got around to submitting our teleportation system for Tinkertech review. It had been working for a while now, but between the uploading project and everything to do with Taylor's school situation, actually getting it evaluated had fallen by the wayside.

So with the aid of some heavy machinery we helped load the pair of teleporters onto the truck the PRT sent over to collect them. I was actually pretty curious about how it would go, so I volunteered to come along and answer questions.

The teleporters were still being set up when Deputy Director Renick came into the room. Idly he observed,

"Interesting; these teleporters look an awful lot like that robotifying machine of yours."

He must have looked at the photographs that were taken of the QUD, then. I nodded,

"Given that the QUD works using principles derived from these teleporters, the similarity is to be entirely expected. Don't worry, there aren't any corpses left behind."

Mr. Renick raised an eyebrow.

"Ruggedizer, that's not exactly encouraging you know."

I blinked and readjusted my worldview slightly.

"So.. I can try and explain how it works?"

I immediately noticed several very attentive scientists looking my way. Right, no pressure.

"So, the short version is that it combines the energy teleportation that's already been reproduced with 'conventional' quantum teleportation. So both the mass-energy making up the teleportation subject and the quantum information defining them get moved to the receiver unit as soon as the classical carrier data is received. Delayed-choice quantum eraser effects mean that the teleportation simply doesn't happen if it wouldn't be received properly. The receiving chamber needs to be vacuum to avoid problems with air molecules ending up inside whatever's getting teleported."

Renick blinked, then turned to the assembled scientists.

"I think I understood maybe a fifth of that. Was what Ruggedizer said real scientific principles, or was she talking Tinker-babble?"

One of the physicists (her name tag read "Sophie") nodded,

"The broad strokes of what Ruggedizer said make sense; she's clearly done her homework on the matter. Especially the delayed-choice quantum eraser; that's actually an experimentally verified phenomenon, though it's very counterintuitive."

I quipped,

"What about quantum mechanics isn't counterintuitive?"

"Point."

(Emmy)

Saturday, Melissa and I were digging through the stash of confidential data again; we'd moved it to a dimensionally shielded vault in a sub-basement, with utterly extreme security measures in place to prevent unauthorized access. Security measures that stood a good chance of vaporizing a fully ramped Lung if necessary. It might seem excessive, but given the increasingly extremely concerning information we were discovering, we weren't taking any chances whatsoever.

We'd barely gotten an hour into our archive delve today when I found an utterly horrifying record: the fate of the previous world these power-granting aliens had visited.

In the virtual space we were using for the delve, Melissa and I could only stare slack-jawed as nearly uncountable people were snuffed out in an instant, the dimensional variants of the planets they had lived on being consumed as fuel to propel the aliens across the void.

"They're… They're monsters."

Melissa pointed out something I'd missed, sixty five additional signatures departing from the destroyed world, all in different directions.

"It's worse. They're fecund monsters. How many similar logs are there?"

I quickly threw together a software bot to sort through matches. After a moment, it returned an answer.

"This particular lineage has destroyed two hundred and seven worlds, counting all dimensional instances of a single inhabited planet as one, and disregarding their planet of origin. On average there are 12.3 diverging offspring per cycle."

We both did some quick math. I spoke first.

"Not accounting for infighting or other sources of Sunderer mortality, there are 4.077*10^225 of these abominations across reality. I suspect the only reason the entire multiverse hasn't been wiped clean of life is limitations of their travel speed."

Melissa shuddered.

"We need to do something about them. I think we might be the only ones who can."
 
I mean, short of a BESRMOW, something so far outside context that the Entities can be retroactively removed, or worse (like the Gem Empire showing up or ancient dragons awakening) y'all have a decent powerset to take the worms on.
But damn are there going to be a lot of hurdles.
 
they will start up their own secret shadowy organization to take control of the world and guide humanity to being ready to fight these monsters. They shall call themselves Cauldron after the fictional boogeyman on the internet :V
 
The first step to solving a problem is identifying that there is a problem to solve! The second step to solving a problem is longer and may involve smashing heads against brick walls and/or/nand/nor alcohol, depending on personal preference.
 
While I hope that some effort is made to identify if all entity lineages are so destructive and/or unreasonable, regardless their destruction will be a net good and the destruction of such destructive actors is a necessity even if there is collateral damage.
 
There's one viable solution I can think of to solve the Entity problem. Mass Scale Vacuum Collapse Induction. The end all be all of Mutually Assured Destruction.
 
There's one viable solution I can think of to solve the Entity problem. Mass Scale Vacuum Collapse Induction. The end all be all of Mutually Assured Destruction.
I mean... From what immediately comes to mind, there are two ways that could work, in practice with this kind of story.
If there are more entities and entity controlled sources of matter/energy than other things, then this would work.
Step 1.) Make a new reality that can accept teleportation of everything from the old one.
Step 2.) Teleport everything but the entities to the new one.
Step 3.) Vacuum collapse the old one. It was lousy with pests anyway!

Or, if there is more other stuff than entities, or the entities couldn't stop the teleportation/interfere with it and cause WAY more problems than before, just go through with the procedure as above but dump the entities in a universe that is about to experience vacuum collapse. Easy peasy alarmingly high on the kardeshev scale squeezy!
 
I mean... From what immediately comes to mind, there are two ways that could work, in practice with this kind of story.
If there are more entities and entity controlled sources of matter/energy than other things, then this would work.
Step 1.) Make a new reality that can accept teleportation of everything from the old one.
Step 2.) Teleport everything but the entities to the new one.
Step 3.) Vacuum collapse the old one. It was lousy with pests anyway!
Entities being multiversal you'd have to collapse every universe they're present in and at that point you've only made yourself the bigger monster.
 
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