KnownParadox
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Let's see if we can't bring a camera with us next time we Turn and hope it just doesn't record a blank void, or worse, Something inside a blank nothingness
Oh dear. Total sensory deprivation is known to start at 'disturbing' and get worse from there, and Amy just got dropped right into it without a shred of warning or expectation.It's nothing and you can't deal with this can't handle how can you this is wrong.
It's so wrong it'snothing how whatdoyou whatareyouevenwhysitsosilentsoquietsosoquiet
itscrushingsosmalltoosmallyoucanthowlonghowlongwhywhereareyou
itsnothingwhysonothingyoucantanymoreyoucantcantcantcantcant!
You turn.
It was the FTA that had made the first interstellar transport and trade possible after coming out of hiding after the Last War, and the Prime Talents who had made it possible were about as famous as you could get. Of course, that was before there were ships that could do faster-than-light travel, but that certainly didn't mean there wasn't a lack of want for the Talented nor opportunities for them to become known.
If interstellar teleportation isn't Amy's Talent, it'll only be because she can do more on top as well.The pod chooses that moment to cheerfully thank you for choosing FTA Transit.
You're… there. Here.
That was it?
Whoa.
Forty-two light-years in a single blink.
Thanks for pointing out the '90°' bit, I hadn't actually noticed.
I shall now proceed to link things that for myself amount to words of false comprehension: Spin (physics) because it's the only thing I could think of off-hand that involves the kind of physical interactions needed here, and has any conceptual correspondence to angular degrees. It might be relevant that a spin-2 particle has a 180-degree rotation cycle to the same quantum state, and gravitons are spin-2 particles, I don't know. I don't know anything.
Discuss.
Thanks for pointing out the '90°' bit, I hadn't actually noticed.
I shall now proceed to link things that for myself amount to words of false comprehension: Spin (physics) because it's the only thing I could think of off-hand that involves the kind of physical interactions needed here, and has any conceptual correspondence to angular degrees. It might be relevant that a spin-2 particle has a 180-degree rotation cycle to the same quantum state, and gravitons are spin-2 particles, I don't know. I don't know anything.
Discuss.
Kets, Bras, and we want to remove the Bras. Yep checks out.The names for things in quantum mechanics are what happens when you lock a bunch of physicists in a room and tell them they can't leave until they come up with names for everything.
I think you did an excellent job with portraying the interactions between the characters in the story. It feels natural and it flows well. The new characters introduced seem to have lives outside of helping the MC, which is incredibly important in developing the world outside of the MC's perception. It was a nice touch regarding the bio-nano coding to give cool aesthetics to individual people.Anyways. This was… really difficult to try and portray, so I'd appreciate feedback, beyond the inevitable speculation on the Talent that I know there's going to be
It's time to use the hints!I've done a lot of research for this story, let's put it that way.
As a hint, my favorite scifi authors are stuff like McCafferey and Greg Egan.
I've always thought that this explanation made no sense. If gravity is a result of the "balls" pressing into the "cloth", what is causing them to press in the first place?Hmm... I seem to remember some explanation about gravity involving heavy balls resting on a cloth sheet representing space-time, creating depressions that were the gravity wells...
I've always thought that this explanation made no sense. If gravity is a result of the "balls" pressing into the "cloth", what is causing them to press in the first place?
I've always thought that this explanation made no sense. If gravity is a result of the "balls" pressing into the "cloth", what is causing them to press in the first place?
It's still pretty weird, a metaphor to explain gravity that uses gravity as a part of the metaphor. But still, thanks for explaining; maybe in a few decades there will be a better explanation (or maybe I should study physics so I could understand a less metaphorical explanation).
Haeld is technically HD40307g. It's the only planet we've found in the Goldilocks region in the system, and I've held off mentioning any moons so far due to inexperience and lack of knowledge over the sorts of ecological impacts having fewer/greater than one substantial moon-like object would create.Is Haeld the only planet in the the system and if not, will Amy be able to sense the other planets as well?
Probably the most comprehensive analysis I've seen so far on anything I've written, so thank you! Have an internet cookie.TLDR: Simple analogies are not meant to accurately convey complex topics, but rather give you a basic feeling for the subject, and, upon rereading the previous entries, I retract my earlier statement where I suggested Amy hasn't had sufficient characterization.
Edit: There are other planets, but I'm considering Haeld itself and Haeld's star to be the two most prominent gravitational bodies noticeable from within Haeld's gravity well. The moon, as I've said, is undetermined.
the red cross that universally means something medical-related.
I guess the red cross didn't make it through the war then.
Really?! To google. Ah 6 by 12 ish meters. About twice the size of my room at uni. Also room mates, do they actually do that anywhere or is it just a literary trope?
I guess the red cross didn't make it through the war then.
Really?! To google. Ah 6 by 12 ish meters. About twice the size of my room at uni. Also room mates, do they actually do that anywhere or is it just a literary trope?
Yes. Most universities have two beds to a dorm room, or you can pay extra for a private bedroom.