Behind the Serpent Throne (CK2)

[X] The son of a minor scholar of great distinction who passed the difficult exams of Highest Merit, his penmanship was always flawless. He wrote with distinction on all of the topics of the world, and if that is all Father had done, then perhaps the world would be a different place. But he entered into the bureaucracy in his twenties like a knife through a dying man, and when he ousted the Third River school, publically humiliating their policy and leading to the suicide of Go-Asho, he was on his way up. The master of these strange rituals, his penmanship is as perfect and cold as the northern frosts. Every inch of the realm is encompassed in his words, every goat counted. Everyone knows that there is nothing that does not fall under his sway, and yet the army chafes at his actions. For all know that he resents those who go to war. "It is the silver gong for a reason, and not the gold" went one of his most famous axioms. Under him the realm has turned inward, and he has polished it as a collector might polish an antique sword, or as his father's father might have polished his words until there was nothing spare.
[X] Southlands (Oasis): Mother was a woman of the proud tribes and fragmenting empires of the deserts and the lands beyond the deserts, who practiced the dangerous art of making spirits into tattoos. There was an entire line of Emperors who married into the holy imperial line after having conquered half of the Empire and splintering the rest, who have this blood, and this combination of antagonism and assimilation continues to this day.

Aww, really wanted to see the magic tats.
 
Four/five left, can someone post a tally? And, for any votes changed after the point of that tally, can you repost them rather than changing it in the background? There's still time for things to change, but I want a clean one so that, you know?

*shrugs*

That make sense?
 
Vote Tally : Original - Behind the Serpent Throne (CK2) | Sufficient Velocity
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[X] A monster is what he is. He had started out a student of the imperial academy, where the spirits were bound and the secret names of the world were compiled, strengthened. Learned. At the age of thirteen he had murdered a city of fifty-thousand people by doing the impossible. Even rumor only hints at how, but the plague that struck down the city at just the right time, and the credit that Father took for it, was but the beginning of a reputation of blood and mystical might that stretched beyond the borders of knowledge into legend. Even the priests hate him, and yet the Empire has grown strong under his rule, despite his apathy for the systems that are said to keep it going. The Emperor walks every day in fear of the man, and even as old as he is, none dare cross him. But then again, none dare love him either.
No. of Votes: 16

[X] Imperial Province (Irit): The land of rivers and of the lake from which the first Emperor was said to have emerged ten-thousand years ago. If one believes the imperial myths and ignores all of the problems with the myths, the Empire has existed for that long, a chain unbroken truly, or at most only in letter but not in spirit. She was a shrine priestess on the holy island in the center of that holiest of lakes, and yet pregnancy is the one thing they could not accept, and far she fled, taking the teachings and secrets with her.
No. of Votes: 15

[x] The son of a minor scholar of great distinction who passed the difficult exams of Highest Merit, his penmanship was always flawless. He wrote with distinction on all of the topics of the world, and if that is all Father had done, then perhaps the world would be a different place. But he entered into the bureaucracy in his twenties like a knife through a dying man, and when he ousted the Third River school, publically humiliating their policy and leading to the suicide of Go-Asho, he was on his way up. The master of these strange rituals, his penmanship is as perfect and cold as the northern frosts. Every inch of the realm is encompassed in his words, every goat counted. Everyone knows that there is nothing that does not fall under his sway, and yet the army chafes at his actions. For all know that he resents those who go to war. "It is the silver gong for a reason, and not the gold" went one of his most famous axioms. Under him therealm has turned inward, and he has polished it as a collector might polish an antique sword, or as his father's father might have polished his words until there was nothing spare.
No. of Votes: 15

[x] Scholar
No. of Votes: 1

[X] Imperial Province (Yeadalt): The strangest of all of the provinces, home to the greatest number of non-official languages and even cultural groups, it is here that heresies and cults form like mushrooms. They form, they spread, they are harvested or destroyed. It is a province in which the ruling elite, of the Csiritan stock, is far outnumbered by those whose ways are not those of the empire. It is also home to some of the strangest tales, the strangest ways to do magic and live, in all of the twelve provinces, or so rumor goes. Besides the cults, the religions, and the many peoples, here flourish too criminal groups, who band together against all outsiders and cause banditry and chaos.
No. of Votes: 13

[x] Imperial Province (Hari-Os): This long thin strip of a province is one of great wealth and power, though his Mother knew little enough of its power. Laying their on the coast, the vast cities competed with the Southlands and fought off the Sea-raiders, and traded and fought off the Water-People, whose acts had gone far beyond merely working with spirits into...into areas where no human should go, according to many religions. Wealth and power congregated into one area, and his Mother had been born in poverty and squalor. At least the Southlands weren't so different from her home, in the ways that mattered?
No. of Votes: 4

[X] Southlands (Oasis): Mother was a woman of the proud tribes and fragmenting empires of the deserts and the lands beyond the deserts, who practiced the dangerous art of making spirits into tattoos. There was an entire line of Emperors who married into the holy imperial line after having conquered half of the Empire and splintering the rest, who have this blood, and this combination of antagonism and assimilation continues to this day.
No. of Votes: 4

[X] The son of a Eunuch on Last Night[2], he only escaped his unknown father's fate by cunning, being sent as the assistant to an ill-fated attempt to conquer the Western Marshes of Bueli. There were many rumors as to what happened there, but the end result was that the upstart general in charge of the army died, his forces routed, and Father rallied the remnants and succeeded in forcing a peace, at the tender age of seventeen. The boy general rose and rose, victory following victory, swelling the Empire and protecting its borders. Every year, it seemed, the silver gong rang out thirteen times, and every year Father returned to bow ten times to the Emperor and give great gifts, expressing his humility and submission, all the while smirking as his power grew. Even now, over a decade after he last took the field, he holds sway over the armies, and yet there is rot within the ranks, and many speak of the cruelty and ambitions which drive him always to make an enemy of others. The bureaucracy and the hereditary governors hate him, and yet his power has waxed even into his waning years.
No. of Votes: 3

[X] What do you call a man who has every talent and no talent? Who can sing and dance, can write a perfect verse of poetry and ride hunting through the woods in the same breath. Who dabbled at everything and excelled at many things? The first Emperor that Father met called him 'favorite' and 'lover' and cherished him close, and when his son rose to power, he was but a tool of Fathers. Father who was everywhere, talking endlessly, fighting endlessly, dueling any who stood in his way or beating them through bureaucratic tricks. There was nothing he couldn't do, except love a bastard. His power is vast and yet as fragile as the first snow, pure and clean in appearance, and yet soon sullied. Many thought he would be a passing man, like many other men and women who had traded love for influence, and yet even now, more than half a century after he had taken power, he held it still. It couldn't be by his looks, and so it must be by his excellence. Yet why would such a man, who had so long declaimed the power of the flesh, had gotten married only by politics and nothing more, now call his son back?
No. of Votes: 3

[x] Into the vipers' pit went the second and third sons of the hereditary governor of Hari-Bueli (Near Bueli). Only one of them emerged from court politics victorious, to go back to his father with the concessions he had wanted. The other, Father, stayed on and began to note the rivalries and tensions, to manipulate events from the bottom and the top. The right word to the right courtesan and a man could be humiliated, and his downfall, his failure, turned into opportunity. Every knife was his, every whisper was his as well, and he knew the names of the spirits that rested in the eaves of windows, he knew the names of everyone who could give him aid. He rose, and rose, yet did so in the shadows. When he unveiled himself, his enemies fled or bled and died, and the Emperor was his tool. The great massacre of Sarzi was his doing, and the Emperor in his wrath at finding traitors in his midst, turned over everything, one way or another, to one man. Father.
No. of Votes: 2

[X] Anlan: The only Kingdom of the West, beyond the long plains who has the right to trade back and forth with Csirit, Mother was the daughter of a merchant, and nothing more. Yet from them she inherited the strange looks which might have stirred some passion for the exotic from his Father. But not too exotic, it seemed.
No. of Votes: 2

Total No. of Voters: 40
 
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So Scholar and monster are tied, and Irit is in the lead by two. This is going to be close.
 
[x] The son of a minor scholar of great distinction who passed the difficult exams of Highest Merit, his penmanship was always flawless. He wrote with distinction on all of the topics of the world, and if that is all Father had done, then perhaps the world would be a different place. But he entered into the bureaucracy in his twenties like a knife through a dying man, and when he ousted the Third River school, publically humiliating their policy and leading to the suicide of Go-Asho, he was on his way up. The master of these strange rituals, his penmanship is as perfect and cold as the northern frosts. Every inch of the realm is encompassed in his words, every goat counted. Everyone knows that there is nothing that does not fall under his sway, and yet the army chafes at his actions. For all know that he resents those who go to war. "It is the silver gong for a reason, and not the gold" went one of his most famous axioms. Under him therealm has turned inward, and he has polished it as a collector might polish an antique sword, or as his father's father might have polished his words until there was nothing spare.


[X] Imperial Province (Yeadalt): The strangest of all of the provinces, home to the greatest number of non-official languages and even cultural groups, it is here that heresies and cults form like mushrooms. They form, they spread, they are harvested or destroyed. It is a province in which the ruling elite, of the Csiritan stock, is far outnumbered by those whose ways are not those of the empire. It is also home to some of the strangest tales, the strangest ways to do magic and live, in all of the twelve provinces, or so rumor goes. Besides the cults, the religions, and the many peoples, here flourish too criminal groups, who band together against all outsiders and cause banditry and chaos.
 
Right, since Scholar seems to be winning, channing my Mother vote to Yeadalt again.

[X] A monster is what he is. He had started out a student of the imperial academy, where the spirits were bound and the secret names of the world were compiled, strengthened. Learned. At the age of thirteen he had murdered a city of fifty-thousand people by doing the impossible. Even rumor only hints at how, but the plague that struck down the city at just the right time, and the credit that Father took for it, was but the beginning of a reputation of blood and mystical might that stretched beyond the borders of knowledge into legend. Even the priests hate him, and yet the Empire has grown strong under his rule, despite his apathy for the systems that are said to keep it going. The Emperor walks every day in fear of the man, and even as old as he is, none dare cross him. But then again, none dare love him either.

[X] Imperial Province (Yeadalt): The strangest of all of the provinces, home to the greatest number of non-official languages and even cultural groups, it is here that heresies and cults form like mushrooms. They form, they spread, they are harvested or destroyed. It is a province in which the ruling elite, of the Csiritan stock, is far outnumbered by those whose ways are not those of the empire. It is also home to some of the strangest tales, the strangest ways to do magic and live, in all of the twelve provinces, or so rumor goes. Besides the cults, the religions, and the many peoples, here flourish too criminal groups, who band together against all outsiders and cause banditry and chaos.
 
[x] The son of a minor scholar of great distinction who passed the difficult exams of Highest Merit, his penmanship was always flawless. He wrote with distinction on all of the topics of the world, and if that is all Father had done, then perhaps the world would be a different place. But he entered into the bureaucracy in his twenties like a knife through a dying man, and when he ousted the Third River school, publically humiliating their policy and leading to the suicide of Go-Asho, he was on his way up. The master of these strange rituals, his penmanship is as perfect and cold as the northern frosts. Every inch of the realm is encompassed in his words, every goat counted. Everyone knows that there is nothing that does not fall under his sway, and yet the army chafes at his actions. For all know that he resents those who go to war. "It is the silver gong for a reason, and not the gold" went one of his most famous axioms. Under him therealm has turned inward, and he has polished it as a collector might polish an antique sword, or as his father's father might have polished his words until there was nothing spare.

[X] Imperial Province (Irit): The land of rivers and of the lake from which the first Emperor was said to have emerged ten-thousand years ago. If one believes the imperial myths and ignores all of the problems with the myths, the Empire has existed for that long, a chain unbroken truly, or at most only in letter but not in spirit. She was a shrine priestess on the holy island in the center of that holiest of lakes, and yet pregnancy is the one thing they could not accept, and far she fled, taking the teachings and secrets with her.

I didn't think I would have a chance to affect the origin vote, coming to this thread so late! Awesome.

I feel like we do want to foil our father most likely -- if only so we can leave our own stamp on the world. If anything can be done with the type of power father wields daddy dearest has probably done it. I don't know what way we want to go with this, but I do think magic is intriguing enough that I don't want to put such a negative on using it for ourselves. I know we CAN do magic even with Monster, but it is a little harder. On that note, I'm also glad the pure diplomatic power isn't winning right now as that leaves some soft power for us to grab.

Edit: Also really glad intrigue dad didn't win, I wouldn't want to try to get involved in the viper's pit court would have been after a couple of decades of spycraft focus. I am not that good at seeing through plots and nothing could have been taken at face value. It probably still shouldn't too much, but less so than with intrigue dad *shudders*

Also, I know he's always going to be an asshole, but I would rather he wasn't an unforgivable asshole like monster is. We are going to have to deal with him and have a .. relationship of some sort with him, and I'd rather not have mass murder of that scale in his background. As interesting as monster sounds, (and as much as I laughed at the poor emperor in that situation) I'd rather have someone I can make nice with rather than someone who reduces me down to a burning ball of rage.

As far as the mother goes, I am strategic voting - it's not my fave, but the magic is intriguing and I like it better than the other one.

Edit 2: Looking at what The Laurent has said about their kids is only giving me further misgivings about Monster.

Son of a Scholar Father has six daughters (legitimate) and no legitimate son, and not even any *rumors* of any other bastards.

Monster married but had no children, but is also somewhat known to have more than a few bastards...but the only one he's acknowledged/been forced to acknowledge/ that'd be part of the story is, well, the Main Character.

Look at Scholar vs Monster. Where as with Scholar we are stepping into a slot with no one there (no legitimate sons) and no other bastards at all, with Monster... Well the "forced to acknowledge" is bad enough, and says a lot about how he'll think of us I think.
 
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[X] The son of a minor scholar of great distinction who passed the difficult exams of Highest Merit, his penmanship was always flawless. He wrote with distinction on all of the topics of the world, and if that is all Father had done, then perhaps the world would be a different place. But he entered into the bureaucracy in his twenties like a knife through a dying man, and when he ousted the Third River school, publically humiliating their policy and leading to the suicide of Go-Asho, he was on his way up. The master of these strange rituals, his penmanship is as perfect and cold as the northern frosts. Every inch of the realm is encompassed in his words, every goat counted. Everyone knows that there is nothing that does not fall under his sway, and yet the army chafes at his actions. For all know that he resents those who go to war. "It is the silver gong for a reason, and not the gold" went one of his most famous axioms. Under him therealm has turned inward, and he has polished it as a collector might polish an antique sword, or as his father's father might have polished his words until there was nothing spare.

[X] Imperial Province (Irit): The land of rivers and of the lake from which the first Emperor was said to have emerged ten-thousand years ago. If one believes the imperial myths and ignores all of the problems with the myths, the Empire has existed for that long, a chain unbroken truly, or at most only in letter but not in spirit. She was a shrine priestess on the holy island in the center of that holiest of lakes, and yet pregnancy is the one thing they could not accept, and far she fled, taking the teachings and secrets with her.
 
Though being fair, none of the Dads are...particularly good. Like, I suspect that any of the Fathers, you'll...well, you'll all see. In thirty minutes the vote closes.

Unfortunately, there's going to have to be a snap vote going on :(

Because I was originally going to do the Mother-Father origin thing as the next update fiction (what Mother told you of Father), but then I realized that the MC's name might affect things, especially since one of the options involves having a twin sister. And that'd effect the narrative. So I'm going to be doing a snap vote (24 hours, tie goes to 'there better not be a tie or I'll flip a coin') on that once the vote closes and I can get that together, and then after that, long background thing and then cool vote on stuff and things!

I think it'll be swell.

Vote closes in thirty!
 
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Though being fair, none of the Dads are...particularly good. Like, I suspect that any of the Fathers, you'll...well, you'll all see. In thirty minutes the vote closes.
Yeah but there's immoral asshole and then there's I murdered a city.

Like I fully expect every father has killed people or made decisions that led to deaths. And I'm sure each has their things that we are going to disagree with -- for scholar like you said hes pretty isolationist and that can have some ... implications. But.
He hasn't murdered an entire city.

Even if
his policies somehow led to more deaths than the monsters, that's over decades of rule rather than all at once. And I highly doubt that someone ruthless enough to do something like that has any more compunctions about the people his rule ends up killing.

Not to mention the age of the emperor kind of says to me that they have about the lifespan of mayflies at the moment. And I don't hold much hope about him having ANY compunctions about killing us if we jump wrong. I know you said that the bastards won't come into play directly, as we are the MC, but they are still out there and that make us inherently a bit too replaceable for my liking.

On a Side Note having a twin sister sounds really cool, and I fully expect to vote for it in the flash round because heck yeah twins. Also hopefully we get along, because having an ally like that would be nice.
 
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[X] A monster is what he is. He had started out a student of the imperial academy, where the spirits were bound and the secret names of the world were compiled, strengthened. Learned. At the age of thirteen he had murdered a city of fifty-thousand people by doing the impossible. Even rumor only hints at how, but the plague that struck down the city at just the right time, and the credit that Father took for it, was but the beginning of a reputation of blood and mystical might that stretched beyond the borders of knowledge into legend. Even the priests hate him, and yet the Empire has grown strong under his rule, despite his apathy for the systems that are said to keep it going. The Emperor walks every day in fear of the man, and even as old as he is, none dare cross him. But then again, none dare love him either.
[X] Imperial Province (Irit): The land of rivers and of the lake from which the first Emperor was said to have emerged ten-thousand years ago. If one believes the imperial myths and ignores all of the problems with the myths, the Empire has existed for that long, a chain unbroken truly, or at most only in letter but not in spirit. She was a shrine priestess on the holy island in the center of that holiest of lakes, and yet pregnancy is the one thing they could not accept, and far she fled, taking the teachings and secrets with her.
No. of votes: 8
beowolf, Gamerlord, Estro, Skelm, Kerfirou, mori, Terrabrand, Diomedon

[X] A monster is what he is. He had started out a student of the imperial academy, where the spirits were bound and the secret names of the world were compiled, strengthened. Learned. At the age of thirteen he had murdered a city of fifty-thousand people by doing the impossible. Even rumor only hints at how, but the plague that struck down the city at just the right time, and the credit that Father took for it, was but the beginning of a reputation of blood and mystical might that stretched beyond the borders of knowledge into legend. Even the priests hate him, and yet the Empire has grown strong under his rule, despite his apathy for the systems that are said to keep it going. The Emperor walks every day in fear of the man, and even as old as he is, none dare cross him. But then again, none dare love him either.
[X] Imperial Province (Yeadalt): The strangest of all of the provinces, home to the greatest number of non-official languages and even cultural groups, it is here that heresies and cults form like mushrooms. They form, they spread, they are harvested or destroyed. It is a province in which the ruling elite, of the Csiritan stock, is far outnumbered by those whose ways are not those of the empire. It is also home to some of the strangest tales, the strangest ways to do magic and live, in all of the twelve provinces, or so rumor goes. Besides the cults, the religions, and the many peoples, here flourish too criminal groups, who band together against all outsiders and cause banditry and chaos.
No. of votes: 6
Aabcehmu, StarkDemise, PlatypusofFail, Orisha91, Hobbes, Bommelom

[x] The son of a minor scholar of great distinction who passed the difficult exams of Highest Merit, his penmanship was always flawless. He wrote with distinction on all of the topics of the world, and if that is all Father had done, then perhaps the world would be a different place. But he entered into the bureaucracy in his twenties like a knife through a dying man, and when he ousted the Third River school, publically humiliating their policy and leading to the suicide of Go-Asho, he was on his way up. The master of these strange rituals, his penmanship is as perfect and cold as the northern frosts. Every inch of the realm is encompassed in his words, every goat counted. Everyone knows that there is nothing that does not fall under his sway, and yet the army chafes at his actions. For all know that he resents those who go to war. "It is the silver gong for a reason, and not the gold" went one of his most famous axioms. Under him therealm has turned inward, and he has polished it as a collector might polish an antique sword, or as his father's father might have polished his words until there was nothing spare.
[x] Imperial Province (Hari-Os): This long thin strip of a province is one of great wealth and power, though his Mother knew little enough of its power. Laying their on the coast, the vast cities competed with the Southlands and fought off the Sea-raiders, and traded and fought off the Water-People, whose acts had gone far beyond merely working with spirits into...into areas where no human should go, according to many religions. Wealth and power congregated into one area, and his Mother had been born in poverty and squalor. At least the Southlands weren't so different from her home, in the ways that mattered?
No. of votes: 4
Crowhunter, masterofmadness, Happerry, NuclearConsensus

[X] The son of a minor scholar of great distinction who passed the difficult exams of Highest Merit, his penmanship was always flawless. He wrote with distinction on all of the topics of the world, and if that is all Father had done, then perhaps the world would be a different place. But he entered into the bureaucracy in his twenties like a knife through a dying man, and when he ousted the Third River school, publically humiliating their policy and leading to the suicide of Go-Asho, he was on his way up. The master of these strange rituals, his penmanship is as perfect and cold as the northern frosts. Every inch of the realm is encompassed in his words, every goat counted. Everyone knows that there is nothing that does not fall under his sway, and yet the army chafes at his actions. For all know that he resents those who go to war. "It is the silver gong for a reason, and not the gold" went one of his most famous axioms. Under him the realm has turned inward, and he has polished it as a collector might polish an antique sword, or as his father's father might have polished his words until there was nothing spare.
[X] Imperial Province (Yeadalt): The strangest of all of the provinces, home to the greatest number of non-official languages and even cultural groups, it is here that heresies and cults form like mushrooms. They form, they spread, they are harvested or destroyed. It is a province in which the ruling elite, of the Csiritan stock, is far outnumbered by those whose ways are not those of the empire. It is also home to some of the strangest tales, the strangest ways to do magic and live, in all of the twelve provinces, or so rumor goes. Besides the cults, the religions, and the many peoples, here flourish too criminal groups, who band together against all outsiders and cause banditry and chaos.
No. of votes: 4
Random Member, veekie, Nevill, Ridiculously Average Guy

[X] What do you call a man who has every talent and no talent? Who can sing and dance, can write a perfect verse of poetry and ride hunting through the woods in the same breath. Who dabbled at everything and excelled at many things? The first Emperor that Father met called him 'favorite' and 'lover' and cherished him close, and when his son rose to power, he was but a tool of Fathers. Father who was everywhere, talking endlessly, fighting endlessly, dueling any who stood in his way or beating them through bureaucratic tricks. There was nothing he couldn't do, except love a bastard. His power is vast and yet as fragile as the first snow, pure and clean in appearance, and yet soon sullied. Many thought he would be a passing man, like many other men and women who had traded love for influence, and yet even now, more than half a century after he had taken power, he held it still. It couldn't be by his looks, and so it must be by his excellence. Yet why would such a man, who had so long declaimed the power of the flesh, had gotten married only by politics and nothing more, now call his son back?
[X] Imperial Province (Irit): The land of rivers and of the lake from which the first Emperor was said to have emerged ten-thousand years ago. If one believes the imperial myths and ignores all of the problems with the myths, the Empire has existed for that long, a chain unbroken truly, or at most only in letter but not in spirit. She was a shrine priestess on the holy island in the center of that holiest of lakes, and yet pregnancy is the one thing they could not accept, and far she fled, taking the teachings and secrets with her.[/li]
No. of votes: 1
Tanor

[X] What do you call a man who has every talent and no talent? Who can sing and dance, can write a perfect verse of poetry and ride hunting through the woods in the same breath. Who dabbled at everything and excelled at many things? The first Emperor that Father met called him 'favorite' and 'lover' and cherished him close, and when his son rose to power, he was but a tool of Fathers. Father who was everywhere, talking endlessly, fighting endlessly, dueling any who stood in his way or beating them through bureaucratic tricks. There was nothing he couldn't do, except love a bastard. His power is vast and yet as fragile as the first snow, pure and clean in appearance, and yet soon sullied. Many thought he would be a passing man, like many other men and women who had traded love for influence, and yet even now, more than half a century after he had taken power, he held it still. It couldn't be by his looks, and so it must be by his excellence. Yet why would such a man, who had so long declaimed the power of the flesh, had gotten married only by politics and nothing more, now call his son back?
[X] Imperial Province (Yeadalt): The strangest of all of the provinces, home to the greatest number of non-official languages and even cultural groups, it is here that heresies and cults form like mushrooms. They form, they spread, they are harvested or destroyed. It is a province in which the ruling elite, of the Csiritan stock, is far outnumbered by those whose ways are not those of the empire. It is also home to some of the strangest tales, the strangest ways to do magic and live, in all of the twelve provinces, or so rumor goes. Besides the cults, the religions, and the many peoples, here flourish too criminal groups, who band together against all outsiders and cause banditry and chaos.
No. of votes: 2
Zulfurium, Gingganz

[x] Into the vipers' pit went the second and third sons of the hereditary governor of Hari-Bueli (Near Bueli). Only one of them emerged from court politics victorious, to go back to his father with the concessions he had wanted. The other, Father, stayed on and began to note the rivalries and tensions, to manipulate events from the bottom and the top. The right word to the right courtesan and a man could be humiliated, and his downfall, his failure, turned into opportunity. Every knife was his, every whisper was his as well, and he knew the names of the spirits that rested in the eaves of windows, he knew the names of everyone who could give him aid. He rose, and rose, yet did so in the shadows. When he unveiled himself, his enemies fled or bled and died, and the Emperor was his tool. The great massacre of Sarzi was his doing, and the Emperor in his wrath at finding traitors in his midst, turned over everything, one way or another, to one man. Father.
[x] Imperial Province (Irit): The land of rivers and of the lake from which the first Emperor was said to have emerged ten-thousand years ago. If one believes the imperial myths and ignores all of the problems with the myths, the Empire has existed for that long, a chain unbroken truly, or at most only in letter but not in spirit. She was a shrine priestess on the holy island in the center of that holiest of lakes, and yet pregnancy is the one thing they could not accept, and far she fled, taking the teachings and secrets with her.
No. of votes: 1
Bakkasama

[X] Into the vipers' pit went the second and third sons of the hereditary governor of Hari-Bueli (Near Bueli). Only one of them emerged from court politics victorious, to go back to his father with the concessions he had wanted. The other, Father, stayed on and began to note the rivalries and tensions, to manipulate events from the bottom and the top. The right word to the right courtesan and a man could be humiliated, and his downfall, his failure, turned into opportunity. Every knife was his, every whisper was his as well, and he knew the names of the spirits that rested in the eaves of windows, he knew the names of everyone who could give him aid. He rose, and rose, yet did so in the shadows. When he unveiled himself, his enemies fled or bled and died, and the Emperor was his tool. The great massacre of Sarzi was his doing, and the Emperor in his wrath at finding traitors in his midst, turned over everything, one way or another, to one man. Father.
[X] Southlands (Oasis): Mother was a woman of the proud tribes and fragmenting empires of the deserts and the lands beyond the deserts, who practiced the dangerous art of making spirits into tattoos. There was an entire line of Emperors who married into the holy imperial line after having conquered half of the Empire and splintering the rest, who have this blood, and this combination of antagonism and assimilation continues to this day.
No. of votes: 1
dpara

[x] Scholar
No. of votes: 1
notanautomaton

[X] The son of a minor scholar of great distinction who passed the difficult exams of Highest Merit, his penmanship was always flawless. He wrote with distinction on all of the topics of the world, and if that is all Father had done, then perhaps the world would be a different place. But he entered into the bureaucracy in his twenties like a knife through a dying man, and when he ousted the Third River school, publically humiliating their policy and leading to the suicide of Go-Asho, he was on his way up. The master of these strange rituals, his penmanship is as perfect and cold as the northern frosts. Every inch of the realm is encompassed in his words, every goat counted. Everyone knows that there is nothing that does not fall under his sway, and yet the army chafes at his actions. For all know that he resents those who go to war. "It is the silver gong for a reason, and not the gold" went one of his most famous axioms. Under him the realm has turned inward, and he has polished it as a collector might polish an antique sword, or as his father's father might have polished his words until there was nothing spare.
[X] Imperial Province (Irit): The land of rivers and of the lake from which the first Emperor was said to have emerged ten-thousand years ago. If one believes the imperial myths and ignores all of the problems with the myths, the Empire has existed for that long, a chain unbroken truly, or at most only in letter but not in spirit. She was a shrine priestess on the holy island in the center of that holiest of lakes, and yet pregnancy is the one thing they could not accept, and far she fled, taking the teachings and secrets with her.
No. of votes: 7
Kingofbooks, Evilness42, George, lkmcclenahan, Broken25, Tsume817, PayKey

[X] Imperial Province (Yeadalt): The strangest of all of the provinces, home to the greatest number of non-official languages and even cultural groups, it is here that heresies and cults form like mushrooms. They form, they spread, they are harvested or destroyed. It is a province in which the ruling elite, of the Csiritan stock, is far outnumbered by those whose ways are not those of the empire. It is also home to some of the strangest tales, the strangest ways to do magic and live, in all of the twelve provinces, or so rumor goes. Besides the cults, the religions, and the many peoples, here flourish too criminal groups, who band together against all outsiders and cause banditry and chaos.
[x] The son of a minor scholar of great distinction who passed the difficult exams of Highest Merit, his penmanship was always flawless. He wrote with distinction on all of the topics of the world, and if that is all Father had done, then perhaps the world would be a different place. But he entered into the bureaucracy in his twenties like a knife through a dying man, and when he ousted the Third River school, publically humiliating their policy and leading to the suicide of Go-Asho, he was on his way up. The master of these strange rituals, his penmanship is as perfect and cold as the northern frosts. Every inch of the realm is encompassed in his words, every goat counted. Everyone knows that there is nothing that does not fall under his sway, and yet the army chafes at his actions. For all know that he resents those who go to war. "It is the silver gong for a reason, and not the gold" went one of his most famous axioms. Under him therealm has turned inward, and he has polished it as a collector might polish an antique sword, or as his father's father might have polished his words until there was nothing spare.
No. of votes: 1
wingstrike96

[X] The son of a Eunuch on Last Night[2], he only escaped his unknown father's fate by cunning, being sent as the assistant to an ill-fated attempt to conquer the Western Marshes of Bueli. There were many rumors as to what happened there, but the end result was that the upstart general in charge of the army died, his forces routed, and Father rallied the remnants and succeeded in forcing a peace, at the tender age of seventeen. The boy general rose and rose, victory following victory, swelling the Empire and protecting its borders. Every year, it seemed, the silver gong rang out thirteen times, and every year Father returned to bow ten times to the Emperor and give great gifts, expressing his humility and submission, all the while smirking as his power grew. Even now, over a decade after he last took the field, he holds sway over the armies, and yet there is rot within the ranks, and many speak of the cruelty and ambitions which drive him always to make an enemy of others. The bureaucracy and the hereditary governors hate him, and yet his power has waxed even into his waning years.
[X] Southlands (Oasis): Mother was a woman of the proud tribes and fragmenting empires of the deserts and the lands beyond the deserts, who practiced the dangerous art of making spirits into tattoos. There was an entire line of Emperors who married into the holy imperial line after having conquered half of the Empire and splintering the rest, who have this blood, and this combination of antagonism and assimilation continues to this day.
No. of votes: 1
Leingod

[X] The son of a Eunuch on Last Night[2], he only escaped his unknown father's fate by cunning, being sent as the assistant to an ill-fated attempt to conquer the Western Marshes of Bueli. There were many rumors as to what happened there, but the end result was that the upstart general in charge of the army died, his forces routed, and Father rallied the remnants and succeeded in forcing a peace, at the tender age of seventeen. The boy general rose and rose, victory following victory, swelling the Empire and protecting its borders. Every year, it seemed, the silver gong rang out thirteen times, and every year Father returned to bow ten times to the Emperor and give great gifts, expressing his humility and submission, all the while smirking as his power grew. Even now, over a decade after he last took the field, he holds sway over the armies, and yet there is rot within the ranks, and many speak of the cruelty and ambitions which drive him always to make an enemy of others. The bureaucracy and the hereditary governors hate him, and yet his power has waxed even into his waning years.
[X] Anlan: The only Kingdom of the West, beyond the long plains who has the right to trade back and forth with Csirit, Mother was the daughter of a merchant, and nothing more. Yet from them she inherited the strange looks which might have stirred some passion for the exotic from his Father. But not too exotic, it seemed.
No. of votes: 2
Pyro Hawk, Arcus2611

[X] Imperial Province (Yeadalt): The strangest of all of the provinces, home to the greatest number of non-official languages and even cultural groups, it is here that heresies and cults form like mushrooms. They form, they spread, they are harvested or destroyed. It is a province in which the ruling elite, of the Csiritan stock, is far outnumbered by those whose ways are not those of the empire. It is also home to some of the strangest tales, the strangest ways to do magic and live, in all of the twelve provinces, or so rumor goes. Besides the cults, the religions, and the many peoples, here flourish too criminal groups, who band together against all outsiders and cause banditry and chaos.
[X] A monster is what he is. He had started out a student of the imperial academy, where the spirits were bound and the secret names of the world were compiled, strengthened. Learned. At the age of thirteen he had murdered a city of fifty-thousand people by doing the impossible. Even rumor only hints at how, but the plague that struck down the city at just the right time, and the credit that Father took for it, was but the beginning of a reputation of blood and mystical might that stretched beyond the borders of knowledge into legend. Even the priests hate him, and yet the Empire has grown strong under his rule, despite his apathy for the systems that are said to keep it going. The Emperor walks every day in fear of the man, and even as old as he is, none dare cross him. But then again, none dare love him either.
No. of votes: 1
Sivantic

[X] The son of a minor scholar of great distinction who passed the difficult exams of Highest Merit, his penmanship was always flawless. He wrote with distinction on all of the topics of the world, and if that is all Father had done, then perhaps the world would be a different place. But he entered into the bureaucracy in his twenties like a knife through a dying man, and when he ousted the Third River school, publically humiliating their policy and leading to the suicide of Go-Asho, he was on his way up. The master of these strange rituals, his penmanship is as perfect and cold as the northern frosts. Every inch of the realm is encompassed in his words, every goat counted. Everyone knows that there is nothing that does not fall under his sway, and yet the army chafes at his actions. For all know that he resents those who go to war. "It is the silver gong for a reason, and not the gold" went one of his most famous axioms. Under him the realm has turned inward, and he has polished it as a collector might polish an antique sword, or as his father's father might have polished his words until there was nothing spare.
[X] Southlands (Oasis): Mother was a woman of the proud tribes and fragmenting empires of the deserts and the lands beyond the deserts, who practiced the dangerous art of making spirits into tattoos. There was an entire line of Emperors who married into the holy imperial line after having conquered half of the Empire and splintering the rest, who have this blood, and this combination of antagonism and assimilation continues to this day.
No. of votes: 2
Daecl, XkaliburRage

[X] A monster is what he is. He had started out a student of the imperial academy, where the spirits were bound and the secret names of the world were compiled, strengthened. Learned. At the age of thirteen he had murdered a city of fifty-thousand people by doing the impossible. Even rumor only hints at how, but the plague that struck down the city at just the right time, and the credit that Father took for it, was but the beginning of a reputation of blood and mystical might that stretched beyond the borders of knowledge into legend. Even the priests hate him, and yet the Empire has grown strong under his rule, despite his apathy for the systems that are said to keep it going. The Emperor walks every day in fear of the man, and even as old as he is, none dare cross him. But then again, none dare love him either.
No. of votes: 1
Derekc2
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[x] The son of a minor scholar of great distinction who passed the difficult exams of Highest Merit, his penmanship was always flawless. He wrote with distinction on all of the topics of the world, and if that is all Father had done, then perhaps the world would be a different place. But he entered into the bureaucracy in his twenties like a knife through a dying man, and when he ousted the Third River school, publically humiliating their policy and leading to the suicide of Go-Asho, he was on his way up. The master of these strange rituals, his penmanship is as perfect and cold as the northern frosts. Every inch of the realm is encompassed in his words, every goat counted. Everyone knows that there is nothing that does not fall under his sway, and yet the army chafes at his actions. For all know that he resents those who go to war. "It is the silver gong for a reason, and not the gold" went one of his most famous axioms. Under him therealm has turned inward, and he has polished it as a collector might polish an antique sword, or as his father's father might have polished his words until there was nothing spare.
No. of votes: 19
Crowhunter, masterofmadness, Happerry, NuclearConsensus, Random Member, veekie, Nevill, Ridiculously Average Guy, notanautomaton, Kingofbooks, Evilness42, George, lkmcclenahan, Broken25, Tsume817, PayKey, wingstrike96, Daecl, XkaliburRage

[X] A monster is what he is. He had started out a student of the imperial academy, where the spirits were bound and the secret names of the world were compiled, strengthened. Learned. At the age of thirteen he had murdered a city of fifty-thousand people by doing the impossible. Even rumor only hints at how, but the plague that struck down the city at just the right time, and the credit that Father took for it, was but the beginning of a reputation of blood and mystical might that stretched beyond the borders of knowledge into legend. Even the priests hate him, and yet the Empire has grown strong under his rule, despite his apathy for the systems that are said to keep it going. The Emperor walks every day in fear of the man, and even as old as he is, none dare cross him. But then again, none dare love him either.
No. of votes: 16
beowolf, Gamerlord, Estro, Skelm, Kerfirou, mori, Terrabrand, Diomedon, Aabcehmu, StarkDemise, PlatypusofFail, Orisha91, Hobbes, Bommelom, Sivantic, Derekc2

[X] What do you call a man who has every talent and no talent? Who can sing and dance, can write a perfect verse of poetry and ride hunting through the woods in the same breath. Who dabbled at everything and excelled at many things? The first Emperor that Father met called him 'favorite' and 'lover' and cherished him close, and when his son rose to power, he was but a tool of Fathers. Father who was everywhere, talking endlessly, fighting endlessly, dueling any who stood in his way or beating them through bureaucratic tricks. There was nothing he couldn't do, except love a bastard. His power is vast and yet as fragile as the first snow, pure and clean in appearance, and yet soon sullied. Many thought he would be a passing man, like many other men and women who had traded love for influence, and yet even now, more than half a century after he had taken power, he held it still. It couldn't be by his looks, and so it must be by his excellence. Yet why would such a man, who had so long declaimed the power of the flesh, had gotten married only by politics and nothing more, now call his son back?
No. of votes: 3
Tanor, Zulfurium, Gingganz

[X] The son of a Eunuch on Last Night[2], he only escaped his unknown father's fate by cunning, being sent as the assistant to an ill-fated attempt to conquer the Western Marshes of Bueli. There were many rumors as to what happened there, but the end result was that the upstart general in charge of the army died, his forces routed, and Father rallied the remnants and succeeded in forcing a peace, at the tender age of seventeen. The boy general rose and rose, victory following victory, swelling the Empire and protecting its borders. Every year, it seemed, the silver gong rang out thirteen times, and every year Father returned to bow ten times to the Emperor and give great gifts, expressing his humility and submission, all the while smirking as his power grew. Even now, over a decade after he last took the field, he holds sway over the armies, and yet there is rot within the ranks, and many speak of the cruelty and ambitions which drive him always to make an enemy of others. The bureaucracy and the hereditary governors hate him, and yet his power has waxed even into his waning years.
No. of votes: 3
Leingod, Pyro Hawk, Arcus2611

[x] Into the vipers' pit went the second and third sons of the hereditary governor of Hari-Bueli (Near Bueli). Only one of them emerged from court politics victorious, to go back to his father with the concessions he had wanted. The other, Father, stayed on and began to note the rivalries and tensions, to manipulate events from the bottom and the top. The right word to the right courtesan and a man could be humiliated, and his downfall, his failure, turned into opportunity. Every knife was his, every whisper was his as well, and he knew the names of the spirits that rested in the eaves of windows, he knew the names of everyone who could give him aid. He rose, and rose, yet did so in the shadows. When he unveiled himself, his enemies fled or bled and died, and the Emperor was his tool. The great massacre of Sarzi was his doing, and the Emperor in his wrath at finding traitors in his midst, turned over everything, one way or another, to one man. Father.
No. of votes: 2
Bakkasama, dpara
[X] Imperial Province (Irit): The land of rivers and of the lake from which the first Emperor was said to have emerged ten-thousand years ago. If one believes the imperial myths and ignores all of the problems with the myths, the Empire has existed for that long, a chain unbroken truly, or at most only in letter but not in spirit. She was a shrine priestess on the holy island in the center of that holiest of lakes, and yet pregnancy is the one thing they could not accept, and far she fled, taking the teachings and secrets with her.
No. of votes: 17
beowolf, Gamerlord, Estro, Skelm, Kerfirou, mori, Terrabrand, Diomedon, Tanor, Bakkasama, Kingofbooks, Evilness42, George, lkmcclenahan, Broken25, Tsume817, PayKey

[X] Imperial Province (Yeadalt): The strangest of all of the provinces, home to the greatest number of non-official languages and even cultural groups, it is here that heresies and cults form like mushrooms. They form, they spread, they are harvested or destroyed. It is a province in which the ruling elite, of the Csiritan stock, is far outnumbered by those whose ways are not those of the empire. It is also home to some of the strangest tales, the strangest ways to do magic and live, in all of the twelve provinces, or so rumor goes. Besides the cults, the religions, and the many peoples, here flourish too criminal groups, who band together against all outsiders and cause banditry and chaos.
No. of votes: 14
Aabcehmu, StarkDemise, PlatypusofFail, Orisha91, Hobbes, Bommelom, Random Member, veekie, Nevill, Ridiculously Average Guy, Zulfurium, Gingganz, wingstrike96, Sivantic

[x] Imperial Province (Hari-Os): This long thin strip of a province is one of great wealth and power, though his Mother knew little enough of its power. Laying their on the coast, the vast cities competed with the Southlands and fought off the Sea-raiders, and traded and fought off the Water-People, whose acts had gone far beyond merely working with spirits into...into areas where no human should go, according to many religions. Wealth and power congregated into one area, and his Mother had been born in poverty and squalor. At least the Southlands weren't so different from her home, in the ways that mattered?
No. of votes: 4
Crowhunter, masterofmadness, Happerry, NuclearConsensus

[X] Southlands (Oasis): Mother was a woman of the proud tribes and fragmenting empires of the deserts and the lands beyond the deserts, who practiced the dangerous art of making spirits into tattoos. There was an entire line of Emperors who married into the holy imperial line after having conquered half of the Empire and splintering the rest, who have this blood, and this combination of antagonism and assimilation continues to this day.
No. of votes: 4
dpara, Leingod, Daecl, XkaliburRage

[X] Anlan: The only Kingdom of the West, beyond the long plains who has the right to trade back and forth with Csirit, Mother was the daughter of a merchant, and nothing more. Yet from them she inherited the strange looks which might have stirred some passion for the exotic from his Father. But not too exotic, it seemed.
No. of votes: 2
Pyro Hawk, Arcus2611
 
Alright, then.

Scholar-Irit it is.

So, some random info.

The 'Learning/Scholarship' option for the MC (as a primary focus/profession) was going to be your character learning all about the 17th (dead) Southlands city. Its history, its culture, its dialect...etc, etc, as a sort of way of remembering the past that his father had destroyed.

Also, taking a page from a story about Stalin, his father has what he regards as an anecdote of one of his greatest triumphs that goes like this (for Monster):

The son of the Hereditary Governor of Hari-Bueli committed treason by word. He was in the court, it was recorded, dumb mistake, penalty is death, etc.

But the (then in his mid-thirties) Monster was known as someone who could be bribed or corrupted to ignore things, to let someone 'escape' or any number of matters. So the Governor, whose line goes back almost six-hundred years of proud arrogance, went to the court in full regalia, in full fashion, and met with the Emperor and found him useless, as expected.

So, Monster invites him to a dinner party. Just him, and Monster's cronies.

So he dresses up, he prepares magnificent bribes. Entire tracts of good land, concubines, slaves, anything he could name, the Governor is willing to give for the life of his son.

At the party, Monster starts drinking and eventually says, "Governor, why don't you get up on the table, sing and dance a little, be merry!"

The Governor, on his dignity and fear of shame, refuses.

So Monster says, "In one week's time, at dusk, your son shall be killed." With a sort of leer.

So the Governor stares at this crude bastard, whose father was a petty lord and whose mother was some village whore, this learned and yet infinitely crude man who possessed power over an entire Empire...and then he got up on the table and sung and danced, at first not able to fake any happiness, but eventually getting into the swing of things when Monster glared and grinned and clapped his hands.

And then, as the dancing died down, Monster said, "I have great news, if what I said brings you oh so much merriment! If that makes you happy, then this news will make you ecstatic: your son will be executed at midnight, in about an hour, as a traitor deserves![1] Eat, drink, and be merry as you are!"

And then everyone around them, all the cronies burst out laughing with the Monster, who offered a drink to the man and said, "C'mon, it's just a brat, be glad you're not hauled up next."

And looked at him with eyes that said he'd do it and not regret it.

Then Monster got drunk and danced on the table and sung songs but it was not a humiliation for him, for that night was a triumph. He'd made a proud and powerful man beg and cavort himself for his son's life, he'd showed just how far he rose that someone so important was willing to do so much for his favor.

Eventually the Governor tried to rise in rebellion, and was killed, and one of the cronies, who was there on that night in fact where it all began, was given the title and job, and reigns to this day.

[1] The least auspicious time of execution, only slightly less insulting than Dawn, which is regarded as the time to kill Great Traitors, whose death will bring a new dawn to the world, as it were.
 
Character Creation 1.b
Impromptu Name vote.

[] Jiaoco: Meaning something roughly like foot-grabber, he was actually born a twin with his sister. It was said he had ambitions to be first, having come out of the womb second, by the way his hand was groping towards his sister's foot. Advantage/Trait: Has a (slightly) older sister who might be an ally/bargaining chip/etc in the future.
[] Kiralo: Related to the root word for 'beautiful' he was apparently good looking even as a child, and certainly he grew into a handsome young man, which gave him a boost of confidence, and a willingness to go out and make friends, to trust in himself. Gains Attractive, possible minor advantages, reroll 1s for Diplomacy Stat rolls.
[] Saoli: (Tzao-lee, btw): Named for one of the spirits on the Holy Island, his mother has taught him a few of the names. Not many, for they are a Sacred Secret, but a few, and a little about what it means to commune with the spirits. Gain a few names of Holy spirits, when rolling stats for magic, a 1 will be rerolled.
[] Hai'ta: Named after the waters of the lake from which the Emperor had sprung, it turned out to be a proper name indeed, for he had thrived in the coastal cities of the Southlands, had loved the spray of salt and the water, and the spirits in it. He knows more about the ocean than most, about ships and the spirits that are important in such environments.
[] Zheng: Named for a character in an ancient Csiritan epic who traveled all the world, it seemed to be a fitting name, for he found himself fascinated by this new culture that he spent most of his life in, and learned several of their languages and dialects, as well as gaining an understanding of their culture. He was a very footloose sort of young man.

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Choose one, duh. You have 24 hours. Feel free to ask questions, though I tried to be as direct as I could about the types of advantages that would be accrued, except when they were broad/structural, like Hai'ta.
 
[X] Kiralo: Related to the root word for 'beautiful' he was apparently good looking even as a child, and certainly he grew into a handsome young man, which gave him a boost of confidence, and a willingness to go out and make friends, to trust in himself. Gains Attractive, possible minor advantages, reroll 1s for Diplomacy Stat rolls.
 
[X] Jiaoco: Meaning something roughly like foot-grabber, he was actually born a twin with his sister. It was said he had ambitions to be first, having come out of the womb second, by the way his hand was groping towards his sister's foot. Advantage/Trait: Has a (slightly) older sister who might be an ally/bargaining chip/etc in the future.
 
[X] Saoli: (Tzao-lee, btw): Named for one of the spirits on the Holy Island, his mother has taught him a few of the names. Not many, for they are a Sacred Secret, but a few, and a little about what it means to commune with the spirits. Gain a few names of Holy spirits, when rolling stats for magic, a 1 will be rerolled.
 
[X] Saoli: (Tzao-lee, btw): Named for one of the spirits on the Holy Island, his mother has taught him a few of the names. Not many, for they are a Sacred Secret, but a few, and a little about what it means to commune with the spirits. Gain a few names of Holy spirits, when rolling stats for magic, a 1 will be rerolled.
 
[X] Saoli: (Tzao-lee, btw): Named for one of the spirits on the Holy Island, his mother has taught him a few of the names. Not many, for they are a Sacred Secret, but a few, and a little about what it means to commune with the spirits. Gain a few names of Holy spirits, when rolling stats for magic, a 1 will be rerolled.
 
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