Behind the Serpent Throne (CK2)

A bit late.

[X] Use Kueli to make a big point, and then try to sneak around and deal with Jianglong while he was focusing on the more obvious thread.
 
[X] Use Kueli to make a big point, and then try to sneak around and deal with Jianglong while he was focusing on the more obvious thread.
 
Turn 16: Part 7
Turn 16, Part 7

It was a long walk, the journey of hours. There was too little to talk about, especially since the prospect of ambush was always present. They could have talked of home, but this place was so far from it, and so strange. Desert, well, there were deserts in the Southland, especially to the south… but neither had been born of the desert.

Kueli briefly tried to start up a discussion of why they called them the Southlands, when this was clearly a Csiritan title thrust upon them. It implied an order to things, in which Csirit was the center, and the lands south of them… well. Were not. But Ayila just shook her head and kept on muttering the names of spirits.

He didn't know when he'd become like this. He tugged at his mustache in distraction and something like irritation. He could do distraction very well, and yet he spent his time thinking about just what this was. Here he was, probably committed long-term to Csirit, of all places. Csirit, who had driven out and changed the world in… long before he was born. But he had great-great… grandfarts who had been rebels against the Csiritan rule. Who had seen it cast down, leaving the cities and some of the infrastructure on which to build something capable of defending itself, something more than an appendage of the Kings of the South, and all their ambition and schemes. All their power, the fury of high plains and desert, of mountain and spirits ancient and cruel.

If you asked such people, the Seventeen Cities weren't even the Southlands, just an extension of Csiritan influence. And yet, when war had come, and touched the edges of their lands, who had it been that had settled it, that had enough power to…

No, the balance of the world really was north of where some thought it would be. He was the child of upstarts, of an upstart people who had lost and won in great measures, coins heaped up upon a table, each soaked in blood.

Kiralo was the poet, and yet he'd never write of such a thing. Not quite. Perhaps he should. Perhaps a poem would do what a sword could not. Once Kiralo had tried to translate a famous Southlander poem into Csiritan. Kueli had remembered the way he'd struggled with the lines, trying to march them into shape. 'A liminal people hedged in/A boundless people unshackled/By spirits blessed, by wind carried/ From now unto the earth's end.'

It lost something in translation, and yet he muttered this, and the names of the spirits, and wished again for his horse. It was an obvious enough thing. Be loud, be annoying, challenge one's enemies in such a way that they would pay attention to him.

It was a potentially fatal task, but he was a mercenary: potentially fatal tasks were his job, and would be for the rest of his life, until he was too crippled or old to fight. Whether it was for Csirit or the Southlands, it mattered not.

*******

The four of them were together, the old man holding the mirror in one hand and a rather sharp, curved blade in the other. And in front of them were four mirrors, curving slightly towards them. The sky above was getting a little bit lighter, though Kueli still couldn't see the streak that Ayila had been following.

"Coward!" Kueli said as he leapt forward, drawing his bow. Four mirrors, did that mean four targets. "Coward and fool!"

His arrow found one of the mirrors, the one that seemed farthest from the other, and the men turned around. Well, two of them did. Two of the others leapt for the mirrors. They disappeared in a flash, and the old man merely waved his hand and the mirrors broke.

Kueli grinned and had his next shot find the last of the assassins, the man dodging out of the way at the last moment, and thus almost exposing the last, and centermost, mirror. But Jianglong seemed to flow, his whole body going mirror-reflective as he did, to block the blow. "I am no coward," Jianglong said, quietly. "But you are a fool."

Kueli stepped forward, already drawing his bow and loosing another arrow, this one screaming with spirits as Jianglong batted it aside with a grunt.

"You are a fool, and you shall die." Jianglong stepped forward. Another arrow, and then another, failed, and then Kueli finally got what he wanted. An arrow, singing with spirits now, almost bleeding with the spirits trying to keep it on track, went straight into Jianglong's left hand.

"Ha!" Kueli yelled, striding forward.

The old man pulled out the arrow, and the wound healed instantly, with the sound of rippling and what looked like glass breaking in reverse. Then he waved his mirror back and forth and suddenly there were two of him there, each wielding a mirror and a sword, their motions exactly the opposite of each other as they brought their weapons and their mirrors forward.

The very air rippled and shattered as the spirits shot towards him. He tensed, putting aside his bow and slashing down at the spirits in mid-arc with his sword, meeting it as his muscles strained and the names of spirits shot from him in pained grunts, his eyes fixed on the cruel, easy arrogance of Jianglong. This was not quite a game, and yet there was something certain about this whole conflict.

He knew if he lost his grip now, the force of the spirits would shatter his sword, and his arm. He couldn't stop it by main force.

Perhaps he couldn't stop it at all.

********

The assassin was a fool, as Eyes declared again and again, as Ayila wrapped her spirits around him. At this rate, he'd die as soon as he left the environment of the mirror. In this place, in this strange half-world, someone like Jianglong was far more powerful than he should be. Powerful enough that even Ayila would have to be careful of him. And this power and protection did extend to those with him. She could strip it, as one does any such binding of spirits. It was how, after all, the ancient and vast protections of the Imperial Seat worked, the ones that meant that only the Emperor and his guards had spirits.

She was not quite so great--nor did she have quite so much time--but that is something she could have done. But it was more amusing, and far more useful, to grit her teeth and fill him with weaknesses. Weaknesses which meant he'd be a corpse falling out of the mirror, shattered by his own hubris before the spirits.

Then she turned to see how she could deal with Jianglong. Kueli had dodged to the left, seeing that he was overmatched, and used his spirits to kick up dust, enough that the next blast of spirits and force missed, just barely. Jianglong grunted, and two people became four.

Ayila knew how it was happening. It had to do with the properties of this mirror, and the potential to be in multiple places at once. Now that there were four of them, their power wasn't… divided, quite, but they were stretched thin, made other than what they were. Kueli would die if she didn't get involved, but she had a feeling he would die well, and that Jianglong would have some trouble pulling himself--

"I see you, daughter of an aged line. I see you, and I see your folly," Jianglong said. The assassin turned, the one she had been standing next to hidden by weavings of spirits greater than that of most… and yet entirely exposed. "I see you and I see your doom. He shows me the way, and he mirrors all of man's folly."

She stabbed at the assassin's shoulder, but the man grabbed her hand, faster than expected. Oh. Gritting her teeth she gathered her spirits, calling out their names in her mind as she moved towards the mirror, wondering if perhaps she could throw herself towards it. Down came his knife, right into her face. It almost hit her eye, but her spirits managed to push it at the last moment.

Which just meant that the highly poisoned knife went just below her eye and slashed across as she grabbed the man's hand.

And did something absurd.

The man gasped in horror as his arm became covered in blackened, hateful eyes. Hundreds of them, filling every inch of his skin, like sores. And then they shattered.

Ayila had never lost an eye: nor, for that matter, had she ever lost several hundred eyes. Nor, even, did she know that she was able to do that--probably she hadn't been, before she'd stolen a name.

She had to imagine, though, that the part where her knife came up and slit his throat as he weeped in agony was the least painful part of the process.

People will call you a great fool, looking upon the scar from that wound. They will celebrate your madness, and yet no doubt in five-hundred years, they will make you ten times the beauty and unscarred, Yahjing cackled.

Ayila blinked, and thought that this was quite presumptuous.

You are the one who is seizing much. You are the one who is becoming little. Never have I been so humiliated and weakened. If it is just a foolish slip of a girl who did it, then it is unbearable. But no, you must have a great Destiny. A great and absurd Destiny.

He'd read her thoughts. She didn't know what to say to that.

Say that you named me. Say that you acted as a Spirit did. You did, without even ordering. Because it is your power. Because it IS YOU.

She was a spirit, in part, now. She knew what this was. Heck, the Csiritans abhorred this, and… there were the Sea People, and--

She knew what she was doing, what she was accepting. And of course, those were mere plain and simple spirits and they made many think that one wasn't human. If she opened her mouth and did what she was going to do, there was no going back. Perhaps there was even no surviving it.

But now Eyes was feeding her his power, almost drawing herself into it as she reached out and made it in part her own. She could do this. She, in fact, would do this.

"I am Ayila," she said, quietly. But soon another voice joined her, a male one as she kept on speaking. "I am Ayila, of ancient and proud lineage, a lineage of Shamans and Seers, of Priests and Warriors, of Fools and Wise Men both. Great and terrible alike, it flows in my veins."

The crackling, deadly attack that came at her was easily swept aside with a wave of her hand. "I am the daughter of Baakua, who is as kind as she is canny, a woman who valued more than anything else her family, who was daughter of Chahra, beloved of the bastard son of Prince Namal, second of his name, who fought for his claim with all of her wiles, for she was reckoned--"

She laughed as the earth itself groaned and tried to fall out beneath her. "More beautiful than any alive, and more crafty. And who was daughter of Ayila my namesake, who cut the throat of Prince Namal, first of his name, and whispered to the spirits to keep it a great secret, such that none would ever know. I am from this line, and yet I am--"

By now there were hundreds of voices echoing with hers, male and female, old and young, hundreds of voices, hundreds of heads, thousands of eyes. It echoed, it really did.

"I am greater than all of them."

It was a boast, yes. But it was true.

"I'm the son of a merchant who liked coin and secrets, and a woman who grasped for everything but loves fiercely," Kueli said, simply. "I don't need a glorious line to kick your ass."

Jianglong had the good sense to look terrified.

On both sides of him--him, two facing each way--they charged.

Ayila's magic seemed to simply make his slide off, as if it were a dagger made of glass against true steel. She could feel the pain as she grasped harder and harder on the connection. This could kill her. Perhaps it would almost certainly kill her, but if it did, she'd be doing it in a good cause.

A shot of pain went into her arm, and she realized that she was going to pay for this either way. Down came two of the swords against Kueli. But instead of blocking, he half-dodged, tossing his sword into the other hand and pushing the blow away. With a crack, his left arm broke, badly.

His right arm, on the other hand, went straight through one of the two Jianglongs facing him, and then slashed out to almost behead the other.

Ayila, for her part. Spirits did not command, not in that way. A Greater Spirit just willed something to happen, and by its power, often enough, it did. There was something simple and yet profound about this, perhaps, but she'd never considered it until that moment. So, rather than give a thousand different orders to her spirits, she simply… killed Jianglong.

The word method implied that there was a pause, a process to it, rather than the simple decision and the simpler fact of his death, untouched and yet cold.

Then she felt her vision swim. She'd… pushed herself a little. By which one might say she'd done the impossible, and now her body was remembering it was still, quite frankly, human. Her knees buckled out from under her, and she passed out to the amused laughter of a Great Spirit.

*******

She woke to a sword, pressed against her throat, and the cold black eyes of a man in green armor, a Csiritan who babbled in his tongue at her. The… the mirror. Where was the mirror? She glanced around, and then saw that she was in a chair, and that in a chair next to her was Kueli, his arm in a sling.

And the mirror?

"I…" she groaned. "What happened?"

"You passed out," Kueli said. "So I tossed the man's body through the mirror-portal, where the Emperor was apparently finishing up his last check-up of his wardrobe before he went to early court. Then I tucked your little artifact under one arm, and you under the other, and sorta… went through. Almost died," Kueli said, with a desperately laugh. He looked worse for the wear. "They punched me, and if they hadn't recognized me…"

"And yet we did," the Csiritan holding the sword to her throat said. "Yet we did. Southlander, though--"

"Try to be scary. I faced a fucking monster who could mirror himself to save your Emperor, snake throne guy," Kueli said with a cough. "Lost good men doing it, and might lose more. I'm well past caring about anyone except--"

The door opened, slowly, and two guards slipped their way in. It was a side room, opulent--in that the tapestries on the wall could perhaps feed a village for months if served… each--and yet also oddly empty. It was something that could be filled with furniture, so that it could be what the Emperor desired. Then came the Emperor himself.

A young boy, his face solemn and uncertain, in a robe of Imperial Blue, with a pattern of green trees upon it, and long golden sleeves, as wella s a silver-gold set of hair pins that left his long and elaborate hair quite out of the way.

Ayila groaned, trying to focus. The mirror… she needed to. She…

Her head ached. She hadn't slept long enough lately, and then all of this had happened.

Behind him came Kiralo and Kuojah, each of them in fine robes, each of them looking rather more certain.

"Please, leave us, guards," the Emperor ordered, quietly. He was clearly following his own orders, as he glanced over at Kuojah, as if making certain of this. "We are safe."

A lot of hesitation, and then away goes the sword, and the two most powerful people in the Empire… and the young Emperor were speaking with them.

"Your Imperial Majesty, you've heard what has been done. Scaring you thus, and engaging in such lengths of scheming and action without your explicit permission, they're… unforgiveable," Kuojah said. "At least, many would say so. Do you want my advice?"

"Y-yes," the boy said, quietly.

"They should be… pardoned of most offenses, considering what they have done," the old man said. "But… they should be exiled from the court. Cs-Kuojah himself stays most of the time in the city, as does this Ayila. And Kiralo, you'll need to be exiled for at least a year, because you cannot--"

"No," the Emperor said.

Kuojah looked shocked.

"Of course, my Emperor," Kuojah said. He looked almost shaken.

Kiralo, on the other hand, had this glow in his eyes that Ayila didn't know if she trusted. As if he were proud of the Emperor, all of a sudden. She was exhausted, out of it, and watching some strange power play, some moment.

"They have saved my life, have they not? Saved it, when I might have died otherwise. They should be honored with almost anything they could possibly want. Rewards, at least, gold and honors, titles and names. I… I'm. I'm sure you can handle that, honored Cs-Kuojah, y-you have been a great help to me since I have become Emperor, and I value your advice and input. And that of your son, Cs-Kiralo. Who should be given a golden reward… for he sent orders, good orders, and saw that they were done." The Emperor coughed, his face flushed. But he didn't look at Kiralo to ask if she was good. "So he should be well-rewarded as well, and… and. These aren't all the rebels, so we need to raise up an army, and… and deal with it."

Now Kiralo's eyes were filled with shocked pride, as if a student had suddenly started reciting an ancient and difficult poem from memory.

"Of course, Your Imperial Majesty," Kiralo said, lowering himself to the ground.

"As I rely on you, I trust you to keep me… informed on these matters. To explain them, to justify them, to teach me that I may be a wise Emperor. One who does not allow… mere necessity to make me forget the laws."

Kuojah looked somewhere between impressed and bowled over.

"I-I." The Emperor stopped talking and nodding. "I've been thinking about it for a while. Cs-Kiralo has been telling me about… your job, and his job. But there's never been time with words."

"Ah," Kuojah said, faintly.

"Also, I'm getting a puppy. And I don't have to ask your permission, cause I'm Emperor, and you can't simply ask carefully if I think it wise, and things!" the Emperor said, firmly, with a look of fire in his eyes, as if this, ultimately, was the crux of matter. And perhaps it was, Ayila thought, with half-sleepy exhaustion.

A boy wanting a puppy, and willing to assert himself as a master of his destiny to get it. "Your Imperial…" Ayila groaned. "We beg your forgiveness, for you are, are…"

She forgot the words.

"Most wise, and most great," Kiralo said, throwing himself to the ground, "Emperor. These friends of mine, honored Cs-Ayila and Cs-Kueli, are exhausted. May I help take them to a place to rest. One fitting, of course, their status."

"Of course," the Emperor said, a little faintly, as if that display of might was too much for him, and he needed to sit down and rest, himself.

*******

Kueli wondered if he should tell Ayila about… nah.

"You know, how much of that did you have planned?" Kueli asked, as he walked along.

"I've been talking to the Emperor over the past month. Explaining the law and my decisions. Trying to make him understand what is going on, and… the fact that it is. That he should trust us, but." Kiralo was quiet. "And he asked permission for a puppy, and I told him that he should try demanding it. But I didn't hear he'd gotten a puppy, so I supposed the matter… dropped."

Kueli had to keep from laughing. There was no telling what ears were here to listen. Heck, the mirrors, the eyes… there were a lot of ways for one to see things, he knew now. Even if they were speaking in Southlander. "Impressive, really. Two of them got away."

"We'll see what they do," Kiralo said, quietly. "Ayila, I would offer you the right to stay here for another three months. You have to leave, but three or four months would give you time to master that which you have now… I can feel it, you know. I can feel it, even without--"

"What?" Ayila asked.

The poor girl looked sleepy, and if one was looking at the right angle she looked like nothing more than a tired sixteen year old, a girl with a somewhat boyish face, but with the innocence of youth.

"It will probably hurt me at court, if you say. But it's the least I owe you, and it might give you a chance, a real one, because that… that's pretty dangerous, I assume. It's something that will cause actions, as soon as you are in a place where it is not simply… horrific heresy of a sort that I too often court."

"What?" Ayila asked, this time snapping.

Kiralo held up… oh. He had the mirror. He really did. Ayila looked in it, and then blinked, not quite getting it at first.

In the center of her forehead, there was a closed eyelid, obvious to all the world. It was like nothing Kueli had ever heard of, in all the stories like this.

A… third eye?

So, what's her choice?

[] Stay for a few more months. A few, and no more, she can't, not after this. It'd help her get it under control, and she'd be able to give him magical advice… but on the other hand, it's almost certain to hurt Kiralo's political standing. He'll have to defend her, when, well. When she is as she is. Probably not politically fatal, but certainly… costly. Yet, she did save the Emperor, and risk much, as well.
[] No, once she has been rewarded, she can leave. With Kiralo's blessing and protection of course. And probably a dozen or two of the Rassit, just to make sure she gets back safe. It does mean that she'll be gone soon, but… so it goes.

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A/N: Whew. This was… wow. A monster of a chapter to write. I hope you liked it, as much as I did.

Also, you'll learn exactly how she killed Jianglong next update. Which will be the last update, other than the Rumors one, before Turn 17.
 
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[X] Stay for a few more months. A few, and no more, she can't, not after this. It'd help her get it under control, and she'd be able to give him magical advice… but on the other hand, it's almost certain to hurt Kiralo's political standing. He'll have to defend her, when, well. When she is as she is. Probably not politically fatal, but certainly… costly. Yet, she did save the Emperor, and risk much, as well.
 
Well he did offer it.

[X] Stay for a few more months. A few, and no more, she can't, not after this. It'd help her get it under control, and she'd be able to give him magical advice… but on the other hand, it's almost certain to hurt Kiralo's political standing. He'll have to defend her, when, well. When she is as she is. Probably not politically fatal, but certainly… costly. Yet, she did save the Emperor, and risk much, as well.

Also, too cute.
"Also, I'm getting a puppy. And I don't have to ask your permission, cause I'm Emperor, and you can't simply ask carefully if I think it wise, and things!" the Emperor said, firmly, with a look of fire in his eyes, as if this, ultimately, was the crux of matter. And perhaps it was, Ayila thought, with half-sleepy exhaustion.
 
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[X] Stay for a few more months. A few, and no more, she can't, not after this. It'd help her get it under control, and she'd be able to give him magical advice… but on the other hand, it's almost certain to hurt Kiralo's political standing. He'll have to defend her, when, well. When she is as she is. Probably not politically fatal, but certainly… costly. Yet, she did save the Emperor, and risk much, as well.

That was a sick fight scene, I'm really glad you resumed this quest
 
She was a spirit, in part, now. She knew what this was. Heck, the Csiritans abhorred this, and… there were the Sea People, and--

She knew what she was doing, what she was accepting. And of course, those were mere plain and simple spirits and they made many think that one wasn't human. If she opened her mouth and did what she was going to do, there was no going back. Perhaps there was even no surviving it.

But now Eyes was feeding her his power, almost drawing herself into it as she reached out and made it in part her own. She could do this. She, in fact, would do this.

"I am Ayila," she said, quietly. But soon another voice joined her, a male one as she kept on speaking. "I am Ayila, of ancient and proud lineage, a lineage of Shamans and Seers, of Priests and Warriors, of Fools and Wise Men both. Great and terrible alike, it flows in my veins."

The crackling, deadly attack that came at her was easily swept aside with a wave of her hand. "I am the daughter of Baakua, who is as kind as she is canny, a woman who valued more than anything else her family, who was daughter of Chahra, beloved of the bastard son of Prince Namal, second of his name, who fought for his claim with all of her wiles, for she was reckoned--"

She laughed as the earth itself groaned and tried to fall out beneath her. "And who was daughter of Ayila, who cut the throat of Prince Namal, first of his name, and whispered to the spirits to keep it a great secret, such that none would ever know. I am from this line, and yet I am--"

By now there were hundreds of voices echoing with hers, male and female, old and young, hundreds of voices, hundreds of heads, thousands of eyes. It echoed, it really did.

"I am greater than all of them."
The heck did she do!?
Become a human-spirit hybrid?
"I'm the son of a merchant who liked coin and secrets, and a woman who grasped for everything but loves fiercely," Kueli said, simply. "I don't need a glorious line to kick your ass."
I love this line.


A lot of hesitation, and then away goes the sword, and the two most powerful people in the Empire… and the young Emperor were speaking with them.

"Your Imperial Majesty, you've heard what has been done. Scaring you thus, and engaging in such lengths of scheming and action without your explicit permission, they're… unforgiveable," Kuojah said. "At least, many would say so. Do you want my advice?"

"Y-yes," the boy said, quietly.

"They should be… pardoned of most offenses, considering what they have done," the old man said. "But… they should be exiled from the court. Cs-Kuojah himself stays most of the time in the city, as does this Ayila. And Kiralo, you'll need to be exiled for at least a year, because you cannot--"

"No," the Emperor said.

Kuojah looked shocked.

"Of course, my Emperor," Kuojah said. He looked almost shaken.

Kiralo, on the other hand, had this glow in his eyes that Ayila didn't know if she trusted. As if he were proud of the Emperor, all of a sudden. She was exhausted, out of it, and watching some strange power play, some moment.

"They have saved my life, have they not? Saved it, when I might have died otherwise. They should be honored with almost anything they could possibly want. Rewards, at least, gold and honors, titles and names. I… I'm. I'm sure you can handle that, honored Cs-Kuojah, y-you have been a great help to me since I have become Emperor, and I value your advice and input. And that of your son, Cs-Kiralo. Who should be given a golden reward… for he sent orders, good orders, and saw that they were done." The Emperor coughed, his face flushed. But he didn't look at Kiralo to ask if she was good. "So he should be well-rewarded as well, and… and. These aren't all the rebels, so we need to raise up an army, and… and deal with it."

Now Kiralo's eyes were filled with shocked pride, as if a student had suddenly started reciting an ancient and difficult poem from memory.
And it seems. We have the beginnings of a great Emperor rather than a puppet


"Also, I'm getting a puppy. And I don't have to ask your permission, cause I'm Emperor, and you can't simply ask carefully if I think it wise, and things!" the Emperor said, firmly, with a look of fire in his eyes, as if this, ultimately, was the crux of matter. And perhaps it was, Ayila thought, with half-sleepy exhaustion.

A boy wanting a puppy, and willing to assert himself as a master of his destiny to get it. "Your Imperial…" Ayila groaned. "We beg your forgiveness, for you are, are…"
It will be the bestest of doggos.
 
The heck did she do!?
Become a human-spirit hybrid?

I love this line.



And it seems. We have the beginnings of a great Emperor rather than a puppet



It will be the bestest of doggos.

Well, you know about Sea-People, right? And the snake-people up north?

Those are just with regular spirits (usually), over a period of time. Not Great Spirits, of the sort that many worship as Gods.

This isn't a world that has these kinds of phrases, but she's kinda on the way to being, well. Something like a demi-god in terms of composition/nature. On her way being the key phrase.

By Csiritan religious standards she is no longer human, and is now an inhuman abomination.
 
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[X] Stay for a few more months. A few, and no more, she can't, not after this. It'd help her get it under control, and she'd be able to give him magical advice… but on the other hand, it's almost certain to hurt Kiralo's political standing. He'll have to defend her, when, well. When she is as she is. Probably not politically fatal, but certainly… costly. Yet, she did save the Emperor, and risk much, as well.

That was a fantastic update, and a thrill to read, so I'm likely going to reread it again tomorrow. Everything from the monologues, to the fight scenes, and how the environment they were in was described, to the aftermath and the dialogue with the Emperor and Kiralo/Kuojah was great.

Ayila is now some sort of super human/spirit hybrid, in the same vein as the Sea People and how those up north were described, but it happened with an entity much stronger than normal and I think (but am not sure) over a far shorter amount of time. It'd be interesting how the impact of a spirits name manifests now, with Ayila herself having her own names, and her being able to rename herself; plus how others knowing her name could affect her. Like others I still think it's genuinely in her interest to stay at court a little longer as notably they should have reliable access to knowledge that can help her greatly, and as the Emperor mentioned in this chapter she's also going to get rewards for saving his life.

It's quite interesting to think about how the mirror (was the knife also an artifact? Is that here too) will be used in the future too, given the reason Ayila was sent to find it in the first place. The mirror world can be used to do so many things, though, there's also a question of just how willing they actually want to let the artifact go now too. Though, they likely don't want to annoy Ayila either given the reverence that Great Spirits have.

With regards to Kiralo specifically, while letting Ayila stay longer may hurt his standing, it should be noted that the Emperor rewarded him too in this update which is meaningful as we're not going to actually lose influence. We just may not gain as much as we otherwise would have. Although, given there is still the mystery of the prior Emperor's death and how the spirits were, even that can be recouped if we follow up that investigation.
 
[X] Stay for a few more months. A few, and no more, she can't, not after this. It'd help her get it under control, and she'd be able to give him magical advice… but on the other hand, it's almost certain to hurt Kiralo's political standing. He'll have to defend her, when, well. When she is as she is. Probably not politically fatal, but certainly… costly. Yet, she did save the Emperor, and risk much, as well.

That was a fantastic update, and a thrill to read, so I'm likely going to reread it again tomorrow. Everything from the monologues, to the fight scenes, and how the environment they were in was described, to the aftermath and the dialogue with the Emperor and Kiralo/Kuojah was great.

Ayila is now some sort of super human/spirit hybrid, in the same vein as the Sea People and how those up north were described, but it happened with an entity much stronger than normal and I think (but am not sure) over a far shorter amount of time. It'd be interesting how the impact of a spirits name manifests now, with Ayila herself having her own names, and her being able to rename herself; plus how others knowing her name could affect her. Like others I still think it's genuinely in her interest to stay at court a little longer as notably they should have reliable access to knowledge that can help her greatly, and as the Emperor mentioned in this chapter she's also going to get rewards for saving his life.

It's quite interesting to think about how the mirror (was the knife also an artifact? Is that here too) will be used in the future too, given the reason Ayila was sent to find it in the first place. The mirror world can be used to do so many things, though, there's also a question of just how willing they actually want to let the artifact go now too. Though, they likely don't want to annoy Ayila either given the reverence that Great Spirits have.

With regards to Kiralo specifically, while letting Ayila stay longer may hurt his standing, it should be noted that the Emperor rewarded him too in this update which is meaningful as we're not going to actually lose influence. We just may not gain as much as we otherwise would have. Although, given there is still the mystery of the prior Emperor's death and how the spirits were, even that can be recouped if we follow up that investigation.

The mirror has a portion of itself that can detach, and that makes a knife. So it's an artifact that can exist in two parts.
 
[X] Stay for a few more months. A few, and no more, she can't, not after this. It'd help her get it under control, and she'd be able to give him magical advice… but on the other hand, it's almost certain to hurt Kiralo's political standing. He'll have to defend her, when, well. When she is as she is. Probably not politically fatal, but certainly… costly. Yet, she did save the Emperor, and risk much, as well.
 
Well, you know about Sea-People, right? And the snake-people up north?

Those are just with regular spirits (usually), over a period of time. Not Great Spirits, of the sort that many worship as Gods.

This isn't a world that has these kinds of phrases, but she's kinda on the way to being, well. Something like a demi-god in terms of composition/nature. On her way being the key phrase.

By Csiritan religious standards she is no longer human, and is now an inhuman abomination.

...an Exalt eh? Not the same, but close.
 
[X] Stay for a few more months. A few, and no more, she can't, not after this. It'd help her get it under control, and she'd be able to give him magical advice… but on the other hand, it's almost certain to hurt Kiralo's political standing. He'll have to defend her, when, well. When she is as she is. Probably not politically fatal, but certainly… costly. Yet, she did save the Emperor, and risk much, as well.
 
[x] No, once she has been rewarded, she can leave. With Kiralo's blessing and protection of course. And probably a dozen or two of the Rassit, just to make sure she gets back safe. It does mean that she'll be gone soon, but… so it goes.

She has her own mission, which goes beyond the Csirtan court. Were her changes not so blatant then it would be a good place to get a handle on them and base herself out of but she has an eye in the middle of her forehead showing that she has become an abomination under their doctrine. A few months there will be unpleasant, dangerous and unproductive despite Kiralo's efforts. Better to have Kiralo here with his strength undimmed as a friend in case of future need than have him spend the political capital now.
 
[X] Stay for a few more months. A few, and no more, she can't, not after this. It'd help her get it under control, and she'd be able to give him magical advice… but on the other hand, it's almost certain to hurt Kiralo's political standing. He'll have to defend her, when, well. When she is as she is. Probably not politically fatal, but certainly… costly. Yet, she did save the Emperor, and risk much, as well.

Worth the Influence.
 
[x] No, once she has been rewarded, she can leave. With Kiralo's blessing and protection of course. And probably a dozen or two of the Rassit, just to make sure she gets back safe. It does mean that she'll be gone soon, but… so it goes.

TBH, we have other prospects, and she's so much an untested case (and something taboo on top of that) that I don't think we'd get to keep her notes if she was the sort to write said things down. Let her go I think.
 
[x] No, once she has been rewarded, she can leave. With Kiralo's blessing and protection of course. And probably a dozen or two of the Rassit, just to make sure she gets back safe. It does mean that she'll be gone soon, but… so it goes.

I'm inclined to agree that it's better for both of them for her to leave now.
 
Turn 16: Part 8
Turn 16--Part 8

Ayila thought of her family, and it was as if shards of glass were going into her skin. She could imagine it. And she was powerful now, but she wasn't all-powerful. She could be beaten, and her family had a lot they could throw at her if she didn't know what she wanted. If she didn't act to get what she wanted. She loved them, but that'd just make her more vulnerable. "I want to stay," Ayila admitted, quietly.

Almost shamed by what she felt when she saw him. Trust, sure, and respect… but also fear. He was so powerful, more powerful than her in the ways that mortals marked such things. Of which she was still one--she could still die, after all. He could command her and his best friend on a mad mission and trust them to come back, he could make a boy Emperor respect and value and trust him, and if he wanted her dead, he'd get it. She'd make it costly, but all the power in her body would count for little enough.

Eyes, of course, disagreed loudly, but she tuned him out.

Kiralo had begun to talk, and he was running through the rooms he'd get her somewhat near him, and the servants he would get for her and bribe for the months she could stay. He did it all as if it were nothing, and yet she was just rich enough to count the costs and realize she'd have to marry a wealthy merchant in the Southlands to get as much as he was giving her when translated into coin. It was nothing to him, or very little, and she realized that… well.

That she relied on him. That his vast and unyielding power could be a shelter, for at least a few months. She thought about taking a trip back south in the Fall, swaying a little in the seat, looking that way the whole time, and reaching home in time for the end of the season, and then winter. She could hole up, use the winter and the quiet to talk a few people around, get enough allies.

"What do you plan on doing?" Kiralo asked.

"Learning more about my mirror," Ayila said. My mirror, because she planned on keeping it, at least for a while. She wasn't just going to give it back immediately, though one day before too long she'd have to. But a year? Two? She could do such things with it. "Helping you if I can. Keeping to myself. I know that, somehow, this gotta be costing you, though as powerful as you are…"

"Me?" Kiralo asked, with a laugh that was just a bit hollow. "I'll sort everything out, don't you worry. But I do have to leave soon. Kueli, can you get to me for tea tomorrow morning?"

"I can," Kueli said. "I'm glad that at least they left me my good hand. But with only one of them, I'll probably need help to reach your place. Perhaps there's some pretty serving girl I can find…" He waggled his eyebrows.

"Perhaps," Kiralo said, with so much painful relief in his voice that she wanted to leave. Wanted to leave because while Kiralo might not be attracted to Kueli, in some way he was in love with the man. Brotherly love, but certainly not anything that she really deserved to see right now.

"I should… the quarters," Ayila said. Even after all that time resting, the better part of a day, she was so exhausted that when she wasn't leaning on the spirits she probably couldn't walk a straight line. It'd been a very, very, very long day. A long week. A long month. A long winter, in fact, cold and miserable.

So she left.

******

True to his promise, when Kueli opened the door there was a pretty girl in a servant's dress, her hair a little too messed up, on his arm. He had a sling, and he hated it, hated how much it itched, but there was no choice. The girl, well. They'd kissed a little bit most of all Kueli had bribed her a little, because admitting that he hadn't done as well at seducing a girl real good in time, well.

A man had his pride, didn't he? But it'd take moves so smooth he could locomote by sliding to win over a girl in two hours while exhausted and with a broken arm, when you aren't trying to take advantage of his power. At least not too much.

Kiralo was sitting there in his robes, pouring tea. "Come in, come in," Kiralo said. "We have much to catch up on."

Kueli didn't miss the glance she gave him, curious and a little… oh.

Oh by the Spirits, that's how it was?

Kueli wanted to laugh; he also wanted to cry. "Please leave. But, darling," he said, glancing over at the woman. "If you don't have anything to do, I'll be out once I finish my tea…"

"I… wouldn't want to, Cs-Kueli, I--" the woman said, eyes wide.

Okay, now that was a little less amusing. Were women going to be scared away from him because… what?

"By all the spirits, we aren't--" Kueli began, and then laughed. "And if I say we aren't, you'd take it as confirmation, darling. So, head off, then."

She closed the door behind her, and the servants stationed around the room looked almost amused.

"You know, it wasn't like that earlier. Not quite as much," Kueli said.

"Someone talked. I think it's the brother of that man on campaign. Either way, they know," Kiralo said, his voice a growl. "Please sit, and let me complain. I've had eight year olds thrust at me. Eight. Years. Old. I want to vomit, but no doubt they'd take it as some sign that they were on the right track, the Gods know how," Kiralo said, his calm mask replaced by a look of utter annoyance.

"Well, this ain't the Southlands," Kueli pointed out.

"I… know." Kiralo rubbed his eyes. "Some of them are adults, of course. But then I know what they're looking for and I'm not going to give it to them. Power? Influence? Do you think I'm that much of a fool? Maybe you should. You could have died, and it would have been on me for not sending enough people."

"No. You sent just enough," Kueli said. "And here you are."

"Leave this room," Kiralo said. "You can stay in the other rooms, as long as you're not so far away that a raised voice can't bring you in." He said it to the servants, including a tea-pourer who looked stricken by the idea of someone like Kiralo having to pour his own tea.

Once they were gone, Kueli sat down. "So, how's folks?"

"Well, the court is buzzing with rumors," Kiralo admitted. "It's also buzzing with commentary on me. This last month has made me rather popular… but I've also seemed stuffy. People calling me in for dinner parties and me having more paperwork to do. I've, well. I've been stage managing the whole trial, and he'll be dead next week, and finally all of that will be done with. I think I might have missed something, but there's something to be said for leaving the past the past… as long as it doesn't intrude on the present."

"Well, that's big of you," Kueli said. "So, you're becoming an old bore?"

"Something like that. I did go to a big dinner party. A family one, actually."

"How is Yanmae? I assume she didn't attend," Kueli said. "I mean, it'd just about serve this court right, that all the best people there aren't much for marrying."

"No. She's been so busy. She makes me look active. And she's… it's absurd. She's started doing some of the cleaning, when she's already writing so much that she has to switch hands sometimes when she gets a cramp."

"Why?" Kueli asked, baffled.

"Because she suddenly somehow feels bad for her servant, and this despite the fact that Ya is a woman of rather more experience. One wonders whether she's playing with Yanmae's heart. If so, Cs-Ya will regret it," Kiralo said. "But in the meantime, the two of them, and their governess, are doing quite well for themselves. The book will take time, probably years, and yet… I believe in her abilities. So does Ya, I suppose. Ya is very quiet. She's so servile it's frustrating, and yet there are changes to Yanmae's living arrangement that…"

"A horse can steer a man," Kueli said with an amused smirk.

"Well, yes," Kiralo said. "I suppose one can. And Cs-Yanmae is only seventeen. We had her birthday, me sitting there watching the dynamics of this whole thing. It was awkward, but I wished to honor her. She is doing good work, of a sort that I never could."

"Kiralo, are you okay?"

"I feel like, even more now than ever before, I'm ordering people to do things while I do very little myself," Kiralo said. "I'm not leading armies, and might not again for years, if ever. I hope never, but then there's everything else." He spread his arms. "It's an absurd thing to be worried about. Not as absurd as Ayila, though. She terrifies me. And worries me."

"Why? She's loyal," Kueli said, sounding a little bit baffled, as he should be. How could he really be that afraid?

"Yes. She is. But she's also a woman far more powerful than I am, someone who touched a man and filled his insides with thousands of eyes. All of his organs were covered in popped eyeballs. Internal and external." Kiralo looked sick. "I wonder what it must mean to have so much power and be both so casual and so careful about it."

"And you think you don't know that feeling?"

"Not as keenly as she will," Kiralo said, and this time he didn't shrug, just leaned forward and drank his tea, his eyes dark and thoughtful. He'd heard the court ladies talking about his brooding handsome before, sighing and fanning themselves at the thought of him, unable to even cover a blush. To Kueli, of course, getting that glare felt more like he was about to be scolded. But for what? "How long? How long until you're okay?"

"Two or three months for the arm, and then it'll be a few more months to work up the muscle again," Kueli said. "That look in your eyes--"

"I'm trying to figure out how to order the rest of my life right now. It's not about you, or maybe it is. It's about making something. I've been here for nearly a year and a half." Kiralo's face grew a little less mysterious once Kueli heard that.

"And you fear you're not doing a good job?"

"I could do better. A lot better," Kiralo said. "Look at this mess. I bet there's going to be a rebellion anyways, because they can't know that they failed. Not yet. Any more than we can know for sure that they did fail. There were assassins who got away, one of them might have hit his mark better."

"Ah," Kueli said, quietly.

"It's been made better, and disaster averted, but we're going to have to act. And I know the next step. But… I've been talking to the Emperor, and I think I helped him know what the speech was. That he was to speak." Kiralo coughed. "I just helped a little on the phrasing."

"Ah," Kueli said, with a snigger. Of course. It was always amusing to see how Kiralo balanced his beliefs and reality. There were quite a few questions to ask, but right now he wanted to hear this. After all, he'd be getting some sort of award, even if it was just a pat on his bad arm.

"So tomorrow he's going to say…"

*******

"There has been a conspiracy against the Empire, one that threatened all we hold dear," the boy Emperor suddenly said, slowly rising from the seat. He was too short, of course, to be more imposing that way, but the very fact of it gets everyone's attention.

All the courtiers kneeling--or for the oldest sitting on low chairs, sprawled out--in the audience chamber lean forward. So, this is to be Kiralo's award, more than a few of them think, glancing over at Kiralo and at his friend and at the strange young woman in the hooded cloak, the one they say has a third eye.

The monster.

Named Ayila, or something, though… is she still a person to have a name so mundane, Southlander or no?

So they watch, and they wonder.

"One beyond the plot against ourselves that have troubled us for some time. A heretic, a vile heretic whose reach and cruelty was without match among such kinds, plotted my downfall. Jianglong plotted the downfall of all of the Governors, and thus the Empire itself. Myself alone would it take for the Empire to crumble, but he would not have succeeded. He would not have succeeded, because in my wisdom I tasked my loyal servant, Kiralo of the trustworthy lineage Ainin, to deal with the problem. He has, to an extent, considering the presence of a Great Spirit and a hostile populace, that cannot be discounted."

People turn to subtly glare at Kiralo at that. The whole court knows he's about to be rewarded again, that he's going to go up in influence, and some of them might actually revolt. His father was bad enough, but to be lorded over by a twenty-something boy?

They didn't, of course, see the bland amusement behind Kiralo's eyes, since he'd realized that there was such a thing as too far and too fast. They couldn't know that. They watched and were watched.

"All members that he sent to retrieve the body of the traitor, and foil his plans, shall receive fifty tael of silver.[1] Those who died in my service in this task, their parents or their household will receive the fifty taels, and any siblings shall receive another fifty, for to raise heroes is to be a hero." Give them a quotation, that always works. "But there are others whose achievement is especially notable. Hung, of the Mage Academy, is not present. But should he survive, he shall have one-hundred tael of silver, and my official commendation for any number of positions, when he should graduate."

Kiralo had had to carefully back the boy away from much higher amounts. The treasury could barely afford what he was… giving himself. But he was going to be investing at least half of it right back into the Empire. An independent stream of money for projects could help, in fact.

"Next, Kueli of the Southlands, approach. In respect for your injuries, you may kneel before me, rather than crawl."

"Thank you, your Imperial Majesty," Kueli said, his face absurdly solemn.

So solemn that everyone now knew for sure that this had been planned to the character.

Because Kueli would never manage that much grace normally. Not the formal grace, at least.

So he gets on his knees and crawls his way up the steps, with only his knees, until he is in front of the Emperor.

"I bestow on you my thanks, Kueli who is swifter than the wind, and who has the grace of a danger, and yet the strength of a loyal man of silver. I bestow as well one-hundred taels of silver."

The people gasped, not at the silver, but at the compliments. It was all but a recommendation for… anything, everything. From now until the Emperor said otherwise, he could no doubt use those words for any sort of purpose.

Kiralo, for his part, had one in mind, a very simple one: the Emperor's instructor in the equestrian arts.

"Depart, Kueli of the Southlands, that you may rest after your hard work."

The boy was marvellous. He was reading from a script, and yet he gave it life, smiled and believed in the words he was saying.

"Ayila, of the Southlands. I know you shall not wish to approach me, for your faith, false though it may be, is closely and deeply held," the Emperor said. "Your honor in serving the Empire in this time of crisis, by killing Jianglong and by your magical prowess, is notable. Thus, I grant you access to the Imperial Mage Academy for your researches, so long as you are here, one-hundred tael of silver, permission to keep the artifact that you retrieved from Jianglong, and the right to return to and live in the palace for so long as you may live."

If she ever had to flee the Southlands, having somewhere to go could help, despite everything.

"Cs-Kiralo, of Lineage Ainin. Approach."

Kiralo crawled, of course. Crawled and didn't regret it.

"Cs-Kiralo, have you heard of Ji Sing Estate?"

"No, Your Imperial Majesty," Kiralo said. "My ignorance is profound on this matter."

"It is one of my estates. I grant it to you for the rest of your life. The right of hunting, the right of justice so long as it obeys the laws of Gods and Empire, and the right of taxation. Rule well, and do as I would. Additionally, I gift to you one-hundred tael of gold, to be done with however you want."[2]

"Thank you, your Imperial Majesty."

Dai'so smiled and said. "Finally, you may wear approximately three pieces or one-tenth of an outfit of gold, for yours was a bureaucratic act. You did not fight, and yet that is to your…"

That wasn't on the script.

"That is to your credit," Dai'so said. "You have many talents, and to lose such talents would be harmful to the Imperial Seat. Go with my blessing."

He rested his hand on Kiralo's head, just for a moment, and despite his lack of spirits, he felt an odd sort of warmth.

He tried to convince himself it was just triumph, and not some working of the Gods.

Kiralo of Lineage Ainin returned to his seat, face blank, mind whirring.

[1] Think a few thousand dollars, as well as the reputation that comes from being there. Of course, a lot of them are dead. Hence the rest.
[2] Think some quantity of hundreds and hundreds of thousands of dollars, at least. A somewhat small but… damn impressive fortune.

*******
A/N: So, here we are. Rumors next, and then the first actual Turn, like, old-style and everything. It'll be hard work, but hopefully you'll enjoy.
 
"Yes. She is. But she's also a woman far more powerful than I am, someone who touched a man and filled his insides with thousands of eyes. All of his organs were covered in popped eyeballs. Internal and external." Kiralo looked sick. "I wonder what it must mean to have so much power and be both so casual and so careful about it."
It's interesting here that it seems they went to the trouble of having an autopsy for him, which seems unusual and a bit strange as to why they'd go to the effort. Is it more to examine just what Ayila is capable of, or specific to Jianglong.
"I bestow on you my thanks, Kueli who is swifter than the wind, and who has the grace of a danger, and yet the strength of a loyal man of silver. I bestow as well one-hundred taels of silver."
That's presumably meant to be dancer.
[1] Think a few thousand dollars, as well as the reputation that comes from being there. Of course, a lot of them are dead. Hence the rest.
[2] Think some quantity of hundreds and hundreds of thousands of dollars, at least. A somewhat small but… damn impressive fortune.
You need to provide a scale to reference this against, as of itself, that number doesn't tell you anything. If it's meant to be a comparison to the modern day wage, the scale seems way off that those figures would be relevant on a countries finances, particularly when it has a population of over a hundred million.

You've also had Kiralo contemplating the reward for the defeat of Jinhai as being that of a hundred taels of silver which he didn't accept as it would stress the treasury. At the same time you also have a yearly salary for Kiralo of a hundred taels of gold, and that not being unusual for someone of his class. So something seems a bit off here with the scale, though I understand why it may be difficult.

But with a child Emperor, and one who is in theory reigning, Kuojah has broken with tradition to create a sort of council of tutors, with greater power than is usual, and yet who are not truly any sort of 'council of regents.'
Relating back to the tutor post, I wonder how Kueli would interact with this council should Kiralo get his wish and he's also appointed a tutor. Particularly with Kiralo aiming to appoint another with a poetry teacher.

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Anyway, as usual a great update, and Kiralo's power grows once again. Though he was wise enough that while his grew personally, he tried to curb it's growth and instead allowed his followers/supporters to likewise grow.

It would have been interesting to see just what would of happened had Ayila approached the throne, as it's been commentated on that she's not just a human with powerful spirits anymore, but has integrated one and become a demi-spirit. Would the throne have prevailed, or would it just not affect Ayila personally?
 
hooo...uh-oh...
We might have been a bit hasty about teaching the Emperor to stand on his own...
Well, it's fifty-fifty I think. Better now while we're around then later when we'll be tied down to some lame job...IDK.
Probably better for him to learn the lesson now rather then later.

Basically, boy's learning the ropes but he's jumped from getting a hand-held tutorial to straight-up playing the game himself and he's going to need some serious help/allies if he's to do that.
The throne after all, is in the shape of a Serpent...
 
It's interesting here that it seems they went to the trouble of having an autopsy for him, which seems unusual and a bit strange as to why they'd go to the effort. Is it more to examine just what Ayila is capable of, or specific to Jianglong.

That's presumably meant to be dancer.

You need to provide a scale to reference this against, as of itself, that number doesn't tell you anything. If it's meant to be a comparison to the modern day wage, the scale seems way off that those figures would be relevant on a countries finances, particularly when it has a population of over a hundred million.

You've also had Kiralo contemplating the reward for the defeat of Jinhai as being that of a hundred taels of silver which he didn't accept as it would stress the treasury. At the same time you also have a yearly salary for Kiralo of a hundred taels of gold, and that not being unusual for someone of his class. So something seems a bit off here with the scale, though I understand why it may be difficult.


Relating back to the tutor post, I wonder how Kueli would interact with this council should Kiralo get his wish and he's also appointed a tutor. Particularly with Kiralo aiming to appoint another with a poetry teacher.

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Anyway, as usual a great update, and Kiralo's power grows once again. Though he was wise enough that while his grew personally, he tried to curb it's growth and instead allowed his followers/supporters to likewise grow.

It would have been interesting to see just what would of happened had Ayila approached the throne, as it's been commentated on that she's not just a human with powerful spirits anymore, but has integrated one and become a demi-spirit. Would the throne have prevailed, or would it just not affect Ayila personally?

To explain, it's not that 100 Taels of Silver, or even 100 of Gold, is *that* significant. It's just that all of these new reforms are absolutely, ruinously expensive. It's cutting down on your drapes budget when you're in debt to a loan shark, but...

But such gestures are still probably necessary, since it's not as if one can in any way skimp on the usual luxury of the palace. And Kiralo only gave himself 100 Taels of Gold because he plans on basically spending all of it on the Empire anyways. How? Well, you'll see with the Plan Update for Turn 17.

...wow, it's been forever since I've done it.
 
hooo...uh-oh...
We might have been a bit hasty about teaching the Emperor to stand on his own...
Well, it's fifty-fifty I think. Better now while we're around then later when we'll be tied down to some lame job...IDK.
Probably better for him to learn the lesson now rather then later.

Basically, boy's learning the ropes but he's jumped from getting a hand-held tutorial to straight-up playing the game himself and he's going to need some serious help/allies if he's to do that.
The throne after all, is in the shape of a Serpent...
Its best for him to learn to be at least somewhat independent now, because given the state of the Empire, things are only going to get harder, not easier.
 
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