As always, a blue horizon. The deep blue horizon of a mist-shrouded morning, the sky a callous gradient from black to bruise-blue, birdsong and a distant rumbling the only interruptions to the thick silence of this hour, a quiet thicker than the all-pervasive fog. A quiet like iron smog settling in the lungs. Even the detritus of the Inners is oppressive.
An extremely moody and ominous opening focused on the colors of the sky, have we seen this enough to be called of of Rihaku's cliches yet? It's extremely common, to say the least. Has he tried intruding the fact that it is a new day through some other thematic device, I wonder. I suppose it does lend itself to a unique style.
A misty-morning implied to be the result of pollution; this Omelas sucks already! A common description of Victorian London as well; I wonder if we will see further similarities. And like Victorian London, there seems to be an tension between the haves and have-nots if the last sentence is anything to go by. They seem to subjecting the Middle Temple to some serious pollution but their society doesn't seem very industrialized. I wonder what's going on there.
He shook his head, blinking away his father's resentments. The contamination was worsening. For six hundred and seventy-six days, Vanreir had awoken at exactly this time to attend to his daily duties. He grabbed pail and cloth and began to scrub.
Very convenient to have the contamination be italics. I wonder how does it feel in his own head? Are they just suspicious stray thoughts or does even the voice sound different, like it's the thoughts of another person? I suspect I may be thinking about this entirely too much.
Wow, he counts his routine to the days. If we didn't know his circumstances, I'd call that kind of psychotic. But more than a question of power, I suspect he uses an orderly routine to try to center himself and mitigate his father's influence. This is kind of a common trope, I think. Man is defined by his habits, after all.
And yeah, another reminder that whatever level of industrialization the Inners have doesn't seem to be shared to their entire civilization. It may even be more accurate to call the Middle Temple a colony of the Inners, really; it provides manpower and raw resources to them for what is basically their refuse and the elevation of a few select individuals. Much more on board with dismantling them now really. I think someone compared this set up to
Bleach's Soul Society, and it definitely seems apt.
There were those for whom duty was a prison and habit its cage, but he considered both more as scaffolding, the bedrock structure on which a life could be built. Meticulously he cleaned his room, the light of his soul kept coiled and inert, and moved steadily onto his sister's.
Huh, his father considered duty a prison, and yet he sacrificed his life so Vanreir could do his instead. Hypocrisy, or just necessity? By an direct application of the line, Vanreir is essentially caging himself with his lifestyle. He became a prisoner to the Inners.
But it seems his son disagrees, and looks to duty for support in his own life. It may be he clings to it all the tighter exactly because it distinguishes him from his father, someone he's trying to keep contained.
This preference seems reflected by his Soul Evocation, which, of course. I wonder what the Imprisoner says about Hunger then?
"Mm..." Erii was sleeping still, wrapped protectively around her plush pillow, and he maneuvered around her with quick, efficient movements, wiping down the weathered wood of the floors and carefully organizing her toys and knick-knacks.
Ah, a little sister. A tried and true method to make your readership instantly connect with a character and find him sympathetic. It's a trick so old it's almost cheap. But I suppose it's still used for a reason. Didn't help him any when it came down to it, thankfully. Neither did we decide to keep him around in our head, which might have made things a bit awkward. He's just gone. The tragedy of warfare, really. We likely left many grieving through our tear through the Outriders.
She seems well cared for at least, given the variety of toys and the meticulous way he's cleaning her room.
"Brother?" She murmured groggily, slowly sitting up. She was growing more alert, even as his own body continued its slow decay. One day they would meet in the middle, and then irreversibly diverge. But not today.
"Hush, small one. Go back to sleep." He smiled and placed a hand on her head. Today, he could still keep her safe.
"M'kay. Love you." She nuzzled his hand affectionately before settling down to sleep.
Confirmation that he's burning the candle at both ends here. God, is he a cliche. I suppose sacrificing your own future for the youngest in your family is not exactly something uncommon in real life, to be fair. Fantasy just has a way to exaggerate things, I suppose. This type of big brother and little sister relation ship is very characteristic of anime though. They seem allergic to positive parental relationships.
And a diabetes inducing scene to finish it all off. I'm sorry to say Vanreir, but you are incredibly dead. I'm surprised you haven't been crushed to death under the weight of all your death flags, frankly.
It is all on your shoulders now, my son. Everything I am, I leave to you. Let my soul be your guide. Let your soul be my tomb. And let this be enough, to awaken that which was promised. Please... let it be enough.
Very cool and good thing to put on your son's shoulders. Very cool and good indeed. Is being among the Inners really worth all this? The ruin of what remains of their family? Reality seems to have said no, but that maybe survivor's bias. Or death bias, in this case. Hunger's story would have been even more depressing had the Accursed not intervened, after an even steeper sacrifice. I suppose that makes it two for two? Really need the third case for conclusive evidence, I suppose.
It wasn't enough, in the end. I suppose that's the most tragic part; in the end, unlike with Hunger himself, it didn't mean anything. They failed.
Finished with his task, he walked past the now-empty master bedroom and towards the water closet. Their home was presentable, time to work on himself. A simple, linear routine was best. Fluctuation was the predecessor to instability.
He puts his family above himself even in the most banal ways, huh? His routine is like clockwork, I'm half-surprised he isn't counting the minutes in his narration. It seems a completely predictable and stable routine is necessary to stabilize himself? Could be because of his power, or is it because of the extra soul in his body. Likely both, really.
Wow, did leave the master bedroom empty after his father died? I don't know if I would call this grieving when his father is still there is his head. I suppose that does make the question of where he should sleep kind of awkward. Does he even find himself going to sleep there without noticing due to mental contamination? That'd be creepy.
In the distance, the Star-forges of the Inner Ring began their spinup, ceaseless clanging like a bell endlessly rung. They would not stop until well after the sun went down. Were the Inner Residents inured to the clamor, or did some miraculous artifice render them immune?
The Moon Ring has Star-Forges; okay. Not only do the Middle residents have to deal with the smog, they have to live with sound pollution too. What assholes. Bu seriously, what the hell do they produce there, is the question? The Magus didn't seem like a dude with advanced technology or modern clothing; and the Middle Temple seems stuck at a medieval level. Even if they hold the Middle with utter contempt, you think they'd give them some modern farming equipment so they can give them more food. But Hunger seems to think they are wholly medieval, even if they have a bit more population density.
But who knows, maybe the Inner Ring is super high-tech and the Magus was just a weirdo or something. That'd be funny in retrospect.
One day, they would know the answer. One day, they would live Inside as well. Soon, if he proved himself. If he made just one more step forward. They were such wondrous rumors of the Land Inside, and yet the veil of secrecy was profound, so much so that even an Outrider of his exalted rank didn't warrant concrete details. Of all the scattered peoples who'd come together around the Ring, his House had had the most precipitous fall. Once a legend, now a cautionary tale. His father had lived Inside, but Vanreir had never seen past the cerulean shell that marked the Inner Perimeter, and by the time of his birth his father had been unable to speak of matters beyond the sword and his legacy. Nonetheless, he didn't resent those who'd engineered their fall. Why wallow in bitterness, when one could move forward instead? He would dispatch them, like any other opponent, when the time came. One policy for all enemies was simplest.
What a naive fool. He knows the true nature of the Inner Ring; having his father in his head constantly thinking about it. And yet, he ignores it. He continues seeking the dream of promised land like so many before him; and such a desire lead him to an early death. He even ignores the ones who brought his family low, thinking their defeat a matter of course should he succeed. More than simplicity, this just reads as willful blindness from someone who knows better.
But man, if the Inners weren't utter assholes before, they sure are now. Wasting the lives of its peoples for their own protection; dangling a life of luxury in front of them so they willingly spend their lives in their stead. Huh, now that I think about it, is that why they keep the Middle Ring at a medieval tech level? Much easier for the Inner Residents to claim they live in paradise if they withhold modern amenities from the populace.
His sigil hummed, and Vanreir suppressed a frown. The coordinators were well aware of how the light of his soul operated. They knew he was not to be bothered in the morning, regardless of the urgency of the task. An even, regular routine was necessary to stabilize the power within; for all the sharpness of his light, it could only ever move in one direction. He did not consider such a fault. That which was linear, was also stable. That which was simple, was also strong.
Huh, so the Sigils act has communicators, that's interesting. Definitely makes the fact that the merchants had them gain interesting implications. Are the healing tinctures something they produce made in the Star-Forges? If the Inners make bank supplying the adventurers trying to take them down? That's hilarious, but I suppose fitting if you are essentially a military supplies dealer. You don't really care who's fighting who as long as you make money!
Confirmation that Vanreir needs a routine to stabilize himself. It doesn't seem a result of the Soul Fusion either, that's just how his evocation normally works.
And yes, simple is strong. But also vulnerable. The world cannot be reduced to a single Thrust, no matter how much you try.
"First Blade," the sigil spoke, and he recognized the cadence of Chief Coordinator Thran, whose normally-jovial disposition was utterly absent now.
"How can I help?" He said. As he spoke he continued to move, shaving cream applied to the throat with circular whisks of his horsehair brush.
"There's been a major incursion. Your services are requested."
"Is it the Brutes again? I thought Gondar had dealt with them."
"No. The Fairbright."
Oh man, I remember when we got that as a preview, we panicked so much about Fairbright. How ironic, that it was not Gabrielle's exuberance of youth that emerged victorious; but Hunger's own Age and Treachery. I suppose an end like that is only fitting.
A friendly Coordinator, huh? Might seem like a comfort to those on the line, but this guy likely sends people to their deaths daily. It takes some cold vein to affect cheer, if you have a job like that.
And the Brutes went down too! The adventurers are dropping like flies! I suppose you could expect this given for how long they have been implied to be doing this; but Rihaku's OOC made me doubt that. It was even part of my argumentation for Knight-Commander if I remember right. I supposed luck is a harsh mistress sometimes.
Shocked as he was, his movements did not stop. Fluidly, effortlessly he drew the razor over skin, allowing himself to enjoy the satisfying schlick of the blade as it scooped cream and hair from skin. There, all done. Faultless and bloodless as always. His hands had never been so steady before his father's death.
He flicked away the last daub of shaving debris and slapped a hand across his cheeks, examining his reflection coolly. Eyes of storm blue. Hair of storm grey. His body's discorporation had not yet become apparent, his secret unrevealed. Time enough for two souls to do what one could not. Give us just one year more. One year, and Erii would be safe.
Huh, is he supernaturally good at following his routine or something? Kind of a weird fringe benefit of his Soul Fusion if so. Well, maybe it's less fringe if killing adventurers counts as routine for him.
Also he is literally turning into a ghost. Not gonna lie, that's actually kind of hardcore. A ghostly form would be another parallel with Hunger I don't think people picked up on either.
One more year. Hah. Your family would never be safe, even in Inner Ring. What naivete.
"The Fairbright," he finally said, voice level. "Her stay of execution's been lifted?"
"The Inners decided they want no part of her. Make it clean, First Blade. The stain on your House has almost been lifted."
Fairbright is actually an Inner family? What a bout of teenage rebellion. Of course, maybe she saw something inside that made her trail this path; maybe she even got to see the Ring's suffering directly. We will never know now.
His eyes widened slightly. "Faster than I'd expected. It hasn't even been two years. Will this be the last, then?"
"No. But we've detected two other R-types in the region. Bag them both and the Tribunal has agreed to review your case."
Wow, the Temple had three enemies with fast progression at one point! Imagine if had teamed up! Alas, this thread avoids the Encampment so hard you'd think it was cursed or something.
Wait a minute. The two R-types who visited the camp died; the one who didn't survived, even at a cost. Damn, maybe the camp is cursed. Wouldn't put it past those assholes at the Inner Ring.
"Don't give me false hope, Coordinator."
"Experience has shown your abilities to be anything but false, Sir Amarlt. Keep this up and you'll be Lord Amarlt by day's end. Your grandfather would be pleased."
"And my father," he said.
The Coordinator coughed uncomfortably. "Er, yes. And... him. Good hunting, First Blade."
Man, this becomes much more tragic and much more funny if you don't remember they don't know about his fusion. Was his father some sort of persona non-grata at the Inner Ring? was he literally ostracized?
This the moment that sealed his defeat. He was now a day away from retirement!
Unfortunate. He was far from peak condition, with his morning routine interrupted so. Still, this calibre of enemy did not demand his utmost. A junior Fairbright, her power barely tested. Mighty as their bloodline was, it could not compare to the light of his soul, much less his father's.
Seven decades had Justinan Amarlt trained to erase the disgrace of his youth. He'd never succeeded, but Vanreir was his legacy in form and in truth, the sword of their composite soul unfurling in perfect unity. Justinan the Blade. Vanreir the Unerring. They were hilt and tang, bullet and blasting-cap: helpless apart, but together unstoppable. Artificial as it was, they were the Unerring Blade returned, the Amarlt inheritance resurgent at last. As had been promised, if the successors were true and the hour was dire. Look through the cycle, and where I am needed, there you will find me.
So we now see the details of their fusion; two incomplete parts fusing into a much greater whole. And yet, all this power, all this sacrifice, won't be enough.
Sometimes he wished that their forebear's standards had not been quite so high. Sometimes he thought that his father's life had been too high a price to pay, simply prove the sincerity of their cause. But he cast such thoughts quickly out of mind. Sincerity was simple, that did not mean it was easy. For a disgraced line, even this minute Return was grace undeserved. His father had bent everything to their restoration. Some would say he had gone too far. They would never understand the nature of a Blade. This, son, is the essence of our Thrust...
We'll, we know what it's like to have a Forebear which is hard to measure up to. Even his father's life wasn't enough in the end. Or rather, the path that was chosen was wrong; the sacrifice was just a consequence of it. And now, neither of them are among us.
Lightly he took his sword from its rack and stepped out the door. Dawn's first rays graced the horizon, the gold commingling with the blue. He spun his blade gently, crystal-steel trapping and refracting the light, sunbeams shattered into a dizzying spray. They painted the cobblestones and the world-worn walls of the Middle District and slipped futilely off the Inner Perimeter just beyond, its matte-blue opacity obdurate and unchanging.
Erii would be behind that sturdiest of walls soon enough. She was able, empathic and wise, already skilled in political maneuver. One day, she would ensure that House Amarlt could stand on its own legs once more, without the First Sword of the Outriders looming over its foes. On that day he would relinquish his father and join her for whatever years he had remaining. Until that day, there was only one thing that he could do.
A crystal sword? Something from the Star-forges? Didn't seem to matter when we fought him, really. maybe he expended his power on Fairbright or something.
Don't know how you can judge that on your kid sister, and I don't know you'd be the most impartial judge even if you could, but okay. Again, pure naivete to assume his enemies would just stay quiet given the House being composed of a child and a crippled man.
Gabrielle Fairbright fell without incident. The blood of ten thousand heroes sang in her veins, choirs of the Astral had descended to shield her, her blade of legend had blazed like a second sun, plain become glass before its incandescence; and yet none of that had saved her from the ordinary thrust of his blade, which with unerring force struck true. That was his pride and culmination, the sole point and purpose of his existence, for which his father had given his life and his mother had died in despair. Strike a thousand times, or make one strike that tells.
What an anti-climax. I guess all the cheats in the world aren't enough against the power of SORD GUD. That is some overwrought description just to lose to repeated basic thrusts.
That single strike his father had practiced day-in and day-out, practiced until his tendons wore down and his joints melted away, until his blood became dust and his bones became kindling, until the killing blow was nothing less than a way of life, and the conclusion of its stroke indistinguishable from life's ending.
I do not know if you will understand.
In the end, language can only reduce things so far.
This, son, is the essence of our Thrust:
Pierce through. Even if it cannot be pierced.
I fear not the man who has practiced ten thousand kicks once, but the man who has practiced one kick ten thousand times.
Unfortunately, in the end he could not pierce, the Accursed is cheat! I suppose there was no moment more fitting for his death; it was inevitable the moment his creed failed him after living his whole life by it. He was brought down by failing to live up to the ideal, which is quite sad in the end.
Panting, he leaned atop the blade like an old man with a cane, eyes roaming his body to assess the damage. His right arm was burned, his left arm a seared ruin, one eye gone, the lung on his left side unresponsive. A small price to pay to see a Fairbright downed. Though his body was a ruin, the light of his soul hummed merrily, eager and undiminished, its appetite whetted but far from sated. It was the nature of a thrust to go too far, to over-penetrate. That was how you made certain of the kill.
On to the next.
Thanks for softening him up, Gabrielle! You never met Hunger in your life and neither did he meet you, but it's quite possible you saved his life. I supposed that's one final good deed in the tank. She could have worn down a little bit of his soul too while she was at it; but I suppose nobody's perfect. Even this supposed mesovore!