Well, first, none of that gives us the Imperial Praxis.
Why exactly does Imperial Praxis appeal to you more than Royal aside from an unknown amount of the numbers being higher? We've not seen either used, we know not the difference if it's in capability, magnitude, or some other variable. No matter which option wins we'll also have already gotten a personal casting style as well, in addition to whatever super powers our extra remittances can net us.

Second, interacting with the world in a reactive way still closes off many interesting things. As long as he reaches accommodation, the Hero will not be disturbed. His goal has already been reached; he will act only when necessary. Considering he'd have the power of a Combat-class and can go wherever thanks to not having the Geas, I would not count for that necessity to be frequent. It will still be mostly a quest about passivity.
Aside from the generalized fact that 'protecting your loved ones' is only as passive as you choose to make it (see: movies) I'd argue that as a character defining vote Vendetta goes way too far in the other direction.

The hero fought to protect the innocent people of this world. The Tyrant wasn't a bad guy because he was setting fire to wastelands, all this tragedy was happening because he was slaughtering good people who deserved to live.
When the Hero finally won, it was to adoring crowds who very much understood the peace they had been granted. All those innocent people loved him for saving their lives.
When the Hero was finally spurred to move again, it was to grant them the trappings of a better society that they could enjoy.
The betrayers killed the Hero because unopposed he could have done it! He had great respect from everyone, despite his obvious serious diminishment. He could have given those innocents he shielded a better life, and they would have been on board.

To make the in character choice of Decimator's affliction means that getting even with that betrayal, one done in order to prevent him from helping these common people, is worth seriously harming every single innocent person he defended. In one year he'll have killed a wide swath of the elderly and sick, slain by the curse the Hero chose to take on. And this is a 10% reduction in life span every year.

Assuming for simplicity's sake that 100 years is the average commoner lifespan, a high estimate give that this is a feudal society without strong institutions for the peasantry , then their new lifespan = 100*(.9^t) with t being how many years.

In six and a half years you'd have cut every innocent person in range's lifespan by half. In a decade a man who was in his mid twenties at the start of this, a peer to the age group of the hero perhaps, would be dead by old age.
And of course, whatever hidden master there is is going to be aggrieved but not dead because of that by dint of being stronger than a Combat type Cursebearer, so this would effect mainly innocents. Reaping the sick and doing irreparable harm to everyone else who the Hero thought was worth fighting for.

And that's not getting into the Apocryphal Curse. It's the in character decision that getting back at them for stopping the Hero from helping people is worth... raining down calamity upon the land he walks. Forever.
I don't believe it is, but imagine how insanely angry one would be as a bystander if the Tyrant's shattering of how the story was supposed to go or even the Betrayal could be traced to one guy setting up a speaker that yelled 'come at me universe! I need the powerboost!' every few years. It would be very very justifiable.
 
If an option which grants immediate power wins, are we okay with just using it to empower your existing methods? Or would you prefer a full Remittance vote?
 
If Dread wins, probably a full Remittance vote.
Otherwise, empowering the base is fine, since we wouldn't be able to do that much with the options anyway.
 
Why exactly does Imperial Praxis appeal to you more than Royal aside from an unknown amount of the numbers being higher? We've not seen either used, we know not the difference if it's in capability, magnitude, or some other variable. No matter which option wins we'll also have already gotten a personal casting style as well, in addition to whatever super powers our extra remittances can net us.
Have you considered the fact that all the options are in fact, just words on a screen? We don't know if the difference between the Royal and Imperial Praxis is just numbers, yes. But, I want to kill the hidden masters with the dreams of a fair universe; not a cheap knockoff of that. In fact, if we don't get to do that, I rather don't deal with the hidden masters at all, hence my second option.

The hero fought to protect the innocent people of this world. The Tyrant wasn't a bad guy because he was setting fire to wastelands, all this tragedy was happening because he was slaughtering good people who deserved to live.
When the Hero finally won, it was to adoring crowds who very much understood the peace they had been granted. All those innocent people loved him for saving their lives.
When the Hero was finally spurred to move again, it was to grant them the trappings of a better society that they could enjoy.
The betrayers killed the Hero because unopposed he could have done it! He had great respect from everyone, despite his obvious serious diminishment. He could have given those innocents he shielded a better life, and they would have been on board.

To make the in character choice of Decimator's affliction means that getting even with that betrayal, one done in order to prevent him from helping these common people, is worth seriously harming every single innocent person he defended. In one year he'll have killed a wide swath of the elderly and sick, slain by the curse the Hero chose to take on. And this is a 10% reduction in life span every year.

Assuming for simplicity's sake that 100 years is the average commoner lifespan, a high estimate give that this is a feudal society without strong institutions for the peasantry , then their new lifespan = 100*(.9^t) with t being how many years.

In six and a half years you'd have cut every innocent person in range's lifespan by half. In a decade a man who was in his mid twenties at the start of this, a peer to the age group of the hero perhaps, would be dead by old age.
And of course, whatever hidden master there is is going to be aggrieved but not dead because of that by dint of being stronger than a Combat type Cursebearer, so this would effect mainly innocents. Reaping the sick and doing irreparable harm to everyone else who the Hero thought was worth fighting for.

And that's not getting into the Apocryphal Curse. It's the in character decision that getting back at them for stopping the Hero from helping people is worth... raining down calamity upon the land he walks. Forever.
I don't believe it is, but imagine how insanely angry one would be as a bystander if the Tyrant's shattering of how the story was supposed to go or even the Betrayal could be traced to one guy setting up a speaker that yelled 'come at me universe! I need the powerboost!' every few years. It would be very very justifiable.
No paths are without sacrifice. Even with sacrificing others, our Hero is not unfamiliar with. Decimator is noticed to be easy to mitigate, but even if it wasn't, It is impossible to take the fight to them without innocents getting hurt. Hurting others is part and parcel of Vengeance.

But even so, a killing machine is not to what we are reduced to. If our Vengeance ends, we can repay the universe however we want to; we will have plenty of time for that. There are ways of minimizing it, of being not completely heartless. But even Mask has the potential to put civilians in danger; you can hardly ask more of Vendetta. Pay the price now, because we won't have another opportunity to challenge them. Later, we can see about the terror and pain we have wrought, and that paths to erase that. Nothing is forever, even our Vengeance.

If an option which grants immediate power wins, are we okay with just using it to empower your existing methods? Or would you prefer a full Remittance vote?
Full Remittance vote, I live for those moments.
 
Full remittance vote. If Accretion wins, I foresee a distressing lack of build votes and sick blurbs in our future so we should make sure there's a sustainable supply. I need my fix.
 
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No paths are without sacrifice. Even with sacrificing others, our Hero is not unfamiliar with. Decimator is noticed to be easy to mitigate, but even if it wasn't, It is impossible to take the fight to them without innocents getting hurt. Hurting others is part and parcel of Vengeance.
No, Decimator is specifically noted as not easy to mitigate. It's blurb explicitly says as much in the chargen vote.
And also while unlikely due to vote compilation at this stage, the hero could have very much chosen a power that wasn't going to rob every innocent he professed to protect of their lifespan. He could have chosen to sleep more. He could have chosen to remove his ability to stealth. He could have removed his ability to partner up. That they're not optimal doesn't make this not an in character choice to slay people not because it had to be done, but because it would be moderately easier. Collateral damage is understandable, but the Punisher running over some random guy in order to line up a better shot is a marked escalation from that mantra.

But even so, a killing machine is not to what we are reduced to. If our Vengeance ends, we can repay the universe however we want to; we will have plenty of time for that. There are ways of minimizing it, of being not completely heartless. But even Mask has the potential to put civilians in danger; you can hardly ask more of Vendetta. Pay the price now, because we won't have another opportunity to challenge them. Later, we can see about the terror and pain we have wrought, and that paths to erase that. Nothing is forever, even our Vengeance.
In the words of the Accused
"Be careful which burdens you undertake; they will accompany you for eons to come. "
Unless you propose committing suicide after taking on the hidden Masters, we will forever be a being that takes 8-10% of the lifespan in a solar system or greater, annually. That also brings down challenges and opponents strong enough to kill a being of our magnitude upon where ever we are every so often, with depressing regularity.
The Decimator is not someone who can afford to spend time repaying people, because he inexorably steals from an ever growing range things he can't repay by large.

It's a little strange to put 'may put civilians in surrounding area in danger' on par with 'actively harm every single civilian in the solar system regularly'
 
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If an option which grants immediate power wins, are we okay with just using it to empower your existing methods? Or would you prefer a full Remittance vote?
I would prefer empowerment of existing methods. Multiple power system ala is too similar to EFB's Thrice-Great.
 
If an option which grants immediate power wins, are we okay with just using it to empower your existing methods? Or would you prefer a full Remittance vote?

That sounds fair to me considering we were once prodigy tier at that style.(Edit: Also assuming Immediate power means King's Scepter or Regalia type votes)
 
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Well, hopefully there's still time for this to count towards the vote. 1125 Words; warning: extreme angst.

Omake: Despite Eveything

It seems that they didn't even wait to kill me while asleep.

Two guards barge into my room, more waiting outside. At my peak, they would be nothing more than motes of dust in my wake. Now, challenging them seems an insurmountable feat.

Come with us, they said. They bind my hands. They shouldn't have bothered; I understood the futility of resisting. Their faces betrayed nothing but resignation. Despite everything, I was still the savior of their world; given their likely humble origin, they were the ones most glad for what we did.

Despite everything. A funny set of words, isn't it? It means one continues, even though reason and sense points to the contrary. Something I did often, while I still fought. Despite the loss, the pain, the tragedy, I continued.

And despite the fact that people like them stood the most to benefit, despite being grateful for what I did, despite being worthy of more after all this word suffered, the guards still obeyed their masters.

I should expect nothing more. It is rare the will that can stand against the system it is in. Obeying the kings and dukes of this world, owning them fealty, that's expected; that's the system they are in. Had they been given a choice outside of it all, had they been able to choose without the duress of the system, they might have helped me; even stood with me against them.

But sadly, the world of kings and dukes is all they ever knew, ever saw; and seeing is believing, as they say. If the system brands me a madman and a Tyrant, how can they disagree? This is all they know.

As they walk me away from my room and to my demise, bitterness surges in my heart. I don't know where they are taking me. It wouldn't matter even if I did.

This was predictable. So utterly predictable. Men rarely gave up power for the good of all.

But, they were my allies once. Even restrained in how they could act by the Tyrant, they still supported me. They helped at my lowest. So, even though it was predictable, utterly obvious, I deluded myself. I thought I could count on them. That, despite disagreements, thay had the good of the world at heart.

They might still believe they do, really. But their actions say otherwise. Instead of trying to raise up the people, they keep them down. Keep them at their mercy. No matter how soft they claimed the chains to be, they still bound and restrained.

I thought the harshness, the sacrifice, the pain, all those things to be over. I was a fool. Didn't I learn, hope is not enough to change the world? I had lost so much, I let that revelation slip away. Now it comes back to haunt me.

Damn them! Damn myself, who let them do this, let them get away with it!

As my painful musings continue, I leave the castle, where a horse-drawn carriage awaits me. I enter it. Once, I arrived at this castle as an honored guest, given a grand feast and lavish accommodations. I thought nothing of it back then, near insensate with grief. It was a trap, a blatant one. Keep me in a gilded cage, where my every action is monitored, my movements are restrained, who and what I see controlled for their benefit. Letting them do whatever they want.

They took advantage of my pain, my sadness. I couldn't even process half of what happened. They were planning to betray me even then. Despite everything. Everything I did for them.

And so, as their suspicions were confirmed, I leave this place as a dead man walking.

My powerlessness rankled. Is this the price of having loved? To become blind at the most critical juncture? I swam and swam, hoping to escape the deadly tides, but I still died on the beach. I couldn't close my heart, despite knowing, knowing, that it was a weakness. I thought I had killed my own heart, but it still laid me low.

I don't know how long we rode for. It didn't matter. From what I saw of the road, we were going away from the capital. It made sense. I was still beloved by many, no need to risk an unruly mob stopping them at this critical juncture. If I escaped, even in this sorry state, I could be a thorn on their side for decades. Some had more brashness than sense, I knew, and they likely would have wanted me to be executed in the capital anyway, simply for the powerful message it provided.

Unfortunately, it seemed wiser heads prevailed. This really was the end.

The carriage stopped. I could hear conversations outside. Finally, I exited.

I was brought to a courtyard, inside a fort of the region. A place the nobles could use to project their military might on the populace, in the name of "protecting them". In the middle, a small podium had been raised. The place of my execution.

Few were in attendance. The commander of the fort; the local duke, who I assumed was left legally responsible for my execution, likely under charges of "fomenting dissent"; a priest; and my headsman.

I was carried to stand in front of them. The duke tried to speak with me; I spit on his face. After that, there was nothing left.

The headsman and the priest walked with me to the podium. Once there, I was forced to my knees. The priest blabbered a meaningless prayer. No god would listen, I knew.

As he finally finished his prattling, the headsman stepped forwards.

I wish I had kept on to my hate. I wished I had preserved that burning I had, when I stuck the final blow.

Weird thing to say, isn't it? In the stories, hate destroyed you. It hollowed you out. It made it painful to even live.

Maybe that would still be true, if I had kept it.

But hatred made me go on, even when all seemed hopeless. It made me kill that bastard, made me land the final blow, when all I had was a moment's weakness.

And now, hate would have saved me. It wouldn't have made pointless the death of all my companions, of my loved one. I could have changed the world, had I not stopped. Had I not been broken. Had I carried my hatred to the perfidious kings and dukes, and seen them for what they were; my enemies, obstacles in my path. I would have changed things.

And so,when time stopped, when that being in the shape of a man offered me choice, there was only one answer I could give.
 
No, Decimator is specifically noted as not easy to mitigate.

Only in absolute terms. In relative terms, it's been explicitly described as one of the easier Curses to mitigate.
All forms of mitigation are difficult, unpleasant, or come with some type of drawback. The Decimator's Affliction is actually one of the easiest to mitigate in that it offers lots of mitigation options that are at least somewhat effective. Basically you're paying a time and effort tax to reduce the damage the Curse does. Or you could live somewhere with only villainous inhabitants.
 
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Tally incoming:
Adhoc vote count started by Conjured Blade on May 18, 2020 at 9:50 PM, finished with 477 posts and 84 votes.
 
[X] Vendetta
-[X] Remittance: The Sword
[X] Balance
[X] Seven Seals

Can accursed favour be used to bail us out of dying?
 
Omake Power Rankings(I redid this from the top after checking the index and seeing Runeblue had two works I didn't recognize as Omakes/Reaction posts). Also getting BrainInAJar's new 1125 Word Omake in.

Vendetta: 21613
1794(Orm Embar)+3706(runeblue360)+5292(Unelemental)+1194(Sickul) = 11986 from Scepter
1054(Crimson Moon)+689(Salty)+2177(KidFromPallet)+2588(BrainInAJar)+1873(Birdsie)+1246(Cerillian) = 9627 from Sword

Dread and Dreaming: 8679
1794(Orm Embar)+1054(Crimson Moon)+3706(runeblue360)+2125(Conjured Blade) = 8679 from Keep

Forsaken Mask: 695(ImperatorV)+2588(BrainInAJar)+2125(Conjured Blade)+2494(Maragas)+537(Enohthree) = 8439
Balance : 5292(Unelemental)+695(ImperatorV) = 5987

Accretion: 1794(Orm Embar)+3706(runeblue360)+5292(Unelemental)+2588(BrainInAJar)+1194(Sickul)+537(Enohthree) = 15111
Seven Seals: 1054(Crimson Moon)+689(Salty)+2177(KidFromPallet)+2125(Conjured Blade)+1873(Birdsie)+1246(Cerillian) = 9164
Battle Mastery: 695(ImperatorV)+2494(Maragas) = 3189
Adhoc vote count started by Conjured Blade on May 18, 2020 at 10:26 PM, finished with 485 posts and 85 votes.
 
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