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(Posted prematurely in an attempt to bridge the gap to 50% for a 3-pick plan, instead of saving it to pay off my debts)
((The 2-pick version of intense research is much much worse))
Part 1: Fan Response to The Furthermost Reaches, begun around the end of the voting cycle for Spoils of the Tyrant, and completed around the end of the voting cycle for The Precipitous Span. (That means that I hadn't seen the time skip options when I started, but I had seen the reveal of RW.)
This fan- reaction is brought to you by 'paying for my debts because I promised to write some fan- works back when I had way more time', by the volatile fluctuations in Arete generation, and by
freeloaders Lurkers Like You.
(That strikethrough might not be funny to people who remember me mostly for my negative attitude during August, but let me assure you that if you had just taught accelerated summer courses of intermediate economics for 12 consecutive weeks, you would have also learned to interpret even casual mention of vocab terms like "tragedy of the commons" as the height of wit.
(The alternative is calling out 100% of students for being bad at pandering when they are asking to be given higher grades.))
The Furthermost Reaches
"Hm? Asking my opinion now? Consultations aren't free, you know," Gisena teased.
He scoffed. "Riding on my back isn't free either."
"Are you saying you didn't enjoy that?" She giggled. "Well, I think it's a wonderful creation! I'd love to study it. But my realm didn't have anything like this. The technology's mostly a shell, isn't it? An accoutrement of the creature beneath."
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It's worth mentioning that this is something like the second or third sentence out of Gisena after the battle is over. The Hyena Dragon Astral Beast has barely begun to settle into rigor mortis and the Banter has already begun. Strange made a joke on Discord about the dialectic between Hunger and Gisena in terms of making dumb plans and good plans, but their banter is more fundamental than something as pedestrian as "actions taken in response to stimulus from the outside world." Gisena and Hunger would banter if they were left alone in a padded room. Gisena and Hunger would banter while being murdered by 8 year old Itachi Augustine herself. Gisena and Hunger banter because Gisena is just smart enough to know that Hunger needs something from her. What we've seen in her Interlude suggests that she already knows some things about him, in a sort of Tattletale / BBC Sherlock- style cold reading.
It's certain that her cold- read observed his injuries: missing an arm and an eye are easy details to notice. She might be able to infer the missing lung & organs; she managed to deduce an entire linguistic / symbolic complex from two data points. (Impressive technobabble nonsense though that feat may be, it's not the point of this reaction so I won't dispute it any further yet.) It's reasonable to think that her cold- read could have revealed that he used to have a dramatically more powerful fighting style; there are lots of tropes about fighters who have lost their power developing 'tells' where they start to use a move that would require more developed muscles or skills, but then stop and do a simpler technique to show diagetically that their abilities have slipped. Given the revelations about her improved perceptions of supernatural phenomena, she likely has already glimpsed parts of the Curse loadout: Decimator's Affliction is particularly visible, I suspect.
What she
does with this cold- read is to introduce herself in a way that probes but does not activate the Doom of the Tyrant. She establishes herself as an expert, and as an asset. And she makes an implicit offer of continued assistance by referring to "consultations" as though traveling together is a foregone conclusion.
Some of these are Doylist considerations, and some have been introduced (or hand waved) diagetically through Hunger & the players' knowledge about Gisena's status as a Lesser Remittance. But even with the gameplay expectation that
of course Gisena is friendly, Rihaku has done a really excellent job of having our companion join up without too much friction about why the party needs to come together. That's step 0 in any DnD campaign, after all.
"There is power there. Far more than it's shown to us." Briefly he closed his eyes, reaching out with his instincts. It reminded him almost of the Tyrant, or of his own power at the very height, but much greater. Even the Tyrant was a mere tributary compared to the ocean that slept within this beast. Power of enormous scope, but of a tenor that was similar to his own. And yet like him it was diminished, wan shadow of its full potential. Not dammed, but run dry. And yet it would not take so terribly much for the deluge to come again.
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Here we see Hunger's instincts, which are the utility half of his Accretion magic system. Doing this reread after the Realm of Myth has helped me to see how the playerbase focuses too much on one ability or another, without thinking too much about how Hunger's overall build might accomplish a particular
goal. Here, Hunger wants to get information about the mysterious giant robot. He is a (i) a Cursebearer who is (ii) a veteran of a vicious war, who has (iii) accretion- based plot contrivance instincts. The way that a Main Character gets information is to either trust (or distrust) the new phenomenon, and then be proved right (or wrong) by new developments.
Here, we do not yet know that our curses are the relevant part of the build. Providing a write-in that specifies anything about Hunger's particular abilities is difficult without access to his instincts & sixth sense provided by supernatural "astral pressure." However, providing a write-in that seeks to make Hunger more wary or trusting of the Robot leaves Rihaku free to let the Main Character react to information that would never be included in the narrative. There's a lot left in the chapter so I'm going to move on but this idea of "objectives, not methods" is something that I will try to adopt in future tactics posts.
(Of course tactics depend on our abilities, but "use the Ring of Hunger to make Avecarn bleed out" is harder to fit into the narrative than "rely on our enormous stamina and health-bar to outlast the enemy" (just to throw out the first fight that comes to mind (tactics for Vanreir would have been hard-pressed to come up with the invincible ring counter, imo)).
"Think it was holding back?" Gisena snapped him from his thoughts.
"No." He shook his head. "It's injured. Lessened."
"Probably safest just to observe and see if it does something," the Sorceress sighed. "How boring."
She turned to him. "So... Got a name?"
He scowled.
Gisena pouted. "I did tell you mine, you know. Noble title and all! That's valuable tactical intelligence."
A name. He'd sacrificed his name, and claiming another at this juncture would just see it slip from his mind. But he needed something for others to call him, that was true enough. He looked down at his hand and the blade that it held. A pseudonym would hold, if it was memorable. Something practical. And yet even a pseudonym held power. Properly chosen, it could bind his objects more strongly to him, or establish that he was separate from them.
Something easy to recall. Something as familiar to him as the back of his hand.
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I didn't remember this passage at all. I did a quick text search for "name" in Reader mode page 1, but ctrl+F didn't immediately reveal why claiming another name would slip from his mind. That implies that the damage from the Shattering Blow against the Tyrant did not just burn up pieces of his existing identity, but instead it burned
out the important bits. There's now a hole in the Cursebearer where a name should be. That's something that Rihaku seems to put a lot of weight on. In Bleach Quest, Ishida was always identifying himself with reference to his role as a Quincy who is also a Tailor. In the Unnamed Quest, the mentor was named Control, which is almost certainly not his birthname. There's a protagonist called Nameless, and I'm 90% sure that Ulyssian / Odyssial have some kind of true name & identity nonsense. The passage about Mardukth and eating the moon that was posted as a counter argument to the Absorb the Tower of Earth vote also had amnesia & rejection of names as a key component.
Basically, I'm saying that Rihaku is a fey. The power of names in determining or affirming identity is a recurring feature. That's actually one of my favorite parts of his (their?) writing. Fixating on names has kind of an old timey tone that evokes the epithets of ancient epics. It's not something that I've been able to recreate, because it requires restraint to avoid sounding too forced. Rihaku manages to make the grandiose tone feel coherent and natural to read.
"Hunger. Technically I'm a City Lord, but they've likely had me deposed."
As he spoke, he felt the essence of the ring shift, become his in full, interlacing its nature with his own. Now, like a ring of power, he would only grow mightier and more cunning with time. Age would have no purchase upon him, and even the Tyrant's curse that had stolen his youth would be reversed and superseded. He hoped that taking this name would also bind the Decimator's Affliction, allowing him to exert some measure of control over it. That would be a priority in the near future.
"Hunger?" Gisena said brightly. "Hm... Lord Hunger. I like it. It's only a little pretentious."
"More than a little. Don't be polite."
"Arrogant and a liar too! Why do I put up with you?"
"I'm a noble. It's to be expected."
"Well, at least he's self-aware."
"Keep talking to yourself. It's better that way."
"Oh? Already in love with the sound of my voice?"
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Two things are happening in this passage, besides banter. First, we get a snippet about Hunger's name that I'm 90% sure is a remnant of Rihaku's initial outline that was agnostic between Seven Seals / Accretion as the default magic systems. The bit about the name binding the Decimator's Affliction really makes more sense to me in light of Seven Seals description about how the Seal (or
name) of an object can be manipulated to create changes in the object itself. Seven Seals is the ability to equivocate between signifier and signified, which is what Hunger (the man) is doing with Hunger (the ring).
The second thing that happens is that Rihaku establishes the limit of Hunger's knowledge & emotional stance towards his previous life. The mention of being deposed does not prompt any more soul searching or angst (which is very welcome) and provides another front in the Banter game for Gisena's jokes (which is somewhat less welcome). This is a good choice for the narrative because build votes are just more fun when they are set in the present, rather than retroactive decisions about what happened in the past. The issue I have with retroactive vote choices is that all winning votes must be assumed to lead to the present moment, which limits what kind of comparisons or differences can even exist between the vote options.
Rihaku did a really good job of orienting the quest towards immediate concerns & leaving Hunger's past as mostly a blur.
"A-ahem!" A voice boomed from the direction of the giant. "If you two are done flirting, we have important matters to take care of!"
It was a girl's voice, clear and high, but somewhat stilted, as if forcing herself to sound authoritative.
"Sorry, we're not!" Gisena answered cheerfully.
"Huh?"
"We're not done flirting. Isn't that what you asked? So, mind waiting a bit longer?"
"Ah! Um..."
"Speak for yourself," he grunted, turning to address the giant. "Are you the pilot of that creature? What's your business?"
"Thank you, my lord. Yes, I am. I'd like to come out and speak to you face-to-face. Will you give your word not to attack my person?"
"I won't attack unprovoked. Do as you please."
Steam hissed from countless apertures as the giant's head and chest moved forward, revealing its internals. A dizzying array of runes and glyphs coated every inch of its bio-mechanical interior, faintly emitting the pale, cold blue of a winter sky. Within was a capsule, which hissed open to reveal a young lady in a pale military jacket with accents of gold. Lean and long of limb, she had delicate, fine-boned features and eyes a shade lighter than Gisena's blue. A long shock of hair trailed nearly to her waist, white in color but with all the luster and texture of youth. She looked to be in her late teens or early twenties. In the fingers of her right hand she held a small text, a manual of some kind.
Emerging from the capsule, she hopped up, landing neatly on the giant's shoulder, leaning forward on one heavy boot.
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Letrizia! I really liked her introduction as a third wheel to interrupt Gisena when the banter got to be too extreme. Her charisma was a threat to the narrative itself when concentrated against Hunger himself. The story is better for having additional characters who get screentime. Letrizia's introduction is highly relatable to me, personally, because I often feel like I am putting on a front to sound authoritative while checking the manual for details as often as possible.
Letrizia ends up getting sidelined for the entire Temple Arc, and Versch remains too damaged to contribute meaningfully even as of the most recent update. I'm optimistic that as we leave the Voyaging Realm, her plotline will drive the thread to give her some Arete & we'll see her grow up a little more. (I've got a theory that signing up with Hunger let her indulge in some previously suppressed immaturity, but the return to the HS will be a sobering wakeup call and we'll see the side of her character that is responsible for managing a walking war- crime.
End of part 1