The Intelligence and Perception increase was from two, very poor 1d6 dice rolls for both stats I decided to give you guys as a reward for creativity with the knights. I decided that wisened veterans would be able to share their worldview and enlighten the MC's mind a little.

As for Reinforcement/Enhancement, it didn't make any major improvements. I have de facto EXP bars in a notepad file on my desktop to keep track of when to upgrade skills to the next level. Enhancement is 10 away, with the EXP gain per training being 1d20 + Bonus, with the bonus being innovative stuff, like fighting with the knights.
Can you post the EXP bar ? will be more easy to follow our development in the future.
Oh ? and We are 9,10~ points above average in both ST and AGI. Perfect ! Just for our birthday.
What can we expect from a full grown dragon ? in the 100~ or 200~ ? in stats points i mean.
 
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Can you post the EXP bar ? will be more easy to follow our development in the future.

I am personally against this. Keeping it hidden means that we can't just play number games and allows for more fluff-based decision and we have to guess how close we are to upgrading. Additionally, we shouldn't know the exact numbers of how close we are to improving in-universe. That said, if we can find a way to keep track of those numbers in-universe, I wouldn't mind being shown then numbers out of universe.
 
I'm glad the omake alterations didn't sting you. I made sure to change as little as possible. All I did was correct a few grammar mistakes and fault sentences, and added that part at the very end.

I don't mind the changes as long as the main content remains the same, especially if the changes improve it. As for the spelling/grammar mistakes, I don't bother proof-reading short omakes, especially when it is late at night and I am about to go to bed.

Speaking of omakes, could you provide a list of possible rewards because my mind keeps blanking when I try to think of something related to the omake. Still on the topic of omakes, would you mind if I PM some ideas so you can tell what would make sense in-universe?
 
I am personally against this. Keeping it hidden means that we can't just play number games and allows for more fluff-based decision and we have to guess how close we are to upgrading. Additionally, we shouldn't know the exact numbers of how close we are to improving in-universe. That said, if we can find a way to keep track of those numbers in-universe, I wouldn't mind being shown then numbers out of universe.
You just like to guess , you meant to say that , right ? :evil: but yeah its more fun to guess than outright knowing.
 
You just like to guess , you meant to say that , right ? :evil: but yeah its more fun to guess than outright knowing.

I like to guess when it makes sense in-universe to not know all of the numbers. But my reasoning is that we are picking options that we feel like make the most sense narratively such as physical training and learning proper tactics and strategy. If we were given the precise numbers, it would become more of a number game based on which option is mechanically the best to get the most shinies.
 
From my reading, it is unsuccessful for the most part, but not entirely unsuccessful as it appears to partially work, just not to the degree that Artoria was hoping for.

@Birdsie How correct is this?

Hi there Shirou-expy. So you did come after all.

So did I guess right about how you were working him in? Feel free not to answer this for dramatic tension. Either way, could you provide the in-universe name of Shirou expy so I can stop calling him Shirou expy?

The Intelligence and Perception increase was from two, very poor 1d6 dice rolls for both stats I decided to give you guys as a reward for creativity with the knights. I decided that wisened veterans would be able to share their worldview and enlighten the MC's mind a little.

As for Reinforcement/Enhancement, it didn't make any major improvements. I have de facto EXP bars in a notepad file on my desktop to keep track of when to upgrade skills to the next level. Enhancement is 10 away, with the EXP gain per training being 1d20 + Bonus, with the bonus being innovative stuff, like fighting with the knights.

Would I be correct in thinking that sensible write-in that make sense IC would result in minor bonuses based on the write-in?
 
Can you post the EXP bar ? will be more easy to follow our development in the future.
Oh ? and We are 9,10~ points above average in both ST and AGI. Perfect ! Just for our birthday.
I'd rather avoid that, for the same reason that @Oshha pointed out. This is a story, first and foremost. A number game second.
What can we expect from a full grown dragon ? in the 100~ or 200~ ? in stats points i mean.
From a full-grown dragon? Roughly 70~ in each stat at least, perhaps save for Agility, but this is Greater Dragons we're talking about. We're talking Smaug. We're talking about the dragon that could eat and swallow a car.
Speaking of omakes, could you provide a list of possible rewards because my mind keeps blanking when I try to think of something related to the omake. Still on the topic of omakes, would you mind if I PM some ideas so you can tell what would make sense in-universe?
Reward ideas:
- Breast size goes from A to B.
- Some good luck from fate on the dragon hunt.
- 1d6 roll to improve a chosen stat.

Go ahead, I'm open to ideas.
It's correct.
It's just that using Enhancement makes the chosen target perform its intended function better. For breasts, that wouldn't be as much "being big" as "producing milk."
So did I guess right about how you were working him in? Feel free not to answer this for dramatic tension. Either way, could you provide the in-universe name of Shirou expy so I can stop calling him Shirou expy?
I think I'll call him Bob. How about... Dill Tavish? It's definitely not a reference to one of the characters from the original setting.
Would I be correct in thinking that sensible write-in that make sense IC would result in minor bonuses based on the write-in?
Yup.
 
Reward ideas:
- Breast size goes from A to B.
- Some good luck from fate on the dragon hunt.
- 1d6 roll to improve a chosen stat.

They look good. So the reward doesn't need to be related to the omake? I'll wait until the current vote is decided and we see the results of it before picking.

It's correct.
It's just that using Enhancement makes the chosen target perform its intended function better. For breasts, that wouldn't be as much "being big" as "producing milk."

Ah, that makes sense. So improving a natural thing will improve its natural purpose while improving an artificial thing will improve its artificial purpose? Tough luck Artoria. At least have your consolidation prize that in your case, you only need age for a bigger bust.

It's definitely not a reference to one of the characters from the original setting.

Was Tavish one of Baragar's companions?
 
They look good. So the reward doesn't need to be related to the omake? I'll wait until the current vote is decided and we see the results of it before picking.



Ah, that makes sense. So improving a natural thing will improve its natural purpose while improving an artificial thing will improve its artificial purpose? Tough luck Artoria. At least have your consolidation prize that in your case, you only need age for a bigger bust.



Was Tavish one of Baragar's companions?
Rather, they were friends.
 
I think I'll call him Bob. How about... Dill Tavish? It's definitely not a reference to one of the characters from the original setting
I'm partial to Agi or Agnus Tavis tbh.

And people. More allies means more firepower and social links! The beat adventures are in company! A more serious wish than the...breasts ones to be sure.
 
Enraged Mother

To say Briiuthfeyn was pissed off will be an understatement, She is as angry as an erupting volcano. She is a Wyrm Dragon one if not the most powerful species in this World and she just allowed a group of untamed, shameful, disgracing, disgusting Wyverns to sneak in her nest, where her eggs rest, all are broken and eaten. Flying in the mountain range, she is currently hunting this pathetic excuse of a dragon! Cousins ?! More like a pathetic nephew, to dare share the blood of her heavenly species is a sin!
The Elders should have declared their extermination hundred of years ago! By Akatosh ! Or was it Akasha?
Briiuthfeyn landed on a nearby mountain, gazing down on more than fifty Wyverns currently tearing apart her still yet-to-be-born children!
Calling upon the Voice, the gift of Akasha herself or Akatosh ? Ugh! They are one and the same why do they bother ?
Shouting, Briiuthfeyn altered reality itself with her shout such is the Way of The Voice. , The Way of Pure Power. Her shout annihilated the more-or-less fifty wyverns instantly with it the mountain behind them.
She is Briiuthfeyn, Beauty, Command, Bane, such are the name that define her, she is the Perfection, one of the most beautiful of her kind, she is also a Commander, leading armies of brothers and sisters in battle, but also a Bane to the Elders, to her short-tempered rebellious and prideful nature.But she wouldn't ever ever admit that.
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245 words , Just a little Omake that i thought about , probably many spelling/grammar errors. Hope it goes canon thought just for a dragon related award... I mean we are Artoria ! The Dragon-blooded King of Knights (in another Universe but it doesn't matter !)
Probably guessed it inspired by the dragons of the Elder Scrolls but bigger and is actually lore-correct which the game heavely limited the power of the shouts.
Meaning of Briiuthfeyn :
Brii : Beauty
Uth : Command/Order
Feyn : Bane
 
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[X] To find many adventures and friends.

Also perfectly in character for a girl this age in this setting, while being much more positive than the main thought at her birthday being that her body is inadequate.
 
Enraged Mother

To say Briiuthfeyn was pissed off will be an understatement, She is as angry as an erupting volcano. She is a Wyrm Dragon one if not the most powerful species in this World and she just allowed a group of untamed, shameful, disgracing, disgusting Wyverns to sneak in her nest, where her eggs rest, all are broken and eaten. Flying in the mountain range, she is currently hunting this pathetic excuse of a dragon! Cousins ?! More like a pathetic nephew, to dare share the blood of her heavenly species is a sin!
The Elders should have declared their extermination hundred of years ago! By Akatosh ! Or was it Akasha?
Briiuthfeyn landed on a nearby mountain, gazing down on more than fifty Wyverns currently tearing apart her still yet-to-be-born children!
Calling upon the Voice, the gift of Akasha herself or Akatosh ? Ugh! They are one and the same why do they bother ?
Shouting, Briiuthfeyn altered reality itself with her shout such is the Way of The Voice. , The Way of Pure Power. Her shout annihilated the more-or-less fifty wyverns instantly with it the mountain behind them.
She is Briiuthfeyn, Beauty, Command, Bane, such are the name that define her, she is the Perfection, one of the most beautiful of her kind, she is also a Commander, leading armies of brothers and sisters in battle, but also a Bane to the Elders, to her short-tempered rebellious and prideful nature.But she wouldn't ever ever admit that.
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245 words , Just a little Omake that i thought about , probably many spelling/grammar errors. Hope it goes canon thought just for a dragon related award... I mean we are Artoria ! The Dragon-blooded King of Knights (in another Universe but it doesn't matter !)
Probably guessed it inspired by the dragons of the Elder Scrolls but bigger and is actually lore-correct which the game heavely limited the power of the shouts.
Meaning of Briiuthfeyn :
Brii : Beauty
Uth : Command/Order
Feyn : Bane
Not sure if this is such a good idea.

A Wyrm Dragon wouldn't bother killing Wyverns on her own. Wyrm Dragons have the power level of a minor deity. It could just sit in its lair, slumbering and, at the same time, affecting the continental subconscious of mortals or even possess some key politicians to start extensive Wyvern hunting. Or just call a few other dragons to her, discuss the matter, and order them all to purge their lesser cousins.

On another note, I also doubt a Wyrm Dragon would want to kill Wyverns. Like I said, dragons are a dying race. Even if unruly and physically impaired, having additional family members is always good when your family has been hunted for many years.
 
Not sure if this is such a good idea.

A Wyrm Dragon wouldn't bother killing Wyverns on her own. Wyrm Dragons have the power level of a minor deity. It could just sit in its lair, slumbering and, at the same time, affecting the continental subconscious of mortals or even possess some key politicians to start extensive Wyvern hunting. Or just call a few other dragons to her, discuss the matter, and order them all to purge their lesser cousins.

On another note, I also doubt a Wyrm Dragon would want to kill Wyverns. Like I said, dragons are a dying race. Even if unruly and physically impaired, having additional family members is always good when your family has been hunted for many years.
Oh , This is not a rational Dragon , this is an enraged mother who lost her children and is already rebellious against the current community , she is.... a pure-blooded nazi , You can't expect everyone to follow the same ideals even if her kin is dying. Humanity in our world is already a proof.
 
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Oh , This is not a rational Dragon , this is an enraged mother who lost her children and is already rebellious against the current community , she is.... a pure-blooded nazi , You can't expect everyone to follow the same ideals even if her kin is dying. Humanity in our world is already a proof.
Well, I suppose that's something, but the food chain doesn't make much sense. If a dragon is a human, a drake is a neanderthal, then the wyvern is an ape.
The scenario you are pitching here is an ape eating a human baby.

Plus, she has many other ways to deal with this than just doing it on her own.

Well, let's say, if this gets the support of five players, I'll implement it. I'm just not sure if this is on terms with the universe, but I could wing it (pun intended,) if you guys really want.
 
Well, let's say, if this gets the support of five players, I'll implement it. I'm just not sure if this is on terms with the universe, but I could wing it (pun intended,) if you guys really want.

I am personally against the idea. It doesn't really appeal to me because to be frank, it doesn't make sense to me and it doesn't feel like it fits in-universe, especially given the additional information by the QM. (Sorry Terran Imperium, but these are my honest thoughts on the matter.)
 
Well, I suppose that's something, but the food chain doesn't make much sense. If a dragon is a human, a drake is a neanderthal, then the wyvern is an ape.
The scenario you are pitching here is an ape eating a human baby.

Plus, she has many other ways to deal with this than just doing it on her own.

Well, let's say, if this gets the support of five players, I'll implement it. I'm just not sure if this is on terms with the universe, but I could wing it (pun intended,) if you guys really want.
Well its was just a try , will be more lucky next time when i'm more familiar with the setting and don't want to disrupt the already constructed world.
 
Well its was just a try , will be more lucky next time when i'm more familiar with the setting and don't want to disrupt the already constructed world.
Don't worry. It's not your fault.
If you need more information, just ask.
Ah screw it, @Birdsie can I take you up on this offer if it is serious? I would be willing to spend my omake reward on it if necessary.
Sure thing. No need to spend your reward on it. We'll call it tribute.
 
The Metaphysics of the Universe
I'll state that in this universe, there's this concept of the three, core metaphysical forms:

The Body - The Mind - The Soul

I will go through every three and do my absolute best to explain them as concisely as possible while trying to make as much sense as I can.

Literally 80% of the magical concepts you'll deal with will be tied to them. The subject matter itself isn't too hard to remember once you figure it out.

Let's start with The Body. What is a body in the metaphysical term? It can be a lot of stuff. The term isn't strict. A body could be anything from an actual human body, to a rose flower, to something as inanimate and unliving as a rock. Pretty straightforward. That's not all, however. Assume there is a Ghost. A Ghost, by using some kind of power, could materialize a shining, translucent outline of their being. That kind of outline, in the terms of the universe, counts as a body, but it might not behave like one. A sword may still not cut through it, depending on what physics the ghost applies to itself. It might not obey gravity or the laws of cohesion. It is because Ghosts do not have a set body, so if they have the energy to do so, they can shape their body as they wish.

Moving on, is The Mind. What is a mind? Like with the Body, it is much more than you would expect it to be with the name alone. A mind is neurons firing, but it may as well be maintained by The Soul. For an instance, a typical human is born with the set of all three: The Body - The Mind - The Soul. He starts life with his body connected to his mind exclusively - the brain is where his mind resides. Once his body dies, the mind, in order to preserve itself, joins with the soul and becomes what is known as a Ghost. That leaves a mind and a soul with the ability to shape new bodies. This neatly ties into what I said in the paragraph above. Spirits are similar to Ghosts, but they were originally created without a biological body of any kind. They can be Elementals, Conceptual Spirits, Angels, Demons, or anything else.

Now, what is The Soul? In a way, it is similar to a computer but esoteric. If mana can be described as data, then the Soul is a system of complex, intricately woven pathways of this data, built out of more data, in a very complicated way that is hard to truly understand, comprehend, or replicate. The Soul is, weirdly enough, and quite unbelievably - the most active of all three metaphysical forms. It is what creates additional mana. From whence? No one knows. Many theories arise from where souls produce a resource that is seemingly limitless from nothing. Is it the Primordial Elder God? Is it a spark of divinity? Is it the Flying Spaghetti Monster? You can never be sure. However, souls are inherently limited from their beginning. They can be improved in a plethora of ways - absorbing other souls, meditating, or other forms of magic. What's important is that to make up for this weakness, they absorb magical energy from their close environment, like the airborne mana, which is constantly spewed out by the leylines.

Magic works by calling mana from The Soul, through The Mind, and sometimes channeling it through The Body. For an example, speaking an incantation the spell-user is acclimated with will prompt his mind to send a command to The Soul. This command will cause the soul to pour mana into the world and shape it accordingly to the Mind's command.

What are Leylines? They are cracks in the planet's soul. Created by the Gods to supply their creations on the planet with enough energy to thrive in magic for thousands of years to come. Places, where leylines cross, are called nodes. Generally, the one last point to mention about leylines is Maelstroms. They are events of where numerous leylines close or open at the same time in a said area. This can be caused by, or can be the cause of great spiritual change, like the opening or closing of new realms, creation of new elemental creatures, or birth of new Gods. An event in which a Maelstrom consumes the whole planet of Terra at once is called a Planetary Maelstrom, Great Maelstrom, or other such affectionate nicknames.

Lastly, comes cosmology. As the observant may have noticed, the calendar at the end of each post never ends with 31 as the last day of a month. This is because Terra, as well as the universe, was created over thousands of years according to a very precise template and plan of the gods. As such, they decided to make a fairly even and symmetrical cosmology. The end result is that there are 360 days in a year, with 12 months, each month 30 days long, and 2 special days per month (15th and 30th) when spiritual activity rises slightly, often being the cause of festivals and celebrations.
 
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