A Certain Gravitational Villain (A Certain Magical Index Quest)

WCHB - Tsukino Miko
WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN - TSUKINO MIKO
PUELLA MAGI MADOKA MAGICA, INVINCIBILITY, CHAOTIC EVIL


"TRIO FINALE!"

Thunder rent the air and Mitakihara shook as Mami's ultimate attack hit its target, reducing the scrapyard that had been serving as a battleground to dust. Mami dismissed the gigantic pistol she held and collapsed to her knees, exhausted. As a veteran magical girl, Mami was used to difficult fights, including ones to drive off other magical girls that tried to invade her territory. But never before had she fired Trio Finale outside of a Witch's Barrier. Never before had she needed to kill someone.

But this girl was different. Whereas the others had been desperate or greedy, this girl didn't seem to care about hunting territory or Grief Seeds. In fact, it was hard to think of her as a girl at all. After what she did to Ms. Akemi it was easier to see her as a monster then as a fellow human being. While Ms. Akemi seemed to represent everything that Mami hated about the magical girl system, being a perfect example of the cold, emotionless, selfish mindset that far too many girls were force to adopt in order to survive, she definitely didn't deserve what had been done to her. No one deserved that. And as if that wasn't enough Mami suspected that this girl was behind the fire that had raced through the richer parts of the city a couple of days ago, the one that had consumed the home of Madoka and Sayaka's friend, Hitomi.

But despite her crimes, despite her monstrous behaviour, Tsukino Miko was still another human being, still just a girl. A girl whose life Mami had just ended. Mami felt her stomach turn as she processed what she had just done. It had to be done; otherwise who knows how many people the girl would have gone on to kill. But still… but still…

"hehehehehHihihihihihiHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!"

Mami was torn from her ruminations as haunting laughter filled her ears. Her head snapped up and before her eyes the smoke left by her attack cleared, revealing Ms. Tsukino looking no worse for wear. She was unusually tall and deathly pale, with white shoulder length hair and bright red eyes that seemed to glow in the pale moonlight. Her magical girl outfit consisted of a pure black long coat with the sleeves torn off, dark red pants with random rips and tears in them and black combat boots. Instead of a shirt, her modesty was preserved by the white bandages that were wrapped around her chest, which drew attention to how unhealthily thin she was. Her fists were also wrapped with bandages, though these were stained red with blood. Mami's blood. Despite the apparent damage to the the outfit, none of it had been caused by Mami. That was just it's natural form. Damaged clothing for a damaged soul.

"WAS THAT THE BIGGEST GUN YOU GOT? Cute." Miko said with a feral grin. She adopted a brawler's stance and started bouncing on her feet with anticipation. Mami sighed and pushed herself to her feet, summoning a musket from the air as she did so. "Ready?" Miko asked. "Good. Rooooound two!"


Okay, so here's the WCHB that @EternalStruggle chose as a reward for picking a new name for the quest. Actual update coming Soontm​. As soon as I figure out what I'm acutally supposed to be writing.
 
Holy shit Miko

Are you okay with radiating all that edge?
Well, she is a serial killer. Is it any wonder that her magical girl outfit would be edgy as fuck? On a more serious note, while I have a lot of fun with these WCHB sections, they are quite short which means that the characters they introduce probably come off as one dimensional. For example, Miko here acts completely different when not transformed and has an entire backstory that doesn't get explored here. I may have an over active imagination.

But what if she cuts her soul gem with that gritty double edged super katana?
Funny joke, but Miko doesn't have a katana or any weapon actually. She just beats people to death with her bare hands.
 
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Uh, a little elaboration please? That doesn't actually answer my question.
The post was "what could have been", so thus it was insightful into that theoretical scenario—or at least your view of it or something...

It seemed appropriate at the time, and further thought doth not sway it.
 
The post was "what could have been", so thus it was insightful into that theoretical scenario—or at least your view of it or something...

It seemed appropriate at the time, and further thought doth not sway it.
Oh. Sure, I guess. It's more like I just have some characters that appeared in my head when I though about the options I gave you/ would have given you.... Now that I think about it that actually sounds similar to what you said so I guess I think nothing of it as I was the one who came up with the idea. Whatever.
 
Out of curiosity, what do people here mean when they say "edge"?
Daria - "As far as I can make out, edgy occurs when middlebrow, middle-aged profiteers are looking to suck the energy -- not to mention the spending money -- out of the "youth culture." So they come up with this fake concept of seeming to be dangerous when every move they make is the result of market research and a corporate master plan."
Adjective. Taking coolness to its extreme and generally beyond the realm of actual possibility, while at the same time seemingly unaware of how ridiculous it is.
the act of being edgy is basically teenage kids that think theyre cool. hardcore kids seem to think theyre the fucking edgyest things everr.
 
Well, she is a serial killer. Is it any wonder that her magical girl outfit would be edgy as fuck? On a more serious note, while I have a lot of fun with these WCHB sections, they are quite short which means that the characters they introduce probably come off as one dimensional. For example, Miko here act's completely different when not transformed and has an entire backstory that doesn't get explored here. I may have an over active imagination.


Funny joke, but Miko doesn't have a katana or any weapon actually. She just beats people to death with her bare hands.
=P
Out of curiosity, what do people here mean when they say "edge"?
It's used to lightly mock overly dark and gritty behaviour that tries to be shocking or seem mature. Such as coldsteel the hedgehog. Usually found in sentences like 'don't go cutting yourself on that edge'. Basically when something tries to be dark and serious, only to become horribly hilarious and totally ridiculous.

When you see something like ' MY WHOLE FAMILY IS DEAD AND I'M GOING TO KILL ANYONE THAT GETS IN THE WAY OF MY REVENGE UGH I'M SO DARK AND HAUNTED AND SERIOUS! JUST LOOK AT MY BLACK COMBAT BOOTS WITH STEEL PLATING AND LONG SEXY TRENCHCOAT gotta go kill and enslave a whole city because muh angst'? It's just cringey, bad writing, and that's never conductive towards a good story. And then you get people who tend to whine about white knights attempting to ruin their fun in response. This is equally amusing.

People often seem to confuse being serious and mature with ridiculous crawling in my skin tier bullshit.
 
Out of curiousity can we get a character sheet for Shouta, at least for those of us who missed on a few of the possible char gen votes.
 
Character Sheet
Character Sheet

Name: Shouta Souske

Alignment: Lawful Evil

Hair Color:
White

Eye Color: Blue

Height: 5'3"

Weight: 126 ld

Power: Gravity Manipulation
- Known Applications: Increase/decrease gravity, telekinesis, crushing, Flight, Orbit Field, Slingshot Field, gravitational attraction/repulsion.
- Suspected Applications: Plasma Generation, Black Hole Creation, Setting Broken Bones.

Heaven Canceler: A doctor who can save anyone's life so long as they aren't 100% dead.

Kamijou Touma: A teenager with the power to cancel esper abilities with his right hand.

Index: A child nun and Touma's roommate.

Accelerator: The number 1 esper in Academy city and your rival. His power is vector manipulation.

Last Order: A clone of Misaka Mikoto that serves as the system admin for the MISAKA network. Under Accelerator's protection.

Yomikawa Aiho: High school gym teacher, Anti-skill member and Accelerator's guardian.

Yoshikawa Kikyou: Former researcher for the Level 6 Shift Project and Accelerator's other guardian.
 
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I'd suggest moving the threadmark to near the beginning.
 
MORE FAN ART! @Camellia you are awesome! Incredible, I got fan art and this time it was for an omake. In-freaking-credible. Camellia, I'll be sending you a PM so you can pick the next WCHB but it'll have to wait until after the next update. Can't have to many distractions from the main plot, now can I?
 
All these characters have white hair...

Could it be you too have a large spot of affection for white haired characters?
 
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