Ok... I'm sorry no need to pull that out. wow , sorry for proposing an idea... It was just a stray thought you know to avoid the typical SaberxShirou.
honey you dont have to be ashamed at all. its an opinion and it has its value.
Because it comes off as an attempt by a voter to rail road their preference romance, I am even more against making Artoria a lesbian as it feels too much like a player trying to cheat the system at the expense of their fellow players and I am against just as I would be against someone trying to get their preference romance by writing a bunch of omakes about it.
You are being much too rude here, the argument could be turned right back at ya and you're being just a smidge overbearing in the quest bro. lay off please.
 
Ok... I'm sorry no need to pull that out. wow , sorry for proposing an idea...
I was just explaining in-depth why I was so opposed to your suggestion and letting you understand my reasoning.

It was just a stray thought you know to avoid the typical SaberxShirou.
However, this was what I was against as your suggestion was attempt to railroad romance why trying to get rid of potential romance option before it was even possible. I care about SaberxShirou or ArtoriaxTavish, but I most certainly do care about someone attempting to railroad me on an important aspect of the quest.

You are being much too rude here, the argument could be turned right back at ya and you're being just a smidge overbearing in the quest bro. lay off please.
No, it is not rude. If you consider being honest and giving proper criticism to their suggestion. It is not too rude anymore than your post below is being too rude.
couple of spelling errors. Mostly some missing letters and some turns of phrase not being as clear as they could be. If you would accept critique. Having him stand on his own more inspired by the concept rather than an outright expy might be better. It being basically shirou and Co with different names with very very similar situations would be a little troublesome for the setting. though mitsuzuri expy is kinda cool too. Could have potential.

"Tiger" should be supplanted with another name that invokes the feeling but is not outright "Tiger" as it takes a little away from the interactions with the character you're mentioning. Though I like the concept and may write some things later.

I was giving my honest thoughts because it did come off as an attempt to rail road romance by a player before any romance options have attempted and it it got admitted here as being such:
It was just a stray thought you know to avoid the typical SaberxShirou.

Romance should be a vote by the players not making our character gay just so one player can get remove from the table an option he doesn't like

And no, the argument cannot be turned against me because I have not try to railroad this quest and therefore isn't vaild to use against me.

As for being overbearing, no I am not. I am being investing in this quest and actively discussing it and trying to contribute to it and its worldbuilding. How about you be more invested in this quest and discuss it more and try writing some omakes of your own? After all, I can't help that you are refusing to participate as much as I am.
 
I was just explaining in-depth why I was so opposed to your suggestion and letting you understand my reasoning.


However, this was what I was against as your suggestion was attempt to railroad romance why trying to get rid of potential romance option before it was even possible. I care about SaberxShirou or ArtoriaxTavish, but I most certainly do care about someone attempting to railroad me on an important aspect of the quest.


No, it is not rude. If you consider being honest and giving proper criticism to their suggestion. It is not too rude anymore than your post below is being too rude.


I was giving my honest thoughts because it did come off as an attempt to rail road romance by a player before any romance options have attempted and it it got admitted here as being such:


Romance should be a vote by the players not making our character gay just so one player can get remove from the table an option he doesn't like

And no, the argument cannot be turned against me because I have not try to railroad this quest and therefore isn't vaild to use against me.

As for being overbearing, no I am not. I am being investing in this quest and actively discussing it and trying to contribute to it and its worldbuilding. How about you be more invested in this quest and discuss it more and try writing some omakes of your own? After all, I can't help that you are refusing to participate as much as I am.
Its the QM who decide you know , i can't really completly erase a pentential romance , but just proposing an idea and if people agree , perhaps get accepted but if not or is the QM himself is against the idea i can't do much about it with no hard feelings. But no need to pull a more than 300 words text about the irrational way of my idea , if you are against it its okay , we are talking about romance not about stats , preference differ btw people.
You can't make me invest more in this quest , i'm already following it and proposing the most efficient votes , do writing an omake is the ultimate requirment to be a true player in this quest ? i'm already writing every or almost every night. i'm highschool girl don't expect me to write an answer to every post.
 
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Let's see.
Adhoc vote count started by Birdsie on Nov 3, 2017 at 11:35 AM, finished with 229 posts and 2 votes.

  • [X] Take a horse from the stables at midnight. (Secretive.)
    [X] To the village, south.
    [X] Roland (if willing).
    [X] Ria (leave with Roland if he is not willing to come).
    [X] Take a light armor to protect ourselves from the armory (if possible)
    -[X] Take a horse from the stables at midnight. (Secretive)
    --[X] To the village, south
    ---[X] Take no one with you
 
[X] Take a light armor to protect ourselves from the armory (if possible)
-[X] Take a horse from the stables at midnight. (Secretive)
--[X] To the village, south
---[X] Take no one with you
 
[X] Take a horse from the stables at midnight. (Secretive.)
[X] To the village, south.
[X] Roland (if willing).
[X] Ria (leave with Roland if he is not willing to come).
 
Its the QM who decide you know , i can't really completly erase a pentential romance , but just proposing an idea and if people agree , perhaps get accepted but if not or is the QM himself is against the idea i can't do much about it with no hard feelings.

I am aware. That is your opinion and you are perfectly within your rights to express it. However, I am allowed to have a disagreeing opinion and I am perfectly within my rights to express it as well. Whatever the QM decides, I will accept it like you would.

But no need to pull a more than 300 words text about the irrational way of my idea , if you are against it its okay , we are talking about romance not about stats , preference differ btw people.

I was just trying to offer the full reasoning for why I was against it so you could understand where I was coming from and not get offended by my strong disagreement with your proposal?

You can't make me invest more in this quest , i'm already following it and proposing the most efficient votes , do writing an omake is the ultimate requirment to be a true player in this quest ? i'm already writing every or almost every night. i'm highschool guy don't expect me to write an answer to every post.

You are answering the bit wasn't directed at you, but at Crow's requested that I care about this quest less. They were complaining that I was being too active in this request so I was sarcastically suggesting that perhaps they should instead be more active rather than asking me to post less. Asking someone to invest more in this quest is just as unreasonable as asking someone to invest less.

By the way, if you want help writing an omake, feel free to PM me.
 
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Oh. Guess I'll wait longer, then.
To be fair, you take a 13-year old girl with some basic training and a dysfunctional sword, and then ask...
How to beat an ancient dragon?
No wonder people draw a blank.

We can move wherever we like, but without some kind of realistic short goal we are going to be stumped as to what to do next.

[X] Take a light armor to protect ourselves from the armory (if possible)
-[X] Take a horse from the stables at midnight. (Secretive)
--[X] To the village, south
---[X] Take no one with you
 
To be fair, you take a 13-year old girl with some basic training and a dysfunctional sword, and then ask...

No wonder people draw a blank.

We can move wherever we like, but without some kind of realistic short goal we are going to be stumped as to what to do next.

[X] Take a light armor to protect ourselves from the armory (if possible)
-[X] Take a horse from the stables at midnight. (Secretive)
--[X] To the village, south
---[X] Take no one with you
Could've always picked medium. You're in for a challenging ride.

I'd love to say that you made the most of the training phase, but you only juiced out roughly 66% of it. Still, you can do it with some luck and cleverness.
 
Could've always picked medium. You're in for a challenging ride.
It's not about difficulty, though. Even after choosing hard - which I didn't, BTW, anticipating something like this - people would still expect you to provide the options to tackle the challenge, with the understanding that most of them won't work without adjustment.

Currently we have no leads on how to even approach the situation. In these circumstances an otherwise unremarkable choice of direction may as well be a coin toss. Normally, you would at least supplement the direction with a brief mention of what lies there and why we'd want to go that way. Most of us head to the village because it is the sole descriptor available to us, and the rest read 'wander about randomly'.

To find a dragon we probably should go to a library/archives to see if they have any records on their whereabouts (they are ancient, so someone might have written something down)... or seek out sages/oracles/whatever to divine the location of one, or follow a trail of rumors and strange happenings... but none of the options seem to relate to our mission. This leads to uncertainty and potentially to a sharp decrease in votes, which is what made me reply in the first place.
 
As for being overbearing, no I am not. I am being investing in this quest and actively discussing it and trying to contribute to it and its worldbuilding. How about you be more invested in this quest and discuss it more and try writing some omakes of your own? After all, I can't help that you are refusing to participate as much as I am.
Because I have a life that I was very much too busy to even barely participate? I wanted to try omakes but you are being too overbearing. You just dismiss other's concerns without an actual reason,
You are answering the bit wasn't directed at you, but at Crow's requested that I care about this quest less. They were complaining that I was being too active in this request so I was sarcastically suggesting that perhaps they should instead be more active rather than asking me to post less. Asking someone to invest more in this quest is just as unreasonable as asking someone to invest less.
Its your attitude. Fucking excuse me that Im busy with my university and my job and my family. You whip out those huge posts with a very offending attitude, how do you even want people to get engaged when you are responding and interacting in such a way on the quest as a whole to your own specifications?

If someone is concerned you are being rude you cannot just dismiss that outright and answer sarcastically back, you are just confirming my point and sapping the enjoyment out of this quest.
 
Chapter 2: Dragon Hunt - Part 1: Turbulent Beginnings
There's only one way to go about this. And that's going in alone.

You can't bother your brother with this. You can't bother anyone with this. This is your responsibility. The responsibility to show that you are capable in your own right.

You wait patiently. You go to your study, read a few books, go to the yard and give the training dummy a few whacks, then you eat dinner and make everything seem ordinary. Of course, the thought of how irresponsible this choice is racking your mind. What will mother say when you return? Especially without informing her. And shortly after your birthday, too! The fact that it's winter probably won't help to calm her down.

After you're done with the pumpkin soup, you stand up and prepare your plan to get into the armory. Typically, the small shack outside the house has some decent weapons, but nothing excellent. Your mother keeps the good, enchanted and enhanced stuff down in the basement vault of magical artifacts.

What magical artifacts? Well, where do you think all the dragon bones, treasures, cursed swords, and dark wizard robes go after the enemy is defeated? That's where they go, but if you try to break in, you'll be toast. The security measures on that thing are nuts. There's probably at least a few dozen traps, plus some magical ballista turrets, golem sentries, and similar doohickeys.

***​

Since it might be a good idea to talk with your brother some more before you go, you ask the butler for directions and he points you to the parlor, where Roland and Ria apparently find themselves.

You enter the room. It is small and minimalistic, at least for noble standards. There's a small chandelier, a pair of green, slightly decorative sofas with a coffee table between them, and a fireplace to the right, as well as a large carpet spanning the entirety of the chamber.

"How's she doing?" you approach, sitting next to Roland.

"She's great. We've been playing a lot, haven't we?" Roland looks at his pet, then moves his finger up to the baby drake's mouth. Ria tries to clumsily bite him, but not in a malicious way, making Roland repeat his previous sentence in a very 'childish' tone.

"Who's a good lil' drake? Yes, you are!"

The two of them play together affectionately, while you observe.

"Hey, Roland," you suddenly speak.

"Hm?" he turns his head to look at you.

"We might not see each other for a while."

"Why?" he asks confusedly.

"I have to leave for practice for some time. Don't worry though," you respond with an endearing smile.

"How long?" he lets go of Ria. The drake moves underneath the coffee table and observes the conversation.

"I guess a month? Surely no longer than that. Maybe even a week," you fear to list 'forever' as a possibility. You gulp in anxiety.

"Hm... okay," he says, less disappointed than he originally was, "I was scared you'd be gone for like... like a year, or something. What are you practicing?"

You mumble.

"Huh?"

You clean your throat, "Magic."

"Oh, okay," he nods, but you can tell he is rather sad you're leaving, "Hey. Maybe when you come back, you can show me what you've learned? Some magic tricks!"

"Right," you nod and once again smile.

"Have fun while I'm gone and make sure not to overfeed her, you scallywag!" you leap at Roland, taking him into a hug from behind and messing his hair up by shuffling it with your hand.

He laughs, "Quit it!"

***​

Dusk. The sun set beyond the horizon about half an hour ago. Very faint, orange outlines of its light can be seen at the very edge of the border of sight. As soon as they fully fade away, you get up from the bed and away from the window, dress up in a bunch of warm clothes, write a letter to inform your parents you'll be back before they say 'Excalibur' and proceed outside.

You take and put on some light armor. Nothing big, since putting on a complex armor is too time-consuming and you hate to be worn down. Just a small cuirass, with some larger faulds on the sides and two, big gauntlets to protect your forearms and hands. You also get some knee-high boots, to be safe. You reckon you don't need more. Besides, more armor would be too heavy for you to apply your neat agility to the fullest, right?

You're feeling anxious. Stealing a horse is one thing, even though you're not exactly stealing as you intend to return it back and it is kind of your horse, in a way. The problem is that you have absolutely no idea how to steer such a magnificent steed because your training with them was minimal. You only know how to saddle up and... actually, that's it.

With that in mind, you sneak into the stables and struggle with one of the horses. A mare called Dullahan.

"C'mon, girl... come on," you struggle and pull the leather straps, "What's wrong?"

The horse neighs in response. It might be because it's midnight, or because it is so cold. Great. This is just another problem to add to the list. You consider all of the possible ways out of this predicament, but you're not quite sure of a way out.

"Fine, let's try it."

You step away from the horse, laying your hands on her neck. You close your eyes and cast an Enhancement spells on the coat of skin of the horse. Upon recalling a short incantation in your memory, mana flows into the horse's neck and spreads through her skin. Dullahan briefly glows, before neighing as the mana covers her body. In a few seconds, the glowing light disappears.

You open your eyes and smile.

"Think you can endure the cold now?" you ask endearingly.

The horse neighs again.

You lead Dullahan outside to the typical road that leads to the south. You struggle to get onto the saddle for two minutes, almost falling off three out of six times. When you are on, Dullahan proceeds to move forward without much fear of the searing cold.

***​

You travel like this for several hours, channeling mana into the Enhancement spell every now and then to refresh it and keep Dullahan fairly invigorated and warm.

Suddenly, you pull. Dullahan stops.

You stare forward. In front of you, on the road, there is a black shape. You reach into your scabbard, undoing the latch and laying your hand on Excalibur.

"Who are you?"

"..." The figure is silent. It takes a step in your direction.

"Halt!" you threaten, but the figure keeps moving.

Ten meters are between you. It keeps moving, step after step.

Eight meters.

"I said halt!" Six.

You prepare to draw Excalibur, but then you recognize the shape.

Black, long robes reaching to the earth. A metallic mask in the shape of a gloomy, frowning face. Dark leather gloves and a bunch of magical tomes underneath the rope. In front of you stood none other than the supposed ex-black mage, Cervitou.

"Artoria Baragar," he calls, "What are you doing?"

"W-what?" your eyebrows jump, your mouth hanging open for a moment.

"I asked what you are doing," he dryly replies, not moving a centimeter from his spot roughly five meters in front of you.

"None of your business," you recompose yourself.

"I''m afraid it is," he shakes his head, then looks straight into your eyes. He takes a deep breath, "Tell. Me. What you're doing in here."

His words are like a physical power. A wave of energy that entices your mind, captures it, and forces an answer out of it. The words slip out of your mouth on their own, "I intend to hunt an ancient dragon on my own." You realize what you just said and shake your head in confusion of why you just said that. Did he use hypnosis on you?

Cervitou stands in place, seemingly responseless.

...

"That is troubling news," he muses, "Does your mother know?"

"No. And don't think about telling her," you almost plea, but you try to maintain a sound and demanding tone.

Cervitou doesn't answer. His head turns around and looks back, staring alongside the road you are going down.

"Are you going to Megafni village, south of here? No, wait. That is a dumb question. Of course, you are," he deduces properly from the fact that this road leads only there.

"You completely ignored my demand," you mention. He waltzed off from one topic to another like it's nothing.

"I did not," he says defensively, "You can count on my discretion, Artoria Baragar, but do not come crying to my chantry as a spirit once a dragon eats you. It would trouble me extensively to have to perform necromancies again."

"You're a necromancer?" you ask. From a brief encounter, this shifted into a full-blown conversation.

"Naturally."

Huh. You suppose black magic and some aspects of necromancy aren't that far away from each other, but you wouldn't expect this guy to be one. You didn't see any signs of him drinking wine from skulls, or waving dead souls and dismembered hands around.

"More importantly, Artoria Baragar, there is something I must ask you. I could not visit yesterday to discuss with your mother due to my personal..." he stops speaking. Cervitou stops, looking for the right word to describe his predicament, "turbulences."

"What's the question? Also, hurry the hell up. I'm freezing out here," you say, breathing out some air which creates a white cloud of frost.

"Naturally," he replies. He seems to like that word. "Did you encounter anything weird yesterday, perhaps during the party?"

"Weird? Such as?"

"Such as things that are statistically improbable."

"Gee, thanks. I asked for an example, not a definition."

"I do not have examples to provide you with," he answers, in the same, aloof, yet corteously polite tone as always.

You sigh. This guy... "I suppose the drake was there, and–––"

"Ah, yes! The drake!" he exclaims suddenly. The way he pronounces it is like an explosion of passion, very uncharacteristic of him, but he says it in the same voice.

"You know... Ria?" you ask, perplexed.

Cervitou suddenly calms down. "No," he lies. The lie is as obvious as his inability to feel excitement toward anything normal. Still, asking about the subject further wouldn't yield any results, since he has no intention of explaining it in the first place. "Anything else?"

"There was this weird boy. He took a few magic books from me."

"Irrelevant and unimportant," Cervitou asserts, more like some kind of cold, mechanical golem than a human being... is he even a human? You never saw his face. Maybe he's a golem with a soul?

"And... oh! I got a crystal ball from an unknown person as a gift. When I touched it, I got weird visions and I felt tired suddenly."

"Witchcraft, heresy, and black magic," Cervitou explains the situation clear to you, without you even asking for it. "I request––no––I demand that you destroy that object at once when you return. Actually, don't bother. I will proceed to the Baragar mansion to do it myself. Where is it?"

"In my room? Don't touch anything in there, or I will kill you."

"You can be most certain I have no intention to touch your property, save for the crystal ball, which is not your property, but devilwork."

"Devilwork? Do you know who sent it?" you ask, disoriented by his words.

"No," he says, but obviously, he's lying again.

"I know you do," you try to force him into a corner.

"Incorrect," he replies.

"You do," you continue, slowly getting tired of his dull dishonesty. He could at least come up with something creative.

"Fine," he admits, "I will explain it as selective misinformation?"

"What the heck does that mean?"

"I lied to––" he stops.

... Silence falls. The wind brushing against the trees is the only sound of the forest for a moment. The snowflakes begin to settle on his suit until he looks up at you.

"I can't tell why I lied."

"That's fine, I guess. You do you, pal," you sigh. It's not like you wanted to keep the crystal ball anyway. You planned to destroy it, but somehow, it slipped your mind. You might as well leave the chores to him, especially since you're leaving for quite some time.

"Enjoy your hunt, Artoria Baragar," Cervitou takes one step back.

Suddenly, his black frame begins to float. His outfit flutters in each direction, massive winds propelling through it. And in a flash of intense darkness, similar to some kind of tangible shadow cloud, he disappears, poofed from the place where he stood.

"Mages are so weird," you mutter. Then again, aren't you partly a mage by now?

Anyway, you need to hurry up. It's without a doubt that mother will send a search party for you, first thing in the morning. Or maybe she will understand that you want to do it alone and leave you to it, with enough trust for you to do this yourself? Regardless, you hurry Dullahan and the horse proceeds with a steady gallop to the town of Megafni.

***​
You arrive very early in the dawn.

The fresh breeze of snowflakes and air ramps through the heightened, hay roofs of the houses, creating a shrieky sound. You stop by a shop to get some food and water for Dullahan, as well as yourself. Upon eating a breakfast more befitting of commoners at the tavern, you proceed outside only to watch the most uncanny sight.

"I told you to quit it, Marinus!" a boy is following another boy. Both are roughly your age and you recognize one of them. It's the unwelcome guest of your birthday party. He's going after some other kid with blue hair, clearly annoying him. You ignore their clearly unpleasant conversation and head over to Dullahan to take off.

Marinus stops. "Tavish Oshha... Didn't I tell you to keep your nose out of other people's business?" he says rather darkly and lacking impression.

"This is my business as well, and you know that damn well!" the other boy angrily shouts, drawing a lot of attention.

"So what? Do something about it, punk!"

One pushes the other and a fight breaks loose. You can't tell who started it since you weren't too invested to begin with. This is something you can't ignore.

You turn and rush to the two of them, walking in between both of the idiots and splitting them apart with your arms. "Hands down! What the hell are you two doing?"

"Oooh, and who are you?" the blue-haired boy says mockingly, "A town guard? They don't hire girls, y'kn–––" You give him a mean look, which is enough to make him shut up.

"Who started it?"

"He did," Marinus points at Tavish.

"You," you say, looking at him.

"Me?" Tavish replies.

"No, the king-of-goddamned-fairies; Oberon. Yes, of course! You," your voice carries a clandestine malice, "Each day, you jump from one heap of trouble into another."

Tavish scowls at Marinus, then looks at you. "He's.... nevermind."

Tavish turns away and walks off, while Marinus chuckles under his breath, clearly in satisfaction. You turn around to the blue-haired boy and stare at him until he leaves. The look in your eyes is enough to compel him to move on and ignore these events.

Why did you have to interfere? You could have just let the two of them eat each other and it'd end up better for the world that way.

"Whatever," you murmur, walking up to your noble mare and sitting on top of her.

***​

You ride through the town, prepared to leave. You want to go further south to the larger city called Mora. Supposedly, there should be a library there with plenty of knowledge about recent dragon sightings, or maybe even some kind of oracle or diviner to help you out. Let's hope there's an inn on the road there, or you'll have to find a cave to sleep in.

You're stopped. "Wait!"

The familiar voice makes you turn. Tavish again. "You again. What in seven heavens do you want?"

"You're Artoria Baragar, right?" he questions.

You're not impressed. You told him your name yesterday. "Yes."

"Where are you going, though?" he asks.

"And you want to know why?" you ask, less scornful than usually.

"I want to return this, but I don't know when to do it if you're not at your place," he holds the magic textbook you gave him out to you.

"You can keep it. I don't want it," you answer dryly, doing your best not to sound high and mighty, but it comes out that way.

"And can I thank you in some way?" he asks, in a sincere manner, "I don't like being indebted, especially to nobility. I'd rather just pay back what I owe at once."

"I don't need your money," you say, smiling in a conversation with him for once. Maybe he's more solid than you supposed. "Just keep it as a gift. Free of charge, debt, or favor."

Tavish nods. "Thanks."

You prepare to ride off, but now that you know that maybe he's not a total scoundrel, a single question of curiosity pops into your mind. The curiosity is too much and you feel the urge to satiate it, so you turn back to him and ask him one question.

"By the way, what did the fight with you and that other boy break out for?"

"We had an... argument," he gulps, looking away.

"Over?" you inquire further.

"I think he's––actually, I deeply suspect he's abusing his sister. Verbal warnings don't work on him, and she doesn't want to take this to the guards. This is a problem to me because she's my friend, but I can't do anything about it."

You consider his words.

[] Help him out. Let's go give that 'Marinus' guy a scare he won't forget.
[] No time for it. Bid Tavish adieu and set off for Mora at once.

Calendar: 1005-01-01
Time: Dawn

Mana: 196/200
 
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For anyone asking, this is basically what Cervitou sounds like 95% of the time. Pure stoicism.



 
[x] No time for it. Bid Tavish adieu and set off for Mora at once.

Kids' affairs are no concern of ours. We are on an important mission here!
 
Because I have a life that I was very much too busy to even barely participate? I wanted to try omakes but you are being too overbearing. You just dismiss other's concerns without an actual reason,

What do you expect me to do? Participate less in a quest that I am enjoying? Why should I have to participate less anymore than you should have to participate more?

By the way, if you want any help writing an omake, feel me to PM for assistance. I will do my best to help.

Its your attitude. Fucking excuse me that Im busy with my university and my job and my family. You whip out those huge posts with a very offending attitude, how do you even want people to get engaged when you are responding and interacting in such a way on the quest as a whole to your own specifications?

What offending attitude and why do you think writing long posts is bad? What do you want me to do? Not discuss things with the other voters and give my honest thoughts and feedback? Of course I want people to engage with the quest, that's why I discussing it with them. And I am not making the quest to my specifications. Only two of the votes that I have come up with have won (here and here) and I made a single omake that has had minimal impact on the story so far and anything I have tried to get out of that omake had already been included by the QM before I suggested it. Half of my votes have lost.

Again, I don't what you are expecting from me as from my perspective, you have started suddenly being aggressive and rude towards me with I have done nothing to provoke you and have yet to provide any reasoning as to what I did to originally upset you.

If someone is concerned you are being rude you cannot just dismiss that outright and answer sarcastically back, you are just confirming my point and sapping the enjoyment out of this quest.

So what are you asking of me? You are claiming I am being rude by telling Terran Imperium the truth about why I was so strongly opposed to his suggestion and then are rude yourself by asking that I partake in something I enjoy less? Because, to be frank with you, I found your request to be 'less overbearing' as a request to partake in this quest/thread less and I found that incredible obxinous and insulting and I will admit that said feelings did influence my reply to your post.
 
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[X] Help him out. Let's go give that 'Marinus' guy a scare he won't forget.

My reasons should be obvious.
 
Let's break this up, alright? We're all civilized people with our own sets of preferences and we have no reason to argue about who's rude and who's railroading in here, okay?

To be perfectly honest, I don't know how I upset them in the first place and why this is escalating so far. As far as I concerned, we were having a perfectly normal and friendly debate and suddenly they were both extremely upset with me.

I'm patiently and humbly waiting for your analysis and possible crack conspiracy theories about what's going on.

On it.
 
To be perfectly honest, I don't know how I upset them in the first place and why this is escalating so far. As far as I concerned, we were having a perfectly normal and friendly debate and suddenly they were both extremely upset with me.



On it.
Oh don't missunderstand. I'm not upset just a little bit intimidated by your long anatycal answer
I mean you are honest that's good not many people are but...
Ils just the way you say it that is rude ? Doesn't matter know. I don't really mind that much

[X] Help him out. Let's go give that 'Marinus' guy a scare he won't forget.

EDIT : its me who thought i upset you in someway since generally people don't go to such lenght :whistle:
 
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I'm patiently and humbly waiting for your analysis and possible crack conspiracy theories about what's going on.

As requested:
There's only one way to go about this. And that's going in alone.

You can't bother your brother with this. You can't bother anyone with this. This is your responsibility. The responsibility to show that you are capable in your own right.

You wait patiently. You go to your study, read a few books, go to the yard and give the training dummy a few whacks, then you eat dinner and make everything seem ordinary. Of course, the thought of how irresponsible this choice is racking your mind. What will mother say when you return? Especially without informing her. And shortly after your birthday, too! The fact that it's winter probably won't help to calm her down.

After you're done with the pumpkin soup, you stand up and prepare your plan to get into the armory. Typically, the small shack outside the house has some decent weapons, but nothing excellent. Your mother keeps the good, enchanted and enhanced stuff down in the basement vault of magical artifacts.

What magical artifacts? Well, where do you think all the dragon bones, treasures, cursed swords, and dark wizard robes go after the enemy is defeated? That's where they go, but if you try to break in, you'll be toast. The security measures on that thing are nuts. There's probably at least a few dozen traps, plus some magical ballista turrets, golem sentries, and similar doohickeys.

This is the fluff for Artoria coming up with the results of the winning vote IC and how to carry them out. She is taking responsibility for her actions and is acknowledging how foolish and reckless along with being aware of how much trouble is going to be once she gets back.


Since it might be a good idea to talk with your brother some more before you go, you ask the butler for directions and he points you to the parlor, where Roland and Ria apparently find themselves.

You enter the room. It is small and minimalistic, at least for noble standards. There's a small chandelier, a pair of green, slightly decorative sofas with a coffee table between them, and a fireplace to the right, as well as a large carpet spanning the entirety of the chamber.

"How's she doing?" you approach, sitting next to Roland.

"She's great. We've been playing a lot, haven't we?" Roland looks at his pet, then moves his finger up to the baby drake's mouth. Ria tries to clumsily bite him, but not in a malicious way, making Roland repeat his previous sentence in a very 'childish' tone.

"Who's a good lil' drake? Yes, you are!"

The two of them play together affectionately, while you observe.

"Hey, Roland," you suddenly speak.

"Hm?" he turns his head to look at you.

"We might not see each other for a while."

"Why?" he asks confusedly.

"I have to leave for practice for some time. Don't worry though," you respond with an endearing smile.

"How long?" he lets go of Ria. The drake moves underneath the coffee table and observes the conversation.

"I guess a month? Surely no longer than that. Maybe even a week," you fear to list 'forever' as a possibility. You gulp in anxiety.

"Hm... okay," he says, less disappointed than he originally was, "I was scared you'd be gone for like... like a year, or something. What are you practicing?"

You mumble.

"Huh?"

You clean your throat, "Magic."

"Oh, okay," he nods, but you can tell he is rather sad you're leaving, "Hey. Maybe when you come back, you can show me what you've learned? Some magic tricks!"

"Right," you nod and once again smile.

"Have fun while I'm gone and make sure not to overfeed her, you scallywag!" you leap at Roland, taking him into a hug from behind and messing his hair up by shuffling it with your hand.

He laughs, "Quit it!"

Fluff for this vote: ---[] Take no one with you. Artoria is gently letting her brother know about her journey in a way that is believable enough that he won't suspect her true attentions until it is too late, most likely when he mentions where Artoria has gone to their parents and finds out the truth.

Dusk. The sun set beyond the horizon about half an hour ago. Very faint, orange outlines of its light can be seen at the very edge of the border of sight. As soon as they fully fade away, you get up from the bed and away from the window, dress up in a bunch of warm clothes, write a letter to inform your parents you'll be back before they say 'Excalibur' and proceed outside.

You take and put on some light armor. Nothing big, since putting on a complex armor is too time-consuming and you hate to be worn down. Just a small cuirass, with some larger faulds on the sides and two, big gauntlets to protect your forearms and hands. You also get some knee-high boots, to be safe. You reckon you don't need more. Besides, more armor would be too heavy for you to apply your neat agility to the fullest, right?

Fluff for this vote here: [] Take a light armor to protect ourselves from the armory (if possible). IC reasoning for why to take the light armour and I will admit that I didn't think about light armour being easier to carry/put on. Good reasoning and realistic. We should keep in mind the realism when it comes to armour and other equipment in the future.

You're feeling anxious. Stealing a horse is one thing, even though you're not exactly stealing as you intend to return it back and it is kind of your horse, in a way. The problem is that you have absolutely no idea how to steer such a magnificent steed because your training with them was minimal. You only know how to saddle up and... actually, that's it.

With that in mind, you sneak into the stables and struggle with one of the horses. A mare called Dullahan.

"C'mon, girl... come on," you struggle and pull the leather straps, "What's wrong?"

The horse neighs in response. It might be because it's midnight, or because it is so cold. Great. This is just another problem to add to the list. You consider all of the possible ways out of this predicament, but you're not quite sure of a way out.

"Fine, let's try it."

You step away from the horse, laying your hands on her neck. You close your eyes and cast an Enhancement spells on the coat of skin of the horse. Upon recalling a short incantation in your memory, mana flows into the horse's neck and spreads through her skin. Dullahan briefly glows, before neighing as the mana covers her body. In a few seconds, the glowing light disappears.

You open your eyes and smile.

"Think you can endure the cold now?" you ask endearingly.

The horse neighs again.

You lead Dullahan outside to the typical road that leads to the south. You struggle to get onto the saddle for two minutes, almost falling off three out of six times. When you are on, Dullahan proceeds to move forward without much fear of the searing cold.

Fluff for this vote here:
-[] Take a horse from the stables at midnight. (Secretive) Oh yeah, we never took this option:
Turns out that riding a horse is hard when you don't know how. (Trust me, I know. Never fallen off however and there was always multiple professionals at hand to help out mind you so Artoria has it worse than I did.) Fortunately, we have magic to solve the problem.

snip Cervitou interterpution

I will only be looking at the highlights of this scene due to it being so long. I did enjoy it and I kind of trust him now. The only reason I don't fully trust him is due to Leona's warning.

You travel like this for several hours, channeling mana into the Enhancement spell every now and then to refresh it and keep Dullahan fairly invigorated and warm.

Nice background fluff to explain logistics. Most adventures forget the long, boring journeys of doing nothing, but travelling from A to B and focus on just the action bits. I like seeing the logistics like this.

"I''m afraid it is," he shakes his head, then looks straight into your eyes. He takes a deep breath, "Tell. Me. What you're doing in here."

His words are like a physical power. A wave of energy that entices your mind, captures it, and forces an answer out of it. The words slip out of your mouth on their own, "I intend to hunt an ancient dragon on my own." You realize what you just said and shake your head in confusion of why you just said that. Did he use hypnosis on you?

He uses magic on us, but it seems to be for our own benefit as what we are doing is incredible reckless and irresponsible and Cervitou seems to care about us.

Cervitou doesn't answer. His head turns around and looks back, staring alongside the road you are going down.

"Are you going to Megafni village, south of here? No, wait. That is a dumb question. Of course, you are," he deduces properly from the fact that this road leads only there.

Ooo, nice way to show Cervitou's deductive skills. I bet this guy has high perception. Again, he seems to care in his own way by being concerned about what we are up to.

"I did not," he says defensively, "You can count on my discretion, Artoria Baragar, but do not come crying to my chantry as a spirit once a dragon eats you. It would trouble me extensively to have to perform necromancies again."

Ah, he really does care! Our mother might not trust Cervitou, but he definitely appears to have our best interests at heart. He also seems to be an actual ex-black mage, empathise on the 'ex' part.

"More importantly, Artoria Baragar, there is something I must ask you. I could not visit yesterday to discuss with your mother due to my personal..." he stops speaking. Cervitou stops, looking for the right word to describe his predicament, "turbulences."

"What's the question? Also, hurry the hell up. I'm freezing out here," you say, breathing out some air which creates a white cloud of frost.

"Naturally," he replies. He seems to like that word. "Did you encounter anything weird yesterday, perhaps during the party?"

Yep, he definitely cares about us, just in his own way.

"Such as things that are statistically improbable."

So something was up with the unlikely amount of lucky coincidences on our birthday. Pretty sure I called it or at least noticed it. Might have been someone else and I agreed with them.

You sigh. This guy... "I suppose the drake was there, and–––"

"Ah, yes! The drake!" he exclaims suddenly. The way he pronounces it is like an explosion of passion, very uncharacteristic of him, but he says it in the same voice.
The mask slips and something was up with that egg. Theory at the end.

"You know... Ria?" you ask, perplexed.
Cervitou suddenly calms down. "No," he lies. The lie is as obvious as his inability to feel excitement toward anything normal. Still, asking about the subject further wouldn't yield any results, since he has no intention of explaining it in the first place. "Anything else?"

I got a theory, but it will be at the end.

"There was this weird boy. He took a few magic books from me."

"Irrelevant and unimportant," Cervitou asserts, more like some kind of cold, mechanical golem than a human being... is he even a human? You never saw his face. Maybe he's a golem with a soul?

Tavish is dismissed as unimportant and irrelevant. Still, a few magic books? Did he end up taking more than one or is Artoria exaggerating? Mostly like the later and it is confirmed as being the latter further one in the post.
"And... oh! I got a crystal ball from an unknown person as a gift. When I touched it, I got weird visions and I felt tired suddenly."

"Witchcraft, heresy, and black magic," Cervitou explains the situation clear to you, without you even asking for it. "I request––no––I demand that you destroy that object at once when you return. Actually, don't bother. I will proceed to the Baragar mansion to do it myself. Where is it?"

"In my room? Don't touch anything in there, or I will kill you."

"You can be most certain I have no intention to touch your property, save for the crystal ball, which is not your property, but devilwork."

"Devilwork? Do you know who sent it?" you ask, disoriented by his words.

As expected, the crystal ball is bad news. Cervitou knows something is up and is looking out for our safety. While Artoria might be annoyed at someone going in her room, I for one am relieved at Cervitou taking action to help us.

In case you haven't noticed, I pretty much trust the guy at this point.
"No," he says, but obviously, he's lying again.

"I know you do," you try to force him into a corner.

"Incorrect," he replies.

"You do," you continue, slowly getting tired of his dull dishonesty. He could at least come up with something creative.

"Fine," he admits, "I will explain it as selective misinformation?"

"What the heck does that mean?"

"I lied to––" he stops.

... Silence falls. The wind brushing against the trees is the only sound of the forest for a moment. The snowflakes begin to settle on his suit until he looks up at you.

"I can't tell why I lied."

"That's fine, I guess. You do you, pal," you sigh. It's not like you wanted to keep the crystal ball anyway. You planned to destroy it, but somehow, it slipped your mind. You might as well leave the chores to him, especially since you're leaving for quite some time.

He isn't being entirely truthful with us, but that seems to be due to a magic spell on him. He certainly seems to try and tell us the truth, but said magic stops him.

Still, trust points for trying to tell us the truth.

"Enjoy your hunt, Artoria Baragar," Cervitou takes one step back.

And good luck in yours Cervitou the ex-black mage.

"Mages are so weird," you mutter. Then again, aren't you partly a mage by now?

Quote for the self-aware truth.

"I told you to quit it, Marinus!" a boy is following another boy. Both are roughly your age and you recognize one of them. It's the unwelcome guest of your birthday party. He's going after some other kid with blue hair, clearly annoying him. You ignore their clearly unpleasant conversation and head over to Dullahan to take off.

Shirou-expy and Shinji-expy with Artoria recognising the former and the QM making the latter distinctively recognisable as such with blue hair and all.

Marinus stops. "Tavish Oshha... Didn't I tell you to keep your nose out of other people's business?" he says rather darkly and lacking impression.

"This is my business as well, and you know that damn well!" the other boy angrily shouts, drawing a lot of attention.

"So what? Do something about it, punk!"

One pushes the other and a fight breaks loose. You can't tell who started it since you weren't too invested to begin with. This is something you can't ignore.

You turn and rush to the two of them, walking in between both of the idiots and splitting them apart with your arms. "Hands down! What the hell are you two doing?"

"Oooh, and who are you?" the blue-haired boy says mockingly, "A town guard? They don't hire girls, y'kn–––" You give him a mean look, which is enough to make him shut up.

A fight breaks out and Artoria being the bossy do-gooder that she is breaks it up, putting Marinus in her place.
"Who started it?"

"He did," Marinus points at Tavish.

"You," you say, looking at him.

"Me?" Tavish replies.

"No, the king-of-goddamned-fairies; Oberon. Yes, of course! You," your voice carries a clandestine malice, "Each day, you jump from one heap of trouble into another."

Tavish scowls at Marinus, then looks at you. "He's.... nevermind."

Tavish turns away and walks off, while Marinus chuckles under his breath, clearly in satisfaction. You turn around to the blue-haired boy and stare at him until he leaves. The look in your eyes is enough to compel him to move on and ignore these events.

Marinus blames Tavish for the fight and Artoria is awful quick to believe him, but doesn't side with the latter as seen in the last paragraph.

Her instincts weren't the best here, but they could have been worst.

Why did you have to interfere? You could have just let the two of them eat each other and it'd end up better for the world that way.

"Whatever," you murmur, walking up to your noble mare and sitting on top of her.

Because heroism is in your blood Artoria and getting into other people's business and helping them is what heroes do. Plus you are an inquisitive girl who likes to butt your way into other people's stuff with a tendency to back out at the first sign of resistance.

You ride through the town, prepared to leave. You want to go further south to the larger city called Mora. Supposedly, there should be a library there with plenty of knowledge about recent dragon sightings, or maybe even some kind of oracle or diviner to help you out. Let's hope there's an inn on the road there, or you'll have to find a cave to sleep in.

So the town of Mora is our next destination.

You're stopped. "Wait!"

The familiar voice makes you turn. Tavish again. "You again. What in seven heavens do you want?"

"You're Artoria Baragar, right?" he questions.

You're not impressed. You told him your name yesterday. "Yes."

"Where are you going, though?" he asks.

"And you want to know why?" you ask, less scornful than usually.

Tavish shows up again.
"I want to return this, but I don't know when to do it if you're not at your place," he holds the magic textbook you gave him out to you.

"You can keep it. I don't want it," you answer dryly, doing your best not to sound high and mighty, but it comes out that way.

"And can I thank you in some way?" he asks, in a sincere manner, "I don't like being indebted, especially to nobility. I'd rather just pay back what I owe at once."

And the boy just wants to be helpful. Also doesn't like to feel indebted to someone. Good thinking, especially with the bit where he particularly doesn't want to be indebted to a noble.

Also looks like Artoria was exaggerating when she claimed that Tavish took multiple magic books.

You prepare to ride off, but now that you know that maybe he's not a total scoundrel, a single question of curiosity pops into your mind. The curiosity is too much and you feel the urge to satiate it, so you turn back to him and ask him one question.

"By the way, what did the fight with you and that other boy break out for?"

Artoria is seeing the better side of Tavish and her curiosity gets the better of her.

"We had an... argument," he gulps, looking away.

"Over?" you inquire further.

"I think he's––actually, I deeply suspect he's abusing his sister. Verbal warnings don't work on him, and she doesn't want to take this to the guards. This is a problem to me because she's my friend, but I can't do anything about it."

You consider his words.

Yep, the QM decided to take the easy way and make Marinus into a Shinji expy.

[] Help him out. Let's go give that 'Marinus' guy a scare he won't forget.
[] No time for it. Bid Tavish adieu and set off for Mora at once.

Too biased to comment on this fairly so skipping. My choice is obvious for obvious reasons.


And we are slightly under on our mana and I know why:
You travel like this for several hours, channeling mana into the Enhancement spell every now and then to refresh it and keep Dullahan fairly invigorated and warm.
The narrative is important!
  1. Marinus is all, but confirmed as a Shinji-expy, but there might be a twist that he isn't abusing his sister and Tavish is barking up the wrong tree.
  2. Cervitou is actually trustworthy and genuinely cares about Artoria's well being in his own way. This makes our mother bigoted and prejudiced towards ex-black mages, but that might be justified by her life experiences with actual black mages.
  3. The drake egg that Roland found was planted by Cervitou as a birthday present to Artoria hence why it was suddenly found so close to Artoria's home along with being about to hatch with no mother drake about. It also explains why he seems to recognise the drake and why he was excited about it along with seemingly knowing about it beforehand.
  4. The crystal ball has something to do with the Demon Emperor.
  1. Is the reason our mana is less than full due to using magic to ride Dullahan and keep his stamina up?
  2. Just to confirm, Tavish only has one of Artoria's magic books right?

Nothing major. We just gained light armour to our items
 
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EDIT : its me who thought i upset you in someway since generally people don't go to such lenght :whistle:

Nah, you didn't. I just write long post sometimes, especially when I am invested something. I actually wrote the long post because I felt you deserved to have a proper explanation for why I was so strongly opposed to your idea. I also wanted to make it clear that I wasn't against Artoria being lesbian due to homophobia as LGBT friends in RL have made me somewhat sensitive to that in addition to being firmly against girl on girl because it's 'hot'.

@Birdsie Could I suggest that you bury any possible of this disagreement being brought up again by making Artoria bisexual? My reasons being OOC as doing so would make it impossible for any arguments over having her bat for boys or bat for girls to come up against as she would be attracted to both.
 
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