Would anyone mind a compromise where both storylines are played? I was thinking about switching control between the protagonists at certain stopping points; not every update, but basically in a chapter-based style.
Well... I will not make any promises because I know myself well enough... but considering the thing as a whole, there is a lot of material for me to work with. Having two storylines would probably work even better to show off more of it instead of trying to force it all into one.
Adhoc vote count started by Naron on Jul 27, 2017 at 1:41 AM, finished with 32 posts and 18 votes.
So... I see that we are close on the difficulty. I also noticed how it went back and forth for a while, but this seems to be it.
Nonetheless, with how the vast majority is almost equally distributed over two options, Fresh Meat and New Girl... hm.
Would anyone mind a compromise where both storylines are played? I was thinking about switching control between the protagonists at certain stopping points; not every update, but basically in a chapter-based style.
Either way, the vote on the setting is locked now. The other one remains open until I got feedback on that idea of mine.
Well... I will not make any promises because I know myself well enough... but considering the thing as a whole, there is a lot of material for me to work with. Having two storylines would probably work even better to show off more of it instead of trying to force it all into one.
Well... I guess I should call the votes by now. Voting is locked.
Anyway, I have taken a few hours to think about the situation. Some do not mind having two stories, some do mind and some are concerned whether I can pull it off.
To be honest, I myself am in the last group; there is a lot that has to be done for this to work, and I am not entirely sure it will work out properly.
So I decided to do it properly and only take the highest vote.
With how close the second place is however... I will make it a guarantee that you can meet that girl later on and maybe even recruit her into your team.
Adhoc vote count started by Naron on Jul 27, 2017 at 12:00 PM, finished with 34 posts and 19 votes.
Due to how close the difficulty-vote was, it starts with a Prologue written for [X] New Girl before getting to the Fresh Meat
Night has fallen a few hours ago. You did not really keep track of time, seeing that your schedule in the morning is rather flexible.
Not that you care about morning just yet; your alarm already buzzed you awake thirty minutes ago and you have been listening quietly. No sounds are coming from the other parts of your small house, the only things you hear are the chirping cicadas outside.
There is no one there, just as expected.
As the full moon shines into your room through old curtains, you carefully weigh your options; your parents always go out to drink on Saturdays, just like about every other adult living in your little commune.
Of course they do, who would not want to celebrate another week of normalcy? After those five years of war, everyone definitely needs it.
You are happy about it as well; it has been more than four years since the fighting ended. Your father was a soldier and often only barely managed to stay alive. Yet, there is something that stops you from actually celebrating, even if just in your mind. With what happened to you, you can no longer smile as you used to.
A quiet sigh escapes your lips as you roll out of bed and throw a sweater over your worn pyjamas. Maybe you get a new set for your birthday... if you live that long. Things like you usually do not stay alive for long these days.
After slipping into a comfortable if worn out pair of shoes, your eyes wander over your surroundings once again; good, there is nobody watching you.
With that in mind, you carefully walk outside and quickly wander over the moonlit street. There are no occupied houses in that direction, so you should be good for the time being; nonetheless, your heart does not stop beating like crazy.
You can hear every last beat echo through your body, and something else beating along with it. Power. It flows through you with an intensity you are afraid others might notice if they come too close.
You are a Magical Girl. A monster.
The magic awakened a month ago, but you were among the lucky few; it was another Saturday and already night, so your parents were not around... and neither was anyone else. So when the power flowed through you and transformed a perfectly ordinary girl into an atrocity, no one was there to see it and attack you.
You quickly detransformed after that and hid away in your bed, not daring to come out until morning.
But nobody had noticed; life went on just as before, no soldiers storming your home to drag you off to prison for your crime.
Sometimes you wish they would; that might at least end the days of uncertainty.
Sighing again, you gently push open the doors to this abandoned train station; yours and the other communes already looted everything of importance out of it, so no one really came here anymore. It is a large building and in good condition despite the war raging through Japan like any other nation; the whole place is indoors, even though the walls have crumbled a bit here and there.
This one has been the last stop before Tokyo, but it remained silent for at least six years. Maybe eight, you are not sure; you were awfully young when it happened, being barely fifteen by now. Either way, what little of the infrastructure survived the hellfire they called war had to be neglected for more basic work, like farming and rebuilding the power plants.
Dust wavers with every step, footprints from your previous visits visible on the ground; the air is a little stale and pieces of concrete crunch when you step on them. The large, empty place throws back an echo far louder than you think it actually is.
No matter.
"I am the celestial heiress, Magical Girl Heart of Light!"
Your voice echoes over the empty platforms and what remains of the rails. Bright light engulfs your form and you can feel the power surging freely now. It feels warm, strong and right... even if you know it is not. Despite those thoughts however, you know you have to exercise; learn your powers, grow stronger if you can. Because if you do not, you will die just like so many others.
And in the end, you do not want to die. Not when there is still so much to see, so much you want to do...
You shake off the thought and start practicing; it is no use to ponder what was, only what is.
Still, just kicking at empty air and a few trashcans is incredibly boring; you can not even use your spell because people might notice.
This is why you are actually thrilled when you feel the building shake slightly; some sinister, blackish red cloud manifests in its center and the vibrations even go through your body.
Maybe this will be somewhat of a challenge, like those zombies you found trudging towards your commune two weeks ago.
You regret your thoughts a moment later, when the cloud explodes in a shower of red light and leaves you with a creature at least ten metres tall; a writhing and bulbous body glistening in the faint light, fluids dripping down to the ground steadily. It stands on... are those arms?
Yes, just arms. Twelve of them, all with sharp claws at the end. Several large maws are opening and closing all over the ugly form, revealing razor sharp teeth and short tentacles grasping for prey to pull into them.
Two big, yellow eyes focus on your glinting form and the smell of putrid flesh mixed with excrements wafts forward from the creature; you have trouble not to retch as the stench assaults your nose, but at least it shocks the shock out of you.
(Presence of Light: 100 Total Damage
Hell Devourer Health: 45,000 - 100 = 44,900)
Your aura already bites into the thing, but it does not seem to care all that much. Well, it will care in a second.
"Blinding Nova!"
(Blinding Nova: +800 Base Damage, +343 Dice, +400 Enemy still distracted, +3000 Right in the Eyes = 4,543 Total Damage
Hell Devourer: +400 Base Resilience, +152 Dice, -100 Weak to Light Effects = 452 Total Damage Reduction
Hell Devourer Health: 44,900 - 4,001 = 40,899
Hell Devourer is now dazzled)
It screams in agony when the pure light rushes out of your hand, a stream so radiant that even you can barely look at it. The hollow sound makes the walls shiver again. Once the light subsides, you can see that its eyes were cooked and melted, only gaping holes looking back at you now.
But you are not done yet.
(Blade of Light: +600 Base Damage, +125 Dice = 725 Total Damage
Hell Devourer: +400 Base Resilience, +5 dice, -100 Weak to Light Effects, -100 Armor Pierce = 205 Total Damage Reduction
Hell Devourer Health: 40,899 - 520 = 40,379)
Your blade snaps forward with speed, but the large thing does not even seem to register the metal cutting into the taut skin on one of its arms. It just sniffs the air, then another arm rises and comes for you
(Hell Devourer: +900 Base Damage, +178 Dice, -200 Blind = 878 Total Damage
Heart of Light: +800 Base Resilience, +65 Dice = 865 Total Damage Reduction
Heart of Light Health: 2,400 - 13 = 2,387)
You quickly move out of the way and, maybe due to being blinded, the monster misses you almost entirely; only one of its scales nicks your shoulder, barely enough to draw blood.
(Hell Devourer: +900 Base Damage, +19 Dice, -200 Blind = 719 Total Damage
Heart of Light: +800 Base Resilience, +221 Dice = 1,021 Total Damage Reduction
Hell Devourer: +900 Base Damage, +47 Dice, -200 Blind = 747 Total Damage
Heart of Light: +800 Base Resilience, +216 Dice = 1,016 Total Damage Reduction
Heart of Light Health: 2,387 - 0 = 2,387)
Its next two swings do not even hit you, even though they crush a bench behind you; that thing has a lot of reach.
(Presence of Light: 100 total damage for enemy, 100 Health restored for ally
But even then, your power quickly restores the little bit of damage you took and even the gash in your sleeve closes. The monster growls angrily and moves for another attack, but you are already on the move. Instincts you never knew you had sing in your mind, telling you how to move.
(Blade of Light: +600 Base Damage, +121 Dice, +1000 Right where it hurts = 1,721 Total Damage
Hell Devourer: +400 Base Resilience, +50 dice, -100 Weak to Light Effects, -100 Armor Pierce = 250 Total Damage Reduction
Blade of Light: +600 Base Damage, +220 Dice, +1000 Left where it hurts = 1,820 Total Damage
Hell Devourer: +400 Base Resilience, +43 dice, -100 Weak to Light Effects, -100 Armor Pierce = 243 Total Damage Reduction
Your attack hits the monster right in its empty eyesockets, tearing apart the sensitive flesh that your spell cauterized earlier; blood begins to leak and a low grumble erupts from the depths of several throats as the arms wiggle around.
(Hell Devourer: +900 Base Damage, +93 Dice, -200 Blind = 793 Total Damage
Heart of Light: +800 Base Resilience, +108 Dice, -400 Overextended = 506 Total Damage Reduction
Hell Devourer: +900 Base Damage, +178 Dice, -200 Blind = 878 Total Damage
Heart of Light: +800 Base Resilience, +38 Dice = 838 Total Damage Reduction
Hell Devourer: +900 Base Damage, +179 Dice, -200 Blind, +100 It can smell you = 979 Total Damage
Heart of Light: +800 Base Resilience, +95 Dice = 859 Total Damage Reduction
Steel support column: +50 Heavy Object = 50 Total Damage
You are far too close; your frantic attempts at getting away come too late and a claw rams into your abdomen, throwing you backwards and through one of the support beams. You can feel something in your stomach tear apart and pain erupts through you; a loud scream escapes you while you barely manage to roll out of the way of another strike, debris raining over you and ripping small gashes into your skin.
It is answered by another roar from the montrosity.
(Presence of Light: 100 damage for enemy, 100 Health restored for ally
Your magic soothes the wounds and you force yourself up; pain courses through your body, but this much you can bear. Whatever part of you was hurt, the brunt of the damage seems gone. Thick streams of blood leak out of the wounds your blade left in the monster's eyesockets as it creeps closer to you once again.
. . .
Line Break Recognised . . .
You stay more careful from this point onwards, not taking risks and having your aura heal what damage you can not dodge. Your blade and the gashing wounds wittle it down and, after what feels like an eternity of battle, the creature falls. Its arms give in and break, the maws screeching in a macabre cacophony before it goes silent.
The silence is almost deafening and you slowly fall to your knees, legs giving out under you after having kept you upright through this.
The monster is dead.
For a few minutes, you just breath. Breath and stare at the corpse, only now realising that the previous stench was now almost overtaken by a strong smell of copper; your black robe is glistening with halfway dried blood, some of it slowly caking off.
You breathe and feel your magic fix up the rest of your injuries, still looking at the corpse. You killed that. You actually killed that... that monster.
Despite it all, the fact you almost died and were hurt more than ever before... even if your life is now naught, you feel something warm welling up in you.
After spitting out the blood, you slowly close your eyes for a moment and let pride settle in. This, this is an achievement. It is gory, it is disgusting... but this is something you did.
How fitting for a Magical Girl, that her only achievement in life is to kill something.
You shake off the thought and take another deep breath before getting to your feet. You have to get back home as fast as possible; if someone heard the noise or saw the lightshow you produced...
What do you do?
[] Go back, no one saw you yet
-[] Take the direct route to lose as little time as possible
-[] Make a wide arc to the south in case someone comes to investigate
[] Run away, someone must have noticed
-[] Where to? (Write-in)
[] Train some more, you are far enough away for no one to have noticed
[] Write-in
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-You would get EXP here, but this is not your character
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(Unlocked Character Sheet: Magical Girl Heart of Light!)
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So... here is the first part of the prologue; that could have been if New Girl had won. I give you the character sheet as a freebie, although I will not update it until your character actually meets Heart of Light.
While double-checking for typos, I just realised that my initial assumption of her not being balanced was wrong. That demon would have made her a midnight snack, had it not been for the one level I already gave her for already having some experience. Her Base Resilience would have been only 400 then, small enough for the Devourer to wittle her down within these three rounds I showed.
[x] Go back, no one saw you yet
-[x] Make a wide arc to the south in case someone comes to investigate
Wouldn't know where we could run away to since we've only just been introduced to the world, though taking the route to the south would let us see more of it. On the meta side I don't see why we should train since this won't be the main character (unless she becomes a party member later on).
Oh boy, she sees herself as an abomination. I can only wonder how our character will react and who might be around her when this happens.... Well we did vote for this kind of setting where magic helped end the world, secrecy and who to trust should be our priority in the future.
Hmm, the fight did cause a bit of noise reading it over but it also took some time by the end of just letting die to bleed out and aura. I think I'm willing to rush home so her parents hopefully won't catch her. That and she herself seemed very adamant about hurrying home.
[X] Go back, no one saw you yet
-[x] Take the direct route to lose as little time as possible
Your voice echoes over the empty platforms and what remains of the rails. Bright light engulfs your form and you can feel the power surging freely now. It feels warm, strong and right... even if you know it is not. Despite those thoughts however, you know you have to exercise; learn your powers, grow stronger if you can. Because if you do not, you will die just like so many others.
Despite it all, the fact you almost died and were hurt more than ever before... even when your life is now naught, you feel something warm welling up in you.
After spitting out the blood, you slowly close your eyes for a moment and let pride settle in. This, this is an achievement. It is gory, it is disgusting... but this is something you did.
Largely yes, she seems to be uncomfortable with her magic but those other words there have to have some small meaning so there's a chance it can always be turned around.
Largely yes, she seems to be uncomfortable with her magic but those other words there have to have some small meaning so there's a chance it can always be turned around.
Actually its more that she fear the reaction of other people and soldiers taking her away which means the society and govt is hostile to magic or abnormal. Under that system it would be harder to develop and work with them.
Given that we voted for the Human Nature background, I would assume this may have been the MGs setting the world on fire like no demons ever could.
It's hard to not see yourself as an abomination when your kind is blamed for an Apocalypse. There is a mention of some kind of global war that is ongoing for the last five years.
[x] Go back, no one saw you yet
-[x] Make a wide arc to the south in case someone comes to investigate
It's hard to not see yourself as an abomination when your kind is blamed for an Apocalypse. There is a mention of some kind of global war that is ongoing for the last five years.
To be exact, the war has been over for a while; people are still incredibly happy about that, though. Everyone is glad to be alive, seeing that Japan is just one of four remaining cells of surviving humans. For references, there are about twenty Million Japanese people alive and the peninsula is also coinhabited by another ten Million from Alaska, which is basically all that is left from the Americas. Those people made the journey over there to join the Japanese cell.
Anyway, calling the votes.
Adhoc vote count started by Naron on Jul 29, 2017 at 5:31 AM, finished with 12 posts and 7 votes.
[x] Go back, no one saw you yet
-[x] Make a wide arc to the south in case someone comes to investigate