WANNABE OVERLORD - A hazbin hotel quest
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Take control of a recently fallen sinner and follow their rise to become THE GREATEST OVERLORD TO HAVE EVER EXISTED!!! . . . or just try to survive day to day. Make new friends, enemies, lovers, and more as you make it to the top of hell.

And remember . . . DON'T FUCKING DIE!!!
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Chapter one - Falling down
WELCOME TO WANNABE OVERLORD!!! The quest for power and friends in the hell hole that is the pride ring and all the shenanigans that come along with it. HERE WE GO!!!!!

Darkness . . . Pain . . . And the smell of smoke and bodily waste burning your nostrils were the first sensations to hit your body when you awoke. Every was in indescribable pain; every muscle felt like it was torn, every bone felt shattered, and your head felt as though it would pop from the pressure building within it. Even with agony, you ha-no needed to get up and know what the hell happened to you . . . And where the hell you were.

Your eyelids were far too heavy to felt and see through, so you stretched out your hands to claw and feel for some sort of support with which to hoist yourself up from and lean on. You first felt rough and warm shattered concrete that comprised the floor below you. Grasping further ahead your hand touched a myriad of trash, and a slimy puddle you rather not think about, until you finally felt the sharp edge of some kind metallic box. Thinking it to be some sort of dumpster, you used it to lean on as you dragged yourself up and rest to try and recover.


After a couple of seconds you took your real first long breath after waking before suddenly stopping and hacking on the "air". You experienced days with shifty air, but this was something else completely. It was hot, dry, smokely, and you felt tiny Particulates of ash clog your throat, but after a few minutes of trying, you were finally able to breath somewhat normally again.

The last thing to do was to finally see where the hell you were, and luckily it was the easiest task so far. Yes even the smallest ray of light that hit your eyes burned, but your patience for this whole cluster fuck was running dry. Through watery red eyes, you saw that you were in some sort of darky and dingy ally way; torn trash bags and their scattered contents were littered everywhere along with broken glass and the scant bullet casing here and there. That part, the bullets, made your hair on the back of your neck stand up, but the sky above turned your blood icy cold.

Red, a hellish crimson red that caused everything below to be bleached the same hue. Plastered on this nightmarish sky was a pentagon that loomed over everything below. Before you were able to fully comprehend what was before you above . . .

*BOOM*

An exploration further ahead from you pelted rocks and glass towards you as it's shockwave topled you over. You landed roughly on the ground and quickly held your head down trying to protect yourself from the carnage as bullets and even more bombs, thankfully further away from you, rang out afterward.

You bit the bullet, luckily just a Metaphor as none of the fight ahead was aimed in your direction, and lifted your just enough to see what the hell was going on; What it was made the sky look like as typical as you could get. In Front of you, out of the alleyway and on some sort of destroyed road and street, were honest-to-god monsters: man shaped wolf's, creatures with more eyes and teeth than you could count, things that crawled, flew, laughed, cried, and gutted and killed and each other like animals as they visibly enjoy the death around them.


You ducked your head back under your arm, desperately trying to understand what the fuck was happening.

'I'm dreaming, No, I was drugged and now I'm hallucinating, I'm in a coma, THIS CAN'T BE REAL! GOD DAMN IT WHAT'S HAPPENING TO ME!'

Your mind screamed in denial as you searched your memory for some kind, any kind of answer . . .


[Character creation]


stats: Your character stats' level on certain skills will affect how will, or poorly, they will perform them. They can be upgraded, permanently or temporarily, through either training that particular skill or through gaining bonuses by completing tasks, mission, or national actions. they also be Temporarily decreased if something goes wrong for your character. These bounces and disadvantages will be stacked together and readers can decide what skill to use for certain situations.

Current character stats that will change after their backstory is flesh out further in the chapter:


MARTIAL: (your ability to both fight and lead others into battle) + 0

DIPLOMACY: (your ability to charm, convince, and intimidate others to do what you want and think like you want them to think) + 0

STEWARDSHIP: (your management and logicalical capabilities) + 0


INTRIGUE: (your ability to trick, steal, spy, and lie to others without them knowing) + 0

PRESTIGE: (How well know your character throughout pride and their ability to use that reputation to their advantage) - 50

LEARNING: (how intelligent your character is and how well they can pick up and refine their skills) +0

OCCULT: (Your character's knowledge on magic and their ability to use that magic themselves) : -25/unable to perform any magic spells.

What is MC name?
[Write in] - first name
[Write in] - last name
[Optional write in] - nickname

What is their gender?
[ ] - male
[ ] - female
[ ] - Non-binary

Roughly how old were they when they died?
[ ] - very young: 18-25
[ ] - youngish: 26 - 35
[ ] - middle aged: 36 - 55
[ ] - pretty old: 55+

What did they look alive?
[Write in] - general appearance including their typical clothing, height, hair, skin color, eyes, How handsome or pretty they were, ect and/or a picture or drawing to represent them.

What caused them to die?
[ ] - it was their own fault
[ ] - it was someone else's fault
[ ] - it was from natural causes
[ ] - it was an accident
-[Write in] - any Specifics for their death that you want to see included.

The sins and virtues chosen will affect certain roll and decisions made by the MC based on what is chosen. For example if greed is chosen then any action involving stealing will get a +10 for aligning to their sin, but if it involves giving something away to others then it will be a -10 instead.

What were the types of sin they committed the most while alive? (Two sins max)
[ ] - they were full of themselves (Pride)
[ ] - they had a short fuse (Wrath)
[ ] - they didn't like to share much (Greed)
[ ] - they slacked off whenever they could (Sloth)
[ ] - they were too horny (Lust)
[ ] - they couldn't control themselves (Gluttony)
[ ] - it wasn't hard to make them jealous (Envy)

To balance things out, what were the types of virtues they embody the most? ( Two max and cannot conflict with chosen sins: example being having lust and chastity)
[ ] - they didn't boast about themselves (Humility)
[ ] - they had a cool head (Patience)
[ ] - they had no problem giving to others (Charity)
[ ] - they were a hard worker (Diligence)
[ ] - they only did handholding, and that was enough for them (Chastity)
[ ] - they had good self control (Temperance)
[ ] - they were happy for others' success (kindness)

How was their upbringing?
[ ] - rough; their family lived paycheck to pay check, but they had each other
[ ] - lonely; They didn't have many friends and their family was always busy
[ ] - normal; it was nothing special, including themselves
[ ] - nonexistent; they had way too much responsibility placed on them at an early age.
[ ] - comfortable; their family was pretty well off and took good care of them, but left them unprepared for life.
[Write in] - you made their childhood, but make it realistic and not overly goofy or dramatic.

What type of person were they? (Up to only two character types allowed but can also just have one)
[ ] - A Bookworm: They loved to read and study about a multitude of different topics leading to them getting all A in their school, expect for gym class. (+10 for learning and - 10 for martial)
[ ] -Gym Rat: they always loved to workout and PUMP SO IRON in the gym, but your brain was left to be pretty shrimpy (+10 to martial and -10 to learning)
[ ] - A Punk: They lived life as a petty criminal and party animal along with fellow punks and Delinquents they knew; Leading them to learn a thing or two in the criminal world, not so much in school . (+10 to intrigue, but -10 to learning)
[ ] - they were a goody toe shoe who never broke the rules and were always apart of some kind of student council or Manger. (+10 to stewardship, -10 to intrigue)
[ ] - The Weird Kid: they were obsessed with the supernatural and unknown, leaving you with little friends to hang out with. ( +10 to occult and -10 to diplomacy)
[ ] - The popular kid: they always found it easy to hang out with others and make friends with them, with the trick being to not act and be weird (+10 to Diplomacy, -10 to occult)
[Write in] - write in their character type along with proper balanced stats, I will check to make sure it isn't broken.

Why do they want to be an OverLord? (Up to two allowed)
[ ] - Power
[ ] - Love
[ ] - family
[ ] - safety
[ ] - significance
[ ] - comfort
[ ] - revenge
[ ] - knowledge
[ ] - wealth
[ ] - legacy
[ ] - justice
[ ] - Control
[Write in] -

THANK YOU FOR READING!!!! PLEASE TELL ME YOUR THOUGHTS, OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS, AND IDEAS FOR HOW TO MAKE THIS THE BEST QUEST IT CAN BE!!! Sorry if there are some mistake and problems as this is my first quest and I'll try my best to make the best quest I can
 
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[X] Plan: The Nerd Who Would Be King
-[X] Jackson
-[X] Mcgill
-[X] Nickname: Poindexter to his friends, "NERD!!!" to his enemies.
-[X] - male
-[X] A bespectacled teenager. 5,6 feet tall, pale skin, mildly pudgy, brown hair green eyes and usually carrying or wearing something fantasy or sci-fi related. Not exactly ugly but puberty hit them hard with the zits and never really stopped.
-[X] - very young: 18-25
-[X] - it was someone else's fault
--[X] - Local jock/bullies prank gone horribly wrong.
-[X]- they couldn't control themselves (Gluttony)
-[X]- they were happy for others' success (kindness)
-[X]- they were a hard worker (Diligence)
-[X] - rough; their family lived paycheck to pay check, but they had each other
-[X]- A Bookworm: They loved to read and study about a multitude of different topics leading to them getting all A in their school, expect for gym class. (+10 for learning and - 10 for martial)
-[X]- The Weird Kid: they were obsessed with the supernatural and unknown, leaving you with little friends to hang out with. ( +10 to occult and -10 to diplomacy)
-[X] - knowledge
-[X]- comfort

Ok basically my idea is the stereotypical nerd kid gets offed either late in his last year of high school or soon afterwards by a prank gone wrong. He's got enough scattered occult knowledge from all the fantasy stuff he reads randomly getting things right and occasionally stumbling onto actual occult materials. So he's got enough info about hell to vaguely know what he's doing but not the social skills or muscle to back it up. (at least at first).
 
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[X] Plan got to go big and loud
-[X] Mary
-[X] Kingly
-[X] MK or Princess
-[X] - female
-[X] long black hair to lower back with a light tan small nose and bright blue eyes. 5'8" usually wearing designer dresses.
-[X] - youngish: 26 - 35
-[X] - it was someone else's fault
--[X] crazy stalker that didn't want them to be with someone else.
-[X] - they were too horny (Lust)
-[X] - they had a cool head (Patience)
-[X] - Pressured - Character grew up in a well off family but parents were too control and didn't show much care leading to looking else where for a connection with people.
-[X] - The popular kid: they always found it easy to hang out with others and make friends with them, with the trick being to not act and be weird (+10 to Diplomacy, -10 to occult)
- [X] Love
- [X] significance

Here is my option of a interesting character
 
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[X] Plan: I know what I want
[X]-Drake
[X]-Rex
[X]-Male
[X]-middle aged- 36
[X]- 6'7 bald man, with black eyebrows and olive green eyes. he has pale skin and a lanky stature that made him look just a bit off. his face looked below average, his Ichthyosis making him a target for bullying in his earlier years a sign of fear in his adult life.
[X] - it was someone else's fault
-One of his targets hadn't had enough money to pay Drake off. Drake came to collect, and he took a bullet to the head for his troubles
[X] - they were full of themselves (Pride)
[X] - they didn't like to share much (Greed)
[X] - they had a cool head (Patience)
[X] - they were a hard worker (Diligence)
[X] - rough; their family lived paycheck to pay check, but they had each other
[X]- The Loan Lhark: He wasn't a nice person, but that didn't matter to him. So long as he got his money, and they knew their place, It was alright(+5 to Martial and Stewardship, -10 to Diplomacy)
[X] - Power
[X] - Wealth
 
DA RULES!!!!
Before we begin, here are some important rules and information to remember for this quest:
  1. The quest will start a handful of years before the start of the series.
  2. Main characters from both Hazbin and Helluva will be incredible rare to encounter, especially early on, and any attempt to meet them without some sort of understandable reason will be blocked. This quest is about the little people in hell and even though we know how important certain characters are, doesn't mean they do too.
  3. Sex scenes will either be short and vague or end before they start with a cut to black.
  4. This will be a slow burn kind of deal, with each turn taking place roughing one month apart from each other. The quest will focus on characters and their relation to each other and the world around them.
  5. All side stories, Canon or not, art, and any piece of media created for the story will be rewarded with the person being gifted a +30 to any roll of their choosing.
  6. Don't be rasicst, sexist, homophobic, Pedophilic, ect. You only get one warning then you are banned from the thread and possibly reported.
  7. The Quest will include murder, sex trafficing, abuse, drug usage, alcoholism, rape(although not shown), and other horrible things of that sort. This is hell, it's not a good place. On that note, we will not glorify it nor Romanticize.
  8. the rules will change as some are added, taken away, and modified.
  9. no musical numbers, sorry :sad:. I'm bad at writing them.
  10. If you have any story ideas or characters you want to see included in the story please contact me and we will work out the logistics of it happening
  11. Will try to update the quest every Sunday or Saturday, time of Publishing will vary, and if I am unable to I will update that to you guys and how long the delay will be.
  12. The first person to catch a Grammical or lore mistake on any thread I make will be rewarded a +1 or +5 depending on how bad that mistake was. Then they are able to spend that reward on the set of rolls of their choosing.
  13. Those who's plans/suggestions win in voting will get a +10 they can freely spend how ever they see fit.
  14. You can divide up your points as much as you like as long as their factors of 10; Like 5, 10, 15, 20, ect.
 
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[X] Welcome to the Family Son!

What is MC name?
-[X] - Maxwell (Prefers Maxie)
-[X] - Cadswell
-[X] - Maxie

What is their gender?
-[X] - Non-binary (AFAB)

Roughly how old were they when they died?
-[X] - youngish: 26 - 35


-[X} What did they look alive?
Born Female Maxwell never felt truly comfortable in their skin no matter how they tried, as time grew they learned more about LGBTQ and Gender Neutral and suddenly it just clicked, they changed their fashion style to be as none confirm as they could, wearing suits cutting there hair short and applying make up to make themselve look more maleish to offset their more feminine.

What caused them to die?
-[X] - it was someone else's fault
--[X] it was natrual after all, your efforts to usurp others in the work place were not well met and they decided to do something about it, a group of thugs accosted you and unfortunately take their time teaching you why you shouldn't of done so however they took it too far and you were left bleeding out in the alleyway.


What were the types of sin they committed the most while alive? (Two sins max)
-[X] - they were full of themselves (Pride)
-[X] - it wasn't hard to make them jealous (Envy)

To balance things out, what were the types of virtues they embody the most? ( Two max and cannot conflict with chosen sins: example being having lust and chastity)
-[X] - they had a cool head (Patience)
-[X] - they were a hard worker (Diligence)


How was their upbringing?
-[X] - lonely; They didn't have many friends and their family was always busy and after discovering their themselves more further isolated Maxie from Society as the country Maxie was born into was not so accepting of people like them.

What type of person were they? (Up to only two character types allowed but can also just have one)
-[X] - The Weird Kid: they were obsessed with the supernatural and unknown, leaving you with little friends to hang out with. ( +10 to occult and -10 to diplomacy)
-[X] The Arts and Crafts kid - Playing into their interst in the supernatural and the unknown Maxie became rather invested in drawing Mythical beings in all their glory, Heaven and Hell heavy inspiration for the paintings they created that led to a need to show off quite a bit (+10 Learning and -10 Intrigue)

Why do they want to be an OverLord? (Up to two allowed)
-[X] - family
-[X] - legacy

With the life draining out of Maxie they could not help but regret that they had no family to rely on or a legacy to pass on, their name left to be forgotten and all Maxie was think that if there is an afterlife they would rectify that and ensure no one forgets the name of Maxie Cadswell!
 
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[X] Plan "I actually like the heat. Cold is so much worse."
-[X] Cassian
-[X] Hearth
-[X] Ace
-[X] male
-[X] - very young: 18-25
-[X] - it was someone else's fault
--[X] - It's almost fitting that the difference between life and icy death for you was literally your absentee parents inability to pick up a phone and tell you they were cutting you off during the worst blizzard of the decade.
-[X] - it wasn't hard to make them jealous (Envy)
-[X] - they had a cool head (Patience)
-[X] - they had good self control (Temperance)
-[X] - lonely; They didn't have many friends and their family was always busy
-[X] - A Punk: They lived life as a petty criminal and party animal along with fellow punks and Delinquents they knew; Leading them to learn a thing or two in the criminal world, not so much in school . (+10 to intrigue, but -10 to learning)
-[X] - Comfort
-[X] - Family

just to be clear, I don't have to have two sins just because I have two virtues?

the idea here is a sort of neglected child of real estate agent absentee parents who died during a blizzard. he died freezing and alone, so he wants comfort and an actual family.

Cassian means empty, and hearth can mean "A symbol of ones home." making his name "empty of any symbol of home" indicating his fundamental lack of understanding of what having a home even means beyond aiming to be the opposite of his parents. they got the name off the name tag of the doctor who delivered him.

Ace is just a convenient nickname I've been giving to interactive fiction characters lately. short, sweet, implies competence, draws association to poker and the implications that between his patience and temperance ace has a good poker face.
 
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[X] Plan: The Nerd Who Would Be King

Edit: I know this quest will be dark since its set in hell, but will we get comedy and whole stuff in the future or will it just be a complete edge fest?
 
@ebolasos
CONGRATULATIONS, YOU ARE THE FIRST PERSON TO POINT OUT THE MAJOR MISTAKE!!!, which definitely didn't notice until now. YOU GET A +10 WHICH YOU CAN SPEND ON ANY ROLL OF YOUR CHOOSING 🎉🎉🎉
 
I have to tell you, I find it quite funny and fitting that most of these characters are unlikely to ever search for the Hotel because they don't actually haven't done anything that requires that much redemption and they were screwed by the system...
 
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