Nicholas Brooks said:
Unfortunately, it doesn't seem that Iroh was able to tell Azula that her great grandfather from her mother's side was Avatar Roku. Which is a shame, because even Sozin's last testament (which Zuko had to sneak out for mind you) can't provide this information.
Is that actually relevant to Azula here, though? As far as I'm aware, each incarnation of the Avatar is an individual figure, and there's not actually anything even particularly believed to be special about being descended from one. There are also by now probably quite a few people descended from past Avatars.

edit, because there was another post replying to me between when I started typing the above and when I posted it, looks like:
pucflek said:
Ursa loved Azula, but was utter shit at actually being good mother to her.
Maybe? But I don't think the possibility for the former part of that even crossed Azula's mind here.

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My this thread is moving fast.

pucflek said:
Zuko got preferential treatment from her because Ozai was utter shit to him in more obvious ways than he was to Azula and Ursa apparently thought, whetever validly or invalidly so, that she could only ever shield the one. Not to mention that Azula, as any child would be, was proud of her fathers attention, which only further drove them away.

There is a lifetime of hurt in that relationship but Ursa did not hate Azula.
As I understand it, the particular version of Ursa in this universe is actually still unclear?
 
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This quest's mechanism of time loops is really freeing.
I don't feel pessure to pick 'optimal' options, I feel incentive to pick 'things I'd like to see that might have good outcomes'.

And the updates being so long and sprawling - the butterfly wings that are our votes cascading into so many unpredictable outcomes also contributes to this.

I'm invested, but not stressed.
Quoting to piggy back my agreement and expand because I agree with you.

I also enjoy that we aren't actually experiencing the first few loops. It's so clever. In addition to the narrative freedom it gives Magery, it also completely bypasses the stage of learning about all the mechanics and doing character customisation, which some quests never even leave.

This is nicely streamlined: each loop has 3-4 choices, one per update so far, and the scope is small enough that there's no big feeling of FOMO. If we want to experience something, there's always next time. Which is a fantastic departure from those world spanning quests with 15 choice plans on a time crunch and robust rumour mills of events half a world away that won't likely impact us.

There's certainly a lot of good ideas to learn from in how it's all formatted.

I'm currently toying with a specific quest idea I think could be fun, but it's specifically in Marvel and I don't know much about that multiverse so I'm just constantly overwhelmed even thinking about how to go about running it, because I haven't worked out how to get the scope small enough yet.
 
[x] Iroh. Coward. General. Prince. Once, he was the favoured heir, a legendary firebender, the greatest hero the Fire Nation had known since Sozin—now he's a pathetic, doddering fool who thinks he can make everything right with tears and tea. How did he fall so far? How can he possibly think he's still able to rise?
 
Is that actually relevant to Azula here, though? As far as I'm aware, each incarnation of the Avatar is an individual figure, and there's not actually anything even particularly believed to be special about being descended from one. There are also by now probably quite a few people descended from past Avatars.
I didn't mean it in the sense of "this is critical information." I literally find it unfortunate because it's something interesting and I'd like to see Azula's reaction to it, but the present circumstances don't make that possible. Academically I think it's pretty well known that by this point most people have has one or more Avatars somewhere in their ancestry.
 
"I am pleased to see you enjoying yourself. Perhaps when I return from the Earth Kingdom, you will grace my triumph with a similar performance."
I am really not sure if Ozai is impressed or annoyed with Azula and her performance during festival. Maybe he himself is having cognitive dissonance being at the same time proud of her show of bending mastery and angry at getting reminded by Azula of his wife and her ex lover since they both were performers.
just like Mai, who's stepped closer to rest her fingers softly on the side of his waist in a fleeting touch.
Ty Lee's fingers are icy even through the thick fabric of your sleeves.

"Azula…"

It's strangely hard to focus on telling her to leave you alone;
It is cute how Ty Lee's actions with Azula mirror Mai's with Zuko.


And regarding Azula's family (except Zuko) I really think she doesn't owe them any reconciliation or forgiveness and doesn't need them in her life. Nor uncaring Father who only saw her as a tool to be molded for his purposes. Nor neglectful Mother who choose to forget the memories of her own children just to be unbothered with her new family. Nor Uncle who never ever even bothered with her.

For all I care Zuko can have them. He can listen to his Jailed Father advice, play with his new replacement sister his Mother actually bothers with and listen to his Uncle's platitudes and sip his tea while he grooms him into a Fire Lord White Lotus wants Fire Nation to have. Azula will be better of without them.

Thats why I vote for Sozin instead of Iroh or Mother. As I think it might be another step against the plan of burning Earth Kingdom and by extention against Ozai.
 
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As I understand it, the particular version of Ursa in this universe is actually still unclear?
Then we would learn if it was, maybe, provided the sisters have insight into that.

But i doubt it, i am pretty sure this is canon compliant and canon Ursa did not hate Azula.
I think Azula knows that deep down, but it's easier for her mother to not love her, because the real problem is Zuko being loved more. If her mother didn't love her, then she can accept that, however miserably, but to be loved, and still abandoned would cut deeper, in my opinion.
Then it is one more "truth" to be torn down on the road to recovery that these timeloops are.
 
[X] Sozin. The visionary. The genius. The conqueror. Every living person in the world must know his name—and for the last hundred years, most of the dead as well. What led him there? What made him decide to burn the world down, a century before you ever thought the same? And at the end… what did he think of it all?

Was flipping back and forth between him and Iroh though
 
I am really not sure if Ozai is impresed or annoyed with Azula and her perfomance during festival. Maybe he himself is having cognitive dissonance being at the same time proud of her show of bending mastery and angry at getting reminded by Azula of his wife and her ex lover since they both were performers.
I think he is both proud of the mastery of bending displayed which he attributes to his hand in her upbringing, but annoyed that it was demonstrated in a manner his ex wife would have enjoyed, rather than say, in duel as he would have. Resenting the glimmer of his wife's lingering influence on Azula.
Then it is one more "truth" to be torn down on the road to recovery that these timeloops are
Probably. it's just not one I feel she is ready for yet.
 
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"A forest has never sprouted from kindling."

I'm genuinely unsure if this is being deliberately meta-clever or not.

After all, there are entire species of tree whose seeds require a forest fire to do their thing. Old growth forest trees, even.

So Iroh's metaphor is, quite simply, completely wrong. And it's difficult to imagine he's ignorant of how some plants quite love fire; in any even marginally-realistic scenario the Fire Nation's traditional holdings would certainly be heavily adapted to fire and volcanic eruptions from all the firebenders and active volcanos being about for ages. 'Some plants actually love fire' should be common sense for a Fire Nation citizen.

So it's actually kind of weird for him to select such a self-burning metaphor?

But then again, I've known real people who do exactly this, seeming to on some level realize they're wrong and accidentally-intentionally picking a metaphor that's consistent with that point.

But on yet another hand, it's not like Azula pointed out how laughable his choice of metaphor is...

So I'm left deeply unsure how to take this.
 
And regarding Azula's family (except Zuko) I really think she doesn't owe them any reconciliation or forgiveness and doesn't need them in her life. Nor uncaring Father who only saw her as a tool to be molded for his purposes. Nor neglectful Mother who choose to forget the memories of her own children just to be unbothered with her new family. Nor Uncle who never ever even bothered with her.

For all I care Zuko can have them. He can listen to his Jailed Father advice, play with his new replacement sister his Mother actually bothers with and listen to his Uncle's platitudes and sip his tea while he grooms him into a Fire Lord White Lotus wants Fire Nation to have. Azula will be better of without them.
I agree with you almost entirely except I still want Azula to end up Fire Lord in the end lol. Sure, have the war end, since the Avatar wants it so bad and is powerful enough to force it though, but have Azula use her brilliance to win the peace and leverage the Fire Nation's technological supremacy to economically dominate the post war era instead of sharing it around to republic city and the rest and turning the fire nation into a puppet of the white lotus.
 
After all, there are entire species of tree whose seeds require a forest fire to do their thing. Old growth forest trees, even.
Kindling is dead felled wood slated for fire. Absent any new seeds, a forest cannot, indeed, sprout from kindling.

(Its also questionable if redwoods or sequoias exist on whatever the planet of the setting is named, but i think thats a lot of semantics and lexical nitpicking over what is quite understandable metaphor of "fire is mortal enemy of wood" which is quite well rooted in common consensus for most people)
 
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Unreliable narrator. This isn't going to give us justification for hating Mom it's going to tell us we're a dumbass for doing so. In doing so it gets us one less reason to blindly hate Zuko.

[X] Your mother. Zuko is obsessed with her. He won't hear a word against her—won't even think that she's capable of doing wrong. Especially not when you're the one saying it. But Lo and Li have been around since before Zuko was born. They've seen it all. They know it all. They can give you the evidence you need to finally drive home to Zuko only he was ever loved—and prove you right that you were not.
 
[X] Iroh. Coward. General. Prince. Once, he was the favoured heir, a legendary firebender, the greatest hero the Fire Nation had known since Sozin—now he's a pathetic, doddering fool who thinks he can make everything right with tears and tea. How did he fall so far? How can he possibly think he's still able to rise?
 
I agree with you almost entirely except I still want Azula to end up Fire Lord in the end lol. Sure, have the war end, since the Avatar wants it so bad and is powerful enough to force it though, but have Azula use her brilliance to win the peace and leverage the Fire Nation's technological supremacy to economically dominate the post war era instead of sharing it around to republic city and the rest and turning the fire nation into a puppet of the white lotus.
I wouldn't mind her buzzing off to the Ba Sing Se and rule it over Zuko's Firelording. She is a current Queen of it after all. It might be another push against Ozai's plan too. And the city will be better off with it anyway, compared to the secret brainwashing police government and incompetent clueless puppet King (whom Avatar in his infinite wisdom decided to reinstate on the throne for some reason) it had before.
 
[x] Iroh. Coward. General. Prince. Once, he was the favoured heir, a legendary firebender, the greatest hero the Fire Nation had known since Sozin—now he's a pathetic, doddering fool who thinks he can make everything right with tears and tea. How did he fall so far? How can he possibly think he's still able to rise?
 
Ohhhh sssshhiiittt I wasn't expecting Iroh interrupt there! Love Ty Lee and Mai being the best supports and damn I wish Azula did eavesdrop.

[X] Sozin. The visionary. The genius. The conqueror. Every living person in the world must know his name—and for the last hundred years, most of the dead as well. What led him there? What made him decide to burn the world down, a century before you ever thought the same? And at the end… what did he think of it all?

Let's see if we can get cracking on that Imperium truth. Also Lo and Li being weirdo aunts makes sense as to who the fuck they are and why the hell they're here.
 
Nicholas Brooks said:
I didn't mean it in the sense of "this is critical information." I literally find it unfortunate because it's something interesting and I'd like to see Azula's reaction to it, but the present circumstances don't make that possible. Academically I think it's pretty well known that by this point most people have has one or more Avatars somewhere in their ancestry.
Ahh, thanks for the clarification.

pucflek said:
Then we would learn if it was, maybe, provided the sisters have insight into that.
Maybe? But I don't think the possibility of that would tip Azula's decision here.
(And personally, I'm also more interested in the other two. Ursa left, years ago even before the loops started. I don't think Azula moving on well actually requires her to recognize her mother did love her, if that was even the case; for Azula personally, her mother is still well out of her life, and for ruling, Azula seems to already have enough of an understanding to not make policy on the assumption that her experience with her mother was a representative sample of normal family dynamics.)

@Ghoul King:
Good point about the actively fire-adapted plants; I've encountered information on such before, both for IRL specimens and in at least one other Avatar fanfic, but I hadn't thought of them when reading that myself, just the general fertility of ash.

So I'm left deeply unsure how to take this.
Possibly Azula thought that challenging the literal truth of the statement would merely get something along the lines of a knowing look and a statement that she doesn't understand the metaphor, which challenging the presence of the proverb itself does not.

...Oh. Actually, also: you're right that the crowd of Fire Nation citizens gathered there probably would recognize the literal untruth of the proverb -- and Azula called that proverb a typical one from him, potentially implying that all his supposed wisdom is so flawed.

Also, it seems like it might be a foreign proverb, from somewhere less used to fire ecologies?

Wiggy said:
I agree with you almost entirely except I still want Azula to end up Fire Lord in the end lol. Sure, have the war end, since the Avatar wants it so bad and is powerful enough to force it though, but have Azula use her brilliance to win the peace and leverage the Fire Nation's technological supremacy to economically dominate the post war era instead of sharing it around to republic city and the rest and turning the fire nation into a puppet of the white lotus.
Perhaps we could even resolve the question of the long-settled colonies by generously donating them to the Air Nation, which after all needs resources to rebuild, on the condition that none of the people born there be expelled. Aang would then have to either turn them down, giving up useful resources for rebuilding his people and airbenders in general while also landing right back in the ongoing dispute, or accept them... in which case the Air Nation currently comprised of a single overworked child monk would be nominally in charge of rather a lot of people loyal to the Fire Nation. Much delegation would presumably ensue, and either the de jure Air Nation government would respect the wishes of the people, and thus have close ties to the Fire Nation, or oppress them, which if done enough would give us cause to intervene. Or Aang could just break his work and expel the colonists anyway, massively hurting his own position and making himself look bad compared to us.

Of course, all of that assumes there is a dispute. An even more peaceful solution would be for the Fire Lord and the Earth Queen to be quite easily able to come to a mutually satisfactory solution by virtue of them being the same person, if we can pull that off somehow.

(There is, after all, rather a shortage of good leadership candidates shown in the Fire Nation or the Earth Kingdom. End-of-canon Azula very much doesn't break from that... but the Azula who finally manages to move past these loops?)

Wootius said:
In doing so it gets us one less reason to blindly hate Zuko.
I don't think we do blindly hate Zuko, though? We have, after all, been trying to not kill him; my interpretation is that we'd be fine with him explicitly and publicly renouncing his and his descendants' claim to the throne and then going off to do... basically whatever so long as it wasn't in our way.

No7sHere said:
It really doesn't feel like Azula hates Zuko here. She is extremely angry at him but she explicitly doesn't actually want to hurt/kill him.
Right.
 
[x] Your mother. Zuko is obsessed with her. He won't hear a word against her—won't even think that she's capable of doing wrong. Especially not when you're the one saying it. But Lo and Li have been around since before Zuko was born. They've seen it all. They know it all. They can give you the evidence you need to finally drive home to Zuko only he was ever loved—and prove you right that you were not.
 
It really doesn't feel like Azula hates Zuko here. She is extremely angry at him but she explicitly doesn't actually want to hurt/kill him.

bro we just used his mother to atomize his heart for bonus points during an argument while his girlfriend and mentor were watching. we broke our uncle's heart as collateral damage we were so vicious

we're not chums
 
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Shit man sudden Iroh interrupt actually does make me glad Knife won now. I think Zuko with Iroh directly in his corner would've not been as receptive to Performance. Both of them probably would've dismissed it as more Azula Shenanigans (TM), Iroh especially methinks.

Here while I doubt Knife caused either to like seriously reconsider their worldviews (burning down Earth Kingdom=Bad still) the sheer spite and obvious desire to hurt is what made Iroh realize that Azula is not actually as put together and unflappable as she presents. Which you know, Katara realized after like one full direct conversation but progress for Iroh and Zuko!
 
I wouldn't mind her buzzing off to the Ba Sing Se and rule it over Zuko's Firelording. She is a current Queen of it after all. It might be another push against Ozai's plan too. And the city will be better off with it anyway, compared to the secret brainwashing police government and incompetent clueless puppet King (whom Avatar in his infinite wisdom decided to reinstate on the throne for some reason) it had before.
I don't think that's on the table. Suffice to say, it shows Iroh's priorities that Ba Sing Se liberation was handled first. however, we have the loyalty of those brainwashing police, and ALoK demonstrates that Aang and Co pay so little attention to the earth kingdom outside republic city it degenerates into a complete disarray by the time Korra is a teenager. I think Azula could rule the earth kingdom through clueless puppet king quite easily though, which is really my prefered end for her.

Also, I still want to her to take a Vacation to Omashu to enjoy one of King Bumi's legendary feasts.
 
(And personally, I'm also more interested in the other two. Ursa left, years ago even before the loops started. I don't think Azula moving on well actually requires her to recognize her mother did love her, if that was even the case; for Azula personally, her mother is still well out of her life, and for ruling, Azula seems to already have enough of an understanding to not make policy on the assumption that her experience with her mother was a representative sample of normal family dynamics.)
It is nearly impossible to understate how central her perceived (or real) abandonment and hatred by her mother is to her. When Azula is breaking down in her moment of triumph, it is not Ozai there in the mirror, lecturing her on being weakling and unfit of the favour he bestowed upon her, its Ursa, calling her a monster.

Her parents shaped the mess of neuroses she is, willingly and purposefully (In Ozai´s part) or by inability of action (In Ursa´s part). Subverting knowledge of whats true of how they treated her is important to who she is, even if she never gets the validation of it from the person herself in the nine day loop she gets.
 
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