What would readers prefer?

  • Pure narrative quest: no dice will be used, the author will have free reign to decide what happens.

    Votes: 25 59.5%
  • New dice system: the author will design a new, better dice system to add some randomness and risk.

    Votes: 17 40.5%

  • Total voters
    42
  • Poll closed .
[X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
-[X] Write-in: how do you prepare for the Awakening?
--[X] Gather your friends and confidants: Artemis, Duke Letoro, Duchess Dione, Sypha, Keaton, Belle, possibly Apollo, and anyone else that Ryza wants to include.
--[X] Do it at your old home, if possible. Agrithe would be more convenient for everyone else, but Awakening is about you becoming an adult manakete; doing it at your home, one of the few surviving manakete homes, feels right.

After several hours of internal debate, we've finally voted for this plan instead of awakening now. 5-4 split, though, so it was close and it's not impossible that we might change our mind again.
 
[X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
-[X] Write-in: how do you prepare for the Awakening?
--[X] Gather your friends and confidants: Artemis, Duke Letoro, Duchess Dione, Sypha, Keaton, Belle, possibly Apollo, and anyone else that Ryza wants to include.
--[X] Do it at your old home, if possible. Agrithe would be more convenient for everyone else, but Awakening is about you becoming an adult manakete; doing it at your home, one of the few surviving manakete homes, feels right.

Changed my mind, gonna vote for this. I don't see half-shifting being on the table any time soon (if only for Ryza's safety in the aftermath while being in enemy land). It'll hopefully let her dragon-self settle down even more from all the half-shifting, and allow for a proper little celebration to happen.
 
[X] You are ready. Perform the Awakening her and now. This was your home for many years; if there is any place in the world where you can… where you should do this, it's here.
 
[X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
-[X] Write-in: how do you prepare for the Awakening?
--[X] Gather your friends and confidants: Artemis, Duke Letoro, Duchess Dione, Sypha, Keaton, Belle, possibly Apollo, and anyone else that Ryza wants to include.
--[X] Do it at your old home, if possible. Agrithe would be more convenient for everyone else, but Awakening is about you becoming an adult manakete; doing it at your home, one of the few surviving manakete homes, feels right.
 
[X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
-[X] Write-in: how do you prepare for the Awakening?
--[X] Gather your friends and confidants: Artemis, Duke Letoro, Duchess Dione, Sypha, Keaton, Belle, possibly Apollo, and anyone else that Ryza wants to include.
--[X] Do it at your old home, if possible. Agrithe would be more convenient for everyone else, but Awakening is about you becoming an adult manakete; doing it at your home, one of the few surviving manakete homes, feels right.
 
Normally I wouldn't throw in a splinter vote this late unless I felt I had good reason, but we were explicitly told it wouldn't split the vote so I'm okay with it. It's pretty similar to the prevailing "set the stage" vote I'm just adding in what I consider to be the priority tiers of gathering people.

[X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
-[X] Write-in: how do you prepare for the Awakening?
--[X] Gather your closest friends and allies for the Awakening.
---[X] Top priority: Artemis, Kelton, Belle
---[X] High priority: Sypha
---[X] Medium priority: Lancel, Axton, Archduchess Dione, Archduke Letoro, Jenna, Lacroix
---[X] Low priority: Robin, Claire, Octavio, Bernard, Countess Mantrae, Siri, James
--[X] Perform the Awakening at Kepesk-Okar.

I was tempted to end up naming every named character Ryza has had a positive interaction with but trying to hold myself back. ...somewhat. Basically, Artemis, Kelton, and Belle I feel are non-negotiable. They're pretty much the most important people in Ryza's personal life and mechanically it's reflected in that she has support levels with them. Sypha is a borderline case and I think if she couldn't make it it would significantly affect Ryza's willingness to perform it without her but maybe it wouldn't be a dealbreaker. The following two tiers I think are more of a "Ryza would like these people to be there if they could, but it's understandable if they can't because wars are terrible." The medium tier grouping I think have had a bit more prominent roles in her life and the direction she's chosen for herself. The lower tier is for people she's traveled/worked with/will work with and where I drew the line before I started including everyone (sorry phoebe i did not forget you.) I'm well aware several people on the medium/low tiers are very likely to be unavailable (like Lacroix) and that's okay.

tl;dr: If it's easier to think of it as Artemis/Kelton/Belle are the musts, Sypha is strongly recommended, and everyone else is invited too you can think of it that way LOL.

I do think it's important to hold it at Ryza's home though. It just feels right to me. Plus I don't know if it means anything on the ritual side of things but I think there's meaning in having humans come together in a manakete's place and for it not to be because of war or looting and serving as a first step in what Ryza hopes to achieve for the future.
 
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[X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
-[X] Write-in: how do you prepare for the Awakening?
--[X] Gather your closest friends and allies for the Awakening.
---[X] Top priority: Artemis, Kelton, Belle
---[X] High priority: Sypha
---[X] Medium priority: Lancel, Axton, Archduchess Dione, Archduke Letoro, Jenna, Lacroix
---[X] Low priority: Robin, Claire, Octavio, Bernard, Countess Mantrae, Siri, James
--[X] Perform the Awakening at Kepesk-Okar.
 
[X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
-[X] Write-in: how do you prepare for the Awakening?
--[X] Gather your closest friends and allies for the Awakening.
---[X] Top priority: Artemis, Kelton, Belle
---[X] High priority: Sypha
---[X] Medium priority: Lancel, Axton, Archduchess Dione, Archduke Letoro, Jenna, Lacroix
---[X] Low priority: Robin, Claire, Octavio, Bernard, Countess Mantrae, Siri, James
--[X] Perform the Awakening at Kepesk-Okar.
 
[X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
-[X] Write-in: how do you prepare for the Awakening?
--[X] Gather your closest friends and allies for the Awakening.
---[X] Top priority: Artemis, Kelton, Belle
---[X] High priority: Sypha
---[X] Medium priority: Lancel, Axton, Archduchess Dione, Archduke Letoro, Jenna, Lacroix
---[X] Low priority: Robin, Claire, Octavio, Bernard, Countess Mantrae, Siri, James
--[X] Perform the Awakening at Kepesk-Okar.
 
[X] You are ready. Perform the Awakening her and now. This was your home for many years; if there is any place in the world where you can… where you should do this, it's here.
 
[X] You are ready. Perform the Awakening her and now. This was your home for many years; if there is any place in the world where you can… where you should do this, it's here.
[X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
-[X] Write-in: how do you prepare for the Awakening?
--[X] Gather your closest friends and allies for the Awakening.
---[X] Top priority: Artemis, Kelton, Belle
---[X] High priority: Sypha
---[X] Medium priority: Lancel, Axton, Archduchess Dione, Archduke Letoro, Jenna, Lacroix
---[X] Low priority: Robin, Claire, Octavio, Bernard, Countess Mantrae, Siri, James
--[X] Perform the Awakening at Kepesk-Okar.
 
[X] You are ready. Perform the Awakening her and now. This was your home for many years; if there is any place in the world where you can… where you should do this, it's here.
[X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
-[X] Write-in: how do you prepare for the Awakening?
--[X] Gather your closest friends and allies for the Awakening.
---[X] Top priority: Artemis, Kelton, Belle
---[X] High priority: Sypha
---[X] Medium priority: Lancel, Axton, Archduchess Dione, Archduke Letoro, Jenna, Lacroix
---[X] Low priority: Robin, Claire, Octavio, Bernard, Countess Mantrae, Siri, James
--[X] Perform the Awakening at Kepesk-Okar.
 
Vote closed
Scheduled vote count started by SoaringHawk218 on Apr 25, 2023 at 1:24 AM, finished with 45 posts and 32 votes.

  • [X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
    -[X] Write-in: how do you prepare for the Awakening?
    --[X] Gather your friends and confidants: Artemis, Duke Letoro, Duchess Dione, Sypha, Keaton, Belle, possibly Apollo, and anyone else that Ryza wants to include.
    --[X] Do it at your old home, if possible. Agrithe would be more convenient for everyone else, but Awakening is about you becoming an adult manakete; doing it at your home, one of the few surviving manakete homes, feels right.
    [X] You are ready. Perform the Awakening her and now. This was your home for many years; if there is any place in the world where you can… where you should do this, it's here.
    [X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
    -[X] Write-in: how do you prepare for the Awakening?
    --[X] Gather your closest friends and allies for the Awakening.
    ---[X] Top priority: Artemis, Kelton, Belle
    ---[X] High priority: Sypha
    ---[X] Medium priority: Lancel, Axton, Archduchess Dione, Archduke Letoro, Jenna, Lacroix
    ---[X] Low priority: Robin, Claire, Octavio, Bernard, Countess Mantrae, Siri, James
    --[X] Perform the Awakening at Kepesk-Okar.
    [X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
    [X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
    -[X] Write-in: how do you prepare for the Awakening?
    --[X] Gather your friends and confidants: Artemis, Duke Letoro, Duchess Dione, Sypha, Keaton, Belle, possibly Apollo, and anyone else that Ryza wants to include.
    --[X] Do it at Agrithae castle. Ryza might prefer to do it at her home, but this is the best place for all of her important friends and confidants can gather.
    [X] You are ready. Perform the Awakening her and now. This was your home for many years; if there is any place in the world where you can… where you should do this, it's here.
    [X] You are ready, but you need to set the scene first. Perhaps you want Artemis and Sypha and your other friends with you. Perhaps you want to do this in Agrithe, the land where your dragon and you will spend many years. You can do it; you just need to pick the right moment.
    -[X] Write-in: how do you prepare for the Awakening?
    --[X] Gather your closest friends and allies for the Awakening.
    ---[X] Top priority: Artemis, Kelton, Belle
    ---[X] High priority: Sypha
    ---[X] Medium priority: Lancel, Axton, Archduchess Dione, Archduke Letoro, Jenna, Lacroix
    ---[X] Low priority: Robin, Claire, Octavio, Bernard, Countess Mantrae, Siri, James
    --[X] Perform the Awakening at Kepesk-Okar.
    [X] You're not ready yet. You need more time, to ensure that your dragon's Awakening goes perfectly. She might still be mad about the halfshifting you did recently, or she might get upset about home, or countless other issues. You'll be ready soon, just not right now.


So a pretty clear win for waiting to perform the Awakening until you can get the people you care about to Kepesk-Okar so they can be with you in this moment.

EDIT: Also, could I get a d6 for the Southlands?
 
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Ooof. Not pog.

It seems we were wise to go GAS GAS GAS, huh? It looks like things are moving faster than anyone could have anticipated.
 
You, however, are going to have a slightly tense trip. Not dangerous, Lacroix will keep his oath. Just tense.
Ryza: So, made any progress with the Revisionists since we last talked?
Lacroix: Oh yes. Once we learned that manakete hunted goats we were able to re-contextualize some early migration patterns with herders and we think we've made a breakthrough on early contact-
Ryza: Wait. Hold up. Hunt goats?
Lacroix (visibly confused): ...Well, you didn't specifically tell me but I saw that training doll while at the mountain-
Ryza (voice rising an octave): Training doll?
Lacroix: Y-Yes? That tattered thing you had with you making the most pitiful noises. It looked as though it was how manakete trained their young to hunt before they were old enough to train out in the field-
Ryza (suddenly realizing in horror): GOATY ISN'T A TRAINING DOLL!
Lacroix: I... see... ...You may have a few awkward conversations when we arrive at the Hall then.
Ryza: ...
Lacroix: ...
Ryza: ...
Firescale: awkward whine
 
Correct me if I'm wrong, but "Southlands" refers to the part of the Empire that Lacroix is from, not the part of the Kingdoms that Artemis and co. are from, right?
 
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