What would readers prefer?

  • Pure narrative quest: no dice will be used, the author will have free reign to decide what happens.

    Votes: 25 59.5%
  • New dice system: the author will design a new, better dice system to add some randomness and risk.

    Votes: 17 40.5%

  • Total voters
    42
  • Poll closed .
[X] "What?" You're puzzled: where did she get the idea you were artificial? You want to understand what you might have said or done that gave that impression.
 
[X] "What?" You're puzzled: where did she get the idea you were artificial? You want to understand what you might have said or done that gave that impression.
 
[X] "What?" You're puzzled: where did she get the idea you were artificial? You want to understand what you might have said or done that gave that impression.

Nani?
 
[X] "What?" You're puzzled: where did she get the idea you were artificial? You want to understand what you might have said or done that gave that impression.
 
[X] "What?" You're puzzled: where did she get the idea you were artificial? You want to understand what you might have said or done that gave that impression.

Ha, she thinks we're an artificial mage, that's rather funny. But she does have a good point, we should probably keep the fact that we're not human secret, outside of a small group.
 
[X] "WHAT?!" You're offended: what does she mean artificial!? Does she think you're not real, after everything you've done for her?!
 
[X] "What?" You're puzzled: where did she get the idea you were artificial? You want to understand what you might have said or done that gave that impression.
 
[X] "What?" You're puzzled: where did she get the idea you were artificial? You want to understand what you might have said or done that gave that impression.
 
[X] "What?" You're puzzled: where did she get the idea you were artificial? You want to understand what you might have said or done that gave that impression.

We should start carrying a picture book when we throw lightning. When people ask why our book doesn't feel magical, get snooty and tell them their pathetic little books leak magic and a properly engineered tome looks like anything else until tapped skillfully.
 
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[X] "What?" You're puzzled: where did she get the idea you were artificial? You want to understand what you might have said or done that gave that impression.
 
[X] "What?" You're puzzled: where did she get the idea you were artificial? You want to understand what you might have said or done that gave that impression
 
[X] "What?" You're puzzled: where did she get the idea you were artificial? You want to understand what you might have said or done that gave that impression.
 
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Adhoc vote count started by SoaringHawk218 on Dec 20, 2021 at 12:50 AM, finished with 36 posts and 31 votes.


Currently, the calm discussion and explanation path is winning.
 
[X] "…wat?" You're just lost. What even is this conversation?

I think I like the idea of her being completely lost at this better.
 
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