Narrator: That was a lie!

It sure doesn't sound fine at all! Only they seem absolutely insistent on hanging around for this and I don't know what Seele can do to convince them otherwise even if we vote that way.
If she's really insistent, then they'll stay back. Just... still within sight range.

I don't think it's remotely plausible to push them away any further. Rozaliya wouldn't do it, and Seele would rebel. That said, the twins being this close isn't a problem in itself. What is, is...

You're on the clock now, and I believe I've provided all the necessary information, but don't worry too much. Like I said, I'm not killing anyone.
 
[X] Let them stay.

I don't think we're going to be budging them. And hey, the doom roll of nat 1 doesn't seem to have caused bad things to happen (yet?), so that's nice.
 
It's probably obvious, given that Seele was much more enthusiastic about seeing Rozaliya again than she was about seeing, say, Tesla or Kiana or Theresa -

But I think it might be good to clarify that Rozaliya and Liliya are Seele's sisters. They're foster siblings.

They grew up together, in Cocolia's orphanage. And eventually, some years later, Bronya arrived, and found her place in their little family -

And then Seele disappeared, because Cocolia decided that experimenting on her children was more important than keeping them safe.

And then Bronya vanished, because Cocolia decided she needed a spy more than she needed a daughter.

And the twins were left alone, with no one but their mad scientist matushka. For years.
I guess they weren't technically alone because Sin Mal was there but yeah no one likes Sin Mal.

But yeah that's, um, why they have tails and horns by the way? Cocolia got bored I guess. Hadn't experimented on one of her kids lately, and decided that grafting Honkai beast bits -


Wait.

That's how Rozaliya can feel the rifts! Her tail and horn are made of Sea-stuff, like Seele, or a Honkai Beast!

Not the point. Cool, but not the point.

Anyway the point is - Roza and Lili already lost Seele once, to some weird quantum thing that no one involved actually understood.

I don't think there's any force in Heaven or Earth that could convince them to let Seele go off and mess with some weird quantum thing she doesn't actually understand, without them.
 
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It's probably obvious, given that Seele was much more enthusiastic about seeing Rozaliya again than she was about seeing, say, Tesla or Kiana or Theresa -

But I think it might be good to clarify that Rozaliya and Liliya are Seele's sisters. They're foster siblings.

They grew up together, in Cocolia's orphanage. And eventually, some years later, Bronya arrived, and found her place in their little family -

And then Seele disappeared, because Cocolia decided that experimenting on her children was more important than keeping them safe.

And then Bronya vanished, because Cocolia decided she needed a spy more than she needed a daughter.

And the twins were left alone, with no one but their mad scientist matushka. For years.
Well spoken, but I need to make a slight correction. This was actually somewhat of a gutpunch.

The twins weren't left alone. There were two more siblings in that group, Natalie and... I don't recall her name, unfortunately. So for a while, even though Seele disappeared, and Bronya left, the twins still had family there. They did their very, very best to hold it together, forming the "Vodka Girls" -- the most popular idol group in, um, the orphanage -- and entertaining them as best they could.

There were younger children there as well, but I don't think Roza and Liliya were nearly as close with those. There's a definite split there: On the one hand, whoever Cocolia adopted later; on the other, Bronya, Sin Mal, Seele, Natalie, Natasha(?), and the youngest siblings in that group -- the twins.

As the Vodka Girls ("What's vodka?" Roza asked, then used the name anyway), their lives were standing room, but then the room only had three chairs.

Still, they tried.

And then Rozaliya and Liliya were attacked by a honkai beast after running away to see the ocean, and Rozaliya was badly hurt, and Liliya nearly died. Cocolia was able to save them, but that's how they got their horns and tails. They like them, though, that's the thing -- for both of them, that's what kept the most important person in their lives alive.

Liliya never fully recovered, and predictably spends half the day asleep, every day, but she's alive and that's the most important thing. It forced Rozalilya to grow up, even though she usually doesn't show it.

And then Schicksal attacked, or Cocolia did more experiments, or something -- it's not clear what -- and Natalie died, as did their only other sister. Half their remaining family wiped out.

They died, and it's not clear why, but it didn't drive the twins away from Cocolia so it probably didn't register as her fault, which means it's fundamentally Otto's fault, and -- oh yeah, he's here on the ship. Once they figure it out, it'll be hard to keep them from trying to kill him. Seele might try to help.

What's clear is, they went on the run. Rozaliya and Liliya, as the top enforcers and most powerful "valkyries" of Cocolia's faction of Anti-Entropy, although they aren't valkyries at all in the normal sense. That's how they finally met Bronya again -- after Otto drove Theresa's group straight into the arms of Anti-Entropy, Tesla and Einstein convinced her that they should really try to rescue Cocolia from a Schicksal attack.

So they did. Bronya met the twins in the Deep, and the first thing Rozaliya did was to tackle-hug her. They're still following Cocolia's instructions, but--

Bronya's a lot more important to them. She's their only remaining family, at that point.

The second thing they did... was to bring her to visit the graves they'd built for their two other siblings. With, to be fair, Cocolia's help. She's a well-intentioned extremist, she's just really bad at being a mother.

= = =

Bronya suffers from severe brain damage, affecting her motoric and limbic system. She essentially cannot feel emotions, but it's not absolute; it's just, only the strongest have any penetration at all.

I saw more emotion from her, in that one scene, than in the entire story up until that point. That includes chapter four, the one with Wendy.

= = =

Later on, after another poor choice by Cocolia, the twins get to watch as Bronya -- the last survivor of their four siblings, remember (I don't think I can count Sin Mal there, everyone hates her) -- jumps into the shallows of the Quantum Sea, in order to recover the Gem of Desire.

Leaving them behind, again, doing something they were told would be fatal, and to not under any circumstances try. Mind you, Fervent Tempo shows that it wouldn't necessarily be fatal to them, as such. They still should stay as far away from the quantum sea as they possibly can; pity about the current circumstances.

So of course, after all of that, Bronya came back with Seele in tow. And their family became, if not complete, then at least a little less broken.

...

The twins are usually...

"Exuberant" is the word I used. It applies to Rozaliya more than Liliya, but only because Liliya tends to play a different role in their impromptu jokes. It still applies to both of them. They're the glue holding their family together.

And they're more than fed up with having siblings die, or disappear.
 
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I don't think we're going to be budging them. And hey, the doom roll of nat 1 doesn't seem to have caused bad things to happen (yet?), so that's nice.
Well, not yet.

Anyway, I thought I'd mention that I'm planning to revise the chapters as I go. So, for each update, I'm going to revise at least one of the earlier updates; bring them up to spec, as it were.

Eventually that will catch up to the story. For now, I just fixed the opening post up a little.
 
It's unlikely I'll be able to finish this tonight, so here's an ad for the twins. Their style is...

They definitely have a style.

 
Seele Quest: 4.5
"Seele," Rozaliya says. She steps in front of you, and puts her hands on your shoulders. Her eyes are incredibly serious. "You're the last one. Out of everyone from the orphanage, we're the only three left. If we're going to die, we're going to die together. We're not going to get in your way, but you're not getting rid of us. You hear me?"

Liliya nods.

"Yeah," she says. "We're not letting go that easy."

You stare into their eyes, then nod. In truth, there's a lot you could say to try to convince them. You could guilt-trip them, explain how horrible you'll feel if they get hurt, but that... that would be far too unfair. They feel the same way, and...

It's comforting. Having them here.

"Alright," you say. "I guess I don't get a choice."

Rozaliya, serious expression breaking, gives you a hug. Liliya follows, and you smile as warmth fills your chest. They're trying to make up for lost time. It's nice.

ooOOoo

Your parents died during the second Honkai eruption.

You don't remember them, of course. You were a baby at the time, and your first clear memory is of your Matushka, in the orphanage, telling you off for making the twins cry. Even today, you remember how unfair that felt; how unfair it was that Roza and Liliya were so much better actors than you, despite being smaller. You were probably five years old at the time.

You don't recall who actually stole the cookies, but you bet it was Roza.

It's always a safe bet to blame Roza.

Your next clear memory, however, is of sharing cookies with the twins after they found you hiding in your toy chest, and that's one of your fondest memories. Not because it's the happiest, or the funniest, or for any truly worthwhile reason. Just because it's the first you have of the twins, your sisters and best friends for most of your life, and it was so very--

So completely--

So utterly *Roza*.

Even back then, Liliya was always the quiet one. She's Rozaliya's little sister, but that's not why she's a centimeter shorter and always tired. They're the same age, after all.

--

No, it's because of the lack of good cookies.

You were an orphan, after all. The cookies were probably stale.

Stale enough to stunt Liliya's growth, at least according to your Matushka. And she would know.

Lucky for you, you're a good thief and you learned from the best. To this day, nobody can beat your record at the Orphanage of Scared Children. You ate well, so now you've grown tall.

ooOOoo

"Roza, what are you *saying!*" you demand, staring at her in disbelief. "Don't teach Veliona nonsense!"

"It's not nonsense." She pouts. "Liliya never got enough cookies."

"That... is because Roza-idiotka ate them all," Liliya says.

You feel the warmth settle into your heart. God, you love these two.

"Eh. So, it's a little late, but welcome to the family," Rozaliya tells Veliona. "Your first task is to steal some cookies, or other baked goods. Your second task is to bring them to me."

"Baked goods?" Veliona asks, raising an eyebrow. Oh, she's having fun. "What kind?"

"Doesn't matter, just some for me to sample. I may be a little addicted to cookies. I'm a growing girl with a fast metabolism."

Certainly two of these things is true. You smile, but it quickly fades. The thing is-- and you didn't want to stress this-- that Liliya isn't exactly healthy, and your youngest sister has been sick, on and off, ever since you first saw her with the augmentations. More 'on' than 'off' over the last year. She seems fine right now, but...

No. You don't want to think about this. Sure, she's a bit sickly, but it's not going to matter. It rarely extends beyond falling asleep early in the evening.

You'll find some cookies later; there's bound to be some on the ship. For now--

"I'll do my best to take care of them," Vel says, sensing your mood. Her own smile fades a little, but just a little. "Them, and you."

"Vel, you don't need to--"

"I'll do my best to take care of them," she says again, more forcefully than before. You're not sure what to make of it.

"Okay." You nod.

Vel looks around at your friends, smiling a little. "We'll take care of them," she repeats one last time, before turning on her heel and looking at the rifts. You watch her, sensing her mood. She feels... Determined. Maybe a little dark, even. Nothing new about that, only, it feels different than usual.

Warmer.

She's changing. That's got to be a good thing, right?

"We'd better get started," you say. "Stay back a little, okay?"

Liliya nods. Good, at least you won't have to worry about the twins, like, accidentally falling in. You're worried enough already, and though Veliona doesn't show it, you think so is she. This isn't going to kill you. It's still... scary. You've never done anything like it before.

"We'll be fine," Vel says. "Don't worry so much."

Don't worry, she says. Like that's going to happen. Vel looks away, focusing on the rifts. The air around them shimmers and vibrates, threatening to tear your eyes apart.

You should probably start working too.

"I'll see you in a bit," you say, and step inside her.

It's like being hugged. That's the main impression you have, whenever you're one person and Vel is taking the lead. She isn't always *nice*, but it's impossible to mistake her for someone who doesn't care. It's comfortable.

You can sense the rifts now. They're not alive, exactly--they're just part of the ship, but they're broken. Each rift is a place where another reality tried to overwrite yours, and was only partially rejected. It happens more in the air, you think, because air is just air regardless of world.

Vel walks up to the closest rift.

It's a flaw. A place, seen from here, where the concept of 'place' grows vague. Vel and you have a rapid, mental discussion, and you settle on trying to smooth it out by overwriting it with the concept of 'place' from a random segment of air right above you. You can do that, you think, because you're a lot more real than both the Hyperion, and the bubble universe it's collided with here. If a bubble is what it is. You're not sure.

Kiana just has to point at it and will it, but she's cheating. The Core of Void does all the work. Not that you'd want to borrow that cheat code, necessarily...

You're about to touch it, when it changes. It shimmers, the colors moving and reorganizing themselves eagerly. It's not just a rip in reality, now--it's a painting. An winter paradise in the countryside, with sunbeams shining through trees from above.

You draw back, alarmed. Vel does, you mean. A trap? No, that makes no sense. Could it be...

You're about to investigate further, when suddenly, it changes again. This time, it's not a change in the rift, but rather the world inside it that's changed.

The gentle sunlight has turned red, and a horrible, burning acid falls from above. The... painting changes rapidly, monsters -- honkai beasts -- materializing from nothing.

It seems like...

It can't be a memory.

= = =

As usual, the answer is obvious once you see it.
[ ] Destroy it.
[ ] Keep watching.
[ ] Write-in?
 
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There's no way to open voting without making a post.

I realize people are likely to be distracted right now, so no fixed end point. I'll just close it when I feel there's some consensus.
 
You don't recall who actually stole the cookies, but you bet it was Roza.

It's always a safe bet to blame Roza.
"Eh. So, it's a little late, but welcome to the family," Rozaliya tells Veliona. "Your first task is to steal some cookies, or other baked goods. Your second task is to bring them to me."
Rozaliya is a menace.
Between the reference to the second eruption, and then the ... memory window?

into a nice, peaceful, wintry landscape that is then suddenly under attack by masses of Honkai Beasts tearing their way into reality -

...

okay so for the uninitiated, the "second Honkai eruption" was the cataclysmic release of Honkai energy, and associated massive wave of Honkai beast attacks across the entire world, caused when the 2nd Herrscherin manifested in 2000 or 2003 or whenever. Somewhen around there at any rate.

This window thingy?
The gentle sunlight has turned red, and a horrible, burning acid falls from above. The... painting changes rapidly, monsters -- honkai beasts -- materializing from nothing.
That sounds ... quite a bit like an eruption. Possibly the second, even - ground zero for the second eruption was in Siberia, which is certainly wintry and arguably countryside.
 
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Things which surprised me in this update...

No, it's because of the lack of good cookies.

You were an orphan, after all. The cookies were probably stale.

Stale enough to stunt Liliya's growth, at least according to your Matushka. And she would know.

Lucky for you, you're a good thief and you learned from the best. To this day, nobody can beat your record at the Orphanage of Scared Children. You ate well, so now you've grown tall.
I wrote down Seele's backstory, hoping to give the readers a better feel for her and the twins. It worked well, I think, but then I decided to let the AI try writing the ending. As you do.

The result was a dramatic tone shift. Normally that would be a failure, but this? This is not a failure, this is a change in narrator. It may be serendipity, but the AI captured Rozaliya's attitude perfectly.

She's like this. Any time she isn't like this, she's probably being traumatized. I love her to bits, and i wish it didn't happen as often as it does, but at least she still has her Liliya. The same cannot be said for some of her dimensional analogues.

Rozaliya is always the last one standing.
"Eh. So, it's a little late, but welcome to the family," Rozaliya tells Veliona. "Your first task is to steal some cookies, or other baked goods. Your second task is to bring them to me."
This wasn't the AI, but I can't claim it was me. No, this was Rozaliya. She is, as usual, joking--

But she's almost always joking, and that doesn't mean she isn't also utterly serious.

When Seele asked Theresa to please treat Vel like she's her sister, she wasn't being serious. She knows she isn't, though Seele doesn't know what Vel actually is. I'm not sure if even Vel does. Seele, however, just wanted to get out of an uncomfortable conversation.

Theresa allowed that, on a temporary basis, because she has some idea of what's going on and Vel doesn't seem dangerous. At least, she's far more of an asset than a threat in this situation. Plus, of course, she's Theresa; she wants to think the best of people.

Rozaliya doesn't have that perspective. She's seen Veliona in combat, where she's scary but still on their side. She's seen her sneak out for snacks, borrowing Seele's body when the latter is asleep.

And, of course, she's seen her now. Visibly unsure of herself. Rozaliya may be picking up on that more than Seele is; she's not exceptionally perceptive, necessarily, but Seele is quite prejudiced here.

As far as Rozaliya's concerned, a new girl who follows Seele around, is protective of Seele -- and them, apparently -- and looks precisely like her, for that matter -- is obviously a new family member.

They're all orphans; family, to her, is something you make. Seele might be special, but this isn't even the first time -- Bronya joined the group at twelve.

That's Rozaliya's opinion, and she didn't let me finish the update until I accepted it.
 
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[X] Keep watching.

Let's see what the portal shows us. We can break it if the Honkai try to come in.
 
[X] Keep watching.

I really don't have the mental or emotional energy to even begin to properly think out a vote here but here we are. I'm mostly driven by concern of the consequences of destroying this memory based on our experience with locks. Will we accidentally erase this memory from everyone's mind?
 
... Cecelia and actually-a-traumatized-child-Sirin get?
Assuming that is what is happening and we can pull it off, we are absolutely under no circumstances allowing Siegfried to give Sirin a new name, assuming she wants one.

The last thing the Kaslana family needs is to have three daughters, all of whom are named Kiana.
 
Assuming that is what is happening and we can pull it off, we are absolutely under no circumstances allowing Siegfried to give Sirin a new name, assuming she wants one.

The last thing the Kaslana family needs is to have three daughters, all of whom are named Kiana.
Well that would be the one who remembers she's Sirin.

I just will always have the image of Cecelia holding Sirin close and calling her her new daughter while the nuke goes off close by. That was an ooph seeing that.
 
I'm just saying that Siegfried's track record so far is worrisome.

Like, first daughter? Named Kiana, presumably via mutual agreement with Cecilia.

Adopted clone daughter holding the soul of the kid Cecilia adopted minutes before being nuked? Siegfried also names her Kiana, thus dooming us all to eternal confusion and unclear name references.

If this memory thingy works in a way that lets us extract people and if we end up with an additional Sirin and if she decides she wants a new name for, like, distancing from her kill-the-world phase or as part of the adoption or whatever -

I am not inclined to give Siegfried the chance to have yet another Kiana Kaslana because I'm worried he is hoarding them.
 
I had not planned to let you pull anyone out of that, in part because it seems ridiculous, but with the underlying model I'm operating on that's not actually impossible. Especially given the earlier "nat 1".

(I'm sorry, it's not a nat 1, I just happen to have a list of 20 possible events in rough order of goodness. This one is fundamentally Not That Great, but it might be exploitable.)

So...

Is, uh, extracting Sirin from what's definitely a memory... a thing you'd want to do? If so, you should try voting for something that'll bring you closer to that state. Not destroying it helps, but you can do more.

...it's not Seele's memory, I feel I was pretty clear on that. And yes, you're looking at the second eruption. Not much point in pretending otherwise.
 
I mean, I think you might be missing that Cecelia is alive in there.

Its not just Sirin.

Say hi to mom K423 and pretend to be Kiana so she doesn't realize her one actual daughter is dead (unless Otto brought her along for some reason?).

Is, uh, extracting Sirin from what's definitely a memory... a thing you'd want to do? If so, you should try voting for something that'll bring you closer to that state. Not destroying it helps, but you can do more.

...it's not Seele's memory, I feel I was pretty clear on that. And yes, you're looking at the second eruption. Not much point in pretending otherwise.
Maybe you can be more clear on this, but my analogue thought is that while the dream is dangerous to Seele its basically a soap bubble. Kinda. Like she can slap it closed, but I don't see why she wouldn't be able to scoop out a portion of it with people in it and pop them from the memory into the Hyperion and then pop the "bubble" and watch the people fall out onto the deck?

Or she jumps into the dream, grabs the people, and then drags them back into the Hyperion?
 
...the reason I was making jokes was I didn't think that extracting people from a weird memory space was a thing?

I mean I guess the Hyperion is more or less a weird memory space now but still

I mean ...

votes! Yes. Those things.

[X] Keep watching.
 
Maybe you can be more clear on this, but my analogue thought is that while the dream is dangerous to Seele its basically a soap bubble. Kinda. Like she can slap it closed, but I don't see why she wouldn't be able to scoop out a portion of it with people in it and pop them from the memory into the Hyperion and then pop the "bubble" and watch the people fall out onto the deck?

Or she jumps into the dream, grabs the people, and then drags them back into the Hyperion?
The danger is mainly to the twins. If this memory is a 'soap bubble', then so is the Hyperion.

More specifically: The Hyperion is a (small) bubble universe, but one which has been artificially stabilized by Tesla's machinery. Normally, those are controlled as much by events in the/a 'real world' as by what logically should happen; this one isn't, which makes it almost like reality.

When it was yeeted out of reality, the Hyperion lost most of its, for lack of a better name, reality-fluid. Seele did not, and you can imagine a giant planet-sized Seele carefully poking a single finger in to move her avatar around. That's not how she experiences it, but it's an accurate description of how careful she has to be. It's also why she's capable of doing things she normally would not be able to do, such as giving Veliona an extra body. Or extinguishing fires.

The danger, hence, is that poking the wrong thing might burn her and cause her to jerk back. It definitely won't do any lasting harm -- to Seele. Smaller people may not be as lucky.

The other risk is that, instead of scooping out people, she might scoop out a semi-physical 'memory' that runs through the motions without actually being people, and which aren't able to react to new circumstances. Or to stay in one piece, long term.

...that's up to the dice.
 
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