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SayakaQuest Thread 10: Glory To The Death

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[X] Talk.

You take several deep breaths, before you stare at Madoka as sternly as you can. "Since when did you become a pessimist?" You turn. "Homura, how much stuff do you have in your shield to fight that thing?"

"I..." She smiles. "...a large number of-"

"Ballpark answers, Homura."

"Enough to take out a small country."

"Akane, if you punched as hard as you could, what would you break?"

Akane looks at you, then outside. "...A full skyscraper."

"And Kyouko." You look. "How many witches have you killed?"

Kyouko smirks. "I forgot. I've killed a lot."

"And as for me..." You smile, as you stand up...and then the armor forms on your limbs. "Well..." It snaps into place over your arms, as thick, hard armor covers you from head-to-toe. Everyone watches in awe as you form it over you. "I'm really hard to kill." You grin. "I have beaten people who are supposed to be tougher than me, simply because I'm just that damn hard to kill." You form an enormous sword and let it clang against your shoulder. "So yeah? It's fucking tough. It's gonna hurt. But you know what?" You take another deep breath. "...I think we can beat Walpurgisnacht." You look at Madoka. "...So please, trust us."

"I..." Madoka bites her lip. She doesn't seem fully convinced.

Tomo, Sukuyo and Yoko, on the other hand, just seem to be staring in awe. It's then that you realize that you've never really shown off your armor to them before. "This thing's saved my skin on more than one occasion." You say.

Sukuyo nods at it with a sense of familiarity, while the others just seem to be watching in awe.

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[not afraid of anything anymore intensifies]

[x] Keep talking.
-[x]Homura's right that it won't be easy. Walpurgisnight's going to be...It'll be a hard fight. But we think we can stop it for good. We can win.
[x]Talk to
-[x]Everyone
-[x]Even so , we want to get as many people as we can out of Mitakihara before it arrives. And we need their help for that. We might not be able to get everyone out of harm's way, but every person we do is someone who might not get caught when it arrives.
-[x]Madoka

[x] Keep talking.
-[x]Homura's right that it won't be easy. But we can stop it for good. We can win.
[x]Talk to
-[x]Everyone
-[x]Even so , we want to get as many people as we can out of Mitakihara before it arrives. And we need their help for that. We might not be able to get everyone out of harm's way, but every person we do is someone who might not get caught when it arrives.
-[x]Madoka
 
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[x] Keep talking.
-[x]Homura's right that it won't be easy. Walpurgisnight's going to be...It'll be a hard fight. But we think we can stop it for good. We can win.
[x]Talk to
-[x]Everyone
-[x]Even so , we want to get as many people as we can out of Mitakihara before it arrives. And we need their help for that. We might not be able to get everyone out of harm's way, but every person we do is someone who might not get caught when it arrives.
-[x]Madoka​
 
Seriously, I want to test how big a crater we can make with Akane tossing Kyouko's super spear plus Time Acceleration. At some point, or at least bring it up. It sounds like all kinds of 'this is going to suck for whoever is on the other end'. Or, we could make our own super sword, coat it in Wave Rend, have Akane toss the somofabich as hard as she can and have the result get Time Accelerated.

It could be our Railgun.
 
Muramasa said:
Uh, Sayaka basically just said that in the last update.
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Eh. I'm open to alternatives since it does seem like repetition, but this is continuing damage control on Murderface's inspirational "EVERYONE'S GONNA DIE " speech. Maybe a bit for Homu's benefit in there too, without talking about loops.
 
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[x] Keep talking.
-[x]Homura's right that it won't be easy. But we can stop it for good. We can win.
[x]Talk to
-[x]Everyone
-[x]Even so , we want to get as many people as we can out of Mitakihara before it arrives. And we need their help for that. We might not be able to get everyone out of harm's way, but every person we do is someone who might not get caught when it arrives.
-[x]Madoka
 
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Ugolino said:
Eh. I'm open to alternatives since it does seem like repetition, but this is continuing damage control on Murderface's inspirational "EVERYONE'S GONNA DIE " speech.
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[] Keep talking.
-[]Homura's right that it won't be easy. But we can stop it for good. We can win.

That's a more generalist statement. It sums up our thoughts. Also got rid of the weaker parts of the line.
 
Muramasa said:
[] Keep talking.
-[]Homura's right that it won't be easy. But we can stop it for good. We can win.

That's a more generalist statement. It sums up our thoughts. Also got rid of the weaker parts of the line.
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Eh, I see we're doing more traditional SQ nitpicking. Edited. :D

Any content problems? Think we're better off leaving [x]Madoka at that for now, maybe talk to the ducklings/Hitomi specifically later/when it seems called for.
 
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Found some interesting, even if useless right now, info:
There are many bodies, but only one consciousness. Therefore, even if you kill the body, there isn't any sort of damage. Killing one is just like pulling out a single strand of hair. The scene where Kyubey eats his corpse, and then comes in from the stairs in the script. I was trying to write Kyubey as something that humans can't relate to. Think like, "If your brother really died, what would your response be."
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