False Prophets (BattleTech CYOA)

I'm sure he's confused about it himself, at some level.
Ryan:
"When it comes down to it, it's mostly like the usual garrison work of keeping the peasants to terrified of your wrath most of the time and your vengeance the rest of it to stir up trouble. Only in this case the peasants are all pirate nobs and the like and mostly have access to battlemechs and such wirh which to voice their displeasure so you need to have a carrot as well as a big stick stick so they won't unite against you. But someone else is providing the bankroll and the carrot and to augment the stick we've got a couple of million angry actual peasants ready to side against the first several idiots to make a grab for the stupid stick and all the opportunists who realize they'd stand to get more by siding with the winners than the losers. It's all classic periphery power politics. The formerly biggest fish in the formerly small and isolated pond just ran headfirst into the first maxim of Jin: "there's always a bigger fish." And when the bigger fish notice you it pays to stop acting like you're the biggest fish around."

And

"No I've never met that Carp fellow but from what I hear he's one a helluva guy."
 
I'm desperately hoping that I didn't establish a different maiden name for Qi elsewhere in the story, and then accidentally forgot about it. I don't think so, but my two google docs for notes are a huge mess.
No, correct maiden name as far as I can tell.

I was just used to Qi Jacobs and the change throw me off.

Until I remembered WHY Qi would change her last name.
 
So I've been wondering, how do the Tigers compare to the total official state military of Dalian. That is, if you added together the Tigers plus all the Dalian military forces together, how much of Dalian's military force (presuming that the Tigers would always come home in the end) does Larkin command?

From that perspective, it's a little unusual to me that Rajeev could be Erin's designated successor. I mean, second in command to step up if Larkin falls in the middle of battle, sure. But allowing ownership of this potent military force to fall into the hands of someone with no strong connections to Dalian? That does not seem to me to be something the Dalian government should want to see happen. The Tigers are theirs; a mercenary unit sure, but also a Dalian national asset. I mean, if things ever go pear-shaped between Dalian and the rest of the Free Worlds, surely there's an expectation the Tigers would 'come home' to defend the homeland.
 
Legally, they are mercenaries. They might have a fair amount of Dalian natives in their ranks, but they are mercenaries. That is a distinct legal status in the Inner Sphere. Gives you a fair amount of advantages in terms of legality of holding onto said high-end military hardware without government interference. Planetary units can and are looted for hardware by higher levels of government often enough.

Now even more so the situation for any local Dalian unit is even more complex because legally Dalian is not an independent province of the FWL. Its as far as I can tell part of Andurien province. This complicates matters even more so.

If the unit wasn't organised as a mercenary unit, with enough of a fiction to be convincing... Andurien might be able to make a sufficient bid to simply confiscate the gear and hand it over to the Defenders of Andurien.

I mean, if things ever go pear-shaped between Dalian and the rest of the Free Worlds, surely there's an expectation the Tigers would 'come home' to defend the homeland.

While there might be an expectation... actually doing so can quite likely leave them in a fair amount of hot-water legally. In the sense that if they did so while on contract... your reputation as a mercenary group is gonna be shot to pieces unless you have a specific termination clause for that situation.

For example, the Commanders of McCarron's Armored Cavalry [or at least, possibly an earlier generation of them] are wanted for desertion, with outright death sentence passed in absentia IIRC, on them in Lyran space because they broke contract mid campaign.
 
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While there might be an expectation... actually doing so can quite likely leave them in a fair amount of hot-water legally. In the sense that if they did so while on contract... your reputation as a mercenary group is gonna be shot to pieces unless you have a specific termination clause for that situation.

For example, the Commanders of McCarron's Armored Cavalry [or at least, possibly an earlier generation of them] are wanted for desertion, with outright death sentence passed in absentia IIRC, on them in Lyran space because they broke contract mid campaign.

I'm not really a BattleTech person; I just started reading this story because it's interesting. Maybe that makes me less immediately able to swallow some of the BT setting elements than someone who is really into it.

There are definitely situations, though, that force organizations to answer questions about where their ultimate loyalties really are. If the security of Dalian is on the line, are "you" worried about the future of the Tigers as a mercenary organization or are "you" worried about preserving Dalian and whatever happens after that happens. The answer is of course dependent on who "you" is, which is why I thought the Dalian government would have Opinions on inheritance.
 
It also matters where the Tigers are deployed to. Yes, there are always some of their forces on Damian (the training regiment(s) and cadre) but the rest could be deployed months of travel away, in which case, there's not a lot they can do if "Damian is on the line". They'd simply have to hope Damian either holds with what's on planet, or gets reinforced by friendly forces that're closer.
 
So I've been wondering, how do the Tigers compare to the total official state military of Dalian. That is, if you added together the Tigers plus all the Dalian military forces together, how much of Dalian's military force (presuming that the Tigers would always come home in the end) does Larkin command?
There's a breakdown somewhere in my post replies, either here or on SB, but broadly speaking the planetary forces (militia, palace guard, minor nobility, etc) are larger, but are more geared towards vehicle, infantry, and conventional aerospace than BattleMech, and their 'Mech forces are on the lighter side (mostly bugs). If I remember what I've said, there's probably about a regiment plus, tops of lighter 'Mechs, plus some undefined quantity of SecurityMechs (i.e. armed industrial-chassis), but then there's also going to be several regiments of armour, infantry, and air-breathing atmospheric combat aircraft. Lots of infantry, in all likelihood.

As of 3025, the Fighting Tigers are approximately six regiments, but five of these are combined arms, and the sixth is mostly infantry. Totaling up, call it about two thin regiments of 'Mechs, with the rest being tanks, infantry, aerospace and the like. It's still a weaker force, but being a merc unit, by definition a lot of that is typically offworld.

From that perspective, it's a little unusual to me that Rajeev could be Erin's designated successor. I mean, second in command to step up if Larkin falls in the middle of battle, sure. But allowing ownership of this potent military force to fall into the hands of someone with no strong connections to Dalian?
There's a couple of fine points here. First, the article doesn't say that Raj is in line for ownership of the unit. He isn't eligible for that, because he's not related to House Zou.

If Erin dies without a blood heir, ownership of the unit goes to someone else in the family. It hasn't been mentioned because it hasn't become important yet, but it will be - currently Erin's own heir is Marchioness Adena Zou.

Ownership isn't the same as military command of the unit. It often is, in BattleTech, but there are also examples of the two being separate. Erin is of course both the (majority) owner and CO, but that isn't necessarily the case, and if Marquis Adrian Zou had lived to restore the unit fully during his lifetime, he'd have been owner, but with the officer-in-command position delegated to someone else.

Secondly, even with that in mind, there's a bunch of people on Dalian who argue that Raul Pulaski should be second-in-line, not Raj - that is the unspoken implication in 7.1, not outright stated because the article is intentionally sympathetic to the Tigers.

This is also why the article has a quote from Raj expressing loyalty to the planet and unit, and mentions he now carries Free Worlds League citizenship. It's a deliberate PR move.

This was included on purpose, because it will become important later, and therefore the questions you're asking are the correct ones. :D

Now even more so the situation for any local Dalian unit is even more complex because legally Dalian is not an independent province of the FWL. Its as far as I can tell part of Andurien province. This complicates matters even more so.

If the unit wasn't organised as a mercenary unit, with enough of a fiction to be convincing... Andurien might be able to make a sufficient bid to simply confiscate the gear and hand it over to the Defenders of Andurien.
The story explicitly states that Dalian is no longer legally and technically within the administrative Andurien province - it's too far coreward to be within Andurien in the Third Succession War era canon borders, and there is a line from Adena saying that Dalian has better trade and finance links with Oriente Province than Andurien.

But it is close enough to be generally considered geographically within Andurien, and history muddies the waters.

Basically, the (canon map) Second Succession War era Andurien province extends further coreward ('north') than in the Third Succession War era. After the Second Succession War annexation, Dalian would indisputedly have been in Andurien. These days... not so much.

Andurien certainly considers it part of Andurien, but Dalian disagrees, and might actually have its own single seat in parliament, though I hadn't established that one way or another. My thinking is that several of the Liao worlds absorbed in the Succession Wars tend to fall under Andurien authority by default following absorbtion, but later may - indeed by the maps, clearly have - their own self-governance to a greater degree.

All that said, I'm intentionally confusing and misleading about the Andurien-or-not thing because a) I'm trying to mirror real world border fuzziness, and b) this sort of thing happens in the canon FWL, for example whether certain worlds fall within Stewart Province or not is the subject of a sidebar thing in the old House Marik book.

In practice, it depends on who you're talking to - Marchioness Adena Zou consistently insists that Dalian is not in Andurien, for obvious reasons. Her opponents in House Zou (Corian and Kaisen) bring up Andurien in one scene, the KZC boardroom thing, talking as if Dalian is in Andurien, but this is also political. Other narrators in the story refer to the Tigers as 'Andurien mercs', but... you get the idea.
 
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Andurien certainly considers it part of Andurien, but Dalian disagrees, and might actually have its own single seat in parliament, though I hadn't established that one way or another

If they are independent... they should have a MP, if they aren't, with their attitudes it might be time to invoke Camlann vs Free Worlds League and formally secede from Andurien.

Probably should then. Because checking in with the local MP might be interesting. Well, whoever is MP this couple of years because FWL Parliament is two year terms. [sigh]

Based on what I can tell... 3018, 3020, 3022, 3024 and 3026 are election years in the FWL. [3025 is the 376th Parliament of the FWL, first parliament was 2272, 2290 is explicitly the end of the 9th parliament.]

First day of parliament would be January 3rd in 3025.
 
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Based on what I can tell... 3018, 3020, 3022, 3024 and 3026 are election years in the FWL. [3025 is the 376th Parliament of the FWL, first parliament was 2272, 2290 is explicitly the end of the 9th parliament.]

First day of parliament would be January 3rd in 3025.
That's a good point. I might well introduce Dalian's parliamentary representative, actually, in a sequence - I have some space to do it... and also, you have no idea how much trouble you just saved me in listing off those dates, because I was about to do that math myself for a completely different reason. But I needed those election years, so thank you. Your psychic powers are wonderful indeed.
 
Fast Travel 7.3
Fast Travel 7.3

HUJINYING, GREATER TAISHAN, DALIAN
20 MAY 3018


"Look," I said, peering over the top of my raised compad, "let's drop the pretence, shall we?"

The young woman sitting on the other side of my desk didn't flinch. I gave her some credit for that. She was a good actor. She had the innocent 'I don't know what you're talking about' blank face down pat, which was a valuable skill for a new soldier.

"I'm sorry, Colonel? I don't understand."

I breathed a sigh. "Miss Markus, I'm impressed by the effort you've put into this, but I'm afraid... I do know who you are."

She maintained her blank look. She was good, she really was. She was still sticking to the story.

I blanked the screen of my compad, setting the device down on desk. I'd already seen enough. The file was quite extensive, but it was also a bigger work of fiction than my own forays into creative writing.

According to her personnel file, compiled from her entrance interview and the records she'd provided to us upon enlistment, Markus was twenty-one years old, and a native of the planet Augustine IV, near Hamilton and Pliska. None of that was true.

To be fair, she sold that story quite well. She'd convinced my officers, the ones that had taken her in. And she had all the right set pieces for that identity, including a St. Ignatius rosary prominently hanging round her neck, a medallion worked into the necklace in addition to the crucifix and the wooden beads.

Augustine was a multi-religious world nowadays, but the population was primarily Atrean Ignatine or other brands of Roman Catholic, dating back to the original Jesuit settlement of the system.

Strictly speaking, her claim to Augustine citizenship wasn't even a lie. She was a citizen, she simply hadn't been born there. But she was an Augustine national by definition, since she was the heir to the duchy. I was looking at the future Duchess of Augustine.

She'd clearly spent enough time on the planet to pull off the act, I supposed. Her family did have an estate on Augustine, after all. It stood to reason.

"Colonel," she began, speaking slowly and carefully, "I'm not sure what you mean by… "

"Your name isn't Christine Kristen Markus," I said, bluntly. "It's Kristen Marik. Your father is Captain-General Janos Marik, and your mother is Lady Ana Stewart."

She blinked. Then she laughed, disarmingly. "That's… I've been told there's some resemblance, but I don't follow noble gossip and celebrity rags, I've never… "

"You look a lot like your father," I informed her. "If you're not Kristen Marik, then someone in SAFE needs to worry about illegitimate children or doppelgänger plots."

She did twitch, then. Just a little, but it was a reaction. I pressed on.

"More importantly, if you're not Kristen Marik, then SAFE needs to redouble efforts to find her, because she's been missing for a while," I said. "She certainly isn't visiting her holdings on Augustine, as she's claimed. Care to comment?"

Aside from everything I'd mentioned, I also had the benefit of foreknowledge. In another universe, Kristen Marik would have joined the Langendorf Lancers mercenary group under an assumed name, the same one she'd used here on Dalian. It seemed that while Kristen had still chosen to enlist with an independent unit, her first choice of employer had been different.

I kept staring at Kristen, making it as apparent as possible that I wasn't deceived by her cover identity. Not in the slightest.

I saw the moment where she realised this.

There was a subtle shift in Kristen's posture, as she straightened in her chair. Her bearing was now slightly different, more formal, more rigid. Had she deliberately been slouching, for effect? Probably.

She grimaced. "There's no hiding, is there? I'm sorry for the ruse. But, Colonel, I don't want to go back to Atreus."

"Okay," I said, settling back in my own office chair.

Kristen looked at me with a mix of wariness and surprise. "Okay?"

I thought about where to begin. There were a few ways this could go. But from all accounts, the youngest daughter of the Marik family was a straight shooter. Well, I mean, obviously she was twisty and sly enough to try enlisting in a merc unit under a false name, with fabricated papers and a good stage persona to boot.

But that was… professional lying, so to speak. In personal terms, as an individual, Kristen Marik was reputed to be a lot like her father, really. Willful. Stubborn. Hard-headed. Prone to going straight for the kill. So…

"Tell me," I began, "if you don't mind, why you want to join the Tigers? Why not Free Worlds League federal service? You'd have no problems getting into the Allison MechWarrior Institute, or maybe Princefield Military Academy, if you wanted to follow your father's footsteps."

Kristen gripped the armrests of her chair. "But don't you see? That's it. That's the problem. If I went to an academy, I'd be another Marik, the latest Marik. They'd compare me to my father, my brothers, my cousin… "

"You could have entered under a false name," I suggested. "You did here."

Kristen rolled her eyes. "If I tried that at an academy, it wouldn't last. It didn't last here, you obviously figured me out. I hoped I'd go longer without being busted, pass outside sensor range."

"I'm afraid your ECM isn't good enough," I replied. "No offence, but you really do look a lot like the Captain-General, and your brothers."

She scowled. "Mom didn't give me any of the good genes."

I chose not to comment on that. The fact was, Kristen wasn't a beautiful woman. She wasn't ugly, she didn't look bad - she was in good shape, plus poise and self-confidence went a long way. But she wasn't drop-dead gorgeous in facial structure, not model or actress pretty. She had her father's very defined cheekbones and strong jaw. She was certainly a Marik, the House Stewart blood hadn't bred so true.

"So," I prompted, "you chose a merc unit."

"I put on a Free Worlds League uniform," Kristen said, "and my path will be set. MechWarrior and officer training, guaranteed. Lance command on commissioning, then a company slot in a year or three, then battalion. Maybe a regiment by the time I'm thirty, thirty-five, or even before. Could be a division, by then, for all I know, if father or grandfather is feeling generous."

"A lot of people would call that a good deal," I observed.

Kristen was a little too well-trained to give me a stink-eye, but her displeasure was clear. Her face was sour. "I wouldn't. I don't want to be a paper soldier. I don't want to be that noble who's coasting by on her family name."

"House Marik has turned out good officers and commanders, even in recent memory," I noted.

"That's not… Colonel, if I were in regular League service, maybe I'd do a good job. Maybe I'd make a mess of it. But no matter what, they'd promote me, keep kicking me upstairs," Kristen said, with an air of annoyance. "And they'd praise me all the same. I wouldn't know. They'd keep feeding me lines of bullshit. They wouldn't test me. I wouldn't grow."

I brought a hand to my face, resting my chin in the crook formed by my thumb and index finger. I held that position for a moment.

"I think you're underestimating your House's methods, in dealing with this. The Free Worlds League have been under a Marik for generations, the academies and line units have ways of dealing with people bearing your surname, in the ranks. And ways of weeding out the good from the bad," I said.

Kristen Marik didn't look happy at that statement. I held my other hand up, indicating that I wasn't finished.

"But… I'm an outsider. I'm not the Marik here, I'm not even a real noble. You are," I continued. "So if that's what you're afraid of, then I accept your point. I also hear that you're Janos Marik's favourite, so… "

Kristen frowned. "That's Thomas, not me. Who told you that?"

"Martin."

"Martin? Um," Kristen muttered. She gave me an odd look.

I returned the look. "What?"

"Uh, this is a personal question," Kristen said, "but… is it true that there's something going on between you and my brother?"

I closed my mouth. Then I closed my eyes. I composed myself, then answered: "There's nothing going on. He's just a troll. He's trolling the media. And me."

"Oh," Kristen said, in a voice I couldn't quite interpret. Was she disappointed, relieved, or simply taking on board a new data point and updating her internal files?

I couldn't tell, and resolved to put it out of my mind.

"Right," I said, briskly and professionally. "We're here to talk about you, not about me. Alright. Bottom line, if you want to be a Tiger, I'm not going to stand in your way. If you want to call yourself Christine Markus and keep that going for as long as you can, fine. But your real identity is going in your file, and your chain of command will know. You can keep it from your fellows, if you like, but we've got to be sensible about this. Agreed?"

Kristen nodded, grudgingly. "Yes, ma'am."

"And," I added, "I'm telling SAFE."

That prompted a less accepting sound from Kristen, a wordless barking yelp.

"No," I insisted, raising my own voice. "Look, SAFE can't be running around the Free Worlds League thinking you've been kidnapped, sold into Marian slavery, that you've run off to join a Canopian circus or something."

"But," Kristen protested.

I lifted both my hands, palms open. "If your father kicks up a fuss and demands that you take the next ship back to Atreus, that's on you. I can't sort that out for you. Make a deal with your mother's family, get Martin and Duggan to help you, I don't know. I'll back you up as far as I can, but they're your kin, not mine."

Kristen looked like she'd swallowed something extremely unpleasant, but she evidently accepted the argument. "I'll write to them."

"ASAP," I said, sounding out all four letters. "By the next HPG transmission window, if you can make it. Or take longer to word everything, if you need to. But not too long. I don't want an Eagle Corps squad kicking down the doors and demanding we hand you over. That'd be embarrassing, all round."

Kristen had the decency to look abashed. Her face fell. She had to know that her plan of running away to join a mercenary unit had a few holes in it.

"I'll do that. I promise."

"I trust that you will," I said. "Okay. Now that we've completely departed from the script of my usual 'meet the recruits' one-on-one, in the time we have remaining… do you have any questions for me? About the unit, about the training, stuff you'd like to bring up, anything?

Kristen licked her lips. She looked uncertain, almost awkward. Not quite, for even at her worst she had some measure of well-trained poise. But it did seem like she was struggling to frame her words properly.

"About the recruitment criteria," Kristen said, finally. "This will sound hypocritical, because I just finished telling you I don't want special treatment. I don't. But I've looked at the sim logs and the live exercise holos. And the combat records and after-actions, the material we can access."

I tilted my head, wondering where she was going. I was willing to let her talk. "And?"

"I'm not boasting," Kristen said, "and I'm not putting down any other personnel, I'm not. But I can't figure out how else to say this. I'm better than some of the MechWarriors you accepted straight into combat roles, in the main unit. I'm more qualified, I've got higher piloting and gunnery ratings, and I studied as much strategy and tactics as I could, besides everything else my tutors wanted of me."

I made a sound of agreement. "Uh-huh?"

"But you've put me in the training command, for a training course," Kristen continued. "And I know you're accepting people straight into the Second Tigers Regiment, so it's not just that. Please don't misunderstand, I'm not complaining, it's just… "

"You don't get why," I finished.

"It'd make sense if you were trying to keep me from field ops," Kristen continued. "I don't think the recruiters were on to me, though. Unless they were?"

"They weren't," I said. "You fooled them. Raj and I spotted you, when we were reviewing the latest training batch."

That in turn meant that Kristen Marik had already gone through several weeks of drills and instruction on Dalian, since Rajeev and I had been offworld during her induction, setting up the forthcoming New Dallas mission. Nobody had twigged in all that time, though I figured surely Qi must have had some suspicions.

"Then," Kristen asked, "why?"

I hummed, tunelessly. "You're right, you are already better than, say, Todd Metzger, Jung, or Kanji Kanada were, when they signed with the Tigers. And I did give them combat slots straight away, rather than bumping them to our first training batch. But at the time, I simply didn't have enough MechWarriors. Blessed Blake, I didn't have any MechWarriors, not really. Enough for a lance plus between Gabs, Raj, the Jacobs, and I, but that was it."

"You were just building up," Kristen said.

"Right. I'm not going to say that my standards were lower, and I'll also point out that Metzger and the other picks have turned out pretty damn well. Kanji would give you a good fight, these days, he's an ace now," I stated. "Plus, one other thing. We were still in the middle of the civil war. There was time pressure to get everyone operational, soon as we could. Things are different now. We have the luxury of time."

Kristen didn't appear pleased to hear that, but she also wasn't arguing. If anything, she was resigned. "Hence, I'm in a training group, because I've got no real combat experience, no past employers as a merc, nothing."

"Yup, you got it," I said. "Look on the bright side, it's not quite a full academy course. If Raj had his way, if we had the resources to manage it, it would be three or four years. We don't. So it isn't."

"But if I'm already good," Kristen pointed out, "how much am I getting from this?"

"You're individually skilled," I responded. "Plus, you know the tactical playbook. But in practice, how much have you worked with a lance or company? Other people, real people? Both on the field, and off. How many hours have you logged on a live 'Mech? How much have you practiced working alongside tanks, fighters, infantry, and artillery? It's never enough, let me tell you, and here's a chance for you to do all that. In a controlled setting."

"In other words," Kristen said, "I know how to be a MechWarrior, but you want me to become a professional soldier. Before I really go to war."

I laughed. "That's a better way of putting it than what I was thinking. Sure. Let's go with that."
 
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That's a good point. I might well introduce Dalian's parliamentary representative, actually, in a sequence - I have some space to do it... and also, you have no idea how much trouble you just saved me in listing off those dates, because I was about to do that math myself for a completely different reason. But I needed those election years, so thank you. Your psychic powers are wonderful indeed.

Actually... that might be wrong. It could be 3017/3019/etc etc in time for the next parliament the next year...

Also they have done their math wrong in the book. It should be the 377th Parliament in 3025 if the 1st Parliament started in 2272 and lasted until end of 2273.

[377*2 = 754. 754 + 2270 = 3024. Same way the 3rd Parliament would have started in 2276 and 3*2+2270=2276]
 
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Actually... that might be wrong. It could be 3017/3019/etc etc in time for the next parliament the next year...

Also they have done their math wrong in the book. It should be the 377th Parliament in 3025 if the 1st Parliament started in 2272 and lasted until end of 2273.

[377*2 = 754. 754 + 2270 = 3024. Same way the 3rd Parliament would have started in 2276 and 3*2+2270=2276]
Extraordinary circumstances (read: succession wars et al) may have caused parliaments to last longer (or more likely shorter), throwing off the math.
 
Extraordinary circumstances (read: succession wars et al) may have caused parliaments to last longer (or more likely shorter), throwing off the math.

Given 3067 is the 796th Session... And Sessions are by definition in their system that years parliamentary season. [796+2271=3067. Where as first session is 2272, 2nd is 2273...]
 
"Uh, this is a personal question," Kristen said, "but… is it true that there's something going on between you and my brother?"

I closed my mouth. Then I closed my eyes. I composed myself, then answered: "There's nothing going on. He's just a troll. He's trolling the media. And me."

See, she keeps saying that but a "troll" that lasts years and years is starting to look an awful lot like something more. Is this the adult equivalent of Erin being blind to why Martin keeps tugging her pigtails?
 
See, she keeps saying that but a "troll" that lasts years and years is starting to look an awful lot like something more. Is this the adult equivalent of Erin being blind to why Martin keeps tugging her pigtails?

It hasn't been that long. The Solarius Conference was mostly Oct of '17. This conversation with Kristen was May '18. only 7 or 8 months.
Remember, Fast Movement pt 1 jumped several years into the future before hopping back to 'the present'.
 
It hasn't been that long. The Solarius Conference was mostly Oct of '17. This conversation with Kristen was May '18. only 7 or 8 months.
Remember, Fast Movement pt 1 jumped several years into the future before hopping back to 'the present'.
Besides, we're talking about the man who sent Gerald Marik a ball and a chain as a wedding gift after learning of the latter marrying Romano Liao. So he definitely has a trollish streak.
 
Fast Travel 7.4
Fast Travel 7.4

NEW DALLAS
14 SEP 3018


"If Cranston Snord were here," I mused, "he'd say that this stuff belongs in a museum."

Marty Carp grinned. "I'm no Snord, but from where I'm standing… "

"You're standing behind me," I pointed out, turning just enough to glance over my shoulder.

"From where I'm standing," Marty Carp repeated, "I'd think, they will. Ain't worth the trouble to try and press a bunch of Macjobs back into service. Even I'm not that loco. What's the enemy gonna do, if they see a bunch of Macs waddling towards 'em? Fall down laughing?"

"The basic Mackie chassis is sound," Rajeev replied. "The broad torso gives ample room for refitting up-to-date components. The Terran Hegemony was still producing them until the mid twenty-eighth century, just prior to the fall of the Star League."

"Might that not have been a matter of national pride, much as anything else? The Mackie was a symbol for the Hegemony, as the first BattleMech," said Ernest Reid, from further back in the trailer. He had to raise his voice a little to be heard. "The Hegemony continued to procure and fielded them for reasons of image. The same reason they must have kept these."

I raised a hand, moving it back and forth in the air. "Yes and no. I mean, that's true, but when the New Dallas boneyard was created, they anticipated one day needing these BattleMechs. Maybe. I mean, they thought this stuff was obsolete, but they put it in cold storage rather than selling or scrapping it. This place was sealed in… what, something like the twenty-sixth century? By then, the first-gen Mackie was outdated, but not ridiculously so."

None of us were looking at Mackies with our own eyes. Rather, we were all following the feeds from the exploration teams, across a range of monitors.

Most of the feeds were coming from the body and helmet cameras carried by Rohan's troops and Sanren's techs. Some were from the 'Mechs accompanying them, piped in from their sensors. And yes, there were 'Mechs down there, since any facility big enough to store BattleMechs was also designed to walk them in and out, by default.

Although locating the entrance to the bunker and clearing the obstructing rubble had posed a bit of a challenge. That phase of the operation had taken longer than I'd liked, but now the first teams were in.

Technically speaking, I wasn't supposed to be commanding. Not at this hour. We were on shifts, and I should have been asleep. Marty Carp ought to have been stood down, too. Rajeev was the rostered night officer.

But I wasn't about to miss out. Not when our efforts had finally paid off. Well, almost. The job wasn't done yet, and we still didn't have eyes on the main prize.

"Sure, whatever. But old Mackie boy and his kin are outdated now," Marty Carp opined, pointing at the ranks of BattleMechs lined up on the screen. "If I hear you right, we're not looking at late Hegemony ones, they're originals. So far out to pasture that the pasture ain't no pasture, but uncharted wilderness."

On one of the monitors, a technician panned her camera across the bunker chamber, no doubt aware that we were watching. The shapes illuminated by the exploration team's lights were definitely covered and locked-down BattleMechs, partially obscured in some cases, exposed in others. There were definitely Mackie BattleMechs, at least from what was visible, but there were also other models further back in the hangar, the shapes recognisable even in the poor light. Contemporaries of the Mackie, fielded by the Hegemony in early front-line units and then later militia groups.

The motley collection ranged from looming artillery platforms like the Helepolis to first-gen bugs like the Wasp and Stinger. There were early Shadow Hawks, Orions, Banshees, a Rifleman and Archer or two, a few Ostwar precursors to the later Ost-series 'Mechs, and even some Griffin heavies… not even Griffin mediums, but the very early GRF-1A heavy by Maxwell that was five tons more massive than the modern version.

"It is possible to refit the 'Mechs," Rajeev said. "Modernise them, bring them up to current standards. The skeletons, myomers, actuators, weapons, heat sinks, and armour should all be sound."

"But not the cockpits, reactors, and other key components," Reid pointed out. "Those will need to be replaced, unless the Free Worlds League settles for putting subpar primitive machines into service, as-is."

Well… the Free Worlds League, House Marik, and my own Fighting Tigers, anyway. New Dallas was within the Free Worlds League's contemporary borders, but it didn't fall within any extant province and it certainly didn't have a population and its own government. That meant it was federal property, and so was anything recovered from the ruins of New Dallas. The negotiations had been very hastily hashed out, but we were looking at a three-way split between the Free Worlds itself, House Marik's household units, and the Tigers. Typically the Free Worlds League and House Marik were nearly synonyms, but in this case I suspected that Janos and Martin Marik were looking to build up the Atrean Hussars and other formations that owed direct fealty to the Marik family, rather than the Free Worlds.

Of course, the 'Mechs and other fighting platforms that we expected to recover from the New Dallas boneyard were considerably less valuable than the haul from Helm. The SLDF regular and royal 'Mechs from the Helm depot were better than what was widely in service, in the present day. The machines stored on New Dallas were worse. Both Rajeev and Reid were right. Upgrading them would be a labour-intensive and resource-intensive undertaking.

Carp shook his head. "The bugs, the Orions, even the Ostwars and Griffins, sure. Those could be used in a reasonable timeframe. Compatible spares and new insides for those are still in widespread production… heck, a Wasp, you and I could bang the parts together ourselves. Just need some sheet metal and rubber hammers. Be a job and a half to get them all sorted, but it's doable. The Mackies, though? Collector market, gotta be. And what are those things, the ones that look a little like an edgy Centurion, 'xcept with a shoulder missile mount?"

"That's the zero-one Kyudo, I think," I replied, squinting at the screen. "Raj?"

Rajeev made a soft sound of confirmation. "Original Kyudo from Martinson Armaments, correct. Reunification War standard."

"The Kyudo," Carp repeated, shaking his head. "Lord almighty. That's Hegemony? Thought it was Drac. Nah, for 'Mechs like that, we're looking at…museums, private collectors, universities. They'd pay for that. The old Hegemony models are worth more as bits of history than fighting machines, now."

I chuckled. "You really are sounding like Cranston Snord. Careful, there. Whatever he's got, it might be catching."

Carp scratched his chin. "I did spend a lotta time in his holes. Might have, ought to get me tested."

It was a little unfair to Marty Carp, but I honestly hadn't expected his battalion to volunteer for the New Dallas mission, once they'd been sworn to secrecy and the general shape of things explained to them.

Sure, we were digging 'Mechs and some combat vehicles out of a bunker, but they were all ancient machines that had been deemed military surplus centuries ago. This was pre-Star League tech, so there weren't any surprises there. Aside from the 'Mechs, there were also vehicles and fighters, but those were even more ancient. Things like the Hegemony's signature Merkava MBT, Apostle and Reaper Self-Propelled Artillery, a handful of Ballistas, some Asher hover tanks, Dunning and Randolph trucks, LRM and SRM carriers, and even old Hammerhead ground-based fighters hangared alongside DroST IIa and IIb ships - aerodynes that were so old that they were referred to by the now outdated term 'Drop-Ship Tank'. This was the combat equivalent of antiques in an attic. Maybe some could be valuable - we'd uncovered a room full of LTV-4 Hover Tanks, and those were already in service with the Tigers. But a lot might be dubious junk.

Yes, there was also the potential higher-value prize somewhere in the facility… but I hadn't revealed that to all of Marty Carp's people. Carp himself, yes, but not his whole crew.

But they'd volunteered, based on the obsolete machinery alone. I'd figured they wouldn't be interested… but, as it turned out, whoever in the Free Worlds League establishment that had executed Janos Marik's order of finding no-hopers and last-chancers to assemble a bootleg Snord's Irregulars, well, they'd taken the order literally.

Marty Carp's band of misfits didn't have the academic credentials of Cranston Snord's unit. Snord had folks who were acknowledged experts in their fields. Carp's lot were less qualified. But they were still treasure hunters.

Well, maybe more thieves than treasure hunters, but still.

Lieutenant Ernest Reid gave Carp an assessing look, which he tended to do. Reid was a SAFE agent, and both Marty Carp and I knew that. I got the sense that Reid didn't know why to make of Carp, which was likely the case across his agency's upper echelons. I couldn't blame them. Not knowing what to make of Marty Carp was a common condition, one I occasionally suffered from, too.

One of the communications specialists operating the consoles swiveled round, her chair moving. Her name was Lena, Lisa, or something like that. "Uh, ma'am, sirs, you'll want to take a look at this. Um, hold on."

With Rajeev, Reid, Carp and I all inside the trailer, the number of officers present outweighed the actual staff, since the vehicle's command centre could be operated by three people - well, excluding the two up in the cab to drive the thing, but the cab was separated from the compartment we were occupying.

Pressing a few keys, the comms specialist whose name started with an 'L', maybe, brought one particular video feed to the forefront. She threw it up on the largest two-dimensional screen, the big master plot hanging near the map table.

Strictly speaking, what we were doing was a slight waste of the Mobile HQ's capabilities. Our Mobile Headquarters vehicle was capable of pulling down information from satellites and orbiting spacecraft, tracking the status of soldiers up to an entire brigade's scale, and so on. A full seven tons of the vehicle's weight was dedicated just to the communications and tracking systems.

We were using it as a glorified tri-vid room. Hell, not even tri-vid, but two-dimensional, even.

But the Mobile HQ was fully environmentally-sealed and temperature-controlled, which meant it was drastically cooler than anything outside, including the tents that had been pitched as ground facilities, or the long-abandoned buildings that littered the landscape of what had once been Caddo City. New Dallas was a hot world, something that the Terran Hegemony's terraforming efforts had never quite resolved. A fair climate for agriculture, but back in the day, the people of New Dallas had used a lot of air conditioning.

These days, there weren't many intact surface structures, air conditioned or otherwise. The Terran Hegemony's boneyard on New Dallas was basically an extensive underground bunker, and that bunker was… logically enough, located beneath what had once been the main camp of the New Dallas Militia.

The problem with that was, Caddo City had been nuked shortly after the fall of the Star League, and naturally the bombs had targeted key infrastructure and military sites, including the New Dallas Militia's stomping grounds.

It was ironic, really, because while the Free Worlds League had made this job possible, and we were here with authorisation from the Free Worlds League… it was the Free Worlds that had devastated New Dallas, making our work difficult in the first place. Today, New Dallas was within the borders of the Free Worlds League, but it had started life as a Terran Hegemony colony… and it'd been invaded by the Free Worlds after the fall of the Star League and the effective collapse of the Hegemony's government in the post-Amaris years.

Granted, in seizing Terran Hegemony systems that bordered Free Worlds space, Captain-General Kenyon Marik had simply been doing what all his fellow lords were doing. Carving up the Terran Hegemony between them. On the other hand, Kenyon Marik's forces had also nuked the hell out of… what, three hundred thousand people? That was what the history books recorded as the estimated deaths, anyway. When the bombs had fallen, they'd intentionally targeted Caddo City and other settlements on the continent of Trinity, like San Teresa and New Angelo. But the other inhabited land masses like Reunion and Ellum had also been hit. That put the Free Worlds League of the day in the same bracket as people like Minoru Kurita.

Well, to be fair, it was likely that Kenyon Marik hadn't personally nuked the people of New Dallas to oblivion. All the accounts, including surviving Terran Hegemony ones, agreed that the call had been made by the officer on the ground. General Venla Sahin, commander of the Seventh Marik Militia, plus the Third and Fifth Atrean Dragoons, the task force that had been charged with invading New Dallas. With her casualties mounting and her supplies dwindling, General Sahin had gotten… desperate.

Mind you, in objective terms, the loss of three hundred thousand wasn't proportionately crippling, considering the world had been home to a billion or two people at the time. General Sahin hadn't been trying for genocide, she'd been aiming for infrastructure and military resistance. It just happened that all that was, naturally, in cities. As far as nuclear bombardment went, it had been surgical. Though that was an argument that I could make, with centuries of distance and no personal connection to New Dallas. Any citizens of New Dallas alive at the time… well, they would have disagreed.

New Dallas hadn't been in the best of shape, in the late twenty-eighth century. The Free Worlds League invaded the system after the fall of the Star League, and after the Amaris Civil War. But, of course, as one of the better-established Hegemony colonies, New Dallas had also been hit by Stefan Amaris' Rim Worlds Republic, during his whole bid to seize the Terran Hegemony, the war that had ultimately doomed the Star League. All that fighting had already taken a toll on New Dallas. The Free Worlds League and General Sahin had merely finished the job, putting the proverbial last straw on the poor camel's back.

That was why New Dallas was an abandoned world, today. The system was still marked on star charts, but insofar as anyone knew about New Dallas, they probably assumed the atmosphere was poisoned by radioactivity. Or something. That wasn't the case. Background radiation near the ruined cities, sure, that was still high, but not stupidly so. On pure environmental terms, even in the twenty-eighth century, New Dallas could have recovered. But there had been an exodus of people from the world, not because the ecosystem had been destroyed, or infrastructure shattered, but because their collective spirit had been broken.

Helm had fared better, in that regard. The death toll on Helm had been worse, in both absolute and relative terms, but the planet was still inhabited today. Chalk one up for the stubbornness of Stewart natives, I suppose.

But the fact New Dallas was abandoned meant that we didn't have any witnesses to our grave robbing. Well, the boneyard was filled with 'Mechs, not bodies, being a figurative rather than literal boneyard. But a hell of a lot of people had died in Caddo City. That was true.

Although there were no planetside witnesses, and no living human witnesses, there were still potential observers to worry about. Namely, ComStar.

Around the Second Succession War, ComStar had started placing monitoring satellites and the like in abandoned Hegemony systems, basically a set of alarms and tripwires to keep an eye out for looters. Which we were.

However, there were three mitigating factors at play here.

One, and most importantly, ComStar actually knew we were here. I'd actually conveyed word that the Free Worlds League was sending a mission to New Dallas, a system that was within the modern Free Worlds borders.

Two, ComStar didn't care much about New Dallas. They knew about the boneyard, I was sure… but while vast numbers of primitive early BattleMechs and ancient combat vehicles, well, they weren't nothing, it wasn't hardware on the level of an SLDF cache. The stuff was outdated, and the records on Terra would have included all the relevant dates to prove that.

Now, of course… the real value of the New Dallas site wasn't the hardware, but I suspected that fact wasn't readily available in most historical archives.

And finally, three, even if the true nature of the New Dallas bunker was known to some people within ComStar, those people would be ROM. And ROM was currently in the midst of a massive organisational shakeup, following the allegations that Precentor Tojo Jarlath had been plotting against Primus Julian Tiepolo.

A very distracting bit of business, surely. With much of ROM's leadership busy being grilled by stern-faced First Circuit members, in front of formal inquiry panels and emergency committees, there couldn't be many people left minding the store on Hilton Head.

Perfect for my purposes. While I could have figured out some other excuse to explain cracking open the New Dallas bunker, it was also useful to avoid immediate scrutiny, until the deed was done.

The big screen in the Mobile HQ truck was showing part of the underground complex's interior, but a portion which most definitely wasn't a hangar or weapons storage. No, these were human-sized corridors. On the display, the team were carefully moving towards a room that was set up… rather like the now-destroyed field library chamber back on Helm. The reader and terminals arrangement was vaguely similar, though the electronics here looked older.

Reid took a couple of steps forward, moving closer. "Is that it?"

"Hey," Marty Carp retorted, "don't get your hopes up just yet. For all we know, Rohan's just found the desks for the secretarial pool."

I snorted. "And the keyboards are for word processing and data entry?"

Reid eyed Carp. "In a bunker that survived a direct hit from nuclear weapons?"

"Terran Hegemony," Carp said. "Those people were super serious about backing up their paperwork. Wouldn't wanna be caught short when Lord or Lady Cameron wants an audit, now would you?"

"I don't think the Star League was big on audits," I remarked. "They did manage to lose track of entire Castle Brians and supply depots over the years."

"Much of that loss of information was caused by the Amaris coup," Rajeev noted. "A large number of Hegemony officials did not cooperate with the Stefan Amaris regime, and deliberately destroyed or hid records."

"Yeah," Carp said, nodding sagely. He touched the brim of his baseball-style cap. "I've had bosses like that. New supervisor comes in, makes a mess, staff quit playing along with management… "

I smiled, slightly. "You could say Stefan Amaris did get fired. Fired at, anyway, by Kerensky's execution squad."

That was indeed how Amaris had ended up, very briefly tried and then equally quickly disposed of. Legend had it that Amaris' gravesite on New Samarkand tended to stink of piss, since it was allegedly a popular student dare to break in and leave appropriate offerings to the last ruler of the Rim Worlds Republic and Terran Hegemony.

"Colonel," said the technician who was actually running the voice communications. Annoyingly, I couldn't remember his name. "Sharma thinks the library readers are still drawing power from somewhere. He wants to try turning them on."

Marty Carp blinked. "They left 'em on? All this while? Damn, I'd hate to see their meter reading."

Behind Carp, Reid shook his head.

With a more serious expression than Carp's, Rajeev regarded the live video feed from Sharma's group, studying what he could see through their cameras.

"There is some risk," Rajeev warned. "It could damage the core. Unlike the Helm field library in Nagayan Mountain, the Caddo City memory core was not intended to be a long-term apocalypse-proof repository. It was not meant to survive the fall of civilisation, and stay online for centuries."

I considered the matter. "That's true, but the Hegemony Central Intelligence Department did intend for the computers here to stay functional for years and decades at a stretch, just quietly gathering and storing information. With minimal maintenance. Maybe not centuries, but still."

Carp rubbed his jaw, thoughtfully. "Sharma's that electronics specialist from Rohan's old platoon, right? The guy with the hair? I remember that guy, knows his shit, Erin. Knows all the manure, I reckon, alphabetically indexed."

I took a breath. "And he's the one on the ground. Okay. Sure, tell him to go ahead, but be careful."

"Understood," said the comm tech. Then he spoke into his headset, repeating what I'd just said to the group of Tigers somewhere down below.

The memory core on New Dallas wasn't like the one on Helm. The Helm database had been specifically curated as a library, then further stuffed full of scientific and engineering material by the SLDF contingent on Helm, precisely to serve as a how-to guidebook for rebuilding civilisation.

And the New Dallas memory core wasn't like the Halstead Station library in House Davion's possession, either. The Halstead data was a mix of electronic files and even scans of hardcopy books and journals, ones that had been retrieved intact from a defunct Star League university.

No, the New Dallas core was its own beast. It wasn't even Star League, but from the Terran Hegemony's HCID.

The Hegemony's espionage and spook community had set up an autonomous data mining and listening operation on New Dallas, hiding it within the Caddo City boneyard bunker, buried among aging BattleMechs and other combat platforms.

And then they'd forgotten about it.

If the core was still functional, and my memories indicated it should be, the systems on New Dallas had been dutifully trawling local planetary networks, as well as accepting periodic updates from other computers in nearby systems… for at least two centuries, a good two hundred years. Until the planet's HPG station had been destroyed during the fall of New Dallas, and the world subsequently abandoned.

On the main screen, someone from Sharma's group, whoever's viewpoint we were following, tapped the keyboard. It wasn't a standard keyboard layout, I noted, though I didn't recognise the arrangement. That was the Terran Hegemony at work, I supposed.

But unusual keys or not, the act was standard enough - it succeeded in bringing the terminal out of low-power standby. Beneath a fine layer of dust, an ancient viewer lit up, displaying the crest of the Terran Hegemony - a symmetrical Cameron Star rather than the asymmetrical one of the Star League, surrounded by concentric orbital circles and planets. Under the symbol were four letters: 'HCID'.

There was also a login prompt.

Carp leaned forward. "Okay, tell Sharma, first thing, look around and see if there's any sticky notes on the desk… "
 
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If the core was still functional, and my memories indicated it should be, the systems on New Dallas had been dutifully trawling local planetary networks, as well as accepting periodic updates from other computers in nearby systems… for at least two centuries, a good two hundred years. Until the planet's HPG station had been destroyed during the fall of New Dallas, and the world subsequently abandoned.

I'm not sure I understand the value here. Who cares about a bunch of intelligence reports centuries old?
 
I'm not sure I understand the value here. Who cares about a bunch of intelligence reports centuries old?

Because it has full technical specs for many many late-SLDF designs. Pretty useless without Helm... but when you combine the two you now have the knowledge to build the parts... and the knowledge of how each design is put together.

So now you know how a Warhammer 6Rb is put together, a 2R Marauder, etc etc.

Edit: Most of our knowledge of late-era SLDF hardware, including the special hardware the SLDF Royal Divisions used, comes in-universe from the New Dallas core. The rest comes from the Clanners opening databases to Inner Sphere researchers.
 
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I'm not sure I understand the value here. Who cares about a bunch of intelligence reports centuries old?
It's not just intel reports, it's military schematics and all kinds of things.

Not sure how much of this is Acyl's writing and how much is canon, but the described sounds like what you'd get if you let an NSA Google spider loose to download copies of everything connected to the internet.

Though I don't have any of the Jihad sourcebooks myself.
 
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"We've found a partially ejected data chip stuck in the reader behind the vanity cover."
"It looks like it got caught on DymoTM​ label while ejecting, let me pull that out."
"It reads 'Hirenz Diagnostic Loader'."
"Madam? Say again."
"Yes, there's another label still attached to the chip 'insert, then hold L R Start.'"
"Madam? Madam?! I can't hear control over your giggling."
"Control. We've tried following the instruction but it didn't seem to do anything."
"Cursor keys? Left and Right?"
"That seems even less - Okay, the screen has changed and it's loaded a menu with."
"It can't be that easy."
"What do you mean that will work on all other systems."
"Our predecessors were idiots."

edit: Google translate of Wikipedia page for Hiren's Boot CD
 
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