Attempting to Subvert the Plan: Dominion Edition

Retcon: Should General Horner (the MC) have been The Magistrate (Starcraft 1 PC)?

  • Yes

    Votes: 35 43.8%
  • No

    Votes: 29 36.3%
  • This does not matter to me

    Votes: 16 20.0%

  • Total voters
    80
  • Poll closed .
[] Plan: Building a Foundation
-[] 50% of the Dominion Budget
-[] Build the Broken Mesa Xenobiology Institute
-[] Complete a Dominion-Wide Census
-[] Military Surplus
-[] Additional Security
-[] Accept the deal

Alright, if that's the case, then this is my new favored plan. 40 Paranoia is a bit much, because I actually count a net +20 because we should also do the Hydroponics, probably, because it's the right thing to do, but we can probably find a few more cost reductions, figure out a few flashy Paranoia dumpers, maybe? I still think it's a bit risky, but I think this might be worth it.
 
[] Plan: Building a Foundation
-[] 50% of the Dominion Budget
-[] Build the Broken Mesa Xenobiology Institute
-[] Complete a Dominion-Wide Census
-[] Military Surplus
-[] Additional Security
-[] Accept the deal

Alright, if that's the case, then this is my new favored plan. 40 Paranoia is a bit much, because I actually count a net +20 because we should also do the Hydroponics, probably, because it's the right thing to do, but we can probably find a few more cost reductions, figure out a few flashy Paranoia dumpers, maybe? I still think it's a bit risky, but I think this might be worth it.
Don't forget that Augustgrad will be a reliable form of Paranoia reduction (-10) every phase. That's a net (-40) by the end of our probation period if we accept Mengsk's offer. Military projects also seem to provide Paranoia reductions by default.

I genuinely think Military Surplus is a must-have to reduce the daunting task of Planetary Reconstruction, the effect should apply to future phases too. And speaking in-character, it would be a waste to leave such useful equipment idling around.
 
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[] Military Surplus
While you're having to manufacture, import, or borrow every scrap of material you can find, the Dominion Military is flush with surplus prefab buildings, equipment, and other things you desperately need. The number of unused barracks buildings alone is staggering. You happen to know that Duke has a warehouse full of SCVs, not being used. By anyone! Surely he can shake something loose for you.
(Lose 1 Leverage; reduce necessary Progress for all Planetary Reconstruction phases by 100)
I'll note that this specifies Planetary reconstruction rather than just the later. To my knowledge we only have two projects which benefit from this unless the new one's we got from our new underling also qualify.
 
I'll note that this specifies Planetary reconstruction rather than just the later. To my knowledge we only have two projects which benefit from this unless the new one's we got from our new underling also qualify.
Etran confirmed that Brontes would be slated as another Planetary Reconstruction project once Duke is done clearing it out. Considering the sheer destruction that's been inflicted, there will be multiple phases for each planet that would have the -100 reduction applied to. The saved dice and costs are worth it, imo.
 
For those interested, a list of what projects would receive benefits from the concessions:

[] Brontes: Orbital Cleanup (Phase 1) [Reconstruction]
The space above the core world of Brontes was host to no less than three pitched naval battles between various combinations of the Confederacy, the Sons of Korhal, and the Zerg. As a result, planetary orbit is thick with debris, some of which may very well still be alive. While military reclamation efforts continue on the surface, General Duke has requested that the Treasury begin sweeping Brontes space to make planetfall easier for his steady flow of incoming reinforcements. The sooner Duke is finished on Brontes, the sooner we can get down there to rebuild. And, hey, there's bound to be some valuable salvage in that orbital field.
(Progress 172/300 200, -20R -15 per die, Resource gain)
[] Guard Intervention
[] Additional Security

[] Nephor II: Planetary Reconstruction (Phase 1) [Reconstruction]
The industrial world of Nephor II was hit hard by the Great War; while the Zerg presence was minimal, the fighting between the Sons and the Confederates was fierce, especially once the factory workers started taking sides. Many of the world's valuable manufactories are in ruins, its hab-blocks burnt out and abandoned, and productivity is at an all-time low. This is not a workable state of affairs; the Dominion needs those factories, and to restart them it needs housing for their workers.
(Progress 0/600 0/500, -10R per die)
[] Military Surplus

[] Tyrador IX: Planetary Reconstruction (Phase 1) [Reconstruction]
The resort world of Tyrador IX received a massive influx of refugees during the Great War, all of them fleeing Zerg, Protoss, and warring factions alike. Most of them have been housed in temporary disaster shelters and other pop-up habitats on Tyrador's sparsely populated second continent, where they've suffered from bad weather, inadequate provisions, and general lawlessness. The first step to fixing the problem is building permanent towns where temporary camps now stand, in order to provide stability and comfort.
(Progress 0/500 0/400, -10R per die)
[] Military Surplus

[] Nephor II: Nephor Industrial Megacomplex (Phase 1) [Reconstruction]

The NIM was the premier mega-factory in all of Confederate space, allegedly superior to even the forge-world of Moria. Now it sits abandoned, partially burnt out, and in need of serious TLC. In truth, despite its shining reputation, the Megacomplex was subject to a substantial diversion of funds and major corruption even prior to the Great War, and its surviving machines are run-down and out of date. A comprehensive reworking is necessary for it to reach anything like its prior claimed output.
(Progress 0/400, -15R -10 per die, Resource income)
[] Additional security

[] Dylar IV: Dylarian Shipyards (Phase 1) [Reconstruction]

The Dylarian Shipyards have been the centerpiece of Terran naval development since the establishment of the Confederacy. They're a vast orbital network of spacedocks, foundries, recyclers, parts depots, and personnel habitats. They're also heavily damaged following a major push by the Zerg during the Great War, and their keystone, the great capital shipyards, are inactive. Without their refurbishment, every dropship and battleship is irreplaceable.
(Progress 0/600, --20 -15R per die, -10 Paranoia)
[] Additional security

[] Brontes: Refloating the Fleet (Phase 1)
While some of the derelict vessels surrounding Brontes are little more than assemblages of pulverized metal and circuits, there are quite a few that are more or less intact, save for one or two major issues. General Duke has requested that those vessels deemed suitable for 'refloating' (some ancient Terran naval term) be towed to the shipyards for repair and refit. By reclaiming both Sons and Confederate ships, we could bring the navy back up to a shadow of its former self relatively quickly.
(Progress 0/300 0/200, -20R per die, -10 Paranoia)
[] Guard Intervention

[] Re-Establish the Universal News Network [Reconstruction]
The Universal News Network, or UNN, was a major pillar of Confederate propaganda during its heyday. However, as its employees began developing things like "ethics," and when no official denial could cover up losing multiple planets, the Confed government shut it down and jailed its reporters. By reopening the news service, we can broadcast the Dominion's successes across the sector... if occasionally also its failures.
(Progress 0/100, -15 -10R per die, +5 Paranoia)
[] Additional security

And as a reminder, what projects we might find ourselves agreeing to finish within the next 4 turns:

[] Korhal: Capital City Augustgrad (Phase 1) [MANDATORY]
The Emperor's vision for the throne world begins with its capital: Augustgrad. Named after Mengsk's illustrious grandfather, Augustgrad is intended to be a planned metropolis that will become the beating heart of the entire Terran Dominion. Projected to include an enormous Imperial Palace, vast housing and commercial districts, and multiple rings of defensive walls and emplacements, it will far exceed anything Old Tarsonis had to offer... someday.
(Progress 93/300, -10R per die, -10 Paranoia when complete)

[] Korhal: Broken Mesa Xenobiology Institute
The Security Ministry has selected the Broken Mesa region of Korhal for the construction of a special research site, which from the plans appears to be something more akin to an entire small city, walls and all. The proposed defenses are elaborate, multi-layered, and as focused inward as outward. I'm sure you can guess what that means.
(Progress 0/200, -20R per die, -10 Paranoia)

[] Dylar IV: Dylarian Shipyards (Phase 1) [Reconstruction]
The Dylarian Shipyards have been the centerpiece of Terran naval development since the establishment of the Confederacy. They're a vast orbital network of spacedocks, foundries, recyclers, parts depots, and personnel habitats. They're also heavily damaged following a major push by the Zerg during the Great War, and their keystone, the great capital shipyards, are inactive. Without their refurbishment, every dropship and battleship is irreplaceable.
(Progress 0/600, -20R per die, -10 Paranoia)

[] Conduct a Dominion-Wide Census [Reconstruction]
The Confederate census process was like pretty much everything in the late Confederacy: corrupt, ineffective, and about five years behind schedule. Combined with the massive upheaval in the sector, and you have no idea how many people actually live in the Dominion, much less what they do. Equipping a legion of census-takers with clipboards and a standard questionnaire will provide ample short-term employment and give you a much better picture of what the hell is going on.
(Progress 0/300, -10R per die)
 
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[X] Plan Lion-Tamer
-[X] 50% of the Dominion Budget
-[X] Build the Broken Mesa Xenobiology Institute
-[X] Complete a Dominion-Wide Census
-[X] Military Surplus
-[X] Guard Intervention
-[X] Additional Security
-[X] Accept the deal

For the record, I've got nothing against Laurent's Plan Building a Foundation and depending on how things shake out might end up voting for it myself. Difference is 10 Paranoia and an unknown amount of progress saved since we have no idea how many phases the Brontes projects have. Per phase though, it's a reduction of approximately 30 Resources on average, taking Additional Security into account.
 
In the interest of providing options, here's a plan that requisitions 60% of the budget. Duke won't be happy, but it would open up some interesting possibilities (such as using Victoria's trait to rebuild Nephor II), and would somewhat limit the amount of mischief Internal Security could get up to.

[X] Plan Butter Not Guns
-[X] 60% of the Dominion Budget
-[X] Build the Broken Mesa Xenobiology Institute
-[X] Complete a Dominion-Wide Census
-[X] Military Surplus
-[X] Accept the deal

Total: +30 Paranoia

We will have to refurbish the shipyards eventually, but the issue is that it (along with other military spending) doesn't really contribute to economic growth. Better to front-load the reconstruction efforts.
 
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[X] Plan: Building a Foundation
-[X] 50% of the Dominion Budget
-[X] Build the Broken Mesa Xenobiology Institute
-[X] Complete a Dominion-Wide Census
-[X] Military Surplus
-[X] Additional Security
-[X] Accept the deal
 
[X] Plan: Building a Foundation
-[X] 50% of the Dominion Budget
-[X] Build the Broken Mesa Xenobiology Institute
-[X] Complete a Dominion-Wide Census
-[X] Military Surplus
-[X] Additional Security
-[X] Accept the deal
 
[X] Plan: Building a Foundation
-[X] 50% of the Dominion Budget
-[X] Build the Broken Mesa Xenobiology Institute
-[X] Complete a Dominion-Wide Census
-[X] Military Surplus
-[X] Additional Security
-[X] Accept the deal
 
Can someone please check Smith's keyboard and make sure the period key still works? Maybe dock his pay for every sentence more than twenty words long? :p

I literally think like this Simon and have to edit my thoughts into something other people are willing to read. Apparently Smith has no fucks to give on who reads his writing.

How about no. Monarchism is nonsense, bloodcraft inherently disrespects the value of human life and human rights.

I hardly think a liberal democracy or whatnot will be great, but it'll be better than any absolute monarchy, "enlightened" or not, and it's about what we have hope for--and about what might be in-character to actually want.

Democracy always lead to tyranny and terror
You have just to look up the Reign of Terror as a example of that the masses are offtern not smarten then a donky's ass

But lets not bring real world views to much into this yeah

Better to agree to disagree

Alright no. I'm not putting up with this. Let's talk about the French Revolution, it's many failures, how Liberal Democracy is just a failed state of Monarchy and why the EU is what it is. Because it matters, especially in this quest where we seek to unfuck a setting before millions more die from war which while unpreventable are still within our purview to mitigate.

Alright let's start with how Absolute Monarchy In France even happened:

- 9th century civic functions (Counts, Marquis, Duke, Ect.) slowly evolved trough most of the middle ages into hereditary positions held by specific families trough a combination of corruption, war induced decentralization and political alliances. It would be like if today county mayors, sheriffs and military captains became hereditary positions because the US was repeatedly invaded by enemies while fighting multiple civil wars trough the centuries.

- By the time of Louis XIII there were only a few political factions left in France and Cardinal Richelieu (yes the one from the Three Musketeers) set into motion a sequence of events (Legal Codification of the French Core, Edict of Fontainebleau which removed the religious protections the Huguenots enjoyed until then destroying their foundations as a political power, bribing the French Nobility with the Palace of Versailles to give up their hereditary duties as royal representatives which were then assigned by Jean-Baptiste Colbert to non-hereditary royal appointees which were drawn from the merchant class, the systematic removal of non-border fortifications as a cost-cutting measure that undermined the military power of the French Aristocracy, ect.) that led to Louis XIV becoming the first absolute monarch of France.

- This then had the consequence of the Absolute Monarchy relying on the merchant class to hold it up which at the same time causing a devastating brain drain of the merchant class into the Thirteen Colonies because of the flight of the Huguenots to the future USA left a logistic network that made it easy for losing merchant families to leave France for the East Coast. This in turn led to the decline of France as a geopolitical power which then led to the crisis that was the French Revolution. Also led to the Thirteen Colonies gaining in geopolitical power to the point that they could then declare independence from the British Crown and become the USA.

So the French Revolution happens on the 5th of May 1789 and the French First Republic is a thing people claim existed from the 21st of September 1792 until Napoleon takes over on the 9th of November 1799 and officially creates his First French Empire in the 18th of May 1804:

- As the political struggle between revolutionary and counter-revolutionary forces reaches it's boiling point in July of 1792 with the Duke of Brunswick leading the Austro-Prussian Army to help the counter-revolutionaries having Louis Joseph de Bourbon, a member of a cadet branch of the royal family, make the Brunswick Manifesto to intimidate the populace of France into submission. Instead it is used as the excuse, the King and the Legislative Assembly were reaching a boiling point on their own, to start the Insurrection of 10 August 1792 which led to the Legislative Assembly becoming the National Convention.

- Now historians can argue about when the Reign of Terror started, but quite frankly I don't give a shit about their quibbles on when and whether it was a White Terror, so I'm just going to point to the Coup of 18 Brumaire when Napoleon basically won the battle royale between the various revolutionary factions and then proceeded to create the First French Empire.

- As for the French Republic created out of the French Revolution? It is a piece of historical fiction because whenever you look at the situation on the ground in the period before Napoleon takes over there is only the unified foreign policy that gives the French state any sort of form. Everything else is just multiple competing political organizations vying in a civil battle royale to rule France with an absolutist power.

After Napoleon Bonaparte takes over, creates the First French Empire with the goal of being a new Charlemagne (yes really) and goes on a rampage trough Europe until he is defeated and overthrown and the Bourbon Restoration is enacted on the 3rd of May 1814 (no I am not getting into the 100 day nonsense that followed) with first Louis XVIII and then Charles X reigning over France gets the 26th July of 1830 when the House of Bourbon is overthrown by the 4th House of Orléans who then become the Monarchs of France until the 22nd of February of 1848 when Napoleon III first proclaimed the French Second Republic to gather enough political capital to proclaim the Second French Empire which then collapsed into the Third French Republic on the 1st of September 1870 when this Napoleon got himself captured at the Battle of Sedan:

- This entire 70-year period is one authoritarian after another playing musical chairs with the French Crown while France industrializes into a modern nation and more and more concessions are given to universal human rights in the name of maintaining their power.

- The culture of the French people is laid bare in these times: So long as their quality of life is maintained they don't care. As soon as it starts to decline they get violently revolutionary with their leadership and install whoever they believe will improve their standard of living.

The French Imperial Democracy lasted from the 1st of September of 1870 with the proclamation of the Third French Republic until the November 28th of 1960 at which point France was actually a Republic even if it didn't want to be and continues to try and return to it's old glory days of being a global Empire:

- The French Third Republic wasn't so much a Republic as it was the French Revolution just without the Terror this time we swear. Which meant that there were still popular generals trying to become emperors and the corruption that plagued France throughout it's existence now got to be front and center as political agitators used it to campaign for their election. What it did manage to do trough the failures of the would-be-Emperors and the slow yielding of those in power to the demands of the people for a better life is remove the sheer brutality that characterized life in France until then. There were still plenty of fascist groups that went around killing their political rivals, but at this point this wasn't an expected part of the political life which meant that the culture of France had finally shifted more to the left most of a century after the French Revolution.

- The Nazi Occupation and Vichy France brought back the Terror for a brief moment and then the French Fourth Republic tried to be a continuation of the Third Republic, but it failed because of divisions opened up by WWII and necessitated a new form of government leading to the French Fifth Republic that started as De Gaulle's attempt to be a new Napoleon which failed because of the stillbirth of the French Community. So now France got stuck into being an actual Republic.

In 1948 because of the propagandist need to distance themselves from the Axis powers and at the same time maintain the capitalist world order the Five Eyes organize a Western Union, which was supposed to be the European side of NATO, to defend their allies and interests in Europe. Instead the Western Union actually has people in Europe tired of war say hey good idea and expand it into a Western European Union which then becomes the European Union as we know it today in the 90s and 00s:

- As the Fifth Republic got under way between De Gaulle's increasing movement to be the new Napoleon and the Pan-European Identity rising up out of the ashes of WWII there was a shatter point where De Gaulle threatened his resignation if his referendum was rejected. The French people gave him the boot and after that France started to shift in direction to becoming the state people know today.

- Meanwhile with the rise of the EU came the rise of Eurosceptics and pro-Europeans shifting the web of political alliances onto the super-state that is the EU while at the same time quieting down those of the domestic political movements that couldn't get a Europe-wide reach with their actions.

As such:

I dont care leave that moralising out of the door you want to be gun ho all i am saying is be smart play the long game

And if you have no other better arguments then bub but he is monster then you wont be confincing me and i hope others as well

There is no long game without the short and the mid games. We have to start building a better society now or all we will ever have in the Koprulu Sector is one corrupt military-industrial complex after another. Valerian isn't an actual long term solution to the issues that plague human society in the Sector because for all his efforts he will be overthrown as soon as the quality of life in the Sector dips. And it will dip at some point from conservatives wanting the good old days if nothing else. We need systemic solutions so that in the third millennium there is not only war for who will sit in the chair made of melted C-14 rifles.
 
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