Wormverse ideas, recs, and fic discussion thread 1

Go for it! As long as it's got actual plot points I don't think anyone will mind.

It's been a while since I watched Stargate, but I'll take a shot at explaining the Ori and Orici:
What little we know of Alteran society is a bit of a clusterfuck, but was mostly comprised of the group known as the Ori. Eventually the religious extremists of the Ori faction became genocidal, and so the survivors fled their galaxy eventually reaching what they called Avalon (The Milky Way), and would be remembered as the Ancients (or Lanteans, or the Ancestors).

Humans in SG1 are the descendants/evolution of the Alterans, and are unknowingly hidden and protected from the Ori by the Ancients who have both ascended to a higher level of reality (energy beings). Humanity doesn't know this because the Ancients have a law of non-interference, so thousands of years later they (*CoughDanielJacksonCough*) accidentally break this concealment and draw the Ori's attention to the Milky Way.

Where the Ancients are scientific and isolationist, the Ori are interventionist and religious, this has led to the belief that as ascended beings they deserve to be worshiped, and from the faith and prayer of their mortal followers they draw power and strength, which they grant a small portion of to their mortal religious leaders, the Priors.

The Priors are dispatched to the Milky Way to convert the inhabitants to the Way of Origin... and kill them if they refuse, but the Ori themselves cannnot interfere personally within the Milky Way because then the ascended Ancients will have cause to drop their Non-Interference laws and dive headfirst into an ascended fist-fight. So they find a way around that.

The Orici is the leader of the mortal Ori army, but Adria is much more than that. She is evil Jesus, concieved in Vala Mal Doran without a father, with all (?) the magic powers and knowledge of the ascended Ori, contained in a mortal body. She is to lead the Ori Army because, due to a loophole, despite her being half-ascended she is still considered mostly mortal by Ancients' laws, so they can't take her out until she "dies".

The plot of SG1 closes with the Ori utterly exterminated, and Adria ascending as the last Ori and then trapped in ascended combat with/by Ganos Lal (Morgan la Fay) for all eternity.
So Orici = faith powered physical deity with a sci-fi flair. Cool.

The power idea was a fashion based Trump who would get a different power/set of powers depending on the outfit they were wearing. You could make it as simple as "I'm wearing a ninja costume. I am now a ninja." or you could have the powers be based on the feelings that Taylor associates with the specific outfit, so an outfit made to blend into a crowd might give some form of Stranger power or a light 'airy' outfit might give some form of flight or aerokinesis.

To keep the power-sets distinct you'd probably want some kind of 'completeness' requirement so her power is only triggering on well-coordinated outfits and not like, sweatpants and a baggy t-shirt. Unless she really pulls off the look I suppose.

The way it fits into Heavily-Merchandised!Taylor is obvious, especially if her outfits are made up of normal or at least normal looking clothes. Hello, designer fashion line! And, y'know, Emma is a model. So that'd be a thing.

It could also be interesting to have some powers be inaccessible early in the story, not from some artificial power limitation or anything but just because Taylor is unlikely to wear any outfits that are too flamboyent or revealing at first.
 
I kinda like this, but I have no clue if I'm meant to know what this shadow war is
Nah, it's just a concept. If Taylor's mother was actually Skitter2​, if she moved on from Lustrum to other causes, and if she got in too deep to go back to a normal life.

When Annette's used at all, she's usually canonized. I was imagining an angrier, more motivated, more manipulative Annette. Someone who it makes more sense for Taylor to be the daughter of, knowing how Skitter turns out.
 
A place for fun and joy! A little bit of Emily Piggot history for the Rifts story I'm working on. (Other history snuck in.)

For people who aren't Rifts-aware, Hermann Voss is actually a bog-standard VX-500 full-conversion 'Borg, which is basically the gameline's mascot cyborg. (The SAMAS and its variants are its mascot power armor.)

Interlude: Red Type

"This is stupid." The voice had a German accent, though a relatively light one, and came from next to her. It was pitched too softly for others to overhear, which was good considering the content.

Emily Piggot glanced aside at the cape assigned to support her platoon. "Didn't you emigrate after you unmasked and then picked one too many fights with Gesellschaft?" she replied, in the same quiet tone.

"Ja." The red-colored cyborg next to her replied, without heat. If anything he sounded amused, though since he was masked up behind the demonic faceplate of his heavy armor it was impossible to be sure. "But then I cannot pretend to be normal, and thus what use is a mask save armor for the head?" He had a point. Even underneath the heavy armor that he wore as extra protection, Hermann Voss' body had been wholly replaced by cybernetics he made with his Tinker abilities. He could no longer pass for a regular human, even if she knew that under the demonic-looking face was one that looked just like a human face and did all the things a human face did.

In a way, she found Hermann Voss admirable. For a grunt, service was an offering; you offered your life to your country, and sometimes it accepted. Not Voss. He had made his choices with care, and locked himself out of any other path on purpose. For Voss, service was a chosen destiny. She raised her voice. "THIRD HERD! MOVE OUT!"

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It didn't take long for things to go wrong. Hyakowa died to a tiny thing, with knives for arms, sweeping the first structure. It had dropped from the ceiling and slashed his throat to ribbons before they could do anything. That had been just a taste, though. They'd made it as far as the center of the town, and she could see Calvert's platoon across the square, when there had been at least a dozen cries of "Contact!" and two brief screams. And then the capes had abandoned them as things converged on their position. All but one. Voss was still there, running at his enhanced speeds between various parts of the platoon, firing both the weapon he'd brought, some kind of energy blaster, and a squad machine gun he'd picked up after her first squad's gun team had been killed by something with five legs and the ability to throw lightning.

Emily put her rifle to her shoulder and fired a pair of three-round bursts into the vaguely humanoid shape in front of her, center mass. It went over, but kept moving, and she dropped and rolled to the side as it spewed flame at her. Her RTO, Hernandez, hit it with a grenade from his rifle's grenade launcher, and that at least killed it. "That was my last grenade, El-Tee!" She nodded, registering it but not really listening to him, and cocked her head a moment. Shit. She couldn't hear any sound of fighting behind her anymore. She glanced back but couldn't see anything. She should have been able to hear Calvert's people, at least. And her own rearguard should have been...

Something leaped a fence to her side and she brought her rifle around before recognizing the red color. Voss set down two people, who looked...well actually they didn't look any more scared than anyone else, even given the ride. That was Satterlee and...she didn't recognize the other. His face was burned but he was still standing. "Leutnant. I regret to report first squad is annihilated, and Jackson is all that's left of second platoon." Voss' voice was clipped, and his head snapped to one side, followed by a panel in his right leg dropping open and a gun barrel falling out, firing two energy blasts into something that had just came around the corner behind them. "And our position is compromised."

"Fuck!" Her rapidly shrinking command was down from forty to fifteen now, by her count, her command group and the remains of third squad who were near the edge of the perimeter. Firing picked up from that direction and Voss was off again as quickly as he'd come, heading to support them. She climbed to her feet, then looked at the seven soldiers around her and started jogging. "Come on, we need to close it up!"

The sound of helicopter rotors made her look up, but it was distant, closer to Calvert's position. Damn. "Keep moving!" A moment later she heard sharp explosions to her front, louder than grenades. She knew Voss' frame had a limited number of missiles, carried in launch tubes on the back.

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There were seven of them left. They were close to the edge of town. Hernandez was out of ammunition. Jackson and Weathers were both wounded badly with burns but their legs and trigger fingers still worked. van Buren had lost a leg, and was being carried in Voss' one remaining arm; the cyborg wasn't as crippled as a human being would be by the loss, but his own left leg was damaged, limiting him to a human jog rather than speeds more suited to cars. Emily doubted they had more than six mags, her sidearm's nine rounds, and a grenade left between them. Even Voss had warned her he had less than twenty shots left between the two weapons that had been concealed in his legs. The radio had taken some acid meant for Hernandez, but Voss still had his built-in comms so they weren't out of contact. She wiped sweat and blood from trickling cut on her head from her eyes and leapfrogged to the next building.

"Leutnant." Voss said next to her. He wasn't point only because he was carrying van Buren, who despite the acid-burned-off leg and the morphine syrette for pain looked alert, clutching her rifle with conspicuously pale knuckles against her dark skin. She looked like a child being carried by the eight-foot cyborg. "I think it is time to consider other options."

"I'm listening." Emily said quietly.

"There is a flight of Air Force planes overhead. PRT Command has refused to give me their frequency, but I have been able to locate it anyways. They are armed with bombs, Leutnant. With your permission, I will attempt to talk to them directly and have them blast open a path for us to clear the town, where a personnel carrier can reach us. We will both likely be accused of insubordination and possibly secrecy violations." Voss' tone was matter-of-fact.

Decision came easily to her. "Do it."

xxx
There were five of them. Weathers had dropped dead from an undetected poison in his wounds in the personnel carrier. Hernandez had his torso crushed by a falling piece of masonry when the bombs had come in nearly on top of them. Emily didn't hold it against the Viper drivers. She knew all about the fortunes of war now. She ached all over and they'd extracted a six-inch-long sliver of stone that had come in just under her ballistic vest from her back. She hadn't even known it was there until she was in the personnel carrier and tried to sit down as the adrenaline drained away. Fortunately it'd missed her spine. The rest of the survivors were trying and mostly succeeding to sleep on cots, except for Van Buren, who had been airlifted straight to the nearest hospital.

There was a yelling voice outside the tent, being answered in English with occasional German. Very pungent, but much more controlled in volume, German. Pumped up on painkillers and in an extremely bad mood, she undid the flap on her sidearm holster and stalked out of the tent. Her people had been all but abandoned and she was damned if they were going to be denied even a chance to sleep now. Her tone as she lifted the flap of the tent was a snarl. "The fuck is going on out here?"

It was Eidolon. Eidolon was actually having an argument with Voss, using the man's cape name. He'd been known as Red Type once, part of the trio of 1989 European cyborg tinkers dubbed Red Type, Gold Type, and Green Type by the press. He had insisted, in the pre-operation meeting, that his name was Voss to her. Maybe it was the painkillers talking but it seemed like a deliberate insult to use his cape name in that light. Voss turned and stood to attention with his working arm. "Fraulein Leutnant. I was just having a spirited discussion with my fellow cape regarding your disposition."

"He was preventing me from interviewing-" Eidolon started.

"You will get the after-action report after my people have had a chance to sleep and not before. Now get the fuck out of my platoon area." Yes, she was talking to one of the highest members of the Protectorate, but they supported PRT troops in the field, and frankly she didn't give a damn. He wasn't there when everything went to shit. He could wait his fucking turn.

"That's a rather inflated-"

Voss' arm lashed out with lightning speed, grabbing a shoulder, and started pushing Eidolon away. "Herr Eidolon, if I were not out of charges for my weapons I would consider that grossly disrespectful, indeed fighting words, and try to harm you. The Leutnant is not out of ammunition." It brought a bit of childish glee to her, to see the most powerful cape in the Protectorate being essentially frog-marched away. She turned back and found a cot of her own.

xxx​

It was a banishment. They'd dressed it up nicely, but being sent to PRT ENE to keep her quiet about how much of a clusterfuck Ellisburg had been wasn't that surprising. They'd needed a big reward for a really big clusterfuck, especially the initially blown diagnosis that hadn't noticed a slow internal bleed from her left kidney, which had nearly killed her and cost her a kidney. Her old platoonmates and Jackson had been sent with her, to form a new strike team. And so had Calvert, though his team hated him by all accounts. The only man to survive of his platoon, sailors would have called him a Jonah. PRT grunts just called him a coward.

He'd change that in time. Calvert was slick. But slick like an oil spill, not naturally frictionless. He'd have to be watched. But she hadn't expected this. "Voss?"

"Director." The eight-foot-tall cyborg gleamed with a new flawless coat of red paint. She'd heard it had taken nearly a year for him to repair himself, and that Gesellschaft had apparently sent assassins while he was damaged but failed. "Where else would I be but among comrades in arms?"

xxx
There'd been a lot of hope in the world in 1995, after the Moscow Miracle. Of course, then Leviathan happened, and then the Simurgh, but at least Leviathan was a bit slower than his brother had been, and definitely slower than his sister. Now Leviathan was at Newfoundland, and several of Brockton's capes were there to fight him along with many others.

All Emily could do was listen to the radio. She had thought she would eventually get used to listening to the radio and being unable to exert a direct influence on the action, but she never had. Even if there was nothing she and an M4 could have done to an Endbringer she still itched to be there, to take action no matter how futile, rather than to listen to the radio and wait to find out if her people were alive or dead. Armsmaster, who she even liked in a way, the way a craftsman might regard a favored tool; disciplined, trustworthy, executed his orders. And Voss, who had long since become her strong right arm.

The truth was she couldn't risk any more of the Protectorate's capes here. Not with Kaiser sure to make power moves soon to demonstrate his new control of the Empire, after the death of Allfather. If only he'd suddenly develop an altruistic bone and turn up to some Endbringer fight and get killed. That'd be wonderful, solve problems. Her tenure as Director had so far been well-received, with aggressive patrolling pushing back the Empire. How much of that was due to Allfather getting old...well, now they'd find out.

The radio poured out exclamations of dismay. Newfoundland was sinking. She leaned back in her chair and closed her eyes. The odds were bad. Very bad now. Not many people were going to get away...

"Red Type. No signal."

Damn.
 
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Are there any Worm fics that showcase Brian (Grue) as a viewpoint or important character?

I can't find many stories about, or even with, one of the best (in my opinion) characters in Worm, and that's fairly depressing.
 
Wouldn't he be under just as much threat? I guess if the justification is that her feminist friends wouldn't agree to harbor him...but that still seems like it might be something she'd be concerned about
I was imagining two possible reasons for this.

In one scenario, Annette thinks Danny would be too much of a liability. He's kind of a timid homebody, and she thinks dragging him along would put Taylor in danger.

In the other scenario, it would be going the full manipulative pragmatist route. Annette would be overstating the danger to recruit her (newly parahuman and suddenly useful) daughter for her civil rights/anti-corruption/anti-villain shadow war.
 
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Wouldn't he be under just as much threat? I guess if the justification is that her feminist friends wouldn't agree to harbor him...but that still seems like it might be something she'd be concerned about

Nah. He was John Wick in a previous life. Anyone who comes after him deserves whatever happens next.

Possibly including Annette trying to steal his daughter and leaving him out in the cold for years.
 
Nah, it's just a concept. If Taylor's mother was actually Skitter2​, if she moved on from Lustrum to other causes, and if she got in too deep to go back to a normal life.

When Annette's used at all, she's usually canonized. I was imagining an angrier, more motivated, more manipulative Annette. Someone who it makes more sense for Taylor to be the daughter of, knowing how Skitter turns out.

Little weird she was like "Yeah feminism won that fight is over" though. Like that's a kind of... well it's not the kind of opinion you'd expect from Annette.

Just saying you may want to reword that bit so it sounds less like "sexism is over" I guess.

Wouldn't he be under just as much threat? I guess if the justification is that her feminist friends wouldn't agree to harbor him...but that still seems like it might be something she'd be concerned about

I was imagining two possible reasons for this.

In one scenario, Annette thinks Danny would be too much of a liability. He's kind of a timid homebody, and she thinks dragging him along would put Taylor in danger.

In the other scenario, it would be going the full manipulative pragmatist route. Annette would be overstating the danger to recruit her (newly parahuman and suddenly useful) daughter for her civil rights/anti-corruption/anti-villain shadow war.

IMO go for number 2 with her implying to Taylor the justification is #1.

Would be the most interesting route I think.

Alternatively Danny has a bolt hole of his own and she sent him a separate message to go there.

He knows some people through the union that can set him up on the other side of the country with a new name and all the papers he needs and who owe him a favour.
 
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Little weird she was like "Yeah feminism won that fight is over" though.
If you think that's my actual opinion an are trying to correct me on it, fair shout. Only someone truly blind would claim that sexism is over. However, it looks more like you seized on an ambiguous statement about the triumph of ideas, and made about the most inflammatory misquoting possible!? The triumph of ideas she was talking about was stuff like Wilson Brady, the UN declaration, the 90s civil rights act etc. I literally never wrote that line between your quote marks, or anything like it.
 
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Are there any Worm fics that showcase Brian (Grue) as a viewpoint or important character?

I can't find many stories about, or even with, one of the best (in my opinion) characters in Worm, and that's fairly depressing.
Someone took with the idea of Grue basically being Tinker tech away from being Batman and ran with it.
Worm's Finest: Darkness Rising (Worm/DC fusion; Bat!Grue)

Seriously, martial arts, darkness/stealth, image orientated, no nonsense. Brian has the role in the bag/

@Cyclone did a great job with it.
 
I was kicking around Quora and I stumbled across the question "A family friend's daughter is bullying my daughter. How can I handle this without destroying the relationship?"
Danny, is that you? ;)
 
If you think that's my actual opinion an are trying to correct me on it, fair shout. Only someone truly blind would claim that sexism is over. However, it looks more like you seized on an ambiguous statement about the triumph of ideas, and made about the most inflammatory misquoting possible!? The triumph of ideas she was talking about was stuff like Wilson Brady, the UN declaration, the 90s civil rights act etc. I literally never wrote that line between your quote marks, or anything like it.

I'm not saying that's what you believe (I doubt you'd write Annette as sympathetic if so) I'm saying that the way she worded it in the monologue came off a bit odd. On rereading though I think I misread the repeated line as more general than you meant it.

Time passed. While we'd been fighting our pitched battles, a quieter kind of victory had happened without us even noticing. We'd shed blood, but it was our ideas which had triumphed. Our ideas, which had been fighting their own quiet, bloodless war the whole time. We'd fought with knives, guns, even bombs. We never realized how sharp a blade our ideas could have been.

After Lustrum was convicted the world started to change, and The Luminous changed with it. Feminism was no longer the battle.

Feminism was no longer the battle.

So yeah my bad. My brain picked that up as "feminism is no longer the battle cause it's won by the peaceful groups" not "feminism is no longer the battle cause The Luminous ceded it to the peaceful ones to keep doing what they do while we went after others".
 
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Yes, i know i'm looking at them now. So what kind of camp/ slum would have hero presence, but minimal, that is not part of a city?
Tents of various make and several portapotties every dozen or so feet. Probably a few makeshift fences made from linen or scrap.

Mobile homes, RVs and trailers for the 'richer' folk and a glorified lean-to made of a large cloth for the poorer ones.
 
Author's Notes

As I was working on the latest chapter of Admiral, I've realised that the story demanded something which I'm not able to provide. I've dug myself into a hole, and while a better writer would fill it up with a foundation on which to build an edifice this was beyond me. A story based on something like SRW would demand multiple protagonists, but I can already see myself meandering up several paths, and the story will suffer thanks to this. So, I've decided to put this one into deep freeze, until I feel confident enough for the challenge.

That said, I do have a story about a Taylor in a towering body of steel I still wished to tell. Which in hindsight I probably should have started with.

/x/

Peerless Guardian (Worm/ Mazinger Z(ero) )

/x/

An endless darkness that stretched forever, a silence where your voice will melt away into echoes you think you hear ceaselessly. The space between realities, where time and space dies. Within this nothing dwelt a giant, his body was an iron suit of armor that went from obsidian black to shining gold according to his moods. His stature was like the tallest mountains of yore that stretched into the clouds, in days long past when he ruled the island of Bardos. He came from the stars, and fell in love with the people who worshipped him as god and king. In return, he forged sentinels for them, made of stone and steel. With his knowledge, he brought them the light of enlightenment and progress.

Then he was betrayed, by a craven coward who in the end sank Bardos into the sea, and the giant himself was trapped in a lightless prison. With only himself, and the Beast for companionship.

It slept, the shapeless Beast that surpassed the gods and demons. Possibility and destruction manifest. The giant worked around it, for nothing he did stirred the Beast. Nothing except his light that is. The Photonic Power caught it's attention, and for the first time since forever the giant felt fear. So he crafted his empire and home around it, and built a cage. An unshakable fortress of steel to contain the beast.

Once again, the giant sighed and shook his head at the memory of a past that didn't exist but due to his power. A helmet shaped like a wide-brimmed crown adorned him, two horns that shone like polished ivory that stretched out of the side of his head that reflected a light of his choosing. Reality bent its knee to the giant, yet the giant huddled behind a wall he made for fear of the beast. His fort was his prison.

The giant loathed the beast, for it represented nothing and yet was ripe with the potential for infinity. It had no name, yet was limitless in potency. A Zero.

Two hundred years ago, in a place that doesn't exist the giant created time and matter. One hundred years ago he tore down the landscapes, temples and people he created to worship him in a pique of existential angst. The giant sat down on the endless darkness from a bench forged from his will, and he knew that his light would soon extinguish.

Like a candle in a forgotten cellar. The giant roared his anguish, in a cry that echoed forever.

Then the Beast stirred once again, and the giant knew the Beast as their eyes met before the Beast slept once more.

An opening, and the giant stretched the last of his light beyond. Photonic Power reached out, till it found someone who too sought solace from fear in a fortress of iron. It was a human like those that worshiped the giant when it knew the light, a female out of girlhood, budding into adult hood. Lanky, thin and scarred in her heart.

Not worthy of his light, but the giant grew faint as the last of his light faded. And in her weakness, the giant saw the fragile, broken strength that made him love humanity.

Thus, the giant felt pity and compassion for her. He reached out to her, and made himself known to her. The giant shone for the last time, a golden glow as he reached beyond the wall of realities into the world again.

/x/

My eyes watered, dust caked my hands and my lungs burned as I dragged yet another derelict chair to add to the pile of broken, disused furniture against the metal door. The muggy air in the boiler room was unpleasant, and the smell and taste of my own body odor revolted me. But despite the taste of my sweat as I hauled more furniture meant to be disposed of to block off the door, each stacked barrier of rotten wood and rusted metal meant they were blocked out.

Who were they? Sophia who waited for me in the hallway I thought she didn't know about, ready to knock me into a wall or locker? Julia with another hanger-on on the prowl? Madison oh so eagerly giggling as she called out to the rest of her pack in her so cutesy voice? Emma?

It didn't matter. They hunted together like a pack. So I went under, to the basement where the boiler was. It was an old contraption, coal powered with a grill door so the tongues of orange fire licked out between the gaps. The door rested unsteadily on rusty hinges and It was barely safe even by the lax standards Winslow's inspectors adhered to. It was also a place that they would never think of looking for me. Too hot, filthy and beneath them. And now I've made it impenetrable, in case they changed their minds.

I laid with my back against the barricaded door, my chest heaved as I gasped for air. It was deepest winter outside, but here it felt like the armpit of a Nam jungle from the First Blood novel. My face was soaked and sticky, but my lips were dry and almost cracked to remind me I hadn't had any water since the milk with my breakfast eight hours ago. The walls were bare, grey concrete with marks in the dirt from where I had removed the stacked furniture while I removed my jacket and sat on it rather than the filthy, but empty floor. A welcoming coolness went through my jeans as soon as I spread out my legs, and soon the temptation of relief from the oppressive humidity and heat was too much. Despite the dirt and insects that scurried in the corners not lit by the light from the boiler's fire, I laid down, spread out my limbs and watched the ceiling, which was barren except for a single burnt out light bulb.

From the corner of my vision, I saw the orange light ebb and wane according to the fire. My breathing settled into a steady rhythm, while my eyes rolled to the side drawn to the light like moths to a candle. My hands, spread open and twitched as if stung. My eyelids flickered as I felt increasingly lightheaded while my breathing slowed. My mouth opened, and a wheeze escaped my lips when I saw the smoke billow out from the grills of the boiler. The cloud soon blotted out the ceiling, and I saw it approach until a flash of golden light overwhelmed me.

/x/

The darkness, it was comforting like a cocoon formed from my quilt.

That was the first thing I felt when I came to. The afterlife doesn't seem so bad.

A comforting warmth was beneath me, like the times when Mom was alive and I'd insert myself between my parents in their bed. I rolled around, on the soft fabric that I found myself buried in while I stared into the sky that peeked in between the ocean of cloth I was in.

Nothing, not even the light in between the seams I'd see when looking upwards into the blanket over my face. I huffed before I leaped to my feet, and I stumbled when I stepped onto a beige patch in between the fabric? I knelt down and gingerly touched the patch, before I brought my hand up and wondered at the oil it was now covered in. But why is there an oily surface? I scratched my head at a sudden itch, before it struck me at how familiar it all felt to me.

"You done playing with my scalp, girl? Then maybe we can talk face to face?"

A voice that rumbled like distant thunder, but carried a warm undercurrent I missed so much. The cloth-no, hair- parted as the sun reached in between towards me. The golden sheen reminded me of Scion from the few grainy videos and pictures that exist of him, but it was never so blinding as the wall of shiny metal that loomed over me.

"Can you climb onto my finger?"

"No," I placed my palm over the tip of the giant's finger. My house was like a toy made with toothpicks compared to this. "there's nothing for me to hold on to."

The world shook, and I screamed while I grabbed onto stalks of the giants hair before the finger gently nudged me upwards. I pressed my hair down, and even then the breeze as I was moved by the giant had strands of my hair flick painfully against my face until it came to an abrupt stop. From the distance he held me at, I saw him.

Beige skinned and the face of a man with sharp features that reminded me of a hawk glaring at his prey. His eyes were the size of several hulls left abandoned in the Boat Graveyard put together, and I saw him wear a helmet like a crown. A large Z, carved out of silver stood proud in the center of his headpiece, and even at the distance he held me I could not see beyond his chest for the darkness obscured the rest of him. I think there're clouds somewhere below his chest, but when I tried to lean forward, a backdraft so large it knocked me backwards blew from beyond the edge. I laid there and gasped for the wind that was knocked out of me, before the giant's voice boomed again.

"What's your name, girl?"

"Taylor," I gasped out as I sat up and saw his face loom over me like the full moon. "And you?"

His lips twisted into a triumphant smirk, and despite not being able to see the rest of him his swagger was palatable.

"I am Zeus."

"Zeus? The Zeus of Olympus?! King of the Greek Gods?"

Despite myself, I felt giddy with joy.

"You seem overjoyed. I suppose humans have yet to forget me, even if I never heard of the Greeks."

Then I recalled what he was famous for, and felt sick to my stomach as a chill crept up my spine.

"And now you're terrified," the way his muscles bulged beneath his skin as he frowned terrified me. "Why?"

"You have...quite the reputation."

"Do I?"

Zeus seemed more perplexed rather than insulted, so that's a plus. There was a rustling sound, and the smell of bread and cheese drew me to a silver platter laden with food upon a stone table.

"Eat, young Taylor. Eat and tell me more."

/x/

After the fifth time, I learned to ignore the ringing as Zeus laughed that deep belly laugh of his. I had stammered at first, my speech plagued with the gnawing fear of offending the giant who's finger was the size of my house. But as I spoke, I thirsted. As I thirsted I drank from the goblet that always refilled, next to the platter that never wanted for food. As I drank, my tongue let loose the words to go with the drink. What I thought of, I got. Tea. Milk. Hot chocolate. Soda. Each liquid that filled the cup was always to and exceeded my expectations.

But more than the hospitality, was the trust I felt from Zeus. Every word I spoke he hung onto like I was the oracle from Delphi. He laughed at the stories attribui to him, his face wrought with excitement as I regaled him with the tales of heroes like Heracles, Jason, Legend and Alexandria. He sighed and lamented when I told him, heavily emblemished how Hero died and the world struggled with villains and the Endbringers.

Then he asked about me, and my tongue froze up again till he coaxed me. Slowly, over the hours he gently prodded me to speak. Zeus sometimes withdrew into the darkness to give me some privacy, despite the fact I was on his finger.

Finally. Slowly it dripped out. My life, my home. The sudden death of my mother, and he cussed out Hades with a personal vehemence only a god can bring to bear before he wept. In return Zeus told me of how he came from Olympus, a universe beyond my comprehension. We exchanged stories, me of my life and dashed hopes. Him of the people that adored him and he loved and protected. Of Mycenea, Bardos and the treachery he faced. Zeus' face darkened as he spoke of his betrayal, and for the first time we started to speak in earnest I felt apprehensive in his presence.

Then I got to Emma, and his passions froze into cold judgement.

"So your bosom sister used things said in confidence against you?"

Zeus always spoke in bombast. For him to speak normally was disconcerting.

"I wouldn't call Emma a bosom sister-"

"You took her into your deepest confidence, did you not? Things you didn't wish to laden your grieving father with?"

I do not know which felt worse. That Zeus ascribed more noble intentions to me approaching Emma instead of Dad with my grief, or the fact I'm confiding in a giant metal god more in the past two years since Mom passed away than with Dad.

"I guess?" I learned Zeus can get very insistent when arguing a point no matter how trivial, and he was far too pleasant company for me to belabor something. "Doesn't change what she did though."

Zeus closed his eyes, and most of his body below his neck vanished into the darkness when he sat down deep in thought. I sat down myself and took a sip from the goblet, before I spat out whatever vile concoction was inside. I never tasted raw gall bladder before, but I suspect that was very similar to what I just experienced.

"Bitter medicine learns the child."

Zeus chuckled, and before my eyes the giant bar the hand I stood on turned into charred grey ash and crumbled away. Out of the smoke walked the golden armored figure of Zeus, now six and a half feet instead of the colossus he was. He looked human, except for the missing lower right arm.

The arm, whose finger I'm standing on to be precise.

"Was that a saying from Bardos, Zeus? What lesson should I learn from this?"

"You're the one who drank the medicine, young Taylor. That is a lesson for you, not anyone else."

He beckoned me closer, and placed his remaining hand on my shoulder once I was close.

"You remind me of Cassandra, whom I've wronged. The traitors would not have prevailed if I believed her."

The woman with the gift of prophecy from Apollo, and the curse of never being believed. Why does that sound familiar?

"Her story was real?"

"Much more than the other tall tales those Greeks have written, that's for certain." Zeus chuckled. "Despite the changes in so many details, the gist of that tragedy remained the same."

"Zeus. You-"

"I'm glad to learn that the one lesson I've made all my subjects learn continues to act as a cautionary tale to this day."

Just for that one second, Zeus' eyes appeared to be looking at somewhere far away, clouded and wistful before he refocused on me and regained that vigor I've come to associate him with.

"This past two weeks were the happiest I've had since I was trapped here, young Taylor. But now, it's time for you to return."

I blinked, as the words sunk in. Two weeks? I was awake for two weeks and I didn't feel any of it pass?

"So this isn't the afterlife then?"

Zeus roared with laughter again, the sort of boast and easygoing pride he embodies. The polar opposite of myself. I found myself laughing along with him, until I felt a dull pain in my stomach from the unfamiliar exertion. A stark reminder of how long it was since I expressed this kind of carefree joy.

Then Zeus said something which weirded me out. Because seriously.

"Taylor. Kneel."

"That sounds so wrong, Zeus. Phrasing!"

We shared a laugh, before I knelt down on my left knee while he kept his hand hand pressed down on my shoulder.

"Prepare yourself, Taylor. For when you stand once again, you will bear the weight I used to carry."

The golden sheen that defined him faded, as it started to wash over me instead. My chest and throat burned, before the heat flowed to the rest of me. A dull pain in my chest, and my heart ripped itself out.

"Zeus?"

Metal replaced the pulsing flesh of my heart, before a ball of light from within the construct consumed it. Yet I felt no pain when it reentered the cavity in my breast.

"I had meant to do this far earlier, young Taylor. But I'm glad to have hosted you regardless."

His armor-Zeus himself- turned a dull matte black, and the color faded from his face. I pressed against him to get up, but it was like pushing against a wall.

"Zeus!"

"I'm sorry to foist such responsibilities upon you, Taylor, " My shoulder tore while pushing against his hand. "May the Photonic Power light your way."

The black metal turned to rust, and with a scream I stood up as the hand pressed against me crumbled into dust with the rest of Zeus. In the ash pile where he once stood, I dug out a skull made of iron,and stared at it lost for words.

Taylor.

Zeus spoke to me in a whisper in my head. I pressed my hand against my face to dab away the tears, only to shiver at the touch of cold steel when my fingers reached my cheeks.

Beware the Beast. Beware of Zero.

I cried out at the world, before it ceased to exist at my scream.

/x/

Armsmaster fiddled with a five inch slice of black metal between his thumb and second finger that reflected his gunmetal helmet like a perfectly polished mirror, while a serrated knife with a snapped blade was laid out on the portable wooden table he rested his arms on. Armsmaster turned his cameras equipped with the latest of his inbuilt sensors and analyzers on the metal piece that had snapped his knife like a plastic butter knife, before he grimaced at the utterly mundane results that was returned.

Armsmaster set the metal down on the table, and glared at the broken knife that disappointed him. A knife meant to cut across a ramped up Lung foiled by a literal piece of scrapped metal is a bed knife? Armsmaster folded his arms and sat down in front of the black metal, his vision focused on the scrap as if trying to make it bend through sheer will alone before the sound of an approaching car alerted him. The dull rumble of the SUV was distinctly different from the vehicles the Protectorate ENE and local PRT had available, which meant that their visiting experts had arrived. Giving one final glance at the sample, Armsmaster strode out of the tent and into the rubble that was once Winslow High, the desolate scene set against the grey sky of a dreary early spring evening. The Tinker walked pass the field of glass, concrete, plastic, wood and a small cave on the side of a mound that was cordoned off, guarded by several PRT troopers while the CSI team combed through the ruins for anything they might have missed.

The Winslow ruins had all materials used for modern architecture laid out within it's locale, bar one rather important and basic element.

No metal, Armsmaster thought as he ran his metal detector through a quick scan of the collapsed school. Even the wires were stripped clean.

A white SUV came to a halt outside of the perimeter of PRT troopers, and a petite woman with hip-length brown hair and fair skin stepped out. She adjusted her yellow hair band and the cream pink pantsuit she wore, before she hauled a massive grey suitcase from the back of her SUV and dragged it along the dusty road towards him. Armsmaster's metal detectors flared to life as they scanned the contents of the suitcase, and he raised his arm to stop the woman as she approached with the suitcase in tow. The brunette woman frowned, but flashed her lanyard with the PRT issued ID. Armsmaster dutifully scanned the pass, before their eyes met.

"Doctor Thalia Archer of the Photonic Power Research Institute?" Armmaster's eyes went to the suitcase being dragged on it's wheels. "You're a Tinker? The devices you're carrying within that suitcase wasn't registered as equipment you were going to bring."

"None of your business, whether or not I'm a parahuman, Armsmaster," Thalia replied sweetly through her teeth. "I can't be giving out all my secrets to another organization no matter how friendly we are, now can I?"

"Doctor Archer-"

"Now, the sample please."

Armsmaster's jaws tightened, but he nodded and led Thalia into the tent. Thalia's eyes widened at the sight of the black metal, and ran her finger across the edge before she pressed it against a tip at the end. Her lips twisted into a smile as the flowing blood evaporated against the smooth surface of the shard, before she turned towards the stone faced Tinker.

"There's more of this, isn't it Armsmaster?"

"Was the sample made of the same material as what you carry in that suit, Doctor Archer?"

Thalia folded her arms and raised an eyebrow at Armsmaster's brusque tone.

"That's not my question."

"Answer mine, Doctor and I'll answer yours. Or better still, you can show me what's inside the suitcase."

Thalia huffed, before she laid the suitcase on the floor and opened it. The suitcase hissed, before it bloomed open like an iron flower to reveal it's contents.

"Fine. I was going to use it anyway."

A human sized metal suit, painted grey with red lines over the chest, shins and arms. A wide brimmed helmet over a full face mask like a store mannequin. Armsmaster inched forward before Thalia touched the mask and the suit burst into life. A single click was heard, before Thalia was completely enveloped in the suit. Dark brown eyes glared at Armsmaster from behind the eye slits, before a yellow glass enclosed them. A two inch red fin grew out of the left forearm of the suit, which Thalia plucked and handed over to Armsmaster. He wasted no time in scanning the sample.

"Alloy's almost the same and a very efficient design on the suit," Armsmaster nodded in appreciation. "How did you manage to-"

"Sorry. Trade secret. I take it that the Protectorate is not in the habit of outing capes?"

"No. of course not."

Thalia's eyes widened in surprise when Armsmaster removed his helmet and offered his hand.

"Colin Wallis. My apologies for the earlier behavior. That was unbecoming of me."

"Apology accepted," Thalia shook the hand offered. "And call me Venus A. I'm sorry as well, blowing you off like that was rude of me."

Armsmaster nodded and replaced his helmet before opening the tent flaps.

" This way, Venus."

"Venus A."

"With the A, got it."

Venus A watched as Armsmaster spoke in code and under his breath into his radio, but silently followed him as they walked pass the guards placed around the cave. The passageway was narrow, and Thalia's eyes swept the dirt walls that threatened to enclose on her. Lights dug into the earth lit the passageway, though Venus A had to rely on her own internal lighting as Armsmaster blocked off the floor lights whenever he walked above one of them.

"This way." Armsmaster spoke as he walked into a brightly lit cavern. "It's a lot more roomy in here at least."

Venus A's gaze wandered across the cavern, where several PRT scientists along with a few civilian counterparts were discussing loudly about soil samples and bedrock. A large steel gate, fifteen feet high and ten feet across stood proudly at the stone wall located at the end of the cavern. The surface of the gate was flawless and polished, while a large stylized Z five feet across was located right between the two doors. Armsmaster gave a quick glance to the gate, before he bent down and picked up a clear plastic bag of dirt to hand over to Venus A. The armored scientist opened the bag and pinched the dark brown earth, before she clicked her tongue as the soil crumbled between her fingers.

"The earth. It's like sand at a man-made beach. Soft, crumbly."

Venus A resealed the bag, and dropped it back onto the floor.

"Utterly impossible to be found in a natural underground cavern like this," Venus attempted to rub between her eyes."No wonder you have geologists here underground. Brockton's Bay soil and bedrock ought to preclude such a possibility of a place like this existing!"

"Tell that to the cavern."

Armsmaster jabbed a thumb at the steel gate.

"Or that door over there."

Venus A stared at the gate, and walked within six feet of the doors when the Z began to glow. She yelped in shock as the readings of her ultra-compact reactor beneath her breastplate spiked, and the Venus A toppled forward into the dirt when she was buried by spikes that grew all over her back. Armsmaster immediately readied his halberd and prepared to swing, before Venus A cried out.

"It's fine! I've done simulations like this in case something corrupts my suit. Just...stand about three feet away from me."

Armsmaster frowned, but nodded as he stepped backwards halberd still at the ready. Venus A's breathing could be heard through her speakers, as the four feet long blanket of spikes on her back began to turn white from a sudden surge of heat.

"Photonic-"

Armsmaster stood another step backwards, while the other personnel fled up the tunnel for safety.

"Release!"

Beams of light burst forth from the back of Venus A, as the spikes melted into nothing when the blasts consumed them. Armsmaster walked to the side of Venus A, but refrained from helping unasked when the armored scientist got to her feet.

"Was shouting your attacks really necessary, Venus A? It would really give any enemy an unwanted advantage in a fight."

"Photonic Power is fickle that way," Venus A huffed as she turned a wary eye to the increasing glow of the Z on the gates. "Speaking of fights, I'd suggest a tactical retreat."

Venus A dashed across the cavern with Armsmaster as the rearguard, while the cavern rumbled when the gate started to deform as smoke rose from it. The two armored heroes just cleared the tunnel before it caved in with a roar, and Armsmaster leaned against his halberd for support from the tremors while he yelled out orders to the gathered PRT and civilian staff. Both powered individuals ran away from the epic center of the quake, harrying the staff lagging behind along the way to grab only essentials and haul ass. Venus A's blood ran cold, as she heard a young girl's roar from beneath the ground.

"Breast-"

The earth boiled, before the bubbling mud sunk into a newly formed crater.

"Fire!"

A V-shaped wave of fire erupted, and boiled mud spewed into the open to form mounds when they landed. Armsmaster grabbed Venus A and rolled to their left just in time to avoid a car sized glob of bubbly mud that would have buried them, and Venus A sweated from both the heat and fear as she saw it climb onto land from the hole of smoke and fire. Two stiff red wings on the back that pointed forty five degrees upwards, with the head of a spade at their tip. Almost six feet tall, a suit of armor similar to her own except it was painted black, broken with dull grey on it's abs and upper arms. A helmet that stretch upwards and out like two hands in prayer, a globe made of crystal in between the dual sheets of metal. Two brass colored horns stuck out of the sides of the helmet crackled with bursts of light ,a knight's helmet grille over where the mouth would be and two diamond shaped eyes that glowed a menacing yellow. Despite the destruction wrought, long wavy black hair on its back flattered in the win untroubled by flame and smoke.

Venus A staggered to her feet, her gaze fixed on the newcomer and trembled.

"How could it possibly be finished?" Venus A muttered. "There's simply not enough material on Earth Bet for the Super Alloy New Z."

"Venus A. If you have any kind of information on this new Tinker's creation, now would be a good time to share."

"Only names," Venus A said while Armsmaster brandished his halberd. "and some possible weapons and attacks he might use."

"A name's a good start."

Venus A's voice trembled, even as she gunned her Photonic reactor's output.

"Mazinger."
 
Tents of various make and several portapotties every dozen or so feet. Probably a few makeshift fences made from linen or scrap.

Mobile homes, RVs and trailers for the 'richer' folk and a glorified lean-to made of a large cloth for the poorer ones.
Now, how bad would conditions be? Or, to put it basically, i want a shithole that heroes only patrol nominally. And where there's barely any water, food, or medicine.
 
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