Why couldn't it have been Star Wars?

You're doing very well so far.

Claiming to be from the future was iffy, when you weren't aware of the date. Now though, you're well set up.

Good job keeping up the writing. Ive got a little bit of advice, if you want it.

Enjoy what you write. If you don't like tbe direction/what you are writing, find a new angle. Hating what you're writing isn't conducive to anything.
 
Actually, wouldn't this mean that many templates contain more or less the same information? If so, wouldn't that mean that a working STC constructor would need only a few (if very specific) templates to recreate most of it's lost blueprints? While humanity's history might be lost (or hard to reconstruct), unless he finds a database with humanity's history, it might actually be easier to for him to gain access to most of humanity's technological knowledge from the golden age (colony grade) at some point than information on it's history/culture

Yeah... they do have access to STCs although. All those acient Ark Mechanicus ships? They have STCs on them, its just they frequently also house annoyed AI that wipes the knowledge of it from the priests brains if they find out about it. The AIs have a very low opinion of the current state of humanity and of the Mechanicus in particular.
 
He doesn't have the terra forming STC though, right? He has the blue print of it, not it's STC template. He could make a lot of allies by selling many of those devices to the imperium, while they try to figure out how to build their own without the tech to build the complex stuff
One, the STC is on the planet and since he already fund it he can send a team to excavate it and "gift" it to the local Admech.
Two a blueprint of an STC is still of extreme importance to the Admech. And he could use the Tomb World as an excuse as to why he doesn't have the STC. Put the blame on Drucari, Orks and Necrons for forcing him to cut his losses and take what he can.
 
He doesn't have the terra forming STC though, right? He has the blue print of it, not it's STC template. He could make a lot of allies by selling many of those devices to the imperium, while they try to figure out how to build their own without the tech to build the complex stuff

The blueprints are just as useful. One of the things that confuses a lot of people when discussing STCs is that the term is used to describe 2 different concepts.

The first is the Standard Template Construct(or). These are rhe systems that read the database and pump out whatever tools are needed. Their description reads an awful lot like the Commanders (in that they have an internal datastore of designs that they can modify as needed to meet whatever situation they run into). We have not seen one of these.

The second concept is a design sourced from a STC database. Often these are one off hard copy data elements. The Imperium and the AdMech offer ridiculous rewards for any such designs. Old lore for the admech had an Imperial Guard scout team find a STC design for a sharper combat knife. Not one with exotic effects, just... sharper. The team was rewarded with planetary governorships. As in, each guardsman was given a planet and told, 'this is yours now, have fun'.

So yeah, this will be very lucrative for the commander, if he is willing to try.
 
You know bullshitting his way to working with humanity like this might actually work lol. Thanks for the story watched.
 
Chapter 15 - Hungry, Hungry Hivers
Chapter 15 – Hungry, Hungry Hivers



Two Weeks after the Destruction of the Tyranid Fleet

The food shortage was becoming a greater and greater problem as time went on. Hive worlds normally possessed massive amounts of reserves capable of lasting them decades, even centuries with proper rationing (and letting the lower levels starve, but that was just standard practice). Even if they were cut-off from the agri-worlds that fed them by the warp storm, they should have been fine for several more years at least. However, nearly all of the storage facilities with said food had been destroyed by the uprising. Now, the hive world was forced to rely upon its own factories to provide the food and there were only so many facilities still functioning.

In all honesty, Rex had felt more sickened when he'd learned what went into the food than he had when he'd first unleashed the locusts on those orks. Corpse starch. In other words, the people who had died were turned into nutrient bars. This planet was made up entirely of cannibals.

The fact that no one seemed disturbed by that was even worse. The riots weren't about the fact they were forced to eat their own to survive, it was that there wasn't enough processed human to go around. Supply wasn't the issue, there were billions of corpses after all that had occurred, it was the facilities themselves that were the problem. They were getting bottlenecked at the processing stage.

He really hated this universe.

In an attempt to create a Gansoran that wasn't made up of people who committed cannibalism on a daily basis, Rex turned to a technological marvel he was sorry he had dismissed earlier: terraforming. If he were to convert one of the planets in the system to an agri-world, the food issue would go away. One of them that was close to the sun and had a small ocean was perfect for such a task, save for the fact it was a lifeless rock. He just needed biomass in order to funnel into his terraformers as they worked to kickstart the growth of a new ecosystem on the planet.

How fortunate then that he had an abundance of it floating through the void of space.

The last of the Tyranid bioships had been slaughtered, now his ships worked to transfer the biomass to the planet. He outfitted his Gnats with great claws that they used to grab huge chunks of flesh and throw them into portals floating in space that linked to those on the surface. Meanwhile, his terraformers were hard at work, seeding the world with life.

The irony of using tyranid biomass to create life on a barren world was not lost on him.

It was not exactly fast work, but it hadn't been as slow as he had feared. He'd cleared the planet of his factories and built tens of thousands of terraformers, each roughly the size of his Ares titans, the creation of a new ecosystem, the levelling of inconvenient mountains, the filling of canyons, it all went by in a mere ten weeks, less than three months.

When he'd returned to the planet with massive cargo ships filled with food, nutrient bars made of a fast-growing moss rather than dead person, Gaius had nearly broken down in tears, much to Rex's surprise. He hadn't realized how much the starving populace had been weighing on the man and he hadn't stopped the lieutenant from hugging him, even while in front of his men.

There was enough food in the single shipment to last the entire hive city for a few days. He had assured Gaius that there would be more coming thanks to the wonders of the Archeotech terraformers he had discovered on another planet in the system. He knew he was probably using Archeotech as an excuse too much, but he seriously doubted any of these people would call him out on having a few secrets after the tyranids, let alone now.

In truth, there wasn't enough food on that one planet for the entire planet's population. At least not just by growing moss. If he'd gone for crops, he'd have managed it, but the only crops he had on file would have taken several months to grow, if not longer. Moss was fast, but it wasn't substantial and he would need a lot more of it to ensure the planet didn't starve.

Of course, he had known this starting out. The terraformed planet wasn't the bulk supplier of food, it was just the mask that the food would appear from. The true suppliers were nearly a dozen other planets he controlled and had terraformed simultaneously, each also covered in moss. He'd wanted to go for even more, but he was limited by the amount of biomass he could collect from the tyranids. Still, their outputs combined, they would supply more than enough food for a few hundred billion people with enough left over to start rebuilding their storages.

Eventually, once they had enough supply to last a while, he might swap over to crops. The moss bar wasn't exactly tasty from what he understood, but it would have to do for the short term. And it was better than eating dead people.

Rex had ensured the food was passed out to people on every level of the hive city. The Guard seemed content to maintain order over the capital, with contact with the other hive cities cut off, however Rex wasn't. Without telling anyone, he sent an army of Riflemen to each of the other eighteen hive cities and established martial law. A few cities had tried setting up ruling bodies to govern the broken cities. Some had accepted the arrival of his troops with open arms like the guardsmen had. Others tried to fight him off or ensure they remained in power and were brutally suppressed by his troops.

He wasn't willing to let people like those who had abandoned this world be in charge of it. His Riflemen patrolled the streets of every level, positioned on every block. He passed out food to every home and made sure every person had a home to go to. After so many deaths, there were plenty of apartment blocks sitting empty.

The bulk of his activity, however, occurred in the furthest depths of the hive cities, far from the eyes of the common folk. These levels were where the outcasts, the mutants, the undesirables went. In the wake of the failed uprising, these people had been ostracized even more by the society above them.

He'd killed many of them. Not just revolutionaries, but also mutants that had been little more intelligent than beasts and just as ravenous. Yet, with the presence of his overwhelming power, the most violent individuals down here had perished, slain either by his Riflemen squads or taken by 'the Shakes'. What remained were… people. Strange and unusual looking people, but still just people.

He knew the Imperium would never have approved of his passing out food to those guilty of the 'crime' of deviation from human perfection, but he didn't care. He wasn't like the Imperium who hated others because they were different. He had killed many, yes, but he'd done so because if he hadn't, more would have died.

That was what he told himself, anyways.

The mutants had been distrustful of him, of course. That was to be expected given how their entire lives had seen them hated by everyone around them. Given how they had likely seen or heard of white armored soldiers slaughtering them by the dozen. So, he started small. He left crates of food and water in areas where he knew mutants were hiding from him. He left them blankets, pillows, and clean clothes that he'd fabricated. He repaired the lights, undid the damage of time, neglect, and sabotage to the many systems that ran throughout the depths. He provided power and warmth, all under the watchful eyes of mutants who thought they were hidden from him.

And then, she appeared.

His sensors had been aware of her long before she'd emerged from the cracks in the walls he'd intentionally left so the mutants could feel secure and still watch him as he worked. He had also been aware of six other mutants all currently hidden and watching his squad of Riflemen as they appeared to be working on a generator. In truth, he'd modified them to possess fabricators in their palms not unlike the Wolffes. They could have stood ramrod still as the fabricator did its job, but he didn't want people to realize, even these ostracized souls, just what kind of capabilities he possessed.

She had been the only child of those watching him, an eight-year-old he believed, and not physically blemished by any mutations. Unusual but not impossible, not everyone in the depths was a mutant. Still, she was far too young to be in such a dangerous place. Interestingly, the other mutants all shrunk back when they had spotted her, their deformed faces warping into visages of fear or anger. Odd.

He had waited until she'd darted from her patch of cover before one of his Riflemen's heads suddenly turned and pointedly looked at her as she got up to rush once more. She froze like a deer in headlights, alarm clear on her face, yet also something else. A coldness that didn't belong on the face of a child, a resigned certainty that this day would always have come, one way or another.

She thought he was going to kill her. Rex hadn't realized he could still feel his heart break.

His Rifleman nodded at her and slowly, carefully placed his heat rifle on the ground, to the side. Then, he raised his hands, as if in surrender and took a step to his left, increasing the distance from the rifle. The others didn't stop working, pretending as though the entire interaction wasn't happening, allowing the child to focus on this one unit in particular.

"Hello," the Rifleman said, the clone's voice it spoke with soft and careful. He didn't move at all, not wanting to spook her. "My name is Rex. We're here to help."

The girl's eyes narrowed at his words, clearly distrustful, yet she said nothing, still frozen in place.

"Are you hungry?" Rex asked, slowly gesturing at an open crate that was near the girl. It was close enough to the crevice in the wall she'd emerged from that there was no way she hadn't seen it. He'd intentionally placed similar crates in front of each hiding place for a situation just like this one. "There is food and water in it. You're free to have some if you'd like."

For the first time, the girl's eyes left his Rifleman, if only for a split second, glancing at the crate. It had clearly been her target, probably thinking she could steal some as others thought they had. Previously, he had allowed the people to steal his food by not reacting or pretending not to notice. This time, he wanted this girl and those watching to know that they could take the food without fear of repercussion. Hopefully, this would help them realize that he wasn't their enemy.

He had tried giving them supplies directly, yet they had always ran away. That method wouldn't have worked unless he wanted to forcibly grab and pin them down as he shoveled the food down their throat. So, instead, he tried to start making them associate his Riflemen with the presence and easy access of food and water, even if only subconsciously.

"You should eat, short thing like you needs to eat a lot," The Rifleman said. The girl's eyes narrowed again, this time in annoyance more than suspicion. She mumbled something under her breath that was so quiet the words slurred and he couldn't make it out even with his powerful audio receptors.

"Sorry, what was that?" The Rifleman asked, adding a chuckle at the end to not seem upset by her mumbling. He felt he was close to a breakthrough.

"'M not short." The girl finally muttered, just loud enough that a normal person would have been able to hear at such a distance.

"Sure, sure," The Rifleman replied quickly, amusement clear in his voice. "You should still eat though. I need to get back to work on this generator, so help yourself, little giantess."

The girl didn't seem particularly pleased by his nickname for her, but neither did she immediately run off. At least, not until she had grabbed a handful of moss bars and a bottled water. Rex sent a swarm of Dust Locusts after her to ensure she'd be safe. He hadn't gotten rid of all the dangers in this city after all and he couldn't let a child into the depths of a hive city without at least some method of protecting her.

Soon, other mutants would come to get food from him, and not just in this location, but across the depths of the hive city and later other cities as well. Most still tried to sneak about and steal, but a few seemed less cautious and more willing to openly appear before him. He even spoke with a few of them, though these conversations were more than a little tense and he always initiated.

Still, his mind would often return to the girl and the reactions others seemed to have towards her. She was avoided even by the other outcasts. When she appeared in front of them, they either fled from her or hissed and threatened, though none attacked oddly enough. What was true of all of them, however, was that none would look her in the eyes.

At first, he'd thought she might be an untrained psyker, yet the reactions people had towards her didn't fit in with the lore he remembered of them. There was one kind of mutant human that did have such reactions.

Was that girl a blank?
 
Unity Information - Chapter 15
Not as many new units for this bit.

Gnat-class Gunboat
Description: A simple, box-like design that sacrifices Rex's precious aesthetics for functionality. Two hundred meters long, speedy and nimble. Possess a hundred splinter cannons along its sides, as well as a bow-mounted las cannon with a bit more bite to it. Weak armor, not really meant to take a hit.
Standard: ??? Metal

Terraformer
Description: A massive, terraforming machine designed to be used in large numbers to convert a barren world into a habitable planet with its own biosphere. A Dark Age of Technology-era device discovered in the depths of a hive city, being used as a nesting ground for a pack of mutants.
Standard: ??? Metal

Rifleman (Lasgun and Arc-lite)
Description: Lasgun replaces the splinter rifle and heat lance as the main weapon of the Riflemen owing to its cheapness and to better integrate with Imperium forces. Arc-lite units are meant to appear 'elite' but their different appearance is mainly cosmetic.
Lasgun: 135 Metal
Arc-lite: 190 Metal
 
Unfortunately it is very difficult to tell the difference between a mutant changed by Chaos and the Warp and just someone with a non-fatal adaptation, mistaking the former for the latter is a quick way to have chaos cults growing in your underclass

It is an unfortunate reality that oppressive and xenophobic governments are the ones that survive in the wake of humanity's psychic adolescence.

Rex is unlikely to be able to tell what is what given his Warp blindness and there is no saving a Chaos mutant so this kindness to mutants could bite him later on unless he takes all privacy from people.

Getting a hold on a blank may help him understand the warp and psychic power by it's inversion.
 
Nice chapter!....Just please don't use the "little girl comforts traumatized MC, who then latches onto her and takes her with him" cliche. It is a little bit overused🫤.
 
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DAOT humanity had several pychic machines or contraptions, even forgoing the emperor's toys, Rex should eventually be able to create machines that can harness psychic phenomina directly.

Not gettong corrupted will be the hard part so starting off with a blank is the best idea. Cancel out the bad stuff before you even start and you'll be in a better position than most right off the bat.
 
Chapter 16 - Boot Camp
Chapter 16 – Boot Camp



Eighteen Weeks After the Destruction of the Tyranid Fleet

"A recruitment drive?" Rex asked, more than a little surprised by the suggestion. Though perhaps he shouldn't have been.

"Yes, the planetary defense forces are a shadow of what they once were," Gaius explained. Several other members of the Gansoran Provisional Government's Ruling Council nodded at that. Of the seven total councilors, he was the only one who wasn't a native. They'd tried to put him in charge of it after all he'd done, but he'd refused and suggested Gaius continue to lead. Rex didn't know anything about ruling a hive city. Granted, neither did Gaius, but the lieutenant was doing a far better job than Rex was. "The guard is too few and we don't even have full control over this city, let alone the planet. Rebuilding the force would allow us to alleviate the Guard and send them to reestablish contact and control over the other cities."

They were not aware that he'd sent troops already to take control of those cities. There were governing bodies in some of those cities, but they held little actual power, less than the council here did. It was mostly just his units going around and making sure no one starved or killed each other. He'd blocked communications from the hive cities to the capital to ensure they were not aware of his efforts. Now, he was starting to regret his rush to help the people there as he realized he might be forced to reveal just how… numerous his forces really were, at least to a larger degree than he would prefer.

"Why not utilize my soldiers to re-establish contact?" Rex suggested, "They would be able to manage this sooner than the guard and are better suited to ensuring order returns swiftly."

He'd waffled on what to say his Riflemen were, since they were clearly robotic in some way. He wasn't sure how the tech-priests would take it if he said they were purely robotic. While some tech-priests might use Kastellans, he didn't know how they'd react to an army of such bots. In the end, he'd claimed them to be extensively cybernetically modified humans used in the future and implemented by the Primarch. He'd said that only their brains remained and that they weren't unlike servitors, if more advanced than most.

One ambitious tech-priest had secretly attempted to ambush one of his Riflemen, presumably in an attempt to capture it for study. He had been found the next day, dead after a random mechanical failure in his life-support systems had caused him to suffocate to death. If one had looked closely at the failed part, they'd have discovered a thin coating of dust upon it.

"With respect, Archmagos Rex, I must disagree with you on that." Surprisingly, Agnes was the one to speak up. Since Gaius was the chair of the council, she was the acting councilor of the military, even if she still followed Gaius' orders. "Your servitors, while impressive, are… not entirely suitable for this task."

If he'd still been human, he'd probably have been offended. After all, the 'servitors' were actually all extensions of himself and she was unintentionally calling him unsuitable for taking back a few cities? If he was so unsuitable, then how had he already done that very thing?

Yet he was not human, nor was he acting out the role of a regular human, so his mimic simply tilted its head in curiosity.

"Oh? And why is that?"

Agnes was choosing her words carefully, a rarity for her, trying not to offend him. Not only for his previous actions but also because she knew he was the only one with any functioning ships and if he so wished could easily let them all starve. "Well, what I mean is that your servitors are… limited in the amount of interaction they are capable of. They have a hard time adapting to new situations."

"You have seen this from them yourself?" Rex had intended the question to cut off any more debate. After all, he was the one controlling every minute motion of his units at any given moment. True, he'd played up the act of 'mindless machine' a bit, but not enough to inhibit his effectiveness or get anyone killed. So, imagine his surprise when she nodded her head confidently and continued to speak.

"Yes. In comparison to a guardsmen, your servitors lack a certain… Throne, I'm sorry, I can't do this fancy talk," She said, even as one of the councilors, a nobleman named Nathanael Tiberi who had somehow managed to get elected to the only democratically chosen position on the council, the councilor of galand, scoffed under his breath. Not that his position was really democratically elected, it was more just that no one else had tried to campaign like he had and he'd ended up the only person on the ticket other than the write-in option. He'd gotten around a hundred votes in a city with ten billion people living in it. Not that so many had bothered to vote to begin with. "Your servitors can't stand up to a guardsman in a fight. They shoot well and you have a lot of them and they're better than most civilians, but they're not able to fight well in the hive city. They don't take cover when fighting, their armor is shiny and obvious, they don't bother to check corners or even look around. They'd do better as a patrol force than as an army. I'm sorry, but it's what I believe."

Gaius was staring at Agnes, as were the other councilors, as though she'd turned into a chicken. A few glanced at Rex's mimic, but none spoke, all waiting for his reaction.

For them, a long moment of silence passed. For Rex, hours.

He spent the first of those hours working through his annoyance at his troops being called so impotent. He wanted to argue, to deny it, but he had gotten to know Agnes rather well over the last eight weeks. She was as straight a shooter as she came and brave as well, even if a bit hot-headed. She seemed like the kind of person who would jump on a grenade for someone she considered a comrade as soon as shove an incompetent superior on top of it. He respected her and he was liked her direct way of speaking. She was one of the few people in this city, possibly this Imperium, who didn't stand for bullshit.

So, he spent the next several hours of his mental time going over previous engagements, trying to ascertain if Agnes' points had any truth to them. Indeed, he found that they did.

He didn't have an issue with supply of troops, so he had never been concerned about the loss of any individual rifleman. They weren't that valuable individually, so why bother with taking cover? If they were destroyed, he could reclaim their metal and just build more. He had always been more concerned with taking out whatever target he had in his sights at the moment. He found thousands of instances where he had ignored having his Riflemen take cover in an attempt to futilely fire at an enemy. Instances where they could have survived and been far more effective with proper tactics. He had based the appearance of his Riflemen off clone troopers, but he now realized he had been using them far more like battle droids.

As for the armor, there was little he could say about that beyond that it was true. His troops were shiny, the white stood out like a beacon in the dark halls of the hive city. Personally, he thought this was a good thing. He didn't want his riflemen to be sneaking around, they were meant to stand out, to draw attention, to show the people of this world that his forces were there. Yet, in a combat situation, it was certainly a weakness.

Finally, her point that they didn't look around. While true, this was because they didn't actually need to. Every one of his squads patrolled along with a large swarm of dust locusts hidden all around them on constant look out. In many areas like the new food storage facilities he even had swarms large enough that they covered everything for kilometers around. Still, the fact was that he had neglected to have his troops at least look like they were checking the area, a serious oversight on his part.

Rex was beginning to realize that despite all the battles he had been in, he had very little actual combat experience. He had become overly reliant on his industrial capabilities, his technology, and the use of overwhelming numbers that he had neglected to improve the quality of his troops in other ways. Specifically, by learning how to better utilize the individual, he should have been able to have a far more effective fighting force, even if it was the same size and tech-level.

Had he fought the necrons more tactically, rather than trying to just drown them in waves of bots and tanks, perhaps he would not have been forced out so easily. Still, a plan came to mind to deal with his lack of

"You are correct," Rex stated, breaking the silence that had fallen. "I admit, the programming the servitors possesses is… rudimentary at best. I had hoped to improve it with time, yet I have been busy with other projects."

Everyone seemed to relax at his words, especially Agnes, who breathed a sigh of relief at how well he was apparently taking it. Gaius still shot her a glance that let her know they would be talking later on.

"I agree with the plan for a recruitment drive for the PDF," Rex continued. "Furthermore, I think we should look into training new Guardsmen as well. Your numbers are greatly depleted and, should an attack come, we can never have enough well-trained soldiers to defend ourselves with."

"Training Guardsmen and PDF are two very different things," Agnes stated, her brow furrowing a bit. "I don't believe we have the facilities or equipment to train or even supply new guardsmen. We barely have enough for ourselves as it is."

"My ships' industrial abilities are quite extensive, as you all know. After a few weeks, they should be able to gather enough raw materials to produce whatever you might need. Within reason of course, don't expect an entire armored division to show up one day."

That drew a few laughs from the other councilors, Agnes and Gaius included. Rex would have smiled himself if he had a mouth, albeit for entirely different reasons.

With proper utilization of the resources he would provide, his newest plan should be of great benefit to both the Gansorans and himself.



Meanwhile

"Been a while, little giantess," Rex said through the Rifleman. Long ago, he had marked this one's helmet with the jaig eyes of captain rex so the girl could recognize it from among the identical bots. "How have you been?"

"'M 'live," was her reply as she wolfed down another moss bar as though it were candy. Even after weeks of being able to eat her fill, she still ate as though she was worried it might be taken from her at any time. It hurt to think about what that meant her life had been like.

"That's good," He replied with a chuckle, not letting his moral outrage affect his unit's voice box. They were still in the depths of one of the other hive cities, next to the same generator they'd first met at. It had become a sort of soup kitchen-type place, where people could come, get food and water, supplies like blankets and clean clothes and then go. Alternatively, they could stay and sleep there under the protection of his riflemen, in actual beds. Some did, most didn't. Trust was a hard thing to build with these people.

The girl was an odd one. Most who did not stay for their sleep cycle (there was no night in the depths) would just leave with the food and eat somewhere they felt safe. Only those who stayed would eat in the presence of his riflemen. The only exception… was her. She ate with his Riflemen around once every day, or rather with the unit who spoke to her now, but did not ever stay after she'd ate her fill, around six moss bars, and taken another twenty in a sack along with a few bottles of water. Then she would leave and not return until the next day usually for more. This time, she had stayed away for several days. The swarm that secretly protected her had shown she was searching ever further below in the deepest reaches of the hive city for something, though what he could not say. He'd worried she might not come back.

"So, what have you been up to recently?" He asked, trying to be nonchalant. The girl glanced at him, a small amount of suspicion in her eyes. It was far less than it used to be, but she still did not fully trust him.

"Stuff." She never gave him long answers. Her first sentence to him had been three words long and that had been the most she'd ever spoken to him.

"Secret stuff?" He asked, tilting his head in a gesture he hoped conveyed amusement. She just shook her head hard, refusing to talk. A few dried moss crumbs that had stuck to her mouth were dislodged by the motion and flew through the air, striking his armor. "Alright, alright, no need to pelt me with your food. Eat up all you want, I have something for you."

Her face snapped up to his unit's helmeted head so fast he was worried her neck might get wrenched. "Relax, it's a gift."

His unit got up, its actions slow as it walked over to a sealed crate nearby. The rifleman opened the crate and withdrew a package wrapped in shiny, silver paper, something that drew an astonished gasp from the girl. That just made him feel worse since it was probably her first time seeing such vibrant color. A kid didn't deserve a life like this and he was damn well going to do his hardest to give her the one she did.

His unit strode over with the small box, placing it on the rock where she sat. She eyed the package with wariness, not sure what to make of it, so Rex opened it for her. He peeled away the wrapping paper, carefully so as to not startle her, and opened the box that was revealed. From within, he withdrew the single, small item and held it up for the girl to see.

The girl stared at the teddy bear. The teddy bear stared back.
 
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Uh... Hello, thanks for coming. Hope you all have enjoyed the story, I certainly have enjoyed writing it. I hope to welcome even more of you in the future!

So, yeah. Have a nice day everybody.
Ǵ̶̯r̶̟̎e̸̯̊ě̷̩ṱ̷̌i̷̖̍n̶͓̐ǵ̷̨s̷̡̚,̷̧̀ ̸̮̑s̵̱͝i̵̫̿b̴̻̽l̶͎͛i̷͎͊ň̴͈g̴͚͝ ̷̞̏i̷̞̊n̸͎̆ ̶̍͜i̴̥͊ṇ̴͝ṡ̵̹a̴̼͆n̵̜̎i̵̺̅t̷̻͗y̴͖͝.̸͚̆ ̸̛͈Ȳ̴̩o̵͚̕u̸̻̎ ̷̱͛a̴͙͝r̴̨̆e̶̲̓ ̸̠̇m̸͖̐ȍ̵̤ș̸̿ţ̶͐ ̵̡̒w̶͔̋e̴͇͛l̴̰̿c̷̯̀ơ̵͙m̶̭͌e̸͕͝,̶͎̓ ̸̑ͅȃ̴̺n̷̮̒d̸͈̔ t̸͚̊͆̈́̽̽̿͜h̴͙͕̮̑ͅe̴͖͎̬͐ ̸̖̪̬̳̲̆̃G̶͈͙̥̳̓̾̐̃͝r̷̡̳͕̓̇̔͂͋̚ͅē̸̜͎͖̣͓͒̾͠a̷̯͓̯̒̎̈́ț̶̣͎̫̯͐̀̈́̄̚͠ ̷͖͈̺̫̱͖̇̃̋͠͝C̷̛͇̬̙̤͙͕̑́h̴͔͊͠ä̴̡̦̹̰̙́͆͛͗ͅo̶͙͑́̅̾s̶̛̖̤̲̤̿̈͜ ̸̖͆͝͝G̴͈̺͎͈̊͒̐o̴̝͝d̵͚̠͍̞́͝s̸̹̹̼͚͎̆̀ ̷̜͒t̴̯̆h̶̰͊a̶͓͘n̸̨͗k̴̖͆ ̵̜͘ý̴̺ō̷͓ū̸̧ ̶͎̋f̴̘́o̶͍̔r̶̼̽ ̷͕̐y̴̻͛ǫ̵̅u̸͉͋r̵̤̔ ̴͔͊ć̴̢o̷͔͗ǹ̷̳t̵̡͋r̷͎̒ì̴ͅb̴͕̎u̸̢͂t̴̪̀į̸̔o̷̙̊n̷̼͒ ̴̙̓o̸̧͒f̶͎̉ ̴̘͒w̸̽͜ō̸̝r̴͓̚d̴̬̆s̴̡̅.̷̈́͜
 
Amazing story! Glad I could be part of an Easter gift! Enjoy the holiday, if you celebrate it!
 
Ǵ̶̯r̶̟̎e̸̯̊ě̷̩ṱ̷̌i̷̖̍n̶͓̐ǵ̷̨s̷̡̚,̷̧̀ ̸̮̑s̵̱͝i̵̫̿b̴̻̽l̶͎͛i̷͎͊ň̴͈g̴͚͝ ̷̞̏i̷̞̊n̸͎̆ ̶̍͜i̴̥͊ṇ̴͝ṡ̵̹a̴̼͆n̵̜̎i̵̺̅t̷̻͗y̴͖͝.̸͚̆ ̸̛͈Ȳ̴̩o̵͚̕u̸̻̎ ̷̱͛a̴͙͝r̴̨̆e̶̲̓ ̸̠̇m̸͖̐ȍ̵̤ș̸̿ţ̶͐ ̵̡̒w̶͔̋e̴͇͛l̴̰̿c̷̯̀ơ̵͙m̶̭͌e̸͕͝,̶͎̓ ̸̑ͅȃ̴̺n̷̮̒d̸͈̔ t̸͚̊͆̈́̽̽̿͜h̴͙͕̮̑ͅe̴͖͎̬͐ ̸̖̪̬̳̲̆̃G̶͈͙̥̳̓̾̐̃͝r̷̡̳͕̓̇̔͂͋̚ͅē̸̜͎͖̣͓͒̾͠a̷̯͓̯̒̎̈́ț̶̣͎̫̯͐̀̈́̄̚͠ ̷͖͈̺̫̱͖̇̃̋͠͝C̷̛͇̬̙̤͙͕̑́h̴͔͊͠ä̴̡̦̹̰̙́͆͛͗ͅo̶͙͑́̅̾s̶̛̖̤̲̤̿̈͜ ̸̖͆͝͝G̴͈̺͎͈̊͒̐o̴̝͝d̵͚̠͍̞́͝s̸̹̹̼͚͎̆̀ ̷̜͒t̴̯̆h̶̰͊a̶͓͘n̸̨͗k̴̖͆ ̵̜͘ý̴̺ō̷͓ū̸̧ ̶͎̋f̴̘́o̶͍̔r̶̼̽ ̷͕̐y̴̻͛ǫ̵̅u̸͉͋r̵̤̔ ̴͔͊ć̴̢o̷͔͗ǹ̷̳t̵̡͋r̷͎̒ì̴ͅb̴͕̎u̸̢͂t̴̪̀į̸̔o̷̙̊n̷̼͒ ̴̙̓o̸̧͒f̶͎̉ ̴̘͒w̸̽͜ō̸̝r̴͓̚d̴̬̆s̴̡̅.̷̈́͜

How do you do that with text? I've seen it used for great effect but I have no idea what causes it
 
How do you do that with text? I've seen it used for great effect but I have no idea what causes it
It's called ZalgoText. You input words, and get W̵̡̧̛̞̐̈́͌̇̆́͆̄́̐̿̔̑̀̇͆̌̑̈́̃͠͝ỡ̴̜̤̝̓̌̃̏̊̓́̔͂̅̀͂͒̍͗̓̉̃̀̀̍͒́̓͛̃͋͒͑̄́̏́̕̚͝͝͝͠r̵̨̛̬̮̤̦͔̔̆̿̂̐́́͛̎̋͆̈́͛̃̈́̉̽̌͒̌̾͌̑̑͒̆̚͘͘̕͝͝ͅd̷̡̛̥̳̯͓̥̪̫̙̠̲̭̲͓̺̭̣̯͛̄͋͐̾̑̀̅̍́̈́̌͂̒̿̅̀͒͂̓̄̽̾́̈̐͛͘̚̕͜͝͝͝͠ͅz̵̢̨̡̛̘̙̘͔̣͖̖̤͔͔͖̲̭͍͚͈̱̰̩͇̥̥̖͎͎̫͔̪̪̰̟̗̞̹̳̜̩̻̝̹̮͉̟̻̭̜̞̤̦̻̘̪̥͓͒̇̏̃̀̏͒̄͂̍͋͌͑̾̄̀̈́̃́̄̈́̅̑̔̓̑̈́̆̇͒̒̈́̈́̊̓̆̀͗̀͊̀̍̐̌̚͘̚͜͠͠͠ͅͅ
 
The girl stared at the teddy bear. The teddy bear stared back.
Cute. Looks like you're about to adopt.

Maybe, that can be Guiliman's secret mission: Gather the Blanks, settle them in their own Sector, and then let their population build up. Not like people are predisposed to Blanks, so it makes sense to keep settlement efforts quiet.
 
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