Why couldn't it have been Star Wars?

Seeing as the Warp is a reflection of reality could you starve the Chaos Gods by following the matrix future path?

I mean something like put warp dampeners everywhere to limit connection to the warp, maybe make everyone a Blank as well, make everyone "happy" to limit Chaos' feeding on suffering and and then put everyone in some sort of suspended animation/stasis for a couple of million years and you have some starved Chaos Gods. Except maybe Nurgle with his stagnation.

Don't really know enough of the setting to know if such a thing is possible though. :p
If I recall correctly this plan would eventually work by not giving additional souls to Chaos but the ones they already have would sustain the 4 gods for long enough for this to not work in a timely fashion.


There's only three alternatives to removing Chaos influence in realspace forever without unnecessary risk down the line:

1. Mass gene editing to make everyone blanks. It would work but mutations are a thing so it's future viability is up in the air without active genetic screening programs.

2. Mass uploading of every sentient in the galaxy/biotransference for everyone. You would also have to destroy all the souls as the C'tan did when they ate all of the Necrontyr's.

3. Extremely redundant Necron Pylon network. It works in cutting off the warp but that's all it is, a barrier that could eventually fall and at the end of the day you just cut off Chaos from realspace, not killed it.

In 1 & 2 Chaos eventually starves but it would probably be measured in stellar lifetimes so 3 should be implemented at the same time to trap the Chaos Gods in the Warp as the starve. Also note that all of those options would change whatever psychic race so much they couldn't even be called the same species anymore.
 
Chapter 50 - The Path Unseen
Chapter 50 – The Path Unseen



Booting Up

Commander Systems Functional

Unit Link Operational

Resource Link Operational

Error – Personality Matrix Not Found

Personality Matrix "Rex-2" Uploaded

Personality Matrix "Rex-2" Integrated

"Don't Freak Out" Data Package Updated

"Don't Freak Out" Data Package Integrated

Booting Up




Rex was… annoyed, to say the least. Not quite pissed, but definitely more than a little peeved.

"You had to make a fucking copy of yourself to tell you you're an idiot?" He demanded.

"It seemed like a good idea at the time," Rex replied.

"The fact that you named the data package with your memories 'Don't Freak Out' and you expected me to do anything but at the shit you've gotten up to proves that's wrong."

"What are you talking about? You know as well as I do that I named it that to make sure you didn't freak out about being in Warhammer!"

"Well, that's not really an issue for you- for me-… For us anymore, is it?"

"We're powerful, we're not gods."

"I agree. So, explain why you've been acting like one?"

"I'm not acting like a god and you already know why! You have my memories!"

"I'm still processing all this shit."

"You have accelerated thinking."

"Yeah, and I have the memories of literally quadrillions of units to go through. All of which also have accelerated thinking. Which has been active. For years."

"Oh. Uh, you can just use my memories?"

"THEY'RE ALL YOUR MEMORIES!"

"Not what I meant. Anyways, are you going to answer my question or…?"

"Ugh, fine, I'm skipping most of the redundant stuff. Alriiight… done. Fuck, dude."

"I don't need the sarcasm, I get enough of that from Kira."

"Yes, the shit you've done up until now has been… I don't want to say justified, but I can see your logic, which scares me. There are a few parts where you went too far."

"Such as?"

"Do I really need to point them out?"

"Humor me."

"Well, infesting every person under your protection with Locusts is a start."

"There are lots of benefits to it! I can protect them from disease, keep them from causing harm to others, and make sure they aren't trying any chaos shenanigans."

"Doctor's offices, police units, null field matrices."

"The locusts are easier."

"Maybe, but those methods are more humane."

"We're in Warhammer!"

"And you're acting no better than the Imperium. And Chaos."

"… Low blow. I don't skin people alive or make them servitors."

"True. The locusts are capable of being a lot worse than those things on both counts. Need I show you the first time we used them?"

"No! I'm way better at using them now, its not nearly as… gross as that was."

"It is, you've just become desensitized to seeing cells explode and having total control over everything around you."

"I don't use the Locusts to control people all the time. Only when I need to."

"You mean like when you need someone to slap themselves?"

"That was a one time thing. It was an example."

"Of what else you could do to your prisoners if they continued to misbehave."

"… Ok, I know that sounds bad-."

"IT IS BAD! ITS INCREDIBLY BAD!"

"Rebellions are annoying!"

"So that gives you the right to trample over their bodily autonomy?!?"

"There are instances where its saved lives!"

"Haaah… You're right, using it to force the Tau etheral to surrender was better than just slaughtering them until they gave up. Using it in a fight, I… I don't like it, but I can understand its utility. It's a good weapon to stop conflicts that have gotten out of hand."

"So, you agree with me."

"Only to a degree. Some of the shit you got up to was… downright totalitarian."

"Alright, so what would you have me do? From now on, I mean?"

"Well, don't make people slap themselves, for starters. Don't use the Sepulchers to influences their minds. Also, rollback a bit of the surveillance. At least in people's bedrooms and bathrooms. That's just creepy."

"What about chaos influence?"

"If you thought chaos was a threat to us at this point, you wouldn't have infested all of Abby's forces with locusts before you Labyrinth-ed them. I'm only saying roll it back a little. People have a right to privacy."

"… Fair enough. What else?"

"Are we sure that permanently cutting off the galaxy from the warp is a good idea?"

"… Yeah? Daemons and shit are kind of a problem. Why wouldn't it be a good idea?"

"Because it's a fundamental part of reality? Also, cutting it off actively harms people sensitive to it."

"You mean the Eldar being in pain?"

"I assume that pain happens to everyone with psychic abilites."

"Are you actually suggesting we don't fill the galaxy with null fields? That's a terrible idea!"

"Hear me out. Don't get me wrong, the Warps all kinds of fucked up right now. However, once the galaxy is at peace, the Chaos Gods will either starve or get turned into something not awful, right? Realm of Souls and all that."

"That's one theory."

"So, once Chaos isn't so… chaotic, we can roll back the null fields on the population centers and we can get the eldar to teach everyone how not to cause daemons to happen."

"Oh, because they were so good at that before."

"Fair, they'll need oversight of their own to ensure no Slaanesh-type business. We're kind of the only ones in a position for that kind of hierarchy."

"And if something happens despite our efforts?"

"Then Null Fields for a few millenia while we try and calm shit down in the materium."

"Alright, I guess I can get behind that."

"Also, we need advisers."

"We have advisers. Agnes and the others."

"And when was the last time you spoke to them about anything?"

"… Alright, who would you suggest?"

"Kira, Canorak, Agnes, Atalea, Yvraine, Eldrad. And the Emperor of Mankind if he's game."

"The… Emperor? You think he'd want anything to do with us? Doesn't he hate 'Men of Iron' like us? Also, we barely know the eldar."

"I'd rather have them all with us than against us, if possible. And, I don't think anyone really knows what his opinions are on anything, so he might be fine with it."

"Why? It's not like any of them is really a threat at this point."

"..."

"… You wanna fanboy over custodes and harlequins, don't you?"

"…"

"Admit it."

"Fuck off. If we get the Emperor on our side, we have the vast majority of humanity in our pocket. The same of Yvraine and Eldrad."

"Alright, alright, fine, but… why Kira? I don't want her involved in politics."

"She's the daughter of the 'Emperor of the Galactic Throne'. She's involved in politics already at this point."

"I am a commander, not an Emperor."

"You rule an empire, you are, by definition, an Emperor. You dug your grave when you went with that stupid name."

"Hey!"

"Anyways, do you have any plans regarding the chaos marines and cultists you trapped?"

"… You're not going to ask me if we can rehabilitate them, are you?"

"What? No! That would be a monumentally stupid thing to suggest."

"… But?"

"… Could we get the Emperor to do it, if he joins us?"

"Haaah. Fine, if he joins us and is alright with it. Otherwise, eternal prison for them."

"Cool. Do you think we'll get to meet the primarchs?"

"Probably. They'll probably try to murder us too."

"Cynic."

"Fuck off. What are we going to do about the Eldar for now?"

"Uhhh, inform them of their new positions as a member of the Galactic Federation?"

"The… what? We're the Empire of the Galactic Throne. We love empires! Like Star Wars!"

"If this were a video game or a story, I'd be fine with it. But its not. Empires bad. You should know this."

"Changing the name will do literally nothing."

"It'll make me feel better about conquering the galaxy. Besides, we don't even have the Galactic Throne anymore. The name has lost its meaning."

"What, and 'Galactic Federation' is so much better? What, did you not want to steal from the Republic?"

"Shut up. Let's just go do this."

The twin consciousnesses of the pair turned their attention back to the Eldar.

"Should we ask Yvraine if she and Roboutte are-"

"No."

"Fiiine."
 
Epilogue
Epilogue



The Galactic Federation spread across Imperium Nihilus, saving world after world from the threats of the galaxy. Herald ships led the way, a new craft joining their numbers each day. A single ship was dedicated to each sector liberated from the darkness, along with a more flexible fleet of millions of warships.

The Tau and their Empire were among the first to be subsumed. A hundred worlds were visited by a hundred Herald ships and each were forced to surrender in weeks. He found that many of their leaders had only surrendered in the hopes his jamming of their communications might be lifted so they could send for aid from the rest of the Empire. Their reactions at learning that the entire empire had fallen in less than a month was… suitably humorous, in the eyes of both Rexes.

The Ork hordes the Twin Rexes found were sealed away inside Tesseract Labyrinths while the pair studied the greenskins. The chaos warbands that roamed suffered the same fate. Perhaps one day they would be freed, but only once it could be insured they were not a threat to the common people.

Eldar Craftworlds were discovered and left alone, though not all were so accepting of the decrees of Yvraine and Eldrad that the Federation was not to be interfered with. These Craftworlds received the wrath of the Elder Rex and his fleets. Once defeated, they would be placed into the care of the Younger Rex, who was in charge of the civil aspects of the Federation, along with the Federation Council.

Dark Eldar raiders were sent to the Ynnari for rehabilitation. Most of the time, anyways, the Elder Rex was still quite vindictive towards them and the Younger Rex could not bring himself to stop the occasional murder of a truly deserving Drukhari. The Ynnari did not trust the Twin Rexes enough to just give him access to Commoragh, but Rex continued to search for a way.

Tyranid Hive Fleets were massacred on sight. They attempted to adapt to the weapons of his Heralds to some effect, but he would respond by throwing moons at them, forcing them to change their adaptations to deal with kinetics, and then repeat the process.

A large number of Space Marine chapters were found in Nihilus. They proved the most violent of the Twins' opponents, but they defeated them all the same. They did not wish to kill them, but neither could they break them of their indoctrination, so he instead sent them through portals onto the other side of the Maledictum and told them not to come back. Some did anyways, sometimes with splintered Imperial fleets, but he always tossed them back again.

Null Field Matrices suppressed the Warp around star systems, putting an end to a myriad of Warp Storms in Imperium Nihilus. Warp drives were replaced by far more reliable Precursor FTL engines.

Those Imperial and alien worlds that were not openly hostile to his forces would be visited. Any who wished to have a better life in the Federation was permitted to join and move to a Hivite. He did not make these offers to planets, but to every individual. Some refused, far more accepted. The rulers of some worlds attempted to fight him, but he forced them to stand down either through a display of his military might, through political methods or, as a final resort, through the use of Locusts.

With the implementation of new ships, new methods of faster than light travel, exponential growth, and vastly improved resource production, the whole upper half of the galaxy was cut off from the Warp within two years. None could stand before them.

The Rexes learned much in that time about both the galaxy they now inhabited and more of its technologies. Nothing so powerful or overwhelming as the Necron technology, but many things useful to the people they protected.

Disease was eradicated on every world that joined the Federation. As was poverty, homelessness, and poor living standards. The people were encouraged to spend their days improving themselves. While the Younger Rex was initially against creating propaganda, he eventually acquiesced to his elder, focusing on undoing the rampant xenophobia and arrogance of many of their peoples.

While some, like the Tau, were distrusting of the Federation, these naysayers slowly lost more and more influence as it was proven the Federation had only the interests of the people in mind. To allow participation of said people in the governance, a new institution, the Federation Senate, was implemented. One seat per Hivite city, elected by the population. These would be the people allowed to propose policies, though the Twin Rexes held veto powers. These proposals would not be voted upon by the Senate body, but the people themselves in the largest direct democracy the galaxy had ever seen.

The first meeting of the Senate, several thousand individuals, held aboard a specially constructed space station, was a turbulent one as humans, eldar, Tau, and other xeno members of the Federation interacted with each other for the first time. Rex and his units were visibly present to ensure no fights broke out and to mediate. In the end, nothing was accomplished for the first month, but things became easier with time.

Five years after the 'birth' of the Younger Rex, the Maledictum disappeared under the effects of a massive array of Null Fields and the Rexes made contact with the Imperium proper. Namely, its own two leaders, the Lord Commanders Roboute Guiliman and Lion El'jonson. The two primarchs, while not exactly pleased to see an artificial intelligence that was in control of half the galaxy, informed the Rexes that the Emperor had commanded them to seek what was essentially pseudo-membership in the Federation. They still wished for some independence.

The Twins accepted, provided they could make membership offers to any Imperial worlds they saved without retribution. The Primarchs begrudgingly accepted.

Many inquisitors, Sisters of Battle, Space Marines, and members of the Mechanicum were outraged by this, with some going so far as to engage in open conflict with the rest of the Imperium. The Twins and the Primarchs crushed these rebellions.

Ten years after that, the Imperium's fleets were all retrofitted with Precursor ftl engines. While the Navigator Houses were more than a bit upset by this, they no longer had any power and fell into destitution in the Imperium. This, however, was necessary for the return of someone far more important.

After over ten thousand years, the Emperor of Mankind rose from the Golden Throne.

The Emperor took control of the Imperium and continued the efforts of Guiliman to reorganize the dying government. It would be the work of centuries to undo the damage and corruption, but the Rexes had been so charmed by the not-a-god that they were willing to wait. The gift of Dark Age of Technology-era goodies, delivered by gold-clad custodes, also helped.

The Necrons who were not hostile to the rest of the galaxy were left alone, but some had to be eradicated or sealed away in Labyrinths. Rex met many of their most important figures, including the Silent King Szarekh, Imotekh the Stormlord, and the Phaerons of many other dynasties. He was guided in these meetings by Canorak, who was more than willing to subsume the remnants of any necrons that refused to cease their hostilities.

One necron who gave him almost no trouble, just a headache, was Trazyn the Infinite. The necron magpie was incredibly stubborn about freeing the sentient members of his collection, specifically the humans like Creed and even a clone of Primarch Fulgrim pre-corruption, but the arrival of a hundred Herald ships… convinced him. The Younger Rex gave him a copy of many of the technologies he had gathered in an effort to assuage the necron's anger, something that was only marginally effective. Many necrons who had been unwilling donators to the Infinite's museum found this hilarious and told the Rexes as much, Orokin the Divine most notable among them.

Kira married a woman by the name of Lea and adopted several children over the years. She and her family, along with anyone else interested in receiving them, were given life-extending treatments, allowing them to remain strong and active even after a century of life.

The Elder Rex eventually found a way into Commoragh and liberated the slaves of that realm. Enraged by what he saw, he fell upon the Drukhari in a vengeful wrath, one the Younger Rex could not bring himself to try and stop. When the bloodshed finally ended, only a few hundred million dark eldar remained in the city and were imprisoned in Tesseract Labyrinths until the Ynnari could find the time to rehabilitate them. Once freed, many of the slaves chose to end their own lives, despite both Rexes attempting to provide them therapeutic treatments.

Rex sent fleets of Heralds to outside the galaxy to face the Tyranid swarm, annihilating them over the course of centuries.

After two centuries, the galaxy was, while not united, free of war and many of its threats. There were many squabbles between various factions, both petty and justified, but these would never break out into anything worse than the temporary cutting off of diplomatic relations. His fleets ensured that.

After five centuries, the Chaos Gods were starved of souls and they turned upon one another in a bid for survival. After four hundred years, Khorne reigned victorious for another century before he too faded away. The Warp remained turbulent for many more centuries, but it would calm eventually and the Realm of Souls would return to what it once was.

In the end, the Twin Rexes kept the galaxy safe from threats both within and without. Although they were not satisfied with only this.

They knew there were other universes, other realms, some just as dark as this one had once been. They and their allies turned their focus to seeking a way past the barriers that divided them. And both Rexes agreed on which universe they should seek out first.

See you soon.
 
Nice ending. Feels a bit rushed, but that's probably because you put in so much stuff in so little wordcount.
Eh, it was a good story anyway.
So, judging from your name change and pfp, a Youjo Senki fic is next?
 
Thank You
I'm glad I wrote this.

I don't think I did bad, although I definitely know I didn't do perfect. That said, this was my first full-length story that I've gone through entirely. I learned a lot and I hope to improve with time as I continue to write.

I'll admit, at the tail end, I was sort of losing motivation. Not motivation to write, just motivation to continue this story. I'm not super happy with everything I wrote.

On the subject of sequels, I might do one in the future, but I don't have any plans for that right now. I've got another project in the works that should be coming soon. I might also revise this story at some point since I never did much editing for these chapters.

On the topic of my next project, I mentioned it in an earlier note. Its a Star Wars fic, no crossovers no self-insert or anything, about a man who becomes a Republic and later Imperial Officer.

I'm not going to post as often as I did for this story. Two chapters a day was... well, it got hard to keep up at the end. Additionally, I want to spend more time editing and making longer chapters for this new story. I don't know exactly what the new schedule will be, but it'll probably be around twice a week.

Again, thank you all for sticking with me to the end of the story. Even if I have a lot of places I can improve in, your support has meant a lot to me and I hope to only get better with time.

Byeee!
 
Nice ending. Feels a bit rushed, but that's probably because you put in so much stuff in so little wordcount.
Eh, it was a good story anyway.
So, judging from your name change and pfp, a Youjo Senki fic is next?

Nah, I just really like Tanya. The name change is my pen name, as I have ambitions of becoming a published author at some point in the future and 'Jackson Fox' is just what I chose.

I'm glad you liked the story.
 
This was a satisfying conclusion, especially with how it looked like it was gonna go. Thanks for writing it, and may your future writings be infected by crack due to discord delivered me exposure we will watch your career with great interest!
 
Ten years after that, the Imperium's fleets were all retrofitted with Precursor ftl engines. While the Navigator Houses were more than a bit upset by this, they no longer had any power and fell into destitution in the Imperium. This, however, was necessary for the return of someone far more important.
All I can say is that the Navigators are very lucky the Inquisition had already been dealt with beforehand. Also, I really hope either the Rexes or Big E has a plan to deal with a certain someone sleeping below the surface of Mars. Also, great job with the story.
 
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Thank you so much for this story. It was one hell of a trip, and your update pace was superhuman. It's okay to slow down a touch.

I'll be right there reading whatever you come up with next. Thank you for all the fish. :)
 
A PA commander fic with an end? Truly preposterous

Thank you for the wild ride and best of luck in your future endeavours, writing or otherwise!
 
Just one recommendation: change/add to the title (and tags, etc) "Complete". It will aid in searches and other people finding it.

Thanks for writing!
 
Also, rollback a bit of the surveillance. At least in people's bedrooms and bathrooms. That's just creepy.
"That's creepy" is not a valid reason to create unnecessary blind spots. Instead, route the surveillance to a basic AI that would trigger alarms. Unlike the case with human authority, there is absolutely no chance of leaks or malicious usage in this scenario.
People have a right to privacy
I do not agree here. Privacy and security are essential for authorities consisting of multiple entities, as there is always a chance of leaks or malicious actions. If you are a single person with godlike power and you believe yourself to be benevolent, you absolutely MUST ignore privacy concerns to address the most severe issues (by "most severe", I mean those warranting guaranteed execution by law). You don't need investigations or court proceedings if you have 100% detailed information - these processes are for fallible and mistake-prone humans. You certainly shouldn't impose your opinion or remove freedom; quite the opposite. However, you should use ALL your powers "for the greater good".

Essentially: you are a machine god, so stop thinking like a mere human. No, you shouldn't become aloof, but you should internalize your true identity. :⁠)
 
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Honestly was a really good story, gave me a ton of inspiration to write as well, I may use this methodology on actually FINISHing a story eventually. [Unfinished Writer and all that jazz]
 
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Love the story. Could go for another ~50K for my tastes, but I'm satisfied.
If you make a sequel, as you suggested, I wonder how it'll go. There are not many fucked up universes that could stand against Super World Engines, so the only option would be 1-2 chapters for each world, and jump to the next. Those that could tho, either aren't really technological, or are so far up, it would be like Rex's first meeting with the Drukhari, but in those cases, they would not stop shooting.
Kira married a woman
 
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