I'm saying the fault is shared, not just a cut and dry "Marquis was being dumb".
There could also be other things he's concerned about, like them assuming Amelia was kidnapped or something. Acting like Marquis is a terrible person for not telling people who are incredibly aggressive about attacking him about his daughter ignores the fact that they are the reason there is any danger in the house.

If someone lights a house on fire, the people inside being in danger is the arsonist's fault.
If someone starts shooting a gun at another person, the people around them are in danger because of the person who started shooting.
If someone starts a fight with superpowers involved, they are the reason bystanders are in danger.

And taking that analogy to its conclusion, if SWAT raids a crime lord's home, and the crime lord shoots back, it's SWAT's fault if the neighbor gets hit by a stray bullet, not the crime lord's.

Their actions make it clear they had no reason to believe there were any innocent people on the premises. Accusations that they didn't contact law enforcement, didn't take reasonable precautions to ensure no innocent bystanders were around (as opposed to checking things out and missing things), or anything else of the sort is, incidentally, not indicated anywhere at all in canon. It's fanon. And my rant which started this, if you'll recall, was about fanon.

Never mind that Marquis openly admits that they will not believe he's trying to protect a little girl in the closet, despite his "code," his ability to get to anywhere in the room without anyone in the Brigade being able to stop him, the fact that the presence of a little girl is easily proven by opening a door, and them starting by giving him a chance to surrender and then stopping the fight to give him a chance to explain.

Let's reiterate that. You are arguing that the Brigade is more reckless about the life of someone they did not know existed than the person who knew she was there and passed up multiple opportunities to explain the situation and yet trusts them to take care of her once he was defeated.
 
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*sighs*
It's obvious no one is going to change their minds about Marquis' actions that night. I'm bowing out of the topic, because there's nothing productive to be achieved here.
 
And taking that analogy to its conclusion, if SWAT raids a crime lord's home, and the crime lord shoots back, it's SWAT's fault if the neighbor gets hit by a stray bullet, not the crime lord's.

Their actions make it clear they had no reason to believe there were any innocent people on the premises. Accusations that they didn't contact law enforcement, didn't take reasonable precautions to ensure no innocent bystanders were around (as opposed to checking things out and missing things), or anything else of the sort is, incidentally, not indicated anywhere at all in canon. It's fanon. And my rant which started this, if you'll recall, was about fanon.

Never mind that Marquis openly admits that they will not believe he's trying to protect a little girl in the closet, despite his "code," his ability to get to anywhere in the room without anyone in the Brigade being able to stop him, the fact that the presence of a little girl is easily proven by opening a door, and them starting by giving him a chance to surrender and then stopping the fight to give him a chance to explain.

Let's reiterate that. You are arguing that the Brigade is more reckless about the life of someone they did not know existed than the person who knew she was there and passed up multiple opportunities to explain the situation and yet trusts them to take care of her once he was defeated.
Multiple people can be at fault in a situation.
You are focusing on Marquis's actions, but not the Brigade's, and you're ignoring the context of this being an on-going, antagonistic conflict between him and the Brigade.
Yes, Marquis fucked up.
This was compounded by the Brigade being incredibly aggressive.
 
And the fact that the leadership of many (by no means all, obviously) governments are neither lifetime positions nor gained through violent elimination of the opposition.

*snerk* That can describe literally any corrupt-ass government. Corrupt plutocracies ruling through politicians isn't exactly some historical anomaly. It's happening right now in the US with corporate lobbyists.

if SWAT raids a crime lord's home, and the crime lord shoots back, it's SWAT's fault if the neighbor gets hit by a stray bullet

It damn well should be, yes. The responsibility for the well being of bystanders is theirs by default. We don't accept civilian casualties in friggin' law enforcement.

Nope, they aren't. At least, not in New York.

That's not exactly a good example considering how, y'know, America's relationship with it's police and what they're allowed to get away with is completely batshit. Particularly the NYPD.

I mean, if we're going to start comparing Superheroes to the NYPD, I can roll with that. Honestly, I think Wildbow's depiction is downright rosy compared to what a superheroes as cops scenario could look like.
 
Multiple people can be at fault in a situation.
You are focusing on Marquis's actions, but not the Brigade's, and you're ignoring the context of this being an on-going, antagonistic conflict between him and the Brigade.
Yes, Marquis fucked up.
This was compounded by the Brigade being incredibly aggressive.

Funny thing about that... my point -- restating again, since you seemed to have missed it both times -- is that I believe Marquis was objectively more reckless with Amelia's life than the Brigade because, unlike the Brigade, he was aware that Amelia actually existed.

I'm focusing on Marquis's actions because, as per my rant, I'm FUCKING SICK AND TIRED OF THE FANDOM IGNORING THEM.

If you can point to any post in this discussion in which I claimed the Brigade had no fault, I will happily retract it.

That's not exactly a good example considering how, y'know, America's relationship with it's police and what they're allowed to get away with is completely batshit. Particularly the NYPD.

I mean, if we're going to start comparing Superheroes to the NYPD, I can roll with that. Honestly, I think Wildbow's depiction is downright rosy compared to what a superheroes as cops scenario could look like.

Well, considering we're talking about characters in the United States, it seemed the most relevant jurisdiction to focus on. I mean, seriously, why are people trying to bring governments or law enforcement not in the US into the discussion when the topic is about a fictional city in the US? I really don't get it. When we're talking about Brockton Bay, a city in the US, governments and law enforcement that are not in the US are completely irrelevant.
 
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I think the problem comes down to Marquis hugs Amy when she arrives in the Birdcage so in peoples minds he's a better parent than Carol (which isn't that hard) and as each new writer comes into the mix their stories build on each other for how 'good' he is.

This is an example of Flanderization Flanderization - TV Tropes but in this case it's by story as opposed to episode.
 
Funny thing about that... my point -- restating again, since you seemed to have missed it both times -- is that I believe Marquis was objectively more reckless with Amelia's life than the Brigade because, unlike the Brigade, he was aware that Amelia actually existed.

I'll agree that people who want to depict the Marquis as super dad extraordinaire are being silly, but I don't think the Brigade not knowing about Amelia wipes them of responsibility for the safety of civilians. They attacked him in his home, not some supervillain lair - and the Brigade didn't have access to anyone like Tattletale, so they went into it saying "this level of possible bystander collateral is acceptable".
 
I'll agree that people who want to depict the Marquis as super dad extraordinaire are being silly, but I don't think the Brigade not knowing about Amelia wipes them of responsibility for the safety of civilians. They attacked him in his home, not some supervillain lair - and the Brigade didn't have access to anyone like Tattletale, so they went into it saying "this level of possible bystander collateral is acceptable".

Again, it reduces the level of recklessness they're guilty of. They acted the entire time as though anyone else being present wasn't even a possibility; note their surprise when he reveals that what he's protecting is even alive just by using the pronoun "her." And everything I bolded in the quote is an assumption of facts not in evidence; to my knowledge, nowhere does canon say anything about how much if any surveillance, assistance from non-team members (like Thinkers), or preparation they had for this operation.
 
She does heal the Wards after the bank robbery in Interlude 3.x, but it's pretty explicitly stated to be as thanks for coming to rescue her (and letting Glory Girl tag along).
If the ethics rules for government employees in Earth Bet is anything like our world, then in accepting the healing, the Wards may have violated the ethics rules since they're getting valuable parahuman healing under unusual circumstances if Amy only typically heals without appointments in a civilian hospital setting. Maybe a bribe for overlooking GG's behavior or letting her participate in the operation when she normally shouldn't have been included. Or maybe a bribe for taking Amy's life into greater consideration than someone else's during the crime. Not saying that's what happened, but that's what it could appear as and that's why those rules exist.

So, either the Wards shouldn't have accepted the healing or the ethics rules are different on Earth Bet compared to our world, which would not be unexpected.
 
Okay, let's go through this in detail:

"Stand down," Brandish ordered.

"Now why would I want to do that?" Marquis asked. "I've won every time your team has challenged me, this situation isn't so different."

"You have nowhere to run. We've got you where you live," Manpower spoke.

"I have plenty of places to run," Marquis replied, shrugging. "It's just a house, I won't lose any sleep over leaving it behind. It's an expensive house, I'll admit, but that little detail loses much of its meaning when you're as ridiculously wealthy as I am."

The Brockton Bay Brigade closed in on the man who stood by his leather armchair, wearing a black silk bathrobe. He held his ground.

"If you'll allow me to finish my wine-" he started, bending down to reach for the wine glass that sat beside the armchair.
This is not a case of hot pursuit. If Marquis has time to get home, change into a bathrobe (most likely after having a bath) then start enjoying a glass of wine, with his daughter in the room, then that's in no way a case of hot pursuit.

Manpower and Brandish charged. They didn't get two steps before Marquis turned himself into a sea urchin, bone spears no thicker than a needle extending out of every pore, some extending twelve or fifteen feet.
He's keeping it civil, trying to avoid a fight (possibly even trying to talk them into leaving). He's not attacking. They're the ones who charged in to attack.

Lightstar was the next to go down, as one splinter that had embedded in a bookshelf branched out to pierce his shoulder. Fleur caught him before he could land on top of more of the bone needles.
That could've hit a much more fatal place. Marquis was holding back.

Brandish shifted her footing, and the slivers of bone that scattered the ground around her shifted, some reshaping into starbursts of ultrafine needle points, waiting for her to step on them. She knew from experience that they would penetrate the soles of her boots.

Lady Photon fired a spray of laser blasts in Marquis' general direction, tearing into bookshelves, antique furniture and the rack of wine bottles. Marquis created a shield of bone to protect himself, expanding its dimensions until it was taller and wider than he was.

He's going to burrow, Brandish thought. He'd done it often enough in the past, disappearing underground the second he'd dropped out of sight, then attacking through the ground, floor or rooftop.

"Careful!" she shouted.

Lady Photon spent the rest of the energy she'd gathered in her hands, spraying another spray of lasers at Marquis' shield. Then, as they'd practiced, she prepared to use her forcefield to shield Flashbang, Fleur and Lightstar. Brandish and Manpower could defend themselves.

A barrier of bone plates erupted around one corner of the room, rising just in time to keep some of Lady Photon's salvo from striking a closet door. Marquis emerged from the floor a short distance away, driving a spike of bone up through the ground and then deconstructing it to reveal himself.

"What are you protecting?" Lady Photon asked.

"I'd tell you, but you wouldn't believe me." He glanced around, "I don't suppose we could change venues? I'll be good if you are."
Right there, he asks to change venues. And given their later disbelief that he has a child, he's justified in saying that they wouldn't believe him. Also, letting the superheroes know that the villain has a child? That can never end well. (Especially given what Manpower says next).

"Seems like we should take every advantage we can," Manpower said.

"If you're talking purely about increasing your odds of victory, yes. But should you? No, you really shouldn't."
He's trying to steer them away from the closet without actually telling them that it's his daughter in there. At best, they might try to 'rescue' her, and then his attention will be divided.

"Brandish!" Manpower shouted. "Same plan, just the two of us!"

Right. Their battle plan wasn't useless, now. Just harder to pull off.

This would take some courage.
They cold-bloodedly chose to use one of their enemy's good qualities against him. Can I point out how fucking stupid this is? A man who had beaten them more than once before, who had held back, and they want to encourage him not to hold back? They want to show him that it's actually better for him to not hold to that particular principle?

It's great if it works. It's tragic if it doesn't.

After-action report:
PRT: "So, Brandish threw herself into the way of the giant bone scythe, why, exactly?"
BBB: "She, uh, expected him to destroy it rather than hurt her."
PRT: "Did he?"
BBB: "The first time he did. The second time, he didn't."
PRT: "So, she basically pushed him to change his tactics."
BBB: "Ummm ..."
PRT: "Was this a spur of the moment thing?"
BBB: "No, actually, we planned to do this."
PRT: " ... so you all knew she was going to do it."
BBB: "Or Lady Photon, or Fleur. Whoever was handy."
PRT: "... you chose to put your women into danger to beat this guy. Lethal danger."
BBB: "Um ....."
PRT: "Right, that's it. You have the right to remain silent."

Any other day, Brandish would have followed him into the room below. A wine cellar, it seemed.
He tries to lead her away.

Instead, she turned and charged for the closet, creating a sword out of the crackling energy her power provided, slashing through the plates of bone that had surrounded it, then drawing the blade back to thrust through the wooden door-
Yeah, that's right. Blindly attack something that you have no idea what's on the other side.

For all she knew, it was a hostage, a girlfriend, anything. But Brandish wasn't thinking 'hero'. She was thinking 'win at absolutely all costs'.

Marquis emerged between her and the closet door. She plunged the sword into his shoulder without hesitation. She could smell his flesh burn, the wound cauterized by the same energy that formed the blade.

"Damnation," Marquis muttered the word, sagging.

She let him fall, and then pressed the sword to his throat. If he gave her an excuse, she would finish him.
Not a reason. An excuse. She wants to murder him. A downed, wounded foe, and she wants to kill him, given any excuse at all.

"The motherfucker has a kid?" Lightstar muttered the question, as if to himself. "And she's, what, five?"
They wouldn't have believed him if he'd told them.

She wondered if it was because she liked him on a level. Was her psyche trying to protect her from repeating her earlier mistake?

"Little close for comfort, Brandish dear," Marquis spoke.

She looked down. She'd unconsciously pressed the blade closer. When she lifted it, she could see the burn at the base of his throat.
She nearly killed him, right there. Nearly murdered a downed, surrendered foe.

"Thank you kindly," he spoke. There was a trace of irony there.

That cultured act, the civility that was real. Marquis was fair, he played by the rules. His rules, but he stuck to them without fail. It didn't match her vision of what a criminal should be. It was jarring, creating a kind of dissonance.
She doesn't follow through on the thought. Marquis was fair. He played by the rules. The Brigade broke them (going after him in his secret identity, attacking him in his own home, striking at something he asked them not to strike at).

"Let's call the PRT," Manpower said. "We should get Marquis into custody stat."
They have not notified the PRT or the police about this at all. Home invasion is a crime.

"Wouldn't mind some medical treatment, if you could rush that?" Marquis asked.

"…And medical treatment," Manpower amended his statement.
And they haven't even given him medical treatment. Even after 'some time' has passed. Even after he's surrendered. Some heroes.
 
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Funny thing about that... my point -- restating again, since you seemed to have missed it both times -- is that I believe Marquis was objectively more reckless with Amelia's life than the Brigade because, unlike the Brigade, he was aware that Amelia actually existed.
The Brigade is just as reckless in general, because they're charging into the home of a criminal, and either A) did a shit job of surveying it or B) didn't bother to do any reconnaissance; both of these options endanger both them and anyone nearby.

I'm focusing on Marquis's actions because, as per my rant, I'm FUCKING SICK AND TIRED OF THE FANDOM IGNORING THEM.
The fandom doesn't. There may be some people who ignore them, but there are people who ignore the actions of every fucking character.
Frankly, the fandom spends more time ignoring his existence than justifying his actions in that interlude.

Again, it reduces the level of recklessness they're guilty of. They acted the entire time as though anyone else being present wasn't even a possibility; note their surprise when he reveals that what he's protecting is even alive just by using the pronoun "her." And everything I bolded in the quote is an assumption of facts not in evidence; to my knowledge, nowhere does canon say anything about how much if any surveillance, assistance from non-team members (like Thinkers), or preparation they had for this operation.
What happened to your claim they were "in hot pursuit" of Marquis?
 
Again, it reduces the level of recklessness they're guilty of. They acted the entire time as though anyone else being present wasn't even a possibility;
Which they should have at least considered. And checked. I believe they call it 'due diligence'.

note their surprise when he reveals that what he's protecting is even alive just by using the pronoun "her." And everything I bolded in the quote is an assumption of facts not in evidence; to my knowledge, nowhere does canon say anything about how much if any surveillance, assistance from non-team members (like Thinkers), or preparation they had for this operation.
None.

They hadn't even notified the PRT. About any of this.

Any sort of surveillance of the house would have picked up the fact that a six year old girl was living there.

They didn't do it.
 
This is not a case of hot pursuit. If Marquis has time to get home, change into a bathrobe (most likely after having a bath) then start enjoying a glass of wine, with his daughter in the room, then that's in no way a case of hot pursuit.

Fair enough.

He's keeping it civil, trying to avoid a fight (possibly even trying to talk them into leaving). He's not attacking. They're the ones who charged in to attack.

I never disputed this. Why are you even bringing it up?

That could've hit a much more fatal place. Marquis was holding back.

And?

Right there, he asks to change venues. And given their later disbelief that he has a child, he's justified in saying that they wouldn't believe him. Also, letting the superheroes know that the villain has a child? That can never end well. (Especially given what Manpower says next).

Once again, telling them that there's an innocent little girl in there =/= telling them it's his daughter.

He's trying to steer them away from the closet without actually telling them that it's his daughter in there. At best, they might try to 'rescue' her, and then his attention will be divided.

And does so in such a deliberately obtuse way that it almost comes across to me as though he doesn't want them to believe him.

They cold-bloodedly chose to use one of their enemy's good qualities against him. Can I point out how fucking stupid this is? A man who had beaten them more than once before, who had held back, and they want to encourage him not to hold back? They want to show him that it's actually better for him to not hold to that particular principle?

And?

He tries to lead her away.

When he could have defused the risk to Amelia by simply telling them there was an innocent bystander nearby.

Yeah, that's right. Blindly attack something that you have no idea what's on the other side.

For all she knew, it was a hostage, a girlfriend, anything. But Brandish wasn't thinking 'hero'. She was thinking 'win at absolutely all costs'.

True. Of course, it never occurred to them that there would be anyone on the premises at all. So either the Brigade are blindingly stupid... or they did some surveillance and found no indication that there was anyone else present, having missed the little girl who may never have left the house.

Not a reason. An excuse. She wants to murder him. A downed, wounded foe, and she wants to kill him, given any excuse at all.

The only difference between an excuse and a reason is that it's an excuse if the person acting already wants to but was holding back until it the excuse/reason comes up.

They wouldn't have believed him if he'd told them.

Once again, telling them that there's an innocent little girl in there =/= telling them it's his daughter.

She nearly killed him, right there. Nearly murdered a downed, surrendered foe.

Because she lost control. She is, in fact, still human.

She doesn't follow through on the thought. Marquis was fair. He played by the rules. The Brigade broke them (going after him in his secret identity, attacking him in his own home, striking at something he asked them not to strike at).

And? So they went after him in his civilian life. How many of his victims only had civilian lives? They attacked him in his own home. So, you think a criminal should be able to go home and get away with all his crimes scot-free? They attacked something he asked them not to attack. How many people do you think he killed that people asked him not to kill?

They have not notified the PRT or the police about this at all. Home invasion is a crime.

Ah, thanks for the cite.

And they haven't even given him medical treatment. Even after 'some time' has passed. Even after he's surrendered. Some heroes.

And how much medical treatment did he provide for the people he murdered?

No matter what you say about how the Brigade are these horrible, bad, evil people, I think we can safely say that Marquis was worse.

Your insistence on tryiing to paint a crime lord and multiple murderer -- apparently just because he puts on a gentlemanly air and won't hurt women or children, but does deliberately murder people -- as better than a group of people who risk their lives on a regular basis to stop criminals but don't go around knowingly attacking innocent people is, honestly, more than a little disturbing.

What happened to your claim they were "in hot pursuit" of Marquis?

My point was that we don't know.

Any sort of surveillance of the house would have picked up the fact that a six year old girl was living there.

They didn't do it.

Really? Got a cite for this? Do we know for a fact that Amelia didn't just stay inside most of the time? Or does his home have big windows with the drapes open?
 
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Once again, telling them that there's an innocent little girl in there =/= telling them it's his daughter.

At which point they probably assume he kidnapped her or something, because what's Marquis doing with an innocent little girl in his closet while he's wearing a bathrobe and drinking a glass of wine?

I mean...you don't have to stretch far for that to sound incredibly unsavory. They're heroes and will probably just be more driven to get whoever's out of that closet away from the supervillain, because why would they trust Marquis? Yes he has his code, yes they use it against him, but there's still the immediate question of why is she in your closet?
 
At which point they probably assume he kidnapped her or something, because what's Marquis doing with an innocent little girl in his closet while he's wearing a bathrobe and drinking a glass of wine?

I mean...you don't have to stretch far for that to sound incredibly unsavory. They're heroes and will probably just be more driven to get whoever's out of that closet away from the supervillain, because why would they trust Marquis? Yes he has his code, yes they use it against him, but there's still the immediate question of why is she in your closet?
So they assume she has been kidnapped. How does this endanger her or worsen Marquis' s tactical position? If anything, it lets him bluff (assuming it's a bluff) using her as a hostage.
 
@Ack, and everyone else defending Marquis' actions.

Saying Marquis has a code while still being a multiple time murderer gang lord, while other criminal elements don't do that? Sure, Marquis is the best of two evils. But you're still comparing two turds.

One turd is shinier. We can all agree on that, feel free to polish it as much as you like. But at the end of the day, it is still and will always be shit.

There is nothing you can do or say that will make that shit into anything else but shit.

Stop polishing a turd. It was disposed of, and rightly so.
 
why is she in your closet?
Actually, by itself I think this is a very interesting question- I mean, I guess that she could have just happened to be hiding in the closet for a game of hide and seek or something, but the more likely answer seems to be that Marquis heard the door being broken down, and had just enough time to shove her in there and tell her to stay hidden, with enough time left for him to get back to his armchair and wineglass in time to exchange quips.

The thing is, if he had enough time to do that, he probably had enough time to tell Amelia to hide and then run. Draw the fight outside, where Amelia couldn't get injured. But he didn't do that, because that would be tantamount to admitting the Brigade could beat him, and his pride couldn't allow that. So he stayed, exchanged quips, and then fought with the Brigade while knowing Amelia was hidden nearby and he couldn't go all out for fear of harming her.

So yeah, that strikes me as a case of pride goeth before the fall mixed in with some rather questionable parenting.
 
Fair enough.

I never disputed this. Why are you even bringing it up?
Because it shows how obsessed they were with capturing him. They weren't thinking, they were acting.

Much as I'm guessing they acted when they got the information about who he was.

He could have killed Lightstar. Easily. He didn't. He chose not to. A man known to be a murderer, chose not to kill. That's a pretty significant act.

Once again, telling them that there's an innocent little girl in there =/= telling them it's his daughter.
It still tells them that there's a little girl in there. One who bears an unmistakeable family resemblance to him (so that cat would be very shortly out of the bag).

So yes, telling them there's a little girl in there DOES EQUAL telling them his daughter is in there, just as soon as they see her.

And even if it doesn't, how exactly are the Brigade going to react? Walk away? Not a fucking hope in hell. No, what they'd want to do is remove her from the situation. That is, they would want to remove her (ie, 'rescue' her from Marquis). Which he would not allow.

End result: bad things happen.

Tell me that's not how it would go down. Give me a more plausible scenario.

And does so in such a deliberately obtuse way that it almost comes across to me as though he doesn't want them to believe him.

When he's asking them to avoid the closet, to move away, he's trying to do so without telling them that she's there, for the above stated reasons.

They see this as a weakness, and don't wonder if what he's protecting is actually worth protecting. They just see it as something that he thinks is worth protecting. So they use another selfless impulse of his against him. And as a result, Brandish nearly kills a little girl.

And if they'd misread him, or the strength of his principles, Brandish would be dead.

Or to put it another way: using your opponent's unwillingness to go all out against him is usually the villain's ploy.

We don't expect the hero to break his principles in that situation, but that's the hero. When heroes use it against the villain, and it works, that says to me that the heroes are acting just a little villainous, and the villain is acting a little heroic.

I mean, seriously, he could have just gone "fuck it" and killed her. Physically, it wouldn't have been hard. But he didn't.

That is not the act of an irredeemably evil man.

When he could have defused the risk to Amelia by simply telling them there was an innocent bystander nearby.
I've already stated why that wouldn't work.

True. Of course, it never occurred to them that there would be anyone on the premises at all. So either the Brigade are blindingly stupid... or they did some surveillance and found no indication that there was anyone else present, having missed the little girl who may never have left the house.
I find it amazingly unlikely that a little girl who lives on a large estate never once went outside to run around and play on the lawn.

Nope, I personally angle toward the view that the Brigade jumped straight in without ever once checking. It fits their MO to this point.

The only difference between an excuse and a reason is that it's an excuse if the person acting already wants to but was holding back until it the excuse/reason comes up.
The difference between an excuse and a reason is that an excuse is subjective while a reason is objective. Excuses are tainted by what you, personally, want. Reasons exist outside of that. Him attacking the team after surrendering would have been a reason. Him making an involuntary motion that she decided to interpret as a potentially hostile act, and then stabbing him before she found out for sure would have been an excuse.

Once again, telling them that there's an innocent little girl in there =/= telling them it's his daughter.
Once again, nope. That argument has been dealt with.

Because she lost control. She is, in fact, still human.
Not an aspect I would want coming to the fore in someone who aspires to be a poster child for superhero accountability.

She came close to murdering both Amelia and Marquis, the latter after he had agreed to surrender.

Had the positions been reversed, she would have been in far less danger from him.

So ... yeah ... the hero would have been safer from the villain than the villain was from the hero.

Just saying.

And? So they went after him in his civilian life. How many of his victims only had civilian lives? They attacked him in his own home. So, you think a criminal should be able to go home and get away with all his crimes scot-free? They attacked something he asked them not to attack. How many people do you think he killed that people asked him not to kill?
How do you think Fleur felt about it when exactly the same fucking thing happened to her? Only ... wait, yeah, it was a bad guy attacking a hero. So the hero died.

Really great example they set.

The unwritten rules are a thing. They exist for a reason. The fact that the Brigade couldn't beat him except by screwing with one of the underpinnings of the superhero culture suggests to me that maybe they should have spoken to the PRT first.

Ah, thanks for the cite.
Welcome.

And how much medical treatment did he provide for the people he murdered?
Given that he very nearly ended up as a murder victim himself, that's probably not the question that should be asked.

As for people who had surrendered to him (and whose surrender he had accepted) I personally think that he would have treated them with a touch more courtesy. (If only to piss them off).

No matter what you say about how the Brigade are these horrible, bad, evil people, I think we can safely say that Marquis was worse.
I'm saying that Brandish should never have put on a costume or been let anywhere near children, and that as a group they were criminally incompetent at actually being superheroes, at least at that point.

Note the result of their influence in later years on Glory "How many of his bones did you break?" Girl. Or the pressure (deliberate or otherwise) that they put on Amy to be a hero to the point that she felt actually guilty when she wasn't healing people.

Let's count their sins.
1) They didn't check for innocents. Little children leave their toys everywhere. So it's safe to say that they simply didn't bother to check.
2) They didn't pass on what information they had to the police or PRT. This is because either:
2a) They they knew (or thought they knew) that they would be told to back off, this is unwritten-rules territory, and Marquis had to go down.
2b) They knew (or thought they knew) that the PRT would send the Protectorate and/or mundane troops in, and effect the capture themselves, and they couldn't have that because they had to capture him themselves, dammit!
2c) They simply didn't even think of it. Because MARQUIS!
3) Home invasion. Now, I don't give a shit if vigilantes are legal in Worm. There are certain legal hoops that even the police have to jump through. Search warrants, for instance. Civilians, even powered vigilantes, are still bound by the law. Villain has his base in an abandoned warehouse? Sure, go right in. An alleged villain is in his own home? Sorry, gonna need something to go with that.
TL:DR - they broke the fucking law, right there. (Of course, they did capture Marquis, so the PRT just brushed that under the carpet).
Now, just as an example, suppose they'd gotten bad info. They bust into the wrong guy's house. He denies everything. They don't believe him. He looks enough like Marquis for them to attack him. End result? He's injured or dead, and they're in a shit ton of trouble.
4) Using his good points against him. You keep dismissing that, but that's still a dick move. Or a remarkably stupid one, if he gets desperate enough to decide that his principles aren't worth dying or getting captured. They put Brandish's life on the line, betting that he was willing to put himself at a disadvantage to avoid doing serious harm to her.
5) Letting Brandish anywhere near a costume, instead of insisting on therapy for her.

I'm willing to bet that, if someone had miscalculated and she'd gotten hurt, they would have pointed all blame at him. Because he didn't keep being stupid enough to try not to hurt her.

Your insistence on tryiing to paint a crime lord and multiple murderer -- apparently just because he puts on a gentlemanly air and won't hurt women or children, but does deliberately murder people -- as better than a group of people who risk their lives on a regular basis to stop criminals but don't go around knowingly attacking innocent people is, honestly, more than a little disturbing.
As a villain, he was better than most. As heroes, they were actually kind of sucky. Especially as they did some morally questionable things.

My point was that we don't know.
Evidence says that they weren't.

Really? Got a cite for this? Do we know for a fact that Amelia didn't just stay inside most of the time? Or does his home have big windows with the drapes open?
See above regarding little girls running around and playing on the lawn. Kids play in the back yard. It's a thing. Also, toys would likely have been left around (ask any single parent of a six year old). I find it bordering on the ludicrous that they would not have picked up any idea that there was a child living in the house if they'd done any checking at all.

Actually, by itself I think this is a very interesting question- I mean, I guess that she could have just happened to be hiding in the closet for a game of hide and seek or something, but the more likely answer seems to be that Marquis heard the door being broken down, and had just enough time to shove her in there and tell her to stay hidden, with enough time left for him to get back to his armchair and wineglass in time to exchange quips.
He was standing by the armchair. This suggests to me that they had been having a father-daughter night in, and he'd been telling stories or even reading a book to her (there were bookshelves all around), he heard a noise and bundled her into the closet. They came smashing in, and he confronted them.

The thing is, if he had enough time to do that, he probably had enough time to tell Amelia to hide and then run. Draw the fight outside, where Amelia couldn't get injured. But he didn't do that, because that would be tantamount to admitting the Brigade could beat him, and his pride couldn't allow that. So he stayed, exchanged quips, and then fought with the Brigade while knowing Amelia was hidden nearby and he couldn't go all out for fear of harming her.
I'm of the opinion that he didn't have time to leave the room (probably only one door). Yes, he could have done the burrowing trick, but then they would have searched for him and probably discovered Amelia in the process.

His plan was probably to hide Amelia and deal with the heroes. He didn't count on Lady Photon being overly free with her laser salvos.

So yeah, that strikes me as a case of pride goeth before the fall mixed in with some rather questionable parenting.
As far as intention was concerned, he was a pretty good dad. He did dad things with her, and even did the pretend tea party. Up until the Brigade came into it, he was doing well. After that, it was a considerably fluid situation, with the heroes not really acting like heroes, which screwed him up.

And one more thing. Suppose revealing her had caused them to think twice. Suppose that they'd seen the girl and backed off. What then?

I'll tell you what then. They would have seen the resemblance, even if he hadn't told them that she was his daughter. They leave the site (either instead of, or after, having their asses handed to them). They go to the PRT and tell them what happened. Word starts getting around that Marquis has a daughter. The PRT is not a hermetically sealed environment, after all. Sooner or later (probably sooner) Marquis' enemies start hearing the same thing. And that's if they haven't heard that Marquis actually lives on that big old estate up under the mountains. Which they probably would.

So what he fears would come to pass anyway.

His only chance of keeping Amelia safe was if nobody knew of her.

Unfortunately, the heroes seemed determined to endanger her, one way or the other.
 
His only chance of keeping Amelia safe was if nobody knew of her.
...Or, or, or, or, or... Or, and bare with me because this is a totally revolutionary idea -- he could've quit, left Brockton Bay with Amelia, and retired with her somewhere far away to live a peaceful life. I mean, sure, it'd accomplish what you're saying, but using your argument of condemning people for things they could've done but didn't...

If the heroes were determined to endanger a girl they couldn't have known was there and, thus, were in the wrong...

...Then if Marquis could've left long before this with Amelia in tow and didn't, he is also in the wrong.

But on a scale of who's the bigger asshole, yeah, you're misplacing the blame here. In one corner, you have a crime lord who's well known for killing people on a regular basis -- no matter his "code of honor", he's a murderer. You don't let murderers walk.

In the other corner, you have a team of heroes who probably could've done a better job... but didn't. They tried their best to help people and save them from danger, and they acted to the best of their ability to do this. If you're arguing they were screw-ups, sure. I can get behind that.

But you're not going to win an argument by saying Marquis was totally in the right and the heroes in this case were totally in the wrong.

At best, the heroes were about thirty percent in the wrong... and going against someone who was ninety percent in the wrong. It's not even close.
 
See above regarding little girls running around and playing on the lawn. Kids play in the back yard. It's a thing. Also, toys would likely have been left around (ask any single parent of a six year old). I find it bordering on the ludicrous that they would not have picked up any idea that there was a child living in the house if they'd done any checking at all.
Usually, you'd be right. Unfortunately, Marquis's lawn is a minefield.
worm interlude 15 said:
Brandish walked away. The others would handle this. She would wait outside to guide the responders into the manor, past the traps Marquis had set in place.
 
Please refrain from making claims about my intentions. I don't think you intended to annoy me, but you did.

It was not a joke, it was an assessment. Marquis was a crime lord, but one who styled himself as a 'better class' of criminal. That implies at least the possibility of a little self-delusion, and maybe more than a little. He was a pretty terrible person, but he was comparing himself to people like Allfather and whichever Butcher was running the Teeth at the time, which would only make that belief easier to justify to himself, as would the BBB's habit of using his sense of chivalry against him.

The BBB, meanwhile, seem to be 'heroes with a D in Good,' if the depiction we have of them in that interlude is typical of them.

Usually, you'd be right. Unfortunately, Marquis's lawn is a minefield.
There's still the house. It has not been so long since my sister was six that I have forgotten. Any reasonable amount of surveillance would have shown them the presence of a child. Their failure to notify the PRT beforehand also counts strongly against them.
 
I expect this post will get everyone in the thread mad at me, but as far as I can tell both sides of the argument regarding Marquis are basing their arguments on fanon which is mostly equally valid, it just depends on the assumption you're using.

Pro Brigade: The Brigade didn't do anything that indicated they thought there was anyone else in the house so obviously they had no logical reason to think there was and the Marquis was dumb and uncaring for not telling them.
Anti Brigade: The Brigade didn't do anything that indicated they thought there was anyone else in the house so obviously had to have rushed in without checking and had to have ignored all the indications there's a child in the house and the Marquis was acting to protect his daughter from them.

There's nothing wrong with using interpretations of canon to construct your fanon, everyone does that but arguying about which fanon is true seems pointless.
 
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