Tome of the Orange Sky (Naruto/MGLN)

"But I'm bored! Do YOU want to see what I come up with if I get too bored!?"
The older Uzumaki on the island: "Of course! That's when some of the best innovations happen! Well, that, or everyone has to team up to pacify the Horror that's been called from a hole in reality. And don't forget the time it only came to get away from a family gathering for a few days. "
 
Chapter 81 - Expanding Territory
Copies of Uzushio's new rank standards books had been sent off to all other hidden villages, major and minor, as well as to all other major settlements on the continent. The 'skill-based' ones in particular for everyone, and the full system for Konoha. Shisui had reviewed the summary of what had been done in Uzushio, groaned, and started working on implementing the split system as well as it made far too much sense not to. Unlike with Uzushio, it was going to be much more of an uphill battle to convince everyone involved that it was a good idea and/or not a repeated series of insults as permissions and trust levels were adjusted.

Both Iwa and Suna had sent apologies explaining that their planned exams likely wouldn't be meeting the standards provided. All indications were that Konoha was the only hidden village not going into a 'shit, we need to revamp our skill assessments' panic as well, now that a proverbial gauntlet had been thrown down. Sending out the standards to the potential clients was probably the most panic-inducing part for most of them though, given that they put forth a set of capabilities that almost certainly ranked most 'chunin' on the continent as genin and half the 'jounin' as chunin.

Naruto didn't really care.

The new 'light chakra' area of Bloodline Island had been put together, and an attempt at making a 'dark charka' node had been made. That just hadn't worked, at all. Drawing on, and even generating, 'dark chakra' didn't seem to need a chakra net node. Instead, it seemed to be more of a corruption of the sage process than anything else, drawing in already-tainted bits of natural energy. Pulling on it was less 'special ability' and more 'learned trick'...and the 'light chakra' effect was essentially purifying and releasing the corrupted natural energy.

Yoko had put the effort into figuring out how to make automatic 'draw in and purify' seals, when you stuck a light chakra node bead into them. She'd then started sticking medical chakra and bite-to-heal beads in too, feeding them with the purified chakra. The resulting seal was now being put into all Uzushio hot springs, drawing in what amounted to 'negative energies' and turning it into a general healing effect for anyone in the hot spring.

It was a much better use of the tainted natural energy than letting it build up and cause problems, and the seals generally kept the bunkers charged with enough ambient chakra to keep everything else powered and drastically increase recovery rates as a side effect.



Hinata winced as she looked through Naruto's latest...she wasn't sure what to call it. The code was impossibly elegant, implying that he'd done his 'rework it as seals' trick. The electronics were...passable, and possibly intentionally inefficient because she was reasonably certain that some of the newer and smaller components wouldn't work for the interface he'd built. She wasn't even going to try to figure out the physical stones involved, but there was a large 'primary' stone and then a smaller one for each 'satellite location'.

This entire thing was also very obviously designed to be a completely independent system that just happened to be able to be tied into the identification systems, but it was also the second true fusion of seals and technology that he'd produced. Similar to his 'go to any of the destination seals' trick for the departure seals, and a civilian-capable version for moving between dedicated points for travel to and from the mainland dock facility and trading post, but far more complicated.

"I'm hoping the technology side is easier to understand than the seals side is proving to be," Akira said from where he'd been working with a few of the Uzumaki and Miho to examine the stones.

"There's an access hierarchy with groups and flags," Hinata replied. "Blood and chakra signature matching of some kind, adding and removing people and shifting them around depending on their status in the main identification system. Static non-identity entries as well, though those seem to come exclusively from the stone's side of things and can just be assigned to buckets instead of being directly adjustable. I think it pulls team information from the main identification databases as well, but I've not fully figured out how that's used, and most of the hierarchy stuff comes from those databases as well."

"Ugh. And I thought his dial-a-destination trick was bad. At least he told us what that one did, instead of essentially daring us to figure this one out."

"Your team was the one that basically told him you could figure out any seal. That said, I can tell you that the smaller stones and interface units attached to them are registration systems. They seem entirely disconnected otherwise, just serving as an additional input instead of using the triple-circle there on the main stone."

"...wait, that's a registration point? How'd you figure that out?"

"There are visual guides for registering someone in here on both the main stone and the smaller ones."

"Oh. Wait, he included documentation in there and you haven't shared it?"

"Congratulations, you've just been told everything the documentation told me."

Akira and the other Uzumaki all flinched, but a couple of them moved to pay more attention to the registration point.

"We're missing something obvious," Miho said as she came over to look over Hinata's notes.

"You're still having problems because this mixes technology in," Hinata pointed out. "We all think that the Tome induces mental blocks there."

"I still think that we've overlooked something in the seals that would tell us exactly what we're looking at. But he's twisted them up so much with the technology link..."

"The Hiraishin seal connection at least just reconfigured a small piece of the seal in a reasonably simple manner. This is large-scale manipulation of the seals on the large stone."

"Yeah."

"And at this point he won't tell us what he's built until he's ready to 'unveil' it."

"Probably. Worse, this is only a 'prototype' and not the actual one he's installing."

"You've seen his 'final production' circuitry these days. Or rather, not seen it because ninety percent of it is impossible to see or access."

"True. That entire stone is essentially rigged to be able to be sealed almost entirely away too, he just didn't do it here."

Hinata sighed. "Of course it is. So that it can't be tampered with, most likely. Do you know if Futo or Odoroki have taken a look?"

Miho scoffed. "They actually filled out paperwork to reclassify themselves as seal novices and went to find something 'less insane' to work on. Especially since Naruto still doesn't think he properly understands the technology side of this monstrosity."

"Er, yeah. He actually showed me his 'graveyard'."

"...graveyard?"

"A small mountain of failed prototypes of the technology pieces that he's not gotten around to obliterating yet. All of them for just this project."

Miho flinched. "He's literally using repeated trial and error?"

"Apparently. Throw enough clones at it and he at least doesn't lack the manpower needed."



"Long story short," Nagato said to the assembled division leaders and seconds-in-command. They had more than he'd thought they had, but that was okay. "I'm basically positive at this point that my own rise to power was set up by an enemy to use me as a pawn towards their actual goals. Uzushio, directly or indirectly, has ended the enemy's plans and proven that they could take over the continent if they ever desired to. Luckily for the continent, they don't really want to take it over. I suspect almost entirely because the Uzukage thinks there would be too much paperwork, but I can't be certain."

"He's mastered paperwork in ways nobody else ever has," Konan noted. "Why would he be afraid of more?"

"Less fear, more practicality, I think. He isn't afraid of the paperwork, he just finds it too tedious." She nodded, so he continued. "The previous couple of wars ensured that there are no longer any civilian settlements within our borders, with shinobi even taking over the farms. As such, we are uniquely suited to request being folded into Uzushiogakure as a mainland settlement. I've cleared everything I believe can be safely cleared regarding our relations with other villages, primarily with Konohagakure and the Land of Fire. Akatsuki's members are the only exception, and at this point none of them are likely problems and should not have any impact on our relation with Konoha. All that remains is getting approval from the people before approaching the Uzukage."

"What benefits does this give us over finding someone who can fix our farms?" Okihaku questioned.

"Immediate access to their surplus food to start with, and the latest analysis of the farms themselves indicates that they might've been intentionally poisoned and are in need of complete replacement." He wasn't going to say it, but assumed that this was from things Zetsu had been doing to the farms and the results of those things breaking down since the...thing had vanished. "I also believe that Uzushio has far more effective ways to boost crop yields that are unlikely to be shared outside of their borders." There was nodding at that, and some grimacing. "Further, I suspect that their defensive lines would...very much discourage trying to pass through them in the name of fighting a war."

"And what of our forces?" Tatsuki asked. "We've seen the standards Uzushio put out, and we are...woefully inadequate by them as written."

"Presumably everyone would be tested, assigned admittedly lower Uzu ranks, and then gain access to training opportunities that should hopefully allow getting back up to where you thought you already were. Our medics would almost certainly immediately be offered a medical chakra bloodline and rumor is that they've standardized the testing for being granted other chakra-based bloodlines. They also have multiple ways to grant physical boosts, though they aren't experimenting with dojutsu like Konoha is rumored to be doing."

None of them wanted to be 'demoted', but that was a possibility even under the current system. Uzushio's reasoning for where they drew the chunin and jounin lines was honestly well-reasoned with very good arguments. At the same time it was obviously missing things...but those things were also details that clients wouldn't care about. Leadership skills and internal trust were far less important to a client, in addition to revealing those details about how Uzushio was run being far more of a security problem.

Really, it was far more likely that everyone would be brought in as genin and then made to test for higher ranks. That would nicely solve most of the issues with bringing people into a village from the new village's point of view. A bit of an insult to the incoming shinobi, perhaps, but so long as testing for promotions wasn't intentionally delayed then it should be manageable.

Musing about eventual ranks aside, Nagato allowed the group to discuss amongst themselves. He was reasonably certain that they would agree to bring it to the rest of the people as a good idea. They were already importing too much food due to their farming issues and the assassination missions that had been their primary source of income were currently in a serious lull for a complicated web of reasons. If this had been a request to petition to officially join one of the larger nations then it would never have been on the table at all, of course. There was too much animosity there. But Uzu had arguably suffered more than Ame had and bounced back far better as of late.

It took an hour, but there was eventually unanimous agreement to gently encourage the populace to agree. An actual vote would take a few weeks to set up and that work could be started immediately...but a message to Naruto was needed to warn him.



"I'm not sure why you've come to me about this," Shisui said after reading over the summary of the voting to happen in Amegakure in the coming days.

"Because the agreements with the Land of Fire require it," Naruto replied. When the man looked up in disbelief he continued. "This would change the borders between Uzushio and the Land of Fire because Ame's territory is on the western border of the Land of Fire. That it would also give access to the borders with the Land of Earth and the Land of Wind is a side bonus."

"Why would there be rules about the borders between the two nations when they don't currently share a border?"

"The expanse of water between the island and the mainland contains a defined border. Deciding to do something like crossing that with a bridge would be changing it."

"Oh. And the language is generic enough that 'acquiring' territory adjacent to the Land of Fire counts?"

"Yep. I have to meet with the Fire Daimyo about it too." Which was scheduled for tomorrow and was going to be annoying, but Shisui didn't need to worry about that part of things. "I need official sign-off from both of you to go ahead with the 'proposed changes' if the vote goes as expected. Oddly, not to build or rebuild border stations next to the border, but if we want to put in any new roads then that requires sign-off from both sides too."

"I'm reasonably certain that the agreements didn't consider Uzu getting anything on the mainland beyond the bit of land adjacent to the Land of Hot Water."

"That's kind of obvious."

"...and they're going to be annoyed if suddenly they aren't getting as much merchant traffic for trading because you've got access to set up prime trading route areas in the middle of the continent."

"Oh no, we'd have to set up much further west and a little further south to be in the middle of the continent. This is more 'in the middle of the Elemental Nations'. Which happen to be the bulk of the human-inhabited portions of the continent, as far as I've been able to tell. Most of the rest is controlled by summon clans right now."

"And you have bunkers that they may or may not know about spread throughout their lands too, I'm betting."

"I asked for permission because honestly there aren't many reasons to head out that way and they're less 'hidden bunkers' and more 'obvious small houses'. One each for the foxes, toads, bears, monkeys, and chameleons so far. Well, the monkeys have a large house with a sizable hot spring setup next to it, which is part of why the Sarutobi clan has been spending much more time 'reverse summoned for training' lately."

"Well, that's one mystery I hadn't expected to get an explanation for, at least."



The 'meeting' with the Fire Daimyo had taken far longer, a full three days because a proper daimyo had to go through a whole litany of niceties on arrival and before departing, but had otherwise not been a problem. Naruto hadn't been expecting to issue travel papers for Ame citizens or shinobi until running checks on everyone anyway and that was the only major concern the Fire Daimyo had to begin with. Minor concerns included a request for 'safer and better-maintained trade routes', assuming there were good routes that civilians could traverse through the area, but there wasn't any complaint about having a well-positioned ally on the border.

The actual vote by the Amegakure people had been almost unanimously in favor of Uzushio taking over Amegakure and, through it, the small country it ran. An official messenger had been sent to Uzushio, and Naruto had personally swung through for a mass clone rebuilding. He didn't aim to rebuild the entire village, but did replace the tower that Nagato had ruled from with an Uzushio-style one and put in a massive underground complex. From the main village the changes spread, an actual border wall with defenses and the removal of Konan's in-progress lake of explosive tags before cleaning up all the roads leading to the village and passing through the farming areas while heading for the country borders.

Completely removing the farming areas down to the bedrock had been needed to clear out the various pockets of honestly disgusting rot and decay that had ended up deep underground. Clones went three days following trails of the stuff through the country and even continued into the Land of Fire. That was going to take weeks to a couple of months to clean up properly, though how it had all ended up there wasn't clear.

Those larger issues aside, it took Naruto's clones a week to go through everything on a first pass. Properly building up border defenses, getting the shinobi checked and registered, updating the local policies and procedures, and fully establishing connections to the main island would take longer. Nagato and Konan were helping with a lot of the registration and policy work, though not in the testing of the shinobi to confirm their skill levels or determine their trust levels. That would come later.

As part of this, local teams were being sent out to specifically check Naruto's work and see if there were any missed problems as well as to check roads for safety. This had taken the teams by surprise, and a number of them saw it as a test and looked hard for the 'intentionally left' problems they felt had to be the point. Compared to being locals that could theoretically spot things that he'd missed because he wasn't as familiar with the area. That four teams had already found things going slightly wrong in places was a good sign for them taking things seriously.

But a bad sign in two of the four cases regarding the farmers being able to follow simple directions regarding the rebuilt farms and the use of their irrigation controls.



Onoki blinked a couple of times as he read a report from a border patrol group. "This says that Amegakure's forces have started wearing Uzushio forehead protectors."

"Skip the reports and check the diplomatic updates," Akatsuchi said.

"...that's ominous."

Dropping that report back on the stack, he did go ahead and move to the smaller diplomatic stack. It was generally much more annoying and had been filled with petty squabbling as of late. A trend that appeared to be continuing...until he got a third of the way through.

"Amegakure joined Uzushiogakure?" he read. "But...huh. And you knew already?"

"The mission desk has put out preliminary changes in orders while we wait for confirmation and decisions from, well, you."

"Ah. Good on them for being proactive, and of course there's likely a report that the intelligence division has already sent out requests for said confirmation. This does create the problem of drastically changing the threat profile on that border. Might as well drop all but the teams providing assistance to the samurai at the border stations, really."

"Er, but isn't Uzushio's threat level higher than Amegakure's was?"

"Significantly higher. If they want to attack then they'll either go right through anyone we've got at the border or ignore the border entirely. Possibly both at the same time. In either case, right now it makes no sense to waste teams on the bulk of that border. It'll make for a good spot to put genin learning to interact with civilians and samurai in the meantime, though perhaps it would also be a good place to run safe 'this is how you set up for and run border patrol' training too...will need to consider that further."

Akatsuchi was loyal and skilled, but obviously wasn't cut out to be a village leader. Then again, at least he'd not recommended the old stand-by when a neighboring 'small country' was suddenly under new management. Attempting to go in and drive out the new management to reinstate something at least similar to the old management would be incredibly unwise in this situation, even if this wasn't a 'small country bordering three of the Big Five' situation.

...and with any luck their idiot Daimyo won't suddenly decide that this is a good reason for them to swing through to take over the obviously-vulnerable country or something else stupid like that.



Gaara looked over the report on the update to Amegakure's status. Uzushio was...honestly far more trustworthy right now, so it was on the whole welcome news. At the very least the island nation was playing nice with borders, sending out messengers to get permission for border crossings or arrange for hand-offs when escort missions crossed national borders. Most of the smaller nations didn't bother, and Konoha was the only large nation that generally did so when not crossing into another one of the Big Five.

Uzushio was also claiming that within the month they'd have things in place such that they would know if anyone attempted to cross into their territory without getting permission, with an implication that you didn't want to do so. A list of designated contact points for approaching each of their mainland territories, as well as for arranging travel to their islands, had been sent out to facilitate getting permission to cross their territory. Most of those contact points were, fittingly, along the main roads.

"I think we're going to want to ensure that we're careful about antagonizing Uzushiogakure," Gaara finally said.

"No shit," Kankuro replied. "Have you gotten to the report of them putting up those crazy automated puppet systems along the former Amegakure border?"

"...I have not, but that would definitely aid them in securing it from most casual incursions. Any sign of zombies?"

"That should not be a valid question."

"Well it is. Do you know the answer?"

"No sign mentioned in the reports I saw, but that could be part of what they're still working on setting up. Or that they weren't seen because nobody on the border teams was stupid enough to cross the border to trigger them."

"I feel that the latter possibility is unfortunately likely."

"Yeah."



Naruto looked over the crowd that had formed, shaking his head as he did so. "I don't think this is that big of a deal."

"The Great Old Geezer said you'd broken everything," Fukasaku replied. "Again. Many of us want to see what it is you've done this time, and then you made us all wait because you were too busy rebuilding a small country's defenses to work on this project."

Naoko and Toyoko of the foxes were there with a nameless fox sage, the White Snake Sage was there with a couple of other snakes, Enma had come with Old Man Hiruzen, Jiraiya had come with Fukasaku and Shima, the entirety of the technology and seals divisions of Uzu, probably half of the heads of other areas of Uzu and Konoha...

He'd not expected a crowd this large.

"So what did you make?" Ino asked. "Because last I heard everyone was baffled."

"Yeah," Naruto said, scratching his head behind one of his ears as it twitched a little. "I'm kind of surprised that none of you seem to know what I've done, despite several earlier iterations being examined." He pulled a cloth off of a registration pad, the identification card and pin entry unit attached to a ring holding a stone with a handprint on it. The interconnections between things were hidden in the ring, when not hidden in seals entirely.

"...you prettied it up," Hinata admitted. "But what does it do?"

"It's a summoning contract."

"...what?"

"Shinobi can register themselves with the contract at these stations. Their access levels automatically determine who can summon them and who they can summon, which connected summoning stones they can access, which security areas they can summon within, and other such details. For example, teams can generally summon within their membership but genin otherwise can't normally be summoned unless you've got permission to summon all genin or they're part of specific internal divisions. Otherwise being in general summoning pools starts at chunin, such as checking in to be on duty to provide instant backup for missions that have gone wrong if team leaders decide they need help. When you retire you can even stay on the contract to be able to use the general-access summoning stones while being removed from most other access lists. Oh, and it fully registers you with the bunker access system at the same time, assuming that your system access says you should have bunker access at all anyway."

He looked over the crowd, wondering why they all looked like he'd done something insane. A normal contract wouldn't have been able to handle the sheer number of people needed to sign it just for accessing a single summoning stone, so he'd needed to come up with a more advanced system that could handle the churn of a hidden village and the changes as promotions and other factors started kicking in. Connecting it to the existing digital identification system had felt like a straightforward extension of that.

"Rumor has it you're horrible with technology," the fox sage finally said. "How in the world did you successfully integrate it with a summoning contract? Those things are fiddly as hell!"

"Lots of failures," Naruto replied. "Well, on the technology side. The contract side was reasonably simple, I only needed four iterations there and I'm reasonably certain that the first three worked. Just without the full connection to the technological side of things."

"It took me years to properly learn how to connect to the global summoning network at all!"

"...admittedly, I never did figure out what that was supposed to be. There's a network of 'find a summoning clan' stones spread over the Elemental Nations, for grabbing those who attempt to summon without a contract and directing them somewhere useful automatically, but as far as I can tell a properly-constructed contract infused with natural energy works out to a significant distance from the planet without any issues at all. Those 'find a summoning clan' stones do look like they'd be difficult to tie into after the fact, but I have no need to let others 'find' Uzushio because they attempted a summoning without a contract. That would be counterproductive for village security, though I suppose it could be useful for letting wandering Uzumaki get to Uzushio easily if I did things right. Assuming I had any way of letting them know about it, which I don't."

"But..."

"I don't think your 'two people sign a contract with each other' contracts bind to any global network either. Or at least my duplications of them didn't seem to need anything like that? Pitiful range if not infused with natural energy while 'setting' the contract into the scrolls, admittedly."

That was apparently enough to cause the fox sage to realize that they'd missed obvious things...but the White Snake Sage also looked like she was stunned. Fukasaku and Shima looked like this had made something they'd not properly understood before now finally make sense and Jiraiya was taking notes.

Really, the stones that brought you to them had been the hard part. It was almost like a combination of merging the stones with the contract and infusing the stone with a sense of self strong enough to 'bind' to the summoning contract, but not quite. The actual summoning side was simply a seal embedded in the stone that reversed the flow of the summon attempt. Naruto had even figured out that if you applied the seal to a person then attempting to summon them would bring you to them instead.

Though in examining things he'd also figured out that swapping the bird hand seal out for reversed ram and the ram hand seal out for bird in the basic summoning technique you could get the same effect with any target. He wasn't sure if he wanted to make that more generally known or not though as it tended to drop you literally on top of them with no ability to retarget. That was kind of a feature with the stones, but not so much when targeting a person.

"Okay," Hinata said, having pulled out notes and checked them. "You impossibly created a digitally-managed summoning contract. Why is there a 'crossover' contingency in the management code?"

"In case we end up sharing with Konoha," Naruto replied. "Then you wouldn't need to be registered with each contract individually, access on one automatically spreading to affiliated contracts as the shared access rules permit. Though having clan or family contracts interconnected was also something I considered as you might want the hierarchy on those to work entirely differently than the village's. We don't have 'clan compounds' to speak of right now, since way back the village was essentially the 'Uzumaki clan compound', but I could see that changing going forward."

He wasn't mentioning that this primary Uzushio contract was actually two contracts utilizing a hardware-level interconnection system. The one that these interfaces all showed, requiring permission from the one being summoned to be summoned, and then a secret one that didn't include the 'permission of the one being summoned' element. Anyone added was added to both, but removal didn't go through to the secret contract. Temporarily activating a retrieval team would permit them to summon traitors if the target had ever been added to the more public contract.

With any luck, Uzushio would never have to deal with being unable to find and deal with their traitors. Even better, the existence of the second contract was currently one of the most secure secrets in the village with the hardware link inside of a seal that was essentially impossible to open to examine. If someone defects with village secrets or after doing something horrible, even if they thought to remove themselves from the public summoning contract ahead of time, then they hopefully just quietly vanish without anyone knowing how they were found and dealt with.

Which didn't mean that they wouldn't have defectors that were allowed to leave. Most of those who defected from existing nations ended up serving nobles as personal guards anyway. Naruto didn't care about them in the long run, and it was honestly better to let people think they might have a chance of escaping without being caught. Anyone who was still running around after defecting would just help disguise those who defected and then vanished without a trace.
 
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Chapter 82 - Contracts, Build-outs, Marriage
Adoption of the new village summoning contract had been surprisingly swift. The general ability to return immediately after any mission alone was seen as a boon, though the proposed etiquette for sending messengers back and forth didn't really go anywhere because they had the telephone system that could be used much more easily. They only had twelve people from the island fight it, all of them 'do not leave the island' individuals. Those from Amegakure were more skittish about the contract for a number of reasons...at least until they found out that it would help them gain access to training areas.

Due to the sudden influx of shinobi wanting advanced training, Naruto had decided to build new training islands instead of keeping everything on the main island. Instead of creating the islands from scratch he just claimed a couple of further-out islands that nobody else seemed to have a claim on for genin and chunin training areas. Jounin would get to use the first training island from taking down the Coliseum.

Building the two islands out with various areas that shinobi could improve their skills in hadn't been difficult, especially as they were intended for lower level shinobi and he already had written guides about what they should be able to do and where they were going to get to the next rank. There was obviously overlap in levels, and the first training island got some added equipment and training areas to handle jounin-level exercises. Both new islands ended up with their own forests as well, hopefully calibrated correctly for difficulty. This time he'd rigged the seal systems for the forests to be adjustable after the fact and aimed 'low' with the intent of being able to turn them up if they weren't strong enough.

At the same time as building those out, he'd been working on a new 'examination island' too. Except that one he wanted to be visually impressive and thus he was going through a lot of extra effort for it. Especially after Hinata had told him that the technology division was giving up on the flying city due to it requiring too much energy.



Fu had started making regular trips to Konoha through the air since first being sent to inform their ally of their new location. She liked that after the first couple of trips she was now generally met by others in the air and brought in without having to land at one of the gates, but was also a little jealous of their ability to fly without wings. Visiting Konoha was also nice because they were far more used to people with 'extra features' than the people of Taki were. They didn't have anyone with insect features like she'd gotten from Chomei, but that didn't seem to stop them from shrugging off her changes and letting her get on with things without too much staring.

Nobody had commented on her spending longer inside of Konoha than strictly needed for her courier missions and Shibuki didn't seem to mind. She had to take weird routes in both directions to hide where their village was now anyway, and being predictable was a bad thing to stop from being followed. The teams that ran the request houses were probably a better target for anyone looking to find the village though, given that they had to send runners back and forth regularly and didn't fly.

Being one of the few hidden villages that actually tried to stay hidden was annoying that way, but it had served Taki well in their original location and now they had the benefit of old defectors no longer knowing where they were.

Her escorts today let her land near the in-wall training grounds on her own so that she could make her own way through the village. She had to head to drop the sealed message for the Hokage off first, then she'd see if the Aburame clan was willing to let her use a guest room for a day or two while she waited on the Hokage's response. They were especially nice to visit, and Shibuki had taken to teasing her about wanting to marry into the clan.

"Good morning Fu," Yoko called as Fu passed the Uzumaki shrine.

"Good morning," Fu replied. The fox-featured girl was incredibly easy to pick up on the location of, almost always in a very good mood that made her feel like a beacon. Somehow even when looking like she was feeling annoyed. But today she seemed to be working on the gate to the shrine grounds. "Did something happen to the shrine?"

"A merchant's cart struck the torii last night and it was already starting to deteriorate. I'd already procured the materials to repair, this just made doing so a higher priority."

"Do you need help? Fu is good at lifting things and can come back after delivering this message."

"I'll be fine. The merchant paid for an Akimichi to help me and they should be by shortly."

Fu nodded, because she'd watched members of that clan grow to help with construction before. They'd have no problem moving anything Yoko needed moved.

Half an hour later Fu had finally made it through the line at the Hokage's tower to drop the message she'd been given off, though it wasn't important enough for a personal meeting with the Hokage to do so, and she started on her way to the Aburame compound. She wondered if Shino was in the village, or if he'd made any progress with some of the insects he was breeding...



Ino's real self was running around pretending to be an eight year old while her clones slipped into the latest of a dozen houses in the area. Three teams were looking for her, and anyone else that might try to slip into the houses, but she was distracting them quite easily through the simple method of releasing her hold on her chakra every so often while in the groups of children. The teams were thus chasing chakra flares, completely ignoring the children, while her clones worked without much interference. Not that she thought her clones needed the help.

Her mission would be successful if they didn't catch her or figure out enough details of her cover identity to pick it out as likely. They'd already failed their mission because her clones had escaped with items from over half the houses on her list. She also knew that they were cataloging all the teenagers and adults in the area to see if they could figure out her cover identity through seeing who vanished without a trace. Their mistake was a combination of not including the children and assuming that she'd vanish without a trace when her mission was completed. No, her cover identity had entered with a group of children and would leave with said group tomorrow morning. A clone playing her 'mother' would then arrive to pick her up when they got back to the next town over as well. They'd only vanish after departing for a further-off town.

Shapeshifting and solid clones really made it far too easy to slip under the radar, but two of the three teams had asked for a 'harder' test of their ability to spot infiltrators. As if their accidental success on a previous joint test had anything to do with their actual skills. They'd collectively picked out the infiltrator by pure chance due to deciding that the ring one of the team had been wearing was 'out of place' without realizing that they were sold in the shop next door to the inn they'd picked to stay at for the duration of the mission. Not by the intentional details like carrying obviously wrong for the area knives or the bracelets made with Land of Earth plants.

The third team was more filler, operating under the direction of the other two due to the scale of things, and yet they were the ones doing the bulk of the useful work. They weren't good enough to spot that her clones had slipped into the houses, but were at least checking three times a day to ensure that there were no obvious external signs of break-ins and watching the overall area. They'd even stopped a couple of other thieves that had been hoping to take advantage of the festivities to grab stuff.

Honestly, the chakra pulsing was more teasing the two overconfident teams than anything else as well. She'd only started on those after the first quarter of the target houses had been hit without any of the three teams so much as noticing. Instead, before then the two overconfident teams had an overly-large focus on those coming and going by the roads. No consideration for someone coming in through the forest, or even overnight in general really. They'd seemingly taken into account checking people already present when they'd first arrived but so far she'd not spotted anything worthwhile for actually spotting shinobi.

Keeping them running around in circles was far too much fun though, and varying the apparent signature of the pulses was keeping them second-guessing the number of people they were looking for. Somewhat. They weren't really all that great sensors and it took massive swings in the chakra signature to get them to notice a difference at all. Even mimicking their own chakra signatures hadn't actually been noticed in any way her monitoring clones could spot.

The 'you completely failed' sign was going to be when her clones stole their own paperwork from them tonight before her cover group left. She idly wondered if they'd even notice that though, given everything else they'd been doing wrong.

It was probably more productive to wonder how impressive the technology division's upcoming demonstration might be. She'd be back in plenty of time to see it.



"I don't like that we've failed to get the flying city working," Hinata said as she looked over what they had managed. "Our best efforts just take too much energy to be sustainable."

"Bet Naruto has one working within a month of finding out that we gave up," Yudoka grumbled.

"I wouldn't be surprised if he's already got something working since I told him we were unlikely to get the flying city working a couple months ago now. He claimed he hadn't really started on his own version until more recently. But we do have a number of useful items here, drastically improved from what the Land of the Sky was doing. We don't need their launching system to get the flying machines into the air for one, and we adapted many of their flying city weapons for both static defenses and ship-based weaponry."

"...not sure we can claim the latter."

Hinata shrugged. "I had a busy couple of days and ran tests. They work great, though producing the ammunition for a few of them is a little tedious."

"And you think that Naruto overdoes things?"

"I recognize that a lot of what I do is far beyond the norm. He's got no clue where to even begin looking for normal, let alone what it looks like."

"Unless he's infiltrating somewhere, or so the rumors claim. Same with you and others he's worked with there."

Hinata blinked a couple of times. "Huh. You know, I hadn't considered that he's perfectly capable of playing the role of a civilian with no clue about any shinobi items, genin and chunin from basically any village he wants, and even a large number of specific people without any issue. Yet while he's himself he seems clueless about why nobody knows what he's talking about."

"...could the 'everyone else is stupid' bit be an act?"

"I don't think it is."

"Then it's probably standard Uzumaki insanity."

"You're an Uzumaki."

"Which makes me qualified to diagnose it. Sounds like he might be able to understand technology so long as he's impersonating someone who does, for that matter."

"There's no way that could possibly work."

"Only way to know is to suggest it to him."



Naruto watched the demonstration of the improved flying machines. The technology division had them able to launch in various ways instead of relying on the launching devices on the ships, but more impressively they'd built a couple of passenger variants that could take a dozen people and their equipment along for the ride at decent speeds. Much faster than the airships, but also more dangerous. Not as fast as teleporting across the continent, but faster than civilians would normally be able to go.

Building landing and takeoff areas was going to be the challenge. Entirely different requirements from the airship stations. The passenger models needed a lot more room as well, and the Land of Fire was probably the only country willing to let them operate the things over them right now. Of course, nobles were willing to pay to try things without any actual purpose beyond being able to say they'd done it, so trips out over the ocean were an option to make money.

Hell, Uzu and Konoha had both made money off of nobles wanting to try calling people on the phone. In comparison to that, a thrilling trip through the air with great visuals was probably going to be quite the draw.

His own work with a flying city was progressing a little more slowly in the other dimension he was using for it, but he was making progress. He wanted things to be a lot more reliable than the original because crashing a city was liable to create landscape problems even if you didn't crash into a different city. This meant, ideally, having three different ways to keep the thing flying. Settling for redundant copies of a smaller number of systems was also an option, but he had leads on three different ways to make a city fly and was hoping he could make them all work in one city.

"So," he said once the demonstration was completed. "Is a platform for landing these things going on that large pleasure ship you're building?"

"No," Ino answered for the group. "Not enough room for the passenger variant and it would require a lot of redesign of the ship even if there was. Er, there might be a request for a 'party island' being drafted though, for said ship to travel to, and putting something there would make sense."

"A party island."

"Yes."

"...last I checked, we don't even have enough potential staff for the ship yet, and now we want to add an entire island?"

"There's also a proposal to work with Konoha and the Land of Fire in a general sense for staff. Don't need the bulk of them to be shinobi at all."

Okay, that was probably a good point. Most of the staff in a 'serving nobles' setup needed to be servants and not shinobi. A few on hand to operate the major things and provide security would probably be all they'd need normally.



Shisui hated the formal meetings with the Daimyo, but they were an unfortunate requirement of the position. Worse was when a request came in that couldn't be done.

"This is a very well-written proposal," Shisui finally said, putting the paperwork down. "But unfortunately, Konoha won't be able to implement it."

"Why not?" the Daimyo asked, frowning.

"Because our telephone system was produced and installed by Uzushiogakure. We don't have the spare capacity in the village's system for an expansion of this scale either, so this will likely need to be built as a new system. You're going to need to contact the Uzukage as a result."

"Oh. I have to admit that I had not considered that aspect. Would there be any problems connecting such a system such that it could be used to call for shinobi aid?"

"We're connected to the Uzushio interchange, which I'm led to believe links multiple systems already. Their bunker network, their mobile phones, their secure system, and their insecure system. They're...reluctant to outfit our bunkers or set us up with mobile phones, the latter due to the differences in the size of our forces compared to theirs. Related to that, I'm led to believe that the Uzukage himself is a production bottleneck right now due to others not understanding how he's combined things."

"Ah. I appreciate being informed of that. It isn't your fault that I approached the wrong village. Now then, there was a potential request from Takigakure you needed my input on?"

Shisui nodded and produced the relevant paperwork. "Yes, their former jinchuriki may be interested in marrying a member of the Aburame clan. There's no guarantee, but Shibuki reached out about it and the Aburame elders concurred that it's a possibility. We do not yet know whether this would be her moving to Konoha or a potential creation of an offshoot branch of the Aburame clan in Taki."

"And in either case there would be diplomatic concerns that could impact the Land of Fire as a whole."

"Indeed."

"It appears that there has been quite a dialog between the two villages."

"Shibuki has been giving her regular courier missions to facilitate both her interactions with the Aburame clan and discussion over possibilities. Her...physical changes have left her with very few prospects back in Taki right now, both romantically and mission-related due to clients finding her insect-like appearance to be...undesirable."

The Daimyo nodded his understanding. "Konoha's animal features are starting to become more accepted in the civilian population, but there are still many holdouts."



Various large projects and day to day running of the village had eaten up the year quite quickly. Naruto had avoided any need for a large party for his seventeenth birthday though, spending a few days away from the village instead in a private celebration. It was immediately after returning that things got annoying, because he had a meeting with the Fire Daimyo. At least this time the Daimyo had come to him and they'd been able to skip many of the formalities, but it added a couple of projects to Naruto's list.

Building up a telephone system for the Land of Fire would be slightly tedious, though it had been known to be coming and some of the groundwork had already been started. Asking for a dock facility compatible with some of Uzushio's new ships had actually been a bit of a surprise, but their existing facility was actually doing quite a bit more traffic than expected due to being better-built than basically anyone else's so it made some sense. Wanting to be able to take the new flying machines back and forth between the Land of Fire's capital and Uzushio was almost an afterthought.

All of it combined would officially 'pay off' the remaining loans from the Land of Fire though, not that there had been any real concerns about that to begin with. Or a lack of funds in Uzushio at this point to pay them off, they'd just been sticking to the payment plan as agreed to. Naruto had actually set aside an account holding all the funds for the payment in full and had been otherwise ignoring it beyond the regular payments until now.

Unfortunately, it was also likely to result in other Daimyo wanting to buy telephone systems for their own nations. They'd already had interest shown from other hidden villages, and the public telephone houses that the Fire Daimyo wanted were probably going to be somewhat popular even before nobles wanting their own dedicated phones got into the mix. Dedicated 'call for shinobi assistance' buttons for both Konoha and Uzushio were going to be present and would likely drastically increase the mission rate for both villages. Uzushio was also getting blanket permission to accept missions in the Land of Fire as part of things, in lieu of a standard 'maintenance' contract.

Not that Uzushio hadn't been pulling missions in the Land of Fire right along, this would just be a much more open allowance that would negate the need to inform Konoha of their missions. Basically, a significant reduction in cross-village paperwork that both sides were likely to appreciate. Major missions impacting the Land of Fire would still need sign-offs, and monthly summaries would likely still happen, but not 'every mission needs a technical rubber stamp'.

...that Naruto had a copy of the stamp in question and had been applying it on behalf of Konoha with Shisui's permission, dropping off the boxes of paperwork monthly, was another item altogether and hadn't been mentioned to the Fire Daimyo.



Nagato looked over the latest retesting summaries. The bulk of Amegakure's forces were entering Uzushio's forces at a rank lower than they'd held before, but very few of them resented it after the testing and objective list of places that they failed in. Most were taking it as a challenge, and those that weren't...

...well, they were very likely to get demoted further.

He was personally happy that even without the rinnegan he'd met the elite jounin requirements. Konan had managed that as well. The summoning contract that allowed them to move between the mainland, island, and all the secondary resources was especially nice and made reaching training areas far easier than expected as well. He also had access to the secure areas underneath the new tower with the teleport departure stones, and the various bunkers had been upgraded with new computer-controlled departure stones so that you could get to the main island or Amegakure depending on your access permissions. Assuming you had bunker access at all, anyway.

"So what are we doing with the Akatsuki?" Konan asked as she finished her own review.

Nagato sighed. "Deidara and Sasori actually expressed interest in joining Uzushio in their last communication. Kisame has officially departed the group for his own reasons, not wanting to work with normal village secrets. As for Kakuzu...I have no idea because he hasn't checked in."

"...he hasn't checked in?"

"His last message said that he had a lead on Jashinism starting somewhere to the west, outside of easy communication range. It may be that we never hear from him again."

"I honestly didn't expect him to go that far in eradicating all mentions of the cult."

"Honestly, I think he finally found something he enjoys doing. You saw all the reports of him doing minor jobs as he moved along instead of acting like the monster he's spent decades acting as."

"True."

"Any thoughts on what to do with the stubborn fools that refuse to acknowledge their skill deficiencies?"

Konan shrugged. "They've been given the option of walking away and finding another village that will take them in. Not much more we can do, given that they can't force anyone to accept the rank they claim they hold."

"Are they still refusing to take missions that are 'beneath them'?"

"Most of them, yes. And refusing to train to earn the ranks they claim they deserve."

"Hmmm. Perhaps getting those of their actual rank to beat them in combat to show they don't deserve the higher rank would be a solution?"

Konan shook her head. "Already tried and it didn't work."

"Oh. Drop them on the jounin training island and see how long it takes them to call for help?"

"Naruto is against needless death sentences."

"So make it an offer instead of an order. They make it to the central tower through the forest then they've been mis-ranked. Otherwise they have to accept that they're not jounin material." He paused for a moment. "All the whiners are annoyed that they're not being considered jounin, right?"

Konan nodded. "Yes, and that might work with a few of them. The rest would probably be too stubborn and end up dead."

"Win-win situation, then."

"You are being uncharacteristically ruthless about this."

"I can't join any of the research teams properly if I'm babysitting the hurt pride of the holdouts."

She blinked a couple of times, then nodded her agreement. He knew that she wanted to see how Naruto had pulled a few things off as well. Her own role in helping finish the Amegakure integration into the wider Uzushio was keeping her too busy to do so though.

They did have to decide on a new name for the village though. Something that had been delegated to the inhabitants on the basis that they were the first ones that would need to use the new name. He was partial to 'Mizumi', personally, but hadn't voiced that for fear of biasing the populace.



Building, configuring, and installing telephone systems had happened over several months. Naruto had been convinced by Shisui to get Takigakure set up with one as well, to make it easier for them to keep their new home hidden through being able to literally call in missions instead of using runners. Then, because it wouldn't be Uzushio without doing so, he'd done all the setup and install overnight and left instructions on how to use everything sitting on appropriate desks.

Shisui had found it hilarious. Shibuki not so much.

The Land of Fire also got its telephone network, the core equipment for it stored in the capital under the control of the Fire Daimyo. Each settlement had at least one telephone hut with at least four phones now, the larger ones having several and nobles paying a yearly fee to have functional personal phones. There were also a number of businesses that had jumped at the opportunity to be able to be called and the Land of Fire was the first group to publish an actual printed directory of telephone numbers.

Uzushio had gone the simpler route of just pulling the information out of the computers and had a completely up to date directory at all times due to that. Whether the others with telephone systems knew the complete directory of connections from their central units was copied back to Uzushio was another question entirely.

Places for flying machines to land and take off from had also been constructed, but Naruto hadn't given in to build a 'party island'. He argued that they should get the pleasure ship working first, then they could consider destinations. The Land of Fire's new dock was constructed such that the proposed ship could dock there though.

Naruto had also claimed the summer exam slot, to the surprise of several nations. They needed to test chunin potentials and showing off was appropriate. Doing this without Konoha was probably the bigger surprise. He'd not yet sent out the invitations though as it was a little early for that. Claiming the slot was more to prevent others from preparing significantly for their own examinations only to need to drop things. But he did send out offers to build out communication stations so that they could broadcast things, and not only to hidden villages. Several casinos in multiple nations had sent back requests to get in on the broadcast, likely entirely for local betting purposes.



"You know," Ino said as they ate breakfast. "At some point we need to decide on what to do about a proper marriage ceremony."

"There are forms in the hall desk when you two want to make things official," Naruto replied.

"I think she means arranging the actual public ceremony," Hinata countered.

"What public ceremony? If you haven't noticed, there hasn't been a single public wedding since the village was rebuilt and that isn't a coincidence. Seventy-two marriages, zero ceremonies."

Ino blinked a couple of times. "Seventy-two marriages?"

"Yes. Ninety percent of shinobi marriages in the Elemental Nations are already kept largely quiet. I just extended that to all marriages in the country. Anyone that wants to make a big deal of things can, but it isn't anyone else's business other than those in charge of updating official records."

"But..."

"One Hokage has held a ceremony, and it was more an 'affirming alliance with Uzushio' thing than a wedding ceremony. They're one of three hidden village leaders in general that have had ceremonies, and two of those three married before taking up leadership."

"You promised to invite over thirty different people to your wedding ceremony back when you turned sixteen."

"No, I promised to invite them to a ceremony if one was held. That was even in writing so they can confirm it, and the fine print on the promises explains that shinobi generally don't hold ceremonies so the promise is worth less than the paper it was printed on."

Hinata actually fetched the paperwork mentioned, the only paperwork in the desk at all for the past year now really, and looked it over. "You planned this before the big show with all the suitors."

Naruto shrugged. "I thought it was obvious what my plans were. Daimyo may go for incredibly pompous ceremonies, but shinobi generally avoid them."

"The Hyuga clan has wedding traditions."

"So do the Uchiha, but the Senju clan's tradition is 'avoid a ceremony entirely'. As is the Uzumaki clan's tradition, for that matter. There's also nowhere in the village really suitable for a wedding ceremony, which was intentional in the original plans."

Ino sighed. "What about people objecting to the union?"

Hinata snorted. "Objecting to a shinobi union?"

"If they're good enough to avoid the kunai to the forehead then they're generally permitted to air a grievance."

Naruto nodded. "That is true. Which is part of why the Senju and Uzumaki have traditions of not making it known they're getting married. Less likely to have people start a fight during the ceremony if there's no ceremony."

Okay, that was admittedly a good point, and a really good argument in favor of skipping all the fancy stuff. Ino looked between the other two after thinking about it. "So what, sign things as needed, update our records, and send out any notices we want to send out to family and such?"

"As if our families aren't treating us as already married. The biggest question is probably if you two want to take the Uzumaki name or not. If you don't then there may not be any need to let people know at all before having kids, though we'd need to figure out which family name they'd take at that point."

Naruto very obviously didn't want to express a specific opinion on some of the details, apparently seeing it as a decision each of them should make on their own instead. Which was both nice and annoying because going along with him would've been the easy solution. Still, it wasn't hard to decide that they wanted to be 'official', and neither was aiming to create a branch of their clan here in Uzushio. Others were, but not them.

By the end of the day they were all officially down as being Uzumaki, though a quick trip back to Konoha would be used to update family instead of writing letters. It wasn't like that trip was a hardship for any of them, after all.
 
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If I had a nickel for every time I've seen Fu end up with Shino, I'd have two nickels.

Which isn't much, but it's strange that it's only happened twice.
What was the other one?? because I'm pretty sure I can name an extra
Still waiting to run into a same-sex Fu/Suzumebachi or a Shino/Fu/Suzumebachi triad in the wild myself. I feel like there is potential there.
I can see it as well, especially if it's one of those stories where Naruto goes into Sealing and figures out how to rig one up to make it so that the three of them cna have a child that has two mommas despite it being normally impossible
 
Given that chakra at its purest is imagining something and making it real, Fuuinjutsu would be imagining a system of logic and then enforcing it on the world.
Hence Uzumaki craziness actually working
...So...Uzumaki Crazyness is just them each having a semi-unique "Magecraft Foundation", to borrow the Nasuverse term, and as the sole arbiter of their foundation they can do crazy things that anyone else, even using the same foundation, could not?
 
Given that chakra at its purest is imagining something and making it real
Yup, just look at Creation of All Things: Yin Chakra used in the adminisration of imagination with the spiritual energy aspect to create physical forms from nothing. And then vitality and the physical energy which forms the basis of Yang Chakra to breathe life into the creations.

It's how Hagoromo, the Sage of Six Paths, made the Tailed-Beasts.

Plus with the introduction of Shinjutsu (Divine Techniques) in Boruto we get a glimpse of what Chakra can actually do, which is basically just straight up anything if you have the power and know-how, including creating storms from nothing, and no hand-signs or anything are required. The caster just wills the thing to happen and it happens, with one Shinjutsu just straight up being described as a programming language that can alter the universe to do whatever the user desires.

So yeah, I can see why Chakra is just being called magic here, because it is.
 
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...So...Uzumaki Crazyness is just them each having a semi-unique "Magecraft Foundation", to borrow the Nasuverse term, and as the sole arbiter of their foundation they can do crazy things that anyone else, even using the same foundation, could not?
Err Yes and No

the foundational system of Logic is collective and cultural. For example the inherent, if underutilized, philosophy of the Hyuuga is to train to see something and then train to hit it. The only use this to hit Tenketsu, but based on what we know of Chakra, they could use it to see into sealed spaces and physically pull things out, see into minds and strike to attack ideas, or if they are really creative pull off some perspective tricks like coating their fingers in chakra to flick someone several meters away with a finger the size of their torso.

In the Case of the Uzumaki, their clan tradition is the Fuuinjutsu medium. Generations of Logical systems that Naruto was prepped for but did not receive until after he was already using the Belkan Magic Arrays. Naruto is probably one of the few people to realize that Fuuinjutsu is just a logic system, and that if he can build a logical structure he can do anything with it regardless of what has been said, agreed or achieved in the past. We know he knows this because he can translate Fuuinjutsu (logic system A) into computer code (Logic System B) and back again.
Everyone else thinks this is impossible because they are thinking of Fuuinjutsu and Code as ways to control what is already there and that they are handling different environments. Like how machines are built. You harness something that already exists and shape it to interact with the world in a certain way. With Fuuinjutsu/Code you produce something that did not previously exist to shape and build something that did not previously exist.

To drag it back to your original question. It is less Naruto creating a Magecraft Foundation for his personal use, and more everyone else is running around messing about with Handsigns and and Nature Transformation, and Naruto has rediscovered Creation of All Things and thinks it is so Obvious that he doesn't have to explain how he is doing it.
 
At the same time as building those out, he'd been working on a new 'examination island' too. Except that one he wanted to be visually impressive and thus he was going through a lot of extra effort for it. Especially after Hinata had told him that the technology division was giving up on the flying city due to it requiring too much energy.

You've destroyed the moon and now are building a flying coliseum. Is this becoming a RWBY prequel?
 
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