Mr Zoat said:
No, seriously.

Assume a 1KT device and a distance of about half a mile. 15 seconds should be enough to run behind a concrete wall and look away from the blast. You'll still need to get away from the fallout and and debris thrown into the air. If you are already in a building you should have time to get to the side of the building furthest away.
yeah, no.




You do not survive a blast like that with only 15 seconds warning. Over pressure alone will squish you like a rotten tomato even if you get behind cover.


THIS is way smaller as well:

 
Actually, dealing with Mary would be kind of a natural 'arc' ending.
At that point, we would have sen Winter come form bogstandard human to his new status and learn:
1) He's a planeswalker, and aware of it.
2) He can travel to different planes in theory at will. In practice, some limitations/inescapable consequences apply.
3) He can acquire lands, and has a fairly balanced set.
4) Is aware of the general pitfalls of Land-based magic.
5) Has summons, both basic animals (Crows) as well as limited combatant types (Slayers, Warren)
6) Is fairly second-rate when it comes to magical theory, but can throw around lighting, with effort fly, work basic magic with minds etc.
7) Has learned to accept his new status as above-human inherently magical figure of legend.
and finally
8) Has shown he can deal with other low-level planewalkers, should they prove a threat.

Essentially, the character 'Winter' would have a well-established personal history and background as a Planeswalker, a set of known abilities, character flaws and there'd be a natural lull in the narrative play after Westeros is more or less safe from a fanatical magic dictator.

If this'd be a book-series, I've seen worse endings in regards to narrative flow, and worse premises taken to sequels. Which of course might not happen, depending on what Hiver decides to work on next (if anything at all).
 
Faralis said:
You should known by now that tempting Murphy is a BAD idea ...
Murphy Sod: Most dangerous being in all reality and most feared higher entity on spacebattles.
 
spidermounky92k said:
do you mean varren or the guy who makes robots in btvs
Varren the quadruped pack-creatures. That's what I get for multitasking and having a wondering mind while writing posts I'm not giving my full attention to... gah.
 
Barricade said:
Ahhh...hahaha no. Not quite.

The '2' is variable. It means that for EVERY 2 colorless mana he pumps into it, he gets one damage. Have 2 mana, deal a plink/Tim/Zap/whatever-the-term-is-currently.

Have 30 mana on the other hand....

Still only get to use it once though. Unless of course you're playing with a graveyard retrieval setup in your deck.
I like using this for things that get destroyed during the end step. But I don't know if it actually works for the rocket launcher. (weird cards are weird)
 
Firethorn said:
What does it mean by "damage wears off"? What 'stack' is it referring to?

Yeah, that sounds like a weird card.
Game mechanics. Damage to creatures accumulates over a turn. For example if a creature gets hit for 2 damage and then gets hit with a lightning bolt those are added. That is only kept track of until end of turn.

The stack is how multiple simultaneous effects are resolved. Last effect gets resolved first.
 
6
Buffy stared at me as if I had grown another head. "You told Glory to give up on the key and get out of town...and she did?"

I shrugged, "Last I saw her she was curled on the floor, crying. If she took my 'advice', I don't know. She should. Glory is smarter than you know, I think..."

"Glory? Smart?" Buffy said and gave me a dubious look.

I shook my head "She didn't regard any of you as actual people, just lower beings. Why use tactics against things that can't hurt you?" and then I grinned "And I never said she was smart, just that she is capable of using other tactics other than 'HULK SMASH!'."

Buffy shook her head and leaned her back against the tree. We were in one of the graveyards as I found her during a patrol.

"And she regarded you as a equal?" she asked and I shook my head.

"She regarded me like a bunny would a tiger. Still, I have to leave. I do not know the time difference between here and Westeros. For all I know a thousand years might pass for each second I am here...in which case I have already lost. But I should leave as soon as possibly in any case."

"Are you coming back again?" She asked and I nodded.

"When I can. I need to at least deal with this entire war thing first." I told her and she stepped up to hug me.

"Try to keep them safe? The slayers I mean?" she said and I hugged back before letting go "I promise. Keep Dawn safe...she is The Key...but she is also more." I said and Buffy frowned.

"What do that mean?"

I crossed my arms in thought before I answered "Dawn was created to house The Key. But that does not mean she is not real. She really is your sister and she has a soul and all. The way she was made has nothing to do with things. Make sure she understand this. I would tell her myself, but I really need to leave."

Buffy nodded "Be careful."

I grinned "Am I not always?" I answered before I focused and pulled at my Spark as I turned and stepped out of reality.



Winds of light and uncreation clawed at me as I faced the Blind Eternities for the third time. Time, matter, sound and color. None of it having any meaning and at the same time being the same thing that mattered.

I gritted my teeth and struggled onwards, following the link my lands gave me to Westeros.

After a Eternity and as soon as I left the world of Buffy, I punched back into a reality, panting as I dropped to my knees in the middle of a snowy wasteland.

"What the fu..." was the first words out of my mouth as I looked around.

I must have been north of The Wall.


I struggled back onto my feet and looked around as I frowned. That didn't make any sodding sense. I left in the south, ending up in Sunnydale. That could be explained with the Hellmouth messing with things.

But if I left from Sunnydale, I should have ended up in my previous location. That would mean somewhere to the... west? Somewhere near the ocean? So why the fuck did I end up so far North?


I rubbed my forehead and looked around. I need more data...with more data points, I would sooner or later be able to figure it out. But I didn't have time for that now.

Shaking my head, I summoned a Raven and grew it to full size before I dumped one of my White mana into summoning a saddle for it.

I strapped it in place, climbed into the saddle and the raven took off. Flying south, I was forced to pull on my Red mana to keep myself warm in the frigid winds.

As the Raven flew it left me alone with my thoughts.

The location where I ended up was bugging me. Perhaps it had something to do with this world's seasons? I glanced up at the sun. Perhaps it was on it's side in a elliptic orbit? Perhaps in a two star system with one normal and one very small and cold second star?

I could see The Wall in the distance and I urged the Raven to fly as high as it could. I rather not have reports of giant ravens flying South across the wall. As we passed it I blinked and then cursed.


I just squandered the first and only real chance to get a proper pizza I had had in years. First I was on Omega, then I was on the Normandy and not before long, I was on Orilla. The little time I had spent on Earth was spent playing alien.

That made me very annoyed for the rest of the day.

At the very least, it looked like the same season when I left, not that would say much in Westeros. Hopefully that was a sign that not too much time had passed since I left. But a thousand years could have passed and by some coincidence, it is the same same season as when I left.

I frowned. A time keeping spell would be nice... It would require a reference point, say a enchanted stone that is left on the Plane in question. Then I would be able to have the spell use it as a reference point and tell me how much time had passed.

Blue mana should be used for such a spell, the question now would be how to do it.


As my raven flew, so did my thoughts.





AN// ckk185 is the one to thank for betaing this part.
 
gladiusone said:
Very nice, Hiver. I will advise, in the last bit, I think you mean 'squandered' (as in wasted, missed, threw away) rather than 'squabbled' (argued, fought). Other than that, it looks good: I look forward to seeing what's happened since you left Westross, and what your Slayers will be like (I assume that you'll be able to summon more than one?).
I have failed the Emperor.
 
I just squabbled squandered the first and only real chance to get a proper pizza I had had in years. First I was on Omega, then I was on the Normandy and not before long, I was on Orilla. The little time I had spent on Earth was spent playing alien.
I think you meant squandered two chances to get good pizza, once on Earth at SGC and the second time when you went back to visit Buffy's world but time constraints and aggravations kept you too busy...
meh....

Good update...

ninja'd :p
 
Arimai said:
Possibly should be Possible

squabbled should be squandered


"Try to keep them safe? The slayers I mean?" she said and I hugged back before letting go "I promise. Keep Dawn safe...she is The Key...but she is also more." I said and Buffy frowned.

should be


"Try to keep them safe? The slayers I mean?" she said.

I returned her hug, "I promise. Keep Dawn safe...she is The Key...but she is also much more." I replied.

Buffy frowned.


I hope that helps you I need some sleep.
I have failed the emperor, HARDER.
 
Rastamon said:
GRRM said that the seasons were caused by a god of ice and a god of fire fighting each other, thus implying that R'hllor (Melisandre's Lord of Light) actually exist in that world. That's largely the reason why it's called A Song of Ice and Fire.
thats a fantastic way for him to be able to go lol fuck you orbital dynamics :)
 
Brellin said:
Winter just outright explained, in the story post before this one, that he doesn't have enough red mana in order to summon his pistol (or Glory, which is why he couldn't get her essence). That is entirely different from not having enough mana overall. It could be entirely possible that the pistol only takes 2 red mana. But we'll never know until Winter attunes a second Red land in order to find out. Again it doesn't matter that he has a bunch of random mana because in story it's been directly stated that he needs *red* mana to summon better weapons (like his own pistol) and right now he only has one land that gives red, and that land is also the only one that gives him black (and is an either or deal, he either uses red or black, but it's coming from the same source).
He actually has two Red: one from Sunnydale (if he doesn't need the Black) and Omega, which is a mountain in space.
 
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