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The Eternal Struggles of a Minor Death (RDQ)

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Shit, just got back. Eventful day, huh...

Anyway.
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Vote tally:
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[X]Let it continue pulling you
No. of votes: 4
Trondason, Ultra Meh, MHLord, Pensive Rumination

[X] Let it continue pulling you
-[X] So, I learned how to avoid killing myself.
No. of votes: 4
Ridiculously Average Guy, ziizo, kylina, Private Lee O'Malley

[X]Let it continue pulling you
-[x] Salute. Reporting for duty![/QUOTE]
No. of votes: 1
Cjdavis103

[X]Let it continue pulling you
-[X] Salute. Reporting for duty, sah!
No. of votes: 1
Olivebirdy

[X]Let it continue pulling you
-[x] Salute. Reporting for duty!
No. of votes: 3
Cassanove_Clown, Dark Ness, I just write

4, 4, 5. With 5 being the saluting.

So... Despite the ridiculous closeness(Also, woot on the votes there.)

Just gonna perma lock this so I can start. It was too tied so I couldn't actually start before... And you know, real life events.
Were you aware some of these people actually do things? Weird, I know.

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You know what... funny story here.

I can actually fit both variations into the update... If you guys would like. The "I found out how to not kill myself" and "salute thing."
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Would um... You guys like that or? I mean, seems kind of silly when I totally can, to not do so, given how close the votes were.

The winning vote would just go first.
 
Sendicard said:
You know what... funny story here.

I can actually fit both variations into the update... If you guys would like. The "I found out how to not kill myself" and "salute thing."
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Would um... You guys like that or? I mean, seems kind of silly when I totally can, to not do so, given how close the votes were.

The winning vote would just go first.
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I would like it.
 
Can someone do me a huge favor?
Give me a working version of the invisitext code?
 
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    • [X]Let it continue pulling you
    Primary-[x] Salute. Reporting for duty!
    Secondary-[X] So, I learned how to avoid killing myself.
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    You decide not to fight the hand, as it's probably your pissed off mentor. The thought occurs to you that it might not be, even a little bit of annoyance that he referred to you as his, like an object. But in the end, you wouldn't stand a chance against him, and saying something might be dangerous.

    So you steel yourself and give a salute. "Reporting for duty sir!" You shout, before suddenly the tunnel ends and you're thrown back first into a rock wall.
    -100 HP(Moderate spine injury gained, health regenerating 1/2 speed until full health cures it)=150(480.7 seconds until full health)
    You were right, it is indeed your pissed off mentor. Standing in red glory in front of you. You appear to be in a canyon of some sort, the rocky ground making it hard to rest your feet. Of course the pain in your spine is a little more serious, but oddly enough you can already feel it healing. Slowly, yes, but far quicker than when you were alive.

    "I'm not your commanding officer. Forget what Rose's rule book says, the only punishment I'll receive if I kill you is a disappointed look, of which I will spend savoring the memory of how your soul tasted."

    You nod in an attempt to show him you understand.

    "You're one in a sea of the worthless dead. You had to have noticed so far that you've only met a few Deaths. Isn't it a bit weird, to treat a new Death so casually when there are so few of us? It's because you all die, all of you. No one even remembers your names, why would anyone but that child care?"

    He steps closer, his skull in your face.

    "I'm not really your mentor, and I'm certainly not a protector. Until you get a few kills under your belt and prove yourself a survivor? I'm your owner. Don't ever keep me waiting again." He punches the rock wall behind you, and in your shock it takes you a moment to realize you didn't feel any vibrations. Turning your head you see his arm inside the wall, rock simply gone where he his fist had landed. 'How is that even possible?'

    "So tell me, pet, what was so important that you kept me waiting?"
    You think fast, shit. You can't tell him the direct truth. You seriously doubt he'd appreciate being left waiting because you cared about your looks.
    "I was learning how to avoid killing myself." With imperceptible speed you find his hand on your face, and the back of your head smashing into the rock behind you.
    -50 HP(Moderate head injury gained, health regenerating 1/2 Speed until full health cures it, stacks with previous spine injury.)=Time passed since previous damage taken, 35 seconds. Health gained from time, 0.208x35=7.28+150=157.28-50=107.28(1372.30 Seconds until full health)
    "Don't waste my time with cryptic statements pet, TELL ME!"


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    In a "discussion vote" you discuss amongst yourselves what to say. Actions are indeed allowed, but probably won't be of any use. I won't close the votes until one of the following has happened:
    1. The votes are dramatically in the favor of one story with more than 10 votes in the poll, and has remained as such for more than 10 hours.
    2. 48 hours have passed.
     
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    • Forgotten's jimmies.
    (X) Rustle
    ( ) Unrustled

    Anyway, it'd be best to spin it in a way so we don't look like a total dumbass.

    I dunno, "I was experimenting with my energy so I didn't have to waste your time with stupid questions."? Does that sound like an okay start?
     
    Ultra Meh said:
    Forgotten's jimmies.
    (X) Rustle
    ( ) Unrustled

    Anyway, it'd be best to spin it in a way so we don't look like a total dumbass.

    I dunno, "I was experimenting with my energy so I didn't have to waste your time with stupid questions."? Does that sound like an okay start?
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    Sounds good to me

    "I was experimenting with my energy and changing how I look so that I would not take up more of your time with stupid questions"
     
    I was going to comment that there's surprisingly little chatter going on about this at all. I mean I know this isn't a top quest but I expected something more.
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    But like... Just realized it's only 10AM. Just got woken up by children. don't like being awake at 10AM....
     
    [X] "I was experimenting with my energy and changing how I look so that I would not take up more of your time with stupid questions"
     
    kylina said:
    Have to be more specific I think. So

    + "the experiment was to do with changing form" or something
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    We might want to include that we were finding out about healing as well. We're probably going to want to know about it, and Rose (by virtue of being basically alive) was a good source. Also her demonstration of keeping us from getting ourselves killed. Figure she might know how we could do that ourselves. Doubt he'd teach us, so looking into that ourselves might sound good to him. Maybe.
     
    Dark Ness has put in an actual vote. Wasn't expecting one this soon.

    Is that story satisfactory with the info it gives, or?
    *Eerie laugh*
     
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