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Except if she goes into the Wards she is stuck with Pigot who has shown herself to be a bully on her first interaction for three years. I do not think she will ever have the opportunity to punch the good Director as catharsis. I can see a case for being more polite (though I do not agree with it) but not for entertaining the idea of accepting Pigot as her superior.
Incidentally one of the authority figgures that has already failed Taylor (albeit indirectly) is Pigot herself since she was ultimately responsible for SS's status as a probationary Ward who broke her probation with impunity.
I thought the vote made it clear Taylor has no intention of joining the Wards, it even mentions Piggots attitude as the factor that made up her mind.
Grammar/spelling corrections:
It's okay, though I don't like the open-ended nature of "Partial disclosure of your abilities". Maybe "Minimal disclosure of your abilities"?
Thanks, changing to "Minimal disclosure of your abilitiies" should be fine, the intention was for Taylor to give some information about her powers, plus a good reason for her conditions, just so Piggot doesn't dismiss her outright and polite discussion can resume(or start), it's intended to be a short description, preferably only mentioning powers she has already shown, nothing actually useful besides the selling point.
This doesn't make any sense at all. If we are refusing to join the wards it is completely pointless to disclose our abilities
She didn't say "I am curious about your abilities" she said "why should I pay you more than I do anyone else", disclosing our abilities was in this context how we convince her to pay us more.
Sorry, the first line of the vote is what Taylor is thinking, not something she should say. Otherwise it would make the rest of the vote completely pointless, also, disclosing some of our abilities, noted as nothing we could consider important, plus something major that would justify Taylor's demands, is just so we can continue the discussion with Piggot, because I seriosly doubt she'll spare us a single minute if we don't do this, and that'll probably sour our relation with PRT, which is, if not bad, at least undesirable.