You control the rules and you decide the physics of your quest. Hell if you want to make it so that pigs can fly in this universe, you go ahead and do it!!!

*looks at biomancer shards* likely they do.
That is silly. I also hope a character does not magically appear which can null gravity. That would be lame.

Intangible people would be an issue as our senses likely will not pick them up.

Tinker tech Anti grav exists and fucks with us.

A mover who hits us fast enough to take us by suprise.

Brutes/shakers who can give physics the finger.

Anyone who can split our attention between saveing Civialins and fighting them.

M/S er's are a nightmare for us. ( really need to get an anti M/S helmet ala Magnito)

We're strong as hell but we're not unbeatable
 
Intangible people would be an issue as our senses likely will not pick them up.

Tinker tech Anti grav exists and fucks with us.

A mover who hits us fast enough to take us by suprise.

Brutes/shakers who can give physics the finger.

Anyone who can split our attention between saveing Civialins and fighting them.

M/S er's are a nightmare for us. ( really need to get an anti M/S helmet ala Magnito)

We're strong as hell but we're not unbeatable
I mean yeah we are not unbeatable but there are ways around such things if we are smart about it. Like always having a gravity bubble placed in inch from our skin is a must. Also to those who can be safe from gravity themselves, have no control over what goes on around them which can be used by us.
 
For all we know, he might decide to have a villain trigger with the Sting shard instead of someone who will become a Ward. And imagine if the Sting shard decided to try and do a tinker trigger instead of a blaster-esque power.
I'd point out that canonically Sting was a double trigger. Foil had a nemesis with Sting who triggered at the same event.
Alright, fair enough. A dangerous individual. But what is stopping us from just killing Manton with our unlimited Gravity Manipulation. Or trapping her in a Planetary Devastation like Pein from Naruto. Also, she ignores regularly earth gravity what is to stay she could resist the sundry effects put upon her by us.
Mainly? Manton was as deadly as he was against Cauldron because he used to be part of it. Hero had all our power in Tinker form, didn't save him.

Not when you have a legitimate genius with knowledge of your weaknesses and psychology armed with the Siberian
 
None of these are terribly hard to use. They are also brutally efficient at defeating just about anything and are, apparently, our weaker power.

Most of these don't even work! We can casually extract hostages with out pseudo-telekinesis, abuse combination of senses and TK to haul barriers to tank for us or burrow and move underground making any ranged attacks useless and just outright squish Tinkertech with great precision. Or make it go away into space.

Not to mention that you are missing the point. Issue isn't gravity being already hilariously strong, but there not only being way to control space and time with it, but also other, stronger powers.

At least don't let our range extend for more than few meters around us!

Ok, I don't see what you're complaining about. You say the story won't be good if what, there isn't a good fight or a good challenge? I have already confirmed that there will be Endbringers, what more challenge do you need?

And as people have pointed out, there is a bunch of ways people can beat Alex without actually fighting him.

Beyond that, you keep talking about winning or losing. Are you mad because there won't be some major battle where Alex has to dig in deep and fight through the odds to win?

I'm probably missing the point as you said. But I just want to know man, help me understand.

For all we know, he might decide to have a villain trigger with the Sting shard instead of someone who will become a Ward. And imagine if the Sting shard decided to try and do a tinker trigger instead of a blaster-esque power.

Excuse me I'm just going to go and write something in my notes. Don't worry, nothing bad will happen.

Nothing at all.

:drevil:

That is silly. I also hope a character does not magically appear which can null gravity. That would be lame.

I will admit something here. You guys aren't going to be fighting canon characters for a while. You guys need to get through the events that reveal superheroes to the world, the first time S-Class threats show up.

The birdcage was not a solution for a while, so god knows how many S-Class threats that the founders had to take out before the Endbringers started showing up and they needed to keep people alive. How many members of S9 came and went before we got the canon roster? As such, I need to fill up those spots with OC's.
 
Excuse me I'm just going to go and write something in my notes. Don't worry, nothing bad will happen.

Nothing at all.

:drevil:

I will admit something here. You guys aren't going to be fighting canon characters for a while. You guys need to get through the events that reveal superheroes to the world, the first time S-Class threats show up.

The birdcage was not a solution for a while, so god knows how many S-Class threats that the founders had to take out before the Endbringers started showing up and they needed to keep people alive. How many members of S9 came and went before we got the canon roster? As such, I need to fill up those spots with OC's.
Awesome! Fighting unknowns will make it that much more fun to figure out. :D
 
How many members of S9 came and went before we got the canon roster? As such, I need to fill up those spots with OC's.

On the one hand, awesome new foes to fight.

On the other hand, I really hope 'we' and by extension Alex, don't become so jaded and complacent to Cauldron's goals that we allow filth like Jack Slash to live for longer than a day after we hear about him/fight against him for the first time.

I don't know what the canon reason was for allowing him to pursue his dream of being a murderhobo and to be perfectly fucking honest, I don't really care.

He's the Joker of worm and I refuse to allow the bastard to have Joker's seemingly immunity from being executed for literally hundreds of war-crimes.
 
On the one hand, awesome new foes to fight.

On the other hand, I really hope 'we' and by extension Alex, don't become so jaded and complacent to Cauldron's goals that we allow filth like Jack Slash to live for longer than a day after we hear about him/fight against him for the first time.

I don't know what the canon reason was for allowing him to pursue his dream of being a murderhobo and to be perfectly fucking honest, I don't really care.

He's the Joker of worm and I refuse to allow the bastard to have Joker's seemingly immunity from being executed for literally hundreds of war-crimes.
Combination of him causing a lot of triggers and him probably being capable of affecting Contensa with his Communication, which allowed him to know what to do in order to let PtV let him do his thing.
 
Since it appears that everyone else is drinking their canon vials, that means the person who becomes Hero, tinker with frequency specialization (tinker 'stilling' power), Hero was even more heroic in terms of personality and morals than Legend was, so I can hope we can stay positive like he apparently is/will be.
 
Ok, I don't see what you're complaining about. You say the story won't be good if what, there isn't a good fight or a good challenge? I have already confirmed that there will be Endbringers, what more challenge do you need?

And as people have pointed out, there is a bunch of ways people can beat Alex without actually fighting him.

Beyond that, you keep talking about winning or losing. Are you mad because there won't be some major battle where Alex has to dig in deep and fight through the odds to win?

I'm probably missing the point as you said. But I just want to know man, help me understand.



Excuse me I'm just going to go and write something in my notes. Don't worry, nothing bad will happen.

Nothing at all.

:drevil:



I will admit something here. You guys aren't going to be fighting canon characters for a while. You guys need to get through the events that reveal superheroes to the world, the first time S-Class threats show up.

The birdcage was not a solution for a while, so god knows how many S-Class threats that the founders had to take out before the Endbringers started showing up and they needed to keep people alive. How many members of S9 came and went before we got the canon roster? As such, I need to fill up those spots with OC's.
Sonos you make me want to name ourselves the WALLWarden and run a super prison
 
On the other hand, I really hope 'we' and by extension Alex, don't become so jaded and complacent to Cauldron's goals that we allow filth like Jack Slash to live for longer than a day after we hear about him/fight against him for the first time.

I don't know what the canon reason was for allowing him to pursue his dream of being a murderhobo and to be perfectly fucking honest, I don't really care.

He's the Joker of worm and I refuse to allow the bastard to have Joker's seemingly immunity from being executed for literally hundreds of war-crimes.

Well, the problem with Jack isn't that Alex will let him live because he causes so many triggers, it's just that he won't let himself get into Alex's range. The second that Alex comes within three miles of Jack, his communication tells him "Fuck whatever you're doing, and get the hell out of dodge as fast as your legs can carry you."

Alex will probably only hear about Jack Slash in name only, he will probably never see his face. Because, while Jack Slash is a horrible motherfucker, he's not an idiot, and he's not going to allow himself within the range of a guy who can crush his throat with a thought.
 
0.3: The Girl who can be moved
So, I promised this a bit ago, and I shall deliver. The next chapter is being a bit of a problem child in my head, sorry it's taking a while.

But here you are, the narrative history of Rebecca Costa-Brown.



Name: Rebecca Costa-Brown
Age: 17
Height: 5'7
Occupation: Student (Former), Cauldron Enforcer (Current)


Powers: Superhuman Strength, Advanced Cognition, flight.

Rebecca can fly faster than the eye can see, display levels of strength that no normal human can ever hope to achieve, and her memory is perfect. Any event that she has seen is recorded and can be recalled at a moment's notice.

History: In 1969, a normal girl was born to normal parents. A single child to parents who loved her with all their hearts. It was a recipe for a simple childhood, devoid of hardship and filled with memories that a little girl would cherish forever. And she did. Rebecca loved everyday with her parents, and they showed that love to her everyday.

However, while they loved her, their love for one another was not as strong.

One day, after school, Rebecca walked in to her mother screaming at her father. She called him a faithless bastard. She didn't know what that meant, but she knew the pain in her mother's eyes when she saw it. She watched as her mother threw her father out of the house, and slam the door behind him.

After that, her mother told her not to open the door for him anymore.

She didn't know why her mother was angry, but she followed instructions like a good daughter would. After that day, Rebecca noticed her mother starting to be more... open to men other than her father. She would tell Rebecca that she was going on dates, that she wasn't old enough to understand. Her mother took on one date after another, no matter how kind they might have been to her or Rebecca.

This went on for a while, so Rebecca ignored it.

Then, a few years later, she got a call from her father. She had a sister now, but, not a real sister. The term she found described the girl as her half sister. He tried to get her to agree to a meeting. He sounded so happy that he was with her. He sounded so happy with what he had.

Her name was Rachel.... Rachel Brown.

Rebecca asked her mother, but she wouldn't let her go meet her. She tried for what felt like a hundred times, but the answer was always the same.

She got letters from her sister every time her birthday came around. She would write her, telling about how nice her mother was, and how many gifts that her father had given her. All the while, her mother finally found someone to keep around. His name was Max, and he was kind enough to Rebecca.

For a time, the three of them were a family. For a time, her mother would see something other than her father when she looked at her.

It was the happiest time of her life.

Then, she got a half brother. And Rebecca started seeing less and less of her mother and stepfather. It was because they had to keep track of her little brother, she was old enough to take care of herself.

Once again, her mother didn't want to look at her anymore, her first daughter. She didn't want to be forgotten, so she pushed herself. She studied harder, she worked harder. But it didn't matter.

Neither of them noticed when she came home from school with perfect grades.

Neither of them noticed when she qualified for state in the track team.

She called her father, but he was too busy with work or his family.

No matter what she did, neither family noticed. They said they cared about her, but she had trouble believing that.

But when she collapsed on the floor one day, they noticed. When she was dragged to the hospital, they noticed. And when they were told that she had cancer, they finally cried for her.

Rebecca didn't want them to cry. They didn't need to cry over her. So she took her books, and she studied. She buried herself in books, and smiled when they came to visit her. She never let herself look weak, she never let herself look like something worth forgetting.

But, eventually, they stopped coming as regularliy as they once did.

Her brother was growing up, so it was understandable. In that hospital room, she vowed to get through this, to live beyond this sickness. So she asked the doctors about her condition, the ins and outs of it all so that she could have hope that she could survive.

Only, they didn't give her hope.

She never got better, she was only getting worse and worse everyday. And to make it worse, the doctors only lied to her. They said it was going to get better, but it never did. It hurt, every time she had to hear that she was getting better, when everyone knew that she wasn't.

They didn't care that it was hurting her.

They didn't do anything to make her feel any better.

In that room, Rebecca Costa-Brown wanted to die. Save the doctors the trouble of having to talk to her everyday. Save her family, from pretending that she was still their daughter.

But she didn't die, she kept on living through a month of that hell. She kept on living, until she was told that she was getting a neighbor in the intensive care unit. He was just as old as her, but that just made her sadder. Someone else didn't need to go through this. She might have cried for him, but she was done crying for anyone.

Then, when she least expected it, he came into her room. He was a shaking, nervous boy who barely managed to introduce himself. Alex Everett, an interesting name. He talked to her about what it was going to be like living here, about his parents, and what their lives were like. It must has lasted two hours, but Rebecca didn't mind.

It was the first conversation that didn't hurt.

He left, and Rebecca figured that was all that was needed. But, he came back the next day. And the next, and the next. Soon, she couldn't remember what a day in the hospital was like without Alex coming to visit her. His hair fell off, his skin turned pale, and he started getting weaker and weaker. But he never stopped coming, he never stopped looking at her like a friend, instead of someone that needed to be pitied.

If that wasn't enough, he brought his family along with him sometimes. Clint, the older brother, wise and caring to her like she was his own sister. Danah, kind and full of ideas. She would always give Rebecca little secrets to boss Alex around, and books, piles of them. Slowly, the idea of keeping up her grades fell back in her mind. She didn't need grades, she needed to read the books that were so kindly delivered to her. She had to talk to the boy who was kinder than anyone else. The boy who helped her hope again.

The boy who she fell for.



One day, Rebecca was visited by a woman who called herself Doctor Mother. She said she could cure her, that she could live beyond these walls if she was willing to work for her. At first, she didn't want to trust her. It wasn't the first time that a doctor had lied to her.

But when she heard that Alex had taken the promise, she relented.

She reached out, and grabbed the red vial. It was like drinking solid rock, but Rebecca managed for force it down her throat. Nothing happened at first, but then, she fell back on her pillow, and she saw nothing more. When she woke up again, her hair had grown back, and she could run like she could in her prime.

She met with Doctor Mother, and she was told where she was. Cauldron, a place dedicated to saving the world against people with powers. People like her. When she first flew, Rebecca didn't leave her room for a day. She was scared, she didn't know what to do.

Then, the Deputy Director showed herself. She talked to Rebecca about her place, her position, her responsibility. She could be a hero, someone that was loved by everyone in the world.

And if that wasn't enough, she was told her best friend was only a few doors down. She couldn't visit him, no matter how much she wanted to. Contessa gave her a job, a position in Cauldron, and Rebecca found herself trying to distract herself just like she tried to distract herself in that hospital room.

A day turned into a week.

A week turned into a month.

And a single month turned to just another couple of days working in Cauldron.

In that time, Rebecca trained. She traveled the world with Contessa and Doctor Mother. She met others like her under Cauldron's care. But during all that time, she never even thought of telling her family where she was. It was poetic, in a way. She forgot her family, the family that tried it's hardest to forget her.
 
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Huh nice. Hopefully she doesn't die in the future
and in saying that nice setting as well tis interesting.
 
Alex will probably only hear about Jack Slash in name only, he will probably never see his face. Because, while Jack Slash is a horrible motherfucker, he's not an idiot, and he's not going to allow himself within the range of a guy who can crush his throat with a thought.

Though I would consider it a triumph if you're able to lead the thread into voting step by step to compromise Alex's morals for what seem like perfectly sensible reasons each time....
 
That is one very good reason for us to think up a moral code and then stick to it come hell or high water, we're so powerful that we really need to limit ourselves.
 
@IKnowNothing The other part of Alexandria's power is basically being able to very accurately interpret people's micro-expressions. Basically a power version of learning to cold read someones face.
 
Wow that's .... that sucks.

and is a good reason for her to not talk to her family and even more reason to talk to ours as they are a good group of people.
 
Wow that's .... that sucks.

and is a good reason for her to not talk to her family and even more reason to talk to ours as they are a good group of people.

Now you see why she only called them, instead of her own parents. She was thinking of them first, plus, she had to give them hope that Alex could come home one day.
 
@IKnowNothing The other part of Alexandria's power is basically being able to very accurately interpret people's micro-expressions. Basically a power version of learning to cold read someones face.
No, its enhanced learning and perfect memory.
Its a learned skill anyone could do but few can maintain...unless you can't forget.

She spends her free time picking up all sorts of competencies
 
So, I promised this a bit ago, and I shall deliver. The next chapter is being a bit of a problem child in my head, sorry it's taking a while.

But here you are, the narrative history of Rebecca Costa-Brown.



Name: Rebecca Costa-Brown
Age: 17
Height: 5'7
Occupation: Student (Former), Cauldron Enforcer (Current)


Powers: Superhuman Strength, Advanced Cognition, flight.

Rebecca can fly faster than the eye can see, display levels of strength that no normal human can ever hope to achieve, and her memory is perfect. Any event that she has seen is recorded and can be recalled at a moment's notice.

History: In 1969, a normal girl was born to normal parents. A single child to parents who loved her with all their hearts. It was a recipe for a simple childhood, devoid of hardship and filled with memories that a little girl would cherish forever. And she did. Rebecca loved everyday with her parents, and they showed that love to her everyday.

However, while they loved her, their love for one another was not as strong.

One day, after school, Rebecca walked in to her mother screaming at her father. She called him a faithless bastard. She didn't know what that meant, but she knew the pain in her mother's eyes when she saw it. She watched as her mother threw her father out of the house, and slam the door behind him.

After that, her mother told her not to open the door for him anymore.

She didn't know why her mother was angry, but she followed instructions like a good daughter would. After that day, Rebecca noticed her mother starting to be more... open to men other than her father. She would tell Rebecca that she was going on dates, that she wasn't old enough to understand. Her mother took on one date after another, no matter how kind they might have been to her or Rebecca.

This went on for a while, so Rebecca ignored it.

Then, a few years later, she got a call from her father. She had a sister now, but, not a real sister. The term she found described the girl as her half sister. He tried to get her to agree to a meeting. He sounded so happy that he was with her. He sounded so happy with what he had.

Her name was Rachel.... Rachel Brown.

Rebecca asked her mother, but she wouldn't let her go meet her. She tried for what felt like a hundred times, but the answer was always the same.

She got letters from her sister every time her birthday came around. She would write her, telling about how nice her mother was, and how many gifts that her father had given her. All the while, her mother finally found someone to keep around. His name was Max, and he was kind enough to Rebecca.

For a time, the three of them were a family. For a time, her mother would see something other than her father when she looked at her.

It was the happiest time of her life.

Then, she got a half brother. And Rebecca started seeing less and less of her mother and stepfather. It was because they had to keep track of her little brother, she was old enough to take care of herself.

Once again, her mother didn't want to look at her anymore, her first daughter. She didn't want to be forgotten, so she pushed herself. She studied harder, she worked harder. But it didn't matter.

Neither of them noticed when she came home from school with perfect grades.

Neither of them noticed when she qualified for state in the track team.

She called her father, but he was too busy with work or his family.

No matter what she did, neither family noticed. They said they cared about her, but she had trouble believing that.

But when she collapsed on the floor one day, they noticed. When she was dragged to the hospital, they noticed. And when they were told that she had cancer, they finally cried for her.

Rebecca didn't want them to cry. They didn't need to cry over her. So she took her books, and she studied. She buried herself in books, and smiled when they came to visit her. She never let herself look weak, she never let herself look like something worth forgetting.

But, eventually, they stopped coming as regularliy as they once did.

Her brother was growing up, so it was understandable. In that hospital room, she vowed to get through this, to live beyond this sickness. So she asked the doctors about her condition, the ins and outs of it all so that she could have hope that she could survive.

Only, they didn't give her hope.

She never got better, she was only getting worse and worse everyday. And to make it worse, the doctors only lied to her. They said it was going to get better, but it never did. It hurt, every time she had to hear that she was getting better, when everyone knew that she wasn't.

They didn't care that it was hurting her.

They didn't do anything to make her feel any better.

In that room, Rebecca Costa-Brown wanted to die. Save the doctors the trouble of having to talk to her everyday. Save her family, from pretending that she was still their daughter.

But she didn't die, she kept on living through a month of that hell. She kept on living, until she was told that she was getting a neighbor in the intensive care unit. He was just as old as her, but that just made her sadder. Someone else didn't need to go through this. She might have cried for him, but she was done crying for anyone.

Then, when she least expected it, he came into her room. He was a shaking, nervous boy who barely managed to introduce himself. Alex Everett, an interesting name. He talked to her about what it was going to be like living here, about his parents, and what their lives were like. It must has lasted two hours, but Rebecca didn't mind.

It was the first conversation that didn't hurt.

He left, and Rebecca figured that was all that was needed. But, he came back the next day. And the next, and the next. Soon, she couldn't remember what a day in the hospital was like without Alex coming to visit her. His hair fell off, his skin turned pale, and he started getting weaker and weaker. But he never stopped coming, he never stopped looking at her like a friend, instead of someone that needed to be pitied.

If that wasn't enough, he brought his family along with him sometimes. Clint, the older brother, wise and caring to her like she was his own sister. Danah, kind and full of ideas. She would always give Rebecca little secrets to boss Alex around, and books, piles of them. Slowly, the idea of keeping up her grades fell back in her mind. She didn't need grades, she needed to read the books that were so kindly delivered to her. She had to talk to the boy who was kinder than anyone else. The boy who helped her hope again.

The boy who she fell for.



One day, Rebecca was visited by a woman who called herself Doctor Mother. She said she could cure her, that she could live beyond these walls if she was willing to work for her. At first, she didn't want to trust her. It wasn't the first time that a doctor had lied to her.

But when she heard that Alex had taken the promise, she relented.

She reached out, and grabbed the red vial. It was like drinking solid rock, but Rebecca managed for force it down her throat. Nothing happened at first, but then, she fell back on her pillow, and she saw nothing more. When she woke up again, her hair had grown back, and she could run like she could in her prime.

She met with Doctor Mother, and she was told where she was. Cauldron, a place dedicated to saving the world against people with powers. People like her. When she first flew, Rebecca didn't leave her room for a day. She was scared, she didn't know what to do.

Then, the Deputy Director showed herself. She talked to Rebecca about her place, her position, her responsibility. She could be a hero, someone that was loved by everyone in the world.

And if that wasn't enough, she was told her best friend was only a few doors down. She couldn't visit him, no matter how much she wanted to. Contessa gave her a job, a position in Cauldron, and Rebecca found herself trying to distract herself just like she tried to distract herself in that hospital room.

A day turned into a week.

A week turned into a month.

And a single month turned to just another couple of days working in Cauldron.

In that time, Rebecca trained. She traveled the world with Contessa and Doctor Mother. She met others like her under Cauldron's care. But during all that time, she never even thought of telling her family where she was. It was poetic, in a way. She forgot her family, the family that tried it's hardest to forget her.


Just got a chance to read this.

I've said it before, but your character backstories are so vividly detailed that it's easy to fall into them. It is exceedingly rare in fanfiction to find characters that are multidimensional, let alone the multifaceted people you construct. If there was nothing else, this alone would make the quest worth playing and your writing worth reading. Bravo.
 
So, I promised this a bit ago, and I shall deliver. The next chapter is being a bit of a problem child in my head, sorry it's taking a while.

But here you are, the narrative history of Rebecca Costa-Brown.



Name: Rebecca Costa-Brown
Age: 17
Height: 5'7
Occupation: Student (Former), Cauldron Enforcer (Current)


Powers: Superhuman Strength, Advanced Cognition, flight.

Rebecca can fly faster than the eye can see, display levels of strength that no normal human can ever hope to achieve, and her memory is perfect. Any event that she has seen is recorded and can be recalled at a moment's notice.

History: In 1969, a normal girl was born to normal parents. A single child to parents who loved her with all their hearts. It was a recipe for a simple childhood, devoid of hardship and filled with memories that a little girl would cherish forever. And she did. Rebecca loved everyday with her parents, and they showed that love to her everyday.

However, while they loved her, their love for one another was not as strong.

One day, after school, Rebecca walked in to her mother screaming at her father. She called him a faithless bastard. She didn't know what that meant, but she knew the pain in her mother's eyes when she saw it. She watched as her mother threw her father out of the house, and slam the door behind him.

After that, her mother told her not to open the door for him anymore.

She didn't know why her mother was angry, but she followed instructions like a good daughter would. After that day, Rebecca noticed her mother starting to be more... open to men other than her father. She would tell Rebecca that she was going on dates, that she wasn't old enough to understand. Her mother took on one date after another, no matter how kind they might have been to her or Rebecca.

This went on for a while, so Rebecca ignored it.

Then, a few years later, she got a call from her father. She had a sister now, but, not a real sister. The term she found described the girl as her half sister. He tried to get her to agree to a meeting. He sounded so happy that he was with her. He sounded so happy with what he had.

Her name was Rachel.... Rachel Brown.

Rebecca asked her mother, but she wouldn't let her go meet her. She tried for what felt like a hundred times, but the answer was always the same.

She got letters from her sister every time her birthday came around. She would write her, telling about how nice her mother was, and how many gifts that her father had given her. All the while, her mother finally found someone to keep around. His name was Max, and he was kind enough to Rebecca.

For a time, the three of them were a family. For a time, her mother would see something other than her father when she looked at her.

It was the happiest time of her life.

Then, she got a half brother. And Rebecca started seeing less and less of her mother and stepfather. It was because they had to keep track of her little brother, she was old enough to take care of herself.

Once again, her mother didn't want to look at her anymore, her first daughter. She didn't want to be forgotten, so she pushed herself. She studied harder, she worked harder. But it didn't matter.

Neither of them noticed when she came home from school with perfect grades.

Neither of them noticed when she qualified for state in the track team.

She called her father, but he was too busy with work or his family.

No matter what she did, neither family noticed. They said they cared about her, but she had trouble believing that.

But when she collapsed on the floor one day, they noticed. When she was dragged to the hospital, they noticed. And when they were told that she had cancer, they finally cried for her.

Rebecca didn't want them to cry. They didn't need to cry over her. So she took her books, and she studied. She buried herself in books, and smiled when they came to visit her. She never let herself look weak, she never let herself look like something worth forgetting.

But, eventually, they stopped coming as regularliy as they once did.

Her brother was growing up, so it was understandable. In that hospital room, she vowed to get through this, to live beyond this sickness. So she asked the doctors about her condition, the ins and outs of it all so that she could have hope that she could survive.

Only, they didn't give her hope.

She never got better, she was only getting worse and worse everyday. And to make it worse, the doctors only lied to her. They said it was going to get better, but it never did. It hurt, every time she had to hear that she was getting better, when everyone knew that she wasn't.

They didn't care that it was hurting her.

They didn't do anything to make her feel any better.

In that room, Rebecca Costa-Brown wanted to die. Save the doctors the trouble of having to talk to her everyday. Save her family, from pretending that she was still their daughter.

But she didn't die, she kept on living through a month of that hell. She kept on living, until she was told that she was getting a neighbor in the intensive care unit. He was just as old as her, but that just made her sadder. Someone else didn't need to go through this. She might have cried for him, but she was done crying for anyone.

Then, when she least expected it, he came into her room. He was a shaking, nervous boy who barely managed to introduce himself. Alex Everett, an interesting name. He talked to her about what it was going to be like living here, about his parents, and what their lives were like. It must has lasted two hours, but Rebecca didn't mind.

It was the first conversation that didn't hurt.

He left, and Rebecca figured that was all that was needed. But, he came back the next day. And the next, and the next. Soon, she couldn't remember what a day in the hospital was like without Alex coming to visit her. His hair fell off, his skin turned pale, and he started getting weaker and weaker. But he never stopped coming, he never stopped looking at her like a friend, instead of someone that needed to be pitied.

If that wasn't enough, he brought his family along with him sometimes. Clint, the older brother, wise and caring to her like she was his own sister. Danah, kind and full of ideas. She would always give Rebecca little secrets to boss Alex around, and books, piles of them. Slowly, the idea of keeping up her grades fell back in her mind. She didn't need grades, she needed to read the books that were so kindly delivered to her. She had to talk to the boy who was kinder than anyone else. The boy who helped her hope again.

The boy who she fell for.



One day, Rebecca was visited by a woman who called herself Doctor Mother. She said she could cure her, that she could live beyond these walls if she was willing to work for her. At first, she didn't want to trust her. It wasn't the first time that a doctor had lied to her.

But when she heard that Alex had taken the promise, she relented.

She reached out, and grabbed the red vial. It was like drinking solid rock, but Rebecca managed for force it down her throat. Nothing happened at first, but then, she fell back on her pillow, and she saw nothing more. When she woke up again, her hair had grown back, and she could run like she could in her prime.

She met with Doctor Mother, and she was told where she was. Cauldron, a place dedicated to saving the world against people with powers. People like her. When she first flew, Rebecca didn't leave her room for a day. She was scared, she didn't know what to do.

Then, the Deputy Director showed herself. She talked to Rebecca about her place, her position, her responsibility. She could be a hero, someone that was loved by everyone in the world.

And if that wasn't enough, she was told her best friend was only a few doors down. She couldn't visit him, no matter how much she wanted to. Contessa gave her a job, a position in Cauldron, and Rebecca found herself trying to distract herself just like she tried to distract herself in that hospital room.

A day turned into a week.

A week turned into a month.

And a single month turned to just another couple of days working in Cauldron.

In that time, Rebecca trained. She traveled the world with Contessa and Doctor Mother. She met others like her under Cauldron's care. But during all that time, she never even thought of telling her family where she was. It was poetic, in a way. She forgot her family, the family that tried it's hardest to forget her.

This is some beautiful characterisation.

Now we definitely need to Waifu her.
 
Just got a chance to read this.

I've said it before, but your character backstories are so vividly detailed that it's easy to fall into them. It is exceedingly rare in fanfiction to find characters that are multidimensional, let alone the multifaceted people you construct. If there was nothing else, this alone would make the quest worth playing and your writing worth reading. Bravo.

Thanks.

Personally, I believe that it's the characters in a story that make everything come together. You want to see them get through everything because if it is done right, the characters are at their core human.

And humans mess up, they get dealt a bad hand and they have to live with that.

As such, I put a lot of care into molding the characters with this in mind. The backstories of Alex, Rebecca, Matthew, David, and Charles all reflect this. I will fully admit, I put most of the effort into them as they are the main cast, but I am working through everyone else as they become relevant to the story.

This is some beautiful characterisation.

Now we definitely need to Waifu her.

It occurs to me that alongside putting Alex on the path to OP, I have forced a ship on the thread.

At least everyone seems content with it sailing.

While thats lovely and all I'm afraid that what I'm taking from this is that I never realised this

was a parody song.


That was a parody song? Huh, learn something new everyday.:V
 
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