Beware uncharted lands, for there be spoilers afoot!
This may seem like it's overdue, but based on a comment I recently received elsewhere, apparently the fact that there will be spoilers to both the Neon Genesis Evangelion anime and the events of various games in the Persona Series (including but not limited to Persona 3, Persona 3 Portable, Persona 4, and Persona 5) wasn't made clear just by how the plot has unveiled.

So I'm placing a sticky post for this message: if you have not watched the original Evangelion anime, or if you have not played the Persona games — especially P3, P4, P5, and their updated re-releases — then take note that this story contains spoilers to all of them. Read at your own risk.

/that should do it
//right?
///right??
 
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Something to tide y'all over, courtesy of @Renu: I present Rei and her Persona, Lilith:



Spot the Persona 1 reference, if you can. :p
-people proceed to get it wrong-
It's Rei's pose. It's the same as the Protagonist in the JP cover. Also, love the art, looks cool.

I ain't the one who drew it, so you'll have to let them know your opinion in their own thread. :V

Well that's the only guess I can agree eith because I certainly can't think of anything off the top of my head.

Which irritates me since I like Persona 1 so I wanna get it right/make a good guess at the very least.

Well. I like the story and characters.

The dungeons weren't really much to talk about beyond the story parts, unlike Persona 2. Though I much prefer the fusion system of 1 over 2...only because it's closer to 3 onwards and I love that fusion system.

I will say I find it very appropriate that you mention Persona 1 in relation to Rei since Lilim is quite a commonly used Persona and I can vouch for it being VERY useful all the way to endgame despite being a level 19 Persona.

Okay it's not Lilith and I'm probably pushing it but it's related to both Lilith and Persona 1 so it's enough for me. :V

-notices a threadmark about naming the team-

Dang it. I'm not far enough into the story to think up of a nore symbolism laden name, or at least a more appropriate one.

Only thing I can think of is "The Vanguards".

Yeah probably not that appropriate but it just came to mind cause it's cool and maybe slightly appropriate? Also partially because of EVA so excuse to manybe add "E" and "A" words to form a team name that can be abbreviated into EVA.

Idk i just wish i could help with naming the team but don't think i'd be much help since i'm still pretty early in the story...
 
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I will say I find it very appropriate that you mention Persona 1 in relation to Rei since Lilim is quite a commonly used Persona and I can vouch for it being VERY useful all the way to endgame despite being a level 19 Persona.

Okay it's not Lilith and I'm probably pushing it but it's related to both Lilith and Persona 1 so it's enough for me. :V

Let's just say that Rei imitating Naoya's pose was an intentional request and we'll leave it at that. ;)

/just wait 'till you get to July 30
 
8/14 - Early Morning (Atlantic)
A brief slice of time and space, amidst the realm of dream and memory.

Afar, across a vast ocean of orange(?), there were...voices? She couldn't recall.

Great titans (not giants, but things with unbelievable presence) observed the world from within and without: a great skull, amidst a legion of celestial monsters; a false king sitting upon a stolen throne; a long-nosed man(?) sitting amidst a haze of blue...

She didn't know what to make of them.

However, their gazes were all focused upon a young boy(?), living upon the world...yet he was bound in the embrace of a violet Beast.

She knew him, somehow.

"
Curious, how events seem to revolve around him, is it not?"

Down at her feet was a penguin.

"
And here you are, being drawn into his orbit as well..."

The penguin seemed to be smiling, somehow.

"
...of course, given who you are, that's only reasonable, yes?"

She saw all of this, as through a glass darkly. (There was orange light...and a wall of glass...?)

"
Do be careful. Much depends upon you, as well."

Reality came crashing back in-

xxxx

Asuka Langley-Sohryu jolted awake to find herself submerged. WHAT-?!

On instinct, she did not breathe, nor did she flail or struggle. (Combat in all sorts of different situations had forced her to get better at responding in an instant.) Instead, she reached for her heart, willing Unit-02 to manifest in a spark of burning blue and flickering orange. As cognition and spirit merged, Asuka was pulled to the surface by Unit-02. Her titan's green eyes gleamed, serving as proverbial beacons amidst the waters of the Atlantic. Looking around (it was still so dark, there was barely a hint of light from a sun that had yet to breach the horizon; most of the stars were still visible, what time was it?), she frantically tried to recall what had happened before going to sleep the prior day:

- Departing from the Spanish port of Marin;

- Using an old Boeing 929 hydrofoil that had once been owned by the long-defunct Kirijo Group for travelling (because of COURSE Mitsuru would think of that as a 'small charter boat');

- Marvelling over how most of the passenger seats had been taken up by spare fuel, because besides the skeleton crew taking them to Boston-2, she and Makinami were the only passengers;

- Being told to go to bed by Sister Mary (politely, but in that sort of stern manner that brooked no argument whatsoever), grumbling as she nestled her body across a whole row of passenger seats;

- A cacophonous rupturing of metal and surging water, echoing through her subconscious-!

...and that's when I woke up. The ruins of the hydrofoil floated upon the water, illuminated only by the flickers of burning fuel. "Sister Mary?" she impulsively cried out. "MARI?!" A distant gasp sounded, accompanied by a dull glow of orange that seemed to light up the night. As Unit-02 waded over towards it, she could make out the outline of a nun in a soaked habit. "Sister Mary!"

"...that...was sudden," she breathed heavily, focusing intently upon maintaining the spiritual barrier keeping her suspended a few inches above the waters of the Atlantic. "Do you know...what happened...?"

Asuka shook her head. "Your guess is as good as mine."


View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p2L_OJYrQAU

Suddenly, there was a distinct sensation from below...one that swelled, forming a large dome of water in the distance. Even in the darkness of the early morning, the water could be seen, blotting out the stars along the horizon.

"Your doom is nigh, lilim!"

With a thunderous burst, a gargantuan fish erupted from the water, arching over to crash down on them.

Even though Sister Mary impulsively grabbed her protectively, Asuka merely snorted. So that's what destroyed our ride. "This is how it's going to be, is it?"

Her Other huffed.

"What a rude creature."

The Beast cracked its knuckles.

"We'll have to do this the hard way..."

"Hang on tight, Sister Mary. Focus your soul towards mine."

The nun audibly startled. "Huh? What are you doing?"

"Just shut up and trust me!" Snarling, Asuka kept a hand on both Sister Mary and Nigoki, trying to focus her soul and her mind — her intentions and will and consciousness, her everything — towards delving into that strange and otherworldly place that the Angels seemed to call home.

(The sensation of the Angel's presence — the one known as Matarael, a fact she did not know and would not have cared to know — had weighed heavily upon her, prompting her to delve into the Metaverse. Following it took her to a strange and bizarre place, lined with eyes, creeping limbs, and acidic geometry; however, it gave her the chance to finally take down one of the monsters she had been chasing for years.)​

Inexorably, the water around them seemed to part, and they fell away; deeper and deeper, until the ocean seemed to form an infinite column around them, with the Angel pursuing them from above. "Miss Sohryu, what's happening?!"

"TAKING US TO WHERE THAT THING'S CORE IS LOCATED!" Because 'Core' fit as well as anything.

"...I don't think I'm prepared for this sort of combat!" protested the religious.

"Consider it a crash course! Besides, it beats drowning!"

xxxx

/and we're back
//and we open back up with something completely different :V
 
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- Using an old Boeing 929 hydrofoil that had once been owned by the long-defunct Kirijo Group for travelling (because of COURSE Mitsuru would think of that as a 'small charter boat');

Mitsuru's Ojou-sama-class common-sense is so giggle-inducing.
Hope we get see her in a social setting with Shinji one day.

"TAKING US TO WHERE THAT THING'S CORE IS LOCATED!" Because 'Core' fit as well as anything.

"...I don't think I'm prepared for this sort of combat!" protested the religious.

"Consider it a crash course! Besides, it beats drowning!"

Asuka is cranky and has someone to protect.
That fight shouldn't take long.
 
DragonUnitOmega analyzes SPE: 6/24 thru 6/25
Hey yo hee hoo, everyone! Another unexpected break, but now we're back with the two-oh installment of Dragon Reviews and (Probably) Overanalyzes SPE! And once again, rather serendipitous to be a milestone number as well...okay it wasn't as bad as the Hanamura Feels Shot Incident but, well...you'll see. :V Now... -puts on review glasses- Review. STARTO!

6/24 Morning: Hakone Academy - 6/25 Evening: The Trio

First we got Sokila wanting a visit--sorry little one, hopefully he'll come soon--before we got the gossip section...and one of the students calling Kyle a death cyborg, which is hilarious because of course they're scared, but I'll have you know that even I thought that visor was cool on Kihl, so Kyle is automatically even cooler because he's (at the moment?) not a bad guy and looks cool. ...of course that could just be another case of my tastes being unusual, but eh, whatever. We got Toji reminding Shinji to go to track and telling him he's got something to do that afternoon, which we get a hint of from Hikari once said afternoon rolls around. Not that it matters much to us as readers as we get the answer: Toji visiting the hospital where his sister, Sakura, is "sleeping", her soul damaged and no known way of "fixing" that.

Yeah that's certainly depressing for the boy...but hey! At least it's better than in Trinity Soul and the Reverse cases! Or the mental shutdowns! Where they're outright dead from having a part of their mind/soul destroyed! ...okay not much better but at least you have a small hope, one that's getting smaller and smaller, but still.

Oh also another bright side is that Shinji and Toji can bond over hating running away. :V

Speaking of the two bonding, we see that relationship getting at least a tiny bit better before we get more bantering, this time from Kensuke wanting to see how bad shinji is at school...which, okay, I know it's teasing, but wow, rude. No it has nothing to do with me not liking to be called dumb, what are you talking about? :V More importantly, Shinji does visit Sokila! And it's adotable with her wanting a "pweety woom" and needing to get strong! Too bad Elizabeth can't make it club velvet again :V

With that...oh wow that day was even shorter than I thought. Maybe it would've been better to keep going for the last review.

...

Nah. I like the serendipity of this.

Anyways, this time I'mma keep going...onto 6/25!

And we got Herod bein' snarky 'bout not answering...doesn't help I completely forgot about it too. But before Shinji can really snark back about the difficulty about answering, well, questions one has difficulty in answering, we got the next Herod question!

HEROD: WE HAVE ANOTHER QUERY FOR YOU.
HEROD: OF THE FOLLOWING OPTIONS, WHICH SCENARIO IS MOST PALATABLE TO YOU?
HEROD: A ONE-ON-ONE DUEL TO THE DEATH WITH YOUR CLOSEST FRIEND; A LAST STAND AGAINST A HORDE OF MONSTERS BY YOURSELF; AN HOUR-LONG MEETING WITH THE PERSON YOU DREAD MOST, WITH THE CAVEAT THAT YOU WILL NOT BE SUBJECT TO BODILY HARM.
HEROD: THERE IS NO RIGHT OR WRONG ANSWER.

Oh this one's immediate for me. "A last stand with a a horde of monsters". Because I wouldn't want to hurt a friend and if I'm near someone I dread, then I dread them for a reason and that reason probably won't easily go away or let me stand being near the person for even a second.

But we got a more interesting question from Pilate (who totally isn't referencing the first episode of NGE :V)...and...

PILATE: GOOD
PILATE: BECAUSE WE'RE NOT GOING TO ASK ABOUT WHAT YOU WOULD DO IN THIS SITUATION.
PILATE: THAT WOULD BE BORING
PILATE: INSTEAD, WE'D LIKE YOU TO GIVE AN EXAMPLE AS TO HOW THE ACTIONS OF X COULD BE JUSTIFIED.

...it's this.

However, I'll get back to it later because, well, my thoughts on this are also tied with a later scene. So just put a pin on it.

For now, we got Shinji being troubled, his close classmates noticing, and then Hikari suggesting tutoring. Shinji takes up on that, before he does, he tells Mayumi about it. He feels bad about skipping it and thus gives his number...only belatedly realizing what that would look like to other people. But hey, at least you noticed, Shinji. And you got your tutoring to go to get your mind off it.

So we finally get him and Yu Narukami meeting! Aw yeah! Here we go! They go to a room for the tutoring, and then...

[...] however, it was empty, save for two other students, both males. One had dark blue hair, bangs hanging over his face; thick headphones were resting around his neck. The other had frizzy black hair and wide eyeglasses.

Oh hey. It's the male protagonists of "soft reboot" Persona, Persona 3, 4, 5. To celebrate their appearance, here's me writing a mashup.

Freaked out on arrival
Try to run me through
The whole moment to
One world
One love
Shadows of
Your last surprise!
I'm coming!
Last beat in the soul.


EDIT: Wait a second I just remembered there IS an "official" 3-4-5 mashup!

A Persona 3×4×5 Everyday Mix from Persona Super Live P-Sound Bomb 2017!

Okay yeah that's better.

Ahem anyways...

Okay that's done. And we get confirmation P3 Male protagonist will be called Minato Arisato. So now I can ask this. Any particular reason for the pick? Just curious if it's something as simple as "I just prefer it" when the other two are their anime/Dancing game names and I still see plenty of people prefer Akira over Ren, unlike Yu where Souji has mostly petered out in usage, most notably for newer fics.

Back to actual story, not long after introductions, we get Yu and Ren being overdramatic idiots after the former goes SERIOUS and the latter does SMOKE BOMB! Too bad Minato doesn't seem like his manga counterpart as I'm 100% sure that Minato would just join in their shenanigans. XD

Though that's probably a good thing for Shinji considering how confused he is. :V

Especially as instead of studying, they're going...FISHING!

And Shinji making observations that I shall make comments on.

One: because his game had no fishing mini-game despite being set in Tatsumi Port Island. :V

Two: they're competiting over whether P4 or P5 is the most newcomer friendly. :V or remembering their sidequest in Q2. Whichever one works.

Three: i...have no idea since i've never been fishing. I have SEEN fish through while swimming though.

Anyways, after those thoughts, Shinji asks for advice. Except that leads to Ren and Yu being extra as eff because, well, as Minato said, bored. Also maybe sorta like "hey might as well have fun by flanderizing the traits that most people know us for".

"...it seems we have reached mutually assured destruction," said Amamiya.

Don't you mean mutually assured mass destruction? :V

No I will never NOT take the opportunity to say that.

Also I'lll admit, the further that "argument" went on, the more I was legit worried they didn't like each other? but then I got reassured by ren's cheeky ass grin.

But anyways, after that banter-that-bordered-on-arguing, then they actually listen and Shinji does his best to ask his question and describe what prompted it, without the Pilate part I'm sure.

The group gives some good insight that will help him make his own choice, which sometimes is all you need...and also for me. Well, sorta. With this, and stuff other people pointed out, I like the question now since you can take it as an opportunity for Shinji to learn to understand someone else, even if you find it baffling or personally won't do it yourself.

As for what justification I would give?

All I can think is literally every. single. Zero. From the Zero Escape series.

And now I can't help but make so many comparisons with this and Zero Escape and I HATE IT THAT MY MIND IS MAKING THOSE CONNECTIONS BECAUSE NOW I'M JUST GOSH DANG WORRIED AND ANYONE WHO KNOWS ZERO ESCAPE CAN GUESS WHY.

stupid urge to see zero escape again and now comparing stuff to it
now i'm just gonna call this fic "if evangelion and person were fused and the plot was like zero escape in mystery, feels, and TIMELINE SHENANIGANS".
but seriously anyone interested go try zero escape if that and puzzle solving is your thing
i love it and i deserves more attention

Ahem, anyways, so, basically the justification I can think of is "simple": if the X has seen every scenario and found those somehow worse than coercing you (or I guess Shinji really) with using the life of Y as blackmail to do the action that could result in your death, then as much as I wish there was another scenario, and will probably still hate X for it since I'd still probably keep thinking of "what ifs" that involve no blackmailing, I'd understand.

So yeah.

Anyhow, back to the story. Their advice leads Shinji asking about why they're helping him which then leads to showing off their maturity, by being earnest about their reasons for helping. Though I find it funny that Ren's the one talkin' 'bout pride and how it can lead to one's downfall. Well, funny because I find it fitting since he's often compared to be a representation of pride, or rather what confidence is before becoming pride, acting as a counterpart/foil to Shido as a representation of pride. Shido, so confident in himself he thinks he's the only one right. Ren, who is confident in himself because his friends believe in him and he won't let his friends down. At least that's how I see it.

And... Oh. Shinji is trying to form it but it's mystery bond that won't unlock.

The Arcana is the means by which
all is revealed...

...

Must do it.
(For maximum effect: please view 3:09-3:24 of Crystaahhl's compliation video for the finale of P3FES and imagine that's what you're hearing when you read below)
The arcana is the means by which all is revealed
The Arcana Is The Means By Which All Is Revealed
THE ARCANA IS THE MEANS BY ALL WHICH IS REVEALED
thearcanaisthemeansbywhichallisrevealed
tHeaRcAnAiStHemEaNsbYwHiChaLliSrEvEaLeD

Excuse me excuse me again just HAD to do it. XD

Anyways. Back to serious...

At least for a bit as when Shinji asks if they can actually do a tutor session, The Guardian decides to help out The King and pull Shinji in the water.

Oh gee now you're being cooperative, are you, fish? :V

Just kidding. Just kidding. I actually didn't suffer while trying to get the Guardian, surprisingly.

Anyways, with that splash, the trio go and be helpful and foot the bill for dinner. Once Shinji leaves...

The trio discuss the situation and their thoughts.

Yes I am inserting a link to a track from Zero Escape: 999 titled Puzzle and Riddle,because why not? :V I will do that since they be talking about timelines and clean slates and so on and so on. Speaking of. Quote blitz!

"...I get it. The frustration, of having everything wiped clean, as though...well, you get the idea."

Tatsuya Suou: Same.

Joker grimaced. "You're one to talk, Door-kun."

Oy, that's low Ren.

At the brief moment of silence, Ren relented. "Sorry. That was out of line."

Oh good.

...

Oh hey the earlier line is Joker, the other Ren. One side uninhibited, and in this case snapping at fate, the other more so, and in this case apologizing for the lapse in wrath.

I'mma assume that's on purpose, in which case this is probably one of my favorite sentences/lines of this fic so far.

But if they tried to use their power, their enemy would know...and this whole cycle would be wasted, to their everlasting detriment.

FLASHBACKS TO ESCAPE MY NIGHT BY KHADEANVHADEN
ALSO FLASHBACKS TO ZERO TIME DILENMA


i hate timeloops/timeline shenanigans so much

or rather timeloop/timeline angst because i usually am really down for timey wimey shenanigans in stories but arrrrrrgggghhhhhhhhhh the angst potential is sometimes too much for meeeeeeee

Ren and Yu both deferred to him, nodding; despite their great feats, the two acknowledged him as their senior in experience, if nothing else.

Tatsuya: am i a joke to you?

Kidding kidding of course.

But still, I find it amusing they say that when Tatsuya has more experience with that from his own games instead of whatever the hell is happening with this fic.

But with that discussion over, we go back to Shinji actually managing to study, and then the end of the day. With...how much should I add for the Joke Theory Is Real meter? Hmm...since I mentioned 999...I'll go with a digital root. So that's +3 for the meter. How appropriate. Anyways, now...

Spoiler dodge roll: activate! :V
 
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...and one of the students calling Kyle a death cyborg, which is hilarious because of course they're scared, but I'll have you know that even I thought that visor was cool on Kihl, so Kyle is automatically even cooler because he's (at the moment?) not a bad guy and looks cool. ...of course that could just be another case of my tastes being unusual, but eh, whatever.

Keel: See Ikari? Kids can like me.

Gendo: *opens mouth*

Keel: For something other than being an unrepentant bastard.

Gendo: ... *opens mouth again*

Keel: Unironically.

Gendo: *closes mouth*

And we get confirmation P3 Male protagonist will be called Minato Arisato. So now I can ask this. Any particular reason for the pick? Just curious if it's something as simple as "I just prefer it" when the other two are their anime/Dancing game names and I still see plenty of people prefer Akira over Ren, unlike Yu where Souji has mostly petered out in usage, most notably for newer fics.

Couple of things:

- Minato Arisato despite being a relatively 'fanon' name by this point is still the most common one in usage as far as I'm aware in terms of fanfiction...and it fits better as a name in tandem with a certain-other-Persona-character-who-has-not-appeared-yet-in-your-binge-read. ;)

- We already have a Makoto (as I'm sure you're aware of; don't think I haven't seen your 'hugs' on the 6/26 segments!). :V

Too bad Minato doesn't seem like his manga counterpart as I'm 100% sure that Minato would just join in their shenanigans. XD

I'm sure he was early on. He's...been through a lot.

One: because his game had no fishing mini-game despite being set in Tatsumi Port Island. :V

Bingo. Though I'm sure that if there were fishing in P3, he'd probably end up using some super pricey fishing pole developed by the Kirijo Group or something. :p

Don't you mean mutually assured mass destruction? :V

Ooh yeah~!

/darn it

Also I'lll admit, the further that "argument" went on, the more I was legit worried they didn't like each other? but then I got reassured by ren's cheeky ass grin.

Guys bonding with each other can often be indistinguishable from very harsh humor or hazing. Those who can tell the difference have a bright future in the field of social psychology!

All I can think is literally every. single. Zero. From the Zero Escape series.

Yet another series I haven't experienced, so any and all connections or parallels are purely unintentional. :p

And... Oh. Shinji is trying to form it but it's mystery bond that won't unlock.



...

Must do it.
(For maximum effect: please view 3:09-3:24 of Crystaahhl's compliation video for the finale of P3FES and imagine that's what you're hearing when you read below)
The arcana is the means by which all is revealed
The Arcana Is The Means By Which All Is Revealed
THE ARCANA IS THE MEANS BY ALL WHICH IS REVEALED
thearcanaisthemeansbywhichallisrevealed
tHeaRcAnAiStHemEaNsbYwHiChaLliSrEvEaLeD

Excuse me excuse me again just HAD to do it. XD

I remember watching that stream live. Still the most stressed out I've ever seen CrystAAHHL. XD

Oy, that's low Ren.



Oh good.

...

Oh hey the earlier line is Joker, the other Ren. One side uninhibited, and in this case snapping at fate, the other more so, and in this case apologizing for the lapse in wrath.

I'mma assume that's on purpose, in which case this is probably one of my favorite sentences/lines of this fic so far.

For once, the differing use of Joker/Ren was actually intentional!

/not everything I do can be chalked up to serendipity

i hate timeloops/timeline shenanigans so much.

or rather timeloop/timeline angst because i usually am really down for timey wimey shenanigans in stories but arrrrrrgggghhhhhhhhhh the angst potential is sometimes too much for meeeeeeee

Rei Ayanami from Destiny, Gospel of a New Genesis: Then you probably wouldn't like me very much, then.

Tatsuya: am i a joke to you?

Kidding kidding of course.

But still, I find it amusing they say that when Tatsuya has more experience with that from his own games instead of whatever the hell is happening with this fic.

 
Couple of things:

- Minato Arisato despite being a relatively 'fanon' name by this point is still the most common one in usage as far as I'm aware in terms of fanfiction...and it fits better as a name in tandem with a certain-other-Persona-character-who-has-not-appeared-yet-in-your-binge-read. ;)

- We already have a Makoto (as I'm sure you're aware of; don't think I haven't seen your 'hugs' on the 6/26 segments!). :V

I see. Makes sense. It'd be way too serious to do this in the story. :V



But more seriously, yeah I did notice Minato is still used more often in fics. Still kinda wish Makoto Yuki popped up more often. but hey! that's what MY fics are for! indulging in stuff i wish was in written form! :V Ain't that right, Mako?
Makoto: You know I only let Mina and one other person can call me that.
I know I know. Just making my point.


(yes yes i am. :V it would still be hilarious for three makotos to be in the same vicinity like the above pictures)

I'm sure he was early on. He's...been through a lot.

-thinks of Zero from 999, and Zero Sr. and "Schrödinger's Cat" character from Virtue's Last Reward- Even if the full extent in this fic hasn't been shown, I figured. Not easy going through and/or seeing many timelines.


Me: -proceeds to dance to Mass Destruction-

Guys bonding with each other can often be indistinguishable from very harsh humor or hazing. Those who can tell the difference have a bright future in the field of social psychology!

I really need to keep this in mind though to myself because gosh dang it I fell like I keep forgetting that.. and might unconsciously not write guy bonding times like that if that's the kind of relationship they have...maybe...idk i can't tell.

Yet another series I haven't experienced, so any and all connections or parallels are purely unintentional. :p

I would've been very, and pleasantly, surprised if you did exprience the Zero Escape series. It's not that know to peopke besides visual novel and (maybe?) Danganronpa fans. And maybe DS fans.

Rei Ayanami from Destiny, Gospel of a New Genesis: Then you probably wouldn't like me very much, then.

Depends. on how much suffering you caused :V

just kidding just kidding i'm down for timeline shenanigans but that don't mean i won't go "aaaarrrrgggghhhh" from them.
 
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Depends. on how much suffering you caused :V

GONG!Rei Ayanami: *sweats nervously*

SPE!Rei Ayanami: What did you do?

MFE!Rei Ayanami: *snorts* What didn't she do.

GONG!Rei Ayanami: ...

SPE!Rei Ayanami: What did you do?

GONG!Rei Ayanami: *disappears into another timeline*

SPE!Rei Ayanami: ...I loathe time travel.

MFE!Rei Ayanami: Almost makes my 'one and done' lifespan preferable by comparison.
 
8/14 - Early Morning (Gaghiel)
As they fell further (fell deeper), Asuka could somehow see more easily (more clearly), despite the fact that there was no obvious source of light (notwithstanding how the sun had yet to rise!); the waters around them took on a grayish tinge, chaotic and whirling. However, before long, the infinite column transformed into a swirling whirlpool with a placid pool in the center; amidst the still waters, Mari Makinami was able to stabilize her A.T. Field with greater ease, even though she looked like a waterlogged mutt with a mulish expression. "This place feels...intimidating..."

"We'll deal," grunted Asuka, somehow feeling the slight strain on her own soul that Mari's presence represented. (Was it a consequence of bringing her along? Better than letting her die.) Brushing at her shoulders (oh hey your bodysuit manifested), Asuka then began squeezing water out of her long hair; her eyes focused on the swirling waters of the whirlpool around them, noting silhouettes of various marine lifeforms. Monstrous fish, colossal cephalopods, eldritch cetaceans; it seemed as if every single creature within the ocean had gathered to witness this event. Geez...

"Do you sense the inevitability of it all?"

Looking up, Asuka focused on the gargantuan form of the Angel: with a long, eel-like tail and sweeping fins, one could have easily mistaken it as a giant fish of some sort...but the long mouth seemed just a bit too high, and its teardrop-shaped body had too many fins sticking out of it. With too many teeth and that distinctive avian mask of bone resting atop the crown (if that term even applied to such a creature), there was a decidedly alien impression given off by it...

"Do you sense the sheer might arrayed against you?"

...though, the thing's attitude made it easy for her to scoff at it. A shield of youthful arrogance was easy to muster against such condescension. "Yeah, what about it? Didn't help the last Angel I killed with my bare hands."

"You speak of Matarael: Angel of the Rain...the Premonition of God."

"Pretty grandiose title for something that did nothing but scream at me!"

("Maybe you shouldn't taunt the otherworldly alien fish," muttered Sister Mary under her breath.)

"Such hubris...by what title do you claim such?"

"Kicking all the asses of the Acolytes and Ghosts you keep sending my way...and killing Matarael. That enough, you damn Arschloch?!"

("Language, Miss Sohryu," impulsively grumbled Mari with a roll of her eyes.)

"Then that pride shall serve as your epitaph...and I, Gaghiel, shall send you to your demise!"


View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VBdlcNd0yXQ

Asuka snorted, rolling her neck even as Unit-02 cracked its knuckles. "Los geht's!"

Five jets of water erupted from the side of the whirlpool: aquatic missiles smashed against the A.T. Field of Nigoki, splashing into harmless droplets. With a confident smirk, she retorted, "that all you GOT?!"

"Pride goeth before destruction, Miss Sohryu!" yelled Sister Mary, her hands clasped together tightly as if in prayer.

"Now is not the time for you to quote Proverbs at me-!"

Multiple jets of water stormed at them from all sides; on instinct, Unit-02 thrust its arms out, forming a protective dome forged from her A.T. Field. Asuka impulsively ducked beneath the long legs of her Evangelion, standing protectively near Sister Mary's side. "Please don't say 'I told you so'," griped Asuka.

"That would be rubbing it in, which wouldn't be helpful currently!" yelled the tertiary, her hands trembling tightly. Under her breath, Mari whispered, "Angele Dei, qui custos es mei, me tibi commissum pietate superna, illumina, custodi, rege, et guberna. Amen..."

Asuka briefly pondered at the irony of praying for the aid of a guardian angel when fighting an 'Angel', but voicing that aloud wouldn't really accomplish anything. (Other than increasing the level of local snark, which would only distract Sister Mary from her prayers, and now was not the time for that.) If nothing else, it was better than listening to the prattling from the giant Moby Dick reject.

"C
an you withstand the deluge?"

"Adjuva nos, Deus salutaris nostri, et propter gloriam nominis tui libera nos; et propitius esto peccatis nostris propter nomen tuum..."

Compared to the quiet recitations from Sister Mary (nigh-unhearable as they were amidst the aquatic onslaught), Gaghiel's words were a massive boom. "Will your comrade be able to maintain the integrity of her spirit? If you fall, the sea shall consume you...yet even your strength isn't enough to withstand the tide!"

"Oh just SHUT UP already!" screamed Asuka.

"-quoniam ex omni tribulatione eripuisti me; et super inimicos meos despexit oculus meus-"

Think Asuka, think! Her mind strained and her muscles quivered, even as Unit-02 withstood the rampant onslaught of the highly pressurized seawater. The environment's working against you; how can you turn it against the Angel?!

Without warning, Gaghiel was ejected from the side of the whirlpool, sailing through the air courtesy of a great blow; although it crashed back into the water on the other side of the vortex, the interruption was enough to stop the onslaught of water for just a little while. The cause of the sudden turnaround quickly became apparent: soaring down towards them with outstretched fists were a blunette in a white bodysuit and a spectral cyclops in orange armor. "Ayanami?? What are YOU doing here?!"

The First Child landed with a silent thud upon Sister Mary's A.T. Field, red eyes narrowed in preparation for the upcoming battle. "Your scheduled itinerary had you in the middle of the Atlantic during this month's new moon; the chance of an attack in such a vulnerable location was too high to ignore."

Sister Mary cracked open an eye. "Are you here to deliver us from this troublesome calamity, Miss Ayanami?"

"That is my intention."

With a sly smile in Asuka's direction, the nun added, "then I'll consider your presence an answer to my prayer."

Asuka rolled her eyes.

xxxx

/Sister Mary's prayers can be found in the Raccolta, which is a collection of indulgenced prayers (referenced is the 1866 edition)
//"Angele Dei...et guberna" came from prayer #112, and is a prayer to one's guardian angel
///while "Adjuva nos...oculus meus..." came from prayer #156, which can be used during any plague or trouble
 
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8/14 - Early Morning (Gaghiel), Part 2; to Midday (Armisael)
"But seriously, why are you here?" demanded Asuka, turning her gaze back towards the form of Gaghiel; it loomed amidst the swirling slopes of the whirlpool, seemingly observing them in silence. "You'd leave the new kid alone on the new moon?"

"I doubt that he is alone," remarked Ayanami, clenching her fists as Zerogoki groaned, as if preparing for the strife of the pending conflict. "And I doubt that you would turn away assistance at this point."

"...well, I could..." muttered Asuka.

Her Other snorted.

"True. But
will you?"

"...but I'll take what I can get." Vaulting onto Unit-02's shoulders, she said, "mind keeping an eye on Mari?"

"I will keep her safe," vowed Rei.

"And I'll keep us from falling into the water," murmured Sister Mary before she went back to her prayers.

"Good." Asuka cracked her knuckles, smirking in spite of herself. "Then let's go fishing." With devil-may-care bravado, Nigoki surged forward, leaping towards the dark shadow of Gaghiel within the vortex.

xx

As the Second Child and her Evangelion smashed into the form of Gaghiel, a storm of A.T. Fields and surging water erupted; amidst the chaos, Rei Ayanami could barely see Asuka and Unit-02 clutching to one of the Angel's fins.

"...that girl is going to be the death of me," grumbled the religious, hands still clasped together. With a strained grimace, Mari asked, "Miss Ayanami...you've never assisted Miss Sohryu before, during the new moon...do you believe Mister Ikari is capable of protecting Japan by himself?"

"...all of Japan...I am not sure." Yet, in this stage of the Angels' war against humanity, a victory against one would count for a lot in the coming months. If we're facing Gaghiel...then perhaps Ikari-kun is facing Israfel? A solo conflict against that duo would be difficult...but doable. Perhaps Sandalphon...no. Now is not the time to worry. Even if he faced one of the more powerful Angels, she could do naught but have faith in him...and hope that his bonds would carry him through. Especially Mister P...he'll intervene if things go wrong.,,

xx

/Elsewhere in the Metaverse/

Mister P sat upon Gryphon's back, arms crossed stoically as his Persona flew at high speeds through the rhythmic skies of the cognitive world. "We must be swift, if we are to provide reinforcements..."

With a haughty snort, Gryphon's wings flapped even harder.

xx

Shaking her head, Rei simply took up a defensive position besides Mari Makinami. "I trust in his ability." There is no choice BUT to do so.

"...standing against these false Angels can be an awful lonely task, Miss Ayanami."

"...that would be true...if he were alone."

xxxx

Meanwhile, several time zones eastward, on the island of Japan...as the light of the sun crossed over its highest point in the sky...another battle continued, but with a strange and unforeseen twist...

xxxx

/Armisael's Domain/


View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_BNXe3QSLfM

Shinji Ikari still couldn't wrap his head around the fact that Mayumi Yamagishi had a Persona.

Nor that it kind of...looked like the Angel they were fighting.

(There was definitely something to that.)

(Think about it later!)

"You are very bold, lilim..." The double helix of Armisael spun rapidly, as golden drops of light dropped from its form. "...then I shall unmake you with the powers born of human cognition!"

"Ah great, more Archetypes?!" griped Toji. "Come up with something new!"

'Everyone, please listen.'

Shinji, Kensuke, Toji, and Mana jolted at the voice echoing inside their minds, turning towards their levitating friend. "Did...does your Persona give you telepathy?!" yelped Aida.

'I'm not sure if it's a function of being in the seat of Armisael's power, but I intend to exploit it while I have it,' mentally chimed Mayumi; one of the protean spheres, hovering within the gaps of her Persona's double helix, floated over towards her right palm. 'Think of it like what Madam Gamariel was capable of doing in Duke of the Rings.'

"I don't know what that is," retorted Mana.

'Oh. Erm...well, never mind that!' The sphere in her palm transformed into the facsimile of a book; she flipped through several pages, eyeing it intently. 'I think...no, I KNOW what Armisael's going to summon; I can read the patterns in the thought-waves...and it's going to be in this position!'

"...mild precognition?" Kensuke grinned. "Sweet!"

As if the information was beamed into their heads, the quartet all moved as one; the golden light was transforming and coagulating into a monstrous Archetype. "Go!" shouted Mayumi, almost desperately.

They leaped into action, knowing exactly what to do.

As the shining liquid coalesced into the form of an angelic warrior with black wings and red armor, complete with spear and shield — a Power Archetype — the four were already attacking:

- Mana's axe shimmered as it bit into the shield, distracting it.

- Gilgamesh roared "Eiga!", flinging a ball of cursed energy into the angel's torso.

- Ozymandias leapt upon the Power's shoulder, flicking his shepherd's crook. "Dazzler!"

- Briefly stunned and dazed by the simultaneous onslaught, it was unable to avoid Unit-01 — overshadowed by the form of Hamlet — grasping its face. "Mudo."

Weak as it was to Dark skills, and unable to dodge or get out of the way, the Power could only shriek as the sickly aura of red and black consumed its form, utterly destroying it.

"...what?" Armisael honestly sounded befuddled.

Even as she inwardly giggled, Mayumi — bursting with confidence that was downright invigorating — adjusted her monocle with a grin. "Just as planned!"

xxxx

/LOTR is still outside the public domain
//so Gamariel = Galadriel
///and 'Duke of the Rings' is obviously 'Lord of the Rings' :V
 
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"You are very bold, lilim..." The double helix of Armisael spun rapidly, as golden drops of light dropped from its form. "...then I shall unmake you with the powers born of human cognition!"
"...what?" Armisael honestly sounded befuddled.

look at that, Armisael getting outperformed in the category "powers born of human cognition"
finally getting that Victory is not a formality?

Even as she inwardly giggled, Mayumi — bursting with confidence that was downright invigorating — adjusted her monocle with a grin. "Just as planned!"
Did Mayumi pull a Light Yagami?

given this is a real-time combat-situation, I'd call it pulling a Zero/Lelouch
maybe a Ursarkar E. Creed
Shogoki could be a stand-in for an imperial Titan.
Gilgamesh got the form to be a Space marine.
Mana has training to be a Storm Trooper.
Kensuke fits the Techpriest-mold.
 
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Hey there, just finished a binge of this story over the last few days. Just wanted to say I really like what you've done with the franchise and I'm looking forward to where you're going with it.
 
Hey there, just finished a binge of this story over the last few days. Just wanted to say I really like what you've done with the franchise and I'm looking forward to where you're going with it.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm sure looking forward to the future as well.

Certain characters, on the other hand...>__>

*stares in the direction of Mayumi*

Mayumi: *innocently blinks* How come you're looking at me?

No particular reason.
 
8/14 - Midday: Armisael, Part 2 / The Acolyte
Armisael spun, dropping more golden light onto the ground. "Intriguing...let us see the extent of your capacity, then!"

Mayumi flipped to different pages in her book. 'Okay...I think the Angel's summoning Red Rider...got it!'

As Yamagishi's knowledge and plan beamed itself into their heads once more, Shinji began the mental switch over to Kuchisake-onna, while Kensuke, Toji, and Mana moved into different positions. I hope we'll be able to keep ahead of the Angel...

'Don't worry! I'm working on it!'

(...this would take some getting used to.)

xxxx

Meanwhile, in Nishiawakura, Ren Amamiya and Sojiro Sakura were sitting nonchalantly...for the most part.

There was a distant boom, indicative of an explosion. "...that was the third one in the past half hour," flatly said Ren. I wonder if it was from the downtown area?

(Little did he know that Ken Amada and Junpei Iori were coordinating with Zenkichi Hasegawa and local law enforcement to try and physically restrain the Acolytes that did manifest. Little did he know that in the Metaverse, Ryuji, Katsuragi, and Kurosawa were busy striking at their Shadows whenever they were corrupted by Angel Syndrome. All in all, most of the explosions were due to the village's defenders endeavoring to keep the Acolytes away from the frightened populace...alas, he wasn't in any position to provide assistance.)

"It's why I didn't really have much interest in going out to where everyone normally gathers during the new moon," muttered Sojiro, watching the government news channel with a detached air. His hands casually stroked Enkai's fur, as if uncaring of the fact that death could visit without warning. "With all the people who vanished into the Metaverse yesterday, I'm sure a few of the more cussed types figured to hoof it on their own as well."

"Even if it means their Shadows may be rendered more vulnerable due to not being around a place cognitively engineered to keep them in a serene state of mind?" When Sojiro shot him an intrigued look, he hadded, "you don't hang around a bunch of A.T. Agents and a Cognitive Freelancer without picking up some of their lingo."

"Fair enough." Leaning back in his chair, the older barista calmly remarked, "guess I just don't feel up to going through the normal motions. The little chat I had this morning took it out of me."

"...were my kouhai in a good mood?"

Sojiro sighed. "More like they were determined to do what was right. Can hardly blame 'em, given what they've been through." Shooting him a wry look, he asked, "what about you?"

Ren shrugged, trying to hide his true mood from his host. "I just volunteered to take care of one of my school assignments." (Partially true.) "All of this stuff...not exactly what I signed up for." (Technically correct: the best kind of correct.) Rising to his feet, he placed his old backpack over his shoulders, heading towards the door.

"You going for another walk?" asked Sojiro with some concern.

"Just doing another look around the yard. I'd be a poor guest," heh, "if I let anything happen to my host."

"...if it makes you feel better. Goodness knows I can't exactly do anything to stop kids with a death wish."

"It's just a walk around your house."

"True. In case Katsuragi asks, tell her I scolded you severely for daring to step outside during a new moon."

"Can do," he easily joked, sliding the door open to step outside. If nothing else...he had fallen into a familiar sort of banter with the old codger that was both nostalgic and pain-inducing. With a quiet sigh, he looked at the valley holding Nishiawakura — pointedly ignoring the smoke rising to the north from somewhere in town — and stepped onto the grass...only to pause. Hold up. Something...was off. Where'd all the cats go? Even if they had been frightened by the events of the new moon, his prior patrols had revealed that they sat around the perimeter of the old ryokan, gazing outward as if they were sentries. Now...they were completely absent. I wonder why...maybe it has something to do with the Acolyte charging up the hill. Indeed, a rather elderly fellow — late 70's, easily — was sprinting with rather impressive speed towards the ryokan. "...well then." With a dramatic sigh (because damn it this was probably gonna be a pain, and why was he looking forward to it?!), he quietly stepped away from the house...and began waving his arms in the air in a rather chaotic and uncontrolled manner.

Naturally, the Acolyte, eyes wide with unrestrained rage, turned towards him.

That's right, follow me! He backed away, even as the berserker got closer; reaching into his backpack with one hand, he gingerly backstepped towards what appeared to be the threshold into the forest (but it was so much more, the ripples were increasing by the minute, ripples that bled from reality into the world of cognition...!). Right as the Acolyte caught up — hand reaching out to strangle him — he crossed the threshold.

(With a seamless movement, he placed a familiar mask onto his face, right as he exited physicality and entered the Metaverse.)


View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JB_tcwxbW-Q

So did the Acolyte.

With a burst of azure fire, Joker now stood where Ren Amamiya had once been; with a casual fall, he took advantage of the Acolyte's momentum to kick it over him and into the woods, and his senses were suddenly screaming at him danger DANGER DANGER-!

Joker popped up onto his hands, using his backwards roll to vault over the monstrous arm that would have reduced him to paste. Landing adroitly on his feet, Joker backed several meters away, gazing up at his new attacker. "Ah. No wonder you were drawn to this place." Gazing upon the hulking monstrosity that was the Acolyte's Shadow, Joker couldn't help but feel that this was just a tad bit unfair. Don't have a ferry full of Archetypes or plainclothes policemen to distract it this time either. Alas, it was preferable to letting the Acolyte and his Shadow advance towards the cognitive double of Sojiro's house. "It'd be kind of rude to destroy that place, you know? It's quite nice. Lots of good thinking's been done there...not that you'd know anything about that sort of thing, now."

The Acolyte, having leapt onto his giant Shadow's shoulder, merely screamed at him. The masked Shadow echoed his sentiment with a bestial roar.

"...well, worth a shot." With a devil-may-care grin, Joker turned on his feet and darted into the woods to the north of where Sojiro's home was built. "CATCH ME IF YOU CAN!"

The Acolyte and his Shadow obliged, stampeding their way through the cognitive woods in pursuit of their new prey.
 
8/14 - Midday: The Acolyte, Part 2 / Armisael, Part 3

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JB_tcwxbW-Q&t=32s

Clusters of Archetypes were in hiding on this day, reflective of the general dread and trepidation associated with the new moon; any Archetypes related to fear and terror, if any, would only spawn near where the villagers had been gathered.

It made Joker's run through the cognitive woods a bit empty, alas. A shame; I could use one right now. If only to break them down into a one-time weapon or tool...

SMASH!

Well, beggars can't be choosers! Seamlessly scaling a cedar, Joker glanced a look over his shoulder-WHOA GEEZ. With a quick back flip, he barely avoided the missile of timber; the Acolyte's Shadow had grabbed a tree and thrown it like a javelin. Right as he landed upon the branches of another tree, he sensed the Acolyte scaling the bark with frenzied focus. "Ah, a pincer maneuver. Classic!" Banter and boasts were easy, and ironically honed his mind. (Even if he didn't have a team or an audience to show off for, some things just didn't fade with age.) "But I've seen better from Slimes!" Jumping onto higher branches, Joker kept ahead of the Acolyte...until, as the trunk became sufficiently thin, he jumped back down, dropping right beneath the Acolyte. The berserker barely had the chance to look at him before Joker, landing on the branch below, slashed at the tree with his dagger.

(A mere dagger, born from his pocket knife, should not have been capable of this.)

(But Joker's blade had sliced through the hardiest of monsters.)

(Cognition is king.)

The cedar was cut through seamlessly; Joker pressed his foot against the falling trunk, sending it — and the Acolyte by proxy — crashing down to the forest floor.

CRUNCH!

The Acolyte's Shadow retaliated with a hulking fist, shattering the tree's trunk at the base.

"Too slow!" Before he could enter free fall, Joker bounced off of the cedar, using his Third Eye to adroitly navigate his way down the canopy and back to the forest floor. Rolling and hopping back to his feet, he looked back and shouted, "you're supposed to shout TIMBER!"

The Acolyte and his Shadow answered with defiant roars.

"Fair enough. My retort." Joker whipped out his handgun, firing a few shots. "Come on, I know you're not tired yet!"

And so the chase resumed.

xxxx

/Armisael's Domain/

Mayumi Yamagishi's foresight and plans had enabled the quartet of Shinji, Kensuke, Toji, and Mana to take down Armisael's summoned Archetypes. Red Rider? Ruined. Zouchouten? Blown away. Arahabaki? Annihilated. Thoth? Despaired and Psi'd into oblivion.

"Any idea why it's not throwing a whole damn army at us like before?" asked Mana.

"I don't know, don't care, and I hope it stays that way!" retorted Toji, furiously snacking on some fruit gummies that were stuffed into his pockets.

"...maybe...the Angel doesn't want to...?" wondered Shinji aloud.

"...or perhaps Armisael cannot," remarked Mayumi, reading from a scroll. Releasing it — wherein it seamlessly transformed back into a glossy sphere, floating back into the gaps between the double helix of her Persona. It was such a strange thing, looking between the Angel and Mayumi, to compare and contrast. The glowing helical ring was obvious, yet Mayumi sat on her proverbial throne, serving as the 'core' of her Persona, akin to the Angel's own red Core. It was almost like looking into a twisted mirror.

His Other gazed quietly at the skull.

"Curious...is she a reflection of the Angel?"

Turning the bone over, he looked...contemplative.

"Or is the Angel a reflection of her?"

"A curious transformation, we must admit...one that has granted you some measure of insight," echoed Armisael's majestic voice. "Bound as you were to me, it is only natural that our nature would inform yours. That it would manifest in this way, however...I did not foresee."

"...in retrospect...your true voice...used to speak almost exclusively with plural pronouns...now there is a mix of plural and singular." The yellow eye behind the half-mask on her face blazed with insight. "How shocked were you, truly? How much did I take from you, when manifesting my Persona?"

"Enough to be a nuisance."

"...you've always spoken of pain. Of loneliness. Of...dread. Yet...it's not just mine. It can't have been just mine..." Gingerly standing upon her floating throne of glistening onyx, Mayumi stared directly at the shifting imagery on the Angel's crimson Core. "...what has driven you to this? Why...why do you seek to destroy humanity?"

"A question that no answer of ours would satisfy...there is no point in trying."

"Forfeiting the argument before even offering a counter? Sounds like a weak position to me!" retorted Kensuke.

"We know that you would not agree: the lilim...humanity...deserve to perish. That you have lasted this long is a testament to your wretchedness and our own...but all things must end. And your time is now."

"...I don't want to accept that," said Shinji, his right hand subconsciously clenching in a familiar motion. More than the others, he knew of the underlying motive behind the Angels' antipathy. Being in the midst of Armisael's Domain, he decided to take a gamble. "The War in Heaven...how long have you been fighting it in vain? How important is the Throne of God to you?"

(Mana blinked, looking at her fellows with confusion. 'War in Heaven? Throne of God?' she mouthed to the others, only to receive bewildered shrugs from Kensuke and Toji.)

"...that you, of all people, would ask that question...were it not for your ignorance, our rage would outstrip that of Might Incarnate...!" There was a sudden flickering in the clouds around them. "I will make your demise swift."

'Ikari, switch to Shiki-Ouji!'

Mayumi's mental command was immediately heeded; a mere instant later, Armisael's double helix condensed into a solid worm of golden light, from which emerged a lightning-quick tendril that smashed into Unit-01. The physical force was nullified by the inherent nature of Shiki-Ouji, whose silhouette overshadowed Unit-01's form. "Is there nothing else we can do but fight?! You were a part of Yamagishi-san for so long: you know that there has to be another way!"

"Ways which are unpalatable. Ways which are unacceptable. Make life easier for all of us...and SUBMIT!"

xxxx

/Elsewhere in the Metaverse/

Mister P's eyes narrowed. "We're close...time to prepare for battle."
 
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Oh hey look I found art of Akechi that made me think of this fic.

Yes it's just because of the handcuffs on him but they look beautiful and I felt like sharing okay? :V

This is my (-justice-) punishment.


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DragonUnitOmega analyzes SPE: 6/26
And now for installment number twenty-one of Dragon Reviews and (Probably) Overanalyzes SPE! Not much preamble this time. So... -puts on review glasses- Review. STARTO!

6/26 Early Morning: Izanagi Dorms - Evening

And we start with...intermission! Okay technically not since it's not in the middle of the review...but also kinda yes since it's the middle of the post so I guess it still counts? Eh whatever.

Big Bang Burger Challenge
The Meat dimension Bowl
don't remember what P3 had.

I'm sure you know/remember by now, but gotta say it. Pretty sure there's no "challenge meal", but unlike those two, there are a whole bunch of restaurants you can go to for stat boosts. It's just that the main way stat boosts usually go, especially if following max S. Link guides, is through Madragora (the karaoke) for courage, Café Chagall (the coffee) for charm, studying at your desk for knowledge, and the arcade for one of those stats on certain days.

Actually it's kinda funny it doesn't have such a challenge considering the impression I alwayd had of Minato being able to eat a lot even before I read the manga.

Anyways, now we start the day and it's the usual Sokila unconsciousness. Except...

"Minato Arisato..."

She fiddled with an armband, colored a faded red.

eff

"Yu Narukami..."

She traced the frame of worn eyeglasses.

EFF

"Ren Amamiya..."

She nudged the angular edge of a stylized domino mask.

FUCKING EFF

"...and now, you."

She looked back at him.

"They went through a lot...but you...well..."

The faint haze of blue began to brighten-

-thuds on ground and lies for a bit-

Okay, once again my feelings are surprising me because this sequence just gave me three shots of FEELS despite it being so simple. I think it's the fact that those items are obviously worn down and that mental image just gives me "bad vibes" is probably why...

After that, we have Shinji awake and doing laundry and...

I hope the lake smell comes out of the uniform, idly thought Shinji Ikari as he rolled two baskets full of dirty clothes towards the communal laundromat on the second floor.

As someone who has swimmed in both rivers and lakes in regular clothes (as in, I don't wear a swimsuit and just jump in my regular everyday clothes that I'm fine getting wet), like a majority of Filipinos that I see do out here in the province, I can say I am very confused what he means by "lake smell". But then again, the most dirty water I swam is when the sea has lots of mud and/or garbage turned up after heavy rain/a typhoon, and I usually don't swim in that dirty (but not that clear either) rivers, so that might be why I don't know that smell. Or maybe I'm so used to it on my clothes idk.

Either way, I have no idea what is talking about and I would like clarification if possible because I am very curious.

Okay, now with that tangential question outta the way...

He answers Herod's questions and just thinks about the stuff he wants to do, mainly what missions he would go for. With that, we're at classes again and--hey...a girl with pigtails named Kugimiya...is that a Rise Japanese voice actress reference I see? Or another coincidence? Because really the only reason I thinking it's a reference is because Rise's wears her hair in pigtails and her Japanese voice actress is Rie Kugimiya.

Aaaaand I'm digressing again.

Anyways! Plot! As we get a Pattern Blue and Rei and Shinji are heading to...oh. Sapporo. Hey. Wait give me a second. -searches when strikers was released again- Okay I don't know if you were inspired from Strikers or not, but either way, the landscape described was familiar to me cause of Strikers. More importantly, we're following the POV of a surviving AT agent of this pattern blue, running away to survive, and as it kept going on, I kept wondering and wondering if it was going to be anyone I actually recognized and then, after Shinji arrives to give her a chance to breath...

"Makoto Niijima. Thanks for the save."

WOOOOO! MAKOTO YES!

She might not be my actual number one girl from P5 no that goes to akira, that would go to Futaba, but she's second, and I still really love her regardless. And so it's awesome to see her.

Also I like that Makoto used one of her battle lines. Small touch but I like those kinds of touches.

It was time to turn things around!

Awakening!Robin: Time to tip the scales!

Excuse me, couldn't help myself. :V

Ahem...anyways...now we got...

A brief intermission!

Thus far, the only P3, P4, and P5 characters that have been hinted at or shown (besides the Protagonists and Velvet Room peeps) are:

Mitsuru Kirijo (Director of NERV-03 in Germany; her father died in 2nd Impact, as did Eiichiro Takeba)
Aigis (Associated with the JET ALONE Project and Mana Kirishima in some manner)
Labrys (Associated with the JET ALONE Project and Mana Kirishima in some manner)
Shuji Ikutsuki (Director of NERV-02 in Nevada)
Kenji Tomochika (Former roommate of Toji, Kensuke, and Kaworu; killed by an Acolyte in May 2015)
Nozomi Suemitsu (A savvy restaurateur of various establishments in the city of Nagoya. Currently married to Hanako Ohtani.)
Tanaka Shacho (Run's Tanaka's Portable Commodities)
Mutatsu (A monk at a Buddhist temple in Susono. He was killed by an Acolyte during the June New Moon, and returned as a Ghost which was vanquished by Shinji Ikari.)
Mr. Edogawa (Able to take people into the Metaverse...somehow. Was noted as being the means by which Kaji was able to find his Shadow.)
Takaya Sakaki: (Entered the Metaverse at the age of 5. Allegedly killed by the A.T. Task Force)

Yosuke Hanamura (Passed away. Heyday was during the mid-20th century as a police officer with his wife Chie.)
Chie Satonaka (Passed away. Heyday was during the mid-20th century as a police officer with her husband Yosuke.)
Sayoko Uehara (A doctor in Tokyo-3 who works for NERV)
Fox, aka the P4 Hermit Social Link (Currently roams the Metaverse, apparently doing tasks on behalf of Mister P based on his encounter with Rei on 6/22)
Hanako Ohtani (A brash yet charismatic supermodel and former idol. Currently married to Nozomi Suemitsu.)
Marie (Has some connection of sorts with the Angel Arael and Kaji's Shadow. I smell shenanigans.)

Yusuke Kitagawa (An adult artist of some renown, associated with some group called the Emporium.)
Haru Okumura (The head chef and lead of the kitchen staff for the Big Bang Beef Bowl Shop in Tokyo-3.)
Kunikazu Okumura (The general manager of the Big Bang Beef Bowl Shop in Tokyo-3.)
Goro Akechi (Chief Warden of Tokyo-3's Cognitive Protection Center.)
Tae Takemi (A nurse in Tokyo-3 who also does work at NERV.)
Sadayo Kawakami (A teacher at the High School branch of Hakone Academy. Was revealed in Toji's flashback on 6/10 part 1 as the teacher which Kenji Tomochika had a crush on.)
Toranosuke Yoshida (The current Governor of Kyoto Prefecture; per news story reviewed by Akechi on 6/23, he was reported as collapsing from a possible stroke.)
Wakaba Isshiki (A pupil of Katsuhito Ikari alongside Naoko Akagi and Kozo Fuyutsuki. Current status is unknown.)
Takuto Maruki (Director of NERV-01 in Massachusetts)

And, as of the last snippet: Makoto Niijima, a veteran of the Anti-Terror Task Force.

Wait does Aika not count because she was an anime original character that got retroactively added into the games through P4 Golden? Or are you just only counting main characters and social links for this list?

Okay. Intermission done. Now back to story!

So we got Rei doing her job and also bein Rei and mysterious with her Beast. Then we got Makoto bein' bad ass and giving it her all with Shinji as support. I quite liked, well, how, for lack of a better word, nice she is that, in the middle of the battle, she makes the observation of Shinji and sees his actions as him doing the best he can without hindering her instead of idiotic or cowardly or what have you. Also only realized this because someone pointed it out but damn, changing her own cognition so that she basically has infinite ammo? Now that's nifty thinkin' makoto. But it's cognition so of course there's a level of "mind made matter" but still. Neat. And then we get another brief scene of Rei showing how she's helping the Metaverse side before cutting back to Makoto's battle again. It seems pretty, well, "normal" all things considered, and then...

Makoto grimaced at the sight; the Reaper had come to play.

Oh HIIII Tatsuya Sudou. Glad to see you're having fun...NOT. :V

But oh boy the Reaper is here. And...okay I was joking but apparently it kinda is basically here for fun.

And someone noticed.

Of course we don't who that someone is, but that doesn't matter because now the Acolytes and their Shadows are acting "weird" as they gang together to form a shield or something. Aaaand...

The One who Sat Upon the Throne casually processed what was happening.

Oh hi Nasuverse!Gilgamesh. How is it, sitting on your throne and deciding to know absolutely everything because of your book? :V no i dont remember the name of the book i still havent seen the babylonia "arc" of fgo yet but i only think it exists cuz of a fsn/fgo crossover fic...

Actually since I mentioned 999 in the previous installment, I'mma call the throne sitter, Gilgamesh Zero, because it's easier for me to remember. I may change that to add Sr. or Jr. or II later depending on who I wanna reference and their relation to "that man".

Anyways, more importantly...

Things go BOOOOOOOOM and...it's...over actually.

Which I'm not too surprised about. It was either something like this, or all of them running away. 'Cause none of them are even close to being able to deal with the Reaper.

With that, we see Rei confused, and then cut to Makoto being protective of Shinji (awww...) and also a bit of a dork (still as awkward as ever), and the Reaper and Gilgamesh Zero being all mysterious as the latter says cryptic things for us the readers (or maybe even Shinji subconsciously...) while former laughs madly and leaves. Oh and then we get the Angels talking, giving me more "AAAAARRRRGGGGH" moments and raising the Joker Theory Is Real meter more, as well as...mentioning a Usurper.

Welp. Guess either Naoya (or Kazuya if we'te including manga canon...which I kinda am by default whenever I use the name Naoya now that I think about it) and/or Tatsuya were tired of their games not being acknowledged and thus decided they would take over the universe. Great. :V

Or even worse, Shin got tired of Trinity Soul being considered non-canonical and is the culprit. :V

Kidding of course...but every joke I make could end up real so hey, I might end up not joking.

Ahem. Anyways, now we got the "proper" aftermath as backup finally arrives. Rei goes to retrieve Makoto's teammates, Kamoshida and Eiko (because of course it was those two; irony plus tragedy aggghh), and Shinji, well, doesn't like the sight, to put it mildly. At least Makoto goes on to thank and praise Shinji for his help, even if he doesn't really accept it, wishing he could've done more.

But with that, it's time for Makoto to get to work and the two to report, so they go their seperate ways.

Except Shinji is still reeling so he needs a bit. At the very least, it leads to a conversation between the two and eventually reaching the topic of "Why do you fight?" smash!ike: i fight for my friends, which Rei simply only offers "redepmtion", and such words, instead of actually explaining herself. Because of course. We can't have her revealing the mysteries yet. It's still only the first month of the game!

Anyways. After that, Shinji heads back to the dorm, still kinda at half capacity as he can't really talk and explain to Kensuke about what happened. But he still has enough energy to see the messages he's received. It's not that many, but they all show care and/or concern. Most particularly Yamagishi, once the two start talking, er, well texting but you get the idea. Either way, it was a nice little interaction.

Also:

Shinji grimaced, staring guiltily at his fingers. TYPOS. WHY?

Because we're human and it's a phone. :V I like to think I have a pretty good track record on having less typos than normal from years of writing on my phone, but I know a lot slip through regardless.

After that, Rei is reporting and then we get...another Gendo and Rei conversation...yeah I have not much to say. I mean we learn a little more, what with Gendo going "oh we're doomed i give up might as well do something that satisfies me", but I don't really wanna dwell on it. Now I just need to decide the amount to add for the Joke Theory Is Real Meter. Eh I'll just go add +1 for simplicity's sake.

With that, the day ends. And I'm not sure why you went the whole "two days to go". Is it 'cause of Makoto? Is it because of the Reaper? Is it because of Gilgamesh Zero? I don't know. Either way, gonna stop here.

So spoiler dodge roll: activate! :V
 
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