Runaway

Eh :waggles hand:. If we're really being a hair edgy about this, the Protectorate, as super cops, are effectively another gang, just one with government backing. So the logic then goes, if one of the gang members isn't playing nice with the others to a terminal degree, they might as well extract what value they can out of them as they "tragically died in the line of duty" (which I'm pretty sure happens all the time in terms of national statistics for mid-tier capes and lower), and they can try and parlay that into better funding or some external help or whatever.

To be clear, I'm not saying this would be any sort of national push, as RCB et al would definitely frown upon it, but some more corrupt local forces might try to get away with this sort of thing.
I'm not so sure it happens all the time.

Remember the Unwritten Rules? Often criticized as only protecting the powerful? The Protectorate is very much a group capable of getting punitive if anybody violates them in their direction.

Also, canon BB capes don't really show any of that kind of attrition, do they? Though this Bay seems more populated with low-level capes, so perhaps it also has some more bloody churn.
 
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I'm not so sure it happens all the time.

Remember the Unwritten Rules? Often criticized as only protecting the powerful? The Protectorate is very much a group capable of getting punitive if anybody violates them in their direction.

Also, canon BB capes don't really show any of that kind of attrition, do they? Though this Bay seems more populated with low-level capes, so perhaps it also has some more bloody churn.
The Unwritten Rules, or more accurately the bullshit idea of cape fights being 'cops and robbers' that Tats tried to sell, is not keeping any of the enforcers of a given top villain organization from maiming or killing someone who was trying to arrest them. ;X And the Protectorate knows that, so they'll just create no-go areas.

Canon BB has Panacea in-city as a potential resource. How much she was actually used is up in the air but anything short of died at the scene could mean that they would make it.
 
The Unwritten Rules, or more accurately the bullshit idea of cape fights being 'cops and robbers' that Tats tried to sell, is not keeping any of the enforcers of a given top villain organization from maiming or killing someone who was trying to arrest them. ;X And the Protectorate knows that, so they'll just create no-go areas.
Is it, in fact, not? Like, we know the BB Protectorate does mix it up with the likes of Hookwolf. They don't actually yield the map to the Nazi Blender Dog. Maybe to Lung, but people who are less pocket endbringer have to work for it.
Canon BB has Panacea in-city as a potential resource. How much she was actually used is up in the air but anything short of died at the scene could mean that they would make it.
There's decidedly space to die between 'on the scene' and 'delivered to Panacea'.

Also, you'd expect a lot of villains to be leaving in body bags, or at best in wheelchairs, if the Protectorate are only surviving by the grace of Panacea.
 
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More an intensifier. Challenger doesn't exactly have gaps to fill in? Gaps implies there's a structure between those gaps but we have, like. Her general demeanour, her appearance, her weapons of choice, and that's about it.
Ah, thanks.

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Though with her name I refuse to believe Fugly Bob's Challenger burger wasn't named after her.
Hah! :D
Maybe a power-enhanced metabolism, and she just kept ordering larger and larger meals with that burger being that restaurant's answer?

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I mean there is no universe in which there are not police officers serving as E88 capes in their off time. Awkwardly phrased.
Ahh, thanks. Yes, that makes sense.

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There's nothing wrong with having a black character be from a broken family and the poor part of town, neither is exactly the rarest thing. But when it's pretty much exclusively that, with only a living anti-drug PSA and a bad touch Bond villain for flavour, then there's some trouble.
Right.

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Pr much, yeah. I presume Purity's internal narration was just focusing on the casualties to Kaiser's emotional manipulation because she's his ex-wife, it's kinda a thing on her mind.
Makes sense.

re Dauntless:
Ah, thanks.
Though I don't recall hearing the phrase "red truth" before. I assume it refers to something along the lines of information the text explicitly provides?

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Pretty much, yeah. There is a fair amount of variation, but there also a fair amount of good eggs that actually do want to be superheroes.
And many of them may not have even realized the institutional apathy was as bad as it is before they joined up -- at which point, well, they're already there, they've met likeminded people also there, so they might as well use the Protectorate's resources to do what they can.

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let's be real the main concern is a failed state on canada's southern border
Ehhhh. I mean, IRL, yeah, but do we know enough about the state of both countries in Earth Bet to say how much it's that, the reverse, or a mutual thing?
Though now I am wondering if that's in fact a large part of why Canada joined...
 
Eh :waggles hand:. If we're really being a hair edgy about this, the Protectorate, as super cops, are effectively another gang, just one with government backing. So the logic then goes, if one of the gang members isn't playing nice with the others to a terminal degree, they might as well extract what value they can out of them as they "tragically died in the line of duty" (which I'm pretty sure happens all the time in terms of national statistics for mid-tier capes and lower), and they can try and parlay that into better funding or some external help or whatever.

To be clear, I'm not saying this would be any sort of national push, as RCB et al would definitely frown upon it, but some more corrupt local forces might try to get away with this sort of thing.

I wouldn't doubt it, though the tendency is low, because the Protectorate aren't cops. They're a super-new institution and they're meant to be cops, but the institution hasn't really developed that critical mass of douchebags the cops have. 'The others' are just as wide-eyed and full of dreams. They play great with the others, they just aren't focusing wholly what the institution's leadership wants them to - they're squeezing in actually valuable work on the side.

I'm not so sure it happens all the time.

Remember the Unwritten Rules? Often criticized as only protecting the powerful? The Protectorate is very much a group capable of getting punitive if anybody violates them in their direction.

Also, canon BB capes don't really show any of that kind of attrition, do they? Though this Bay seems more populated with low-level capes, so perhaps it also has some more bloody churn.

Canon BB capes don't show much attrition over the breadth of Worm because like 85% of Worm happens in the space of two to three months, and then Brockton Bay is a place to visit, not where the story happens. The amount of time the reader spends in BB before the triple-apocalypse hits is like a month. We don't see attrition because Wildbow barely even finished introducing the setting before breaking it. It's a snapshot, not a video. Fanfic tends to take that snapshot and expand it out across all space and time but the churn is actually pretty significant.

Even in the process of that introduction, a major gang fell and a second one was in the process of falling. Two big-name capes went to the Birdcage, and Empire 88 was getting effectively thrown out into the wilderness with their legal identities outed and a court order to freeze their legal assets probably just waiting until the PRT finished writing and submitted it. And if you actually look at the timeline, well...

At least three of the Empire 88 capes first came to town within like, the last year? That's just the ones that are very clearly indicated as such, not the ones who are 'we don't actually have any information so assuming they came recently is just as valid as assuming they came aeons ago' - the only ones we know have been in BB longer than like three years are Kaiser, Fenja/Menja (and they're pretty young so they could easily have triggered relatively recently), and Purity. Probably also Krieg, maybe Night & Fog. We know Hookwolf is a New Yorker and sorta migrated to BB and he's been there for a few years, but probably not more than five. We don't know when Stormwolf and Cricket came, but it was presumably at Hookwolf's invitation and thus at some point after him. Crusader and Alabaster came during Purity's retirement, they're explicitly part of 'the new recruits'. Rune is 14, she didn't come that long ago. Victor's timeline is unclear but was unlikely to be more than three years ago, because he's married to Othala and Othala is 17, so even if she triggered earlier (I assume at 12), she wouldn't have been considered for sending off on crusade until she's at least 14.

Bakuda is an exemplar of that churn, she showed up literally less than a month before Taylor started.

The Undersiders started to exist less than a year pre-canon, and at least Lisa and Alec were new to town at that point.

If the Merchants even existed, they didn't have Squealer, she literally joined them in like Arc 3-4 during canon (Squealer was listed as an independent when she was first mentioned in Victoria's interlude).

Go back two years and you lose like half the Wards - we have a specific timeline that Clockblocker triggered at 15 so he could plausibly be there as a newbie, and we have no timeline on Triumph, Gallant, and Aegis so you can assume whatever. Vista joined specifically in 2009 mid-April, so almost exactly two years prior to 'a few arcs deep into canon'. Kid Win joined literally nine months later. And we know exactly when Sophia joined, around October 2010ish. There may have been other Wards in that space since that leaves us with a small number, but if so they either transferred out of town or quit entirely, because there are almost no Protectorate members in the right age range.

For the Protectorate, Dauntless has been in town and empowered thirteen years, but only joined the Protectorate like five years ago, the way he's written. Assault and Battery came to BB 5-6 years ago (we have a specific timeframe on when Battery led the BB Wards), and we know basically nothing about the arrival times of Armsmaster, Miss Militia, Velocity, and Challenger (or anything else about Challenger). We can assume Armsmaster has been here for at least five years, long enough to be comfortable in his position, but that's about all we have solid indicators on.

Almost none of the New Wave kids were triggered two years ago. Laserdream was the first, but Glory Girl was the second, and we know she triggered after mid-April (because Vista was already in the Wards when she first triggered). Panacea triggered one year pre-canon, and Shielder was even newer.

We don't know exactly when Coil came to town, but it was probably a year ago, because his expansion is explicitly one of the factors that wiped out a preexisting BB gang, the Chorus.

Faultline may not have even had a crew two years ago. Labyrinth is super-new, Spitfire joined up like a couple months pre-canon tops, and we don't have exact timelines on Gregor or Newter but there's no evidence that says they were definitely longtime.

Like, go back two years and half the canon cast wasn't even there. That's pretty good churn!

And we never hear about old ones unless they specifically are relevant to the story of someone around right now. Which means if BB's cape population isn't undergoing a massive increase for no actual reason, there is roughly half the cast worth of capes that were in BB two years ago, and died or fucked off in those two years. Groups like the Chorus, a gang we've heard of but was gone before Taylor's adventures. (We won't see 'em here either, though they will at least be mentioned since their fall was pretty recent)

Canon BB has Panacea in-city as a potential resource. How much she was actually used is up in the air but anything short of died at the scene could mean that they would make it.

Only for the past year. The fact that Panacea and Othala are in the city absolutely slows the churn, but Panacea just hasn't been here that long - her arrival is part of the churn.

Is it, in fact, not? Like, we know the BB Protectorate does mix it up with the likes of Hookwolf. They don't actually yield the map to the Nazi Blender Dog. Maybe to Lung, but people who are less pocket endbringer have to work for it.

Well, the Protectorate don't yield the map to the E88, but the Unwritten Rules are, in fact, not nearly as meaningful a thing as Tattletale tried to sell.

Remember, Tattletale is a petty criminal, and she's fine with that. She doesn't have much of a conscience. But she was trying to convince Taylor, who does have a conscience, that being a villain is okay, it's totally low stakes, this is basically just a game! She was absolutely presenting a fairy tale to seduce Taylor into darkness (not that that's hard, just need to bat eyes in her general direction).

The Protectorate mixes it up with the Nazi Blender Dog and he goes at them with utterly lethal force. There is no safe way to swing a sharp blade empowered by superstrength, and Hookwolf can make himself blunt but he never actually does. Man swung a live blade at a ten-year-old girl. And she didn't die but y'know, the difference between her stitching herself up so no one thinks she's a weenie and her getting disemboweled in public is less than an inch. Hookwolf does not have that precision. The latter was a perfectly valid outcome to him.

And we know Lung kills people, he makes very persistent efforts to that effect.

Armsmaster's halberd? I mean, it does have blunt-headed configurations, but the strength augmentation is sufficient that he can smash around Bitch's dogs. He hits full-force even blunt, he's breaking bones. And its primary configuration is a very lethal blade. Two of its other configurations are a blowtorch and an arc welder. Even for the squeaky-clean Protectorate, lethal force is very close at hand and always ready when needed.

Brockton Bay is lethal as hell. The Protectorate and Wards try not to kill, but the entire Protectorate retains the ability to at whim, and it's only certain villains that actually make any effort not to be dangerously lethal - small fry like the Undersiders and Uber/Leet that can't just go 'come at me bro' to the entire Protectorate and want to avoid getting particular dedicated attention from them.

All the big gangs - ABB, E88, Coil - are basically always playing lethal force. Even if they have nonlethal settings, they visibly make zero effort to use them. Kaiser was straight-up torturing ABB mooks to death when we saw him fight. (This, like many other aspects of working with Nazis, was not a dealbreaker for Skitter & Tattletale. I mean, Skitter told him to stop and he did, but also she didn't kill him on the spot, and should be very ashamed of herself)

Hah! :D
Maybe a power-enhanced metabolism, and she just kept ordering larger and larger meals with that burger being that restaurant's answer?

I have no basis for this but I refuse to accept a world where she wasn't doing it just through sheer natural grit.

re Dauntless:
Ah, thanks.
Though I don't recall hearing the phrase "red truth" before. I assume it refers to something along the lines of information the text explicitly provides?

It's an Umineko thing and I haven't ever actually watched or read Umineko. But one of the things is sorting fact from fiction, and lines written in red text are objectively, inarguably factual. You'd have to ask someone else to explain Umineko, but that, at least, is what I meant by it.

And many of them may not have even realized the institutional apathy was as bad as it is before they joined up -- at which point, well, they're already there, they've met likeminded people also there, so they might as well use the Protectorate's resources to do what they can.

Pretty much, yes. There are people that leave or don't go, but the Protectorate's combination of 'a paycheck', 'support', and 'legal powers, including arrest authority' are pretty damn good for doing heroism. It is legitimately the most effective way to do the most good you can. People that stay out usually have pretty specific reasons for it, like the specific good they want to do being the kind that the Protectorate gets around to eventually rather than prioritizing.

Ehhhh. I mean, IRL, yeah, but do we know enough about the state of both countries in Earth Bet to say how much it's that, the reverse, or a mutual thing?
Though now I am wondering if that's in fact a large part of why Canada joined...

The most important thing to understand about the state of every place in Earth Bet (at least, as competently-written, so, uh, we're only really looking at the US and Canada here) is that it derives directly from the state in IRL. IRL, we can see the social tensions, injustices, the disagreements and hatreds in a country. They're the same in Earth Bet.

All Earth Bet does is remove the government's monopoly of force. Not only does every viewpoint get a vote, they get a tank too.

Earth Bet America is our America, except the fascists and white supremacists have superpowers to actually challenge governmental authority (locally only, but locally is enough). And so do the communists and the queers. And the immigrants that don't like getting hatecrimed. And the depressed people who just lost their job and home and capitalism decided they weren't useful enough anymore to keep alive (hi Nilbog!). (And people who are inclined to support the government absolutely do get powers too. But they already had power. And now there is a whole lot more power floating around in the country that they don't have)
 
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BB's brown and queer probably just looked at Kaiser sitting in the meetup like he's an actual person and turned right 'round the other way to leave town entirely and let Leviathan have the shithole
Speaking as someone, whilst past and white, is never the less on the "will kill if given the chance" list of the likes of E88...
I would be far more occupied with getting my family out of harm's way.
And I don't mean into an endbringer shelter.
Because, although never stated, they will be more available, larger and better provisioned as a function of money.
There would be basic federal standards for construction, and the number of them that the city must provide. In the question of location however, the legal mandate would require only coverage, and not service per capita.

So away from the wealthy white areas, they will be smaller, harder to get into, more crowded, and less patrolled.

For less patrolled, read more likely to have had the emergency supplies looted, and possibly a group squatting in the shelter.
They are absolutely death traps.
That isn't taking into account the temptation to skimp a little on materials and methods during construction, for the shelters that are less likely to be closely inspected (again, those in poorer locals)

Brockton Bay is lethal as hell. The Protectorate and Wards try not to kill
The Protectorate tries not to let the Wards kill, and tries not to get caught killing themselves. It makes the public nervous, and officialdom less likely to pay the salaries.

I always read Coil as white. I half suspect that Wildbow never set a racial background for him when writing, and just retro-tokened him later when challenged on "where all the brown people?"
 
we have no timeline on Triumph, Gallant, and Aegis so you can assume whatever.

We have a little bit of information on Aegis and Gallant's places in the timeline. There is WoG that Aegis triggered when he was 15, and seeing as he was almost 18 when canon happened, he most likely triggered 2008 (or early 2009, but more likely 2008). It should be noted that the commonly cited comment from Vista about how she was the most experienced ward happened after Leviathan, so that is true only after Aegis and Gallant are both dead. Aegis most likely was a ward prior to Vista.

For Gallant, it is a lot more nebulous. The main thing I can see is in connection to Victoria. She triggered at some point in 2009 from what I can tell, and Gallant was already a cape by the time she triggered (which is why she pinged off of him). I don't think there is anything to narrow it down more than that though.
 
Speaking as someone, whilst past and white, is never the less on the "will kill if given the chance" list of the likes of E88...
I would be far more occupied with getting my family out of harm's way.
And I don't mean into an endbringer shelter.
Because, although never stated, they will be more available, larger and better provisioned as a function of money.
There would be basic federal standards for construction, and the number of them that the city must provide. In the question of location however, the legal mandate would require only coverage, and not service per capita.

So away from the wealthy white areas, they will be smaller, harder to get into, more crowded, and less patrolled.

For less patrolled, read more likely to have had the emergency supplies looted, and possibly a group squatting in the shelter.
They are absolutely death traps.
That isn't taking into account the temptation to skimp a little on materials and methods during construction, for the shelters that are less likely to be closely inspected (again, those in poorer locals)

Oof, this is actually a really good point. Like we know one of the companies making these in BB is owned by Coil, he absolutely skimps where he can get away with it to save money for the things he wants to do. Yeah, the shelters in poorer areas of town are definitely not up to code and I would not want to trust them to shield against an Endbringer's backwash the way they're meant to.

The Protectorate tries not to let the Wards kill, and tries not to get caught killing themselves. It makes the public nervous, and officialdom less likely to pay the salaries.

Imagine. A law enforcement force that tries to arrest rather than kill.

I always read Coil as white. I half suspect that Wildbow never set a racial background for him when writing, and just retro-tokened him later when challenged on "where all the brown people?"

As I noted before, Coil is just such an unfortunate choice of character to try and Dumbledore that I assume he was always meant to be black and Wildbow forgot to ever describe him.

Though he definitely presents himself as very cultured and urbane. (But is not in fact from that kind of privileged background. We know he comes from a social class that goes into paramilitary squaddies, not officers, because that was specifically his position until he came into money. Not necessarily 'a kid from the projects', but definitely working class)

We have a little bit of information on Aegis and Gallant's places in the timeline. There is WoG that Aegis triggered when he was 15, and seeing as he was almost 18 when canon happened, he most likely triggered 2008 (or early 2009, but more likely 2008). It should be noted that the commonly cited comment from Vista about how she was the most experienced ward happened after Leviathan, so that is true only after Aegis and Gallant are both dead.

Vista never made any such comment in her interlude. She did say she was a veteran and had nine months of seniority on Kid Win, but she never said a word about Clockblocker (who we also know triggered at 15, which puts him in a pretty similar range of join times to Vista). And Shadow Stalker is the newest Ward, but can in no reasonable sense be called a rookie considering her career is of comparable length to Vista, if not substantially greater.

And we know Gallant is more experienced than Vista, because he's the seasoned Ward who was escorting her in her own rookie days.

Aegis most likely was a ward prior to Vista.

Aegis was powered prior to Vista. A Ward is a much more specific thing. And we know non-white people are hesitant to join the Wards and Protectorate, because almost none in Brockton Bay ever do. (The interpretation I generally go with is that Aegis has Circumstances. He was independent as long as he could be, but something happened that made Wards the only viable option for him, so while he was an independent hero previously, he only joined the Wards a bit over a year pre-canon)

For Gallant, it is a lot more nebulous. The main thing I can see is in connection to Victoria. She triggered at some point in 2009 from what I can tell, and Gallant was already a cape by the time she triggered (which is why she pinged off of him). I don't think there is anything to narrow it down more than that though.

Pertinently, he was also already a Ward at that point - so if he just drank the vial and sat around doing corporate scion things, that was at least prior to that.

And yes, Victoria triggered at some point after mid-April 2009, because A: we know Vista's birthday is mid-May, B: we know Vista joined the Wards 'a month shy of 10', and C: Vista was a new Ward getting escorted by the more-experienced Gallant when Victoria triggered. Probably not too far after. I'd assume some time in late May, early June? I don't know school sportsball schedules but it was probably a climactic last-of-the-school-year game, the timeline and context are about right for that.
 
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If the Merchants even existed, they didn't have Squealer, she literally joined them in like Arc 3-4 during canon (Squealer was listed as an independent when she was first mentioned in Victoria's interlude).
Uh. Wow. I had no idea, as far as I'm recalling.

re the churn and the actual readiness for lethality of the local capes:
And thanks for the information there, too!

I have no basis for this but I refuse to accept a world where she wasn't doing it just through sheer natural grit.
:D

re "red truth":
Ahh, thanks.
(I'm also not much at all familiar with it.)

Pretty much, yes. There are people that leave or don't go, but the Protectorate's combination of 'a paycheck', 'support', and 'legal powers, including arrest authority' are pretty damn good for doing heroism. It is legitimately the most effective way to do the most good you can. People that stay out usually have pretty specific reasons for it, like the specific good they want to do being the kind that the Protectorate gets around to eventually rather than prioritizing.
Makes sense.

re comparing the national problems of our Earth and Earth Bet:
Ah, and thanks.

And the depressed people who just lost their job and home and capitalism decided they weren't useful enough anymore to keep alive (hi Nilbog!).
...Oh, now that sparks a thought: an interpretation of Nilbog where he's not just doing the goblin king thing because it... seems cool, or something? But actually and deliberately, with historical knowledge, trying to run a well-functioning somewhat idealized, if small, feudal society as an alternative economic system.
(Though I'm not really sure just how large Ellisburg is, or... what its economy is like, so I'm not sure how well that'd work. Still, though: a system fundamentally based on direct personal relationships with bidirectional obligations of loyalty and care seems like it might have some appeal to him in that situation.)

re Vista:
...Huh. I wonder where the whole thing about her being the longest-serving Ward came from?
 
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Uh. Wow. I had no idea, as far as I'm recalling.

The Merchants are easily the most misportrayed group in Worm fanfic. In fanfic, the three big gangs are the Empire, the ABB, and the Merchants. In Worm, the three big gangs are the Empire, the ABB, and Coil. The Merchants are explicitly so scorned they didn't get a seat at a table that bit players like the Undersiders had a seat at. (And that Kaiser was sitting at like he's a real person or something) The Merchants managed to rise to significance after Leviathan, not before.

There's no explicit indication on when the Merchants formed or when Squealer joined, but public gang opinion at the start of Worm was that Squealer was an independent, so there's no way to square that without saying she got together with Skidmark pretty damn recently. The meeting at Somer's Rock might literally have been her public 'heyo, I joined the Archer's Bridge Merchants' debut.

re the churn and the actual readiness for lethality of the local capes:
And thanks for the information there, too!

i do not know how people read 'after a grisly attack on a grocer (meaning very dead), Hookwolf slams a bladed arm into a ten-year-old girl to get her out of his way without deciding to not extrude a million blades' or 'Kaiser is actively and pointedly trying to escalate to lethal force on Lung even when it's literally making Lung stronger, and literally going Vlad the Impaler on ABB goons in public' or 'Oni Lee just goes into the field with guns and grenades' or 'Lung is absolutely down for murking sixteen-year-olds and that is literally the first thing he's shown onscreen trying to do' or 'Coil's troops are literally soldiers that literally shoot people with literal guns they have no superpowers their offence is bullet' and think 'don't kill' is a rule any major gangs take even vaguely seriously

(The answer is that they do not read it at all)

...Oh, now that sparks a thought: an interpretation of Nilbog where he's not just doing the goblin king thing because it... seems cool, or something? But actually and deliberately, with historical knowledge, trying to run a well-functioning somewhat idealized, if small, feudal society as an alternative economic system.
(Though I'm not really sure just how large Ellisburg is, or... what its economy is like, so I'm not sure how well that'd work. Still, though: a system fundamentally based on direct personal relationships with bidirectional obligations of loyalty and care seems like it might have some appeal to him in that situation.)

That's actually an interesting thought. We honestly know basically nothing about what's going on in his head, just what his trigger was. But the idea that he's like 'yeah this world isn't working, imma start my own with loyalty, care, and your biomass' would fit pr much everything he did and the timeframe on which he did it. (It's not exactly normal for a trigger to instantly result in an entire small town just eaten, he went right to it)

re Vista:
...Huh. I wonder where the whole thing about her being the longest-serving Ward came from?

Ten years of fanfic written by authors that got into the fandom by reading other fanfic. Some author in the distant days of Wormfic past either made an intentional change, or exhibited very poor reading comprehension while reading Worm itself, and said it so confidently that people incorporated it into their view of the setting and never corrected because they didn't read Worm, or didn't read it very closely.
 
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The Merchants are easily the most misportrayed group in Worm fanfic. In fanfic, the three big gangs are the Empire, the ABB, and the Merchants. In Worm, the three big gangs are the Empire, the ABB, and Coil. The Merchants are explicitly so scorned they didn't get a seat at a table that bit players like the Undersiders had a seat at. (And that Kaiser was sitting at like he's a real person or something) The Merchants managed to rise to significance after Leviathan, not before.

There's no explicit indication on when the Merchants formed or when Squealer joined, but public gang opinion at the start of Worm was that Squealer was an independent, so there's no way to square that without saying she got together with Skidmark pretty damn recently. The meeting at Somer's Rock might literally have been her public 'heyo, I joined the Archer's Bridge Merchants' debut.
To be fair, the Merchants seem most likely to be widely characterized as poor and largely Black (and/or Latino potentially). Skidmark might have thought he deserved a seat at the table out of longevity (or even respect) and just didn't get one more out of racial animus. Or because their publicly known cape roster was thin and it's a cape meeting, normals don't matter (in Worm).
 
i do not know how people read 'after a grisly attack on a grocer (meaning very dead), Hookwolf slams a bladed arm into a ten-year-old girl to get her out of his way without deciding to not extrude a million blades' or 'Kaiser is actively and pointedly trying to escalate to lethal force on Lung even when it's literally making Lung stronger, and literally going Vlad the Impaler on ABB goons in public' or 'Oni Lee just goes into the field with guns and grenades' or 'Lung is absolutely down for murking sixteen-year-olds and that is literally the first thing he's shown onscreen trying to do' or 'Coil's troops are literally soldiers that literally shoot people with literal guns they have no superpowers their offence is bullet' and think 'don't kill' is a rule any major gangs take even vaguely seriously

(The answer is that they do not read it at all)
I think the answer is that all those murders of capes steadily fail to materialize throughout the story. (Murders of non-cape bystanders are a different thing.) And this fits perfectly into common supers story tropes.

While, yes, it makes no sense with the way that most villains actually fight on screen. (Which also fits perfectly into common supers story tropes.)
 
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To be fair, the Merchants seem most likely to be widely characterized as poor and largely Black (and/or Latino potentially). Skidmark might have thought he deserved a seat at the table out of longevity (or even respect) and just didn't get one more out of racial animus. Or because their publicly known cape roster was thin and it's a cape meeting, normals don't matter (in Worm).
Which is still more then coils known cape stable
 
Which is still more then coils known cape stable
Yeah, the cape roster thing enables E88 (more numerous) and ABB (dragon-man) to look down on them, but doesn't account for the differential treatment.

The race, class, and personal presentation (which is entangled with but not entirely coterminous with the other two) animus theory tracks, for sure.

Another angle is power politics. The Merchants are a gang. They've got non-cape foot-soldiers and territory and criminal enterprises. Comparatively weak though they are, that puts them in a kind of rivalry with the other gangs that doesn't apply to the attendees that are pure cape teams. The theory here would be that yes, obviously the Merchants belong at the table for a cape-crime conference...and that's exactly why there's a purpose to denying them one.
 
Yeah, the cape roster thing enables E88 (more numerous) and ABB (dragon-man) to look down on them, but doesn't account for the differential treatment.

The race, class, and personal presentation (which is entangled with but not entirely coterminous with the other two) animus theory tracks, for sure.

Another angle is power politics. The Merchants are a gang. They've got non-cape foot-soldiers and territory and criminal enterprises. Comparatively weak though they are, that puts them in a kind of rivalry with the other gangs that doesn't apply to the attendees that are pure cape teams. The theory here would be that yes, obviously the Merchants belong at the table for a cape-crime conference...and that's exactly why there's a purpose to denying them one.
Otoh the later part is also a argument against coil who got a seat if I remember it right.
 
Otoh the later part is also a argument against coil who got a seat if I remember it right.
Not really. You don't play power politics by snubbing everyone else. Coil, despite lacking a cape roster or any actual criminal enterprises I can think of anywhere in canon (as opposed to his Bond-villain agenda), purportedly has a powerful gang and Kaiser can't possibly angle for a coalition against Coil when everybody else at the table has a pretty good idea where they really stand with King Nazi.

On the other hand, Kaiser could plausibly benefit by pushing the perspective that the Merchants are not worthy of recognition. It prepares the ground for him to aggress against them in the future, and he can reasonably expect to win in such aggression. (The motivations of Coil and Lung in accepting this play might be interesting to think about. Shallowly, Lung might really not care and Coil's game was never to win at gang geopolitics.)
 
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To be fair, the Merchants seem most likely to be widely characterized as poor and largely Black (and/or Latino potentially). Skidmark might have thought he deserved a seat at the table out of longevity (or even respect) and just didn't get one more out of racial animus. Or because their publicly known cape roster was thin and it's a cape meeting, normals don't matter (in Worm).

I don't think it was entirely racial animus, if only because Coil was there and Grue actually backed Kaiser up on 'sit at the kid's table', mostly because he really hates drugs and their dealers. Kaiser was absolutely racial animus, but Grue backed him up on it and no one else gave a shit so clearly Coil and Faultline considered them losers enough to be, if not 'not worth sitting at the table', at least not worth making the Empire throw a Nazi tantrum to give them that seat.

Of course, the actual reason is that all Wildbow knows about drugs and their dealers comes from anti-drug PSAs so he is of the opinion that drug addicts are useless losers. With that said I write the Merchants as, y'know, people. So in my writing they're not these useless losers, they're just outgunned to a sufficient degree that they have a hard time hanging onto territory, and racial animus and classism has a lot of people in-universe dismissing them without actually being correct about it. (And people like Grue who are from the same race and class and despise them precisely because they've seen the impact of those drugs on their communities, and the Merchants would have counterarguments and ethical justifications for stuff, but they wouldn't convince him because he's a boomer before his time) And people with a modicum of brains like Coil and Faultline just consider the Empire a more important voice to court, so they play along with snubbing the Merchants.

I think the answer is that all those murders of capes steadily fail to materialize throughout the story. (Murders of non-cape bystanders are a different thing.) And this fits perfectly into common supers story tropes.

While, yes, it makes no sense with the way that most villains actually fight on screen. (Which also fits perfectly into common supers story tropes.)

I mean, don't they? Half of Worm's cape cast just dies off in the space of two months, and that's a rather rougher than average two months what with three S-class threats all hitting Brockton Bay one after the other, but it's still a pretty significant death rate.
 
I mean, don't they? Half of Worm's cape cast just dies off in the space of two months, and that's a rather rougher than average two months what with three S-class threats all hitting Brockton Bay one after the other, but it's still a pretty significant death rate.
How many of them are killed by something other than those class S threats, though? Endbringers, while recurrent, aren't part of the 'business as usual' attrition (and it's specifically a huge deal if you're caught setting somebody up to die during one, relating back to where this line began), and Slaughterhouse Nine attacks are even less so.
 
How many of them are killed by something other than those class S threats, though? Endbringers, while recurrent, aren't part of the 'business as usual' attrition (and it's specifically a huge deal if you're caught setting somebody up to die during one, relating back to where this line began), and Slaughterhouse Nine attacks are even less so.

Not many, yeah. But at the same time, during 90% of that stretch, the business-as-usual violence wasn't really happening at all? Like, most of what they were fighting was those S-class threats rather than each other.

I guess we can say we saw mostly unusual situations and that got assimilated into the fanbase's general sense of what is usual.
 
Not many, yeah. But at the same time, during 90% of that stretch, the business-as-usual violence wasn't really happening at all? Like, most of what they were fighting was those S-class threats rather than each other.
That's fair to say. It's just hard to say based on that what clearly all the rest of the times must have looked like.
 
That's fair to say. It's just hard to say based on that what clearly all the rest of the times must have looked like.

Based on that, no, but we do see characters reminisce about the normal days, and we do have seven arcs of the normal days, though most of that time is tightly bound to Taylor's very narrow perspective and actively introducing her to it.
 
Ehhhh. I mean, IRL, yeah, but do we know enough about the state of both countries in Earth Bet to say how much it's that, the reverse, or a mutual thing?
Though now I am wondering if that's in fact a large part of why Canada joined...
Canada does have such delightful characters as Heartbreaker running around, and has been consistently unable to deal with him for at least roughly two decades now (assuming Regent isn't the oldest sibling), for what it's worth. And he represents like, one of three canadian cape factions we know about.


Incidentally, all these worldbuilding notes by Pale Wolf, collected into one spot for easy reference by others, might be a very useful resource. Maybe enough to merit their own thread, especially if combined with similar things done by other authors, a sort of curated original-flavor expanded universe archive, kinda like this.
 
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How many of them are killed by something other than those class S threats, though? Endbringers, while recurrent, aren't part of the 'business as usual' attrition (and it's specifically a huge deal if you're caught setting somebody up to die during one, relating back to where this line began), and Slaughterhouse Nine attacks are even less so.
While non S-Class events don't kill as many capes, it isn't for a lack of trying.

Lung attempts to murder the Undersiders, then the capes fighting him during the villain alliance arc, Oni Lee also tries to kill people, and Bakuda does Bakuda things

Kaiser tries to murder Lung right back at that same time, and I'm fairly sure Hookwolf's group isn't pulling punches after the facereveal

Coil's Sniper tries to kill Oni Lee, and Coil tries to kill Skitter

Skitter does kill Coil and Butcher

These are just things I remember offhand, there could be more. And any of these could have meant the death of some capes, had the situation gone a bit differently. Had that gang war gone on longer, I'm sure we'd seen some named characters drop. And let's remember that we don't know the full empire roster. They could have lost someone and the narration just didn't mention it.

There is also the issue of the multiple S class events taking up the story. Either people are in a truce about those or are recovering from them in 90% of the pre timeskip period.
 
They could have lost someone and the narration just didn't mention it.
Also independents presumably get splattered all the time for some of the claimed statistics to even remotely make sense, it's just unremarked on. We should keep in mind that Taylor is fairly ignorant and incurious about cape life until or unless it's directly relevant to her, she's just too much in survival mode when the story starts and with all the crazy things she gets up to in the story.
 
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