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Ride the Lightning (Worm / DC Comics Cross Over)
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Spark 1.1
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Taylor Hebert triggered with the power to be struck by lightning whenever she wants!
Ouch.
...now it is impressive to accomplish great things with weak or unsuitable powers, but this is going to be a doozy.
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....... crap. Now I want to write that story.
Lung bellowed in rage, "Who are you to oppose me?"
A slight smile on her face, Taylor shrugged.
"You can call me Lightning Lass.... no wait, I think that ones taken. I'll come up with something latter. Anywho, boom."
And the lightning fell from the sky.
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Yep, totally a Flash cross over. I blame this on the confluence of events that is 1) My daughter listening to the Worm audiobook project and 2) my wife marathoning her way through Flash Season 2. I only wish I was a better writer, because while I do have a story in mind, the execution will probably be painful.
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Now I am feeling bad for Velocity...
He is like a monkey paw Flash and that's bad enough. But now he had to be next to a real Flash?
He is like a monkey paw Flash and that's bad enough. But now he had to be next to a real Flash?
Spark 1.2
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The next section has a day by day break down that bridges this one with her coming home. It felt too long to include as part of this, so I am writing it as its own section. Later on there may be some edit-fu that changes up the flow.
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If I am not mistaken, I believe this is the only flash!Taylor story here and in SB. Looking forward to seeing how this goes.
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Sophia's reaction to seeing someone get struck by lightning right in front of her is bizarre. I mean, even if she is a psychopath who doesn't care about the victim, I would still expect something a little more like-
"Holy fucking shit, was that fucking lightning? What the fucking fuck? Jesus, I almost died. I'm not on fire or anything, am I? No, but still, holy shit. Fucking lightning. Oh hey, Hebert just got struck by lightning. Fucking LOL."
"Holy fucking shit, was that fucking lightning? What the fucking fuck? Jesus, I almost died. I'm not on fire or anything, am I? No, but still, holy shit. Fucking lightning. Oh hey, Hebert just got struck by lightning. Fucking LOL."
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- Aviano, Italy
You...... are not wrong. That is one of the parts which I already know will need some revision. I personally am not a huge fan of full blown Predator / Prey Sophia, but am partial to "possibly a sociopath." This is the same character who, in the actual story tried to BLANK Taylor's BLANK while in costume before BLANK did BLANK to her. With that in mind, I feel that this is more of a clunky execution than an out of character situation.
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- Seattle, Washington, USA
You realize that that IS technically the power Captain Marvel has? The lightning just does more to him than electrocution...
darkkrusty
The Forsaken
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Para's eat your heats out before the might of the speed force, oh and can you index this please? When it gets to a couple of pages in the thread will make it easier to find updates.
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Index..... sure. That is TOTALLY a thing I know how to do.....
Cyclone
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- Earth, Sol System
At least use the threadmark function. All you need to do is click the Threadmark link at the bottom of the posts you need to threadmark, then type in a title and click the Add Threadmark button in the dialogue box.
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Supper Gud. Am much excitement to be raeding did. No really. Give me more.
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This thing you say, I shall do.
After coffee when I get home to the computer.
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Ah, so that is an important piece of the puzzle. I will say that the shard in question was the QA Shard. That said, the Speed Force works in mysterious ways. The pay off for this comes much, much later (fingers crossed I get there).
darkkrusty
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Index/threadmarks same thing really, just fiddle around till you figure it out ^_^