Kyubey sounds like he has emotions. And deliberately so. Speaking without emotions sounds unnatural to humans.
 
[X] A red Kyubey? How did that happen?
[X] What exactly was your motivation in giving me these powers?
[X] Does the present-time Kyubey know that you exist?
[X] Did you travel back in time with me, or did you somehow come back separately?
[X] Is there any significant risk of anyone or anything else travelling back in time from the future we came from? If so, what are our likely enemies?
[X] What do you know about my magical abilities? Any training suggestions?
[X] Do I need grief seeds? If not, why do Magical Girls need them? (OOC: this could lead us in a very interesting direction...)
[X] How long do we have until Doomsday? What can you remember about history leading up to it?
[X] Do you have any idea who the Devil might be, or where I can pick up his/her trail?
 
Okay, changing my vote to:

[X] apeljohn

A possible addition would be

[X] Leave through the window and go around the city, the more you know how this city is now the better.
- [X] Write a note beforehand to Mami, you don't want her to worry.
 
Oh god the ship teasing.
What can I say, I'm good at what I do. Seriously, Cards Against Remnant, my RWBY fic on Fanfiction.net (#SHAMELESS), is 50% dirty jokes and 50% ship teasing. That's right, a fic where all they do is play Cards Against Humanity is only 50% dirty jokes. THAT'S HOW MUCH SHIP TEASE THERE IS!
 
[j] Kill it.
-[j] Eat it.

Are red Kyubeys strawberry? Y'know paranoia dictates that the Kyubey-shaped thing the GM is setting up as a reliable-ish source of information when it's well known how paranoid we are of the real thing shouldn't be trusted and is just a stealth QB, but I'm not going down that route. Too much of the same old same old there.
[X] apeljohn
What can I say, I'm good at what I do. Seriously, Cards Against Remnant, my RWBY fic on Fanfiction.net (#SHAMELESS), is 50% dirty jokes and 50% ship teasing. That's right, a fic where all they do is play Cards Against Humanity is only 50% dirty jokes. THAT'S HOW MUCH SHIP TEASE THERE IS!
I back his shameless self-promotion. Read it, iz good.
 
[x]applejohn

I'm interested in Ryubey. And the update was cute.
 
What greets you is an odd sight. Mami's got her Soul Gem in one hand and is holding other gem in the other. The other gem looks like a color inverted Soul Gem, with the actual jewel being a sickening black instead of a comforting yellow and the little bits of metal that cover it are silver instead of gold. It feels evil to you magic senses, like the labyrinth from before. Mami holds it close to her Soul Gem and some sort of black stuff flows out of from her Soul Gem and into the black jewel, leaving her Soul Gem shining brighter than before.

I guess hearing about Tatsuya's life must have depressed her a bit.:V

The fact that he was actually feeling kind of happy telling her about it makes it sort of amusing.
 
[x] What's a pun?
[x] Why can't I remember things?
[x] Did you come back with me?
[x] Can you bring others back?
[x] ...Do you know how I can change back? I can't figure it out.
[x] Do you know where the devil is? Or how I can find her?
[x] Am I supposed to keep you a secret?
 
Isn't there someone in one of the spinoffs that has that power?
Apparently there's a girl in Tart Magica who transfers all negative effects, including grief accumulation, from herself to others. Kind of like Encounter from Medaka Box. It's not often that I see something HAX enough to compete with high tier Medaka Box characters.
 
I guess hearing about Tatsuya's life must have depressed her a bit.:V

The fact that he was actually feeling kind of happy telling her about it makes it sort of amusing.
I'm glad people caught that. I needed away to inform the reader that despite Mami sounding like her usual calm self during the conversation, hearing about the rough life Tatsuya's had until now still had an emotional impact on her. I'm happy that worked out. This sort of analysis of my work makes me happy. HAPPY QMs ARE YOU FRIENDS!
 
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