- Location
- East of the Sun and West of the Moon
There are some forces not even a devil-killer dares trifle with.
Puella Magi Interficio Antitheus
- Thread starter RexHeller
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akrasiel23
A wraith no more
- Location
- Peru
I would rather have us play matchmaker in Sayaka's favour, we probably prevent a Sayaka contract and Kyousuke killing himself all in one.
Tummy punch.
LostDeviljho
Flame Dragon Princess
- Location
- The glorious Pacific Northwest
- Pronouns
- Any
Excuse you?
RexHeller
Title Incoming. Please Hold.
- Location
- Somewhere else.
@akrasiel23 did you ever make a Omake before the recent one?
akrasiel23
A wraith no more
- Location
- Peru
I did a pair: What would have happened if Tatsuya decided to check Oriko's hat and the other was about Tatsuya meeting Godwinson's Sabrina.
RexHeller
Title Incoming. Please Hold.
- Location
- Somewhere else.
Think you could find them for me? I might threadmark them.
akrasiel23
A wraith no more
- Location
- Peru
Sure.
Bucket-head omake
Puella Magi Interficio Antitheus | Page 57
Sabrina's Sabrina omake
Puella Magi Interficio Antitheus | Page 63
I hope my style of writing has made some progress since then.
Edit: Oriko is probably cringing internally for not having taken Bebe in consideration of her scenario.
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RexHeller
Title Incoming. Please Hold.
- Location
- Somewhere else.
Okay, so the first one is a little to short to be made an official Omake but I've added the second to the threadmarks. I'll be rewarding Omakes with bonus content from now on, like I did with Kirika Quest earlier. Since you've written two official Omakes, you've earned two Omakes in return. You can pick the subject matter if you like as I don't really have any ideas. You also have the option to hold off on turning in your rewards until Tatsuya's Magic is revealed as that would probably open up more options to chose from.
akrasiel23
A wraith no more
- Location
- Peru
I think I will wait until Takkun's magic is revealed, thanks by the way.
Feeding the hungry
RexHeller
Title Incoming. Please Hold.
- Location
- Somewhere else.
Right, the most important thing first: food. The girl will probably be hungry when she wakes up and even if she isn't, well, eating always makes you feel better so it probably works the same way for others, right?
You exit the bedroom and go to the room Mami always prepares the food in. You know that there's not a fire pit or anything so you don't know how she actually cooks the food though. She obviously must but you don't know what machine she uses to do it. So raw food it is.
There're some red things in a bowl on the counter that are sort of ball-shaped. You're not quite sure what they are but you're pretty sure you can eat them. At least, they aren't made of wood, plastic or metal and you can't see any obvious use for them. You pick one up and smell it but you don't get much of a scent off of them. Well, at least they're not rotten or something? They're pretty firm too put you apply a little pressure and the surface of it gets crushed inward and juice leaks out. You take a sniff of the juice and it's vaguely familiar. Licking the juice off the your fingers, you find that it's sweet. Presumably Mami wouldn't keep something poisonous just lying out in the open so you decide that this'll be good to feed the girl.
Looking through the doors on the walls with the shelves in them, you find a plate and in the drawers you find a knife. You slice up the red thing, discovering that the insides are white in the process, and put the slices on the plate for when ever the girl wakes up.
Looking at the plate, it seems that a single one of the red things isn't a full meal, compared to what Mami fed you last night at least. You'd be grateful to have this much back in hell. Still, you could eat this and still be hungry so maybe the girl will want more? And if not you can always eat the rest.
The wooden wall doors didn't have any food in them, just some plates, glasses and containers full of various powders. However, there's also this tall black box made of metal that you haven't opened yet. Pulling its door open, you unexpectedly greeted with a small blast of cold air. Looking inside you see the box is filled with stuff, some of it meat, and has lights on inside. You quickly guess it's used to keep food cold so it doesn't go bad. Cool.
Looking through the cold box, you find some meat wrapped up in paper. It's orangey-pink, with thin white lines going across it and it smells good. Odd that it's not bleeding but whatever. You take it out, slice it up and add it to the plate.
There, that looks fine. You quickly check on the girl but she's still sound asleep. Since you don't know how long she'll be out, you put the plate of food back in the cold box. Lacking anything else to do, you head back into the bedroom and sit down on a chair in the corner, keeping guard over the sleeping girl.
You do your best to keep alert and aware of any threats that might sneak in, just as you always do in a resting place but for some reason you find it hard to focus. It's hard to explain but it's almost like you not expecting to be attacked here. No, that's not quite it. You always been good at picking shelters and you tend not to expect anyone to find you but you always keep watch anyway just in case. Now, it's almost like you're body thinks it's impossible to be attacked here and doesn't see the need to keep alert.
You feel… safe? Actually safe? Is that it? It's been so long…
You'll have to watch out for that. You can't afford to feel safe. There's no such thing as safety after all. The last time you felt safe you were betrayed and abandoned into hell. Even now, you know that a Magical Girl or even a regular person could break down Mami's door or climb in through the window. And you keep reminding yourself of the dangers every time catch yourself watching the girl snore quietly instead of the door.
Eventually the girl begins to wake up. The girl pushes herself into a sitting position and yawns while rubbing at her eye with one hand. You can see her begin to panic as she looks around the unfamiliar room, so you get up from your chair and walk over to the bed. When she catches sight of you she relaxes and smiles. "Ah, Onii-chan!"
You freeze mid-step, mind grinding to a halt. Why is she calling you her brother? Why is she smiling when you've essentially kidnapped her? And why do you feel warm inside your chest?
"Onii-chan? Is something wrong?" The girl asks, head tilted to the side.
You tsk in annoyance. You're getting sloppy if a girl like her can read you. "Why did you call me that?"
"Ah! I'm sorry. Do you not like it?" The girl flinches and looks down. "It's just… besides Mama, you're the first person to be nice to me and since Mama… Mama…" She chokes up, tears in her eyes. You're by her side in an instant, taking her gently into your arms. She sniffs loudly but continues. "Since Mama is… gone, I'll stick with you. If… If that's okay."
Yeah, it's fine with you. That was the plan anyway. Letting go of the girl, you give her some space. "Are you hungry?"
The girl looks at you for a moment before her face lights up in comprehension. "Onii-chan!" She cries out in joy, a huge smile on her face. Then she blushes and looks down again. "Oh, um… sorry, I…"
"It's fine. Call me what you want." You say, guessing the reason for her hesitance. "Answer the question."
The girl opens her mouth but before she can say anything there was a loud growling from her tummy. She closes her mouth, blushes and nods.
Nodding yourself, you get up and head the room with the food, the girl getting up to follow you without being told to. You pull the plate of food from the cold box and hand it to her.
She looks at it for a moment before shrugging. "Apples and salmon? Okay." She looks up at you with a smile. "Thanks Onii-chan!" She says as she rushes back to the main room to sit down.
You follow and sit across the table from her. "Don't waste any." You instruct. She's already started to eat so she just nods instead of opening up her mouth. As you watch her eat you realize you've forgotten something. "What's you name?"
She pauses in the middle of placing a piece of meat in her mouth. She quickly swallows it. "Nagisa Momoe!" She answers cheerfully.
"I'm Tatsuya." She smiles at you again, which you're learning that you much prefer to her crying, and continues eating. It's… hard to look away from.
[Tatsuya?]
You leap up from the table in alarm, looking around the room frantically. You can feel your power rise up, waiting for you to use it. You're chair clatters to the floor and Nagisa flinches. Still, despite your panic at being ambushed, you recognize the voice.
"Mami?" You ask cautiously, not seeing her anywhere.
[Oh, good! I wasn't sure this would work since you're not technically a Magical Girl. I'm talking to you telepathically!]
Tele…? Ryubey said that word last night as well. "What?"
[Ah, right. It means were talking mind to mind. Don't worry, I can't read your mind or anything. Why don't you try it?]
"Tatsu-nii?" Nagisa's asks with concern.
"Just a moment Nagisa." You don't have the ability to keep track of two conversations at once. She still looks worried but she hesitantly starts to eat her food again. Meanwhile, you turn your focus back to Mami. [You startled me.]
[Oh! I'm sorry, I didn't mean to. Anyway, I'm taking a break at school now so I thought I'd check on how you're doing.]
You pick you chair back up from where it's fallen and sit back down. [The dictionary didn't help.]
[I was afraid of that. Still, it couldn't hurt to try. Anyway, I'll be done school in a few hours. What will you be doing in the meantime?]
[] Practicing Magic
[] Exploring the town
[] Talking with Nagisa
[] Something else? (Write in)
Wooo! Update!
So, I did some looking and @akrasiel23 has two threadmarked Omakes, so he can request two omakes from me whenever. Also, looking back, I'm finding that I made Tatsuya too talky. Hopefully, with more experiance under my belt I've been able to capture his personality and warped world view better.
You exit the bedroom and go to the room Mami always prepares the food in. You know that there's not a fire pit or anything so you don't know how she actually cooks the food though. She obviously must but you don't know what machine she uses to do it. So raw food it is.
There're some red things in a bowl on the counter that are sort of ball-shaped. You're not quite sure what they are but you're pretty sure you can eat them. At least, they aren't made of wood, plastic or metal and you can't see any obvious use for them. You pick one up and smell it but you don't get much of a scent off of them. Well, at least they're not rotten or something? They're pretty firm too put you apply a little pressure and the surface of it gets crushed inward and juice leaks out. You take a sniff of the juice and it's vaguely familiar. Licking the juice off the your fingers, you find that it's sweet. Presumably Mami wouldn't keep something poisonous just lying out in the open so you decide that this'll be good to feed the girl.
Looking through the doors on the walls with the shelves in them, you find a plate and in the drawers you find a knife. You slice up the red thing, discovering that the insides are white in the process, and put the slices on the plate for when ever the girl wakes up.
Looking at the plate, it seems that a single one of the red things isn't a full meal, compared to what Mami fed you last night at least. You'd be grateful to have this much back in hell. Still, you could eat this and still be hungry so maybe the girl will want more? And if not you can always eat the rest.
The wooden wall doors didn't have any food in them, just some plates, glasses and containers full of various powders. However, there's also this tall black box made of metal that you haven't opened yet. Pulling its door open, you unexpectedly greeted with a small blast of cold air. Looking inside you see the box is filled with stuff, some of it meat, and has lights on inside. You quickly guess it's used to keep food cold so it doesn't go bad. Cool.
Looking through the cold box, you find some meat wrapped up in paper. It's orangey-pink, with thin white lines going across it and it smells good. Odd that it's not bleeding but whatever. You take it out, slice it up and add it to the plate.
There, that looks fine. You quickly check on the girl but she's still sound asleep. Since you don't know how long she'll be out, you put the plate of food back in the cold box. Lacking anything else to do, you head back into the bedroom and sit down on a chair in the corner, keeping guard over the sleeping girl.
You do your best to keep alert and aware of any threats that might sneak in, just as you always do in a resting place but for some reason you find it hard to focus. It's hard to explain but it's almost like you not expecting to be attacked here. No, that's not quite it. You always been good at picking shelters and you tend not to expect anyone to find you but you always keep watch anyway just in case. Now, it's almost like you're body thinks it's impossible to be attacked here and doesn't see the need to keep alert.
You feel… safe? Actually safe? Is that it? It's been so long…
You'll have to watch out for that. You can't afford to feel safe. There's no such thing as safety after all. The last time you felt safe you were betrayed and abandoned into hell. Even now, you know that a Magical Girl or even a regular person could break down Mami's door or climb in through the window. And you keep reminding yourself of the dangers every time catch yourself watching the girl snore quietly instead of the door.
Eventually the girl begins to wake up. The girl pushes herself into a sitting position and yawns while rubbing at her eye with one hand. You can see her begin to panic as she looks around the unfamiliar room, so you get up from your chair and walk over to the bed. When she catches sight of you she relaxes and smiles. "Ah, Onii-chan!"
You freeze mid-step, mind grinding to a halt. Why is she calling you her brother? Why is she smiling when you've essentially kidnapped her? And why do you feel warm inside your chest?
"Onii-chan? Is something wrong?" The girl asks, head tilted to the side.
You tsk in annoyance. You're getting sloppy if a girl like her can read you. "Why did you call me that?"
"Ah! I'm sorry. Do you not like it?" The girl flinches and looks down. "It's just… besides Mama, you're the first person to be nice to me and since Mama… Mama…" She chokes up, tears in her eyes. You're by her side in an instant, taking her gently into your arms. She sniffs loudly but continues. "Since Mama is… gone, I'll stick with you. If… If that's okay."
Yeah, it's fine with you. That was the plan anyway. Letting go of the girl, you give her some space. "Are you hungry?"
The girl looks at you for a moment before her face lights up in comprehension. "Onii-chan!" She cries out in joy, a huge smile on her face. Then she blushes and looks down again. "Oh, um… sorry, I…"
"It's fine. Call me what you want." You say, guessing the reason for her hesitance. "Answer the question."
The girl opens her mouth but before she can say anything there was a loud growling from her tummy. She closes her mouth, blushes and nods.
Nodding yourself, you get up and head the room with the food, the girl getting up to follow you without being told to. You pull the plate of food from the cold box and hand it to her.
She looks at it for a moment before shrugging. "Apples and salmon? Okay." She looks up at you with a smile. "Thanks Onii-chan!" She says as she rushes back to the main room to sit down.
You follow and sit across the table from her. "Don't waste any." You instruct. She's already started to eat so she just nods instead of opening up her mouth. As you watch her eat you realize you've forgotten something. "What's you name?"
She pauses in the middle of placing a piece of meat in her mouth. She quickly swallows it. "Nagisa Momoe!" She answers cheerfully.
"I'm Tatsuya." She smiles at you again, which you're learning that you much prefer to her crying, and continues eating. It's… hard to look away from.
[Tatsuya?]
You leap up from the table in alarm, looking around the room frantically. You can feel your power rise up, waiting for you to use it. You're chair clatters to the floor and Nagisa flinches. Still, despite your panic at being ambushed, you recognize the voice.
"Mami?" You ask cautiously, not seeing her anywhere.
[Oh, good! I wasn't sure this would work since you're not technically a Magical Girl. I'm talking to you telepathically!]
Tele…? Ryubey said that word last night as well. "What?"
[Ah, right. It means were talking mind to mind. Don't worry, I can't read your mind or anything. Why don't you try it?]
"Tatsu-nii?" Nagisa's asks with concern.
"Just a moment Nagisa." You don't have the ability to keep track of two conversations at once. She still looks worried but she hesitantly starts to eat her food again. Meanwhile, you turn your focus back to Mami. [You startled me.]
[Oh! I'm sorry, I didn't mean to. Anyway, I'm taking a break at school now so I thought I'd check on how you're doing.]
You pick you chair back up from where it's fallen and sit back down. [The dictionary didn't help.]
[I was afraid of that. Still, it couldn't hurt to try. Anyway, I'll be done school in a few hours. What will you be doing in the meantime?]
[] Practicing Magic
[] Exploring the town
[] Talking with Nagisa
[] Something else? (Write in)
Wooo! Update!
So, I did some looking and @akrasiel23 has two threadmarked Omakes, so he can request two omakes from me whenever. Also, looking back, I'm finding that I made Tatsuya too talky. Hopefully, with more experiance under my belt I've been able to capture his personality and warped world view better.
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AuraTwilight
The Sorcerer of Smiles
- Location
- The Silver City
[q] Uh btw Mami I got you a kid.
- Location
- Pittsburgh, PA
Good to see this up again. Unfortunately, I'm too drained to vote. If it's still open tomorrow, I'll try to get one in, but right now I'm finishing up and then crashing.
akrasiel23
A wraith no more
- Location
- Peru
Obligatory.
InfiniteDaze
Too lazy to leave the house
- Location
- I wish I could stay
[JK] Uh, things.
-[JK] Find a thing.
[X] Exploring the town
-[JK] Find a thing.
[X] Exploring the town
- Location
- Bowling Green
[X] Talking with Nagisa
akrasiel23
A wraith no more
- Location
- Peru
[X] Practicing Magic
-[X] Maybe convince Nagisa to practice with you?
Admitedly not a really elaborate vote so I might change it if someone proposes a better one.
-[X] Maybe convince Nagisa to practice with you?
Admitedly not a really elaborate vote so I might change it if someone proposes a better one.
[X] Practicing Magic
-[X] While you're at it, check if the telepathic connection allows you to get a read on Mami with your magic sense.
-[X] Maybe convince Nagisa to practice with you?
--[X] For instance, ask her to use her magic and see what it looks like to your magic sense.
-[X] While you're at it, check if the telepathic connection allows you to get a read on Mami with your magic sense.
-[X] Maybe convince Nagisa to practice with you?
--[X] For instance, ask her to use her magic and see what it looks like to your magic sense.
Hyp3rB14d3
Gotta catch 'em all!
[x] Kidnapping children.
Nagisa needs friends.
Nagisa needs friends.
Hyp3rB14d3
Gotta catch 'em all!
box of coldness
RexHeller
Title Incoming. Please Hold.
- Location
- Somewhere else.
akrasiel23
A wraith no more
- Location
- Peru
[X] Practicing Magic
-[X] While you're at it, check if the telepathic connection allows you to get a read on Mami with your magic sense.
-[X] Don't forget to ask Mami if she learned anything about that girl Homura.
-[X] Maybe convince Nagisa to practice with you?
--[X] For instance, ask her to use her magic and see what it looks like to your magic sense.
Madoka or Sayaka should have told Mami anything about the transfer student and we did asked her about Homura in the morning.
-[X] While you're at it, check if the telepathic connection allows you to get a read on Mami with your magic sense.
-[X] Don't forget to ask Mami if she learned anything about that girl Homura.
-[X] Maybe convince Nagisa to practice with you?
--[X] For instance, ask her to use her magic and see what it looks like to your magic sense.
Madoka or Sayaka should have told Mami anything about the transfer student and we did asked her about Homura in the morning.
] Accidentally Kidnapping Children by Mistake. What is Social? Is it something you Eat?
- Location
- Pittsburgh, PA
[X] Practicing Magic
-[X] While you're at it, check if the telepathic connection allows you to get a read on Mami with your magic sense.
-[X] Maybe convince Nagisa to practice with you?
--[X] For instance, ask her to use her magic and see what it looks like to your magic sense.
-[X] While you're at it, check if the telepathic connection allows you to get a read on Mami with your magic sense.
-[X] Maybe convince Nagisa to practice with you?
--[X] For instance, ask her to use her magic and see what it looks like to your magic sense.
