Is Louise not the perfect heir?

Except for that whole pesky undying loyalty to Henrietta thing.
Loyalty to the crown is a useful trait though. Particularly when it gets you a crown.
Their unimportant, so the narrativium cant effect them much until they are important, which is usually when they are far outside their depths and thus arnt metagaming.
But they're not unimportant. As part of the Heroic Party, they're still easily in the top 10 of most important characters in the story. Probably.

I'm not certain how to sort everyone beyond Louise being 1 and Henriette being 2. Wardes is my top pick for 3 though.
 
Loyalty to the crown is a useful trait though. Particularly when it gets you a crown.

But they're not unimportant. As part of the Heroic Party, they're still easily in the top 10 of most important characters in the story. Probably.

I'm not certain how to sort everyone beyond Louise being 1 and Henriette being 2. Wardes is my top pick for 3 though.

Gnarl is number 2. He's the primary, subtle driving force behind Louise's evil.
 
Gnarl is number 2. He's the primary, subtle driving force behind Louise's evil.
Calling Gnarl a driving force feels inaccurate. He's merely the person who somehow is always in the passenger seat before anyone can call shotgun. He holds the map, buys snacks when everyone else is in the restrooms or filling up the tank, and points out all the neat things on the side of the road. Anyone who is worthy to be an Overperson is not someone you drive, even if you're Gnarl.

And now I've got a mental image of Louise driving a minivan, helmet on, and screaming bowdlerized swears in a fit of road rage. Gnarl is in the passenger seat happy as can be, Jessica is squished between Catt and Henriette in the middle row, and the back is stuffed with animal carriers stuffed with minions and wolfies.
 
Calling Gnarl a driving force feels inaccurate. He's merely the person who somehow is always in the passenger seat before anyone can call shotgun. He holds the map, buys snacks when everyone else is in the restrooms or filling up the tank, and points out all the neat things on the side of the road. Anyone who is worthy to be an Overperson is not someone you drive, even if you're Gnarl.

And now I've got a mental image of Louise driving a minivan, helmet on, and screaming bowdlerized swears in a fit of road rage. Gnarl is in the passenger seat happy as can be, Jessica is squished between Catt and Henriette in the middle row, and the back is stuffed with animal carriers stuffed with minions and wolfies.

"No we are not calling it the Nefarious Van."
 
Like Louise would be caught dead in anything short of a really nice, high-level soccer mom, minivan. With all the optional features because Founder knows that she's going to need all the integrated tvs and cup holders to keep the backseat annoyances, and Henrietta, occupied. The easy to remove back seating makes it so she can cram in Minions and vampiric thralls when on business and put the stuff back in case she ever needs to move her sister's maids. Plus she's a noble and isn't going to ride in some shady looking vehicle if she can help it.
 
Louise and Henriette seem like they'd be, in Evil language, worse parents than their own. Though Henriette's father did quite a bit for her, so he's probably a gold standard.

I'm sure Louise would make for a fantastic parent. I mean, it's not like she's developed a habit of kicking small, child sized creatures down stairwells whenever they annoy her, or regularly uses torture and threats of torture to maintain discipline.
 
Oh drat, I've caught up and the Henrietta thing still hasn't been directly addressed. I didn't really care when I started but at this point that's one of two plot points coming to fruition that have kept me reading, the other being horribly lategame and therefor I don't hope to see any time soon.

Louise deserves something happy in her life, even if it is a necromancy obsessed princess. Maybe she could do better but with her current options it's Henrietta or the kiss of life and personally I'm rooting for Henrietta. The kiss of life doesn't wash off.
 
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I did catched up a while ago but was far too lazy to write something. I think ES did a good job to make mostly the humor of the Overlord-games, which I like a lot. I even like the cast from Zero no Tsukaima in this story more, than within the original Novel/Anime. The heck I even root for Luise and her plans and even for the Henrietta option and that shows me that ES does a good job. OK enough of this flattery.

I look forward for new updates someday and dont screw it up or I will write a bad review and scold you with much sugar and such things. :V
 
More Overlady Fanart, by Arcus
Okay so I know we're on hiatus but have this thingy that I spent too much time on. I wanted to colour and shade it but colour is incredibly painful and time consuming. Maybe later.

Tried to be a bit closer to the original description this time, what with the robe/tabard thing. I missed the hood though.

Before her stood a robed and armoured figure. The robe was the first thing to catch the eye, and seemed to be based on the black robe she had worn to this meeting. This one, however, was in a deep, bloody crimson. And there were other differences. The robe was merely knee-length and short in the sleeve, well-placed cuts added to prevent it from reducing her ability to run. The hood was full, and cast the face in half-shadow, exposing only the mouth. Leaning in, squinting, Louise realised that somehow, the cut of the robe suggested cleavage that did not exactly exist, playing at the figure underneath. Where she went in, the robe followed closely, but where things went up and down it billowed, in a deception of well-cut fabric.

And rather than exposed flesh under the garment, there was steel. Dull, sullied steel which glinted in the hellish light from the windows. It wrapped every limb tightly, and under the opened robe there was plate which implied figure-hugging while not actually doing so. Even the heels were armoured. With a giggle at the expression on Louise's face, Jessica threw back the hood, to reveal the helmet underneath. Somehow the shadows clung to it too, still-shrouding half the face in a horned helmet which brought to mind both beasts and crowns.

And an alternate version without the helmet covering up Louise's face:


EDIT: Reuploaded in better resolution/more visible lineart.

I did mention colour, didn't I. Honestly I'm not entirely satisfied with this but here you go anyway:


 
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SPOILERS! They are huge!
They are also well made. Good job!
 
Okay so I know we're on hiatus but have this thingy that I spent too much time on. I wanted to colour and shade it but colour is incredibly painful and time consuming. Maybe later.

Tried to be a bit closer to the original description this time, what with the robe/tabard thing. I missed the hood though.



And an alternate version without the helmet covering up Louise's face:

Hey hey! Nice job dude, lovely.
 
Don't worry. If you spoiler them they can be as big as you want.
 
I now fully understand why Mott was flirting with Louise all that time ago. Louise is so adorable for a malevolent force of Evil. Also that Lee has magnificent taste. Whoever ends up with her is gonna be a very lucky lad (or lady).
 
I now fully understand why Mott was flirting with Louise all that time ago. Louise is so adorable for a malevolent force of Evil. Also that Lee has magnificent taste. Whoever ends up with her is gonna be a very lucky lad (or lady).

I mean, she's a Valliere. They're like cats, as Kirche noted. Centuries of selective breeding to ensure they're good at looking pretty (and/or cute, in Louise's case), right up until they melt your face off with magical acid.

The downside of that is that Louise needs to try very hard to look intimidating. Even with the armour and helmet, she still has the build of someone who's only slightly over 5 feet tall (without heels).

Which is where the magical face melting acid comes in.
 
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