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(Old) DB Quest: No Longer Active

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[X] Warn him.
-[X] "Expecting visitors?"
[X] Colourful t-shirt and shorts (Hawaiian)

Can't resist double write ins. But it seems good.
 
I wonder why people are trying to warn him. I mean, unless he can sense power levels or you guys think this version of humans have scouters I don't see the logic here. I understand Soko's logic, but not your guys.
 
The logic I'm using is quite simple. We've identified a potential threat,and we're communicating it,just in case others missed it,and in the hopes that Sean can give us much-needed context. Basic survival.
 
[X] Warn him.
-[X] "Expecting visitors?"
[X] Colourful t-shirt and shorts (Hawaiian)

I can get behind the Hawaiian look.

Nice quest btw.
 
LightningShow said:
Thank you! It means a lot to me, honestly.
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Credit where credit is due. I also like that you're taking it slow and starting Dragon Ball-ish. It was my favorite era of the franchise, Z was a bit... much sometimes in the later seasons and I've never gotten around to checking out Super besides the movies and what I've seen at a friend's house.
 
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HavocKeeper said:
Credit where credit is due. I also like that you're taking it slow and starting Dragon Ball-ish. It was my favorite era of the franchise, Z was a bit... much sometimes in the later seasons and I've never gotten around to checking out Super besides the movies and what I've seen at a friend's house.
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Yeah, I quite enjoy the original Dragon Ball, the adventure and the thrill. How for a majority of the time things weren't super serious, until a certain woodwind instrument came along. Funnily enough I didn't actually watch through that until just last year.
 
Outfit and plan of action count separately.
Adhoc vote count started by on May 15, 2018 at 7:51 PM, finished with 21 posts and 11 votes.
  • [X] Warn him.
    -[X] "Expecting visitors?"
    [X] Colourful t-shirt and shorts (Hawaiian)
    [X] Maybe they aren't exactly bad, don't jump to a conclusion
    [X] A colorful t-shirt and shorts. (Hawaiian clothes)
    [X] Warn Sean
    [X] White tee shirt, jeans, and sneakers.
    [X] Walk outside to see for yourself, this'll be a fine chance to get used to the gravity.
    [X] A colorful t-shirt and shorts. (Hawaiian clothes)
    [X] Warn Sean
    -[X] "So, were you expecting visitors?"
    [X] Pink button-up shirt with blocky lettering on the back, white undershirt, yellow pants, and green sneakers.
    [X] Maybe they aren't exactly bad, don't jump to a conclusion
    [X] A black hoodie with a white T-shirt, tan khaki's and white sneakers
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Lightning's Tally!

[x] Warn Sean/Him!
-[x] "Expecting Visitors?

6 Voters, @Riddle78 @ExNihilo @veekie @KnightDisciple @HavocKeeper @Pi In The Sky



[X] Warn Sean

1 Voter, @Ultramandalore

[x] Walk Outside for Youreself

1 Voter, @VagueZ


[x] Maybe they aren't all that bad.

3 Voters, @DarkKing98 @QueenPally @toxinvictory



Outfit votes!


[x] Colorful Tee-shirt and shorts(Hawaiian)

8 Voters.


[x] White Tee Shirt and Jeans,

1 Voter.


[x] Black hoodie

1 Voter


[x] Badman Outfit

1 Voter





VOTE IS CLOSED.

Winning Votes:

[x] Warn Sean.
-[x] "Were you expecting visitors?"


[x] Colorful tee and shorts.


Don't expect this update to be quick. I'm going to start making better quality updates. I also refuse to have too much filler.
 
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LightningShow said:
I also refuse to have too much filler.
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Dude, here's the great thing about quests. Filler doesn't exist. Every single line can be used in the future or referenced. Down time? Character establishment. Action? The exciting part of plot. In a half competent writers hands, EVERYTHING is able to be used to build the world and plot of the story.
 
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Supreme Leader Masba and the Dragon Balls
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    -[x] "Were you expecting visitors?"

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    Supreme Leader Masba and the Dragon Balls​

    "Hey, Sean? Were, you um, expecting any visitors?"

    The commotion in the kitchen stops almost instantly after he says that. He turns around, placing the knife on the counter with a concerned look on his face as he moves with haste towards the windows. He places a hand into the blinds, and opens them enough to take a glimpse of the outside.

    He then takes a look at your scouter, and nods to himself.

    He begins to speak in a hurried, almost panicked voice, "    I knew they'd find me but I didn't think it'd be this soon. Dammit all. . . Grab your capsules, I've got some that have food in it. Go down the hallway and turn to the right into the bedroom and wait for me."

    You exchange glances with Chaya, and then one with Colby. The two of them nod at you and you all begin to move down the hallway. Your steps are a lot faster than they were before, must be getting used to the gravitational force.

    The three of you make it to the room, and you hear Sean's footsteps behind you. He enters the room, holding what appears to be a rifle. He then shuts the door behind him, and locks the bolt on it. Moving fast, he jogs over towards the bedside table, throwing his rifle over his shoulder. He pushes the table out of the way, revealing a pinpad. He presses in a combination.

    With a puff of smoke, the bed disappears into a capsule which he catches nimbly. Where the bed used to be sits a metal cellar door, which is currently lifting itself into the air revealing steps. He begins to move down them, waving for you to follow. Which the three of you do. After you follow, he presses a combination into another pin pad, causing the cellar door to shut.

    "    As I said, only person who knows about me and what I may have been up to should be my father. But, my father has enemies. And by extension, so do I. Your device warning you like that makes me think that someone who shouldn't know of what I've been up has found me. Or, they saw you three land and are on the trail."

    He turns around, placing his rifle in his hands again and starting to     move down the corridor. You follow after him. Your footsteps sound out down the metal corridor as the four of you run down it. You eventually find yourself taking a left followed by a right and then a few more turns that you couldn't remember if you tried.

    And soon enough, you find yourself at another set of stairs. He starts up them, and you follow. Once again, another pin pad and another door opens. The four of you all exit, and then he shuts the door.

    "    Alright, we're up over the cabin now. Stay low and follow me again, I need to verify who that is. This could be bad, and I'd hate to have to do what I think I need to do."

    The four of you crouch down, and creep over to the mountain side, glancing down at the valley below. You take a breath and harness your ki to sharpen your senses.

    Whoom.

    You see several people about the cabin, dressed in uniform manner. It's a camoflauge, meant to blend in with the forest. Several vehicles sit about. You verifiy that all save for one individual are human. That individual looks to be a beast race, but not the leader.

    He stands out, being taller than everyone around him. His dark brown hair put into a loose half-pony. You make out a beard on the fellow, and beady grey eyes. He's dressed in what seems to be some form of robes, though you can tell that they're loose and meant to be very easy to move in. This man is a fighter, you can tell that much.

    "Supreme Leader Masba! There's no signs of him or his Dragon Scouter!"

    The man in the robes, Masba it would seem, nods.

    "    The engine on that jeep's still hot. They didn't get far. Check everywhere. And keep an eye out for the artifact. I want every square inch of this cabin searched. Be careful, his tire tracks lead from where something landed. He's either not alone, or has something dangerous with him."

    "Yes Supreme Leader!" His men shout out to him, getting about their various tasks.

    However, the beast person and a woman stand next to him. His two seconds, you assume.

    The beast person, you've noticed, is occasionally glancing up in your direction and is speaking quietly enough that even with you ki enhanced senses, you can't hear them.

    ----Whoosh.

    And you let the senses fall back to normal, looking at Sean as you back away.

    "    We need to move, the beast person's onto us."

    Sean gives you a confused look, and then nods. The four of you back off and begin to move through the forest.

    "    I'm assuming you have better sight and hearing than I do. I think I know who that was. Which means we need to get back to Earth, fast."

    "    The name Supreme Leader Masba ring any bells?" You question him.

    He nods, a serious look on his face, "    He's the leader of a rebel force against Earth and Indran's government. And saying as freely he's able to move between both? This is bad," Sean lets out a sigh, thinking something over as he walks, "You really choose the wrong time to land here."

    You nod, when Chaya makes a remark.

    "    What's that he said about a Dragon Scouter?"

    Sean's eyes narrow as he stops. It's clear that he's thinking about something important, and then he finally grabs onto the watch around his neck, and speaks, "    This is the Dragon Scouter. It's useless here, either what I'm looking for isn't here, or it's not tuned in right. It's meant to find Dragon Balls. Legend has it that there are seven in all, you collect them and a dragon will appear to grant you anything you could ever want. I may be in over my head on this now, and I would have wanted to ask for help or a way to stop Masba. Maybe I've got it now."

    Dragon Balls, hm? Well, that was just broadcasted to the Fleet for anyone who's listening.

    "And the artifact?" You question him.

    "    My father was looking for something here, there was a high energy spike and then it vanished. I came here to find it. Before my dad and his apprentice could. Just in case. I found it, but it doesn't matter now. It's in a capsule in my bag with some layering over it to keep it safe from sensors. We need to move, and I hate to say that your stay on Indran'll be short, but we need to get to Earth and find the Dragon Balls before Masba does. He found me, he can find the Dragon Balls. Gravity's also a little better over there, but not by too much."


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    You, Chaya, Colby, and Sean were driven out of Sean's cabin by a man referred to as 'Supreme Leader Masba', a man who's hunting Sean and by extension, yourself. You learned about these 'wish granting' Dragon Balls, and an artifact that could be of use to the Saiyan Fleet from Sean.

    What's the course of action, Princess?



    [] We need to trust you Sean, if you want us to work with you. Tell us everything you know about the artifact and the Dragon Balls. If Masba's as bad as you say, we need to know if you're someone to stay on the same side of.

    [] We're here, and so's he. Maybe we can take him on now. Play it smart, careful. Take his men down one by one and then capture him and turn him over to the government. Sean, you would be a hero and it'd be a great way for us to introduce ourselves as allies to your people.
    -[] Write in a plan of action.

    [] I don't trust you, Sean. I'm going to go and see what he's all about myself.

    [] I don't want to be caught up in any of this, I just want to get stronger. Indran has better gravity. We stay here.

    [] Write-In!




    Ladies and gentleman, our first potential antagonists have arisen. From here, the quest shall be in full motion and if I never said it was prior, the 'tutorial' is over. Testing is down other than moratoriums.


    Speaking of. . .

    MANUAL MORATORIUM.

    VOTING IS CLOSED UNTIL I UNLOCK IT IN THE INTEREST OF ENCOURAGING DISCUSSION.
     
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    I believe we've found the most valuable possible prize. Seriously, what else could possibly compare to a wish? Let's go with Sean.
     
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    I feel like Soko would stick with Sean, at least until she sees if this whole "wish granting" things pans out. Wishing for a new planet would be a mighty big thing to help the Fleet.

    Also, I get a lot of "Trunks" vibes from Sean.
     
    so "Supreme Leader Masba" is more or less just Emperor Pilaf right? we should just run over and kick his ass, we can take him.
     
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