Not Your Kind Of People (A Superhero Quest)

[X] You want to be the kind of hero that inspires wonder and awe. It feels silly to think back to the period when you were eleven and thought wizards with swords were the coolest thing ever, but it's that sort of vibe you have on your mind, coupled with Florence apparently being some kind of summoner complete with a staff and the nanoforge's aborted attempt to say something about electromagnetic fields. Maybe you won't be conjuring lasers but if that magnetic blade was any indication the nanoforge could give you plenty more to throw.

Wizard with a sword is unmistakably 1000% kickass. Hell yes magnetic sword-cannon halo nonsense let's get that shit.

[X] Caio sucks but he has broadly similar powers to yours -kinda- so if you're gonna listen to anyone in that regard it should probably be him. Try to balance fundamentals with flashy shit.

I appreciate the street level violence and practicality but if you're going to fuck up alien robot wizard mutants you've gotta get used to utter nonsense like "fuck gravity, it's opposite gravity now" and that's about when knowing how to set your feet takes second place to "do you have sick rocket boots."
 
[x] You want to be the kind of hero that leaves everyone else in the dust and looks good doing it. Not just fast but agile, athletic, acrobatic, you've seen how female heroes tend to fight in the movies and videos and had joint pains just thinking about trying to emulate that. But if any personal trainer can teach you to move and bend like that it's the nanoforge, and if the suit already looks like a weird high-tech spandex bodysuit why not lean into it?

digitrade legs baby
also lose some weight, get all sleek

edit: To justify this vote a bit more, I think the capacity and exploration of movement is the most visceral of the options. Nanoforges and lasers are sick and being a literal tank is cool, but I think theres more to feel with a focus on thd body in motion.
 
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[X] You want to be the kind of hero that inspires wonder and awe. It feels silly to think back to the period when you were eleven and thought wizards with swords were the coolest thing ever, but it's that sort of vibe you have on your mind, coupled with Florence apparently being some kind of summoner complete with a staff and the nanoforge's aborted attempt to say something about electromagnetic fields. Maybe you won't be conjuring lasers but if that magnetic blade was any indication the nanoforge could give you plenty more to throw.


[X] Florence has the air of someone with experience, no just on the ground but in the guts of the no-shit actual hero industry. You can't help but feel she has the most forward-thinking advice for you. Focus on what makes you stand out.

Tis I, long away from Zerbanquests but now returned to reap a harvest of likes for stupid puns! Now then, allow me to explain my reasonings here.

Our protagonist has labored under an uncaring world of hard labor and harsh realities that go against what seems obviously to me to be a creative mind that got tightly wrapped in tape and sent to drown in the lake of reality. While there is undoubtedly value in taking a well traveled path and following the fundamentals to the core, I think that at the same time there's something to be said about using this new lease on life to, quite literally, experiment with our identity. Try new things, take risks, ask questions about our own capabilities and see what answers we can think up.

I think that gradually any of these approaches will be tempered by reality and come towards a median, but I'm interested to see how far our imagination and our technological leg up can carry us.

Wait shit I need to make a stupid pun.

Uh.

I guess in the end no matter what Caio does to rile us up, it's really Nano've his business what we do.

(Saved it)
 
[X] You want to be the kind of hero that inspires wonder and awe. It feels silly to think back to the period when you were eleven and thought wizards with swords were the coolest thing ever, but it's that sort of vibe you have on your mind, coupled with Florence apparently being some kind of summoner complete with a staff and the nanoforge's aborted attempt to say something about electromagnetic fields. Maybe you won't be conjuring lasers but if that magnetic blade was any indication the nanoforge could give you plenty more to throw.
[X] Florence has the air of someone with experience, no just on the ground but in the guts of the no-shit actual hero industry. You can't help but feel she has the most forward-thinking advice for you. Focus on what makes you stand out.

When you have superpowers and want to be a hero, standing out is good. Earns regard, maybe even acclaim. Inspiration.
 
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It feels so much like you're wearing nothing at all,
Stupid Sexy Flanders!
He doesn't really take a combat stance so much as stand there with his weight resting on his back heel, tentacles curling around him to present half a dozen noodly targets.
Someone is about to be touched by their noodly appendage. Ramen.

"S'not my fault nobody has any goddamn taste in this town," Caio grumbles, folding his arms petulantly.
Found the monsterfucker! 50% chance he doesn't look like that because he has no choice, but because he thinks it was hot as hell.
[X] You want to be the kind of hero that inspires wonder and awe. It feels silly to think back to the period when you were eleven and thought wizards with swords were the coolest thing ever, but it's that sort of vibe you have on your mind, coupled with Florence apparently being some kind of summoner complete with a staff and the nanoforge's aborted attempt to say something about electromagnetic fields. Maybe you won't be conjuring lasers but if that magnetic blade was any indication the nanoforge could give you plenty more to throw.
[X] Florence has the air of someone with experience, no just on the ground but in the guts of the no-shit actual hero industry. You can't help but feel she has the most forward-thinking advice for you. Focus on what makes you stand out.

This place really feels like it needs some inspiration. Let's give people the kind of hero that can give him that kind of hope.
 
[X] You want to be the kind of hero that leaves everyone else in the dust and looks good doing it. Not just fast but agile, athletic, acrobatic, you've seen how female heroes tend to fight in the movies and videos and had joint pains just thinking about trying to emulate that. But if any personal trainer can teach you to move and bend like that it's the nanoforge, and if the suit already looks like a weird high-tech spandex bodysuit why not lean into it?

[X] Jae-yoon's probably right. You'll be no good to anyone if you get caught off guard and freeze up again like you did against that robot. You should focus on learning to fight before looking good.
 
[X] You want to be the kind of hero that leaves everyone else in the dust and looks good doing it. Not just fast but agile, athletic, acrobatic, you've seen how female heroes tend to fight in the movies and videos and had joint pains just thinking about trying to emulate that. But if any personal trainer can teach you to move and bend like that it's the nanoforge, and if the suit already looks like a weird high-tech spandex bodysuit why not lean into it?

Because I like the aesthetic of that whole free movement, wall running, back handspring doing combat style. Or to put it another way, Yes Alex You CAN Be The Lucha Libre.

[X] Florence has the air of someone with experience, no just on the ground but in the guts of the no-shit actual hero industry. You can't help but feel she has the most forward-thinking advice for you. Focus on what makes you stand out.

Yes Florence, become our mentor, take us in the image and branding side, give us tips about spin, pull out your business card so we can marvel at its tasteful off white coloring, it's even got a watermark for Christ's sake.
 
[X] Jae-yoon's probably right. You'll be no good to anyone if you get caught off guard and freeze up again like you did against that robot. You should focus on learning to fight before looking good.
[X] You want to be the kind of hero that can stand tall on the front lines and take a beating. Maybe you'll never be as strong or as tough as someone like Katarina, but close, and 'close' to something that viscerally impressive would be pretty great. The kind of hero that can protect people with their own bodies if they have to. You imagine that'll involve stuff like thicker armour on the suit, better strength-enhancers, maybe get wild and have an energy shield or something.
 
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[X] You want to be the kind of hero that inspires wonder and awe. It feels silly to think back to the period when you were eleven and thought wizards with swords were the coolest thing ever, but it's that sort of vibe you have on your mind, coupled with Florence apparently being some kind of summoner complete with a staff and the nanoforge's aborted attempt to say something about electromagnetic fields. Maybe you won't be conjuring lasers but if that magnetic blade was any indication the nanoforge could give you plenty more to throw.

[X] Caio sucks but he has broadly similar powers to yours -kinda- so if you're gonna listen to anyone in that regard it should probably be him. Try to balance fundamentals with flashy shit.

Wizard with sword, hell yeah! The feather blade was an incredibly cool image. Also, we already did the speedster thing in Zerban's Shadowrun quest, it was fun but let's try something else this time. Which reminds me that I should go back and reread Zerban's Shadowrun quest.
 
[x] You want to be the kind of hero that leaves everyone else in the dust and looks good doing it. Not just fast but agile, athletic, acrobatic, you've seen how female heroes tend to fight in the movies and videos and had joint pains just thinking about trying to emulate that. But if any personal trainer can teach you to move and bend like that it's the nanoforge, and if the suit already looks like a weird high-tech spandex bodysuit why not lean into it?

this says to me, we'll be like all those dumb-cool kung-fu movies I love

[X] Caio sucks but he has broadly similar powers to yours -kinda- so if you're gonna listen to anyone in that regard it should probably be him. Try to balance fundamentals with flashy shit.
 
[X] You want to be the kind of hero that leaves everyone else in the dust and looks good doing it. Not just fast but agile, athletic, acrobatic, you've seen how female heroes tend to fight in the movies and videos and had joint pains just thinking about trying to emulate that. But if any personal trainer can teach you to move and bend like that it's the nanoforge, and if the suit already looks like a weird high-tech spandex bodysuit why not lean into it?
[X] Florence has the air of someone with experience, no just on the ground but in the guts of the no-shit actual hero industry. You can't help but feel she has the most forward-thinking advice for you. Focus on what makes you stand out.

It's a marketing game, because of course it is. What makes you special, what makes you stand out, what makes you interesting? Youse a superhero; not a soldier. So let's lean on that.

...also we must become the nanoforge spandex enby. e m b r a c e i t
 
[X] You want to be the kind of hero that inspires wonder and awe. It feels silly to think back to the period when you were eleven and thought wizards with swords were the coolest thing ever, but it's that sort of vibe you have on your mind, coupled with Florence apparently being some kind of summoner complete with a staff and the nanoforge's aborted attempt to say something about electromagnetic fields. Maybe you won't be conjuring lasers but if that magnetic blade was any indication the nanoforge could give you plenty more to throw.

[X] Florence has the air of someone with experience, no just on the ground but in the guts of the no-shit actual hero industry. You can't help but feel she has the most forward-thinking advice for you. Focus on what makes you stand out.
 
You hear Caio coming in just as Florence at last reveals that her collapsible baton cane thing is in fact a staff, telescoping it to its full length of about six feet and immediately assaulting Jae-yoon with it. She wields it with practiced ease, twirling and shifting its weight between her hands expertly as she sends both ends whizzing through the air to strike Jae-yoon again and again. He matches her blow for blow, smacking aside the staff with forearms and elbows until the unspoken turning point comes and he goes on the offensive instead. There's a certain sense of momentum that comes from his movements you didn't see in Florence, a fluid grace and efficiency that tells you almost instantly who is the more dangerous fighter. Clack clack clack goes Florence's staff as she diverts Jae-yoon's strikes again and again, smoothly backing up all the while, but while her face is a stony mask of concentration his is strangely carefree. She may see it as a necessary chore, but he enjoys it.
You idly consider 'accidentally' slipping and hitting him a good half-dozen times for those comments earlier. You doubt you actually will but it's an enjoyable thought. Jae-yoon seems amused, though whether it's because he can guess what you're thinking about or something else you can't say. He simply nods and moves aside, beckoning for Caio to come take his place. The big guy waddles into position like he's preoccupied wondering why you picked him, but willing to go with it all the same. He doesn't really take a combat stance so much as stand there with his weight resting on his back heel, tentacles curling around him to present half a dozen noodly targets. Jae-yoon demonstrates a sequence of punches, kicks, dodges and blocks, each performed in slow motion and narrated for your benefit. Caio tunes out, idly thrusting his entire hand into his own chest cavity to fish his phone out of the biomass -protected by a waterproof case of course- and play around with it while Jae-yoon smacks the tentacles around. You double-take but, perhaps thankfully, it goes unnoticed thanks to the visor.
"This... nanoforge, you called it? It's your strongest asset, lean on it," Florence says. "It's flashy, it's flexible, it's distinctive, it's even marketable. Certainly more than Caio's casual body horror."

"S'not my fault nobody has any goddamn taste in this town," Caio grumbles, folding his arms petulantly.

"Fundamentals may win you fights but being a superhero is about more than winning one brawl at a time," Florence goes on. "We already have people who punch and kick. You need to stand out if you want to make it in this business."

Well, that explains Katarina being touchy about wanting to use the team as a stepping stone to get a 'real job'. She just wanted to yell at Florence but you were closer.

Just pulling snippets that really leaped out at me as Alex gradually sinks into the uh- let's be real charitable and call it a morass of a group dynamic. We got the broad strokes earlier and some of its borne out here sure, but there's a few things that really interest me and I wanted to kinda draw a highlighter through in no particular order. One is that Katarina's antipathy for Florence isn't wholly one sided, it's reciprocated to a degree. It's just that Florence is way more politic about how she words it, with that kind of faint disdain and bland, implicit dismissal where you could almost totally gloss it over- Alex almost does gloss it over, even but they talked to Katarina previously. And you can really get some of the sketch of their relationship because Katarina is both an absolute brick and ridiculously easy to antagonize. And Florence seems all slick and PR-professional and normally very in control over herself.

Which would probably piss off Katarina more 'cause she doesn't seem to be the kinda person to take "the person you're arguing with is seemingly unbothered" all that great.

The second thing is that this update leans a bit harder on Jae-yoon's on ambiguity. Liking fighting or respecting his teammate's privacy aren't damning mortal sins or anything, but it's the way they're contextualized with how smoothly he elides avenues of conversation he doesn't want to continute or encourage, and how he keeps such a tight leash on his own personal details. He hasn't been rude to Alex at all. He hasn't even been chilly or overly formal or dismissive. He was quite nice to them actually, did a lot to make them feel welcome and shushed Caio when he was beating the joke past the initial delivery. It's not- I guess to articulate it more clearly it's not that he reads as malevolent or inherently deceptive, so much hard to say what's actually feeling about any given thing at any given time, 'cause he deliberately seems to hold people at a remove. And if they want to keep their secrets- hey fine by him.

Like I said around the last update I think? He's done very little grilling of Alex themselves, mostly just feeling out their abilities and familiarizing himself with their living situation.

The final thing is that Caio as the vote winner got a lot of focus this update and I kinda-

I find myself liking him (purely beyond the design I mean)? He gets fleshed out more in his physicality and body language and how he interacts with people. This sort of constant casual saunter that the narration doesn't allow the dignity of being effortlessly cool (for all that he can apparently square up with Katarina for some semi-serious training). A kind of laziness and lowkey tenor of self deprecation or the way he's allowed to be funny but not without being an incidental ass. The flashes of a kinda ironic pathos because man he's probably being glib but the reality of "alien bone cancer" had to be A Lot, plus the circumstances of his employment and dismissal in corporate security ('cause he sure ain't working for them now). And it's not that he's not trash exactly. It's precisely because his vibes are so rancid that like- I think the best way to describe it is that he might genuinely be trying to be nice to Alex. He probably even thinks he is, mean he's chatting with the newby and everything.

It's just that he's so Himself, if he has the self-awareness to realize he's fucking up he doesn't have the self-control to stop it.

"Well... I went through a lot of ideas back in the day. Y'know how it is, kids wanna be a different thing when they grow up every day, so who'd be able to settle on a superpower?" Your lips curl into a faint, crooked smile, thinking about sunny days at school pretending to blast your best friend of the time with an energy beam. It's like the golden glare wipes out everything but the broad shapes, the impressions, the feeling. You slowly lift your hand to the sky, making an arcane gesture and accompanying 'dooosh' noise with your mouth as you let fly with an imaginary laser beam. You don't remember his name. You don't remember what you had in common. You don't even remember his face.

You wonder how many people from school remember you. Is there anyone that remembers the name you hate, the face you try not to look at in the mirror? Or are you just a shape to them now. In and out of their lives like water through sand, not so much as a fingerprint left on who they are.

Man this was a beautifully melancholy bit and I don't have much to say about it beyond the fact that it's just- got this wonderful emotional note to it. And works really well as a kinda thematic coda for the update, especially juxtaposed against Alex's new "friends". The new start of what's a new(ish) life.

[X] You want to be the kind of hero that inspires wonder and awe. It feels silly to think back to the period when you were eleven and thought wizards with swords were the coolest thing ever, but it's that sort of vibe you have on your mind, coupled with Florence apparently being some kind of summoner complete with a staff and the nanoforge's aborted attempt to say something about electromagnetic fields. Maybe you won't be conjuring lasers but if that magnetic blade was any indication the nanoforge could give you plenty more to throw.

Tempted by Titanfall shenanigans and I'll be pretty sanguine if that wins. I just thing the EM sword stuff was really cool. And I like the idea of leaning into our thing as the team's walking swiss army knife.

[X] Caio sucks but he has broadly similar powers to yours -kinda- so if you're gonna listen to anyone in that regard it should probably be him. Try to balance fundamentals with flashy shit.

I feel like this is lessssssss- less pure neutral medium and more trying to thread a jittering needle while wearing heavy leather gloves. 'Cause Caio isn't eloquent exactly but I don't think he's wrong either, the nature of the beast is Be Good At Most Everything At Least A Little All At Once All The Time. Also because I like the conflict and friction between the Alex who dutifully wants to learn their basics and the Alex who's constantly itching to just yeet themselves into the high end bullshit.
 
The nanoforge is my favorite character and Caio (who is awful) is a close second.

[X] You want to be the kind of hero that leaves everyone else in the dust and looks good doing it. Not just fast but agile, athletic, acrobatic, you've seen how female heroes tend to fight in the movies and videos and had joint pains just thinking about trying to emulate that. But if any personal trainer can teach you to move and bend like that it's the nanoforge, and if the suit already looks like a weird high-tech spandex bodysuit why not lean into it?
[X] Caio sucks but he has broadly similar powers to yours -kinda- so if you're gonna listen to anyone in that regard it should probably be him. Try to balance fundamentals with flashy shit.

I preemptively apologize for quoting Marvel Civil War but:

 
[X] You want to be the kind of hero that leaves everyone else in the dust and looks good doing it. Not just fast but agile, athletic, acrobatic, you've seen how female heroes tend to fight in the movies and videos and had joint pains just thinking about trying to emulate that. But if any personal trainer can teach you to move and bend like that it's the nanoforge, and if the suit already looks like a weird high-tech spandex bodysuit why not lean into it?
[X] Florence has the air of someone with experience, no just on the ground but in the guts of the no-shit actual hero industry. You can't help but feel she has the most forward-thinking advice for you. Focus on what makes you stand out.
 
"In the future, would you like me to respond automatically if directly addressed?" The nanoforge asks.

I do kinda wonder, what with how... absurdly omnicompetent the nanoforge is, if this won't end up being like- a prosthetic personality, especially given how much social anxiety Alex has. Some 'I have detected talking to people distresses you, would you like me to handle all social obligations-' and woops suddenly you're through The Scary Door and your child is saying 'i love you, parent' and hugging the robot.

[x] Florence has the air of someone with experience, no just on the ground but in the guts of the no-shit actual hero industry. You can't help but feel she has the most forward-thinking advice for you. Focus on what makes you stand out.

All that aside let's just lean on the nanoforge for all our combat skills. :V
 
[X] You want to be the kind of hero that leaves everyone else in the dust and looks good doing it. Not just fast but agile, athletic, acrobatic, you've seen how female heroes tend to fight in the movies and videos and had joint pains just thinking about trying to emulate that. But if any personal trainer can teach you to move and bend like that it's the nanoforge, and if the suit already looks like a weird high-tech spandex bodysuit why not lean into it?

[X] Caio sucks but he has broadly similar powers to yours -kinda- so if you're gonna listen to anyone in that regard it should probably be him. Try to balance fundamentals with flashy shit.
 
[X] You want to be the kind of hero that inspires wonder and awe. It feels silly to think back to the period when you were eleven and thought wizards with swords were the coolest thing ever, but it's that sort of vibe you have on your mind, coupled with Florence apparently being some kind of summoner complete with a staff and the nanoforge's aborted attempt to say something about electromagnetic fields. Maybe you won't be conjuring lasers but if that magnetic blade was any indication the nanoforge could give you plenty more to throw.

The other two options seem fairly vanilla? Interested to see what kinds of amusingly absurd abilities we can pull off with this spec.

[x] Florence has the air of someone with experience, no just on the ground but in the guts of the no-shit actual hero industry. You can't help but feel she has the most forward-thinking advice for you. Focus on what makes you stand out.

Glass cannon sounds more fun.
 
[X] You want to be the kind of hero that inspires wonder and awe. It feels silly to think back to the period when you were eleven and thought wizards with swords were the coolest thing ever, but it's that sort of vibe you have on your mind, coupled with Florence apparently being some kind of summoner complete with a staff and the nanoforge's aborted attempt to say something about electromagnetic fields. Maybe you won't be conjuring lasers but if that magnetic blade was any indication the nanoforge could give you plenty more to throw.
[X] Caio sucks but he has broadly similar powers to yours -kinda- so if you're gonna listen to anyone in that regard it should probably be him. Try to balance fundamentals with flashy shit.
 
[X] You want to be the kind of hero that inspires wonder and awe. It feels silly to think back to the period when you were eleven and thought wizards with swords were the coolest thing ever, but it's that sort of vibe you have on your mind, coupled with Florence apparently being some kind of summoner complete with a staff and the nanoforge's aborted attempt to say something about electromagnetic fields. Maybe you won't be conjuring lasers but if that magnetic blade was any indication the nanoforge could give you plenty more to throw.

[X] Caio sucks but he has broadly similar powers to yours -kinda- so if you're gonna listen to anyone in that regard it should probably be him. Try to balance fundamentals with flashy shit.
 
"I would require a tissue sample if you wish to know more about his condition," the nanoforge says helpfully. You make a face and hurriedly shake your head. Not the right message you wanna send right now.
"Analysis: you must give Caio the succ."
"Alex," the nanoforge says, starting you out of your downward spiral. You blink a few times.

"... (thanks.)"

"I am simply doing my job."
I really, really, really like the nanoforge, recognizing Alex going into a spiral and gently nudging them out of it is real sweet.
Florence reverses his momentum and brings the end of her staff whipping around for a downward, forceful strike. Jae-yoon crosses his arms raises them high, catching it before it can strike the crown of his head. They hold there for a moment, not even panting that you can see or hear, sharing a few words in the silence of a look. And then they part, arms down by their sides, and Jae-yoon hops from foot to foot momentarily to keep his energy up.

You think you saw a heat-haze rippling around Jae-yoon at the end there. But knowing nothing else about him, you keep your comments to yourself.
Hhhhuh, interesting. That might be one of the only like, genuine bits of personality that we've seen from Jae-yoon that aren't carefully curated in how he talks and acts, the fact that he really does seem to just enjoy the rush of fighting.

The heat-haze is pretty interesting too.
"(Why claws?)" you murmur in the confines of your helmet.

"Some materials are more vulnerable to lacerating or piercing trauma than blunt force. You may not have penetrated the scout drone's mass deeply enough to reach its core without them. Would you prefer I remove them from the template?"

"(... nah. I like them. Just curious.)"

"Saving preferences."
based, excellent taste alex
"Sequence recorded, displaying guide markers in augmented reality," the forge says out of the blue.

"(Isn't that cheating?)" you mutter as you cross the edge of the mat.

"The purpose of the exercise is to encode a series of fighting techniques into your long-term muscle memory via repetitious exercise. AR guide markers will merely accelerate the process."

"(... so you can't just encode the muscle memory for me with the brain nanites?)"

"No, because that would be cheating."
Nanoforge: "i do not have a personality, emotions are prohibited"

Also Nanoforge: "engaging snarky shit module"
"C'mon, slap my meat around," Caio says, wiggling his tentacles at you, "I promise it won't bite."
rancid.
"Sick," Caio says, ignoring the question and looking at you instead of the hologram. "Can you make tentacles like mine? How many nanomachines has that thing actually got in you or is it some kinda hypertech bullshit where it can make mass out of nowhere?"

"Caio, the drills..." Jae-yoon says in a friendly yet long-suffering manner.

"C'mon, there's no way I'm the only one that wants to see this. If we have another shapeshifter on the team I wanna see if he can take some of the shapeshifter jobs! Imagine if you had to keep remaking all your limbs constantly while working a nine-to-five. Do tentacles, do tentacles!"
God, Ten already dove into Caio's detail but I really do like his whole setup. I wonder if he was always kinda like this or if the "alien bone cancer" stuff eventually just got him to the point where he didn't give a fuck about acting the way he does because it's not like he's gonna freak people out any more with a first impression like he gives.

Also interesting is that he's able to shapeshift to an extent, a fairly handy one given that he's able to make straight up [Prototype] style weapons, but he's still locked into the monster mode presumably. I wonder how much control he actually has?
"I would advise against this form at present," the nanoforge chimes in. "Your brain is still in too delicate of a state to safely handle the neural load of extra limbs and other such extra-human capabilities, as well as straining my current stock of nanomaterials. However if you feel strongly about the subject I can make arrangements."

"(Sure, thanks,)" you mutter, blinking a few times to try and clear the dull ache behind your eyes. The burden seems to fade as the nano-tentacles dissolve and flow back into the forge. Caio, of course, is busy.

"Okay now do this one!" he says, his right arm transforming and merging into a massive cleaver-like blade from the elbow down. End-to-end the thing must almost be as big as you are, and the way the air seems to sing around the toxic green edge you can't help but imagine it carving straight through pretty much anything Caio had a mind to destroy. You lurch away from him as he gesticulates carelessly with it, and this time the process seems to go much smoother. You see a blade waving in your face and the first thing you want is another blade to knock it away with, and thinking of blades with this nanoforge threaded through your mind... the first thing you think of is one of Paragon's feathers.

You raise your hand and the air seems to distort around it, rippling and swirling in a heat haze as some kind of electromagnetic field blossoms around it. It feels like it's making all the bones and tendons in your hand vibrate slightly, but you forget about that part pretty quickly as you see silvery streams of nanites flow from your suit and coalesce into a long, thin silver blade that simply floats a inch from your fingertips like magic. You were going to put your foot down and try to think of something cool to say to Caio to make him back off, but now you're distracted and the moment's passed. You experimentally close your hand into a fist and the blade pulls back toward your knuckles like some kind of massive, high-tech punching dagger. You give it a slow, experimental swing, hearing the air sing around it and feeling the strange almost-but-not-quite resistance to it.
Yo this is kinda sick tho
"(Oh fuck me,)" you mutter to yourself.

"Eh I regenerate, who cares," says Caio. "So anyway-"
10/10, flawless
"Focus on what is possible. When goals are too grand and progress too incremental to see, the human mind can too easily see it as wasted effort and wish to give in. For now, set your sights on what we can achieve together in one day, each day. But allow yourself to dream as well."
Nanoforge good, it'd honestly be kinda hard to make me like it more-
"You really are trying to give me the ten years of therapy I needed for free, huh?" you remark, only half joking. "My bill for that's gonna end up bigger than all the nanotech at this rate."

"I do not recognise the concept of money."
UNIMAGINABLY BASED WE STAN

[X] You want to be the kind of hero that leaves everyone else in the dust and looks good doing it. Not just fast but agile, athletic, acrobatic, you've seen how female heroes tend to fight in the movies and videos and had joint pains just thinking about trying to emulate that. But if any personal trainer can teach you to move and bend like that it's the nanoforge, and if the suit already looks like a weird high-tech spandex bodysuit why not lean into it?
[X] Caio sucks but he has broadly similar powers to yours -kinda- so if you're gonna listen to anyone in that regard it should probably be him. Try to balance fundamentals with flashy shit.
 
Chapter Twelve: Drawing Up The Plans
Caio's probably right (ugh) about trying to thread the needle between the fantastical and the mundane. There's no point having access to everything the nanoforge can do and trying to downplay or ignore it until you can throw a proper roundhouse kick on command, but at the same time it'd just be embarrassing to get caught out and decked in the face because you neglected basic self-defence. You need to- well you have no idea what you really need to do but your best guess is that you have to keep that in mind from the ground up. The nanoforge can basically do anything you ask it to, as far as you've seen - the trick is not wasting its time and resources. You're kinda glad Caio bugged you to try and form tentacles now that you think about it. It gave you a sense that the forge has limits, even if only a glimpse, and it's given you the dose of reality this'll need.

"Uhm... okay," you say. "I want- I mean I had this... dunno if it'd..."

Oh god it sounds so stupid the second it's ready to leave your mouth. You cringe and cut yourself off, the unfinished thought hanging awkwardly in the air. Instinctive flashes of embarrassment and regret go off in your head like hazard lights, warning you not to look like an idiot in front of the AI. The silence stretches on.

"Take your time."

Easy for it to say. You lie there squinting at the ceiling, waiting and hoping the feeling will pass, but the nanoforge says nothing else. Granted it's a lot easier to believe that you're not testing someone's patience when said someone is a machine and could comfortably do absolutely nothing for a week if asked. You're not sure how long the silence lasts, but after a while you start to feel alone with your thoughts again. You drum your hands against your chest and sigh.

"Okay. I've been thinking about what the others said - Caio more, probably - and what you said. I want to do things that are... not just 'flashy' I guess, but more than just having you support me while I throw my hands around, you know? An all-range support type, with something I can do no matter the situation, like..." you pause momentarily, brightening as you realise the example you need "like that blade we made! The one that was kind of like one of Paragon's feathers. He can turn into cape into dozens of them and do his best cluster artillery impression but I'm not like, expecting anything like that. But the way it moved when I fired it and it flew back to me is giving me some ideas. You were saying something else about electromagnetic fields before I cut you off?"

"Correct. If you wish to manipulate objects without touching them, construction of electromagnetic field generators and bio-electric power cells to facilitate this is possible."

"What about other kinds of... projectile?" you ask haltingly, racking your brain to find the right words for your thoughts before you stumble and crash again. "You know like fire, lightning, ice, the classics, could you reproduce those with your tech?"

"Unknown. I will perform some internal diagnostics and simulations to investigate the possibility. Is there anything else?"

You don't think there is, but as you part your lips to form the words one more idea springs to the forefront of your mind. You remember the heartstopping moments you spent locked in combat with the same kind of drone that killed you, fists uselessly flailing just to delay it before the nanoforge finally gave you the target you needed to take it out for good. It feels like the thought should trigger you, but when has the human mind ever made sense? It's sort of like grabbing something you expect to be much heavier, lurching off-balance as you fight to correct. You move on rather than dwell.

"This nanotechnology you use isn't exactly unique, right?"

"Unclear. It is likely beyond conventional human technology, but you are correct in assuming that there are similarities between my abilities and the Predator-class scouting construct. Even our ability to combine with another platform to the benefit of both in some aspects. Of course the control core of a Predator-class would be far too simplistic to perform the functions that I do. They are mass-production models with only enough processing power and creativity to hunt and kill."

You blink. You sit up and steady yourself on your hands. "Do you have something in your programming about them? You seem-"

The Nanoforge avatar appears again, hovering a short distance from your face as if sitting just opposite you. "I was not programmed with unnecessary information," the it repeats. "Therefore, any knowledge that is not somehow related to medicine could not exist in my memory banks prior to implantation. This information must have been retrieved during scanning."

"Rrright. That's what I wanted to talk about," you say. "If it's not unique, and we might have to fight something like that again in the future, we should have a countermeasure or something. Could you, I don't know, hack nanomachines to bring them under your control instead? Add it to what you have to work with already?"

"Electronic warfare is well beyond my purview."

"Ah." Your face falls and you feel pretty stupid. It's- okay it's a machine and it keeps saying it doesn't have feelings to hurt but it's still not awesome to make assumptions no matter how gently you're let down. But still the thought niggles at you as you sit there, chewing your lip, and all of a sudden you lift your gaze to the orb of light again. "But what about other nanomachine-based enemies we might run into? If they're actively built for combat the way you aren't, couldn't they try to hack you? What about something- or hell someone else tech-y enough, could you do anything to stop them if they tried?"

The nanoforge is silent for a short time, coruscating thoughtfully. It's only silent for a few seconds but that could be a lifetime for a machine. "I had not considered the possibility. You are correct, the risk exceeds reasonable doubt. I will look into the matter."

"Oh!" You blink, eyes flicking around the room as if searching for some sign that you're being lured into a trap. "Uh... thanks, glad I could help."

"Allowing you to bring a potential vulnerability to my attention is not worthy of thanks. Regardless, I have sidetracked the conversation. Returning to the initial topic: do you desire any changes to the armour? The current design was selected for speed and efficiency, you are under no obligation to keep it unchanged."

"Oh, uh..." You sit forward and cross your legs, blowing air through your cheeks. "That's kind of an even bigger question, haha. And one I'm definitely not gonna be able to answer right off the bat. I mean if I'm being serious about having a superhero outfit I need to at least do some concept sketches, right?" You pause, and rise to your feet with a sigh. "Ugh, which means I need some paper and pencils. Time to go stationary shopping for once."

"Unnecessary. If you require the means to work visually, they will be provided for you."

You blink in surprise as a screen opens up before you in augmented reality, displaying what looks like some kind of advanced design concepting software you might use to quickly draw up plans or add notes for an engineering project. Not exactly Photoshop, but then again you think the subscription fee is up to 30 bucks a month by now so it's probably for the best it's not Photoshop. A carbon-black stylus just seems to materialise in your hand, and as you experimentally prod at the screen that doesn't actually exist in the real world you're shocked to find you can touch it all the same. It resists your gloved hand as if it were really there, and a stroke of the stylus reveals that you can touch it with that too. Intellectually you know that such manipulations of perception are probably pretty easy for the nanoforge given you're covered in it from neck to toe, but in the moment it still feels like magic. You even smile.

"I should... probably leave this 'til later," you say haltingly, casting a self-conscious glance at the doorway. "So I'm not hanging around their headquarters like a weirdo."

"Is it not also your headquarters now?" the nanoforge asks, avatar orb swinging around to rest at the edge of your peripheral vision as if also looking out the door.

"Yeah jury's still out on that." You give a shrug and a sigh, ruffling your hair in a vain attempt to comb it out a bit. It's kind of on the long side. You don't get too many haircuts but it's starting to edge up against the limit of what will look stupid on you. "(Now where do I, uh-)" the stylus disintigrates in your hand and flows back into the suit, the screen before you winking out "(-cool thanks). Alright, I guess that's everything?"

"Incorrect," the nanoforge replies, swinging around in front of you and blocking the way out. "The food at your disposal is unsatisfactory. You should acquire more at your earliest convenience - I have prepared a list of suggestions and a dietary plan for the future."

It produces another AR window, detailing the dietary changes it wants to make and a full breakdown of your nutritional requirements. It is very detailed, and when you glance at the scroll bar to the right edge you see that the box at the top is so very, very small. You swipe up once, sending the screen scrolling down, and the box barely moves. You let out an aggrieved sigh. This is gonna be an adjustment.

Not much is open in the wake of an attack, so there's precious little opportunity to actually go grocery shopping despite the nanoforge's insistance. Thankfully the nanoforge also remembers exactly what was in your fridge when you last checked it, and by suggesting meals incorporating those you're able to narrow down your options and pick something with the least amount of missing parts. You go via Masoud's place just in case he's looking for an update, but by the time you get there it's his disinterested brother-in-law behind the counter. He doesn't even notice your gloves at the counter, just rings up your order and lets you go without comment. You sort of shrug to yourself and get going.

The weather keeps up its holding pattern as you trudge home, plastic bag slung over your shoulder. The sky is the same cloudy iron grey, but the faint barely-there drizzle slowly peppering your jacket with a fine dusting of droplets never intensifies beyond that. You look up at the squat grey brick of your building as it slowly draws closer and you think about just how much more normal things seemed the last time you took this walk. Granted you were deep in shock at the time but it kind of counts. In the span of just under a day you've gone from some nobody doing backbreaking work that made you feel like a vaguely misanthropic zombie to... well still a nobody but a nobody on the cusp of something strange and new and terrifying and just a little exciting. It's hard for you to hope about things, but this? This is getting close. You walk a little bit taller as you head inside and take the lift.

The cooking warms the place up, so that's one thing. The other is that the nanoforge is fucking fantastic for multitasking. You're able to get started on your concept drawings for your new super-suit right away, stripping down to the old thing in question as you go. It's damn comfortable and surprisingly warm for something thinner than your hair, and it's- well, it makes a statement, and signing your name on the dotted line under that statement is a worrying thrill all of its own. You scribble down ideas as fast as you have them, sticking to basic shapes and doodles and notes in the margins while you knock the rust off. It's been so long since you've been able to draw, it almost makes you feel like a kid again. While your right hand is busy your left gets to work making pasta (with a break to do the dishes sitting in the sink you've been meaning to take care of for a few days now so that you actually have a pot to work with). It's weirdly energising in a way, making the sauce out of whatever random crap you could find in the fridge and the contents of the can in between ideas, the apartment slowly filling with warmth as the smell of meat and sauce and pasta drifts up into your nose.

You sit down at your desk to eat, throw on your headphones to listen to music, slide the design window over to hover in easy reach just above your laptop, and it's... nice. It's nice in a way that takes a while to hit. The pasta tastes pretty good, hearty and filling in a way that a lot of your sad home-cooked meals have failed to do as the combo pack of melted cheese and ground beef and herby garlicy sauce hit your tongue and stomach just the way you were craving, you're swinging back around to optimistic about this new team gig, and you're making some headway on the design you think. You're definitely relearning figures fast with all the false starts you've made, but you've definitively eliminated capes and cloaks of all kinds from the running in favour of a more sleek look. Something that still has a bit of a mystic otherworldly look, full-face helmet definitely stays, maybe throw in some decoration on the head to make it look interesting? Need to do something about footwear at some point, can't be looking like you're running around in socks, and the gloves definitely need a redesign for the EM field generation gimmick. You're briefly stymied by the fact that hands are the devil and the bane of artists everywhere, but the nanoforge provides a poseable 3D model of your own hands for reference that really comes in handy.

Unintentional pun aside, a thought occurs to you as you thank the nanoforge yet again for its help. Namely, that it doesn't have a name. For something you've been talking to extensively since it got here you'd think you'd have something better than 'the nanoforge' or 'hey, you' by now.

You clear your throat. "Uh, hey...?" Case in point, without a set term of address you're just left throwing an upward inflection into the void. The nanoforge avatar manifests regardless, hovering about level with your virtual art tablet.

"May I be of assistance?" it asks.

"Well yeah, just on this one thing that's kind of bugging me." You swallow the final mouthful of pasta and rest your fork in the bowl carefully, the tines ringing out against the porcelain. "I was just wondering... what should I call you?"

"I am your virtual physician, designation NF-14-13-04-"

"Oh come on, you have to know that's not what I meant," you complain, not very seriously.

"Possibly. What do you mean?"

"Well... gonna be part of a team from now on, right?" you say. "And we had that discussion about letting you reply if the others try to talk to you directly? Then we'll all need something to call you, like a nickname or something. Easy to say in a hurry. Otherwise who knows how weird and clunky it's gonna get trying to talk to each other, and that's probably not good to have in the heat of a firefight or whatever."

"You raise a valid point. I will register an alternative designation; however I have no personal opinion on the matter, nor do I require you to refer to me as if I were a person. If you would like to proceed with registry of the alternative designation, you must provide it yourself."

Oh yeah, no pressure, just name your robot doctor real quick, this won't have major ramifications for the rest of your working relationship. Your hand stills - the concept's going well you think, you're going nuts on the self-indulgent flourishes for fun so you can cut back later, but the basic shape looks good. An impression of wings defined by negative space and high-tech wizardry. But of course now you can't work on it because you're busy racking your brain. What would make a good name?

[ ] Forge. Short, sweet, descriptive, to the point. Also one of the preliminary ideas you had for your own superhero name so maybe you shouldn't give yourself that kind of competition.
[ ] Doc. Bugs Bunny jokes from others will most likely be inevitable, but it did basically offer to be the group sawbones, so why not lean into it? May also come off a little tryhard.
[ ] MD. Taking the numbers in its designation as letters they spell out 'MND', and if you drop the 'N' that leaves 'MD' as in Medical Doctor. Very clever, makes you feel smart just thinking about it.
[ ] Some kind of very witty and concise reference to classic sci-fi novelists, which you will not be able to make off the top of your head but you will once you google the subject. People may think you're deep and thoughtful. Definitely tryhard.
[ ] Write-in.
 
[x] MD. Taking the numbers in its designation as letters they spell out 'MND', and if you drop the 'N' that leaves 'MD' as in Medical Doctor. Very clever, makes you feel smart just thinking about it.

MD, Emdee, either way there's a very specific video game design space we're referencing and I'm dumb enough to enter it.
 
[x] MD. Taking the numbers in its designation as letters they spell out 'MND', and if you drop the 'N' that leaves 'MD' as in Medical Doctor. Very clever, makes you feel smart just thinking about it.
 
[x] MD. Taking the numbers in its designation as letters they spell out 'MND', and if you drop the 'N' that leaves 'MD' as in Medical Doctor. Very clever, makes you feel smart just thinking about it.
 
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