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I really hope this doesn't go wirh him being a devil. He never really got a choice in canon (i think), and this honestly seems like the sort of situation where they might try to trick or influence him into becoming her servant just to have a dragon under her command. Not to mention outright using his perverted inclinations to make him a devil by just tempting him with her body, never intending to follow through.
 
If you were to give johan a voice actor who would it be?
Hmmm. That's a tough one. For Japanese I'd go with Takahiro Sakurai, and for English I'd have to go with good ol' Vic Mignogna.
Sakurai-San voiced Rohan in JoJo Part 4: Diamond is Unbreakable, and Mignogna has voiced numerous characters, though the most notable ones for me are Edward Elric (Fullmetat Alchemist), Qrow Branwen (RWBY), Fai D. Flowright (Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicles), and Tamaki Suoh (Ouran High School Host Club).

I really hope this doesn't go wirh him being a devil. He never really got a choice in canon (i think), and this honestly seems like the sort of situation where they might try to trick or influence him into becoming her servant just to have a dragon under her command. Not to mention outright using his perverted inclinations to make him a devil by just tempting him with her body, never intending to follow through.
I am actually undecided at this time, but rest assured: whatever decision Issei makes will not solely be based upon breasts. (It wouldn't be Issei if boobs didn't factor at all into his decision).
 
I am actually undecided at this time, but rest assured: whatever decision Issei makes will not solely be based upon breasts. (It wouldn't be Issei if boobs didn't factor at all into his decision).

I still think going Devil matches his real best choice, it matches up well with his very lustful personality as polyamory is practiced and well accepted culturally. He would also get a support system that is far more likely to be able to give him the needed training he needs. Joining Johan may make some sense as Johan did save him however I am not sure if Johan could provide all the support Issei needs as the Boosted Gear owner along with the political protection that being in Rias's peerage provides. Without such protection there is a good chance he gets kidnapped/scouted by the chaos brigade eventually.

Issei needs a lot of work to get up to being useful as he is the historically weakest Red Dragon Emperor ever and doing so might require more of Johan's time then John could truly provide. Being in Rias's peerage also gives him a lot more leeway in the school itself when it comes to getting days off and unexpected trips.

A time paused training montage was just given out so unless you want to make use of it a lot it is not really something you want to repeat too frequently.

The clock is now ticking since canon has started and without Issei, Rias gets stuck in a marriage with Riser which might also drag her out of the school also, weakening local forces and defenses. Unless some things shift things majorly she will lose that rating game easily. She will not get Asia so no healing, and without Issei she would lose even quicker. No reason for Johan to join either, I think he does not want to give up his current freedom of action either.
 
Nor do I, really. The only thing I was able to gather from this post is that you claim the story I mentioned is trash. Aside from the lack of productivity in namecalling, I happened to enjoy the story. Am I not permitted to derive enjoyment from a story that is rejected by other people?

Other than my nitpick about being criticized for my taste, I would appreciate it if you were specific about your issues with my story.

I may not agree with your opinion on Fahad's work, but if you have advice or criticism for my story, by all means, elaborate. I'll freely admit that I have far to go before I can become a professional author, and any and all help offered will be taken into consideration.
I cannot grow without the willingness to improve.
So you missed that @Bludflag pointed out that Zelretch is not actually a troll outside of bad fanfics? That was in the link he gave if you had followed it.

Leaving aside that this fanfic starts its premise with the bad fanon that is Trollretch (and, going by the ANs, also takes inspiration from a certain infamous fanfic's...let's say "eccentric" view of DxD canon), it's also kind of lazy in starting its plot by having Zelretch acts like ROB in VS debates. Is he ever going to reappear and have actual characterization, or will he stay a walking plot device for the story to start? Did he really choose the protagonist at random, or maybe there is some deeper reason, like:

1. Good Zelretch: the protagonist actually has some intrinsic qualities to be the best one to get the job done, but Zelretch lied about it being random so the MC becomes a hero of his own volition

2. Neutral/Ambiguous Zelretch: he expects him to fail for some reasons, but said failure will provide the solution to save that universe.

That would be novel ways to use Zelretch better than countless bad fics have done before. Normally, as the author, you shouldn't insert things just because. Elements in the story should either help advance the plot, give characterization, or showcase the themes chosen for the story, all the while still being entertaining.

If it's just a cheap excuse to get the plot going, it's usually bad writing.
 
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So you missed that @Bludflag pointed out that Zelretch is not actually a troll outside of bad fanfics? That was in the link he gave if you had followed it.

Leaving aside that this fanfic starts its premise with the bad fanon that is Trollretch (and, going by the ANs, also takes inspiration from a certain infamous fanfic's...let's say "eccentric" view of DxD canon), it's also kind of lazy in starting its plot by having Zelretch acts like ROB in VS debates. Is he ever going to reappear and have actual characterization, or will he stay a walking plot device for the story to start? Did he really choose the protagonist at random, or maybe there is some deeper reason, like:

1. Good Zelretch: the protagonist actually has some intrinsic qualities to be the best one to get the job done, but Zelretch lied about it being random so the MC becomes a hero of his own volition

2. Neutral/Ambiguous Zelretch: he expects him to fail for some reasons, but said failure will provide the solution to save that universe.

That would be novel ways to use Zelretch better than countless bad fics have done before. Normally, as the author, you shouldn't insert things just because. Elements in the story should either help advance the plot, give characterization, or showcase the themes chosen for the story, all the while still being entertaining.

If it's just a cheap excuse to get the plot going, it's usually bad writing.

Ah. I see. I personally cannot see someone responsible for the creation of Kaleidostick Ruby as not being at least a little bit trolly, but that's just my take on him.

As for the rest, don't worry. Zelretch picked the guy for many more reasons than were stated, though the SI may or may not realize these for quite some time. I suppose one of the flaws of writing a little bit every day is that it takes more chapters to get to the 'meat' of the plot, but we'll get there eventually.
 
Draw For Turn 2.9
Not Playing With A Full Deck
Draw For Turn 2.9​

I descended into my workshop and began puttering around, gathering materials for both my next project and Sona's payment.

Since I'd made the contact with Sona on his behalf, Freed had assisted me in gathering materials and reagents for my craft. Mostly this involved shopping for the proper sorts of inks and paper, but on occasion we'd manage to get our hands on something more noteworthy, such as the object I was working with now.

I gently pushed Prana into the piece of ametrine, which was apparently a gemstone aligned with 'the manifestation of one's visions, and the bringing forth of Mysteries into reality'. In short, precisely what I needed for my personal project.

I was shaping the high-quality stone from it's original cut into something more suitable, and doing so slowly. After all, the damn thing had been ¥32000 (about $280 USD), which was about a tenth of my monthly salary. I simply could not afford to mess up the stone, not if I wanted to eat anything other than cup ramen for the next few months, to say nothing of purchasing new resources.

My financial woes aside, my project was going well, and I'd likely have it ready for the second stage within the week. As for Sona's payment, after a bit of trial and error I'd managed to make a very crude prototype, and I intended to have her test it the following afternoon.

I looked up from my ministrations, only to find that it was nearly midnight. I shook my head wryly. 'This feels familiar. The only difference is that this time it's not anime and fanfiction keeping me up all hours of the night. Well, I suppose it is an improvement; at least I am doing things that will hopefully make my continued survival more likely.'

After washing the day's dirt from my body, I collapsed on to my futon, and almost immediately fell asleep. My dreams were full of wonderful images, such as Tamamo suplexing Kirei Kotomine directly into Zouken and Shinji Matou. Repeatedly. Ahh, such a beautiful phantasmagoria…


The next day, I brought my prototype to Sona, only to notice that she seemed distracted by something. I voiced my thoughts, and she informed me of something concerning; namely that something or someone was hunting the Stray Devils in Kuoh.

Now, this wouldn't be a large issue, were it not for the sheer aura left behind at the scene of the attacks. Each For had been reduced to naught but ash, and the lairs of these foes were inundated with emanations of corrosive despair. Paradoxically, there was also a sense of weary, patient hope within these areas, though not nearly as pervading as the despair.

"So, Mister Blair. Have you any insights to offer?" Sona inquired of me.
I cupped my chin in thought. Certainly, there was something about the description that seemed vaguely familiar to me, but, for the life of me, I couldn't recall what. When I told her as much, Sona sighed. I could tell that she was far more worried than usual; Sona was not one to display emotions that could be construed as weakness.

"I'll devote some shikigami to scout the town. It's not much, but it's what I have at my disposal currently." Sona seemed to appreciate my offer, as a small amount of tension flow out of her.
"That would be much appreciated, actually. Shikigami may be simple, but their utility for scouting large areas of land cannot be denied." She readjusted her glasses in what was likely a nervous habit, then changed the subject.

"So, allow me to see this prototype." Sona requested, a glint in her eye.
I offered her the prototype, a crude bangle devoid of inscription and possessing only one node for Mana gathering. The final product, should this one be successful, would rectify both of those issues.


Sona Sitri
Sona slipped the bracelet on to her left wrist, and began channeling Demonic Power. She conjured an orb of water the size of a beachball, taking up a small fraction of her power. She willed it to become a sword, and kept a careful eye on her reserves.

She'd used about a percent of her reserves to conjure the water, and about half of another percent to make it into a blade.
Normally, that amount of energy would take about a minute to return to her, so she was quite impressed when the 'crude prototype' managed to cut that time to thirty seconds.


Johan Blair
When Sona informed me of how well my Mystic Code prototype had worked, I was thoroughly pleased. I had several ideas for how to make it significantly more efficient, and I told her so.
Sona told me that if I could make it even twice as efficient as it was already, then she would accept the finished version along with two others in lieu of the other four Mystic Codes she'd originally asked of me.

Naturally, I accepted, and excused myself. My next stop was the old school building to visit Rias and her Peerage.
I knocked when I arrived, and was met by Akeno Himejima, the schools resident sadomasochist, not that anybody outside the two Peerages was aware of that fact. She smiled at me in a manner that reminded me of nothing so much as a tigress regarding potential prey.

'Don't worry, My Husband! The great Tamamo will protect you from the scary Succubus!' My dear girlfriend offered me that comforting support, and I let out a chuckle.
Akeno arched an eyebrow at me, and I shook my head. "Ah, don't mind me; one of the Spirits in my soul said something both comforting and amusing."

The incognito Nephilim eyed me, apparently amused. "Oh, I see. It must be strange, having the spirits of legendary figures living in your soul."
I chuckled wryly. "It certainly takes some getting used to, but I couldn't ask for finer allies, or better friends. With them, I'll never need to be lonely again."

I frowned. I hadn't meant to let that slip out. However, what's done is done, and I certainly could have said something more damning than an admission of past loneliness.

"Anyhow!" I said abruptly. "I apologize for my sudden intrusion; I would ask Miss Gremory for a moment of her time, should she have one to spare."
"For you, Mister Blair? Certainly." Came Rias' reply from within the room. Akeno moved to the side, providing just enough space for me to pass through…as long as I either squeezed myself against the doorframe or brushed against her.

I looked at her with an unamused expression on my face. "Truly, Miss Himejima? I would have thought that we are beyond such trivial power plays." Now, I knew very well that she was merely doing it to provoke embarrassment from me, but hopefully by misconstruing it as an attempt to cause me to lose face, Rias would intervene.

I was not disappointed in the result. Akeno pouted at me, but moved aside at Rias' directions. I was gravely tempted to smirk at her, but I reminded myself of her epithet, and considerable magical talent.
I had zero desire to be struck repeatedly by lightning wielded by a sadistic shrine maiden, and even less desire to be in that situation with the addition of a grudge against me, even a petty one.

I stood before Rias, who was seated at her desk. Shirone and Isaiah were also present, though the former's attention was largely occupied by a bag of Japanese sweets the size of her torso.

"So. What can I do for you, Mister Blair?" Rias asked, hands folded in the Gendo pose. I chuckled lightly at this, and dramatically bowed.
"Miss Gremory!" I exclaimed theatrically, spreading my arms wide. "Please, grant me the opportunity to pilot Eva 000! I assure you; my sync rates are unmatched!"
Rias, clearly unprepared for my antics, burst out laughing. I joined in myself, chuckling merrily.

After a few moments, we had regained our composure, and I regarded the 'Crimson Haired Ruin Princess'.
"In all seriousness, though, I do have a boon to ask of you. Rather, a boon to ask of your Knight and Rook." Isaiah and Shirone both turned to look at me as one. A competitive grin found its way on to my face as I stated my request.
"Could I trouble each of you for a spar?"

AN: Well, that's as good a place as any to stop, methinks. Next chapter will allow you all to see just how well Johan stacks up against Kiba and Koneko as they were at the series' start. Ah, an important note. I have gotten several messages asking who Isaiah is; it's Kiba's birth name, just as Shirone is Koneko's birth name. Johan refers to them verbally by the names that were told to him, but mentally he refers to them by their birth names. He sees it as a means of offering respect to them for enduring their wretched pasts. Anyhow, enjoy and leave me your thoughts, if you like!

CM: Ahh…back in the editor's chair. As much fun as it was Yosemite, can get pretty toasty and I grew up with ceiling fans available whenever I wanted them, so let's just say it's good to be back.

Xanothos: Blech. I hate the heat, so I don't envy you for the destination of your trip. Good to have you back!
 
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As for the rest, don't worry. Zelretch picked the guy for many more reasons than were stated, though the SI may or may not realize these for quite some time.
If that's the case, then that's good. Too many badfics start with that lazy premise, so the automatic reactions of fans of Type-Moon tend to range from dismissal of the fanfic in question to outright hostility. If you do something refreshing with it, kudos to you.

This cliché is even more egregious now that canon actually has a scene with Zelretch pulling someone from another timeline and put them somewhere else, and it is shown he takes this seriously and carefully.
Ah. I see. I personally cannot see someone responsible for the creation of Kaleidostick Ruby as not being at least a little bit trolly, but that's just my take on him.
Yeah, but he doesn't exactly get along with the thing. In Fate/hollow ataraxia, Ruby is shown that it hates Zelretch, and braiwashes its users to be ther magical girl versions, so Zelretch sealed it away. And, while the Prisma Ilya version of it was much more mellow, the real reason that Zelretch gave it to Rin in Prisma Ilya is because of the genre of that particular spinoff.
 
If that's the case, then that's good. Too many badfics start with that lazy premise, so the automatic reactions of fans of Type-Moon tend to range from dismissal of the fanfic in question to outright hostility. If you do something refreshing with it, kudos to you.
I'll do my best to live up to your expectations.

This cliché is even more egregious now that canon actually has a scene with Zelretch pulling someone from another timeline and put them somewhere else, and it is shown he takes this seriously and carefully
Really? Where can I find this scene?

Yeah, but he doesn't exactly get along with the thing. In Fate/hollow ataraxia, Ruby is shown that it hates Zelretch, and braiwashes its users to be ther magical girl versions, so Zelretch sealed it away. And, while the Prisma Ilya version of it was much more mellow, the real reason that Zelretch gave it to Rin in Prisma Ilya is because of the genre of that particular spinoff.

Hmmm...I see your point. However, I'm not sure how I would go about adjusting the scene to make it more canonically compliant. If you or someone else with extensive knowledge on the subject could offer advice, I would be truly greatful.

On that note, I regret to inform you all that I shall not be updating tonight, as my head is throbbing and I feel as though I could sleep for a week. Hopefully I'll feel better tomorrow.
 
Really? Where can I find this scene?
In Fate/strange fake (I changed some things around a bit to make for smoother and easier reading):
Observer/or Character Creation said:
The space was a completed world.

Jet black with points of light.

In the center of a room in the wide, perfect sphere dyed in the color of the night sky, there floated a wooden chair.

Based on its appearance alone, it would be enough to call the chair extravagant, but its wood gave it a refined hue, and one would not think it a repulsive gaud of the elite. Rather, just by existing here, it imbued the space around it with a conspicuous gravity. If an unrefined person sat in the chair, that person would likely be consumed by the weight of the chair's existence and hidden from surrounding view. Such was the significance of the chair.

The space had been prepared for the sole purpose of exhibiting the chair.

A man exuding a solemnity that outweighed that of the chair leaned back in it, emitting a loud creak.

"Hm…"

If one were to draw a reduced map of the universe based on this room, the man sitting in the chair would be at its center, emitting an air surely befitting its master.
His external appearance would probably place his age in the 50s or 60s. One could sense the trials of his life in the wrinkles etched deeply on his face, but his eyes remained brimming with brilliance, such as one might see in someone ten years his junior.

"This axis is wrong… these lines will be annihilated too…" When the man slipped his finger into the sky, the heavenly bodies displayed on the surrounding walls began to revolve. "Oh, this cut-off isn't so… no, it's the worst. That damned giant spider will wake up. It's a century too early to face that."

Then, as if to match his words, the pages in the book hovering in front of the man turned with a flutter, inscribing multifarious information in real-time. The thickness of the book was about that of a standard encyclopedia; regardless, as the man guided his finger through the air, thousands— tens of thousands of pages were born and erased.

After continuing this activity again and again, the old man muttered as if in boredom. "As I thought, no matter how this is resolved, it doesn't result in a satisfactory outcome for the Association. Having said that, there isn't enough reason in my interventions. Yes, it's a complete stalemate."

The man who seemed to be talking to himself suddenly asked the space behind him for an opinion. "What do you think? It's about time you said hello. That communication device there is working fine."

At that, the space replied, "How rude of me. It seems you've noticed."

There was a small wooden table of similar design to the chair. Atop it sat a telephone. It had the shape of a very old telephone, the kind that looked like a table lamp at first glance. But instead of a light bulb, there was a conical speaker. Mounted on a thin post was a microphone. A dial was affixed to the base of the device. It was a telephone you would only find in movies, museums, or antique shops, save for one difference. Unlike the black color of most antique telephones, this one was a beautiful blue color that evoked sapphire. At a glance, one could only think that it had been crafted from an enormous precious gem.

As for the question of how long the telephone had been there, there shouldn't have been anything in that space until several minutes prior. But, the telephone was wonderfully integrated with the harmony of the room, as if it had always existed there. Indeed, addressing the phone had confirmed the fact of its existence, as if the history of the room had been rewritten.

"With a little more time, I had planned to make the phone's bell ring." A youthful-sounding voice resounded from the telephone's speaker. It seemed as if the phone was speaking according to its own will.

"Do I strike you as an old man who talks to himself?"

"Did you ask me that because you knew it was me?"

"Where do you think we are? I can count the number of people who can get inside."

Rolling his shoulders, the old man glanced at the blue telephone. "So, what business do you have here? If you want to have tea, come back later. Unfortunately, I'm wrapped up in some troublesome work."

"Yeah, I'm actually here because of that."

"What?"

"If you're going to choose someone to observe the incident at Snowfield, don't pick from the magi. You should select a world on the basis of being an intruder."

With that, the telephone's dial slowly began to turn, returning to its starting point at certain intervals before turning again. At the same time, the heavenly bodies revolving around the room — and the book that the old man was reading — began turning faster than they had been before.

Inscribed on the pages was the face of a human, and that person's parameters:

At times, it was male. At times, it was female.
At times, it was elderly. At times, it was a child.
At times, it was musclebound. At times, it was obese.
At times, it was a saint. At times, it was a vicious murderer.
At times, it was a magus. At times, it was a priest.

Flipping between countless qualities such as race, gender, age, body type, clothing, personality, and occupation, the book's pages turned with incredible momentum.

"You're quite confident in the turning of the planets."

"The trajectory to the future is like a labyrinth. It's my specialty."

Someone passing by the two at this moment would likely have found it a bizarre conversation.

"Of course, unlike my labyrinth, the destination one makes depends upon the person."

The pages kept turning at a high speed, and the displayed faces smoothly blended into each other. As if he was watching a scene from times past, the old man sat back and watched as the telephone continued to turn its own dial. Then, after some time, the turning of the pages slowed. Inscribed on one page was an Asian person.

"Next is to… yes, she needs some glasses." The pages turned delicately. A thin-framed pair of glasses appeared on the person's face.

"...Is that important?"

"Who knows? I'm just back-calculating from the result I arrived at. Whether or not it has any meaning at all is something we can consider later."

"Hmph." As he looked at the information on the final page, the old man spoke to the telephone behind him. "Still, you've suddenly involved yourself with the world. If you're that bored, just visit the town yourself. Shouldn't there be a cafe that caters to readers? You can kill plenty of time there."

"No… this isn't exactly killing time. I'm rather involved with the incident this time."

"...I see. It's something that one has thought of."

The old man immediately understood the meaning behind the telephone's words, and recalled someone's face. He took a deep sigh— and then his lips twisted into a smile. "So you have a bit of a plan… all the more reason you can't intervene. It's the sort of monster that rejoices as more intruders are involved. Let the Holy Grail War this time be followed through by an outsider."

"Yeah, you're right. If you handled this poorly, it would confirm the world."

It was certainly a bizarre conversation that could only happen between these two. Then, the person behind the telephone — or possibly, the telephone itself — looked at the person now described in the open book, and spoke in a cheerful voice. "Her universe is a pseudepigraphon, or perhaps it's the opposite. Let's hope for the best and watch over her."

The book was opened to a picture of a young girl. It was an apparently Asian girl in her late teens to early twenties, with dyed blonde hair. Below her portrait was a name beginning with the letter A.

And then, with her as the Player —

Here and now, the curtain would rise on a Holy Grail War smeared in falsehood and vanity.
Right, I would have linked to the manga's corresponding chapter so you can see the scene, but linking to fanmade translation is against the rules.

So it's a bit opaque and hard to understand what's going on but TLDR —Zelretch's Second Magic is the cheating ability to determine a conclusion from infinite possibilities: any resolution that Zelretch chooses when observing parallel timelines become the true one:
Nasu interview said:
Q: Are the three routes of "Fate/stay night" parallel worlds existing at the same time? I was curious since I was how it would look to Zelretch.
A: They're parallel sort of. But if Zelretch was observing, it'd become true, and my feelings on the matter is that I'd rather two routes disappear if one was true. If all of these became possible at the same time, the other routes would become meaningless.
So yeah, basically Zelretch interfering is opening Schrodinger's Box; the conclusion he confirms is the only one that is true. Even if Zelretch can cycle through infinite possibilities, it appears that he can only designate one as being the actual reality taking place. So he constantly shifts through timelines and tries to work out the method to reaching one that's satisfactory.

In this instance, he is shifting through a ton of alternate timelines to find a satisfactory way to end that Grail War without extreme interference as he can't intervene in the False Holy Grail War of Snowfield because most of its outcomes lead to Bad Ends (including one where Type-Mercury wakes up from its slumber), and him showing up would definitely cement that world as confirmed to be true. With the help of Caubac Alcatraz, another Dead Apostle Ancestor, he chooses a "Player" (a reference to strange fake's previous status as a videogame) to act as an outsider to intervene in this war, settling on an alternate Ayaka Sajyou, the heroine from the scrapped original version of Fate/stay night, Fate/Prototype.
However, I'm not sure how I would go about adjusting the scene to make it more canonically compliant. If you or someone else with extensive knowledge on the subject could offer advice, I would be truly greatful.
I personally can't since I'm already busy betaing for someone else, sorry.
 
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In Fate/strange fake (I changed some things around a bit to make for smoother and easier reading):

Right, I would have linked to the manga's corresponding chapter so you can see the scene, but linking to fanmade translation is against the rules.

So it's a bit opaque and hard to understand what's going on but TLDR —Zelretch's Second Magic is the cheating ability to determine a conclusion from infinite possibilities: any resolution that Zelretch chooses when observing parallel timelines become the true one:

So yeah, basically Zelretch interfering is opening Schrodinger's Box; the conclusion he confirms is the only one that is true. Even if Zelretch can cycle through infinite possibilities, it appears that he can only designate one as being the actual reality taking place. So he constantly shifts through timelines and tries to work out the method to reaching one that's satisfactory.

In this instance, he is shifting through a ton of alternate timelines to find a satisfactory way to end that Grail War without extreme interference as he can't intervene in the False Holy Grail War of Snowfield because most of its outcomes lead to Bad Ends (including one where Type-Mercury wakes up from its slumber), and him showing up would definitely cement that world as confirmed to be true. With the help of Caubac Alcatraz, another Dead Apostle Ancestor, he chooses a "Player" (a reference to strange fake's previous status as a videogame) to act as an outsider to intervene in this war, settling on an alternate Ayaka Sajyou, the heroine from the scrapped original version of Fate/stay night, Fate/Prototype.

I personally can't since I'm already busy betaing for someone else, sorry.

Fascinating. Thank you for showing me this, and offering further explanation.

Ah, that's alright. I'll figure something out, I'm sure.
 
Actually I think Incindo means fire/flame. The root word of incido matches close with the root word of Inscision.

I think.
I'm no Latin speaker/reader, I did just what Johan did to get his incantations: Google/Fondle Translate. After all, grammar isn't he important part of self-hypnosis, the belief is.
 
Draw For Turn 2.10
Not Playing With A Full Deck
Draw For Turn 2.10​

Rias Gremory

Rias raised her brows. She hadn't been expecting that request. She regarded their eccentric English teacher, and said, "I have no issue with such a request, as long as Kiba and Koneko are willing, of course."

"…Don't mind. Might be fun." Her adorable Rook replied emotionlessly. Her Knight offered his agreement with a smile that held a tinge of competitiveness.

Rias smiled, then stood. "Well, there's a place behind the building that you three could practice. If you'll follow me?"


Johan Blair

Once we'd arrived at the clearing where we'd be sparring, I asked if it was alright for me to ask Asia to come here in case of injuries. Rias had no objections, so I texted Freed.

During the half hour it took for the excommunicated duo to arrive, Isaiah, Shirone, and I all did some stretches. Once they arrived, Isaiah stepped forwards, a bokken created by Sword Birth in his hand.

I flipped Onyx so that his sheath pointed at Isaiah in a fencing-style grip. At Rias' signal, he darted towards me.

The Runic arrays on my clothes flashed to life even as I poured Prana into Reinforcement. I met his first blow with the back of my cane, my left hand supporting the block. Over the next few seconds, our weapons clashed no less than five times as we blurred back and forth.

Isaiah's skill with a blade was art in motion; truly, the Knight of the Lucifer had taught him well. However, Hassan hadn't held back on my own instruction in the slightest. While my own bladework was certainly of lesser quality than my foe's, and his speed exceeded mine by a fair margin, the force of my blows were at least twice Isaiah's.

After a few more clashes, Isaiah blurred backwards. We were both breathing heavily, and had each taken some hits. I had a peppering of at least a dozen bruises on my torso, individually minor irritants, but they added up to a carpet of soreness that made breathing a bit harder.

My opponent, however, had only taken two hits, but they were much more solid hits than the ones he'd inflicted on me. The first was a savage stroke to his left leg, which based on how it was shaking, made it harder for him to keep up his speed. The second had been a thrust for his solar plexus, but he'd managed to deflect it enough that it hit his lower ribs instead. Judging by the noise that I'd heard when I'd connected, a rib was probably cracked.

Overall, though we were both battered, Isaiah was in rather worse shape than me. The Knight of Gremory acknowledged this by pointing his bokken downward.
"It's my loss, teacher." Isaiah said with a weary smile.
"However!" Here his grin became a smirk. "If you think that you'll beat Koneko the way you beat me…" The Knight trailed off, the implication of his words clear: his Peer wouldn't be felled by the level of strength I possessed.

I was well aware of that fact; truthfully the Rook was the opponent I was more wary of. In gaming terms, I was a Glass Cannon/Pure Aggro build, while she was an Agile Tank build. Her Rook durability and nekoshou agility made her a potent foe for me, even though she refused to touch the yokai abilities she could use.

After both Isaiah and I had our wounds healed by Asia, Shirone and I stood opposite each other. The petite Rook raised a brow when I tossed Onyx aside, pulled my heavily Runes gloves on, and took a loose aikido stance, but she did not react more than that.

Neither of us moved immediately when Rias started the spar, instead sizing each other up. I shuffled forward slowly, remaining just outside of the white-haired bruiser's immediate reach, then began to circle.

She tracked me with her eyes, and as I reached a position to her side, her hand blurred out in a vicious jab at my chin. Thankfully, my Thought Acceleration, which I had running practically perpetually, allowed me to react in time when combined with instinct and my own fortifications.

My hand came up and enveloped her tiny wrist, reminding me that, in spite of her extreme durability and skill, the girl was still just that: a girl, just barely in her teens. Nonetheless, I knew that it would be an insult to her as a person, a martial artist, and a student to not give her my best (nonlethal) efforts.

With that in mind, I yanked her off her feet and spun her over my head. The expression on her face as I slung her through the air reminded me nothing so much as a startled cat, fittingly enough. At the apex of my spin, I slammed the tiny bruiser into the ground with enough force to cause a dent in the ground. Her breath exploded from her lungs on impact, and she was clearly stunned in spite of her impressive durability.

The white-haired Rook regain her senses in a few scant moments, but those moments were a sufficient amount of time for me to position myself for a debilitating strike. Even as she flipped to her feet, my hand crashed into her abdomen, releasing a burst of Prana from the Runes on the palm of my glove. She doubled over, then sank to her knees, the foreign energy doing its duty disrupting her nervous system. At that point, Rias called the match, as Shirone remained incapacitated for more than five seconds.

After Asia healed Shirone, and I thanked Rias and her Peerage, Freed, Asia, and I all left the school campus. The two lovebirds-in-denial parted ways with me a short distance from my house, and I returned in short order. Once again, both Onyx and I failed to detect the two pairs of golden eyes that watched us intently, one with curiosity, the other with amused anticipation.

AN: Well, there's the spars! I hope you all enjoyed them, and that Johan's performance didn't strain your suspension of disbelief. Now, some basic statistics, to show how Johan's speed, strength, and durability match up with Isaiah/Kiba and Shirone/Koneko. These numbers are not indicative of anything aside from providing a scale.

Isaiah
Speed: 300
Durability: 100
Strength: 100

Shirone
Speed: 200
Durability:225
Strength:225

Johan (Fortified)
Speed: 200
Durability:200
Strength:200

In short, he's stronger and more durable than Kiba, but slower. He's about as fast as Koneko, but a bit weaker and less durable. However, aikido is a counter-based style, and he had a few tricks up his glove, so he managed to defeat her as well.
Well, the rather lengthy explanation aside, I once again thank Mecraphone for assisting me, and I encourage you all to leave a review. Enjoy!
 
I really thought that SI is going to install Tamamo and go beast fight Koneko. Welp.
 
Is he ever going to install? Cause as far I remember he doesn't and shows no intention in doing so any time soon.
 
In short, he's stronger and more durable than Kiba, but slower. He's about as fast as Koneko, but a bit weaker and less durable. However, aikido is a counter-based style, and he had a few tricks up his glove, so he managed to defeat her as well.

Think there should be a skill ranking added there. Koneko is a bit lacking in skill to enhance her strength and defense so should branch out a bit in melee combat styles. Kiba has a lot of skill and speed so only really lost due to taking heavy hits.

Live blades with Kiba would be more dangerous as he can swap out and each hit may take more out of Johan with the live steel.
 
Is he ever going to install? Cause as far I remember he doesn't and shows no intention in doing so any time soon.
Oh, don't worry. He hasn't Installed yet because he doesn't quite have the Prana control to do so, not because he doesn't want to. As mentioned a few chapters ago, he'll have the capability to Install Tamamo fairly soon, at about the same time as he'll be able to Include Ozymandias and King Hassan.
However, Rejoice! I have something fun planned.
Think there should be a skill ranking added there. Koneko is a bit lacking in skill to enhance her strength and defense so should branch out a bit in melee combat styles. Kiba has a lot of skill and speed so only really lost due to taking heavy hits.

Live blades with Kiba would be more dangerous as he can swap out and each hit may take more out of Johan with the live steel.
Hmmm, I see your point. I may go back and clarify that in my note.

Yeah, if this had been live blades, Johan wouldn't have gotten off nearly as easily.
Runes and Reinforcement only go so far against magically crafted blades.

On the other end of things, Kiba would've had a punctured lung. These sorts of injuries are precisely why Johan chose to fight with blunt objects.
 
On the other end of things, Kiba would've had a punctured lung. These sorts of injuries are precisely why Johan chose to fight with blunt objects.

That would largely come down to who got hit first. However I am pretty sure Johan has the ruthlessness advantage over Kiba who wants to be a perfect knight.

So I would say Jogan as trained by Hassan has a mindset advantage when it comes to trying to win.
 
That would largely come down to who got hit first. However I am pretty sure Johan has the ruthlessness advantage over Kiba who wants to be a perfect knight.

So I would say Jogan as trained by Hassan has a mindset advantage when it comes to trying to win.
True enough. Plus, between Runes and Reinforcement, Johan's skin is only slightly less tough than Koneko's Rook enhanced skin.
 
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