Dude. Mecha, military, high-school. It's a harem anime.

Yuri harem, yes. But harem.

MilitaryAaa said it the best.

Take it from me, pick your one waifu and stick. with. them. I have first hand experience when that rule isn't followed.

Besides, I really think you shouldn't drop a harem on your parents like that.
...
For some reason I now have an image of Alex's Dad going all "You sly dog!" and highfiving her.
Well, it's twentieth century, so it's a little early for that. In many different meanings of the word.
 
MilitaryAaa said it the best.
"I HAVE BEEN SUMMONED!"

Oh... well yes, that's quite right. Bad things happen when you stray from the path, you can't make everyone happy.

Buuut this scenario seems more like... appreciation than anything else, I mean it'd be pretty weird to fall for someone just because you saw their cleavage. So while I don't want to vote for it, it's not really alarming. It would probably give Yelena a hint about Alexandra though. If she pays attention.

[X] Tell her about both.
-[X] Ask Yelena why she's hiding behind you.

I added Esther to the character sheet.


Definitely getting there, it would seem. Alexandra is the players is Alexandra, so given the conversation last page, I figured it would make sense for her attitude toward present events to reflect that.
It's always nice when the gm does this sort of stuff, just make sure to have Alexandra be Alexandra first and formost. Like even if the thread is feeling down it doesn't mean she has to at the same extent, or like the harem discuss right now normal people don't think about or usually want a harem.

I don't want to see her scheming next update how to get the nurse and Yelena in the same hospital bed. :V
Adhoc vote count started by MilitaryAaa on Feb 9, 2018 at 12:15 AM, finished with 34 posts and 14 votes.
 
Anastasia'd better show up soon
Hehehehe.
She should be showing up fairly soon, yeah.

just make sure to have Alexandra be Alexandra first and formost. Like even if the thread is feeling down it doesn't mean she has to at the same extent, or like the harem discuss right now normal people don't think about or usually want a harem.
Yeah, definitely; I'll be using careful discretion on matters such as this.
 
Last edited:
You flighty people.
What about our One True Waifu?
I thought we've already had this conversation: having more Waifu will ruin your laifu! :p

Anastasia'd better show up soon or voters will straaaay~

While things are currently leaning towards Ana, there's nothing to say our subconscious gayness can't 'cause us to get flustered by a bit of... revealing clothing. I'm viewing it as something of a comedy option rather then a romantic one.
 
Last edited:
While things are currently leaning towards Ana, there's nothing to say our subconscious gayness can't 'cause us to get flustered by a bit of... revealing clothing. I'm viewing it as something of a comedy option rather then a romantic one.
Oh, yeah. I didn't intend it as a "pursuit of this character" option, more a "oh wow those exist"+absolute comedy option.
 
Voting is still open, yeah. Last update was on the previous page, though I do recommend reading through the index in full if you have the time.
 
Last edited:
it is not the protagonists job to scheme towards getting a harem. it is the job of people on the other side of the fourth wall and the occasional harem-desiring waifu.
 
Here's the votes so far:
6 Mention Both (ShadowAngel, Icipall, Raiseth, Araa, Terran, Arbitracom)
1 Mention Both, Ask Yelena (Military)
3 WTF Yelena (Nevill, Veekie, Alias)
4 VERBAL FLAILING (Spectrum, Ghost, Nuker, Offbrand)
Voting is still open, as per usual.

What is love? Baby, please refrain from doing physical or emotional harm to my person.
 
Last edited:
Medical Fatigue
You gape in shock at her exposed cleavage for a moment, but manage to calm yourself down before saying something embarrassing. Instead, you show off your arm, and then point to your ears. "I had an unexpected encounter along the way here. Got some shrapnel in here, and these started bleeding after we got a bit too close to a blast. I don't know how bad it is, but I figured it was better safe than sorry." You also notice Yelena is hiding behind you for some reason, conspicuously attempting to use your small form as a shield against the woman... but at this point you don't really care enough to ask why.

Following Esther's instructions, you take a seat on the end of one of the beds, and after grabbing up a few items from the cabinets, she pulls up a chair to face you. "Alright, let's start with the ears." She takes what looks like some sort of wand with a black cone on one end, and gently places the point in your ear, looking at the other side with a frown. She makes some adjustments before pulling it out, taking a cotton swab to clean up the dried blood and gunk, before trying again with the wand scope thing. She nods to herself. "Now let's do the other side," she says, and you turn your head the other way. Yelena has taken a seat next to you, and while distracted by Esther's ministrations, it doesn't go unnoticed that she's fixing you both with an intense stare, like a kid trying way too hard to appear serious about something. You raise an eyebrow, but she doesn't seem to notice.

"Okay, look at me again," Esther commands, and you face her head-on. "Don't move your head; I'm going to make some noises and I want you to tell me how well you can hear them." She reaches up, and snaps her fingers right next to your right ear.

"Heard that," You say, and she nods, doing the same on your left. This continues for a while, as she shifts position for each snap. It soon becomes evident that while still functional, your hearing is definitely muffled compared to normal, particularly coming from behind, above, or below. She repeats it with some sort of buzzer; when she adjusts the pitch to high or low it becomes abnormally inaudible.

She finally sits back. "So it looks like your eardrums got ruptured, but at least you can still kind of hear, which is frankly rather lucky on your part; it could have been a lot worse. They'll heal on their own in a couple weeks... but if they get infected, that could leave your hearing permanently damaged, or even make you outright deaf. You'll need to do a couple of things to keep that from happening until they've healed properly. First, I'll get you a prescription for antibiotics; we should have enough in store. If it starts to hurt at any point I can also get you painkillers, but otherwise those have to be saved for more serious cases. Second, do not let water get in your ears for any reason; it'd be the fastest way to let infection set in. And third, while this may seem counterproductive, don't try to clean your ears, or forcefully blow your nose; that may possibly reopen the wound and set you back to square one. Just don't stick anything in your ear, for the same reason."

You nod, not really comprehending, and she gives an understanding chuckle. "I'll write it down for you, don't worry."

"You really know a lot," you observe as she sets about doing that. "Where did you learn it, overseas?"

"Not me, I'm too young," She explains, "But my mentor did go. Learned in one of the bigger medical schools, brought it back here before the barrier went down. I'm lucky to learn from him, even if he thinks I'm was- Uh... Let's have a look at that arm." Curiosity battles with compliance and compliance wins; you lay the limb forward across your lap, palm up, as she takes a magnifying glass to inspect the wounds.

"So how did this happen?" She asks, and somehow you know it's not an optional request. You explain about meeting with Victoria, watching the battle from the ridge, and then finding the downed machine in the pass; you do your best not to incriminate Victoria too much, but she clearly connects the dots on her own. "Nasira won't be happy when she finds out... but I won't say anything. Devora and Inessa may take sides, but the rest of us know to keep our heads down and let those two work it out on their own; I suggest you do the same."

You nod, then wince as she suddenly applies a watery substance to your forearm; it's extremely cold to the touch and stings where it meets your wounds. Yelena tenses, glaring at the doctor, but Esther is focused as she grabs a pair of tweezers and pulls out a small, needle-thin sliver of rock from the biggest of the wounds, the one that had been bleeding earlier. "Definitely a good thing you came to me now rather than later." After doing another check, she nods to herself. "It looks like it was just the one; the rest are scratches." She lays a strip of gauze over the wounded area, strapping it down with some sort of medical tape, and leans back. "You'll want to prevent infection here, too, but it shouldn't be as much of a pain; just keep it clean and replace your bandages every other day, and you'll be fine."

She writes that down as well, before handing you the paper. "Come back and see me tomorrow; I'll have your prescription and some replacement gauze lined up for you then. Otherwise, do you need anything?"

"Uh... no thank you." You say, standing up.

"Then I'll see you tomorrow."

Soon enough, you and Yelena have found your way back outside; the sun is in the last stages of slipping behind the mountains, and the sky to the east is growing steadily darker. You take a deep breath, a faint chill breeze carrying the taste of dust and smoke with it, reminding you of your surroundings. The base is quiet, the streets emptier than before, and Yelena lurks behind you with a dark expression.

Huh
> What was that?
Ask Yelena about her behavior.
> What's cooking? You just want to go grab dinner now, and head to sleep before curfew.
> What's on your mind? Talk to Yelena on the way to eat.
> Whatever. Maybe you'd just rather sleep, and worry about food in the morning.
> Other (Write-In)



Apologies for the lackluster options this time; I'm pretty tired myself at the moment, heh.
I hope I'm not overestimating the medical advancement of the early twentieth century. I hope my research and portrayal of medical procedure isn't too inaccurate. I hope the length of the update helps make up for the unexpected hiatus there. And I hope you all enjoy. : )
 
Last edited:
META: On Choices
So I'll be the first to admit the choices so far haven't been, perhaps, the most engaging. This was somewhat by design, but still poor design - I thought it best to get a lot of the introductory/setup stuff out of the way right away, and so a lot of the options so far (Aside from stuff like how to handle finding the downed spider-mech and what to do before sundown) have been focused on letting you decide how much or how little to look into certain things. I feel that's created a certain sense of fatigue in both you as the readers and me as the writer; at least one person has expressed just wanting to get on to the robot stuff already, and I'm kind of with you there. And so it is that I'm hopeful things will pick up very very shortly; tomorrow in-universe, Alexandra is much more in control of the program, so to speak, and the options will have more relevance than just "learn about the thing" or "learn about the other thing" or "just move on to the next set of things." For everyone who's stuck with me so far, I promise your patience shall be rewarded, and thank you.

TLDR:
One or two more updates and Day 1 ends
And then the real fun begins...
 
Last edited:
It looks like that Yelena doesn't like doctors,

It looks like Yelena doesn't like much of anyone.

... I kinda hope she's not thinking something along the lines: "All these soldiers are in fact a robot conspiracy established by the aliens to overthrow the government! Now that I've infiltrated them, I can destroy them from within and save my country!"

Okay, let's ask her.

[X] What was that?

Though food is more important, I think.

Lazarus, can we talk to her on the way to the canteen?
 
Last edited:
Yelena's the one with the cards; Hatice is the grumpy one. If that's what you were thinking of.

Yelena draws in closer, glancing side to side before leaning in to whisper to you conspiratorially. "I'll stay with you and make sure they don't do anything."

Ah, she doesn't hate everyone. Only doctors. I see.
Changed vote

[X] What's on your mind? Talk to Yelena on the way to eat.
 
Back
Top