Marca Estrella: A Game of Chivalry in the Time of Archengines

Which extra materials do you want for the chapter end?

  • Warfare in the Guirlanda: Part 1

    Votes: 8 11.1%
  • Daily Life in the Holy Ispano Empire: Part 1

    Votes: 12 16.7%
  • Cofre Del Tesoro: A Brief History

    Votes: 2 2.8%
  • The Geneology of House de la Bota

    Votes: 4 5.6%
  • The Design of an Archengine

    Votes: 21 29.2%
  • Alien Races of the Guirlanda and Frontier

    Votes: 25 34.7%

  • Total voters
    72
  • Poll closed .
As with all fashion episodes, write-ins and combination votes are acceptable.

For the sake of sanity we'll be hairstyle combinations as a single overall vote, so we won't just mash together the most popular options without prompting.

Lots of options this round.
 
[X] Put it into a low ponytail for something sedate.
[X] Run some smaller fine braids through your hair, as is traditional in your society.

Tradition!

[X] A set of practical and hard wearing stiff black cotton trousers, and a cream silk shirt.

[X] (x0.7) Go with Valentin de la Bota, father of the woman you are in love with and recalcitrant co-conspirator in Balduino's failed scheme.

Time to meet the future-in-laws properly.
 
[X] Put it back, loose and wild as if you care about your looks (but want to look like you don't).
[X] Run a little oil through your hair so it styles easier and smells nice.
-[X] The coconut oil seems to have a sweet, mild smell that's incredible likable.
[X] A white formal shirt and tight fitting silk breeches.
[X] (x0.9) Ask Sidonie, and keep your enemy closer.

As if I could not vote for coconut oil.
 
[X] Put it back, loose and wild as if you care about your looks (but want to look like you don't).
[X] Run some smaller fine braids through your hair, as is traditional in your society.
[X] A white formal shirt and tight fitting silk breeches.
[X] (x0.9) Ask Sidonie, and keep your enemy closer.
 
But, but, but why???

I liked our girl!

Plus she is the pilot. Now we are playing copilot.

Because Avagis is also meant to be a main character in this quest and the GMs want to give the players the chance to shape his personality somewhat?

Perspective switching is hardly a novel literary technique. If the GMs want to switch perspectives between multiple main characters that's their call to make, and they are the ones writing the quest after all.
 
[x] Put it back, loose and wild as if you care about your looks (but want to look like you don't).
[x] Run some smaller fine braids through your hair, as is traditional in your society
[x] A white formal shirt and tight fitting silk breeches.
[x] (x0.9) Ask Sidonie, and keep your enemy closer.
 
[X] Put it back, loose and wild as if you care about your looks (but want to look like you don't).
[X] Run some smaller fine braids through your hair, as is traditional in your society
[X] A white formal shirt and tight fitting silk breeches.
[X] (x0.9) Ask Sidonie, and keep your enemy closer.
 
[X] Go with Thomas, a man of around your age who should be easy to get along with, given your shared interests: archengines, technology, history, women...

I don't know what to vote on the appearance.
 
Look Sidonie has already met with the in-laws we need to make a good impression on them to counteract that

Besides we've already seen a good deal of Sidonie from Mireia's perspective; I want to see more of Mireia's dad.
 
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[X] Put it into a braided ponytail, something which is neat and unisex.
[X] Run a little oil through your hair so it styles easier and smells nice.
-[X] Oil of wintergreen and arancia has a sharp, refreshing scent and feels cool on your fingers.
[X] Run some smaller fine braids through your hair, as is traditional in your society.
[X] A blue silk shirt and trousers under a white leather waistcoat with silver cuff links.
[X] (x0.9) Ask Sidonie, and keep your enemy closer.

I don't really understand look like you don't care + small fine braids. Seems like we'd come off as too lazy to style the rest of our hair.
I'm flexible on oil choice.
The look like we don't care seems only more absurd if we go with the tight pants; definitely one or the other for those in my opinion.
 
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[X] Put it into a high taut ponytail with the tail, and look a bit more aggressive.
[X] Run some smaller fine braids through your hair, as is traditional in your society.

This combo sounds cool as hell.

[X] A set of practical and hard wearing stiff black cotton trousers, and a cream silk shirt.
[X] (x0.9) Ask Sidonie, and keep your enemy closer.

These two really need to start getting along better. What better way to do that than a shopping trip?
 
How should you style it?
[X] Cut it a lot short, and shear it a lot shorter around the sides to emphasize the lines of your face and let your ears breathe.

How should you decorate it?
[X] Just leave it plain, it looks good anyway.

What should you do?
[X] A blue silk shirt and trousers under a white leather waistcoat with silver cuff links.

We're naturally quite good looking, we have a nice face, and we're youthful, so let's dress to emphasize that.

[X] (x0.9) Ask Sidonie, and keep your enemy closer.

This is too amusing to pass up, quite frankly.
 
[X] Put it back, loose and wild as if you care about your looks (but want to look like you don't).
[X] Run a little oil through your hair so it styles easier and smells nice.
-[X] The coconut oil seems to have a sweet, mild smell that's incredible likable.
[X] A white formal shirt and tight fitting silk breeches.
[X] (x0.9) Ask Sidonie, and keep your enemy closer.

 
[X] Put it back, loose and wild as if you care about your looks (but want to look like you don't).
[X] Run some smaller fine braids through your hair, as is traditional in your society
[X] A white formal shirt and tight fitting silk breeches.
[X] (x0.9) Ask Sidonie, and keep your enemy closer.
 
[X] Put it back, loose and wild as if you care about your looks (but want to look like you don't).
[X] Run some smaller fine braids through your hair, as is traditional in your society
[X] A white formal shirt and tight fitting silk breeches.
[X] (x0.9) Ask Sidonie, and keep your enemy closer.

 
[X] Put it back, loose and wild as if you care about your looks (but want to look like you don't).

[X] A jeweled broach or clasp. (Depends on ponytail or loose.)
[X] Run a little oil through your hair so it styles easier and smells nice.
-[X] Oil of wintergreen and arancia has a sharp, refreshing scent and feels cool on your fingers.

[X] A blue silk shirt and trousers under a white leather waistcoat with silver cuff links.

[X] (x0.9) Ask Sidonie, and keep your enemy closer.


So, how JoJo are we going?
 
[X] Cut it a lot short, and shear it a lot shorter around the sides to emphasize the lines of your face and let your ears breathe.
[X] Just leave it plain, it looks good anyway.
[X] A set of practical and hard wearing stiff black cotton trousers, and a cream silk shirt.
[X] Go with Aina, the obvious option.
 
Part Segundo III - Your Enemy Closer


[x] Put it back, loose and wild as if you care about your looks (but want to look like you don't).
[x] Run some smaller fine braids through your hair, as is traditional in your society.
[x] Run a little oil through your hair so it styles easier and smells nice.
-[x] The coconut oil seems to have a sweet, mild smell that's incredible likable.
[x] A white formal shirt and tight fitting silk breeches.
[x] (x0.9) Ask Sidonie, and keep your enemy closer.


You look between them and consider it a moment. While the other options sound nice, you're willing to surrender a little bit of a pleasure of your leisure time in order to put some distance between Mireia and Sidonie. And, though you hate to admit it, her taste in clothing is excellent, learning more about fashion in this new era should make up for however much her sharp wit makes you regret making this decision.

You tear into the last bit of bread on your plate and dab your mouth with a napkin, nodding with a little confidence. "I'll go with Sidonie."

She claps her hands, obviously pleased. "Hee. And you thought he'd say no, Mireia!"

"I thought. I'm allowed to be wrong now and then." Mireia smiles, seeming a little amused by the development. "I hope the two of you will get along better as well."

You look between them and smile thinly, feeling a even more nervous. While you're sure Mireia is accepting it all at face value, Sidonie is a shrewd enough intriguer to suspect ulterior motives. If you don't represent yourself well she'll expose you and your morals will become suspect. You clear your throat and lay your palms onto the table, smiling about as genuinely as you can manage. "As a member of your household I th-thought I might take up some responsibility for entertaining your guests." You stammer a little bit, struggling to keep your tone consistent.

Sidonie either hasn't noticed the break in your voice or happens to be humouring you, probably the latter to your worsening concern. "And I do have quite a bit of use for that sort of sentiment! I'll make you earn those new clothes I'm buying you."

"...that you'll buy him? You don't need to do any such thing, Sidonie." Mireia looks at her with a small frown. "He can take spending money from the estate coffers."

"Oh please. Consider it a present for your hospitality and for saving my life. I'll have you the most fashionable escudero this side of… hmm. Mine I suppose." Sidonie snaps her fingers and then grins at Mireia again. She's playing the game of an urban sophisticate… dangerous, but you suspect her game has blinded her to yours. Perhaps you have a chance. "But beyond them, this side of Gran Castille!"

"I won't say no. And this'll give you time to talk." Mireia smiles a little.

"Yes, exactly." Sidonie turns to you. "So, hmm. Shall we leave at once, after breakfast?"

"That's what I intended, yes." You clear your throat. While you've finished breakfast in short order, the delicate greens Sidonie had on her plate are not entirely finished.

You occupy yourself by looking around. Unsurprisingly, Mireia has already moved to her second plate, afflicted by that grandiose appetite of hers as she is.

"Good good. I'll call my staff and have a shuttle ready- as pleasant and scenic a car ride might be." Sidonie adds again, looking at you expectantly.

"Do you know the clothiers at all in this area?" You ask her.

"What? No! Not at all."

"...is it too late to reconsider."

"Absolutely. And besides, my elfin little ancestor… mm. I should think of a new pet name."

"Er. What?" You frown, confused and concerned all at once. Elfin? Are you really so thin and delicate as to deserve that from someone as slim and fine-boned as her.

Sidonie wags her hand. "Nothing. It's only early in the morning and my teasing pet names for you are a bit dull."

"...a-ahhh." She's admitting weakness. Maybe she's not the unbeatable opponent that has dominated your imagination these past few hours.

Or maybe that's a ploy all of its own. You need to be careful with such an obviously ruthless schemer.

She leans on the table, propping her chin up in her left palm and looks at you impassively, her eyes narrowing as she dissects you. Your gaze meets hers, and you instinctively avert your eyes as you remember that she is effectively the superior of your superior. "You know," she calls, drawing your attention back. "You're really quite pretty. The eyes are a bit round and that nose has an arch, but it doesn't really diminish your beauty."

Mireia looks at her silently and stifles a giggle, turning to watch your expression.

...well, how do you feel about that?

[ ] (x0.9) I only have room in my heart for one l-love!
-[ ] (x1.0) ...but the attention of another is not unwelcome to a young man.
[ ] That's really nice of her.
[ ] (x1.2) This is a trick!
[ ] (x0.7) Quick, quick! Think of something nice to say about her.
 
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