Lost Eden [Exploration; Survival]

[Scify]

[X] Suggest getting something to eat.

 

[Walker]

[X] Agree to light the lanterns.

 

[torrmercury]

[X] Suggest looking for Duncan.

 

[Kokurokoki]

Ah, what do you guys think of the story so far? I'm kinda conflicted, since there is still a lot of stuff in Alphonse to show off, but I'm sure you guys want to start adventuring too. >_<

 

[Scify]

It's interesting, but... yeah. I'd kind of like to move out soon. Even if we don't actually leave Alphonse behind (because it seems like an interesting place), I'd like to see some more of the outside world.

 

[Kokurokoki]

It's interesting, but... yeah. I'd kind of like to move out soon. Even if we don't actually leave Alphonse behind (because it seems like an interesting place), I'd like to see some more of the outside world.

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Got it! There are still a few more areas of Alphonse left to explore. I'm going to try to condense it down so that we can move on to exploring Eden again.

 

[Sheaman3773]

[X] Suggest getting something to eat.

Ah, what do you guys think of the story so far? I'm kinda conflicted, since there is still a lot of stuff in Alphonse to show off, but I'm sure you guys want to start adventuring too. >_<

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Yeah, I'd rather kind of get a move-on. Maybe it doesn't have to leave the town, but right now the story feels very plodding.

 

[Kokurokoki]

[X] Suggest getting something to eat.

Yeah, I'd rather kind of get a move-on. Maybe it doesn't have to leave the town, but right now the story feels very plodding.

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That's my fault. I figure I'd break up a massive scene into smaller parts, but ultimately it has backfired against me since it killed the pacing of the story. XP

Oh well... it's a learning experience... Q_Q