Intro/Part 1 Nagash
Codex
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Introduction:
Hello there. Welcome to my study. My name is Codex, and if you're reading this, you may or may not know me from Divided Loyalties, an excellent quest from this website written and QMed by the lovely @Boney, who kickstarted my interest in and love for the Warhammer Fantasy setting. If you know me from the thread, you probably know that I'm very invested and that I've gone through a frankly ludicrous number of lore books within a relatively short time. If you want the full reading list, then here you go:
I believe that's all of them. I think it's fair to say I have a decent level of background information going into the End Times, and believe it or not but I actually know many of the major story beats that occur here. If you're expecting a blind run, then I hate to disappoint, but I'm here to pinpoint, analyse and understand the End Times rather than going into it as a fresh experience. Expect some degree of negativity, but I'd like to think that I'm fairly restrained and don't have nostalgia to strengthen negative feelings directed towards the writers.
If it's not clear already, I'm going to be reading the End Times and trying to look over every piece of it rather than just the main books. I'm starting with End Times: Nagash and going from there. First, some ground rules:
If I quote something, I will reference the page number as it comes up in my version of the book. I will also do my best to maintain the exact wording. If I don't add quotations to something, assume that I'm paraphrasing and using my own words to describe something, and I likely won't mention the exact page number.
I am limited in what I can post for obvious reasons regarding copyright, but I will try to grab the occasional excerpt that interests me for one reason or another.
I'm probably going to be a bit spontaneous in my read through. I might slow down or speed up, go through a lot of sections in succession or get bogged down on one part for a little while. Please bear with me as I do have university and I'm mostly doing this as a distraction from Divided Loyalty downtime when the thread is getting pretty quiet.
All that being said, let's start!
End Times: Nagash readthrough Part 1:
The first thing I notice as soon as I start reading the book is the fact that it starts out making it absolutely clear that it's the apocalypse. Several pages are dedicated towards a prophecy of doom indicating the destruction of the mortal plane and the phases of the chaos that would ensure in the End Times, from the Skaven invasion to the Elven civil war to Archaon's moment. There are several passages throughout the beginning that make it completely clear that this is "Archaon's Moment" so to speak. It's probably one of the least effective ways of building a villain up, because right from the start I know that the narrative literally revolves around him.
There isn't necessarily a problem with revolving a narrative around a specific individual, even a villain. The problem here is that Archaon has never struck me as an interesting character in all my time delving through Warhammer material, and the start of the book certainly doesn't help much since the narrative outright says he'll win. I'll try my best to give Archaon a fair chance, but I don't think I will like him very much.
The book basically starts with the prophecy of doom followed by a neat snippet focusing on a Skink Priest moving into Mazdamundi's Star Chamber. We then get a Skink messenger arriving into the Chamber to inform the Priest (Tetko) that Kroq-Gar requires more support, and Tetko replies that this is unprecedented. There is an underlying message that things are not right, especially for the Lizardmen who are so used to plans. Mazdamundi then wakes up and outright says that the Great Plan has failed, and the Exodus will have to begin. Right from the start of the book, the Lizardmen give up and decide that their goal is to survive rather than win. How thrilling.
The next section then lays out an overview of the impending apocalypse as chaotic forces start converging and wrecking havoc across the world, and while the prose is actually quite nice and evocative, providing vibrant descriptions that did make the writing feel smooth and concise, there is an underlying factor going on here that sours the writing.
Namely, that from the very start, it's clear to me that everybody but Chaos is incompetent.
An example of this is perhaps a snippet about corruption spreading across the lands, with anecdotal instances of individuals falling to Chaos and the Gods of the mortal realm waning in strength, for they are weak compared to the Dark Brothers who sup on the brew that is mankind's vibrant emotions. There is those example:
"In Altdorf, a Sister of Shallya completed her morning's devotions, took up a carving knife from the refectory, and slaughtered those with whom she had lived and worshipped for two decades. When the city watch finally breached the temple a day later, they found her sitting amidst bloody and half-eaten bodies. The captain of the watch made the mistake of thinking her catatonic; soon he had a ragged gash where his throat should have been, and she had a sword as well as a knife. Thus began a trail of carnage that stretched to the border of Troll Country, and ended at last in a hail of bullets somewhere on the Nordvast-Streckhein road." Page 15
Yes, you heard that right. A single Sister of Shallya corrupted by Khorne killed every single women in her temple, killed and/or escaped the Watch, and travelled several hundred miles unimpeded all the up to goddamn Troll Country. I am utterly astonished that the Empire even survives if this is what a single corrupted individual can do. What continues my irritation is that there is no build up to the apocalyptic mood. Within the very first 10-20 pages, Karak Izor, one of the three most major of the New Holds and one of the strongest current holds of the Dwarves, almost fell to a Daemonic invasion were it not for them spontaneously vanishing into the Chaos Realms. The entirety of the banks of the Aver fell to Chaos with only Averheim surviving because the Daemons vanished as they came upon the walls.
There is no buildup to this. You open the book and you instantly see the forces of order buckling. Then we get to the Dark Elf section of the chapter. In there, something truly baffling happens:
"As elsewhere, northmen spilled south across the Ironfrost Glacier into Naggaroth. Their banners were black against the storm-laden sky; the tramp of their iron-shod feet a rumble of thunder in distant lands. This was the Bloodied Horde, and Valkia was its dread mistress. She had heard Khorne's voice bellowing through the thunderous skies, and now drove her followers south to claim skulls in his name. The Gorequeen cared not for Archaon's strategy – she knew only that Khorne called for blood, and thus she set forth to slake his monstrous thirst.
The horde marched with harsh cheer and boom of drum, yet, incredibly, the Naggarothi were caught unaware. Too long had they relied upon the sorceresses of Ghrond to alert them to such perils, but the Tower of Prophecy lay silent behind a shield of sorcery. Raven-cloaked border patrols fled before the northlanders, turning their swift steeds south towards the safety of the Watchtowers. One by one, the dark riders were overtaken by yowling daemons and plucked from their horses. Only a handful reached the tower of Volroth, there to perish from their wounds." Page 16
An army of Khorne caught the Dark Elves garrisoning the border against Chaos in the north of Naggaroth by surprise. Because they relied upon sorceresses to predict when a goddamn Khorna army would be marching across the ice. Not only is the sheer stupidity here baffling, but when the relieving force comes in to the tower of Volroth, it's revealed that a garrison of eighty thousand Dark Elves lay dead.
I know how GW feels about numbers, especially in regards to the Elves. I'm going to disregard that one of the garrisons for only one of at least eleven Watchtowers consists of eighty thousand soldiers. Dark Elves spontaneously form from the Aethyr as far as I know.
Anyways, the forces of Chaos breach the Watchtowers and attack the cities of the Druchii. The Dark Elves are besieged for several months and are completely and utterly overwhelmed because of course they are, they're fighting Chaos. Malekith is absent, off doing god knows what, and Morathi is shut in her tower. Kouran Darkhand takes over the control of Naggarond because the Council of the city is practically useless, and apparently he's not a good enough tactician to break the siege, coming into a stalemate twice against Valkia herself in a duel. At the end of the day, Malekith comes back to save the day and calls his entire council useless because they are.
Here, the narrative shifts from a general recounting to a narrative prose from the perspective of Kouran during a council meeting at Malekith's hand, and it lets us get a good look at his personality, thought process and Druchii culture. It is predictably awful and edgy, as you would expect. An example of this is that the map that Malekith is slamming his fist into and from which the coordinates are drawn is actually parchment made from the flayed skin of an incompetent map maker, and the figures that are supposed to represent locations on the map are carved finger bones. Classy.
Also from his internal perspective, we get a look at Kouran assessing Malus Darkblade, who is enjoying Malekith's failure because he desires rebellion, and Kouran knows this, so he's internally preparing to "have something done about that". Malekith apologises to a Black Ark Fleetmaster by the name of Drane Brackblood, who was supposed to lead the invasion to Ulthuan but was recalled to deal with the Chaos Invasion. She sounds pretty upset, and because they're Dark Elves, Kouran says this internally:
" 'Our campaign against hated Ulthuan will be delayed until the barbarians have been… humbled,' Malekith continued in a dangerous whisper, his temper perhaps subsiding. 'Accept our apologies, Lady Brackblood, for we know that this was to have been your finest hour.'
The Witch King's temper was under control once more, if it had truly been roused in the first place. Even Kouran could not always tell when his master played at rage for theatrical effect.
To Kouran's left, Drane Brackblood gave a predatory smile. 'Your majesty is most gracious,' she said, her voice like silk torn on broken glass.
She had plotted long and hard to be given command of the invasion fleet, Kouran thought, but she knew better than to express her disappointment in council. That would be taken out on her household and, if rumour held true, the very special prisoner chained in the deepest dungeon of her manse. " Page 18
It is here as the conversation within the council room shifts to throwing Malus Darkblade towards a seemingly dangerous and thankless task related to "providing consideration for our dark mother" that I end this section, as the chapter will transition into Ulthuan and I think this is enough of a benchmark for a first post. If you enjoyed reading this, stick around. I might speed up my read through as I go along, since the first book has about 600 pages and I'm only on page 18.
Hello there. Welcome to my study. My name is Codex, and if you're reading this, you may or may not know me from Divided Loyalties, an excellent quest from this website written and QMed by the lovely @Boney, who kickstarted my interest in and love for the Warhammer Fantasy setting. If you know me from the thread, you probably know that I'm very invested and that I've gone through a frankly ludicrous number of lore books within a relatively short time. If you want the full reading list, then here you go:
Army Books and Supplements:
6th, 7th, and 8th Edition Core Books for Warhammer Fantasy
6th, 7th and 8th Edition Empire Army Books
6th and 8th Edition High Elves Army Books
6th and 8th Edition Wood Elves Army Books
6th and 8th Edition Dark Elves Army Books
6th (Revised) and 8th Edition Dwarf Army Books
6th and 8th Edition Ogre Kingdoms Army Books
6th and 8th Edition Orcs and Goblins Army Books
6th, 7th and 8th Edition Lizardmen Army Books
6th and 7th Edition Beastmen Army Books
6th and 7th Edition Skaven Army Books
6th and 8th Edition Tomb Kings Army Books
6th and 8th Edition Vampire Counts Army Books
6th Edition Bretonnia Army Book
6th Edition Kislev Supplement
6th Edition Hordes of Chaos as well as 8th Edition Warriors and Daemons of Chaos
5th Edition Dogs of War
8th Edition Supplement Storm of Magic
6th Edition Dark Shadows, Storm of Chaos, Lustria and Conquest of the New World Supplement/Campaign Books
A Smattering of White Dwarfs, ranging from War of the Beard to Maisontaal Abbey to the Dragon Isles to the Vampire Coast White Dwarf. I haven't read all of them, but some of them I have.
2E WFRP:
Core Book and Companion Book
Old World Armory
Old World Bestiary
Night's Dark Masters
Knights of the Grail
Realm of the Ice Queen
Heirs of Sigmar
Realm of Sorcery
Tome of Salvation
Tome of Corruption
Shades of Empire
Ashes of Middenheim
Spires of Altdorf
Forges of Nuln
Terror in Talabheim
Barony of the Damned
Children of the Horned Rat
Renegade Crowns and Lure of the Liche Lord
I also read 1st Edition WFRP Sold Down the River and 4th Edition WFRP Archives of the Empire Volume I to fill in some gaps
6th, 7th, and 8th Edition Core Books for Warhammer Fantasy
6th, 7th and 8th Edition Empire Army Books
6th and 8th Edition High Elves Army Books
6th and 8th Edition Wood Elves Army Books
6th and 8th Edition Dark Elves Army Books
6th (Revised) and 8th Edition Dwarf Army Books
6th and 8th Edition Ogre Kingdoms Army Books
6th and 8th Edition Orcs and Goblins Army Books
6th, 7th and 8th Edition Lizardmen Army Books
6th and 7th Edition Beastmen Army Books
6th and 7th Edition Skaven Army Books
6th and 8th Edition Tomb Kings Army Books
6th and 8th Edition Vampire Counts Army Books
6th Edition Bretonnia Army Book
6th Edition Kislev Supplement
6th Edition Hordes of Chaos as well as 8th Edition Warriors and Daemons of Chaos
5th Edition Dogs of War
8th Edition Supplement Storm of Magic
6th Edition Dark Shadows, Storm of Chaos, Lustria and Conquest of the New World Supplement/Campaign Books
A Smattering of White Dwarfs, ranging from War of the Beard to Maisontaal Abbey to the Dragon Isles to the Vampire Coast White Dwarf. I haven't read all of them, but some of them I have.
2E WFRP:
Core Book and Companion Book
Old World Armory
Old World Bestiary
Night's Dark Masters
Knights of the Grail
Realm of the Ice Queen
Heirs of Sigmar
Realm of Sorcery
Tome of Salvation
Tome of Corruption
Shades of Empire
Ashes of Middenheim
Spires of Altdorf
Forges of Nuln
Terror in Talabheim
Barony of the Damned
Children of the Horned Rat
Renegade Crowns and Lure of the Liche Lord
I also read 1st Edition WFRP Sold Down the River and 4th Edition WFRP Archives of the Empire Volume I to fill in some gaps
If it's not clear already, I'm going to be reading the End Times and trying to look over every piece of it rather than just the main books. I'm starting with End Times: Nagash and going from there. First, some ground rules:
If I quote something, I will reference the page number as it comes up in my version of the book. I will also do my best to maintain the exact wording. If I don't add quotations to something, assume that I'm paraphrasing and using my own words to describe something, and I likely won't mention the exact page number.
I am limited in what I can post for obvious reasons regarding copyright, but I will try to grab the occasional excerpt that interests me for one reason or another.
I'm probably going to be a bit spontaneous in my read through. I might slow down or speed up, go through a lot of sections in succession or get bogged down on one part for a little while. Please bear with me as I do have university and I'm mostly doing this as a distraction from Divided Loyalty downtime when the thread is getting pretty quiet.
All that being said, let's start!
End Times: Nagash readthrough Part 1:
The first thing I notice as soon as I start reading the book is the fact that it starts out making it absolutely clear that it's the apocalypse. Several pages are dedicated towards a prophecy of doom indicating the destruction of the mortal plane and the phases of the chaos that would ensure in the End Times, from the Skaven invasion to the Elven civil war to Archaon's moment. There are several passages throughout the beginning that make it completely clear that this is "Archaon's Moment" so to speak. It's probably one of the least effective ways of building a villain up, because right from the start I know that the narrative literally revolves around him.
There isn't necessarily a problem with revolving a narrative around a specific individual, even a villain. The problem here is that Archaon has never struck me as an interesting character in all my time delving through Warhammer material, and the start of the book certainly doesn't help much since the narrative outright says he'll win. I'll try my best to give Archaon a fair chance, but I don't think I will like him very much.
The book basically starts with the prophecy of doom followed by a neat snippet focusing on a Skink Priest moving into Mazdamundi's Star Chamber. We then get a Skink messenger arriving into the Chamber to inform the Priest (Tetko) that Kroq-Gar requires more support, and Tetko replies that this is unprecedented. There is an underlying message that things are not right, especially for the Lizardmen who are so used to plans. Mazdamundi then wakes up and outright says that the Great Plan has failed, and the Exodus will have to begin. Right from the start of the book, the Lizardmen give up and decide that their goal is to survive rather than win. How thrilling.
The next section then lays out an overview of the impending apocalypse as chaotic forces start converging and wrecking havoc across the world, and while the prose is actually quite nice and evocative, providing vibrant descriptions that did make the writing feel smooth and concise, there is an underlying factor going on here that sours the writing.
Namely, that from the very start, it's clear to me that everybody but Chaos is incompetent.
An example of this is perhaps a snippet about corruption spreading across the lands, with anecdotal instances of individuals falling to Chaos and the Gods of the mortal realm waning in strength, for they are weak compared to the Dark Brothers who sup on the brew that is mankind's vibrant emotions. There is those example:
"In Altdorf, a Sister of Shallya completed her morning's devotions, took up a carving knife from the refectory, and slaughtered those with whom she had lived and worshipped for two decades. When the city watch finally breached the temple a day later, they found her sitting amidst bloody and half-eaten bodies. The captain of the watch made the mistake of thinking her catatonic; soon he had a ragged gash where his throat should have been, and she had a sword as well as a knife. Thus began a trail of carnage that stretched to the border of Troll Country, and ended at last in a hail of bullets somewhere on the Nordvast-Streckhein road." Page 15
Yes, you heard that right. A single Sister of Shallya corrupted by Khorne killed every single women in her temple, killed and/or escaped the Watch, and travelled several hundred miles unimpeded all the up to goddamn Troll Country. I am utterly astonished that the Empire even survives if this is what a single corrupted individual can do. What continues my irritation is that there is no build up to the apocalyptic mood. Within the very first 10-20 pages, Karak Izor, one of the three most major of the New Holds and one of the strongest current holds of the Dwarves, almost fell to a Daemonic invasion were it not for them spontaneously vanishing into the Chaos Realms. The entirety of the banks of the Aver fell to Chaos with only Averheim surviving because the Daemons vanished as they came upon the walls.
There is no buildup to this. You open the book and you instantly see the forces of order buckling. Then we get to the Dark Elf section of the chapter. In there, something truly baffling happens:
"As elsewhere, northmen spilled south across the Ironfrost Glacier into Naggaroth. Their banners were black against the storm-laden sky; the tramp of their iron-shod feet a rumble of thunder in distant lands. This was the Bloodied Horde, and Valkia was its dread mistress. She had heard Khorne's voice bellowing through the thunderous skies, and now drove her followers south to claim skulls in his name. The Gorequeen cared not for Archaon's strategy – she knew only that Khorne called for blood, and thus she set forth to slake his monstrous thirst.
The horde marched with harsh cheer and boom of drum, yet, incredibly, the Naggarothi were caught unaware. Too long had they relied upon the sorceresses of Ghrond to alert them to such perils, but the Tower of Prophecy lay silent behind a shield of sorcery. Raven-cloaked border patrols fled before the northlanders, turning their swift steeds south towards the safety of the Watchtowers. One by one, the dark riders were overtaken by yowling daemons and plucked from their horses. Only a handful reached the tower of Volroth, there to perish from their wounds." Page 16
An army of Khorne caught the Dark Elves garrisoning the border against Chaos in the north of Naggaroth by surprise. Because they relied upon sorceresses to predict when a goddamn Khorna army would be marching across the ice. Not only is the sheer stupidity here baffling, but when the relieving force comes in to the tower of Volroth, it's revealed that a garrison of eighty thousand Dark Elves lay dead.
I know how GW feels about numbers, especially in regards to the Elves. I'm going to disregard that one of the garrisons for only one of at least eleven Watchtowers consists of eighty thousand soldiers. Dark Elves spontaneously form from the Aethyr as far as I know.
Anyways, the forces of Chaos breach the Watchtowers and attack the cities of the Druchii. The Dark Elves are besieged for several months and are completely and utterly overwhelmed because of course they are, they're fighting Chaos. Malekith is absent, off doing god knows what, and Morathi is shut in her tower. Kouran Darkhand takes over the control of Naggarond because the Council of the city is practically useless, and apparently he's not a good enough tactician to break the siege, coming into a stalemate twice against Valkia herself in a duel. At the end of the day, Malekith comes back to save the day and calls his entire council useless because they are.
Here, the narrative shifts from a general recounting to a narrative prose from the perspective of Kouran during a council meeting at Malekith's hand, and it lets us get a good look at his personality, thought process and Druchii culture. It is predictably awful and edgy, as you would expect. An example of this is that the map that Malekith is slamming his fist into and from which the coordinates are drawn is actually parchment made from the flayed skin of an incompetent map maker, and the figures that are supposed to represent locations on the map are carved finger bones. Classy.
Also from his internal perspective, we get a look at Kouran assessing Malus Darkblade, who is enjoying Malekith's failure because he desires rebellion, and Kouran knows this, so he's internally preparing to "have something done about that". Malekith apologises to a Black Ark Fleetmaster by the name of Drane Brackblood, who was supposed to lead the invasion to Ulthuan but was recalled to deal with the Chaos Invasion. She sounds pretty upset, and because they're Dark Elves, Kouran says this internally:
" 'Our campaign against hated Ulthuan will be delayed until the barbarians have been… humbled,' Malekith continued in a dangerous whisper, his temper perhaps subsiding. 'Accept our apologies, Lady Brackblood, for we know that this was to have been your finest hour.'
The Witch King's temper was under control once more, if it had truly been roused in the first place. Even Kouran could not always tell when his master played at rage for theatrical effect.
To Kouran's left, Drane Brackblood gave a predatory smile. 'Your majesty is most gracious,' she said, her voice like silk torn on broken glass.
She had plotted long and hard to be given command of the invasion fleet, Kouran thought, but she knew better than to express her disappointment in council. That would be taken out on her household and, if rumour held true, the very special prisoner chained in the deepest dungeon of her manse. " Page 18
It is here as the conversation within the council room shifts to throwing Malus Darkblade towards a seemingly dangerous and thankless task related to "providing consideration for our dark mother" that I end this section, as the chapter will transition into Ulthuan and I think this is enough of a benchmark for a first post. If you enjoyed reading this, stick around. I might speed up my read through as I go along, since the first book has about 600 pages and I'm only on page 18.
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